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    • Hullo I'm Vivian but u can call me Vivi. I male story's and share them with u guys. Here's my first chapter. Hope u like it ūüėä

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      Hullo I'm Vivian but u can call me Vivi. I male story's and share them with u guys. Here's my first chapter. Hope u like it ūüėä

      Sorry I mean I make storys

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    • First chapter

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    • (*stories)

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    • Yeah stories u can make ur own new keeper of the lost cities stories or how u think it should go

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    • In Mrs Lorals class it was break. A second recess,the three friends Nigini,Manora,and Clea were talking. "Clea stop staring at boys" Manora said "sorry" Clea said " I just like the looks of them" Clea said Nigini wasn't found of boys but she asked "who" "well" Clea began "Fitz,but he might be dating Sophie,Keefe,Dex,Tam,and Fredor" Nigini laughed " don't you think they have weird names" Manor pointed out

      "No not really" Clea said then stared at boys dreamily "good grief" Manora muttered putting one of her hands over Clea eyes "what's so in treating about them" Nigini asked " their eyes, like Fitz has beautiful blue eyes" Clea said Nigini was puzzled  Fitz clearly had Teel eyes "no there Teel" Nigini informed them Manora  rolled her eyes and walked away " come on " Clea said to Nigini following Manora "one sec" Nigini said.

      Nigini walked over to Fitz and said " hi Fitz can I ask you a question " Fitz laughed "OK give me your best shot" he said "OK why are your eyes teel" Nigini asked  Fitz looked equally parts alarmed and suprised "no" he finally choked out. Sophie came over "hi Fitz hi Nigini what's going on" Sophie said waving

      " well Nigini thinks I have Teel eyes" Fitz told her Sophie stared at his eyes"nope there blue" Sophie said at last "rrrrrrrrr not there not" Nigini said she felt her anger build up and tiny torches of fire came from her fingers Sophie and Fitz noticed and backed away "i....i.....I'm  sorry" Nigini said controlling the fire and running away from them " Nigini" Sophie called Sophie looked at Fitz and ran after Nigini.

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    • Chapter two¬†

      Nigini's point of veiw

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    • Niginis ran to the sand box the only place where fire is safe. Sophie cautiously inched toward her like a frightened animal. And sat down beside her " that was....................wow" Sophie said "yeah,wow as in wow that dangerus" Niginis muttered "no its pretty...cool" Sophie said " why did you hesatate" Nigini asked

      "I have secrets too" Sophie said with a comforting smile " can you do anything else?" Sophie asked "i........i.....uh.....i" Nigini stammered "it's OK you can tell me, your going to be ok" Sophie said taking Niginis hands "yes" Nigini admitted Sophie smiled "can you show me?" Sophie asked Nigini smiled for the first time in a while. Well a happy and real smile "yeah hang on" Nigini said with a meschivious smile.

      Sophie held on tight "ready" Nigini asked "you have no idea" Sophie said laughing. Nigini called to the wind  it picked her and Sophie up Sophie squealed scared and delighted.

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    • 75.167.73.173 wrote:
      Chapter two 

      Nigini's point of veiw

      Part one

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    • Chapter two¬†

      Niginis point of view 

      Part two

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    • " omg Nigini you can control the wind" Sophie said "yeah I call my self a guster" Nigini told Sophie. Sophie stared at Nigini. To break the tension Nigini said "want to see something cool" "yes give me your best shot" Sophie said " OK you asked for it" Nigini said.

      Nigini summoned her fire put it on her shoulder bones not burning her skin. And shaped the fire to look like wings. Sophie sucked in a breath and said under her breath "The wings of fire".  "Huh" Nigini said as a voice called "SOPHIE!" then another called "FOSTER!". Sophie looked at Nigini "I got to go down". Sophie said Nigini raised an eyebrow "who said they couldn't join the party" Nigini said.

      She used her power to lift them up. Nigini and Sophie herd one voice scream another squeal like a little girl and the last yell "TRIX!". Then Tam,Keefeand Fitz came up in front of them. But before he saw Nigini face he had assumed that it was Trix a guster for the Neverseen. And he had  thrown a goblin star at her Nigini rolled her eyes. She used the wind to place it back gently into Fitz's hand. "WOW" they all said at the same time. "Your a guster" Tam said

      "yeah so,  this is one of my tricks. But here's a better one" Nigini said she summoned her fire wings back. Their jaws dropped "WOW" They all said " oh don't look so impressed it's easy to do. Like its easy to control fire" Nigini explained " is this some kind April fools joke" Fitz asked looking at all of them "nope" Nigini said 

      "Hey uh guys were did you go" a voice called Nigini looked toward the clouds "Gale care to escort him up?" Nigini asked. In response Dex flew up by them. "Hi guys herd you talking but I couldn't find you- Wow" Dex said as he noticed Nigini wings. He shook his head to clear his mind and said " so Nigini can you help me with a April fools trick" Dex asked " sure" Nigini told him "Hey, you have to help us too" Keefe said "ok, I'm excited to find out what you have in store Keefe" Nigini said "can I go first " Dex asked

      Nigini said "sure, why not" as Keefe,Tam and Fitz said "NO ME". "Dex what's your thought and who's it for?" Nigini asked Nigini floted over to him took his wrist and brought him 15 inches away from the others " ok it's for Keefe" he said "and what should I do?" Nigini asked. Dex wisperwd it in her ear and a milishos grin spread over her face "Alright" Nigini said 

      And then Keefe started to scream.

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    • Chapter three

      (Sorry I left u at a cilf hanger)

      -Goldswan

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    • "MY HAIR" Keefe shrieked it had fire on it but wasn't burning. Tam started crying "this is so beautiful" he said. Everyone started laughing "FOSTER HELP ME" Keefe shrieked "LINH HELP" "Keefe were are you I can't help if I can't find you" LINH yelled "

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    • "UP HERE, HELP MY HAIR IS ON FIRE" Keefe shrieked/yelled. Nigini lifted Linh up. When Linh saw Keefe she strated to laugh. Keefe's face turned red and he looked like he might cry. Nigini put her hand on his shoulder "it's gone, aaannndddd I made it so it wouldn't burn your hair" Nigini said "thanks" said Nigini thought he looked familerer but she pushed that thought aside "Keefe" She said she didn't say anything till he looked up at her "tell you what I'll let you do two pranks" "really" he said his face lighting up "sure" Nigini said¬†

      "Who's next" Nigini asked "me" Tam said something about Tam made Nigini's cheeks burn "ok" Nigini said Tam leaned in close to wisper his request in her ear when suddenly.

      "Well look someone to replace fintain" a voice said the whole group turned to see three hooded figures in black cloaks "so the Sencen siblings have found each other " the middle one said  "GETHEN" Nigini said poison in her voice all of her friends said "you know him?" At the same time 

      " Unfortunately " Nigini hissed  then gethen  pulled out a dimand necklace. Nigini recognized it immediately Nigini's legs couldn't hold her any longer neither could her power. "I'm sorry Hearth" Nigini wispered then her power gave out 

      "NIGINI!" Tam shouted he grabbed her arm and somehow he helped her to the ground. The others followed. "What's wrong" Tam asked wiping her tears off "i...........i......Hearth" was all that came out as Nigini sobbed

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    • Chapter four

      Keefe POV

      (This might be short sorry)

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    • Omg Tam is being nice for once. "Tam are you ok" Keefe asked. Tam rolled his eyes struggling to hold Nigini up. "I don't know about the rest of you guys but I think we need that necklace and Nigini does too" Dex said looking Pityfuly at Nigini.¬†

      "Yeah" Keefe said  "uh this is bad her tears are fire" Tam said  " I'll help" Linh said to Tam "go help them fight" "please" Nigini said grabin Tams arm "please get the necklace back" "i will" "thank you"  Keefe had never seen Tam so nice.

      Biana came around the corner and helped fight. Keefe rook a throwing star out of his pocket and threw it. It hit Gethen in the arm the necklace flew out of his hand. Tam grabbed it and ran too Nigini. 

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    • OK so sorry I didn't describe Nigini she looks. She has blonde hair like Keefe and seagreen eyes and peach skin like lady gilsea.

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    • Chapter five¬†

      Nigini pov 

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    • Tam came running over to her. He handed her the necklace "thanks" Nigini said giving him a hug. Tam turned red. "Your welcome" he said she clutched the necklace to her heart. Then two munites later. Sophie,Keefe,Dex,Tam,Biana and Fitz came over to her. "OK so two things to resolve one: they said Sencen SIBLINGS! Two: who Hearth?" Sophie said

      "yeah I thought you looked familiar " Nigini mumbled to Keefe "really" Nigini looked up and smiled at the thought of having family "yeah" Nigini said " can I seach your memory?" Sophie asked. Nigini was scared to thinkof Sophie discovering Hearth " only for memory's not........." "Hearth" Tam finished for her Nigini nodded. "Also we have something to tell you" Sophie said "we are e-" "elves" Nigini interrupted all their jaws dropped

      "H-h-how" Keefe asked "I don't know, somethings just come to me" Nigini said shrugging. Then Sophie came over "ready?" Sophie asked "yeah but NO Hearth" Nigini said sturdyly " you all can watch" Nigini said to Keefe,Tam,Linh,Biana,Dex and Fitz. 

      Then they went into Nigini memorys

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    • This looks good! Keep up the good work!¬† I'm also willing to help you with grammar/mechanics if you want! just message me on your wall if you're interested!

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    • Thanks and maybe u could see if u could recommend this too others¬†

      Thanks ripple  

      I'll let u know if I need help 

      -Goldswan

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    • Chapter five

      Nigini pov

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    • Also do u have a favorite part ripple¬†

      -Goldswan

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    • In Niginis mind she saw nothing. Then Sophie said "Sencen" then two memory's¬† came out of the darkness. One had a picture of Keefe and Nigini the other was Lady Gisela and Nigini. Niginis mental self touched the one with her and Keefe. Then they saw Keefe and Nigini and Keefe in a medoew and Nigini looked about four and Keefe was probably six. "Nigini"six year old Keefe said he came over to her he had a flower crown made out of Lilus and dapadils

      He put it on her head the flowers looking beautiful with her light blonde hair. Nigini smiled "you be the best family person ever Keefie" Nigini said she got off the rock she was sitting on and gave Keefe a hug "I will always protect you" Keefe said still hugging her " I'll always be there for you Keefie" Nigini said 

      Then the memore faded 

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    • Memory

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    • Then they were back in the present "well save the other memory for later" Nigini decided she looked at Keefe. It looked like he was......crying. Nigini ran over to Keefe and hugged him and said quietly "those better be happy tears......Keefie" Keefe hugged her tighter " they are" he said she let go and looked at Keefe she wiped one of his tears.

      "I'll always be there for you" Nigini said Keefe smiled a happy sad smile "I'll always protect you" Keefe said  suddenly arms rapped around Nigini "well all be here for you too" Linh said  Nigini looked at Dex,Tam,Biana,Fitz and Sophie. They all nodded Nigini grabbed Keefe's hand and looked at him then her friends " well always be there for you guys too" Nigini said 

      "We can look at the other memory if you guy want" Nigini said and turned to Keefe " when times get hard remember that memory" Nigini told him quietly "I will" he said taking her hand. "OK get ready let's see that memory" Sophie said

      They went into Nigini mind again Nigini's mental self reluctantly pushed on the other memory only because Keefe said "don't loose hope" then they went in. They were in Lord Casious's beach house  Lady Gisela was there and she was saying "Nigini time to discuss your Leguacy" "why?" Nigini asked "because it's time you learned it and learn to follow it" Lady Gisela said "what is I don't want a legacy?" Nigini asked. She was playing with Lady Gisela's anger. "You do!" Lady Gisela insisted "no I make my own life" Nigini argued "and tell me that legacy" Lady Gisela said bitterly

      " OK it's were my and Keefe live in a beautiful house with unicorns and imps and we have a pretty medeow like the one we always play in and we are happy cause we have each other." Nigini said smiling her hair stood out when she smiled. "Ugh stupid child this is why I named you Nigini it Means almost perfect." Lady Gisela scolded her Nigini started to cry a little then Keefe burst in the room

      He ran to Nigini and hugged her "LEAVE HER ALONE" he yelled at his mother "ugh you too you. Keefe come here" Lady Gisela told her son "NO" Keefe yelled  "that's IT." Lady Gisela said "you will have something precious taken away" "and what's that?!" Keefe snarled  "Nigini" Lady Gisela said as if it was the most simple problem in the wourld. "NO,PLEASE" Keefe begged terrified holding her tighter 

      "Mommy what do you mean?" Nigini asked holding on to Keefe tighter "you will be raised somewhere else somewhere you will never see each other"  "no,no,no mommy please,I need Keefie" Nigini begged "ugh no but I'll let you say goodbye" Lady Gisela said she left the room. And Nigini was crying in Keefe arms

      He was crying to but he said "take this and keep it" he handed her a ring it had a dapidil on it "thank you Keefie" Nigini said 

      Then the memory faded

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    • 75.167.73.173 wrote:
      Chapter five

      Nigini pov

      Chapter SIX

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    • Chapter seven

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    • They were back in the present Nigini leaned on Keefe so she wouldnt fall. All this shock was hitting her hard. He held her up but she still felt him shaking. "Do you still have the ring?" Keefe asked "yes" Nigini said after a minute. She took the ring out from her pocket and showed it to him "it always felt special but I couldn't remember why" Nigini said¬†

      Then a guy who had a lot of rinkels and dark black hair apeared he raised an eyebrow. "Mr Forkle we found a elf" Sophie told Mr Forkle "oh and who are you?" Mr Forkle asked "Nigini,Nigini Sencen" Nigini told him " your Mr Sencen's sister?" He said "yes" Nigini said. "Hm well ms Foster your parents are worried about you. The same for the rest of you" he said

      "Well she's also the wings of fire" Sophie said. Now Mr Forkle looked intreaged "oh is that so can you show me ms......Sencen?" Mr Forkle asked "sure" NiginI said  she summon her wings and flew in the air "can anther person have wings at the same time?" Mr Forkle asked Nigin nodded and gave Keefe wings he flew next to her

      Then they flew to the ground. "Well I am very glad to meet you I think you should practice with Marella" Mr Forkle said "ok"Nigin said "let's go see good old dad" Keefe grumbled as the others disappeared in a flash of light. Nigin grabbed Keefe arm "Keefe can I come with you please?!" Nigin asked "yeah of course" he said "is ......mother there" Nigin asked "no" Keefe said "oh good" Nigin said

      "Ready?"Keefe asked "you have no idea" Nigin told him  

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    • They arived at a beach house the one in the second memory. Lord Cassius was outside waiting for Keefe. When he saw Nigini his draw dropped he ran forward and hugged her. Keefe looked shocked so did Nigini "....dad....."¬† Nigini said "oh Nigini I missed you so much" he said crying and tucking her hair behind her ear "still so beautiful" he said in a daze "come on Nigini" her father¬† said taking her hand. She saw Keefe sad face and took his hand, he smiled gratefully at Nigini. They went in the house "Nigini choose any room you want" father said she decdied to call him father not dad or Lord Casious. There was three rooms she choose the third it was right by Keefe and was by far the most¬† pretty. "Thank you"¬† Nigini said to father "your welcome tomarrow we will make an arrangement for your¬†

      Qencenyara" father said "isn't that a fourtenth birthday party" Nigini asked"it is, but it's important for elves" father explained "oh" Nigini said "here its an early birthday present" father said handing her a light pink imparted " thank you" Nigini said "and Keefe will show you the ART closet so that you decorate your room" father said "thanks" Nigini said 

      "There currently is no bed in that room so you can sleep in another room, I don't care witch, love you" father said kissing her she smiled at him a parent that was enough as he said "your so beautiful" and walked away then she turned to Keefe, but he had gone into his room. She went to his door and kmocked on the door "go away dad" Keefe said from inside his room.

      "Keefie" Nigini said "oh Nigini" he said opening the door "hey father said I could sleep in any room because my beds not here yet. Can I sleep with you?" Nigini asked he hugged her and said "of course, witch room did you choose?" Keefe asked "the one next to yours" she said he smiled.

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    • "Nigini" father called Keefe smile disappeared "yes" Nigini called back "time for dinner, the Rewens invited us" father called "alright" Nigini called "Nigini try on one of the dresses I got you" father called "ok" Nigini called. She changed into a light pink dress that was silky and had ruffles she put on a white butterfly clip with Dimonds on the wings she curled her hair on the tips and put on the necklace Hearth had given her and the ring Keefe gave her. She also put sparkly light pink heels on and a black cape with gold and pink edges.

      When father came up to see how she looked he gasped "darling you look magnificent" Nigini blushed "thank you father" Nigini said " oh here its the Sercen crest" father said putting it on her cape. "WOW " a voice said behind her she turned around to see Fitz at the door with Keefe "hi Fitz Keefe it's time to have dinner with the Rewens" she told him "he's not comeing" father said "father, why not please" Nigini said turning around "i...i....fine" father said "thank you father" Nigini said hugging him.

      She turned back to Fitz and Keefe "Fitz are you comeing?" Nigini asked "I don't think I want to. The whole group was invited but things between Sophie and me are complactated. Oh and here for the goblin star accident" Fitz said giving her a bracelet. It was gold and it had tiny holes in a pattern "thank you" Nigini said hugging him. Fitz face turned red. "When you find a flower you like you sprinkle some of its pollen into it and the design will grow overnight" Fitz explained

      "thank you and please come I want all my friends to be there. And my brother" Nigini said smiling at both of them and taking Keefe and her fathers hand "see you there" Nigini said to Fitz. Father light leaped them away. Then we're in a place called Havenfield. "Hello" a blonde slender woman said "does Sophie know you?" The woman asked "oh I'm Nigini" Nigini said putting on the bracelet Fitz gave her. "Oh the gest of honor I'm Edaline" she said"I'm Sophie's mom by the way your a knockout" Edaline said winking.

      "Sophie Nigini and Keefe are here" Edaline called then a man with blonde hair and blue eyes came toward Edaline. His eyes immediately fell on Keefe "I'm watching you" he said to Keefe. Nigini giggled and the man noticed her. "Hello you must be Nigini I'm Grady. You look marvelous" Grady said "thank you" Nigini said as Sophie came outside.

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    • Chapter eight

      Nigini POV

      (I might make the whole story Nigini's POV)

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    • Sophie gasped "Nigini your a knockout"¬† "it is really that good" Nigini asked "of course it is its you were talking about" Keefe said kissing her lightly. Sophie laughed "if I didn't know you guys I'd think you were dateing" Sophie said "that spots already taken" Keefe said looking at Sophie and he winked at her it made her turn red. Nigini saw Tam she quickly ran over to him "hi Tam"she said his cheeks flamed." Hi Nigini and you look...........wow" Tam said.

      "How do you silence him show me your secrets" Linh said Nigini laughed " not right now, now you'll go save Sophie from my brother"  then she looked at Tam "can you get Keefe attention away from Sophie please" Nigini  asked. Tam smiled in response. Then she ran to Sophie "helps on the way" she wispered to Sophie as Tam shouted "Keefe,what's up with your hair did a dog chew it and spit it up"

      "It's lord hunkyhair to you" Keefe yelled back and ran over to Tam. "Thanks I owe you" Sophie said "it's what future sister-in-laws are for" Nigini said wiiggleing her eyebrows Sophie's checks flamed but they laughed. "Nigini, the Vackers want to meet you"  her father called "coming father" Nigini called back. Sophie looked shocked "you call him father,he's so mean to Keefe" Sophie said as they walked toward Lord Casious.

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    • "Im working on that. In fact I'm the reson Keefe came I convinced father.and he's been really nice to me" Nigini told her "hm well problably because your his lost daughter also your very pretty" Sophie told her. The stood over by Niginis father,waiting for the Vackers. Then Nigini saw them she walked over to them and "hi I'm Nigini" with a friendly wave.

      the beautiful woman said "hello I'm Della this is my husband Alden and you probably already know my children" Della said with a smile "you look beautiful" Alden added "thank you. You all look nice too!" Nigini told them "your wearing the bracelet I got you" he said "of course I did. Thank you for coming" Nigini told him. He blushed and gave her a thumbs up."wow Fitz said you looked pretty but that's an under statement" Biana said.

      "Thank you" Nigini said " is it OK if I call you ana? In the lost cities there were people named Briana and I might call you Briana by accident?" "Well usully I saw no but I say yes" Ana said "thank you" Nigini said then Grady yelled "everyone find a seat were just waiting for the Dizznes" Nigini sat down by Keefe witch earned her a smile from him. And Tam sat on the other side of her. Tam was blushing, Keefe noticed too "why are you by MY sister bangs boy" Keefe asked

      "It's a free table" Tam said "guys how about we eat ok" Nigini told them "the Dizznes are here" Grady anounced Dex couldn't keep his eyes of Nigini. Nigini wispered to Keefe " why is everyone staring at me?" Nigini asked " because your hot just like your brother" he wispered back. She playfuly punched him. After everyone ate, father announced "everyone my daughter is having a Qencenyara you are all invited as will be friends Nigini makes at FoxFire. We will send invationshions". Everyone claped.

      "Alright we must be going come on Nigini" he said holding out his hand. She took it and reached for Keefe's but he was over by Sophie "

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    • "One second" Nigini said to her father. Keefe had Sophie cornered and blushing. She came up from behind Keefe and taped him on the shoulder. Keefe spun around. Nigini raised an eyebrow and gestegered to him cornering Sophie. He shuged and Nigini said "Keefe it's time to go" "but I got a say by to Fo-" "you'll be fine now come on" Nigini said taking his hand. Nigini winked at Sophie and Sophie mouthed 'thank you'.

      When they got back father said "goodnight  my darling" and walked away. She went into her new room she changed into a light blue night gown. She knocked on Keefe door. "Nigini you can come in" Keefe called from in his room. She came in. "Do you have any extra blankets?" She asked "you can sleep with me" Keefe said moving over "thanks" Nigini said getting on his bed and braiding her hair. "Nigini can you braid my hair?" He asked.

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    • Nigini laughed. "Sure, it might be a tiny braid though" Nigini told hum. He shugged . She got 24 mini hair ties and gave Keefe 24 mini braids. "I'm so beautiful" Keefe said pretending to wipe tears. Nigini laughed. "Nigini" Keefe said. She looked at him. "I want to search your memorys" he said. Nigini nodded. "But don't you need a telepath?" Nigini asked "no I someone who's close to you looks you can let them in" Keefe said "do you trust me?"¬† Keefe asked "of course I do" she said leaning on him. He put his fingers on her temples.¬†

      They were in Nigini's mind. There mental selfs went to the memory chamber. "Heath" Keefe said into the darkness. "KEEFE WHAT ARE YOU DOING" Nigini shrieked. They were back in reallaity Nigini got off the bed. Turned and ran out of the room. "Nigini" Keefe said "please come back" Nigini quickly changed and ran out of the house. She ran onto the beach and sat down. And started to cry she didn't know why her feeling were so jumbled.

      Out of the corner of her eye she saw Linh playing with water, then hearing Nigini crying she looked at her. She took a light leaping crystal out of her pocket and leaped away. Then she summon her fire wings and raped her wings around herself. Then a couple munites later a hand rested on her shoulder.

      "GO AWAY KEEFE " she yelled. "Hello" said Gethens voice. "KEEFE HELP" Nigini screamed as Gethen  pulled out a leaping crystal and she was taken away.

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    • Chapter nine

      Keefe POV

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    • wow! this story is rrally amazing. your an amazing writer.

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    • Uuugggghhhh I feel like a bad brother. I tricked my sister in to letting me in her mind. I just wanted to who Hearth is. And it was her first day here. And I was....the only one she trusted. I finally had close family. And now I made her run off. Keef got off his bed and was heading toward the beach.¬† We was on the porch that overlooked the sea. He gased at it for a moment. the he herd Nigini scream "KEEFE HELP" Keefe turned in time to see a figure in a black cloak grab Nigini and light leap away. "NIGINI" Keefe screamed. Lord Cassius hearing all the racket came outside to see Keefe crying.

      "We're your sister ?" Lord Cassius asked sharply

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    • 104.34.2.248 wrote:
      wow! this story is rrally amazing. your an amazing writer.

      Thank you so much. If you have an suggestions I'm open. Also If you have a story you want to share you can put it on here. Also if you could recommend this to someone. That would be awesome. ūüėĄ

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    • Chapter nine¬†

      Part two

      Nigini point of veiw

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    • "Hello my darling" Lady Gisela said say Nigini woke up. "MOTHER!"Nigini said horified. "Yes my darling" Mother said.¬† Nigini she told herself be strong do it for Hearth and Keefe. "How did you find me" Nigini asked "a spy" Lady Gisela said "drink this youth" Nigini did as she was told. "W-w-wait this is a sedative" Nigini stammered getting sleepy. "Goodnight my darling" Lady Gisela said walking out of the room. She remembered that Keefe had said "if you trust someone your mind will let them in". I'll find you Keefe. She reached out her mind she felt nothing. I should try a telapath she thought.

      She reached out her mind 'SOPHIE' 'FITZ' SOPHIE' 'FITZ' 'SOPHIE' 'Silveny?' Sophie transmitted 'Sophie it's Nigini' 'Nigini!' Sophie transmitted 'how are you doing this your not a telapath?' 'Keefe taught me a trick, but I need help Neverseen has me' Nigini transmitted 'REALLY! wasn't Keefe with you?' 'I....i....he tried to see who Hearth was and I got mad and ran the beach, and Gethen grabbed me and tell this part to Keefe espeshaialy our mothers here' 'wow are you OK I'm losing connection'

      'She tricked me into taking a sedative' 'OK I'll tell Keefe' ' and Sophie please tell Keefe I love him' 'I will Sophie said 'and tell him I'm sorry I ran out on him' 'I will and can I check on you every night' 'OK thank y....y....y....you' she transmitted before she fell asleep.

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    • Chapter ten

      Keefe POV

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    • Keefe was crying in his room when Sophie hailed him. He anserwed it, and tryed tonmake it look like he wasnt crying. "Sup Foster" he said "KEEFE stop pretending your not sad your SISTER just talked to me!!!" "WHAT" Keefe said surgeing forward. Sophie told him what she said. "And Keefe She said she loves you and that she will wait for you" Sophie said "why didnt she try to reach me?" He asked "she tryed to" Sophie said

      Then Keefe started to cry. "Whats wrong?" "The teleaphly only works with people she........t...trusts" he chocked out. "WE NEED TO GET HER BACK" Keefe shouted "we will" Sophie said "how about we have a blackswan meeting, tomarrow, dont worry well get her back" Keefe was to sad to speak so he nodded.

      • in the morning* Keefe walked to the meeting. Sophie sat by him and held his hand to conmfert him.Linh looked like she didnt sleep and like she had been crying. "Linh are you ok?" Sophie asked "its my fault" Linh said "what do you mean?" Sophie asked "i saw her crying i was going to get T- someone to comfert her i should of done it"
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      Part two

      Nigini POV

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    • Nigini woke up. "Uhh what happened" Nigini said putting her hand on her head. Wait! Her hands weren't tied up anymore. And she was in a beautiful dress light pink, with ruffles and diamonds. Her hair was in a perfect braid with light yellow and light red diamonds in the braid she was wearing Hearths necklace, Fitz bracelet and Keefe ring. And cream colored heels. "What?" Nigini said.

      "Hello princess, joined the club eh" Nigini turned around to find a handsome boy. His eyes were ocean blue and had a sparkle to them, he had black hair and tan skin. And had a astralian accent .And was wearing the most sparkly suit she had ever seen. Nigini giggled "what's so funny princess?" He asked with a grin. "Ive never seen a suit so sparkly" she told him. "Really?" He asked "yeah" she said "hhmmm what's your name princess? He asked "Nigini" Nigini told him "what does it mean? All important people's kids have a meaning" he said "it means goddess of love and beauty. What's your name?" She asked 

      "Wave" he told her. She smiled "I like that. Also it matches your eyes" Nigini told Wave. " what do you mean?" He asked " your eyes are blue like the ocean" she told him blushing a little. He smiled "thanks, hey, princess, what abilities do you have?" Wave asked. She smiled then she flicked her hand and fire rose from her hand and it was in the shape of two people dancing. Then she twisted her other hand and the wind picked up the water, the wind twisting it this way and that.

      "Wow, nice job princess, watch this"  he said flicking his hand and somewater leaped out of the lake and made a flower crown out of Liles and dapidils the water put it on her head. Then she remembered the memory with her and Keefe. And she started to tear up, "wow,wow, princess it's OK I can take it off" wave said reaching for the crown with both hands.

      She gently but quickly put her hands on his and his checks flamed. " thank you, and listen it's not the flowers it's just me and my brother we.......how about I just show you" She said placing her fingers on his temples.

      In her mind she showed Wave the memory of her and Keefe. When they were back reality he said "your still pretty when your six" he said chuckling and wiping a tear off her face, she smiled. "So why are we so fancy" Nigini asked Wave. "On a mishion I'm supposed to be your escort" he told her " hey were did you get that jewelry?" Wave asked. " oh Keefe gave me the ring, Fitz gave me the bracelet and Hearth gave me the necklace" she told him. He smiled.

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    • "They your x-boyfriends?" Wave asked raising a eyebrow. Nigini laughed "no,no, Keefe is my brother and Fitz is my friend and Hearth is...........dead, he was my best friend" Nigini told Wave then her hands moved to her necklace. "Well I'm sorry princess, what does he look like.can you show me him?" Wave asked " yes, I haven't shown this to anyone though" she said " not even your brother!?" "Not yet". Then a bell rang.¬† "Time for the walking princess" Wave said "no" Nigini said she summounded her wings "wow" Wave said.

      "It doesn't burn cloths or skin. Well unless I want it to" Nigini said. Then she gave Wave wings "wow" he said. Then the Gethen came and said "walk" Nigini hissed at him. "Come on princess in won't be that bad" he told her. 

      She lowered them to the ground. "It's Gethen he killed Hearth" she told him. He nodded, she thought she should escape when they were there. "Where are we going?" She asked him. "Everglen moon ball" he said. 'Sophie' Nigini reached out to her telepathicly then she thought better of it and reached out to Keefe 'Keefe' 'Keefe' 'KEEFE' 'KEEFE' KEEFIE' she called out he didn't answer. They arrived "who hosts it this year?" Nigini asked Wave

      "Vackers" Wave said "oh and we have to put these on" he said handing her a mask. "Thanks, and Wave follow me ok" she said "ok" he said. Then they entered Nigini looked around. " ok what's the plan?" Wave asked. "Do you want to help?" She asked "yes" he said "OK so I know the Vackers children they'll help us escape.  So I'll dance until I find Biana or Fitz go wait by the bathrooms for me then we escape ok" she explained " got it " he said. Nigin started to dance with boy to boy who happily danced with her until she found her target. "You remind me of someone" Fitz said to her "your the most beautiful girl I've ever met" he told her.

      " Fitz it Nigini" she told him "proof?" Fitz asked. She showed him the bracelet. Then his cheeks flamed. "Neverseen have this sort of tracking divice and it's telling me to do things and I need to get out of here. Do you have a leaping crystal?" She asked. "No sorry ask my dad" he said "thank you" she told Fitz. Then walked to the restrooms "Wave I know where to get a leaping crystal" she told him when she spotted him.

      "R..run there controlling me he said falling to his knees "No your stronger fight it" she told him "I....I can't"  he said then she wispered in his ear "do it for me,please" then he stopped shuddering. "Thank you" he said hugging her. " come on" said gently holding his hand.she led him to Alden. "Alden I need a leaping crystal" "Nigini" he said "yes now watch" she said showing him her Neverseen memorys. "Here it will lead you to your home" he said pulling out a leaping crystal and giving it to her "thank you" she said.

      Then she held the crystal up to the light and she and Wave leaped away.

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    • Chapter eleven

      Nigini POV

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    • She threw off her mask and yelled "KEEFE" and she saw him open the door. He looked like he hadn't been sleeping and like he had been crying. When he saw her his face lit up and he screamed "NIGINI" happily and they ran toward each other then they meet in a hug. Keefe and Nigini started to cry. They held on to each other tightly "I'm so so sorry" Keefe wispered "it's ok" she said "Keefe I want you to meet my friend"¬† she said.

      She grabbed Keefe's hand and she led him to Wave. "Wave this is my brother Keefe. Keefe this is my best friend Wave" she said is was cute how Waves face lit up when she said best friend. "Hello Keefe I'm told your not her boyfriend" he said chuckling. "Bye princess," Wave said " were are you going?" She asked. "Don't worry I'll be fine" he said. But before he could walk away Nigini hugged him " thank you" Nigini said "and your welcome here any time" she told Wave. "Bye princess" he said pulling away from her.

      "Wave come back in a week. I'm inviting you to my qensenyara"  she said "will do princess" Wave said walking away. Then she and Keefe walked away back to the house.

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    • Chapter eleven

      Part two

      Keefe POV

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    • "Ok into my room" Keefe said softly but sternly. She sat on his bed "what?" Nigini said innecenttly. "Because im your big brother i will not let you have a crush on Wave!" Keefe said. Nigini gasped and her checks were tomato red.

      He sat down on his bed and she leaned closer to him so he would meet her eyes and she said in a playful voice "like someone has a crush on oh i dont know Sophie Foster" Keefes checks flared.

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    • "I used to but there's this new girl at school who's hot" Keefe said dreamily (that's who ever comets first if u want him¬†:p )

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    • Nigini rolled her eyes "Keefe let's get this over with" Nigini said taking Keefe's and and put it on her temples. They were in her mind "oh wow, thanks Nigs" Keefe said Nigini didn't answer "Keefe" she said quietly "were going to find lost memorys" she said "oh ok" Keefe said. Ugh Keefe you jerk Keefe thought this is what happens when you trick your baby sister "I'm NOT a baby" Nigini said "aaaahhhhh wait you read my mind" "yeah" she said then Nigini said "Keefie" and then one image poped up. Here we go Keefe thought before Nigini touched it and it played. Keefe and Nigini were at the beach Nigini looked five and he was probably six. "Keefie" "yeah" "look it's soooooo cute" "what is it?"

      Keefe asked "a merkitty" Nigini said. Then the memory faded 

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    • Chapter twelve

      Nigini POV

      Dedicated to MintChocolateRipple fluffy

      My most loyal  reader

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    • Later in the morning Keefe and Nigini were looking for stuff to decorate her room. "Keefe you don't have to help ya know" Nigini told him. He shugged and said "I want to"¬† Nigini stopped to think a moment "thank you" she said to him. He smile at her. "Any time Nigs" he said. Nigini laughed.

      Then the took all the stuff they gathered to her new Room. Then she asked Keefe "is there any magical way of putting wallpaper on?" "I don't think so" Keefe said "OK then we'll make it fun!" Nigini said. Then she summoned her wings and Keefe wings. Then they started to put the light pink wallpaper on. Keefe couldn't stop watching her."how do you fly so well?" Keefe asked "it just comes naturally to me" she told him.

      "UUUGGGGHHHH" he said "how about we finish decorating my room then I'll give you lessons" she said "ok" Keefe said

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    • Later they finished decorating her room. It had light pink wallpaper with wight flower on it and a queen bed with a gold campony with pink curtains and wight flowers growing on the pole near her bed. And a huge wardrobe with a mirror. "Let's go practice"¬† Nigini said "yyyaaayyyy" Keefe said. Then in the sky the practiced for a while then suddenly water stairs came out of the water. "Wow let's check it out" Nigini said. Keefe didn't argue they went down the water stairs. Nigini went first then it turned into a slide "WWOOWWW!!!" Nigini said¬†

      They reached the bottom to find a magnificent palace "wow" Nigini said stepping in the palace. "Hello princess" said a familiar Astralian accent Nigini turned around to see Wave! "Wave!" Nigini cried hugging him. "Is this your house?" Nigini asked "yup" he said.

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    • 'It's awsome" Nigini told him. "Thanks princess" he said "dance with me will ya" Nigini laughed¬† "of course I will" she said. Then¬† Nigini made a dancer out of fire. Then Wave made a dancer out of water and they danced together. The Nigini grabbed Waves hands and they started to dance. "So who's your parent the Neverseen wanted you pretty badly?" Wave asked.

      Nigini sucked in a breath "Lady Gisela" she said "oh wow" he said "who's yours?" Nigini asked. Wave looked away and wouldn't meet her eyes. And she realized why. He was crying so she hugged him tightly but gently to let him know she would always be there for him.  "I'm sorry I'm weak he said quietly.

      She let go and grabbed his hands and said "your not weak your the bravest person I've ever met" she said gently wiping his tears away. "Do you want to talk about it somewhere else' she asked he nodded. She took him to the beach. "Can I see Hearth now" he asked Nigini nodded. Then they went into Nigini memory.

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    • I found it.¬†

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    • Once they were in Nigini's memory chamber, Niginis said "Hearth" and a lot of memory's poped up.

      "Wow how long did you know him?" Wave asked Nigini counted the years on her fingers. "Ten years" she said. "What! How long were you with humans?" He asked. "Ten years" she said.

      "So you knew him from the beginning" he summed up "yep" she said.  "Let's get this over with" Nigini said pushing on a memory.

      Nigini was alone at the beach. "Hey who are you?" A boy asked "Nigini" she said shyly "hi I'm Hearth" he said.

      "Where are your parents?" Hearth asked "I don't know" Nigini told him. "You can come home with me" he suggested reaching out his hand. Nigini looked up at him and took his hand. "Thanks" Nigini said.

      Hearth had red hair and green eyes with tan skin. " but I can't " Nigini said sadly. "Why?" Hearth asked.

      She summoned her powers. "Wow that's so cool" he said, Nigini smiled. "How old are you?" Hearth asked. "Four" Nigini said "I'm five" he informed her.

      "Are you going to live on your own?" Hearth asked. "Yeah" Nigini said. "No your not" he said. "What do you mean?" Nigini asked.

      "Today I'll go home and gather stuff then we can live together, your the most pretty girl I've ever seen" he said. 

      "Really?!" Nigini asked "yeah you can come home with me and to marrow well leave" he said "ok" Nigini said. Then Hearth leaned in and kissed her. 

      And then they ran away holding hands.

      Then another memory played.

      It was Nigini'a birthday "Nigini" Hearth said running up to her. He got down on one knee.

      "Happy birthday Nigini" Hearth said giving her the necklace. She put it on and tackled him in a hug.

      "Thank you Hearth" Nigini said "it's what every boyfriend does" he said kissing her.

      Then the memory faded.

      Wave and Nigini were back in reality and Nigini was quietly crying. Wave pulled her close and she leaned on his shoulder.

      "I'm so sorry" Wave said quietly. Nigini didn't know what she felt so she just nodded.

      And then she said "but I have you now." It suprised her and Wave but neither one pulled away.

      Then Nigini must have fallen asleep because she woke up in her bed. "Huh" Nigini said rubbing her eyes. "Now your awake"  a angry sounding Keefe said.

      "Oh what did I do wrong?" Nigini asked. Looking at Keefe as he threw his hands in the air "huh I don't know maybe because you fell asleep leaning on WAVE!" He said getting angry.

      "Ugh now your acting like Grady talking about you with Sophie." Nigini compalined. "Wait they talk about mr?" Keefe said with a miscivious smile.

      "Ugh just let me go to sleep" Nigini said laying down and closing her eyes. "You literly just woke up" Keefe grumbled.

      "I'm asleep I can't hear you" Nigini said then she actually fell asleep.

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    • Umbrellas&Rainboots13 wrote:
      I found it. 

      Yay!

      If u have any suggestions comets or idea tell me also

      Do u have a favorite character or part tell me!!ūüėä

      Also it would be awesome if u could recommend this to someone 

      Thanks

      -GoldenMoonlark

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    • In the morning Nigini put on a light green shirt and skirt. Then Nigini put her hair in a braid and put on a flower clip. Then she went outside to plant a tree she took a wondering tree seed and planed to plant it where they met.

      At the beach. She put the seed in some sand the was wet enough. So she searched everywhere for one of Hearths hairs. Then her necklace bumped against something.

      It was a note and it said 'I'll love you forever' then Nigini realized it came from her necklace "it's a locket" Nigini gasped. 

      She opened it to find one of his hairs in it. "Yes!" Nigini said. She rapped the hair around the seed and planted it. Then suddenly water splashed on the sapling.

      Nigini said "Wave!!" Then turned around to find someone with a black cloak and a wight eye simbil. 

      Suddenly all of Nigini's anger cut loose and suddenly they were taped in a force field. Then Nigini thought Wave must know everyone's names from the Neverseen. Then she did something that had to get his attention. 

      She made the fire dancer again and then a water came and danced with it.  Then Nigini saw Wave come out of the water. She ran to meet him. He must have seen the urgency on her face because he asked "what's wrong princess?" 

      "One of the Neverseen is here I captured them but you probably know every Neverseen person" Nigini said quickly leading him to the force field. "How,who, did you do that?"  He asked "I guess I don't know I just felt angry and I let it out" she said shrugging. 

      "Hello, son" said a fimmilar voice.

      Nigini gasped and backed away.

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    • Goldswan, this is much better formatting and much easier to read! It's also really good, as usual!

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    • Thanks so much!!!

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    • Chapter thirteen¬†

      Dedicated to .+* Starpetal *+.

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    • Nigini POV

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    • It was Gethen's voice! Nigini backed away from Wave and Gethen. "Wave" Nigini said quietly. Still backing away.

      She looked at him in time to see he was crying before he looked down. He wouldn't meet her eyes. " I'm sorry.........princess" Wave said. Looking up at her. The sparkle was still in his eye except it was a sad sparkle. "Do it, son, make me proud" Gethen said urging a Wave to.......she didn't know?

      "Take her bring her to the Neverseen" Gethen said. Then Nigini ran into the forest behind her house. She ran deep into the forest. Then she sat down by a tree. And started to cry, then a baby Alcorn came to her. It nuzzled her, it looked like it was dipped in moonlight. "Hello little one" Nigini said.

      It whined. "I'm ok" Nigini told her even though she wasnt. It seemed to sense that it nuzzled her again. "I think I'll call you Moon" Nigini told her. Stroking Moons muzzle. Then her imparter rang. She answered it.

      It was Keefe "where are you?" Keefe burst out. "In the forest" Nigini said raising an eyebrow. Then Moon looked at the imparter. "Hey you found Luna!" Keefe said. "Oh I called her Moon" Nigini said stroking Luna's muzzle.

      "Where's glitter butt?" Keefe asked "who's glitter butt?" Nigini asked "I'll be there in a second" Keefe said. Then the screen went blank. Then Keefe and Sophie came out of what looked like a worm hole.

      Nigini screamed and held on to Luna. "Sorry" Sophie said. Luna made a mejestic sound. "LUNA!" Sophie cried. "Where's Silveny?" Sophie asked Nigini shrugged. Sophie looked like she was concentrating,.

      Then three more alicorns landed, and Luna rushed toward them.

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    • Chapter thirteen¬†

      Part two

      Sophie POV

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    • Sophie was walking home, when she saw Fitz kissing Marella. She was insulted because that very day they broke up. She got home and brushed her teeth put on her pj's and went to sleep. The next morning when she got to school Fitz came up to her. "Hey uh Sophie do you want to get back together?" Fitz asked "NO! WHAT THE HECK! You expect me to be oh sure I forgive you for dumping me then kissing Marella! NO! people arent jewels you don't pick with you want and don't want" Sophie said outraged.

      "I only did it cause I wanted to feel better" Fitz said. Like he didn't care. "UGH YOUR SO SELFISH! You don't care how much you hurt people as long as your happy. SO NO! NEVER!" Sophie yelled. "Please" Fitz asked "go use a dictionary and look up the word NEVER!" Sophie spat. Then she walked away.

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    • Chapter fourteen

      Nigini POV

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    • Dedicated to BlueandBrown and Julesandherbooks

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    • "Silveny, this is Keefe's sister, Nigini" Sophie said. Silveny started to make noises. "She said that she thinks your the most pretty girl she's ever seen, wait, what? Sophie said realizing what Silveny had said.

      "She's asking if you want to get on her back and fly with her" Sophie told Nigini. "Silveny follow me" Nigini said.

      She summoned her wings and Nigini and Silveny took off flying. They circled around each other. Then Silveny starTed to soar down to land. Nigini was about to follow when she heard Waves voice. Then he wings gave out and she screamed as she started to fall.

      At the last minute she was able to summon her wings so she wouldn't crash. Then she hid behind a tree but peeked out to see him. He didn't look at her but she saw he raideated pain. 

      He had gotten on his knees and was holding the dagger to his heart. Like he was going to kill himself!

      She barely herd him say "a world were she hates me is not worth living" before he looked like he was going to stab his heart.

      At the last second she used the wind to knock it out of his hand. Then she shot a fireball at it so it melted.

      Then she not peeking hid behind the tree "Nigini?!" Wave said his voice full of wonder and hope. But she stayed silent.

      "Please, come out, please" Wave begged something in his voice made it unbearable not to show herself.

      So she came out from hiding. It looked like he no longer radiated pain, and the hope and disbelieve in eyes was good. 

      Then he came over to her, and he looked sad when she flinched. He got down at her feet and broke down crying. "I'm so so sorry..............princess" he said sobbing "its................. OK I.......forgive you" Nigini said reluctantly. 

      He got up. She back up against the tree. He put his hands on both side of the tree trapin her "I.....i...have something to tell you" Wave said slowly. "I...i...love you" he said quietly. Then he kissed her on the lips. Nigini's eyes were open with suprise.

      But then she closed them. Then he pulled away his cheeks flameing. Then Nigini's feeling took over and she said "I love you too" she took his hands and kissed him on back. On the lips. 

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    • ¬†

      https:/lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:704490

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    • Sorry for all this mushy stuff I had to do it!!

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    • Chapter fourteen¬†

      Part two

      Dedicated to Humanscanwinelves

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    • Tell she pulled away. "Sorry" Nigini told him quietly looking away embassesd. Wave said "no need" as someone cleared their throat. They turned to see......no it couldn't be......

      "Hearth?"Nigini said faintly. Then she did something anyone would do if their lost love came back from the dead. She fainted. 

      Hearth POV

      ( it's still the same chapter)

      Rrrr Hearth thought that guy thinks since he had died he could take his girlfriend. Hearth saw that guy corner his poor love and kiss her. On the lips! 

      He saw he eyes wide open in suprise so that ment she didn't love him. Did she? He turned away. So he didn't see her close her eyes and kiss Wave back. Then Nigini fainted. The other boy caught her.

      "WHO ARE YOU?! AND WHY ARE YOU TRYING TO MAKE OUT WITH MY GIRLFRIEND?!" Hearth shouted. "My name is Wave. And wernt you dead. You left her, you left her open!" Wave said. 

      Hearth came over to Wave and took Nigini from his arms gentle cradling her. He saw something shiny on her and he looked at it. It was the necklace he'd given to her. Then he saw a ring on her finger and a bracelet on her wrist. Hearth went pale.

      "Who gave her this ring?" Hearth asked. "Her brother Keefe" Wave said. "Oh what about the bracelet?" Hearth asked "Fitz" wave said "is he another brother?" Hearth asked. "No wanna-be-boyfriend" Wave said bitterness in his tone.

      Then a blonde haired boy with ice blue eyes came running up to tjem. Behind him was a blonde girl with brown eyes. "Why are you holding my sister?" The boy probably Keefe asked.

      "Nice to meet you Keefe my name is Hearth" 

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    • Ikr I'm out of ideas other then Wave and Hearth fighting over her but I want something No one has done before but I don't know what

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    • Chapter fithteen¬†

      Dedicated to Vice Pres. Of the Keefe Fan Club

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    • Nigini POV

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    • Hi Goldswan I just read your fanfic and i really like it. However here are a few this you should work on:

      -Start a new paragraph everytime someone else speaks.

      -Check spelling and add comma's more

      -Remember that Elves don't usually have more that one power because making someone too overpowered would mess up the plot (as much as I want someone to have two or three powers :)

      -Be a little more clear with your typing

      -Remember that Sophie's goal is to take down the Neverseen, so I'm not totally sure when this fanfic takes place or wether it takes place before or after they take down the Neverseen. 

      -Try to have the characters motives be a little more clear so that their actions aren't so sudden.

      -I not comepletely sure of how Sophie met Nigini or if she new her already.



      Again I love love love this fanfic and I'm excided to see where you go with this. I love the characters that you've made and your ideas for KOTLC are fun and exciting. I'll try to get others to read this.

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    • K thanks for the advice I'll try to work on that also Sophie was the first one Nigini showed her powers too.

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    • yay! I love it!

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    • It is sooo good ~ sokeefe fluff

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    • Nigini woke up in her bed with Keefe staring at her. "Keeeeefffffeee,why are you staring at me?" "Im hurt" "huh,what do mean"¬† "you told Wave who Hearth was before mmmeee! Your brother!" Keefe said with hurt look on his face.

      Nigini got out from under the covers and came over to him. She leaned against him and said "I'm sorry, it's hard being somewhere new,and you where acting so protective over me with boys.....and I didn't know what you would say. I was scared" she told him. "It's fine I guess I was a little hurt" he said

      "Well to be fair I herd that you have done the great gulon incident" Nigini said punching him playfuly        "hey,Nigini who are you going to chose" Keefe asked. "Uuuuuuhhhhhggggg" Nigini said rolling on her bed. Then she acadently rolled off the edge. She yelped in suprise. Keefe laughed and said "now I see why they like you so much" 

      'I'll make you a deal" Nigini said getting back on her bed. "I'm listening"  Keefe said. "OK you tell Sophie how you feel about her" Nigini said "and what's in it for me?" He asked " you can help me chose" she finished. "Ugh Sophie's so lucky" Nigini grumbled. 

      "Have you seen how clumsy I am" Sophie said coming in the room. "Hi Sophie, did Keefe invite you?" Nigini asked her.

      "No I came to check on you, and why did you say I'm lucky?" Sophie asked "boys, your oblivious,and I actually know that boys are fighting over me" Nigini grumbled getting up. She went to the door. 

      "What do you mean?" Sophie asked. "I'll leave you two alone" Nigini said going out the door. But before she closed the door she winked at Keefe.

      Nigini closed the door and she herd Sophie say "Keefe Sercen tell me what's going on" then she walked away.

      She walked into the forest. It didn't remind her of Wave like the ocean did. She was walking deeper into the forest.

      Then she saw something shiny. It was a flower. It was beatiful. It had white petals and seagreen middle where the pollen was stored.

      She took some pollen and put in her bracelet. Then on the bracelet three words popped up.

      Nigini gasped.

      The flower was called.

      The Nigini flower!

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    • Thank you all I love your comments and also your all welcome to advertise your fanfic!

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    • Chapter fithteen

      Dedacatied to Sokeefefluff

      Nigini POV

      "I named it after you when i discovered it" a voice behind Nigini. She turned around to see Hearth.

      She started to cry. And she tackled him in a hug. "I'm sorry" Nigini said "for what?" Hearth asked. "For fainting" Nigini said. Hearth laughed.

      "I'll always forgive you" Hearth said. "Oh thank you" Nigini said.

      Then she heard Keefe calling her. "Oh its time for my quenSentara" Nigini said.

      "Am I invited?" Hearth asked. "Of course!" Nigini said.

      She went into the house.

      And put a light pink and cream colored dress. And moonstone earing. Then she realized that someone had knocked at the doors. She opened them to find Biana and Fitz "hi guys your early" Nigini said.

      "Hey Biana can you help me with my hair?" Nigini asked, Biana looked delighted. "Of course" Biana said. "Come in " Nigini said.

      Then a few minutes later Biana was making her hair look fit for a princess. Witch made her think of Wave.

      "Are you ok?" Biana asked. "Not really" Nigini said. "Tell me" Biana insisted.

      And Nigini did. She told her everything that happened since she had been captured by the Neverseen.

      "Wow" Biana said. "Yeah" Nigini said. "Hey,do you want make up on?" Biana asked.

      "Sure" Nigini said.

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    • OK guys I need help desideing should Nigini be with Wave or Hearth. Ask any questions about the charters

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    • Then guests arrived Nigini gave Thme all fans. Nigini's fan was pink with swans all over it. Biana's had a picture of a black swan,Marella's had a phenix, Linh's had waves on it. And Marcua's had black and blue glittery stripes on it.

      And finally Sophie's had a picture of a moonlark on it. Then Keefe came down. He hugged Nigini. 

      "Aawww my little sisters growing up" Keefe said pretending to wipe tears. Nigini punched him playfuly.

      "Here" Keefe said. He handed her a painting. It had Nigini and Keefe on it. They were laughing, they looked happy.

      "Sorry it's bad" Keefe said. But Nigini hugged him. "It's perfect" she wispered. Then Nigini,Biana,Marella,Marcua, and Sophie went to her room. They were hanging up the painting, when.

      "Wow, look at you your beautiful" Someone said. Nigini turned around. "Hi Dex" Nigini said. "Uh I got you something" Dex said blushing. He gave her a ring. 

      "Wow, your engaged quickly" Biana joked. Everyone started to laugh. "No its a panic switch" Dex said"thanks" Nigini said. 



      Wave POV

      Same chapter

      Oh mother of water, yesterday was the best day of his life!!!!! He kept thinking of how she said. "I love you too" and then she kissed him.

      He was heading toward her house for her quensenyara. His brain kept repeating Nigini!Nigini!Nigini! In his head.

      He knocked at the door. Keefe answered. "Hi where's Nigini?" Keefe winked at him. "In her room" Keefe said.

      Wave nodded and whent up to Nigini room. He stopped at her door to listen. "Hey Nigini, remember that tree you have, I found a note by it, it's for you, read it" a girl said. 

      Then out loud Nigini's beautiful voice said "My dearest Nigini, the spell has worn off now I will disaper. The spell was when you opened the locket I gave you the spell will begin.

      Make sure that boy takes care of you.

      Hearth." Nigini said. "Who's that boy?" Everyone exept Nigini asked.  

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    • Wave waited another minute until he knocked on the door. "Come in" Nigini said Wave entered.¬†

      When Nigini saw him her face lt up. She tackled him in a hug. "Good to see you to princess" Wave said.

      "I'm so glad you came" Nigini said happily. "Yeah, me too" he said. "Nigini who's that" a girl asked.

      "This is Wave, Linh, I think you and him could be really good friends. He a hydrokenetic too" Nigini said,

      "Hello Linh,your....Marella and your Narcua?" Wave said. "Marcua" She corrected "and you must be Sophie fosrer" 

      "Close enough, but just call my Sophie" she said "so who's your guys, the people you'll be dancing with?" Wave asked "well Sophie's going with Keefe, Biana's going with Tam, Linh is going with Fitz. Nigini who are you going with?" Marella said "Wave" Nigini said.

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