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  • Chapter one: Sophie’s pov 

         I wanted to do something. I was sick of just sitting and waiting for Keefe to wake up. I had started sleeping in the healing center; I’d been in there most of the time anyway. I helped Elwin with Keefe anyway that I could. Fitz came every once in a while, as did others. 

         When Fitz came, it felt like all he did was stare at me. I pretended he didn’t exist at times like these. We were still friends, but it was an awkward friendship. I felt a frenemy vibe; I’m pretty sure that he felt a she-knows-I-like-her crush vibe type of thing, though. He was hopeless. That was back when I thought I liked him, but, in truth, I never did.

         As I ignored Fitz, I tried everything I could think of at the time to rouse Keefe. Nothing worked. Fitz tried to ‘cheer me up’ as he called it, but this basically entailed him forcing my head onto his shoulder. I steered clear of Fitz as much as possible. He was like a disease, but the elves had yet to discover a cure. My telepathy sessions were unbearable. I spent my lunches and all other spare moments in the healing center.

         I isolated myself and probably earned a thousand lusters worth just from helping out in the healing center those first few months. It didn’t wake Keefe up though. When I searched his mind, he was fine. I felt him slowly slipping everyday though. His memories lessened everyday. He was breaking and nothing I did helped.

    Keefe’s pov

         I could feel Foster’s worry through my dream-like consciousness. I could see through my unblinking eyes. When I did go to sleep, I either dreamt of nothing or everything. Then I finally woke up. 

         “Keefe!” Foster cried. She was actually crying, too. She ran over and hugged me until I couldn’t breath. She pulled away and her face pulled away from her body too. “Keefe, you did it, you’ve fulfilled your legacy,” used-to-be-sophie said, pointing downward. 

         I looked around myself. All my friends lie dead, their broken bodies littered the ground. The council lay there as well. My mother clapped and shrieked with glee. “You did it! You finally did it!” she repeated the words over and over again.

          I might as well have killed them in Loamnore, though. I thought. I did lead everyone right into the trap, didn’t I? I could feel myself slipping away, day by day, night by night. I tried to hold on, but lost my grip one night. Then there was black.

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    • ok so,if anyone reads this please give feedback and... yeah

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    • OK, first of all: THIS IS GREAT!! I really like it!! One note, in the first few sentences, you said 'I helped Elwin with Keefe anyway that she could.' I noticed you switched perspectives there. I don't know how you edit previous posts, but just a little typo I thought you might like to know about. One question: In the last few paragraphs, is that a dream Keefe is having? It was a little confusing for me - I'm not sure about others, but could you explain please? Again, I like this a lot!! 😊

      - Musical Moonlark

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    • OOP XD ok ima fix that thanks

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    • ok i fixded it

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    • SOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!

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    • XD thanks u

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    • Omg love this pleaseeee please add more! 



      -SweetHomeHavenfield 

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    • This is good

      -Everblaze

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    • this is awesome

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    • Wow! this is good!

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    • XD thanks us ima try to add either tonight or tomorrow

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    • 138.88.183.242 wrote:
      OK, first of all: THIS IS GREAT!! I really like it!! One note, in the first few sentences, you said 'I helped Elwin with Keefe anyway that she could.' I noticed you switched perspectives there. I don't know how you edit previous posts, but just a little typo I thought you might like to know about. One question: In the last few paragraphs, is that a dream Keefe is having? It was a little confusing for me - I'm not sure about others, but could you explain please? Again, I like this a lot!! 😊

      - Musical Moonlark

      yeah it was a dream XD sorry for the confusion THANK YOU

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    • Ok that makes a lot more sense!

      Any of you who read my fanfic, the contest is closing in 5 minutes! 



      https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:409997

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    • ?

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    • Will you be writing more? Please do!

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    • Pls write more! 

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    • XD yeah im writing more im still working on the next part tho XD

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    • I did some more *crosses fingers and prays that no one thinks it's too horrible*

      Chapter two: Keefe’s pov

           I heard Foster’s voice. We need you! It called. I never roused. What was the point? How could I go back and change what I’d done? Unless Sophie could teleport through time, there was no use. She didn’t even love me. How could she? After all I’d done? I saw her heart that day though… her mind is different. It likes Fitz, but her heart loves me. I know that, but… It’s not enough for me to hold on.

      Sophie’s pov

           I felt Keefe slipping away everyday, and everyday I showed him his memories, but the next day those and even more memories would disappear. I was useless. I continued to distance myself until I didn’t even go to my sessions anymore. 

           “Do you know what you’re doing to me, Keefe?” I asked one night. “You’re killing me,” I informed him. I scooted my cot nearer to his until they were touching. I breathed in his scent and fell asleep.

           Biana was in the healing center when I woke. Normally, I would have blushed, seeing as how I was cuddled up next to Keefe, but I didn’t care enough to do so. “What’s… going on?” Biana asked cautiously, gesturing to Keefe and me. “Nothing,” I said, but I didn’t bother to move. “Ah, I see,” Biana said, then nodded.

           “What is it?” I asked, more awake this time. “Th- the council has made a decision,” Biana said. “What… decision?” I asked, cautiously. Biana took a deep breath. “They’ve decided to mark him as dead if he doesn’t wake up within the next month,” Biana said, then hurried out of the room.

          After crying for about an hour, I informed Keefe. You’ll be counted as dead Keefe. Do you know how much that’ll kill me? Even if you aren’t? I’ll go anyway, but… I couldn’t think of what to say next. Then I knew. But it won’t keep me from loving you. 

      Keefe’s pov

           Did I hear her correctly? She did transmit it though. I could only hear transmissions, unless my jumbled thoughts decided to settle on one thing for a few seconds. I guess I did hear her correctly. She loved me, she still loves me to this day. 

           I wanted to wake up so badly. I wanted to tell her I loved her too. I wanted to tell her that being broken wasn’t so bad. But I couldn’t. I couldn’t wake up. No one got hurt, you know. In Loamnore. When she transmitted that, it was almost enough. But a newfound guilt had clawed its way up to the front of my mind. Fitz would kill me if he found out. If...

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    • AHHH YOU'RE KILLING ME WITH THE SUSPENSE

      Nightingale

      PS. Please add more, your work is amazing 

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    • YYYYYYAAAAAASSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!! CliFFHaNGer!!!!!

      This sooo good!!! Plz pos soon as u can <3<3

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    • XD i will im working on the next part now

      THANK YOU

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    • AHHHHHH CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • PPPPPPPPPPPOOOOOOOOOOOOSSSSSSSSSTTTTTTTTTTTTT

      MMMMMMMOOOOOOOORRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEE

      PPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEE

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    • Also I made a story

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    • It's called 'storys that people make' so you need something to read go to Keefe's wiki and push 'see more discussions' and press the one that called 'Storys that people make..

      Hint in it Keefe finds out he has a SISTER!

      Please check it out 

      -Vivian/Goldswan

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    • 75.167.73.173 wrote:
      It's called 'storys that people make' so you need something to read go to Keefe's wiki and push 'see more discussions' and press the one that called 'Storys that people make..

      Hint in it Keefe finds out he has a SISTER!

      Please check it out 

      -Vivian/Goldswan

      sister WHAAAAAAAA

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    • THIS IS SOOOOO GOOOOOD!!!

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    • XD thank you i need to try something real quick <dancing script> Things That I Love

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    • nope it didn't work how do u make da font 

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    • XD i need it for my next part, or i could just leave it alone

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    • if you want to do that, you'd do <'font face="dancing script">Things that I Love<'/font> so it would turn out as Things That I Love

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    • just don't add the aprosthophes.

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    • Brownandblue wrote:
      75.167.73.173 wrote:
      It's called 'storys that people make' so you need something to read go to Keefe's wiki and push 'see more discussions' and press the one that called 'Storys that people make..

      Hint in it Keefe finds out he has a SISTER!

      Please check it out 

      -Vivian/Goldswan

      sister WHAAAAAAAA

      Yeah you can check it out if you want

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    • SO GOOD

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    • XD thanks here's some more 

      Chapter Three Sophie’s pov

           “It isn’t fair,” I mumbled as I passed the receptional end. I didn’t go up to comfort Keefe’s dad. I had done more for Keefe than Lord Cassius ever had and he was up there. He was even pretending to grieve. Keefe deserved more.

           “I’ve come to learn that life isn’t fair, Blondie” Ro said, tears behind the brave face she was putting up. They had let Ro in for his planting. It was the right thing to do.

           I thought I had cried myself dry that morning when Keefe still hadn’t woken up. I was wrong. I cried until the tree sprung from the ground. It was beautiful. 

           The tree was one of those barkless trees, but you could tell that it had layers. The trunk was almost the same color as Keefe’s hair- he would have been proud. There were tiny little flowers that studded the top- a nice ice-blue color. The leaves were beautiful, but they were brown. That was a color he was void of. He did not have the color brown anywhere on him.

           Ro laughed a laugh that came with tears. “Of course he loves you enough for it to even show up on his wanderling,” Ro said. “L-loves me?” I asked, confused. “Blondie, how can you not see it? He was always there for you. That gold journal? Filled with things that he loves. Like you,” she said, crying now. 

           I grabbed Ro and started sprinting. We arrived at the Shores of Solace quickly. “Where’s the freaking journal?” I asked after I started ransacking Keefe’s room. It honestly barely looked any different. “You mean this?” Ro asked, holding up the golden journal. “Yes,” I answered, barely a whisper. I snatched the journal and plop down on the bed.

      Things That I Love

           Those were the words that seemed to dance across the page. I started crying as I flipped through the pages. Ro had told the truth. Most of the pages had drawings of me. There was one drawing of what looked to be the Great Gulon Incident. 

           I cried and cried and cried. He loved me. But it wouldn’t bring him back. Ro came and actually hugged me-an unusual thing for the ogre princess. I cried into her shoulder. “I hate to interrupt, but I go where you go,” Sandor’s squeaky voice called. I ignored him. I needed this. I needed someone who knew how much it hurt me.

      Keefe’s pov

           Is today my planting? I managed to remember that much. And that Foster loved me. She loved me. Why didn’t that wake me up? And no one got hurt. It was because of Fitz, but didn’t I deserve that much? Can’t I have one thing? One good thing?

           My guilt transformed into anger. Why did Mr. Perfect always have to have what I wanted? First a family that wasn’t damaged or evil, then the only girl I’ve ever loved?

      Fitz’s pov (please don’t yell at me, this part is important)

          I felt pain, almost like Ro was standing behind me and stabbing me over, and over, and over again. I dropped to the ground. I heard yelling. I heard someone tell me to stop. Everyone was telling me to stop. Stop what though? I didn’t even know what was happening.

           Then I looked down. I had grabbed someone’s leaping crystal and stabbed myself over, and over, and over again. I yelled at myself to stop. I didn’t.

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    • Oof. That was sad. BUT AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • OH MY GOSH THIS IS SOOO GOD DIJM CRYING SO MUCH AHHH OHHHH SOPHIE LOVE KEFFE LOVE SOPHIE HEHEHEHE FITZ AHHHH SOOO GOOOOD CURTTTTEEE BROWN ON THE TRREEEEEE AHHHHHH  SOOO CUTE IWANT KEEFEE TO WAKKE UPPPP. SRYY IF U CANT READD THISS

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    • REEEE EVEN THOUGH I DON'T SHIP SOPHITZ PLEASE DON'T MAKE FITZ SUICIDAL OR ANYTHING BTW I'M NOT ANGRY THIS IS CRYING sad nightingale noises

      Nightingale

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    • Awesome story. 

      Plz post more

      Golden Moonlark

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    • XD Fitz will live thank you guys  XD im about to die of laughter at ur comments rn (not that i dont appreciate them) XDXDXD

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    • 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 

      Golden moonlark

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    • @Brownandblue OkAy

      Nightingale

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    • WWAaaaaaaaaa-- What?

      Omg, Fitz is my least favorite character along with Alden but he dosen't deserve to die, at least not like that. Oh and I never knew Keefe's love was that strong to Sophie! Why couldn't she notice AHH, Why u gotta ne soooo oblivious Sophie????????

      ( I sound so dark ),

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    • XD fitz will live i promise

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    • AD TIME (yes im advertising on my own thread) https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:724797#13 (it's an rp)

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    • SoKeefe Rules! wrote:
      if you want to do that, you'd do <'font face="dancing script">Things that I Love<'/font>

      so it would turn out as Things That I Love

      OOP XD i just saw this

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    • PPPPPPPOOOOOOOSSSSTTTTTTTTTT

      SSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNMNNJNN

      OOOOORRRRR   

      IIIII 

      WWWWWIIIIIILLLLLLLLLLLLLLL

      TTTTTTTHHHHHHRRRRRROOOOOOOWWWWW

      EEEEEEMMMMMMOOOOOOJJJJJIIIII

      TTTTTTOOOOMMMMMMAAAAAAATTTTTOOOOOSSSS

      -Goldenmoonlark

      P.s sorry I'm so impatient but there actually is tomato emoji

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    • Brownandblue wrote:
      SoKeefe Rules! wrote:
      if you want to do that, you'd do <'font face="dancing script">Things that I Love<'/font>

      so it would turn out as Things That I Love

      OOP XD i just saw this

      XD just don't add the apostrophes.

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    • @GoldenMoonlark Lol

      Nightingale

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    • Thanks Nightingale

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    • From GoldenMoonlark

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    • 🍅 see a emoji tomato. 

      -GoldenMoonlark

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    • XD 

      I HAS MORE

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    • Brownandblue wrote:
      XD 

      I HAS MORE </div>

      What do you mean?

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    • OH I GET IT

      OH WAIT I DON'T  IF U HAVE IT THEN POST IT

      UR DRIVING ALL OF US INSANE

      A VERY IMPATANIT 

      -GoldenMoonlark

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    • I ALREADY DID A TOMATO WAR WITH ONE AUTHOR 

      (I literally did!) 

      SO POST SOON OR YOU WON'T BE RED FROM EMBARRASSMENT 

      -GoldenMoonlark

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    • lol

      no tomato war yet but I agree YES POST SOONNNNNNn

      (no pressure or anything)

      but yeah

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    • 114.47.87.17 wrote:
      lol

      no tomato war yet but I agree YES POST SOONNNNNNn

      (no pressure or anything)

      but yeah

      AAAWWWWW WHY!!???? FIIIIIIIIIIIINE NOW I FEEL LIKE A LITTLE KID!

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    • Alright I'll give u an hour. The if u haven't posted anything I will start another tomato WAR! 

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      GoldenMoonlark

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    • 75.167.73.173 wrote:
      114.47.87.17 wrote:
      lol

      no tomato war yet but I agree YES POST SOONNNNNNn

      (no pressure or anything)

      but yeah

      AAAWWWWW WHY!!???? FIIIIIIIIIIIINE NOW I FEEL LIKE A LITTLE KID!

      It's fun to feel like a little kid sometimes, though. And I agree as well. WE NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE. We don't mean to rush you, we're just excited.

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    • Brownandblue wrote:
      XD 

      I HAS MORE </div>

      XD it was an april fools prank

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    • i will post soon tho

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    • Yayyyy!!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO FITZ! like I’m seriously concerned....

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    • XD he lives, don't worry he's not suicidal either. i'll give u a hint keefe was super angry wen fitz started to try to kill himself and fitz didn't even know wat was going on

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      • wink*
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    • all authors are evil. but not Neverseen evil. just author evil.

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    • XD i like my evilness tho

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    • Alright you have five more hours before I'll throw tamotos

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      GoldenMoonlark

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    • 75.167.73.173 wrote:
      Alright you have five more hours before I'll throw tamotos
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      GoldenMoonlark

      Five hours sounds good(if u divide it by 60. sorry I'm acting impatient)

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    • XD ok im writing rn

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    • YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • ok i has more for real this time (kissing scene sucks tho)

      Chapter Four Keefe’s pov

           I woke up. I stopped feeling angry. I was relieved. I was awake! I could tell Sophie now, and… and then what? It didn’t matter. I was finally awake! But that day was my planting. I missed the deadline. Literally. Oh well, that was another thing Foster and I had in common.

      Sophie’s pov

           I sat up and brushed my tears away. He wasn’t gone. Not really, anyway. And I could bring him back. Then my imparter lit up with Elwin’s face. “Healing center, now” he said then clicked off.

           This time I grabbed Sandor’s hand too. I sprinted until we collapsed onto the floor of the healing center. “Careful, or I'll have three patients,” Elwin laughed as he helped her up. Three? Then I saw Fitz. he was unconscious, and he looked bad. 

           “Hey, Foster!” Keefe called. Keefe. I rushed toward him and hugged him as tightly as I could, and, before I knew what I was doing, kissed him on the cheek. I kissed all over his face. He was back. Keefe’s eyes widened as he started to blush. I blushed as well.

           “Glad my Lovely Lady Foster still cares,” he said, quickly recovering. He called me his. That’s all I can think for a few minutes. “Uh, Foster. Earth to Foster!” Keefe shouted. I jerked back to reality. “Wh-what?” I asked. “I’m a mesmer!” Keefe repeats. I stood there in shock.

           “Do you realize that that means you’ll have to train with Grady?” I asked after I had fully recovered. The thought filled me with dread. “Yeah, I’m trying to not think about that, but, hey! At least I have an excuse to come to Havenfield more often,” He says, in his teasing way. But I know what he means. That made my cheeks go warm. “At least something good comes out of this,” I said softly. “At least,” Keefe agreed, warm eyes reaching mine.

           Grady cleared his throat. I whirled around, “Grady?”. He glared at me with an insane amount of intensity. “What?” Keefe asked, batting his eyes innocently. Oh. Grady was glaring at Keefe, not me. That fact made me a lot more mad than it should have.

      Keefe’s pov

           Foster was standing there, looking like an angel. I wanted her to kiss me for real though, not the little pecs on the cheek. I wanted the real thing. I wanted her. And she said she wanted me. I faked being tired and let some fantasies play out.

           “Want me to stay?” Sophie asked. I must have fallen asleep for real. I opened my eyes. “Always,” I answered, no sign of a tease in my tone. I could tell her how I really felt. I scooted over and she sat down.

           She pulled her fingers through my hair. “Not the hair, Foster,” I whispered as I sat up. She smiled and let me pull her close to me. She leaned into me and I put my chin on top of her head. 

           “Keefe Sencen, if you don’t kiss me right now, I swear I will kill you,” she whispered. She didn’t have to tell me twice. I pulled her close and kissed her. Slowly. It was my dream come true. 

      Sophie’s pov.

           I was so glad I had never kissed Fitz. Because now I had Keefe, the only guy I’d ever really loved. My brain went into Silveny mode. KEEFE! KEEFE! KEEFE! Was all I could think. My brain was mush, but my mouth knew what to do.

           My hands went to his hair and his were on my waist. I pulled away, even though I never wanted it to end. I pulled away for a reason though. Fitz was awake

      ik its really short but... good cliffhanger spot

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    • AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA cliffhanger

      also yay I'm the first to comment

      also it's amazing

      also I'll stop now

      Nightingale

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    • OH MY GOSH THSI IS AMAZING I LOVE THE KISSING UHHHHHH PERFECTIONNNNN SOOKEEEFEEE YASSSS

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    • YYYAAAAAYYY!!! 

      GOOD JOB AVOIDING THE TAMOTOS 

      THE OTHER AUTHOR WASN'T SO LUCKY

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      GoldenMoonlark

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    • XD thanks yous guys (way too many ses)

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    • KOTLCPINEAPPLE wrote:
      OH MY GOSH THSI IS AMAZING I LOVE THE KISSING UHHHHHH PERFECTIONNNNN SOOKEEEFEEE YASSSS

      XD

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    • 75.167.73.173 wrote:
      YYYAAAAAYYY!!! 

      GOOD JOB AVOIDING THE TAMOTOS 

      THE OTHER AUTHOR WASN'T SO LUCKY

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      GoldenMoonlark

      ... *packs all belongings in case i get almost murdered*

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    • Or actually 

      • counts on fingers*

      It was seven authors who weren't so lucky!

      Isint the world just perfect.

      Hm I wonder why my friends say I'm terriorfiying 

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      GoldenMoonlark

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    • But this your story is what I'm looking for!!!!

      It's a master piece 

      So don't worry I promise I won't throw Tomatos at you. 

      So you can unpack that bag and ooooohhhh

      • takes candy from the bag and runs away* 
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      GoldenMoonlark

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    • Here's a meme

      Poice: sir your under arest for riding with 7 people on the motor cycle.

      Keefe: wait did you say seven?!

      Poice: yes

      Keefe: *counts on fingers then freezes and gasps* 

      Poice: sir?

      Keefe: oh no! Dex fell off!

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      GoldenMoonlark

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    • AWww, they kissed<3

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    • XD it was a very grown-up scene (XD ignore me)

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    • 75.167.73.173 wrote:
      Here's a meme

      Poice: sir your under arest for riding with 7 people on the motor cycle.

      Keefe: wait did you say seven?!

      Poice: yes

      Keefe: *counts on fingers then freezes and gasps* 

      Poice: sir?

      Keefe: oh no! Dex fell off!

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      GoldenMoonlark

      oof

      Nightingale

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    • 75.167.73.173 wrote: I ALREADY DID A TOMATO WAR WITH ONE AUTHOR 

      (I literally did!) 

      SO POST SOON OR YOU WON'T BE RED FROM EMBARRASSMENT 

      -GoldenMoonlark

      Just saw this, and let me just say *world war II flashbacks* it was terrifying

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    • I love this fanfic!!! It’s soooo good I just found it!!!

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    • XD thank u

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    • 75.167.73.173 wrote:
      But this your story is what I'm looking for!!!!

      It's a master piece 

      So don't worry I promise I won't throw Tomatos at you. 

      So you can unpack that bag and ooooohhhh

      • takes candy from the bag and runs away* 
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      GoldenMoonlark

      XD

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    • Swearingparrot wrote:

      75.167.73.173 wrote: I ALREADY DID A TOMATO WAR WITH ONE AUTHOR 

      (I literally did!) 

      SO POST SOON OR YOU WON'T BE RED FROM EMBARRASSMENT 

      -GoldenMoonlark

      Just saw this, and let me just say *world war II flashbacks* it was terrifying

      Yes I made a Tamoto war with Swearingparrot  cause she was trying to make SOFITZ happen

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      GoldenMoonlark

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    • Hey, BrownandBlue do u mind if iadvertise my fanfic? Its ok if u say no

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      GoldenMoonlark

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    • ^^it was an april fool's joke

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    • and it was hILARIOUS

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    • Swearingparrot wrote:
      and it was hILARIOUS

      And it was halarious to watch all those tomatoes thrown at u not to mention the huge one. I a tomato is my new favorite food.

      I know I'm terrofrying 

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      GoldenMoonlark

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    • XD mmmmmmm i love terrofries mmmmmmmmmmmm

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    • What? Also I shared my crush story in crush central Brownandblue

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      GoldenMoonlark

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    • 75.167.73.173 wrote:
      What? Also I shared my crush story in crush central Brownandblue
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      GoldenMoonlark

      Speaking of crush central, it said that they broke the thread. Is there by chance a Crush Central#4

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    • Brownandblue wrote:
      XD mmmmmmm i love terrofries mmmmmmmmmmmm

      this made me laugh so hard

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    • Why is this page so random XDDD

      Nightingale

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    • Swearingparrot wrote:
      Brownandblue wrote:
      XD mmmmmmm i love terrofries mmmmmmmmmmmm
      this made me laugh so hard

      XD terrofries are good tho

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    • POST! POST!POST! plz pretty pretty plz post soo, like tmrw!

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    • i'll try to post tomorrow- i might be able to tonight...

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    • .*turns on Silvery mode*YES!YES!YES!YES!

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    • XD ok here's one part (it short tho)

      Chapter Five: Keefe’s pov

           I wondered why she pulled away for a minute. Then I saw Fitz. I cursed under my breath. “Missed me that much, huh?” Fitz asked, he had obviously seen everything. “Aww, you missed me too and you know it,” I replied. Elwin stepped in. “We don’t need any stress on either of you. We can’t have you doing something you’ll regret,” he said. We ignored him.

           “Did you tell Sophie what you did, hmm? How you almost killed me?” Fitz asked. I wanted to tear his head off right there and then. Sophie restrained me. “What happened?” she asked, looking at me pleadingly. “I-I” I gulped. “I woke up in a rage. I was guilty about Fitz after you told me how you felt. It turned into anger and… I didn’t mean to do it” I looked up to her, whispering the last few words. 

      Sophie’s pov

           “What do you mean?” I asked. “I mean I accidentally mesmerized him,” Keefe said quietly. “What?!?! He didn’t just ‘accidently mesmerize’ me. He almost killed me!” Fitz shouted, pointing a shaky finger at Keefe.

           I rose to his defense. “It was an accident okay?” I yelled holding Keefe protectively. “Aww, I just love how you're so willing to rise to the defense of your murderer of a boyfriend,” he said, sneering. 

           “He is not a murderer, and I wish I could say the same for you,” I spat. “Calm down!” Elwin screamed. I rubbed my temples and scooted closer to Keefe. “It’s not your fault,” I whispered. He didn’t need to add this to his list of things he feels guilty about. “I know,” he said but he still held me a little too tight for that to be believable. 

           Fitz glared at us. “And now my girlfriend’s cheating on me too, great!” he said, completely ignoring Elwin. I stood up. “I am not, and technically never was, your girlfriend. You said we’d go at my pace. You asked, I said wait, next thing I know we’re a couple. You said we’d go at my pace, and we didn’t. You were completely in charge of the relationship, if you can even call it that,” I snapped. 

           Keefe snapped back to his old self, stood up, and clapped, grinning wildly. I smiled back at him and let him put his arm around my waist. “Please, I was all you’d ever wanted,” Fitz said, his annoying confidence returning. Elwin had given up and returned to his office.

           “No, you were just the first person to show any interest in me, which I kind of liked. Someone finally cared about me, but you never truly did, did you?” I asked. The truth to my words shocked even me. “And Keefe, you’ve abused him almost as much as his parents have,” I said when Fitz didn’t have an answer.

           Fitz passed out. The stress was too much for him. Keefe turned to me. “Our Foster sure has gotten feisty,” he said, then kissed me a quick kiss, but it was all I needed. I laughed with him, then fell asleep. Sleep, what a blissful thing it is.

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    • i was nice this time! no cliffhanger!

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    • YES THANK YOU!!!!!!

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    • "I'm so proud of you' *pretends to wipe tears like Keefe did

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    • that was awesome, but i still want more!

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    • XD i'll write as fast as i can 

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    • Also I wish Sophie would just say "DIE FITZY"

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    • me too, but that's not true to her character *sigh* maybe Tam'll do it, Keefe already has, in his own way.

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    • Yeah but I think Fitz deserves it. Hey want to hear a song I made about keeper of the lost cities

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    • Keefe starts singing "little bunny Fitzipoo hopping through the forest taking all the nice people and bopping them on the head" 

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    • XD YAAAAAAS

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    • I love when fanfics make Fitz *point a shaky finger* It makes me image like the old lady fingers that shake with the gross nails and say stuff like, "You! You did this!" If you know what I mean XD. 

      But this is really good. SOKEEFE FOR LIFE! Btw, (WAFFLES! If you don't know what I mean, check the Keefe page. I can't believe I am avtually going to use this term, but whatever lol..

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    • XD thank u (i have to go check that page out now...)

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    • XD thank you?

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    • That was A M A Z I N G

      A= AWSOME

      M=MAGNIFICENT 

      A=AMAZING (SORRY I COULDN'T THINK OF ANYTHING ELSE)

      Z=ZA BEST

      I=INCREDIBLE

      N=NOTICEABLE (IN A GOOD WAY)

      G=GREAT!

      hope u like my comment 

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    • THANKS U PEOPLES SO MUCH

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    • U welcome

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    • SOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    •  *blushes*

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    • THIS IS AMAZING!!! SUCK TO SUCK FITZZZZ!!!

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    • ok i has more (it short tho)

      Chapter six (at least i think it’s chapter 6)Keefe’s pov

           I watched Foster as she slept. I know that probably makes me the creepiest guy in the world, but she was just so peaceful. And I couldn’t sleep. I guess we switched roles that night. I stayed up all night. At one point I decided to go to the desserts cafeteria, the one that’s meant for mentors only.

           I wanted to wake Foster up for that so bad, but I couldn’t make myself do it. I probably saved myself from some Foster-fury, though. Then I heard screaming instead of Foster’s cute little snore. 

      Sophie’s pov

           Apparently, sleep isn’t so peaceful when you wake up to your ex right behind your kind of boyfriend in an ‘I’m-about-to-attack’ kind of way. I did the only thing I could, I screamed. That shocked Fitz long enough for Keefe to turn around and take Fitz’s weapon away. It was a melder. I could understand jealousy, hatred, and distrust in the current situation, but murder?

           I screamed again. Elwin came out of the office, grabbed the melder, and shouted at both of them to stop with the foolishness. I ran to Keefe. “Are you okay?” I asked. “Yeah, are you?” he replied. “How can I be okay when you almost got killed?” I wondered.

           “You were perfectly fine when I almost got murdered,” came an icy voice that wasn’t Fitz’s anymore. I glared at what used to be Fitz and hugged Keefe tight. “Don’t do that again” I whispered in his ear. “Oh, so you care about me now, do you?” Keefe asked, playing with a strand of my hair. “I’ve always cared about you, Keefe” I whispered back. He pulled me closer, ”I know.”

      Keefe’s pov

           I wasn’t surprised. Honestly, it surprised me that he hadn’t tried to kill me earlier. I breathed in the scent of her. At least she saw it. At least I was still here with her, and it wasn’t a dream. Well, I hoped it wasn’t a dream. Even if I almost died. I would do anything for Foster.

      Fitz’s pov (i hate doing his pov, but it’s a key element to the story)

           I watched in horror as someone else -no, something else- grabbed a melder. I wasn’t myself. Or maybe I was. Is this who I’d become? I could have killed him. Thank goodness Sophie screamed. If she hadn’t, my former best friend would have been killed. And what little sanity I had would have gone with him.

           The parasite that had taken over my body. The parasite hated Keefe for taking Sophie away. I hated myself for yelling at her. The parasite told me I was right to do those things. The parasite told me that dating an unmatchable was just as bad as killing someone. But the parasite was okay with killing someone.

           The parasite was confusing. It twisted things, made them into stories that could always change, simply because it wanted them to. I didn’t like the parasite, but it was taking over.

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    • ok it kind of sucks but...

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    • Datsvgood

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    • Omg my sister said to night "thank you Jesus for the CORONA VIRUS

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    • 75.167.73.173 wrote:
      Datsvgood

      thanks u

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    • 75.167.73.173 wrote:
      Omg my sister said to night "thank you Jesus for the CORONA VIRUS
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      y do XD

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    • 75.167.73.173 wrote:
      Omg my sister said to night "thank you Jesus for the CORONA VIRUS
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      Wait, in favor of it?

      Nightingale

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    • maybe she means she's glad there's no school? *is seriously confused*

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    • She's homeschooled

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    • its kinda wierd reading other people's interpretations but its pretty good

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    • this is also why we need unlocked

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    • XD thanks, i think?

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    • 75.167.73.173 wrote:
      She's homeschooled

      ur sister is psychotic i mean she doesn't go to actual school and said "thank you Jesus, for the corona virus" that is DISTURBING

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    • THIS IS SOOO GREATTTTTT!!!

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    • XD the fanfic or ^^ that

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    • I'm kinda worried for Fitz if that makes sense. Brownandblue, when you said that parasite thing, I freaked out big time. WHAT IS HAPPENING TO FITZ?!?!

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    • Vice Pres. of the Keefe Fan Club wrote:
      I'm kinda worried for Fitz if that makes sense. Brownandblue, when you said that parasite thing, I freaked out big time. WHAT IS HAPPENING TO FITZ?!?!

      Me too

      Nightingale

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    • Vice Pres. of the Keefe Fan Club wrote:
      I'm kinda worried for Fitz if that makes sense. Brownandblue, when you said that parasite thing, I freaked out big time. WHAT IS HAPPENING TO FITZ?!?!

      idek i just went with it

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    • Luv this soooooo much

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    •  *melts into a puddle of goo because people actualy like wat im writing* thank u

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    • ok speaking of writing, i should probably do that now *realizes i have writers block and breaks down*

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    • crap i no longer have writers block, but r u guys up for some Fitz time?

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    • i don't look forward to writing it but... it's this or nothing

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    • i *starts crying* i can handle it! i think.

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    • Brownandblue wrote:
      i don't look forward to writing it but... it's this or nothing

      .*sighs* I'd rather have something than nothing. Even........ even if it means that Fitz is invovled.

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    • i has some more i hate how the plotline seems to be revolving around fitz tho and it super short

      Chapter Seven Sophie’s pov:

           I wanted to hold Keefe so tightly that there was nothing between us except the clothes we were wearing. I didn’t. But I did hold him close. We stood in silence like that for a while. I kissed Keefe lightly when I felt him start to go limp. I walked him to his bed and sat down with him, even after he fell asleep.

      Fitz’s pov (oh, how I hate writing from his pov)

           I was shaking. At least I was back in control. The parasite was like that; it stayed and did some horrible things, then left so that I could deal with the punishments. I crawled back into the cot and cried. How can I stand by and watch this happen? I wondered. 

           Sophie, despite what the parasite had done, comforted me. “What’s wrong?” she asked.

           “I-it took over. Again. It…” 

           “It?”

           “The parasite,” I shuddered as I whispered the words.

           “Is that why you haven’t been yourself lately?” she actually looked concerned. Maybe she knew me better than I thought.

           “I think so”

           “Like the echo” I could tell she was mostly talking to herself but I answered anyway, “Yeah.”

           She looked me up and down, then finally sat down. “Don’t let it take control, you are stronger. You just have to make yourself believe that,” she looked at me like she still cared about me. Maybe she still saw me as a friend. I was so hopeful at that moment, I’m surprised I didn’t burst. “Focus on the good things. Enhance your good moments. Don’t linger on the anger. Store up your happiness for when you need it.” she got up to leave.

          “Thank you,” I said. 

           “For what?”

           “For believing me”

           She smiled. “No problem.”

      Sophie’s pov:

           I got over the break-up thing with Fitz. I mean, how could I not get over it after the kiss Keefe and I shared? But it was more than that. He had gotten over me too, and that fixed the cracks somehow. It would still be awkward but… I’m glad that we’re friends again. Now I could help him with the parasite- or whatever it is.

           I wondered how long the parasite had existed. How long did Fitz have to battle that thing? I’ve had dreams when I was outside of my body. I wondered if that was what Fitz felt like when the parasite took over.

          I sleep again, peacefully this time.

      Fitz’s pov

           I know what the parasite is. I know who the parasite is. It’s my brother. I had a twin brother. That’s why I was twice as good at everything. My twin brother’s soul is in my body. Our body? My family isn’t my family. Biana isn’t my sister. My father is my grandfather. My mother is my grandmother. 

           Not even they know that. But I overheard my real mom and dad talking one night when I was five. Alina and Alvar. My brother is my dad and my former-principal is my mom. At first I wanted to tell everybody. Then Alvar told me everything.

           “You have a twin,” he had told me.

           “I didn’t mean to!” I remember screaming. I accidently killed my twin. I had tried to impress everyone with my telekinesis and lifted a glass table. It fell on my real brother’s head. I saw his soul come out of his body. He didn’t rise to the heavens though, he came for me.

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    • YAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • i'm kinda sad that the parasite didn't kill Fitz *cri*

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    • jk, jk

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    • GOOD As much as I dislike Fitz, he's kinda needed in the story...

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    • woahhh this is real good <3

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    • ^Ikr?

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    • WOOOOAAHHHH not what i was expecting......so good!!

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    • thanks u guys *is suuuuuper happy*

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    • MidNightWolf2020 wrote:
      GOOD As much as I dislike Fitz, he's kinda needed in the story...

      i guess...

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    • that was very dark but i luv it

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    • woah, woah, you've just gone deep conspiracy on me what

      Nightingale

      ps. love it tho

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    • .....................................ooooooookkkkkkkkkk. Fitz has officially gone insane.

      WOw.

      Yeesh.

      Geeze.

      ALvar that d-dad?

      UUuuuuuggghhh! WHy does this world torture me so?

      Lol, Im just dramatic. this is great!

      But really Fitz?

      Im starting to think Shannon is rubbing off on people 

      T-T

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    • afafweurjwberfjdaf ewru[90q3h[fhduiaf eUI hfdishfidsfdshaf duisf ds

      I don't know how my brain can comprehend that. But your story is really AWESOME, too.

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    • AWWWWWW thank u ima try to post this week :)

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    • So....that was amazing! But reading all the fanfics while waiting for the next books has messed up the story for me, im almost done with Legacy for the 3rd time and now I cant read it without thinking that Glimmer is Luzia.

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    • OOOOOOOOOOOH (i forgot about glimmer) ima use that, if u don't mind, of course?

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    • Wasn’t my idea in the first place i think it was Sokeefe Rules! idea?

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    • oh... ima use it anyway

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    • K maybe you should ask her tho?

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    • wait- nvm i think ima make a new character for glimmer

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    • Your fanfic is so good! You Should write your own original book.

      -SoKeefe4life

      Also, self-advertising! Yay!

      https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:782979

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    • 152.26.177.33 wrote:
      Your fanfic is so good! You Should write your own original book.

      -SoKeefe4life

      Also, self-advertising! Yay!

      https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:782979

      AWWWWW thank u

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    • i has mooooooore (it short and boring, but it builds up to a sokeefe overload moment)

      Chapter Eight (i think) Fitz’s pov (y did i come up with a plotline that revolves around him?)

           I was surprised. How could she be so… okay? I glanced at Keefe. That’s how, or who, anyway. I shuddered as the memory aroused him. The parasite. My twin. I shook my head and focused on the good things, like Sophie told me. 

           Keefe was okay. I was okay. Sophie didn’t hate me. That was enough for me at the time. I fell asleep and dreamed of a different outcome that day…

           “Wow” my twin said in awe. The table had flown off of the floor and flew around the room, then it came back into place. “I still don’t forgive you,” an evil voice said, penetrating my dream. “Your hopes and dreams can’t change that day,” he said. “I can still wish,” dream-me replied.

           I woke with a start. I hadn’t talked to him like that in forever.

      Keefe’s pov

           Sophie and Fitz got closer every day. It scared me. Sophie taught me how to make a knot of emotions like hers. Apparently inflicting and mesmerizing were very similar. I wish Sophie could teach me. Sophie didn’t tell me what she and Fitz talked about. It made me feel jealous. And I didn’t want to act like Sophie wasn’t trustworthy but…

      Sophie’s pov

           I could almost feel Keefe getting suspicious. He was acting like I had kicked his puppy. I was just trying to help Fitz. But I could see where he was coming from. I still didn’t like that he didn’t trust me enough to hang out with a friend. A small part of me wanted to protest that it was also my clingy ex, but I didn’t listen. At least Fitz finally told me who the parasite was.

           “The parasite is… my twin brother. Alvar is my father and -you’re gonna laugh- Alina’s my mom.” I did laugh a little. “Told you, anyway, I wanted to tell everyone, but then Alvar explained the situation. No one knows. Not even Della, or Alden for that matter. Later I tried to show off in front of my twin. I wanted him to see how strong my telekinesis was. I lifted a glass table and I accidentally dropped the table on his head. He died and… instead of going to the afterlife he… came for me” Fitz said, shaking.
          I helped him onto the bed as this information entered my head. Something was off. “Does your twin have a name?” I asked. “Not that I know of,” he replied. It was going to be a loooooooong night.

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    • AHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHH

      Do you know the name? Of the twin?

      Also, why is it important?

      I want to know! Please!

      POST! POST! POST!

      MORE! MORE! MORE!

      -SoKeefe4life

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    • This is so confusing it is almost comical.

      How is Foster not freaking out right now? DOes she even have a thought thather "Clingy ex" Might just be going insane? Lol, but seriously, this is great XD

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    • 152.26.177.33 wrote:
      AHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHH

      Do you know the name? Of the twin?

      Also, why is it important?

      I want to know! Please!

      POST! POST! POST!

      MORE! MORE! MORE!

      -SoKeefe4life

      XD thank u 

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    • This is great!

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    • thank u

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    • OMG MOOOOOOOOORRRRRREE

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    • thank u!!!!!!!!

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    • Sorry if I sounded rude by the way, keep it up this is amazing!

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    • XD it's fine, u didn't sound rude at all! i agree, but i just think, 'u know, at this point she should be ammune to surprises. just look at wat she's been through already!' that's the reason I didn't let her surprisedness show through

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    • To all out there


      To all out there, may you be stuck in quarantine, at home or in isolation, I would like to thank you. For following the rules and for being so brave in these difficult times. I just want you to know that someone's out there, sharing the same problem you are. And I know it's tough, but we have to persist until this is over. And for those in countries not in lockdown, it is thanks to the doctors that work day and night to stop the spread. So thank you, to all those who help contain this virus. Our days may be challenging, but we will survive. You're all so patient, waiting hand and foot on the sick, so one more time, thank you! *claps* To put this on your wall, type {{COVID}}

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    • Corona sucks. :(

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    • Why quarantine? THis is what we get when Shannon puts Keefe to sleep. Lol, I'm kidding.

      But really, quarantine is boring as heck XD

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    • ikr?!?! keefe is lucky that he gets to sleep through this

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    • XD but he has to wait a whole year before seeing Foster. *cries again*

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      • CRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII*
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    • .*starts crying hysterically*

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    • i think ima try to post every saturday 

      keyword: try

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    • speaking of which, since i'm procrastinating, im going to work on the next part :D

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    • Umm... so i havent even read the 6th book but i kinda want to do Tam and Lihn pov.  Cause like we dont know a lot about them.. Also cuz u a fab writer should. I. Do THIS!?!?! 

      Also i finsh school really early so i have a bunch of time to write...

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    • Also cuz Fitz got a twin bro, name him... (WAIT FOR IT)

      Alden after the dad (Smug look on my face cuz one its the grandpa and two I HAVE NO IDEA WUT CAME OVER ME BUT I WANTED TO NAME HIM DRAGONFRUIT!! LIKE WUT!!!

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    •  Elwin had given up and returned to his office.

           

      Lmao I just love how Elwin is like, "eh screw it. It's not like these teenagers will listen to me anyways" XD

      -TheSokeefeSinger

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    • Okay dragonfruit tastes amazing, so I know why you think that XD

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    • YEEEEE

      WHERE IS PART I FORGOT

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    • This fic is really great but I just have one question: HOW DID DELLA NOT KNOW THAT SHE WASN'T PREGNANT?!?!

      I think at least she should know that Fitz isn't her son.

      -SoKeefe4life

      (*~Lizzie~*)

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    • Nvm wut i should say is Della got brainwshed

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    • Oh my goodness this got weird xD but very well written!

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    • Roses Are Red

      Cactuses Are Prickly

      You Better Watch out

      Cause' That Got Weird Quickly

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    • xD xD xD

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    • XDxdXDxdXD!!!

      The way something can change when you change the case... (upper/lower)

      XD

      xd

      -SoKeefe4life

      (*~Lizzie~*)

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    • 74.72.159.219 wrote:
       Elwin had given up and returned to his office.

           

      Lmao I just love how Elwin is like, "eh screw it. It's not like these teenagers will listen to me anyways" XD

      -TheSokeefeSinger

      XD thanks

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    • 74.72.159.219 wrote:
       Elwin had given up and returned to his office.

           

      Lmao I just love how Elwin is like, "eh screw it. It's not like these teenagers will listen to me anyways" XD

      -TheSokeefeSinger

      xD yess

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    • 152.26.210.40 wrote:
      XDxdXDxdXD!!!

      The way something can change when you change the case... (upper/lower)

      XD

      xd

      -SoKeefe4life

      (*~Lizzie~*)

      Just look at the faces and imagine them in real life.



      Let me specify...

      XD: laughing

      xd: constipated

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    • ^That's awesome xd

      -#becauseKeefe

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    • i hate myself for abandoning this and coming back with such a short chapter, but in my defense, i had writers block, her it goes: 

      Chapter nine Sophie’s pov:

           I tried to go through Fitz’s memories to see what he saw, but they were so distorted, and the audio cut out so many times, nothing could really be distinguished. Why couldn’t all elves have a photographic memory?

           “Twin!” I shouted into his mind. I’d been trying to probe his twin’s name out of him all night. No luck.

           “Back to staring into each other’s eyes?” Keefe asked, sounding hurt. “Do you really want to know what’s going on?” I asked, hating that he didn’t trust me enough to probe someone's mind. “Yeah,” he answered, hope glinting in his beautiful eyes. “Then trust me,” I said, turning back to Fitz to try one last time.

           “I’m sorry,” he said and I heard him climb back into his cot. I felt guilty, so I decided to give up for the night. “He wants to tell you,” I told Keefe as I climbed into the cot that I’d become used to even more than my own bed. “Wants to tell me what, though?” he asked. “It’s his secret, not mine. And it’s not really a ‘secret’ it’s just…” I couldn’t actually go into depth without telling him. “Talk to him, and he’ll tell you everything,” was all I could say.

           “I’m sorry,” he said. I heard him roll over in his cot. “I’m sorry, too,” I said, crying a little. I don’t even know how this happened… I just know that it did. 

      Keefe’s pov.

           I got up from my cot and started to pace…. I was debating whether or not to wake Fitz up and ask him. I decided against it. Sophie would just get mad at me… wouldn't she? I didn’t know anymore.

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    • UGH i hate myself rnnnnnnnnnnnn i'm so sorry i abandoned this for so long... i wish i had at least done a better job on this chapter

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    • No, it's good!!! Don't worry about it.

      (*~Lizzie~*)

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    • i still feel bad

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    • Don't feel bad! (although I feel like a hypocrite saying that because I feel exactly the same way on mine, so...) But it's fine! :)

      Also that was great! Can't wait for the next one :)

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    • XD yeah, thanks

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    • ^^^^^Your chapter was great! Don't beat yourself up. 

      Also, ^^ your fanfic is really good! Even if the comments are um.... sometimes (always) strange.... though that may have to do with the fact that I comment on there....

      -#becauseKeefe

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    • ... Nobody talks anymore

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    • I would talk...

      but I always end up commenting once then losing rack of which fanfic is which is my sea of bookmarks (I seriously read too much of these)´

      -Keefe is my spirit animal 

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    • 74.12.43.125 wrote:
      I would talk...

      but I always end up commenting once then losing rack of which fanfic is which is my sea of bookmarks (I seriously read too much of these)´

      -Keefe is my spirit animal 

      Lol samezeez

      -bianex4evah

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