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  • This is my first so I might be slow to update

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    • CHAPTER 1 Sophie POV Sophie didn't want to open the cache with Coucillor-Not-Her-Mom until she saved Keefe "I won't do it" said Sophie "If you don't mind I need to go save my friend." After she'd showered and changed she found Fitz outside of Havenfield with all of her friends, the Council, the Collective, her friends' parents, even the alicorns. Silveny looked sad and filled Sophie's mind with KEEFE!KEEFE!KEEFE! Biana, Dex, Fitz Wylie and pretty much everyone else walked up to Sophie in sadness and told her "Keefe's gone."

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    • I know it's a little short but I tried.

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    • NO not my Keefeeeee!! This is good, I like it!

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    • Chapter 2 "What do you mean gone?"Sophie asked. Fitz stepped up "I was searching his mind" He began. "Then his mind broke. Somehow he got guiltier and guiltier then his mind shattered more and more. Then he died." Sophie sobbed. "I should have done something. It's my fault." Sophie was to sad to realize that Mr. Forkle had transmitted IT'S A TRAP. Sophie was so sad and guilty her mind broke. Everyone threw off their disguises while Sophie just sat there in guilt and her mind shattered more and more. It was the Neverseen. Lady Gisela told Gethen to grab Sophie. Ruy helped grab the alicorns. Vespera went with a group to capture Councillor Bronte and Mr. Forkle. They all went to Sophie's room in Havenfield.Gethen laid Sophie down on her bed. That's when Sophie began to scream. Louder and Louder Shriller each time Grady and Edaline who had just come back from an errand went to Sophie's room only to find the Neverseen. "Quick!" Lady Gisela told Gethen. Erase their recent memories and find out all that you can about Sophie.

      Edaline managed to escape but Grady didn't.
      

      "Wait!" Lady Gisela told Gethen. "He might be of some use to us. She turned to Grady. "When Forkle and Bronte get here mesmerize them into healing Sophie and erasing all her memories. Or we'll kill your daughter." "Fine I'll do it." Grady said reluctantly.

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    • This Chapter is dedicated to SoKeefe4eva

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    • Thank you for your support please tell others about it -kotlc lover

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    • This is pretty good! -7eight9

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    • This is so sweet!

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    • Thanks I will post the next chapter tomorrow 

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    • Actually Chapter three is on for today

      -kotlc

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    • Chapter 3 Grady POV DEDICATED to 7eight9

      Mr. Forkle and Councillor Bronte arrived later. With a heavy heart Grady commanded them to heal Sophie. Vespera to Councillor Bronte away and Grady commanded Forkle to erase her memories. But Mr. Forkle didn't hear him. He wasn't under Grady's control anymore so he grabbed him and Sophie and leaped away. The Neverseen was about to leap away but there was a fence around Havenfield that stopped them. It was just like Everglen's fence of light. It caged the Neverseen in. "Vespera!" Lady Gisela yelled. "You worked with them didn't you. "No I didn't." She responded. "There's a leak in the Neverseen and whoever it is told that Forkle dude about Sophie and Grady." Everyone looked at each other knowing that what Vespera said was true.

      Meanwhile, Sophie still hadn't woken up. "What do I do?" Mr. Forkle asked Grady. "I am sorry." Grady said. He took of his cloak revealing a Neverseen band on his arm.


      -kotlc lover

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      -glimmer

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    • What?! This is so good




      Princess purryfins

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    • Embrace the Shannon Messenger and the beginning of my new legacy.

      -kotlc lover

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    • Can you guys sign the petition for the Great Gullion Incident

      Please?

      https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:873334

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    • So many twists. It’s really good

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    • Thank you so much I might be able to do another chapter today

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    • BTW I already signed the petition

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    • WHOA! Plot twists! I LUV IT!

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    • Chapter 4 Mr. Forkle's POV 

      DEDICATED TO Princess purryfins, glimmer and TeamFoster-KeefeFTW



      "Why?" Mr. Forkle asked."And for how long?”

      "I've been with the Never Seen for—

      He could not finish his sentence because Sophie woke up.

      "You were with the Never seen?"she asked.

      "Yes." Grady said. "Until Jolie died. But I just rejoined after what happened in Loammore."

      "What was so important in Loammore?" Sophie asked. 

      "You wouldn't believe me. Anyways the Never seen want me to kidnap Glimmer. But I can't."

      "Why not." Mr. Forkle asked.

      "Because I care about her." 

      "But we just met her."

      "Yes." Grady said. "But she's never taken her hood of, has she?"

      "No, but what does that have to do with—" Sophie and Mr. Forkle understood. 

      "But you didn't know exactly where she was living, did you?" Mr. Forkle asked.

      "You couldn't reconnect with her." Sophie added. 

      "You have to protect her in the best ways you can." Sophie continued. Because Glimmer is your daughter, Glimmer is Jolie! 

      To Be Continued

      -kotlc lover

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    • I guess there's a little Shannon Messenger in me 

      -kotlc lover

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    • What??? Wow! Plot twist there! Love it! Also, thank you for reading my Fanfic, and sending the link to yours. It's good!

      ~SoSoAFangirl

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    • It's so good! You're a great writer, A FANDOM user! Keep writing!

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    • guys please read my Tiana fanfic i'll leave the link:

      https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:959152

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    • Thanks you guys can call me my real name: Avery -kotlc lover

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    • Who do you like more Keefe or Fitz

      I personally am a Keefe fan

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    • Should I do the next one in Keefe's POV, SOPHIE POV, GRADY POV OR MR. FORKLE POV

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    • KEEFE KEEFE KEEFE! (Silveny) hehe. 

      also if you peeps haven't already, read my story too! (if you would like to, that is.) 

      https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:915992

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    • Your fanfic is pretty good 

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    • Hey, guys! I saw a lot of people posting their fanfic, so I'm posting mine too. I finished 7 pretty long chapters. And I also (sometimes) do polls for perspectives and stuff, so make sure to participate! Enjoy!

      https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:832550

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    • My deadline for my next chapter is Friday 

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    • 37.0.49.20 wrote:
      This Chapter is dedicated to SoKeefe4eva

      Oh, thank you! Also, I loved the next chapters, they were really good!!

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    • Any time you were the first one to comment  

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    • I will post the next chapter at about 12:00

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    • Chapter 5 dedicated to TeamFoster-KeefeFTW

      ”I wonder what my new ability is.“ Keefe wondered. ”Then again if  I wake up.“
      

      Whatever Lady Gisela put in him didn't want him to get up. Just then, he felt wind blowing then he felt pain. Inflicted Pain. Then a chill, just before electric energy. ”I'm an inflictor, a Psionipath, a Guster, and a Froster! Then his eyes opened fluttered a little bit then stayed open.

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    • Now Keefe's just like Sophie!

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    • This is so good! You're an amazing writer!

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    • Chapter 6 Sophie's POV DEDICATED TO SoSoAFangirl

      ”Anyway is Keefe still alive?“ Sophie asked Mr. Forkle. But, before he could answer, Sophie's Imparter rang, Sophie answered. Elwin's face appeared on the screen. ”Sophie get over here now, Keefe's awake!“

      Sophie grabbed Grady and Mr. Forkle and leaped to the Healing Center. Keefe was siting up on the bed. 
      

      ”Keefe!“ Sophie sobbed. ”The Never seen dressed up as everyone and they said that your m-m-mind b-b-broke, a-a-and that y-y-y-you w-w-were d-dead, th-th- then I-I was s-so s-s-sad that m-m-my mind b-b-b-broke.“ ”And we caught a member of the Never seen.“ Mr. Forkle added. He moved out of the way to reveal Grady but he was gone. ”Where'd he go?“ Sophie asked.

      There was a note on the floor, it said:

      I'm going to join the winners of this war, 
      

      Keep Glimmer away from me, XOXO Grady.

      -Kotlc Lover

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    •  

      How are you so good at writing? Can you give me some tips?

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    • What do you guys think about the latest chapters

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    • I love it!

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    • Those chapters are amazing! You've gotta give me some writing tips, Avery! :)

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    • pleas post MORE

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    • Here is the next chapter enjoy!



      Biana's POV 

      Dedicated to Keefecrazy 



      “Hey Fitz let's go check on Keefe.” Biana suggested.

      Sophie probably has it covered.” The bitter in his voice was obvious.

      “Fitz what's up with you and Sophie, one minute you're fine and about to kiss and the next you can't be in the same room as her.“ Biana complained.

      “Let's go outside and play Tackle Bramble.” Fitz said, needing a subject change.

      After a couple rounds they were both sweating. 

      “Hey Fitz you should take of your jacket.” Biana suggested.

      “I'm fine.” Fitz assured her.

      They played a few more rounds. Fitz was even sweatier.

      “Fitz you should really take it off.” Biana said, starting to worry.

      “I told you I'm—”Fitz stumbled back rubbing his sweaty temples.

      Then he collapsed. Biana rushed him inside. She laid him down on his bed. She took his jacket off only to find a band on his forearm, a band that was only worn by the Neverseen.

      This is what I'm hoping will be the last Neverseen reveal, tho I might add more plus Fitz had it coming for being a jerk.

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    • Ummm... I donno.

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    • amazing POST MORE

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    • WHOA! I just finished reading your chapter and it's AMAZING! Post more soon!

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    • GUYS I AM PANICKING THERE IS NO MARELLA WIKI

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    • Oooook?

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    • SORRY

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    • Chapter 8 Ro POV Dedicated to all of the readers of this fanfic.

      “Hunkyhair! You're alive!” Ro exclaimed.

      Forkle had went to get  Ro he had said that Keefe had woken up, Ro had only arrived at Shores of Solace a couple hours earlier, she'd sat in Keefe's bedroom a lot while he was in the Healing Center. She'd thought about ways to punish Keefe. She also set up traps in his room in case his dad tried to snoop around. She mainly sat there because she missed him.
      “You still owe me an unlimited dare.” Ro added angrily.“You have to tell Blondie your secret.”
      Hunkyhair took a deep breath before he said: Foster, “I love you.
      

      Since the day we met.”

      “I love you too!” Blondie answered.
      

      Then Hunkyhair leaned forward, so did Sophie, and they Kissed.

      On what had to be the worst timing ever Biana walked in with Pretty Boy who was awake and still had the Neverseen band on. 
      

      “Here we go again.” Blondie muttered pulling away from Lord Hunkyhair. “Why did have to be today of all days.” “How long have you been with the Neverseen?” Hunkyhair asked. “I am doing what Keefe did infiltrating them—” He wasn't able to finish because Lady Gisela walked in and pressed a melder against his neck. -kotlc

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    • Chapter 8 Ro POV Dedicated to all of the readers of this fanfic.

      “Hunkyhair! You're alive!” Ro exclaimed.

      Forkle had went to get  Ro he had said that Keefe had woken up, Ro had only arrived at Shores of Solace a couple hours earlier, she'd sat in Keefe's bedroom a lot while he was in the Healing Center. 
      

      She'd thought about ways to punish Keefe. She also set up traps in his room in case his dad tried to snoop around. She mainly sat there because she missed him.

      “You still owe me an unlimited dare.” Ro added angrily.“You have to tell Blondie your secret.”

      Hunkyhair took a deep breath before he said: Foster, “I love you.
      

      Since the day we met.”

      “I love you too!” Blondie answered.
      

      Then Hunkyhair leaned forward, so did Sophie, and they Kissed.

      On what had to be the worst timing ever Biana walked in with Pretty Boy who was awake and still had the Neverseen band on.

      “Here we go again.” Blondie muttered pulling away from Lord Hunkyhair. “Why did have to be today of all days.”

      “How long have you been with the Neverseen?” Hunkyhair asked.

      “I am doing what Keefe did infiltrating them—” He wasn't able to finish because Lady Gisela walked in and pressed a melder against his neck. -kotlc lover

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    • Wha ---

      Wow. Nice! Or I should say dramatic. :)

      Thanks for dedicating the chapter up above to me! I'll update my fanfic because you read it too!! https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:915992 (link to story)  

      You are a very good writer! I hope you continue to make more stories, not just KOTLC, but also others!

      Stay safe. (sorry if I'm being way to peppy and nice right now. I just feel this way idk why. XD) 

      ~SoSoAFangirl 

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    • Nice new chapter 

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    • Next chapter is gonna be Marella's point of view

      Kotlc lover

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    • I am going back to school on Monday so I won't be able to post as much chapters in a day. -kotlc lover

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    • Chapter 9 Dedicated to Princess puryfinns

      For Marella it was a perfectly normal day. Of course Keefe was still asleep but she couldn't let feelings get the best of her or next thing she new something would go wrong.

      Then she'd be oblivious like Sophie. She couldn't allow that. Magnate Leto face appeared when she answered her ringing imparter he asked her to bring Linh and Maruca in case there was any trouble for Keefe was awake. She decided to get Tam as well.

      But Tam was so surprised to see her he lost hold of the shadowflux, then it threw itself into Marella's arm then leg then head.

      Tam rushed her to Healing Center along with Linh and Maruca. They had been rushing so they bumped into Lady Gisela who was to blast everyone in the room with the melder.

      Tam laid Marella down on one of the cots and called the shadowflux out of her blood. Then he quickly sent that shadowflux at Lady Gisela.

      Lady Gisela collapsed just as the rest of the Neverseen came in.

      -kotlc lover

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    • What do you think ?

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    • That was..................     AMAZING, OUTSTANDING, THRILLING, AWESOME, AND EVERY SINGLE GOOD WORD THAT I FORGOT!!!

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    • Thank you so much 

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    • When will you post another chapter.a

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    • Hahahahaha, sorry that was supposed to be a ? Instead of a a.

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    • Tomorrow

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    • Should I do Maruca POV Linh Pov Keefe POV Sophie Pov Grady POV Gethen POV or Ruy POV

      -kotlc lover

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    • Pleas vote whoever has the most by 10:00 wins.

      -kotlc lover

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      • please*
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    • Keefe and Sophie! If I have to choose one then........ Keefe!

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    • I will do half Keefe half Sophie(mostly Keefe)

      -kotlc lover

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    • cool youre fanfic is awesum

      -Newcomer

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    • ThAnks

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    • I will do what Kotlc lover did!

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    • Awww thank here is the next chapter 

      Chapter 9 Dedicated to A Fandom User

      Sophie POV 



      Gethen lead the Neverseen in with Ruy. 

      I jumped forward to secure Lady Gisela but Gethen grabbed her first and Ruy trapped Sophie in a force field only to be unraveled by Maruca. 

      All the other members of the Neverseen began to fight everyone else in the room. 

      Trix took Marella and before anyone could stop him he leaped away. 

      But somehow my instincts took over and I grabbed Trix and disappeared with him, not knowing what I got myself into.



      Keefe's POV



      Sophie!” I screamed as I fought of one of the members I pulled back their hood revealing Alvar. 

      I used the Sucker Punch Dex gave me before we went to Ravagog to punch him in the face. 

      After I got rid of him I pressed my Panic Switch.

      Next I went for Gethen.

      “Give me my mom!” I yelled.

      “No!” I punched him in the nose with the Sucker Punch, it fell off. 

      Ro ran forward, I turned away as she stabbed him with her sword. 

      We had been winning ever since Dex had arrived.

      He got Stina, Edaline, the rest of the Collective and Biana all fighting in the Healing Center.

      Elwin helped knock people out with Wraith who Maruca trapped. The fight ended with only Ruy, Gethen and Trix escaping.

      All of the caught Neverseen members were transported to the council immediately.

      “Hey Keefe,” Edaline asked me. “Where's Sophie?”

      I explained everything to her.

      “I have to go tell Grady.” Edaline said quickly turning to leave. “I think you and I need to talk Lady Ruewen.”Mr. Forkle said who had changed back into Magnate Leto. 

      He told the rest of the Collective to insure that the prisoners were delivered to the Council. 

      Before he lead Edaline out of the Healing Center.

      “Guys,“ Biana said. “Let's meet up at Everglen tomorrow morning, to figure out how to save Sophie.”

      -kotlc lover

      what do you think?

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    • Sophie's POV or Marella's POV

      VOTE TILL 10:00 tonight 

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    • Sophie!!!!!!!PLEASE SOPHIE!!!!        And words cannot express how great this was!

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    • K Sophie it is

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    • Yay, thanks! I had to channel my inner Silveny 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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    • Sure BTW the last chapter was dedicated to you.

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    • Sry Gethen didnt escape Grady did

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    • HERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER

      Chapter 10 Sophie's POV Dedicated to A Fandom User for still being here 



      “Give me Marella!” I yelled.

      “NO!” Trix answered. 

      “I need to take her to Elwin!” I screamed.

      He blew a gust of wind, knocking me down onto a cot.

      He threw a disk on the floor, I realized what it was when it was too late. The same disk I had used to drug my family.

      I  had just enough strength to transmit to Keefe: HELP ME before I fell into a deep sleep.

      I woke up to see there was a long line of sedatives around my cot. I glanced over to see Marella on a cot, still unconscious.

      I struggled to sit up. 

      The guard at the door noticed 

      “Looks  like the brave moonlark has finally woken up.” said the guard who had an accented voice.

      “Grady!” he called then I knew who it was.

      “Fitz.” I growled.

      Grady walked in along with another person holding Everblaze.

      I glanced over to Marella who was thankfully still asleep.

      “ But you're supposed to be in jail.” I said.

      “I haven't been in jail since Lumeria” ( Sry if it's spelled wrong.) The figure said.

      “Brant, but you're dead.” I said in shock.

      “I don't have to explain myself to you.” Brant answered. He left the room.

      Grady stepped forward he stroked my hairline I shoved him away.

      “Fine, if that's how you want to do it.” He glanced at the line of sedatives and smirked.  “Take a sedative.” Grady commanded.

      “NO!” I screamed.

      “Keefe, if you can hear me help!” I transmitted.

      “Now Sophie!” Grady ordered.

      Against my will, I drank the sedative falling asleep again.

      -kotlc lover

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    • Hello! Where did everybody go?!?!

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    • I am not posting any more until someone, anyone says something any thing! I am getting desperate!

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    • This is GOOD! Keep up the great work!!

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    • 37.0.49.20 wrote:
       


      Chapter 4 Mr. Forkle's POV 

      DEDICATED TO Princess purryfins, glimmer and TeamFoster-KeefeFTW



      "Why?" Mr. Forkle asked."And for how long?”

      "I've been with the Never Seen for—

      He could not finish his sentence because Sophie woke up.

      "You were with the Never seen?"she asked.

      "Yes." Grady said. "Until Jolie died. But I just rejoined after what happened in Loammore."

      "What was so important in Loammore?" Sophie asked. 

      "You wouldn't believe me. Anyways the Never seen want me to kidnap Glimmer. But I can't."

      "Why not." Mr. Forkle asked.

      "Because I care about her." 

      "But we just met her."

      "Yes." Grady said. "But she's never taken her hood of, has she?"

      "No, but what does that have to do with—" Sophie and Mr. Forkle understood. 

      "But you didn't know exactly where she was living, did you?" Mr. Forkle asked.

      "You couldn't reconnect with her." Sophie added. 

      "You have to protect her in the best ways you can." Sophie continued. Because Glimmer is your daughter, Glimmer is Jolie! 

      To Be Continued

      -kotlc lover

      purry and glimmer are the same person

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    • wait no there diffrent

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    • Thank you all so much I will post the next chapter soon who's POV should I do?

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    • MARELLAS OR GLIMMETS 

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    • I will do half Marella half Glimmer

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    • 37.0.49.20 wrote:
      I will do half Marella half Glimmer

      THANK YOU

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    • THAT WAS SO GOOD!!!! Also i just wanted to say I am so sorry! I have a bunch of tabs open and I forgot to check this one. PLEASE FORGIVE ME!!!!!!







































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    • Chapter 11 Marella's POV Dedicated to Princess Puryfinns and MintChocolateRipplefluffs

      Darkness And then warmth FIRE Am I missing something or someone? Sophie, Keefe, Fitz, My friends I have to wake up For them Because I care The Neverseen Sophie filled my mind with her recent memories Then it dawn to me We had been captured There was no way out We didn't even know where we were Hopeless Then Sophie filled my mind with something else She inflicted on me Hope Courage Happiness Then seven words We're going to get out of here I can wake up To help Sophie, To see my friends, To escape the Neverseen. Then my eyes opened.

      Glimmer's POV

      Tam and Linh had come home exhausted. They told me all about the fight, I knew it was wrong, but every time they mentioned any injuries that the Neverseen got, I felt bad. They were once my family. I had only joined them to marry Brant. I can trust my mother with my identity but, she was so sad when I staged my death, imagine how she'd feel now. Tiegran came in, told us it was time for dinner. It felt so weird to eat dinner with my hood on. “Can I trust you?” I asked Tam. “ You can trust all of us.” He shadow-whispered. “Fine” I said. Just then A lady burst in, not just any lady, Edaline. I threw back my hood. Revealing my true self. “Jolie.” Edaline and Tiegran whispered in unison. Edaline rushed over to hug me. “Hi Mom.” I said. And I hugged her back. “Where's Grady?” I asked.

      -Kotlc lover

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    • I LOVE IT PLEASE POST MORE!!!

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    • THABK YOU

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    • NP

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    • I love your username by the way

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    • No thank you I might post another chapter today but who's POV should I do?

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    • keefe or tam

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    • Uhh... maybe Tam’s idk I’m terrible at making these kinds of decisions

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    • Any other suggestions 

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    • I will do Tam's POV for chapter 12 and Keefe's POV for chapter 13 

      they both would be super mad at me for putting their POVs in the same chapter.

      -kotlc lover

      BTW if I made another fanfic what do you guys think it should be about?

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    • uuuummmmmmmmmm you are a great writer so it really doset matter

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    • Thanks.

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    • Hi!

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    • Where have you been I haven't heard from you since before the eighth chapter that was four chapters ago and the only one who said any thing after that was A Fandom User.

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    • I made two other fanfics here are the links

      https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1011409

      https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1011390

      -kotlc lover

      Keep reading this one.

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    • Hello?!?!????????!!???????!!??????

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    • 37.0.49.20 wrote:
      I am not posting any more until someone, anyone says something any thing! I am getting desperate!

      I am playing this card

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    • Hi

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    • I really like this

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    • Thank you so much 

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    • Chapter 13 Tam's POV Dedicated to A Fandom User

      “Wait you're Jolie?” I ask Glimmer/Jolie. “Yeah.” Jolie said shyly. “We'll go upstairs while you all catch up.” Linh said pulling me out of the room before saying: “I told you so, I told you so, and I also told you so.” “Sure, she faked her death, but—” I began. “ While she's faking her death, how do you know she won't be planning ours?” Linh interrupted. “Because I trust her!” I practically yelled. “ I don't have time for this I'm going to bed.” I said stalking away from my sister. “Goodnight.” Linh said softly. Then a terrible question came to my mind late that night What if, Linh's right?

      -Kotlc lover

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    • CHAPTER 14 Keefe’s POV Dedicated to everyone who has been waiting for this so patiently.

      “So, what is our plan?” I asked. “Sophie’s normally the one with the plan.” Biana said nervously. “Come on, guys.” I said. “We can do this, Sophie’s and Marella’s and maybe even Fitz’s. Just think "WWSD", What would Sophie do. I know she’d save each and every one of us, whether we’ve betrayed her or not. She wouldn’t care. The Neverseen says—My mom says that friendship is a vulnerability but it’s a strength and she doesn’t have any friend so "WHAT DOES SHE KNOW?". My point is we have to save them no matter what it takes.”

      “You know what?” Dex asked. “We don’t need a plan, and before you guys argue, as Sophie said, we over analyze situations. If we went there with no plan except to get them and get out we might not fail. Especially if we manage to capture some members of the Neverseen it might just work.”

      “Maruca be ready to trap any member you can in a force field.” I commanded. “Biana try to stay invisible, Tam you and Linh will find Sophie, Fitz and Marella, when you do cover them in shadows and leap away but before that you need to give us he all clear. Sandor, Bo, Ro, and Tarina you need to cover as many of us as you can. Flori, can you wait at Havenfield for when all of us get back and you should probably ask Elwin to come. Everyone else distract the Neverseen while Tam and Linh get Sophie, Marella and Fitz. Does everyone understand the plan that’s not a plan?”

      Everyone nodded.

      “Then let’s go save our friends.” I said.

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      Whoa, My name is Avery too! Also remember that Fitz's full name is Fitzroy AVERY Vacker!!! \ -Moonlark

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    • Chapter 15 Sophie’s POV Dedicated to IceblueTriumpsoverall

      I had been doing the same things everyday:

      First, Wake Up.

      Second, Annoy the guard (which is normally Grady).

      Third, Grady makes me sedative and I’m asleep until the next morning.

      To annoy the guard I would normally sing to the tune of If Only:

      "If only the Neverseen weren’t so evil,

      Don’t know why my friend and dad betrayed meeeee oh, oh

      If only oh, oh , oh

      If only I read the signs in front of meee,

      I would’ve gotten help before I came hereee oh, oh if only, oh oh oh

      I really wish that I could stay awake oh, oh

      But my evil dad makes me take, a sedative against my will, oh, oh if only, oh, oh,oh"

      But today when I was at the "don’t know why my friend and dad betrayed meeee" part,

      I got a transmission from Granite "Your friends are on their way to rescue you"

      "Finally I wish they’d done that 3 WEEKS AGO!" I transmitted.

      “Marella we’re getting out of here!” I whispered.

      “No you’re not.” Said a voice that could only mean one person.

      Fitz.

      “And you’re gonna stop me?” Sophie asked.

      “Oh, I’m not but I sure Grady and Brant can.” Fitz said.

      “Fitz, why?” I asked.

      “For reason’s that do not concern—“ Fitz started.

      “Hiya Fitzy!” Keefe interrupted.

      “Sophie!” Tam shadow-whispered.

      “Marella!” Linh whispered.

      “Let’s go!” The twins whispered.

      “Sophie, transmit the all clear to Keefe.” Tam told me.

      I did and immediately he nodded to everyone else.

      Sandor grabbed Fitz and slung him over his shoulder like a bag of potatoes.

      Ro did the same to Grady just as he came into the room.

      We all ran out of there.

      “Come on guys.” I said and I opened a portal in front of us taking us straight to Havenfield.


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    • Chapter 16 Grady’s POV Dedicated to SoKeefeIsAwesome

      “I’ve been in here days the Council’s prison, I don’t deserve to be here, I did everything right and that’s where I went wrong. I joined them to protect Glimmer and Jolie, my brother sacrificed himself for Brant in Lumenaria. My twin brother disguised himself as Brant while the real Brant was actually still grieving over Jolie, who was a triplet, one Jolie joined the Black Swan manifested as a Tecnopath, changed her appearance and became Tinker. The other triplet manifested a Flasher and became Glimmer. The other Jolie escaped the fire and now hides out in the Forbidden Cities. I never found her.” Grady ranted.

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      “And why should we believe you?” The moonlark asked.

      “Because I have no reason not to tell the truth.” I answered.

      “Fine whatever you say!” The moonlark said sarcastically.

      “I’m serious!” I yelled. “Since I used to be part of the Neverseen, before and after we had Jolie I trusted Lady Gisela with Glimmer. Sir Astin came and adopted the one who became Tinker. He erased the physicians’ and Edaline’s memories of her and we passed Jolie of as an only child.”

      “Fine, I will probe Edaline’s mind with Mr. Forkle and if the memories are recovered, you might be of some use, if not you will be sent to Exile.” Alden replied, apparently he had come for news regarding his sons.

      “Just so you know, Fitz and Alvar joined willingly and they probably wouldn’t have if you gave them good names, I can’t believe that I am gonna say this but That Boy’s name is better than Fitz or Alvar. And Sophie may be a human’s name and a girl’s name but it would’ve been better then the name’s you gave them.”

      Biana appeared from the shadows along with Tam before saying: “He has a point.”

      “Ugh,” Sophie grumbled. “Can we not do this now, we have to go.”

      She stomped out along with everyone else. I heard very distant soft sobbing before realizing Sophie still cared, and that can be used to the Neverseen’s advantage.

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    • Chapter 17 Keefe’s POV Dedicated to Princess puryfinns

      “Sophie, it’s okay.” I assured her.

      “I’m fine.” She said, finally.

      We left and went to Havenfield.

      “Keefe, stay behind tonight.” Sophie whispered to me.

      “Thanks, for backing me up today, especially you, Keefe.” Sophie said to everyone after explaining everything Grady said, to Edaline. Most people leapt away but I stayed behind.

      “Thanks again.” Sophie blushed and gave me a slight kiss. “I hailed Amy earlier and we’re going to go over… for a sleepover!”

      Sophie opened a portal directly to Amy’s room, we stepped through.

      The room was empty except for… Jolie.

      “What are you doing here?” Jolie asked.

      “We came for— wait, why are you here.” Sophie asked.

      “I live here.” Jolie answered.

      “You’re Amy.” Sophie realized.

      “Yeah.” Jolie/Amy answered.

      “What a nice family reunion.” Mommy Dearest said. “Moonlark, you’re gonna join us and if you refuse, it’ll be the end of Grady, by the way, Keefe, you’re coming too.”

      “Sophie. Nooo!” I screamed as Sophie went over.

      “Keefe it’ll be easier this way.” Sophie said softly.

      “Plus they can’t come into my mind or hear transmissions.” I transmitted to Keefe.

      “Actually I can hear your transmissions.” Mommy Dearest corrected.

      “Let’s go, Keefe.” Sophie opened a portal, grabbed me and Jolie/Amy before charging through.

      We ended up at Grady’s cell.

      “I’m gonna stay here for the night.” Sophie told us.

      “If you’re staying, I’m staying.” I said.

      “Me too.” Amy/Jolie agreed, she conjured three beds, and we all laid down.

      “I love you guys.” Sophie whispered into the silence. “Goodnight”

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      “Sophie I’m so sorry for not telling you the truth earlier.” I said the next morning. “Mr. Forkle told me not until your destiny played out.”

      “Then why didn’t you tell me when Mom and Dad were kidnapped?” Sophie snapped.

      “I…didn’t want to put more on your plate, you had a lot going on so I pretended to be shocked at the sight of pretty much everything.” I explained.

      Sophie sighed. “What should I call you now? Jolie? Amy? Natalie? Those names are all you.” Sophie asked

      “How about Big sis as a nickname but otherwise you can call me—” I began.

      “A former member of the Neverseen.” Grady interrupted.

      “What’s he talking about?” Sophie asked.

      “I was a part of the Neverseen and I found out that you were the Moonlark, so I laid low for the first three months, but the I grew attached to you, so I cut off my ties with the Neverseen.”

      “I can’t believe you!” Sophie cried.

      She opened a portal and disappeared inside it without looking back.

      She arrived at Havenfield’s caves and came face-to-face with the Neverseen.

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      “Sophie I’m so sorry for not telling you the truth earlier.” I said the next morning. “Mr. Forkle told me not until your destiny played out.”

      “Then why didn’t you tell me when Mom and Dad were kidnapped?” Sophie snapped.

      “I…didn’t want to put more on your plate, you had a lot going on so I pretended to be shocked at the sight of pretty much everything.” I explained.

      Sophie sighed. “What should I call you now? Jolie? Amy? Natalie? Those names are all you.” Sophie asked

      “How about Big sis as a nickname but otherwise you can call me—” I began.

      “A former member of the Neverseen.” Grady interrupted.

      “What’s he talking about?” Sophie asked.

      “I was a part of the Neverseen and I found out that you were the Moonlark, so I laid low for the first three months, but the I grew attached to you, so I cut off my ties with the Neverseen.”

      “I can’t believe you!” Sophie cried.

      She opened a portal and disappeared inside it without looking back.

      She arrived at Havenfield’s caves and came face-to-face with the Neverseen.

      OMG, you are so talented!  You. Did a awesome and amazing job!

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      “Sophie I’m so sorry for not telling you the truth earlier.” I said the next morning. “Mr. Forkle told me not until your destiny played out.”

      “Then why didn’t you tell me when Mom and Dad were kidnapped?” Sophie snapped.

      “I…didn’t want to put more on your plate, you had a lot going on so I pretended to be shocked at the sight of pretty much everything.” I explained.

      Sophie sighed. “What should I call you now? Jolie? Amy? Natalie? Those names are all you.” Sophie asked

      “How about Big sis as a nickname but otherwise you can call me—” I began.

      “A former member of the Neverseen.” Grady interrupted.

      “What’s he talking about?” Sophie asked.

      “I was a part of the Neverseen and I found out that you were the Moonlark, so I laid low for the first three months, but the I grew attached to you, so I cut off my ties with the Neverseen.”

      “I can’t believe you!” Sophie cried.

      She opened a portal and disappeared inside it without looking back.

      She arrived at Havenfield’s caves and came face-to-face with the Neverseen.

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    • Chapter 19 Sophie's POV Dedicated to SoSoAFangirl

      Sophie took a deep breath to keep her inflicting under control.

      “What do you want?” I asked.

      “Oh, many things.” Lady Gisela said.

      “What do you want from me?” I snapped.

      “I want you to join us.” Lady Gisela answered.

      “And why would I help you?” Sophie questioned.

      “Becuse if you don't someone that's very useful to his cause, the Black Swan.” Lady Gisela threatened.

      Sophie triangulated his location and opened a portal to Watchward Heath Apartments. Sophie ran to room 462 and went inside. She found Mr. Forkle laying down on a cot with Livvy beside him. His eyes were closed and his breath was slowing down more and more.

      Sophie was sure Livvy could fix him until she heard a transmission from Mr. Forkle: 

      Swan song”

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      Sophie took a deep breath to keep her inflicting under control.

      “What do you want?” I asked.

      “Oh, many things.” Lady Gisela said.

      “What do you want from me?” I snapped.

      “I want you to join us.” Lady Gisela answered.

      “And why would I help you?” Sophie questioned.

      “Becuse if you don't someone that's very useful to his cause, the Black Swan—” Lady Gisela threatened.

      Sophie triangulated his location and opened a portal to Watchward Heath Apartments. Sophie ran to room 462 and went inside. She found Mr. Forkle laying down on a cot with Livvy beside him. His eyes were closed and his breath was slowing down more and more.

      Sophie was sure Livvy could fix him until she heard a transmission from Mr. Forkle: 

      Swan song”

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    • Chapter 20 Keefe's POV Dedicated to 152.26.208.39 and 70.178.248.205


      “Why did we let Sophie walk away like that?” Keefe groaned right after they left Grady's cell.

      “I don't know!” Jolie/Amy cried out. “You know how Sophie gets when she's upset.”

      “Let's check Havenfield.” Keefe suggested. They leaped to Havenfield.

      “Sophie sometimes goes to the caves when she's upset.” Keefe explained.

      “Good job, Brant, now we have a certain bloated leader out of the way.” Mommy Dearest congratulated. 

      “Wait, Brant's alive?” Amy/Jolie whispered. 

      “Yeah.” Keefe whispered back.

      '“Oh, Keefe, Jolie, how nice of you to join us'​​​​​​.” Mommy Dearest said.

      “Hello, Mother.” Keefe said with fake enthusiasm.

      “Aren't you happy with your legacy?” Mommy Dearest asked.

      “Weren't you happy with your escape from jail?” Keefe asked. “How'd you pull that off by the way?” 

      “As humans say: "A magician never reveal's their secrets".” Mommy Dearest said.

      “Fine, then where's Sophie?” Keefe demanded. 

      “Checking on her bloated creator, of course.” Mommy Dearest said.

      “Let's go!” Jolie/Amy said.

      Jolie took Keefe to Watchward Heath Apartments.

      “You have got to tell me how you did that, but after we find Sophie.” Keefe said.

      They ran to room 462.

      “Sophie!” Keefe and Jolie exclaimed in unison.

      “Guys, I think I have to be alone right now.” Sophie said.

      “No, you're not, Sophie.” Keefe said. “I can feel your guilt all the way from here. I really hate to do this, Foster, but, Livvy will you?”

      “Okay.” Livvy said hesitantly. Livvy threw a disk onto the ground, Amy/Jolie and Keefe held their breath as she did.

      “Keefe, how could you?” Sophie asked, her face full of 

      “I'm sorry Foster.” Keefe answered.

      Then Sophie fell asleep, right there in the floor. Keefe carried her to the caves and handed her to Mommy Dearest.

      That's when Keefe realized Grady had escaped from prison.

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      Sophie was a hostage, Keefe betrayed her.

      A crack slowly started to form in her mind, then Keefe's.

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      How could you do that Kotlc Lover!!!!!!!

      evil author *giving the death glare* very evil author

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    • Sophie woke up in a dark cave and thought: Sophie was a hostage, Keefe betrayed her.

      A crack slowly started to form in her mind, then Keefe's. They were both alone two separate cages, far away from each other. Their minds were now broken, and the Neverseen had let it happen.

      Just before Sophie’s mind broke she found Keefe’s mind.Their minds were together during the break. They stayed like that for weeks until they felt strength.

      They healed each other and teleported to the Healing Center.


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      A crack slowly started to form in her mind, then Keefe's. They were both alone two separate cages, far away from each other. Their minds were now broken, and the Neverseen had let it happen.

      Just before Sophie’s mind broke she found Keefe’s mind.Their minds were together during the break. They stayed like that for weeks until they felt strength.

      They healed each other and teleported to the Healing Center.


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      -Sokeefeforever ( or Izzy )

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      Biana kissed Tam, Stina kissed Jensi, Dex kissed Marella, Sandor kissed Grizel, Linh kissed Wylie, Fitz kissed Maruca, and Bo kissed Ro.

      “Wow this is the SoKeefe, Marellex, Stensi, Sizel, Lylie,Faruca, Bo-Ro Kissfest. Mr. Forkle exclaimed.

      “What?” Everyone asked.

      Mr Forkle shrugged, “Someone had to say it.”

      “I agree,” said an accented voice voice from the doorway.

      Everyone glanced at the door and couldn’t believe who they saw.


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      Biana kissed Tam, Stina kissed Jensi, Dex kissed Marella, Sandor kissed Grizel, Linh kissed Wylie, Fitz kissed Maruca, and Bo kissed Ro.

      “Wow this is the SoKeefe, Marellex, Stensi, Sizel, Lylie,Faruca, Bo-Ro Kissfest. Mr. Forkle exclaimed.

      “What?” Everyone asked.

      Mr Forkle shrugged, “Someone had to say it.”

      “I agree,” said an accented voice voice from the doorway.

      Everyone glanced at the door and couldn’t believe who they saw.


      Kotlcfangirlofawesomeness

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      When everyone saw Sophie, Biana kissed Tam, Stina kissed Jensi, Dex kissed Marella, Sandor kissed Grizel, Linh kissed Wylie, Fitz kissed Maruca, and Bo kissed Ro.

      “Wow this is the SoKeefe, Marellex, Stensi, Sizel, Lylie,Faruca, Bo-Ro Kissfest.” Mr. Forkle exclaimed.

      “What?” Everyone asked.

      Mr Forkle shrugged, “Someone had to say it.”

      “I agree,” said an accented voice voice from the doorway.

      Everyone glanced at the door and couldn’t believe who they saw.

      “Alvar.” Fitz growled.

      “Wait, when did Fitz get here?” Sophie asked, turning away from Alvar.​​​​​​​

      ​​​​​​​“You guys, were gone for weeks.” Fitz said.

      ​​​​​​​“I'm here because I need to talk to Biana.” Alvar said.

      ​​​​​​​“Why would we let you talk to her?” Keefe asked, pulling out a melder.

      “Because, I have crucial information on the Neverseen's next move.” Alvar said.

      “Whatever you have to say, you can say to all of us.” Sophie snapped.

      “Their next move is on Amy.” Alvar said.

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      When everyone saw Sophie, Biana kissed Tam, Stina kissed Jensi, Dex kissed Marella, Sandor kissed Grizel, Linh kissed Wylie, Fitz kissed Maruca, and Bo kissed Ro.

      “Wow this is the SoKeefe, Marellex, Stensi, Sizel, Lylie,Faruca, Bo-Ro Kissfest.” Mr. Forkle exclaimed.

      “What?” Everyone asked.

      Mr Forkle shrugged, “Someone had to say it.”

      “I agree,” said an accented voice voice from the doorway.

      Everyone glanced at the door and couldn’t believe who they saw.

      “Alvar.” Fitz growled.

      “Wait, when did Fitz get here?” Sophie asked, turning away from Alvar.​​​​​​​

      ​​​​​​​“You guys, were gone for weeks.” Fitz said.

      ​​​​​​​“I'm here because I need to talk to Biana.” Alvar said.

      ​​​​​​​“Why would we let you talk to her?” Keefe asked, pulling out a melder.

      “Because, I have crucial information on the Neverseen's next move.” Alvar said.

      “Whatever you have to say, you can say to all of us.” Sophie snapped.

      “Their next move is on Amy.” Alvar said.

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      “A lot.” Alvar snapped.

      “Do a lot to who?” Jolie/Amy asked.

      “We captured you!” Alvar exclaimed.

      “Called it!” Keefe yelled and shot Alvar with the melder he was about to do more when, Fitz jumped in front of him getting the melder’s full blast.

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      “Ok I‘ve got three questions. 1. Alvar how in the world did you get here, 2. Is Marella all better? And 3. Mr. Forkle how are you okay?” Sophie exclaimed.

      “I’m all better Ms Foster, truly better, but I am not a priority.” Mr. Forkle said.

      “Well, to me you are.” Sophie whispered giving him a soft hug.

      “Yep, I all better and I mostly got over the echoes.” Marella said still slightly holding Dex.

      “I leaped here I escaped the Neverseen to warn you all.” Alvar said.

      “But what can they possibly d—” Sophie started to ask.

      “A lot.” Alvar snapped.

      “Do a lot to who?” Jolie/Amy asked.

      “We captured you!” Alvar exclaimed.

      “Called it!” Keefe yelled and shot Alvar with the melder he was about to do more when, Fitz jumped in front of him getting the melder’s full blast.

      The grownups ran in when they heard the thud of Fitz’s body.

      Some of them were surprised to see Sophie and Keefe. Most of them were worried about Fitz.

      “I’m sorry,” Keefe said.

      “It’s not your fault, Keefe.” Sophie assured him. “No one would’ve guessed that Fitz would do that.”

      “I would.” A voice said as a girl about Sophie’s age came into the Healing Center.

      “Well, Ms Foster, I’d like you to meet Moonlark 2.0.”

      “Moonlark, wait, Allison?” Sophie Elizabeth Foster asked.

      “Hiya, Sophie, long time, no see.” Allison replied.



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      “Ok I‘ve got three questions. 1. Alvar how in the world did you get here, 2. Is Marella all better? And 3. Mr. Forkle how are you okay?” Sophie exclaimed.

      “I’m all better Ms Foster, truly better, but I am not a priority.” Mr. Forkle said.

      “Well, to me you are.” Sophie whispered giving him a soft hug.

      “Yep, I all better and I mostly got over the echoes.” Marella said still slightly holding Dex.

      “I leaped here I escaped the Neverseen to warn you all.” Alvar said.

      “But what can they possibly d—” Sophie started to ask.

      “A lot.” Alvar snapped.

      “Do a lot to who?” Jolie/Amy asked.

      “We captured you!” Alvar exclaimed.

      “Called it!” Keefe yelled and shot Alvar with the melder he was about to do more when, Fitz jumped in front of him getting the melder’s full blast.

      The grownups ran in when they heard the thud of Fitz’s body.

      Some of them were surprised to see Sophie and Keefe. Most of them were worried about Fitz.

      “I’m sorry,” Keefe said.

      “It’s not your fault, Keefe.” Sophie assured him. “No one would’ve guessed that Fitz would do that.”

      “I would.” A voice said as a girl about Sophie’s age came into the Healing Center.

      “Well, Ms Foster, I’d like you to meet Moonlark 2.0.” Mr. Forkle said.

      “Moonlark, wait, Allison?” Sophie Elizabeth Foster asked.

      “Hiya, Sophie, long time, no see.” Allison replied.



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      “You guys know each other?” Mr. Forkle asked.

      “I kinda thought you, Mr. Forkle of all people would know that.” Allison said.

      “Allison’s been living in the Lost Cities for a while. She came here about three months before you but she’s been living with the Black Swan.” Mr. Forkle explained.

      “If you didn’t expect us to know each other, why’d you let our parents send us to the same school and have us be two houses away from each other?” Sophie questioned.

      Mr. Forkle shrugged. It used to be his twin brother’s job to do that, he was having a hard time keeping up with his responsibilities especially the Moonlarks.

      “I’m deeply sorry Ms. Foster and Ms. Woods. I never thought you two would meet like this.” Mr. Forkle said softly.

      “Well it’s a little late for that.” Sophie mumbled.

      “Would you guys like to get to know each other better?” Mr. Forkle asked.

      “Yep!” Sophie and Allison exclaimed in unison.

      “Bye.” Sophie said. She opened a portal and stepped through with Allison to her Havenfield bedroom.

      “Let’s talk.” Sophie said.



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      “You guys know each other?” Mr. Forkle asked.

      “I kinda thought you, Mr. Forkle of all people would know that.” Allison said.

      “Allison’s been living in the Lost Cities for a while. She came here about three months before you but she’s been living with the Black Swan.” Mr. Forkle explained.

      “If you didn’t expect us to know each other, why’d you let our parents send us to the same school and have us be two houses away from each other?” Sophie questioned.

      Mr. Forkle shrugged. It used to be his twin brother’s job to do that, he was having a hard time keeping up with his responsibilities especially the Moonlarks.

      “I’m deeply sorry Ms. Foster and Ms. Woods. I never thought you two would meet like this.” Mr. Forkle said softly.

      “Well it’s a little late for that.” Sophie mumbled.

      “Would you guys like to get to know each other better?” Mr. Forkle asked.

      “Yep!” Sophie and Allison exclaimed in unison.

      “Bye.” Sophie said. She opened a portal and stepped through with Allison to her Havenfield bedroom.

      “Let’s talk.” Sophie said.



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      “You guys know each other?” Mr. Forkle asked.

      “I kinda thought you, Mr. Forkle of all people would know that.” Allison said.

      “Allison’s been living in the Lost Cities for a while. She came here about three months before you but she’s been living with the Black Swan.” Mr. Forkle explained.

      “If you didn’t expect us to know each other, why’d you let our parents send us to the same school and have us be two houses away from each other?” Sophie questioned.

      Mr. Forkle shrugged. It used to be his twin brother’s job to do that, he was having a hard time keeping up with his responsibilities especially the Moonlarks.

      “I’m deeply sorry Ms. Foster and Ms. Woods. I never thought you two would meet like this.” Mr. Forkle said softly.

      “Well it’s a little late for that.” Sophie mumbled.

      “Would you guys like to get to know each other better?” Mr. Forkle asked.

      “Yep!” Sophie and Allison exclaimed in unison.

      “Bye.” Sophie said. She opened a portal and stepped through with Allison to her Havenfield bedroom.

      “Let’s talk.” Sophie said.

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      “When did Mr. Forkle trigger your abilities?” Allison asked.

      “When I was five.” Sophie replied. “What about you?”

      “He triggered my telepathy when I was ten for it to be less traumatic.” Allison said.

      “What are your other abilities?”  Sophie questioned.

      “Well as you know I am a Telepath, but I'm also an Inflictor,  a Polyglot, a Tecnopath, and a Foreseer. That's how I could've anticipated Fitz jumping in front of Alvar.” Allison explained.

      “I'm a Enhancer, an Inflictor, a Polyglot, a Telepath and a Teleporter.” Sophie said.

      Sophie's imparter suddenly rang, before Sophie answered it, Allison exclaimed, “The Healing Center's under attack, we have to go now.”

      “Let's go!” Sophie opened a portal. She was about to step through when, the Neverseen surrounded her at all sides even through the portal.

      “Are you thinking what I'm thinking?” Sophie asked Allison.

      “Oh Keefe!” Lady Gisela called.

      ​“I'm sorry, Foster.” Keefe said. “We've Fostered it a billion too many times.” 

      “But, Keefe—” Sophie tried.

      “I'm sorry, Foster.” Keefe interrupted. He blew gusts of wind. Sophie quickly changed the portal's destination, as she and Allison were blown into it.

      “What do you want Ms. Foster?” Lord Cassius asked. 


      They had arrived at Shores of Solace. ​​​​​

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      “Foster, I’m only gonna say one thing, I, Keefe Sencen promise not to leave the Neverseen without both of the caches don’t try to rescue me or stop me.” Keefe transmitted.

      For once Keefe was alone with the Neverseen, and there was nothing Sophie except trust Keefe and hope that maybe, just maybe his plan might work.

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      “Keefe!” Sophie transmitted.

      “Foster, I’m only gonna say one thing, I, Keefe Sencen promise not to leave the Neverseen without both of the caches don’t try to rescue me or stop me.” Keefe transmitted.

      For once Keefe was alone with the Neverseen, and there was nothing Sophie except trust Keefe and hope that maybe, just maybe his plan might work.

      “I’m going to Eternalia.” Sophie called. She leapt there and opened Councillor Oralie’s door. “Let’s open the cache.”

      “Okay.” Oralie replied. She conjured the cache.

      “Stellarlune.” They whispered into the cache. Photos whipped around them pulling them into the cache.


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      “Sophie, where are you?” Oralie called. No answer, memories kept swirling. Oralie closed in on herself. “Sophie! Help!” The cache focused on a memory and Oralie watched.

      “Kenric,” Oralie whispered. “Is that you?”

      “Oralie,” Kenric said. “I love you. I wish I could have said it sooner, but I had some business to take care of.”

      “If the Council finds you, it would cause chaos.” Oralie said “They just elected Alina, you must go into to hiding, not just for my safety, but for yours.”

      “When will I see you again?” Kenric asked.

      “You'll see me when I remember.” Oralie told him. “I am going to lock it in my cache. Hopefully, I'll see you soon.”

      “Goodbye, Oralie.” Kenric whispered. “You'll find me where your daughter used to live. When the time is right. Then I can tell you all about Stellarlune and where I have been.”

      “Goodbye, my love, I know I will, find you soon.” Oralie said and with that Oralie was pulled out of the cache. She found herself back in her pink filled room.

      “Sophie?” Oralie called. “She looked back at her cache and Sophie gazed back. “No!”

      Oralie only knew two things "Sophie was stuck in the cache and it was all her fault.

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      “Sophie!” Sophie heard Oralie yell.

      She tried running towards her but the scenes kept changing sending her in different directions.

      “Oralie!” Sophie screamed. A binding light flashed, and all the memories faded. Sophie could now see outside of the cache.

      “Oralie?” Sophie whispered.

      “Sophie,” Oralie asked. “I'm…sorry! I love—” 

      “I don't think either of us are ready for that.” Sophie interrupted. “Oh, no.”

      “What?” Oralie asked, genuinely concerned.

      “I never had a destiny, this is how it ends, I never…” Sophie mumbled. “Was going to be the one to defeat the Neverseen, Mr. Forkle, was never gonna admit that I'm defective...Allison's the answer, not me. Goodbye Oralie.”

      “I'm getting you out, Sophie.” Oralie promised.

      “No!” Sophie exclaimed. “Go, Oralie, I'm not worth it. I'm not worth anything.”

      “Sophie, I'm not leaving you.” Oralie said.

      “Yes, you are.” Sophie growled, with that Sophie and the cache dissapeared.



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      “I'm sorry.” Oralie said, facing the rest of the council. “I didn't know this would happen.”

      “That doesn't make it okay!” Fitz yelled from the crowd. “Thanks to you Sophie might be broken, if she is, I'm going to be mad. I was supposed to be the one to break her that's why I am with Maruca!”

      “WHAT!?!?” Wylie and Maruca cried out in unison.

      “I...thought you l-l-liked me a-a-and y-you even k-k-kissed me.” Maruca stuttered.

      “Oralie we've almost made our decision, but what did you find in the cache?” Emery asked.

      Oralie took a deep breath, “Kenric's...alive.”

      Several "whats?" went around the crowd.

      “Our decision is...” Emery began. “You shall be kicked off the council and Councillor Kenric will take your place, and you... Shall be sent to EXILE.”

       Oralie gasped, “Wh–what?”

      “You can't do that.” A voice said rising from the crowd. It was Allison. “I... know where Sophie is.”

      “Where?!?” The council demanded.

      “Right here.” Keefe said casually stepping forward with Sophie, as a person, outside of the cache. “But there's one problem... Sophie can't talk or inflict anymore.”

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      “How’d you do it, Keefe?” Biana asked after the Tribunal. “How did you get the caches?”

      “I...well,” Keefe began.

      “Go on.” Dex coaxed.

      “I was right next to Fintan’s room so I snuck in there but Grady and someone else were already waiting for me her code name Midnight.” Keefe explained.

      “And then?” Linh interrupted.

      “And then we got into a fight, I was losing,” Keefe continued. “Sophie came out of nowhere and one of her hands were outside the cache, and she single-handedly knocked them out. And it took a lot of her inflicting so, she kinda of drained it out of her body I think.”

      “Ms. Foster are you alright?” Mr. Forkle asked. Sophie nodded. Biana looked like she was about to faint and Tam hugged her for support. Mr. Forkle went through his long list of theories for Sophie’s lost voice and inflicting. Sophie couldn’t keep her eyes open and fell asleep. Everyone gasped, no matter how tired Sophie ever was she never would’ve fallen asleep during a lengthy discussion even if it was Mr. Forkle’s.

      “Something’s wrong,” Tam whispered. “Her shadowvapor has increased.”

      “I can’t feel her emotion’s in the air anymore.” Keefe whispered. “Wait there was another person there a Flasher I think he was really powerful.”

      “Of course,” said a familiar voice. Everyone turned to face the very much alive Councillor Kenric. Before he could finish everyone in the room tackle hugged him.

      “How?” Everyone exclaimed.

      “The secret in my cache.” Oralie said softly.

      “I’m resigning from the Council.” Kenric explained.

      “But we’ve already elected his replacement.” All eyes turned to Amy/Jolie. “Jolie Ruewen.”

      “Cool, cool, cool,” Kenric interrupted. “Now that we’re all caught up, I know what’s wrong with Sophie,” He paused for dramatic effect. “Sophie has been experimented on.”

      “Yeah, we already knew that.” Stina snapped.

      “Yes I know you know,” Kenric replied. “When the Black Swan was creating her, the included the two things that react to Stellarlune, there was an accident in her creation which added something to her DNA making her vulnerable to Stellarlune and this,” He gestured to Sophie. “Is proof of that.”

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      “How’d you do it, Keefe?” Biana asked after the Tribunal. “How did you get the caches?”

      “I...well,” Keefe began.

      “Go on.” Dex coaxed.

      “I was right next to Fintan’s room so I snuck in there but Grady and someone else were already waiting for me her code name Midnight.” Keefe explained.

      “And then?” Linh interrupted.

      “And then we got into a fight, I was losing,” Keefe continued. “Sophie came out of nowhere and one of her hands were outside the cache, and she single-handedly knocked them out. And it took a lot of her inflicting so, she kinda of drained it out of her body I think.”

      “Ms. Foster are you alright?” Mr. Forkle asked. Sophie nodded. Biana looked like she was about to faint and Tam hugged her for support. Mr. Forkle went through his long list of theories for Sophie’s lost voice and inflicting. Sophie couldn’t keep her eyes open and fell asleep. Everyone gasped, no matter how tired Sophie ever was she never would’ve fallen asleep during a lengthy discussion even if it was Mr. Forkle’s.

      “Something’s wrong,” Tam whispered. “Her shadowvapor has increased.”

      “I can’t feel her emotion’s in the air anymore.” Keefe whispered. “Wait there was another person there a Flasher I think he was really powerful.”

      “Of course,” said a familiar voice. Everyone turned to face the very much alive Councillor Kenric. Before he could finish everyone in the room tackle hugged him.

      “How?” Everyone exclaimed.

      “The secret in my cache.” Oralie said softly.

      “I’m resigning from the Council.” Kenric explained.

      “But we’ve already elected his replacement.” All eyes turned to Amy/Jolie. “Jolie Ruewen.”

      “Cool, cool, cool,” Kenric interrupted. “Now that we’re all caught up, I know what’s wrong with Sophie,” He paused for dramatic effect. “Sophie has been experimented on.”

      “Yeah, we already knew that.” Stina snapped.

      “Yes I know you know,” Kenric replied. “When the Black Swan was creating her, the included the two things that react to Stellarlune, there was an accident in her creation which added something to her DNA making her vulnerable to Stellarlune and this,” He gestured to Sophie. “Is proof of that.”



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      “So that's it?” Keefe asked holding back his tears. “Foster's not immune to everything and she could be dying?”

      “What else would there be?” Emery replied, he sounded like the whole thing amused him.

      “They...they knocked me out and when I woke up, Foster was there.” He stuttered. “I should've...I shouldn't have...I don't know.”

      Biana scooted closer to Keefe, and it was so foolish to think about but once upon a time, he used to like her. But she likes Tam, and Keefe likes Foster there's nothing to it.



      Mr. Forkle stepped forward, “Mr. Sencen, I know in times like these we feel like breaking into despair, but shan't do that now. We have to fix Ms. Foster, and blah, blah, blah. For that's what Ms.Foster would do for us and blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah. That is your duty as a member of the Black Swan and blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah. And, Mr. Sencen are you even listening to me?”

      “Yes, I am.” Keefe said, probably a little too quickly.

      Keefe glanced around the room everyone had left, Sandor and Grizel had left to walk around Havenfield's pastures.

      “Which parts did you hear?” Mr. Forkle asked snapping Keefe back to the present.

      “Um,” Keefe cleared his throat and mimicked Mr. Forkle. “Mr. Sencen, I know in times like these we feel like breaking into despair, but shan't do that now. We have to fix Ms. Foster, and blah, blah, blah. For that's what Ms.Foster would do for us and blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah. That is your duty as a member of the Black Swan and blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah. And, Mr. Sencen are you even listening to me?”

      “I don't sound like that!” Mr. Forkle exclaimed. “You're going to be a big part in saving Ms. Foster so I advise that YOU TAKE IT SERIOUSLY!!!!!”

      “Okay, okay,” Keefe shrank back. “Jeez, no need to yell at me.”

      “Sorry, when people don't listen then I often yell.” Mr. Forkle replied.

      “Yeah, no kidding.” Keefe muttered.

      Mr. Forkle ignored that comment, “I suppose we should get Ms. Foster to the Healing Center.”

      “I suggest that we get Gigantor.” Keefe said in an uncanny impression of Mr. Forkle.

      “For the last time, I DON'T SOUND LIKE THAT!!!” Mr. Forkle screamed his whole face turning red.

      Keefe ran outside to find Gigantor and Grizel. They were both laying on the ground. There was red on them, Keefe assumed that it was roses or something but as he got closer he realized it wasn't. There was a message carved onto them:

                                                            We're coming for you, 

                                                                 All of you,

                                 And your pathetic Moonlark won't be able to save you,

                                              Join us or get what's coming to you,

                                                     A legacy of endless pain,

                                                You can try to stop us and Sophie,

                             Your just a small example of people who stand in  our way 

                                                 You will know where to find us

                                                                  Signed,

                                                 Lady Gisela, your new leader

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      2. Who's POV should I do next?

      3. Other people join the Neverseen, or the Black Swan?

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    • Did they die?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

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    • GASPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP

      -AnotherobliviousTurtleA.K.A.Sophie

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    • 99.244.203.208 wrote:
      GASPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP

      -AnotherobliviousTurtleA.K.A.Sophie

      Hey, I'm sorry for intturupting this undoubtably amazing fanfic, but -AnotherobliviousTurtleA.K.A.Sophie, I have messaged you on a few different threads, but it doesn't look as if you saw my messages. Our usernames are very similar, and someone thought I was you recently, ​​​​​​​​​​​​​I know you added the AKA sophie part on the end, but there was still a mix up. To prevent any more confusion, could you please change your username? I feel like you took it from me. I appreciate your understanding in advance, and feel really mean writing this message.

      (again, sorry for intturupting the fanfic!)

      ~Another Oblivious Turtle

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    • I AM LEAVING FANDOM...BYE!

      -AnotherObliviousTurtleA.K.A.Sophie

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