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  • Sophie Foster has been a book nerd her whole 15 years of living. Her and her best friend Biana have been obsessed with the action packed book series "Galactiboy" since they were 5, when it first came out. They have all the books and all the movie adaptions. So when they get a chance to go on a once in a lifetime trip to meet the stars of the movie, you best believe they are taking it. They're two of 5 people who get to be flown out to L.A, meet them, and go on the U.S tour with the cast. But then, Sophie meets Keefe Sencen, the star of the movie. She falls, but not every story gets a happy ending. She knows this. Or do they?

                                                                  SOPHIE'S POV

    "Hurry up!" Biana yells in my ear. I ignore her and instead concentrate on the question in front of me. 

    How did Ace get Princess Marki back from Aura?

    A.) Tricked Aura into thinking he surrendered

    B.) Tricked Aura into thinking he died

    C.) Sent Bolt to "switch sides" and get Marki out 

    D.) Underground tunnels

    "Well this is easy," I say matter of factly. "It's B. The huge death scene in book and movie four." I click the answer. 

    "Obviously," Biana half-screams. I let out a small laugh, clicking on the next button. Instead of the quiz a green screen pops up. "Your results will be posted in twenty four hours," Biana reads aloud. She squeals. "Oh we are totally going to win this thing." 

    "Don't get your hopes up too high. Millions of people all over the U.S did it too," I remind her. 

    "We did it as soon as it released though!" 

    "And there are others that probably did the same thing and finished faster than us." I can see a pout form on Biana's lips and brace for the whining. 

    "It would only be because those last questions you moved like a grandma," she mutters. She crosses her arms over her chest. 

    "You want it fast or accurate?" That shuts her up. I turn off the computer and sit back in my chair. 

    The creators of Galactiboy had released an idea. The first five people to finish the quiz they sent out with a perfect score would be flown out to L.A to meet the cast and go on tour with them around the U.S. Everything would be paid for, no expenses. It was the chance of a lifetime, and Biana and I are taking it. It's worth a shot. 

    "How am I supposed to sleep? My nerves are through the roof!" Biana starts pacing back and forth. 

    I get up and slam my hands on her shoulders. "Get a grip, woman!" Biana stares at me with wide eyes. "We're going to call Dex and Fitz, and we're going to go eat. We'll get the results soon." Slowly she nods. "Ok. Now go call them." I watch her pull her phone out and after a few moments put it to her ear. With a satisfied nod I walk around to grab our things. Jacket, phone, money. 

    "How's Dizznee Diner?" Biana suggests with a smirk. "Come on, you know the foods good! We're going. You better be there when we arrive or I'll hunt you byeeeeeee!" Biana says the last part very quickly and hangs up. I stare at her with a raised eyebrow. "What? The food is good." 

    "You just want to mess with Dex," I tell her. 

    That same smug smile stays on her face as she replies, "A little." I let out a laugh and start down the stairs. 

    "Where are you going?" A voice asks. Biana and I turn around to see my mother and father lounging on a couch. The overprotective duo, as I call them. 

    "Meeting up with the boys," I say slowly. 

    "I saw that... Keefe boy released a quiz that gives you the opportunity to go on tour with them," Mom chirps. 

    "Already did it!" Biana replies for the both of us. "We are so gonna win too." 

    Mom laughs. "I'm sure." 

    "There is parental supervision right? Hypothetically if you do win," Dad asks. 

    "Yes, dear father. Trust me, they would never let poor Keefe Sencen alone with 5 teenage girls. It'd be torture for him," I say. Dad stares at me for a moment, then looks away. Dad has this thing about guys, and me. First it was Dex when they first took me in. Technically, no one was related, so they totally thought Dex and I had a thing. Which is totally gross considering me and him were going to be cousins. (Cue Sweet Home Alabama)

    Then it was Fitz. I'll admit, I had a huge crush on him three years ago when we first met. I was 12 and he was 15. It lasted about two years, and when he never returned the feelings, I guess my feelings were just like "aight imma head out" because those eyes no longer turn me into complete mush. (Even if they are totally gorgeous and I still wish I had the same eye color)

    "Well we're gonna go before Biana explodes. She needs a distraction. Love you guys!" I blow them a kiss and drag a still squealing Biana out of the house. Next stop, Dizznee Diner. 

    ....

    When Dex was nine, his parents opened a diner in this small town of Oakland. It started slow, with only about three customers a day. It was a hole in the wall building that looked like a crime scene. But once they fixed it up, people started arriving. Then, they tried the food and it was over for the town. 

    It was addictive. Each meal tasted like heaven. And the deserts were the best. They were weird. Some would turn your voice high, others make you see the brightest colors. Don't ask me if they were legal. The less we know, the better. 

    So when Biana and I arrive, the place is packed with people. I notice Alina, and Mayor Bronte.

    Biana and I push through the mob, trying to reach the front counter. When we do, Dex and Fitz are already sitting there. 

    "About time you guys showed up!" Fitz exclaims with a grin. 

    "Your sister here was having a breakdown every five minutes," I say with an eye roll. I climb onto one of the high stools by Dex and wait for Uncle Kesler or Aunt Juline to come by. Maybe even one of the triplets. Being part of the weird family meant you got free food, at a much better pace. Sorry not sorry to all of those still waiting for their food. 

    "Is it almost night time? Oh, I'm not gonna be able to sleep tonight." Biana yanks at her perfect, dark brown hair and I slap her hand away. "Ow!" 

    "Stop! Just chill. Don't think about it. We probably didn't win anyway." I try not to sound sad or anxious, because I don't want Biana to know. Secretly, I'm dying inside. I couldn't wait to see the results. But, if I remain calm, it's a better chance for Biana to remain calm. And trust me when I say when Biana fangirls, it's like there's an earthquake. 

    "You're right. If we think on the negative side, it'll be that much better when we win." She plops down on a seat next to her brother and pouts dramatically. Then she lets out a sigh. Dex shakes his head, and I bite back a laugh. 

    "Ayy! My favorite people!" I look up to see not Uncle Kesler, Aunt Juline, or any of the Dizznee family, but Wylie. He's a family friend. His parents, Tiergan and Prentice, are old family friends of the Vackers, which meant we were quick to meet them when we moved here. Since he had a job, we rarely got to hang out, but when we did it was like we were family, not just friends. I smile up at him. 

    "What's up, Wylie?" He gives me a high five, the everlasting smile still on his face. 

    "What can I get for you?" I open my mouth to answer before he yells, "Wait! Let me guess." He taps his head, pretending to think. "Scrambled eggs, side of toast, bacon, not too crispy but not undercooked, and sausage that you aren't going to eat but are going to get anyway because you feel like it's rude to say you don't like it." 

    I roll my eyes, but a smile tugs at my lips. "Show-off." He laughs and takes everyone else's order. About ten minutes later everyone's food shows up, along with the crazy desert we got: A huge chocolate lava cake that the "lava" actually erupts out. 

    We stand back and count down. 

    "Three, two, one!" Chocolate syrup bursts out of the top of the cake. We all start laughing, then dig in. As usual, Dex steals the biggest slice, Biana the smallest, and Fitz and I get the same size. Then Dex becomes so full he can't eat anymore and gives it to Biana who says "I'm on a diet." Then: "But I can't just let it go to waste." 

    Soon, Biana goes home with Fitz, and Dex and I go to my place. We hang out all day, then he decides to sleep over. Mom, Dad, Dex, and I all get together on the couch for a movie night. 

    My heart feels heavy. If Biana and I actually do win the tour- which is hard to believe -then I would be away from all of this. Yet, I still want that adventure. I bite my lip and concentrate on the t.v. We aren't going to win. The quiz was just for fun. Biana and I know nothing will actually happen. Right?

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    •                                                          Keefe's POV

      "Mr. Sencen!" A voice calls. I stare into the mirror and try not to groan. Splashing cold water on my face I try for a smile. Strained but looks real enough. "Mr. Sencen!"

      "I'm coming! Calm down, Gigantor!" I yell back. Opening the door I become face-to-face with my bodyguard, Sandor. Standing at 6'5 and all muscle, he's a pretty intimidating guy. His head is shaved leaving it shiny like a Christmas ornament and he always wears dark green. He's my best friend. He'll tell you that is in fact, not true, but he's just shy.

      "I asked you not to call me that, Mr. Sencen," he says.

      "I know. I just didn't listen." I have to get on my tip-toes to pat him on the shoulder, and then I walk by him. "Anyways, so what are we doing?"

      "You have an interview with Cedar Blue. Did you forget?"

      "No." Yes. I totally forgot. Why else would we be in Ohio though? To visit? No thank you.

      I see Sandor biting back a sigh. "Come then, Mr. Sencen. It's time to leave." He nudges me toward the hotel room door. I don't want to go if I'm being perfectly honest. You see, being a movie-star isn't all that it's cut out to be. Sure, you get money, food, fame, and loads of girls swooning over you. But, you also have to deal with cameras flashing, "friends" only wanting you for the fame, and loads of scandals and interviews.

      The cast was okay I guess. Maruca is nice but NEVER get on her bad side, Jensi doesn't really associate with anyone on set outside of filming, but Valin is just... let's just say I'm pretty sure the guy's secretly a serial killer. The only true friend I have on set is Linh Song. She plays Princess Marki, Ace's love interest. Of course this means all of our fans expect us to be together.

      Every so often we have to be caught going on "dates" or stealing a "kiss" from one another. None of it's true. It's all an act. Linh isn't a big fan of it. She hates lying, yet somehow I always convince her that it's ok.

      "Maybe it won't be lying," I would say. "We could always go hang later." I always say the last part with a wink which makes her laugh and her twin brother Tam glare daggers at me. She knows I'm joking. That's our friendship. Joking on each other constantly. I think that's what I like about it though. I don't have to worry about being Mr. Perfect around her, because she knows I'm not. We can be the crazy, weird, reckless teenagers we actually are around each other. That's all I've ever wanted. To be a teenager without any consequences.

      Soon I'm in a limo with a mob of fans screaming around us. Sandor growls as he gets in beside me, trying to block the cameras best he can. If I look straight I'm ignoring the fans, and that could turn into something much bigger. So, I turn and smile and wave and laugh and pose for a picture even though every part of my body aches as I do so. The driver takes off and the mob is left behind and I can breathe again.

      "Kids these days," Sandor says, a string of curse words quickly following. I don't say anything. Just keep my eyes on the seat in front of me until we arrive.

      Cedar Blue's set is relatively small compared to the other big shots I've been to. The less, the better though. Less audience in the crowd to put pressure on you at least. 

      Sandor guards me the entire time we walk in, new papparazi all around around. Cameras are shoved into my face, catching me off guard but eventually I just smile. 

      "Keefe! Keefe!" One person in particular calls out. "How do you feel about the upcoming tour?" 

      I laugh. It's a fake laugh. My shoulders don't move like my real ones do. No one seems to notice except Sandor, who stiffens and pushes me forward a little protectively. "You'll hear it all in my interview!" I chirp. 

      More cheering and calling my name until finally we get in the door. I practically collapse in a nearby chair, running my hand over my face. Everyone's freaking out about the tour. Results are supposed to be in tonight. We're announcing the winners live while I'm here. I guess that's cool, but last time we had a "tour", I was stuck in a van full of lunatic pre-teen girls who couldn't keep their hands to themselves. 

      "Are you alright, Mr. Sencen?" Sandor asks me, his voice more gentle than normal. 

      "Oh doing absolutely dandy, Gigantor! Who wouldn't?" I reply. He raises an eyebrow but I ignore him. "Come on, we have an interview to get to." 

      ...

      "So, tonight we will be asking the top questions of all your fans!" Cedar tells me. I'm sitting across from her on a small couch while she has the cool spinny chair I tried so desperately to sit in but apparently that was reserved for just her. 

      A little selfish if you ask me. 

      "First question." Cedar goes to read it off a card but laughs a little first. "Are you single?" 

      I raise my eyebrows with a smirk. "Well that is confidential information," I tell her. The crows errupts into girly cheers. I grin over at them. 

      Cedar laughs at the reaction and answer. "Alright question number two. How do you truly feel about Linh Song, you're co-star."

      I bite my lip. This is a hard question. One wrong move and everything's ruined. "I love working with her. She's a beautiful girl inside and out and I'm so glad to have the honor of being her friend on and off set." 

      "You're in love with her!" Someone screams from the crowd. I wink as an answer. More cheers and clapping. 

      Cedar stares at me. "So, are you admitting to having a crush on her?" 

      "I'm not admitting that I don't," I say, hoping to leave the conversation at that. I can only imagine Tam's threats when I get back to set. 

      "Final question that is leading to our closing," Cedar exclaims. "How do you feel about the upcoming tour?" 

      I pause. "Well, I think it's a great opportunity for fans to see us for who we truly are other than what we see on screen. Especially the villains. People tend to send them hate thinking they're the same way off screen but they really aren't." I shrug. "It's also a good chance for us to meet our fans face to face. Most of our meet and greets end up being maybe less than five minutes. I'm pretty anxious for it all, but isn't everyone anxious for good things?" I give myself an inner thumbs up. 

      "That's a wonderful answer," Cedar says. We discuss some other stuff like rumors and pictures but soon our time will be up and she asks, "Who's ready for the results?" 

      The crowd screams. I resist the urge to plug my ears. 

      "Alright. First one! Drumroll please!" The crowd stomps their feet until Cedar signals for them to quiet down. She reads something off a card. "Stina Heks!" 

      The crowd cheers a bit. 

      "Second!" More drumroll. Stops. She hands the card to me. I read the name off of the paper. 

      "Marella Redek!" More cheers. 

      "Third!" More drumroll. She reads the card. "Pascal Winigall!" 

      More cheers. I stifle a laugh at the last name. 

      "And finally! A double duo!" Cedar says happily. 

      She hands the card to me. The drumroll is louder and longer than the other ones. But that's probably because these are the last ones. 

      I read the two names off of the card. "Biana Vacker and Sophie Foster!" 

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    • i love this! such a great idea!

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    • I LOVE THIS BOY in fact I love ALL of this especially SANDOR I mean who does not love SANDOR?!

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    • wow you are so creative *sighs* i can NEVER write like you

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    • ^^I KNOW IT'S SO GOOD!!!

      ^Right?

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    • THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Alas, if only I could wrote like you

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    • I absolutley love this. WHEN WILL THE NEXT ONE BE POSTED????

      -#becauseKeefe

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    • XD i need more

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    • I have to write more lol

      Luckily I'm basically on LOCKDOWN right now so I'll have some time

      Maybe tonight if I'm lucky

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    • i can't wait! -gets ready to refresh page every 5 minutes-

      this is suchhhh a good idea i can't believe this oh my god -fangirls-

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    • Jaydenwithamic wrote:
      i can't wait! -gets ready to refresh page every 5 minutes-

      this is suchhhh a good idea i can't believe this oh my god -fangirls-

      lol same

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    • XD same

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    • xD i love how the title of this story is precisely how i feel right now

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    •                                                        Sophie's POV

      (this one is a little shorter but I was hyped to write it so)

      "Biana Vacker and Sophie Foster!" The words ring in my ears but I don't believe them. 

      Biana is screaming and jumping up and down. Mom and Dad are cheering. Fitz is picking me up and spinning me around in excitement. Wylie and Dex are high-fiving each other.

      And I'm just sitting here like an idiot, my mouth opening and closing like a fish out of water. 

      "Sophie! You won!" Mom says, shaking my shoulders. 

      I nod blankly. "Uh-huh," I mutter. 

      Dad waves his hand in front of my face. Biana snaps right beside my ear. I'm here for all of it, except I'm also not. 

      "I think she's in... shock?" Dex suggests. The rest of the diner is cheering for us as well but I'm in my own little world trying to crawl out of it. It doesn't work. 

      We won. 

      We really, really won. 

      Biana and I are going to be going on tour with THE Keefe Sencen. 

      And I can't believe any of it. 

      "I guess you should start packing your bags. You leave tomorrow for L.A," Wylie informs me. 

      I nod slowly once more. 

      "Sophie. Foster." Biana says forcefully. "Don't you understand? We are GOING ON TOUR WITH CELEBRITIES!" 

      "As am I," a snotty voice says. This snaps me out of my trance. I grit my teeth and turn around. Stina Heks in all of her frizziness. 

      "Yuck. I forgot your name was also there," Dex says, adding in a fake gag. 

      Stina sticks her tongue out at him. I stifle a laugh by putting my hand over my mouth. "I'm not sure how you won. I didn't know freaks could read." She stares at me with a bewildered expression. 

      "I oughta-" Dex starts, stalking towards the girl before Fitz gently puts a hand in front of him. 

      "Look, we might as well make a truce. We're gonna have to deal with each other for at least a month," I say. I hold out my hand for her to shake. 

      Stina Heks has made our lives miserable since I moved here. I was the talk of the town and she didn't like that. She's held a grudge against me and my friends ever since. Anything we do just somehow gets in her way, and she needs to make a point of that. I've always been somewhat nice to her. I don't usually bully people back, because then you're just like them. Stina makes that extra hard. 

      Stina wrinkles her little button nose while looking at my hand. "I'll make a truce on one condition." 

      I raise an eyebrow at the offer. 

      She steps closer to me until we're practically nose to nose. "Stay away from Keefe. You don't stand a chance." 

      I furrow my eyebrows. "I wasn't-"

      "I know what every girl is thinking. But don't even try it." She pauses. "You'll regret it." She shakes my hand and walks away, flipping her bird nest that she calls hair. 

      Biana scoffs. "The NERVE of that girl-"

      "It's fine," I say through a sigh. 

      Mom and Dad put a hand on my shoulder. 

      "Don't worry about it," Mom says, kissing the top of my head. "If she tries anything with you just... drop kick her." 

      "MOM!" I say through a laugh. 

      Mom grins. "What? I hate to say it but someone needs to teach her!" 

      Dad rolls his eyes playfully at Mom. I smile at both of them. 

      "I agree with your mom," Dex says with crossed arms. I shake my head. "But you should really start packing now. A month is a pretty long time." 

      Biana claps her hands together. "Oh em gee! This is gonna be great, Soph!" She grins excitedly. She reminds me of a tiny toddler excited about Christmas. "You're definitely taking some of my wardrobe though." 

      "What's wrong with mine?" 

      Biana arches a perfect eyebrow with a "really? you're going to ask that question?" look on her face. I frown. "Fine. I'll take some clothes." She giggles and hugs me tightly. 

      Here we go I guess. 

      ...

      "You have everything right?" Dad asks me that next day. Biana and I are at the airport ready to fly out to Hollywood. My nerves are SHOT right now. I'm surprised I'm even still standing. 

      "I have everything. Phone, charger, extra phone in case something happens to that one, money, clothes." I count everything off on my fingers. 

      Dad nods. He presses his lips together to form a straight line. That's how I know he's about to cry. I hug him as tight as I can. 

      "I'm gonna be fine, Dad," I whisper. "I promise." 

      "I know, kiddo. Doesn't stop me from worrying." He cry-laughs and it makes my heart hurt. Next is Mom, who's actually crying. Tears are just pouring down her face. She's desperately wiping them away with a flimsy tissue. 

      I give her a sad smile. "All this for me?" I joke. 

      That makes her laugh a bit. She wraps me up and suddenly all of the oxygen has left my body and I have to tap her shoulder so she'll let me go a little. She lets me go, pulling back to look at me. 

      "You're so grown up," she tells me. "I'm excited you get to do this." 

      "Me too." 

      "Sophie! Come on, we're boarding!" Biana's voice calls. I look behind me to see her waving me over. I turn back to Mom. 

      "I'll be back before you know it," I tell her. 

      She gives a small nod. More hugs and goodbyes like we'll never see each other again and I'm off. I've already said bye to the Vackers, and Dex and Wylie couldn't make it so I have to call them later. I bite my lip so I don't start crying myself. 

      Biana puts an arm around my shoulders. "Do NOT be all sappy and sad. We're gonna have a blast. Remember?" 

      I try for a smile. "We will. Definitely." She puts her head against mine, a thing we've done since we were little that says "I'm here" and beckons me to follow her on the plane. 

      I wait. 

      My life is gonna change. 

      With this one. 

      Final. 

      Step. 

      I step on. 

      And everything suddenly feels different. 

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    • I love this so much! I know you just posted this 15 minutes ago, but I wish there was 20 more chapters to read.

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    • I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!! AHHH I CANNOT STOP FANGIRLING. OH MY GOD THE SHOCK WAS CAPTURED PERFECTLY AND I. CANNOT. BREATHE. -panics-

      i would give up a chance to go to the elvin world for the rest of this story to come out!!

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    • this is great!

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      • mumbles crazily* I require more fanfic....

      -#becauseKeefe

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    • This is so good!!! I LOVE IT!

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    • PLEASE ADD MORE!!!!!!!!! When is the next chapter coming out? Today? Please say it's coming out today!!!!!!

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    • i love this fanfic so much!!!!!! also OMG SANDOR IS BEST FRIENDS WITH KEEFE I LOVE THIS

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    • Swearingparrot wrote:
      i love this fanfic so much!!!!!! also OMG SANDOR IS BEST FRIENDS WITH KEEFE I LOVE THIS

      IKR

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    • i have a proposition for you guys 

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    • me being delirious

      i need to find a guy named hunter who has a turtle 

      met him when i was a kid 

      if you know him i will PERSONALLY write something for you 

      not a good gift but thats all i got man lol

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    • you know what even if you don't 

      i need stuff to write so feel free to give me suggestions and i'll make a whole other thingie majig thing

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    • https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:697628

      here's some fanart i did based off this 

      i can't draw so forgive me 

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    • XD I can't draw either

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    • When is the next chapter being posted?

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    • yah, plz!!! when u gonna post more?

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    • PLEASE POST MORE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • i currently feel as if i am dying so ill try to post more sometime this week ! :)

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    • yay! im sorry that you feel like your dying. i feel that too sometimes..

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    • we're here for you! and we'll wait as long as it takes :D

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    • I love this. BTW team Foster-Keefe For live so Back of Stina.

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    • I am in LOVE with this!!!!!!

      Please whenever you can I'm begging you please update. This is THE BEST FANFICTION I HAVE EVER READ!!!! I a love this so much this style is amazing, the plot is AMAZING, the characters are SO  realistic, and I am SO EXCITED FOR THIS STORY!!!!!! Whenevers possible please please update this is amazing .



      -SweetHomeHavenfield ( my computer isn't letting me log in for some reason)

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    • This is amazing! Not to rush you or anything, but when do you think you'll post next (it's just so good)? Thanks!

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    • I am now obsessed with this. BEST FANFIC EVER! I need more! You are a really talented writer. Amazing plot!

      A M A Z I N G !

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    • This is SO good. Please post more!

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    • AH well hello everyone ok so 

      since i stay up way later then i'm supposed to 

      i'll try to post a chapter tonight lol

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    • AMAZING MORE PLEASE

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    • I have one word, PERFECTION. The only thing that would make it better is SOKEEFE!!!!!!!!!

      - Midnight Moonlark

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      I've had no motivation to do anything lately but I'll try to post some more soon

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    •                                                                 Keefe's POV

      People are about to arrive and I’m not sure I can physically handle it. My stomach’s all twisted up and my mouth has formed a smile so forced my teeth look like they might crack. 

      “Relax,” Linh says from behind me. “You’ve done this plenty of times.” 

      “Met them once. Last tour we had didn’t go too well remember?” I remind her. 

      Linh shudders at the memory. “Spin the bottle was the worst thing.” She shakes it all off, coming in front of me and setting her hands on my shoulders. “You got this. If anyone can do this it’s you. And if you can’t, fake it till you make it.” 

      I let out a small, pitiful laugh. “Yeah.” 

      “Alright the limo has arrived!” Sandor says from the front. My breath catches and the cast comes running up beside us. 

      Jensi gives me a thumbs up. Marcua just ties her hair up nonchalantly. Valin is smoothing his hair back and giving an evil smile that makes me want to crawl in a hole and never come out. 

      “Three. Two. O-” Before Sandor can finish his sentence a petite, blonde girl comes running through, screaming at the very top of her lungs. 

      “OH MY GOSH!” She shrieks. She runs up and puts her arms around my neck, squeezing me so tight the room becomes dark. I try not to shove her away. Gently, I put my arms around her with a nervous chuckle and pat her back. “IT’S REALLY YOU!” 

      “The one and only,” I tell her. She pulls away and looks up at me, to which I put on my most charming grin. 

      “You have NO idea how long I’ve been waiting to meet you! I have so many things to tell you and so many things I can’t wait to see and-” 

      “Pascal!” Another blonde calls. “Let the boy breathe!” 

      The girl caleld Pascal jumps away. “I’m sorry.” 

      I wave my hand dismissively. “It’s fine. I get worse reactions. It’s refreshing to see someone so excited anyway.” 

      She smiles. 

      The other blonde comes up, pushing Pascal back a bit. “I’m sorry about her. Pretty sure she’s had about fifty shots of sugar.” She holds out her hand. “Marella Redek. Big fan of yours.” 

      I bring her hand to my mouth and plant a kiss like I saw in those movies. “Wonderful to meet you.” 

      Marella raises her eyebrows. 

      “Oh ignore him,” Linh says with a laugh. “He’s too much of a flirt.” 

      I shrug in response. 

      “It’s so wonderful to have you all! We have so much to show you and so many activities to do. Today you’ll just be settling into your hotel rooms. And don’t worry, everything is paid for like it said on the ad. You can have refreshments or whatever you’d like really free of charge. It’s our pleasure.” Linh smiles at them. She’s so calm. I need to take notes. 

      Marella’s shaking everyone elses hands and Pascal is practically jumping up and down. 

      “Alright, my turn,” a voice says. I look up to see a girl with long, frizzy brown hair coming my way. The moment I look at her I get bad vibes. You can just tell. At least I can. The energy is radiating off of her. She’s one of those mean girls. I can see it in the way her nose is permanently upturned and a scowl is glued to her face. 

      She holds her hand out expectantly. “Stina Heks.” 

      I look at Linh who gives me a subtle nod forward, telling me “do it!” I supress a sigh and plant a kiss on her hand just as I did Marella. 

      “Pleasure.” 

      “I know,” Stina says. “So, I have plans that I would really like to discuss with you. You can show me around the hotel and of course we take a bunch of pictures and…” I zone her out at this point. 

      She’s one of THOSE fangirls. 

      This was going to be a lot of fun. 

      It has to be maybe 10 minutes before another girl interrupts. 

      “Alright Stina that’s enough from you,” she growls. She pushes Stina out of the way. Stina almost falls but Jensi reaches his arms out to catch her. Stina swats him away with a scoff and a glare. 

      “I’m Biana, and this is my friend Sophie. We’re totally mega-fans. Sophie can quote the books cover to cover. I struggle a little with that but, you can definitely count that I can do the movies. I watch them every night before bed.” 

      I study her. She seems genuine. Long, dark brown hair that flows down almost perfectly. Teal eyes that hold kindness. And her smile is there like it’s a little forced but from the tapping of her foot I can tell it’s just from nervousness. 

      I look to where she’s gesturing there’s another girl but it’s just air. Biana looks too and groans. 

      “Sophie? Get over here!” 

      “No!” A small voice says. 

      Biana stomps behind a wall and drags a girl out. 

      Everything in me stops. 

      She has blonde hair too, but it’s different. I don’t know why but it is. Her eyes are a brown and the way the light is reflecting on them shows the little golden flecks that shine in them. I can tell she’s scared. It’s like an overwhelming crash that falls over me. But I just sit there and stare at her even though I try not to. 

      Biana pushes her toward me. Sophie squeaks and comes to a stop almsot as our toes touch. 

      I grin at her. I’m at least a foot taller, and so I have to look down and she has to look up except she’s not looking up. She’s looking straight at my shirt. 

      Biana grabs Sophie’s chin and guides it up and we meet eyes. 

      And let me tell you, I think this is how it’s supposed to feel with Linh but it doesn’t. 

      Sophie just looks at me and I keep the grin on my face. 

      “Now tell him hello,” Biana urges. 

      “Hi,” Sophie whispers. 

      I step back a bit, mocking a bow and taking her hand, kissing it like the other girls. “Hello, m’lady,” I say in a strong British accent. I immediately cringe in my head but try not to show my embarassment. Keefe Sencen does NOT get embarassed. 

      When I look back up her face is as red as a tomato. I bite my lip so I don’t chuckle. 

      Biana’s eyes are darting back and forth between us. Her mouth is curving upwards. I don’t say anything. 

      “It’s cool to meet you,” Sophie finally says. 

      I nod. “You as well.” 

      “Alright time for the hotels!” Sandor interrupts, staring at me as if I’ve gone insane. And I probably have. 

      I stand out of the way so Sandor can take them to their rooms. Sophie walks by me and I wink in her direction. She hides behind her hair and walks. Biana runs up to her and starts slapping her arm, squealing something. 

      I smile to myself. 

      Linh comes up to me. “Oh no. You can’t.” 

      “Can’t what?” I ask her. 

      “You can’t get with a fan!” 

      “I’m not going to!”
      Linh raises an eyebrow. “Sure.” She walks away with that. I sigh. I look down at my feet and notice something blue on the ground. I bend down to pick it up. 

      A blue elephant keycharm. 

      I turn it over. The names “Ella” and “Sophie Foster” are written on it. 

      “Hey I think you forgot-” I look up to see they’re no longer there. 

      Great. 

      Now I have to bring it to her.

      (i totally made Keefe fall head over heels but yeah 

      this chapter was really rushes but here you guys go!)

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      -#becauseKeefe

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    •                                                           Sophie’s POV

      “THAT WAS INSANE!” Biana screams once we get into our hotel room. 

      My heart is still pounding in my chest. I just met Keefe Sencen. The real Keefe Sencen. He kissed my hand. He called me “m’lady”. 

      “Keefe freaking Sencen was totally INTO YOU!” 

      I look at Biana with a bewildered expression. “What?” I shriek. 

      She’s grinning ear to ear. “The way he was looking at you! It was so obvious!” 

      I shake my head with a shocked laugh. “You’re delusional.” 

      “Oh yeah sure. Don’t believe me. But when you two get together and it turns into a love story for them all, you can thank me for being the first to inform you. And I will be in your wedding speech. I can see it now!” She puts her hands in front of her as a microphone. “ ‘My best friend Biana Vacker told me that we would fall in love. But I didn’t believe her. Look where we are now though!’ “ 

      I go over to the bed and grab a pillow, chucking at her. She ducks with a cackle. 

      “He’s a celebrity. I’m just… me. There’s no way in ANY universe that we would be together,” I tell her. 

      “M-hm. Sure.” She crosses her arms and leans on the wall. She’s unconvinced. Biana does this with every boy I meet. There was Fitz, who she swore was meant for me. Then there was this kid named Phoenix who used to have this big crush on me and Biana practically got on her hands and knees and begged me to make a move. I did not. And now it’s Keefe Sencen. The one and only. 

      What. A. Loon. 

      A knock on the door interrupts me from my thoughts. Biana furrows her eyebrows. “Maybe the weird bodyguard?” She suggests. 

      I go over to the door, unlatching the lock and opening it. 

      And there he is. 

      I hear Biana squeal behind me. 

      Keefe looks up from the ground. He smiles. “Hey.” 

      “Uh… hi.” I say, my heart beating even faster. Oh god. I’m not good at talking to famous people. 

      He nods and brings his hand to the back of his neck. He brings his other hand up in the middle of us. “I think you dropped something.” 

      I look down at the bright blue elephant in his hand. My eyes widen and I snatch it up, giving it a kiss and pressing it against my heart. 

      “Oh my- I didn’t even know I lost you,” I say to the keycharm. 

      I look back over to see Keefe with a raised eyebrow. My face goes red. I can feel it. I push my hair in front of me, hoping he can’t see me. 

      “Sorry. It was a gift. A really important one.” I had gotten it when I was first adopted by my parents. I have a blue elephant stuffed animal from my biological family, but they gave me up. I became attatched the toy I had named Ella. When I got to Mom and Dad’s, they saw how I was with her. The next week they came home with this. 

      “That’s your home, right?” Mom asked me, pointing at Ella. I didn’t know what that meant at the time, but I nodded anyways, because I loved Ella. She held out the keycharm and smiled at me warmly, saying, “Well this is your new one.” 

      My heart warms at the memory and I whisper a small, “Thank you.” 

      “You’re very much welcome,” Keefe says to me. We stand there in awkward silence for a moment before Biana says, “You can come in if you’d like.” 

      I look at her with my mouth wide open in shock. She gives me a “What?” look. 

      Keefe smirks. “I would love to.” Biana pulls me aside and Keefe steps in. Oh. My. God. 

      Keefe Sencen is in my hotel room. 

      I gape. 

      He inspects everything. “Haven’t unpacked?” He asks, pointing at the suitcases on the bed. 

      “Yeah well, you kinda showed up,” I tell him. Biana elbows me and I realize how rude that sounded. “Wait. I didn’t mean it like-”

      He laughs. “I know what you meant.” He looks over at me, his ice blue eyes with that mischevious glint that made every girl’s heart stop. 

      Stupid heart. 

      “Well, I should probably get going really. It was a nice 30 second visit,” he jokes. He comes over and kisses each of our hands again, shooting me a wink. Biana squeaks once more and I want to punch her in the head. 

      “You two should come early tomorrow. I can give you a private tour that doesn’t consist of Sandor’s squeaky voice telling you everything you should and shouldn’t be doing,” he tells us. 

      “Oh, we couldn’t-” I start but Biana jumps in. 

      “We’d be honored!” She exclaims. I narrow my eyes at her but she just smiles at Keefe. 

      Keefe grins, giving us both a nod. “I’ll see you then I guess.” He looks straight at me, his grin growing bigger. “See you tomorrow Foster.” 

      He walks out of the room, leaving both Biana and I in complete shock. 

      “That did not just happen,” I whisper. 

      Biana jumps up and down with a clap. “It DID!” She hugs me tightly. “I’m telling you. He’s so into you!” 

      I stare at the empty doorway. 

      We were going to get a private tour from Keefe Sencen.

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    • K THANK YOU SO MUCH I LOVE THIS KFISJMELXJWPDKJW KEEEEEEEEEFE IS AMAZING!!!!! Also like...now I’m sad because I want this to happen with me and Tom Holland (we’re ignoring that age gap)




      But oh well.

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    • I have collapsed into a puddle of happiness (I know it sounds weird)

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    • GlitterButt&Greyfell wrote:
      I almost definitly will die if you dont post more soon. not to pressure you or anything, but......PLEASE POST MORE SOON!!!!!!!! 

      same! that chapter was ​​​​​​​amazing

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      I feel the same way!
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      I LOVE THIS! -#becauseKeefe

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    • PLEASE POST MORE!!!! I NEED SOME FOSTER-KEEFE ACTION!!!!

      -SoKeefe4life

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      -KEEFIE4EVER!

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    • 67.85.111.24 wrote:
      OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU SHOULD BECOME AN ATHORE OR SOMETHING!!!!!!!!!! AND PLEEEEEEASE POST MORE I'M DYING HERE THE ONLY THING THAT CAN SAVE ME IS YOUR STORY!

      -KEEFIE4EVER!

      XD what they said

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    • Please post soon!

      Your fanfic is the only thing keeping me alive (other than the fact that my parents will kill me if I don't do my distance learning work)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      I recommended it to my sister (who normally hates fanfic) and she loved it. LOVED!

      She didn't comment though but she's antisocial like that (at least online, not in person).

      -SoKeefe4life

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    • Got to give it to u! I mean this story is AMAZING!!! Please post more!

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    • yes I agree can you please post your next chapter soon!-Orgeprincess!

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    • But I thought wannabe author was the the who wrote this 

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    • yeah they did you thought I did it? I didn't and I wouldn't take credit.-Orgeprincess!

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    • Oh, sorry nevermind. Wouldn’t want to accuse u of anything. I thought u were talking to Ogre princess, but that was just u signing off. My bad!

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    • POST! POST! POST!

      MORE! MORE! MORE!

      .   *realizes you probably have a life*

      .   *realizes I'm probably the only one who lived and died on Fandom.com*

      -SoKeefe4life

      (*~Lizzie~*)

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    • Nah, ur not the only one. There’s me for example.

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      Guys......

      GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!!

      TAM IS LINH'S GRADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      -SoKeefe4life

      (*~Lizzie~*)

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    • Plz post I luv this

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    • Omg! That is true! Tam is Linh’s Grady!

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    • meeeeeeeeeeeeeep I am grinned so hard as I read this.

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    • It's been seven days since the last update... you haven't forgotten about this, have you?

      (*~Lizzie~*)

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    • 152.26.177.33 wrote:
      It's been seven days since the last update... you haven't forgotten about this, have you?

      (*~Lizzie~*)

      I think some people take longer to write chapters than others. Seven days isn't that long. 

      -#becauseKeefe

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    • I know, but she hasn't said anything about having writers-block, or "I'm working on it right now," or "It's coming soon," or "It's going to take a little longer than normal" in any of the days since her last post. Most fanfic authors will post something every few days and I was a little bit worried. What I put on her wall was a little bit more polite and in-depth, but I didn't have much time to focus on writing a longer comment here. I'm sorry if it seemed like I was trying to put her down or offend her, because I wasn't. This is actually just my favorite fanfic and I was just really eager to hear about the next chapter.

      Again, I'm sorry if I sounded rude or impatient. I was really just excited and I was checking to make sure. I've seen too many fanfic authors say that they forgot about their thread, or just abandon it altogether.

      (*~Lizzie~*)

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    • Ooh, this fanfiction is soooooo good, I neeeeeeddd moooooorrrreeeee!!!!

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    • YALL I KID YOU NOT I LOST THIS THING IM SCREAMINGD FHDKJSLFHK 



      ANYWAYS 

      a new chapter will- i can't say soon because i'm just as in the dark about when I'll write as you guys are, my brain hates me sometimes- be on here at some point. 

      this is my most successful fanfic and yall make me feel like some best selling author lol 

      thanks for all the positivity!

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    • Of course!! You go!!

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    • Of course!

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    • SoKeefe Rules! wrote:
      Masterpieces like this need time to be made :)

      agreed!

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    • I know this might be a little weird, but I am kinda worried. The author of this fan fiction hasn’t posted in almost 2 weeks. I really hope she’s ( I think it ‘s a she) okay.

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    • I Hope she/he is alright too!
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    • oh no! i hope he/she's ok

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    • 204.108.212.213 wrote: I know this might be a little weird, but I am kinda worried. The author of this fan fiction hasn’t posted in almost 2 weeks. I really hope she’s ( I think it ‘s a she) okay.

      Well, she said she forgot about this.

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      WannabeAuthor wrote: YALL I KID YOU NOT I LOST THIS THING IM SCREAMINGD FHDKJSLFHK 



      ANYWAYS 

      a new chapter will- i can't say soon because i'm just as in the dark about when I'll write as you guys are, my brain hates me sometimes- be on here at some point. 

      this is my most successful fanfic and yall make me feel like some best selling author lol 

      thanks for all the positivity!

      Here.

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    • I really hope she hasnt forgotten!
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    • Moonlark101 wrote:
      I really hope she hasnt forgotten!

      She said she'll post another chapter but it mite take long.-Orgeprincess.

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    • AH I've arrived

      Not with a new chapter though sorry that was

      Yeah ANYWAYS

      Tonight MIGHT be a new chapter I will not promise anything

      Thank you guys for being patient and sticking with me lol

      I'm terrible at consistency when it comes to posting and it's kind of a wild card for me

      I SWEAR I have not forgotten and won't forget anytime soon sjsbs

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    • YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW LONG I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (no hard feelings tho! that's just me being a drama queen XD)

      ~Team Sokeefe

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      -#becauseKeefe

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    •                                                             Keefe's POV

      My mom always told me the story of how she met my father. Now usually, I don’t listen to my parents, but this is one story I would always ask for. 

      Shut up. 

      My mom says she was walking down the hallway in her school, when she heard about a new boy. She didn’t think much of it. New people weren’t interesting to her. She ignored him for a long while until she bumped into him in the hallway. 

      And she always described it as a spark. A spark that felt like you haven’t been truly living until you met that one person. Nothing else mattered in that moment, except that spark, because that’s what you needed. That’s what you had spent your entire life searching for. 

      And as stupid and crazy and delusional as it sounds- trust me, I know -I’ve already felt it. 

      As soon as I saw those brown eyes. 

      ....

      I’m in my room wide awake. I can’t sleep because all I can think about is how mad I truly am. I had basically just asked a fan out. Luckily, Foster seems oblivious enough that she didn’t notice. And her friend was coming too, so it was fine. 

      Linh’s wrapped up in a blanket sitting on my bed. She watches me with tired eyes as I pace back and forth. 

      “What have I done?” I ask. 

      Linh doesn’t answer, just yawns. 

      I stare at her for a moment. “If this gets out, rumors will start. I…” I tear my hands through my hair with an exasperated “UGH”. 

      “Maybe you should just stop asking every girl you see out,” Tam spits. I jump because for a second I forgot he was here. I turn to face him and he’s glaring at me as always through those bangs of his. 

      “I don’t do that!” I exclaim defensively. Tam raises an eyebrow. “I don’t!” I turn to Linh. “Help me out here!” 

      She whistles a bit and I just sit there, gaping at her. “Well, maybe not hang out but you do hit on everyone.” 

      I feel extrememly offended. “It’s not my fault all the girls gawk at me! What am I supposed to do, ignore all the possibilities?” 

      “A fan isn’t a possibility,” Tam tells me. “Off limits. Your reputation could be ruined. I’m not even famous and I know this.” 

      I stick my tongue out at him and he rolls his eyes. 

      Lihn frowns. “Just, don’t try anything funny, Keefe. We can’t afford that.” 

      I stare at her. She looks so sincere and I know she’s right. I know it, and it hurts. Until this is all over I can’t make my own decisions. For a second I want to curse and break everything in my room and quit. But I don’t. 

      Not only would that ruin everything for me, it would ruin everything for the fans. 

      And most of them haven’t even done anything. 

      “It’s fine. I’ll just, give her a tour and then that will be the end of it,” I say matter of factly. I shrug like it’s nothing even though it’s a pretty huge something. 

      “It better be.” Tam starts toward the door. “Come on, Linh. We need to sleep.” 

      Linh yawns again, which makes me yawn. She comes over and hugs me. “Everything’s gonna be fine. Don’t stress about it so much. You’re only gonna make it worse if you keep thinking too hard.” 

      “Surprised he’s thinking at all,” Tam mutters. Linh gives her best glare. Bangs Boy sighs. 

      I hug her back, ignoring the very grumpy emo boy in the corner. “Thanks.” She pulls away and smiles. “See you tomorrow.” 

      “See you tomorrow.” She walks with her brother to their separate rooms and I’m left alone in mine. 

      That spark. 

      You never know you need it until you have it. And then you don’t realize how you lived without it. 

      I always thought it was some stupid lie my parents told to make me believe they were in love, because whatever they are in now it’s not that. 

      And right here, I vow for that not to happen. 

      I feel the spark. 

      And I’m sorry to everyone around me… I can’t live without it now.

      (this chapter is kinda short compared to the other's but I wanted to give you guys SOMETHING 

      it's more sappy because I'm in a very sappy mood so here we are)

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    • AWWWWW SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!

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    • YAYAYAY This makes me SO happy!

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    • Yay you finally posted!!!!!!!! AND IT'S AMAZING!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR WRITING!!!!!!!!!! Whoa, that was a lot of caps, and exclamation marks lol

      ~Team Sokeefe

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    • OMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSH! A NEW CHAPTER! 

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    • Awwww I've been waiting for this

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    • Thank you sooo much!

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    • Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!

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    • https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:969364#7


      that link leads to my fanfic, check it out!

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    • This is the best!!! -Orgeprincess!

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    • I have been waiting forever and is so glad you posted. THANK YOU.

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    • Sooooooo good!

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    • When will the next one post?

      -Mushroom

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    • AWWWWWW..... YOU POSTED! And it was a whole bunch of Sokeefe sappiness <3

      -#becauseKeefe

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    • Thank you for updating.

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    • Are you posting another chapter? -Orgeprincess!

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    • Thank you for posting! This is one of my favorite fanfics even though I haven't commented before and you are an AMAZING other by the way.

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    • Alright I know you guys really don't care that much lol

      I feel like people have given up on this cause I suck at posting

      But I'm gonna try and post another chapter today at some point

      Soooo

      Thats it akdbd

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    • No! We haven't given up! We all LOVE this fanfic!

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    • YAY I"VE BEEN WAITING WOOOOOO HOOOOOO

      HydrokineticGirl101 ([Ashley])

      sorry for the caps I'm just really excited

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    • I LOVE this fanfic and I wouldn't ever give up! -Orgeprincess! :)

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    • EEEEK please i am like: when's this gonna post?!

      no pressure

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    • YAYYYY

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    • Thank you I really enjoy this fanfic.

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    • We really haven’t given up. Don’t tell yourself that. How else r u going to become a real author? And don’t feel so guilty or anything. We all understand these are hard times, and that you have other things to do. Take your time. It’s okay.

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    • Her Cinnamonrollness wrote:
      https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:969364#7

      that link leads to my fanfic, check it out!

      ...I feel really weird right now. I'm trying to get rid of some of the fanfics I'm reading and I opened yours just because of your name lol 😂😜😁

      (*~Lizzie~*)

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    • well i lied



      i had a LOT going on last night and completely forgot to write this ahhhh 

      alright well

      maybe today 



      everyone pray to God (or don't if you're not religious oop-) that I have motivation today and if I do don't use it to deep clean and reorganize my room like I did the other day

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    • XD yes I shall zee pray

      HydrokineticGirl101 ([Ashley])

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    • I’m just surprised that you cleaned your room.

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    • I know her irl (and I totally have bragging rights) and I wasn’t trying to be mean btw.

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    • XD that's alright

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    • I-

      Alright honestly I am too

      BUT now it's all clean and I have new Harry Potter decal on my wall so 😗✌️

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    • lol cool

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    • Cool

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    • guys please just sign your users if you agree as me being clarisse in pjo I BEG i'm making a deal with my mother if I get enough signatures she'll consider PLEASE

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    • KSJDEILURHAUI THECHARMINGBOOKWORM (You know my real name)

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    • what is happining 

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    • OH DEAR LO-

      THANK YOU 

      IM POSTING IT ON FACEBOOK AND I HAVE IT ON MY INSTA I NEED THIS

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    • I agree

      SoKeefe Rules! (Emily)

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    • WannabeAuthor wrote: well i lied



      i had a LOT going on last night and completely forgot to write this ahhhh 

      alright well

      maybe today 



      everyone pray to God (or don't if you're not religious oop-) that I have motivation today and if I do don't use it to deep clean and reorganize my room like I did the other day

      I SHALL PRAY

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    • Moonlight song wrote:
      what is happining 

      i could possibly be in the upcoming percy jackson show but I need help convincing my mom so I need a bunch of signatures fdshjfahdjlk

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    • wait in the book?

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    • Disney is adapting it into a show!

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    • WannabeAuthor wrote:
      Moonlight song wrote:
      what is happining 
      i could possibly be in the upcoming percy jackson show but I need help convincing my mom so I need a bunch of signatures fdshjfahdjlk

      OMGGGGGGGG THATS SO COOL, NOW I REALLY NEED TO GO LOL

      (my names malia lol)

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    • TheCharmingBookworm wrote:
      Disney is adapting it into a show!

      really?!!!!!!

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    • yes rick confirmed it 

      i need this guys jfdaksegwiulfgeuai;

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    • ...............there are no options lol

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    • i didn't make it i don't know what to do bdjkflads

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      Yes, K/KY should be on the series! 0

       The poll was created at 18:41:46 on 2020-05-15, and so far 0 people voted.  



      alright please let this one work

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    •                                                         Sophie's POV

      (two hours, thirty thousand breaks, and a convo about a hamster named Pickles later here we are)

      It’s 8 in the morning and Biana has me all dressed up like some model. She comes at me with a curling iron and I practically fall out of my chair in desperation to get away. 

      “Sophie, come on. This is huge!” Biana says. 

      “No, it’s not. It’s a tour.” 

      “A private tour! When will you get it through that thick skull that maybe he wants to hang out with you?” She hits my head a bit. I let it fall back dramatically. 

      “I don’t want to get all dressed up,” I tell her. 

      Biana pouts. “You never want to get all dressed up.” She kicks at the ground a bit. 

      I groan. “Fine. Curl it. Lightly!” 

      She has this cheeky grin on her face as she brings the hot stick to my hair. I close my eyes and just wait for it to be over. 

      At the end she has me in a red blouse, some ripped jeans, and sandals. A little cardigan is on my shoulders even though it’s not cold. 

      “For fashion,” Biana explains when I raise an eyebrow. I roll my eyes. My makeup is done and I’m ready to get this over with. Biana comes out in an outfit that looks like she let Fitz pick it out. It’s a simple shirt and shorts with her one pair of sneakers. Her makeup isn’t done and her hair is just brushed. I gape at her. 

      “You look so… ordinary! Where’s the glitz and glammer?” I ask. 

      She scoffs. “I’m making it where all the attention is completely on you.” 

      I roll my eyes with an “Of course you are.” Under my breath. We walk out of the door. The whole way to set I’m completely nervous. I tug at an eyelash, earning a slap from Biana. 

      I had started the habit since before I can remember. I don’t know why. It just… helped. Like when people bounce their legs or shake their hands or pull at their hair. Mom and Dad hate it. So does the entire friend group. They think I have bald spots which honestly I probably do. I wait until she’s not looking and grab another one, yanking it out of my eyelid. 

      When we get there it’s 9 and we’re an hour early. Biana drags me in. 

      Immediately I catch sight of him. He’s standing there and it looks like he’s arguing with Linh song about something. Not one of those angry argues. More like, she’s trying to explain and he’s not listening. That happens a lot with Fitz and I. I watch for a moment, not wanting to interrupt. 

      Biana does it for me. 

      “Hello!” She chirps. Keefe and Linh look over. Linh gives a small smile and Keefe grins. I wave shyly. “We’re here for the early tour!” 

      Keefe waltzes over, a glimmer in his eyes. “Linh and I were just talking about you guys!” 

      “You were?” I whisper, my eyebrows furrowed. 

      “Nothing bad before you start making assumptions, Foster,” Keefe says quickly, his hands up in front of him in the “stop” gesture. I nod once. 

      “It’s very nice to meet you formally and without all the chaos,” Linh says. She holds out her hand for me to shake. I do. Her eyes seem so kind and it makes me want to smile too but I don’t. It’s more of a grimace. 

      “Let’s get started shall we?” Keefe says, offering his arm. I wait for Biana to take it because I sure as heck am not. But when she doesn’t I suppress a sigh and link mine in his. He raises an eyebrow. 

      Leaning in close to my ear but still looking straight he says, “You don’t have to you know.” 

      I nod. “I know.” 

      That makes him smile. 

      He shows us all around set. Him and Linh tell us funny cast moments, making Biana and I laugh so hard she snorts, which then makes us laugh harder. Linh’s brother Tam walks in at some point and Biana stops short, immediately working her perfect little charm on him. I roll my eyes with a smile. 

      At the end everyone else is coming in and we’re still alone on the other side, being able to see them come in through the big doors. 

      Keefe looks at me. “Did you enjoy the tour?” 

      “Very much so,” I tell him honestly. “Even if it was a little nervewracking.” 

      He chuckles at that. “Why was it nervewracking?” 

      “I mean, you’re this huge celebrity that every girl swoons over and I was basically living every girl’s dream.” 

      “Oh yeah?” He asks. His voice drops to a softer tone as he steps towards me a bit more. My heart immediately picks up. “Just because I’m curious I’ll ask, are you one of those girls?” 

      Am I? I mean, Keefe Sencen is amazing. He’s good looking, charming, witty, an amazing actor. But, I don’t have those romantic feelings for him that every other girl has. 

      This of course doesn’t stop my stomach from twisting up as I look up at him. “Nope.” 

      He nods. “I see.” He leans in closer to me and I can feel his breath on my cheek. I swallow hard. “Well then you won’t have a problem having a friendly little dinner with me tomorrow? I mean, those other girls would just be too nervous.” 

      I shake my head, determined to not be one of those girls. “Not at all.” 

      He smirks at me. Nope. I will not be one of them. We stay like that for a few seconds until he steps away with a nod and walks to the fans. I let out a sigh of relief. 

      Looking around I see no one’s even noticed. Linh’s already talking to the other girls and Biana’s too wrapped up in Tam. 

      Not that there was anything to notice because there definitely wasn’t. We were just talking. 

      I take a deep breath. 

      And then my eyes widen at the horrific realization. 

      I just made dinner plans with a celebrity.

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    • I a m so glad that you didn't give up on this.Thank you and keep up the excellent work.

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    • YAYYYYYYYYYYY I LOVE IT SO MUCH 

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    • This is amazing! You are an making author and you should never give up, because that chapter was so awesome!

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    • AAAAAHHHHH the cliffhangerrrrrrrrrr nooooooo i need more! you are such a great writer!!  i LOVE all of these chaptersssss! I will definetely be checking this constantly (: I CANNOT STRESS THIS ENOUGH FANTASTIC!!!!

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                                                            Sophie's POV

      (two hours, thirty thousand breaks, and a convo about a hamster named Pickles later here we are)

      It’s 8 in the morning and Biana has me all dressed up like some model. She comes at me with a curling iron and I practically fall out of my chair in desperation to get away. 

      “Sophie, come on. This is huge!” Biana says. 

      “No, it’s not. It’s a tour.” 

      “A private tour! When will you get it through that thick skull that maybe he wants to hang out with you?” She hits my head a bit. I let it fall back dramatically. 

      “I don’t want to get all dressed up,” I tell her. 

      Biana pouts. “You never want to get all dressed up.” She kicks at the ground a bit. 

      I groan. “Fine. Curl it. Lightly!” 

      She has this cheeky grin on her face as she brings the hot stick to my hair. I close my eyes and just wait for it to be over. 

      At the end she has me in a red blouse, some ripped jeans, and sandals. A little cardigan is on my shoulders even though it’s not cold. 

      “For fashion,” Biana explains when I raise an eyebrow. I roll my eyes. My makeup is done and I’m ready to get this over with. Biana comes out in an outfit that looks like she let Fitz pick it out. It’s a simple shirt and shorts with her one pair of sneakers. Her makeup isn’t done and her hair is just brushed. I gape at her. 

      “You look so… ordinary! Where’s the glitz and glammer?” I ask. 

      She scoffs. “I’m making it where all the attention is completely on you.” 

      I roll my eyes with an “Of course you are.” Under my breath. We walk out of the door. The whole way to set I’m completely nervous. I tug at an eyelash, earning a slap from Biana. 

      I had started the habit since before I can remember. I don’t know why. It just… helped. Like when people bounce their legs or shake their hands or pull at their hair. Mom and Dad hate it. So does the entire friend group. They think I have bald spots which honestly I probably do. I wait until she’s not looking and grab another one, yanking it out of my eyelid. 

      When we get there it’s 9 and we’re an hour early. Biana drags me in. 

      Immediately I catch sight of him. He’s standing there and it looks like he’s arguing with Linh song about something. Not one of those angry argues. More like, she’s trying to explain and he’s not listening. That happens a lot with Fitz and I. I watch for a moment, not wanting to interrupt. 

      Biana does it for me. 

      “Hello!” She chirps. Keefe and Linh look over. Linh gives a small smile and Keefe grins. I wave shyly. “We’re here for the early tour!” 

      Keefe waltzes over, a glimmer in his eyes. “Linh and I were just talking about you guys!” 

      “You were?” I whisper, my eyebrows furrowed. 

      “Nothing bad before you start making assumptions, Foster,” Keefe says quickly, his hands up in front of him in the “stop” gesture. I nod once. 

      “It’s very nice to meet you formally and without all the chaos,” Linh says. She holds out her hand for me to shake. I do. Her eyes seem so kind and it makes me want to smile too but I don’t. It’s more of a grimace. 

      “Let’s get started shall we?” Keefe says, offering his arm. I wait for Biana to take it because I sure as heck am not. But when she doesn’t I suppress a sigh and link mine in his. He raises an eyebrow. 

      Leaning in close to my ear but still looking straight he says, “You don’t have to you know.” 

      I nod. “I know.” 

      That makes him smile. 

      He shows us all around set. Him and Linh tell us funny cast moments, making Biana and I laugh so hard she snorts, which then makes us laugh harder. Linh’s brother Tam walks in at some point and Biana stops short, immediately working her perfect little charm on him. I roll my eyes with a smile. 

      At the end everyone else is coming in and we’re still alone on the other side, being able to see them come in through the big doors. 

      Keefe looks at me. “Did you enjoy the tour?” 

      “Very much so,” I tell him honestly. “Even if it was a little nervewracking.” 

      He chuckles at that. “Why was it nervewracking?” 

      “I mean, you’re this huge celebrity that every girl swoons over and I was basically living every girl’s dream.” 

      “Oh yeah?” He asks. His voice drops to a softer tone as he steps towards me a bit more. My heart immediately picks up. “Just because I’m curious I’ll ask, are you one of those girls?” 

      Am I? I mean, Keefe Sencen is amazing. He’s good looking, charming, witty, an amazing actor. But, I don’t have those romantic feelings for him that every other girl has. 

      This of course doesn’t stop my stomach from twisting up as I look up at him. “Nope.” 

      He nods. “I see.” He leans in closer to me and I can feel his breath on my cheek. I swallow hard. “Well then you won’t have a problem having a friendly little dinner with me tomorrow? I mean, those other girls would just be too nervous.” 

      I shake my head, determined to not be one of those girls. “Not at all.” 

      He smirks at me. Nope. I will not be one of them. We stay like that for a few seconds until he steps away with a nod and walks to the fans. I let out a sigh of relief. 

      Looking around I see no one’s even noticed. Linh’s already talking to the other girls and Biana’s too wrapped up in Tam. 

      Not that there was anything to notice because there definitely wasn’t. We were just talking. 

      I take a deep breath. 

      And then my eyes widen at the horrific realization. 

      I just made dinner plans with a celebrity.

      WHAT THE HECK KEEFE?!?!?

      Seriously, what did you just tell Linh?

      I know I don't make dinner plans with people that I don't like in that way, just saying...

      (*~Lizzie~*)

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    • Omigosh! So Good..And there appears to be a bit of Tiana too!

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    • SOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!

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    • Aaaaammmmmmmaaaaaaaazzzzzzziiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnngggggggggg

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    • OMG PLEASEEE CONTINUE. 

      I know your not finding motivation but think of any ordinary date or something. 

      this is seriously the best fanfic iv ever seen, no joke

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    • I LOVED THAT AND IT MADE ME LAUGH SO HARD

      XD

      HydrokineticGirl101 ([Ashley])

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    • THIS IS THE BEST! If I'm getting jumpy this means its the best cause I nver get jumpy! ( Ok thats a lie but I don't do it a lot) -Orgeprincess!

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    • Please post more! ~Orgeprincess!

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    • Please post more i love this story!!!!!

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    • Alright so 

      I have no idea when the next chapter will be 

      I have a LOT going on right now mentally and around me so I'm gonna probably take a little break 

      also 

      pray I don't kill my friends hamster she needs me to take care of it while she goes on a trip and the hamster HATES me and Im terrified hes gonna die on my watch and i'll be in jail for hamster-manslaughter so yeah thank you farewell

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    • ^XD Sure!

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    • is there going to be any Lihn and fitz in this?

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    • it's okay! I get it! Take your time!

      Also good luck with the hamster!

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    • OK thats fine and don't worry I doubt your as bad as me! :) ~Ogreprincess!

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    • Good luck with your hamster issue! 

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    • aw okay! don't go to jail cuz then we'll die never knowing the end XD good luck with the hamster!!!

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    • Good Luck with the evil hamster....Let's hope you don't die!

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    • ahaha 

      update on the hamster

      the friend is coming back to get the devil spawn soon. 

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    • ^XD good for you.

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    • XD nice. how did taking care of it go?

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    • i've only had it for like, two days but I CAN'T do it. fhdasjkfgdslkfh

      i can't hold it i'm too big of a coward andI'm afraid he might KILL me 

      so she's like "alright I can like, come get him" and I agreed. 

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    • oof lol

      my friend had a hamster and my other friend screamed every time he got close. It was hilarious until the hamster died one day :( That same friend was even scared of dogs. In engineering class, there was this stuffed dog and someone threw it at her and she yelled so loud that the teacher thought she got hurt or something. 

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    • My couisin has a savage bunny...

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    • OH MY GOODNESS THIS IS SO AMAZING! I saw it on Wattpad forever ago and forgot about it but now I regret that this is sooooo good!!!!! Plz update soon!

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      OH MY GOODNESS THIS IS SO AMAZING! I saw it on Wattpad forever ago and forgot about it but now I regret that this is sooooo good!!!!! Plz update soon!

      OH MY GOSH MY WATTPAD STOP SFHDJESFBEIL>

      I was SO cringy EW 

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    • WannabeAuthor wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      OH MY GOODNESS THIS IS SO AMAZING! I saw it on Wattpad forever ago and forgot about it but now I regret that this is sooooo good!!!!! Plz update soon!
      OH MY GOSH MY WATTPAD STOP SFHDJESFBEIL>

      I was SO cringy EW 

      What are you talking about? Agh and not I can't even find it anymore oh well xD

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      WannabeAuthor wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      OH MY GOODNESS THIS IS SO AMAZING! I saw it on Wattpad forever ago and forgot about it but now I regret that this is sooooo good!!!!! Plz update soon!
      OH MY GOSH MY WATTPAD STOP SFHDJESFBEIL>

      I was SO cringy EW 

      What are you talking about? Agh and not I can't even find it anymore oh well xD

      wattpad brought back some memories of when i thought I was some best selling author lol 



      sorry i'll shut up fdjafklhf;

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    • XD whenever I make a fanfiction and one person comments Im like welp now Im famous, then my brother tells me he was the on ly one to read my fanfic

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    • WannabeAuthor wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      WannabeAuthor wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      OH MY GOODNESS THIS IS SO AMAZING! I saw it on Wattpad forever ago and forgot about it but now I regret that this is sooooo good!!!!! Plz update soon!
      OH MY GOSH MY WATTPAD STOP SFHDJESFBEIL>

      I was SO cringy EW 

      What are you talking about? Agh and not I can't even find it anymore oh well xD
      wattpad brought back some memories of when i thought I was some best selling author lol 



      sorry i'll shut up fdjafklhf;

      xD you sound like me with some things I wrote a long time ago... and honestly things I wrote a month ago... okay something I just wrote... anyway whatever this is amazing when do you think you'll post more? No pressure tho :)

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    • THIS IS AMAZING! thanks chase for recommending it!

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      WannabeAuthor wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      WannabeAuthor wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      OH MY GOODNESS THIS IS SO AMAZING! I saw it on Wattpad forever ago and forgot about it but now I regret that this is sooooo good!!!!! Plz update soon!
      OH MY GOSH MY WATTPAD STOP SFHDJESFBEIL>

      I was SO cringy EW 

      What are you talking about? Agh and not I can't even find it anymore oh well xD
      wattpad brought back some memories of when i thought I was some best selling author lol 


      sorry i'll shut up fdjafklhf;

      xD you sound like me with some things I wrote a long time ago... and honestly things I wrote a month ago... okay something I just wrote... anyway whatever this is amazing when do you think you'll post more? No pressure tho :)

      im not sure. right now I'm trying to work on my mental health and take some time for myself so it will probably be a while. but i'm not gonna give up on it! hopefully it'll even be better when I feel better!



      all the other chapters are just me droning on to get something done for you guys lol 



      but I don't want to do that anymore so i'm gonna take a little break until i get some actual motivation 

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    • WannabeAuthor wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      WannabeAuthor wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      WannabeAuthor wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      OH MY GOODNESS THIS IS SO AMAZING! I saw it on Wattpad forever ago and forgot about it but now I regret that this is sooooo good!!!!! Plz update soon!
      OH MY GOSH MY WATTPAD STOP SFHDJESFBEIL>

      I was SO cringy EW 

      What are you talking about? Agh and not I can't even find it anymore oh well xD
      wattpad brought back some memories of when i thought I was some best selling author lol 


      sorry i'll shut up fdjafklhf;

      xD you sound like me with some things I wrote a long time ago... and honestly things I wrote a month ago... okay something I just wrote... anyway whatever this is amazing when do you think you'll post more? No pressure tho :)
      im not sure. right now I'm trying to work on my mental health and take some time for myself so it will probably be a while. but i'm not gonna give up on it! hopefully it'll even be better when I feel better!



      all the other chapters are just me droning on to get something done for you guys lol 



      but I don't want to do that anymore so i'm gonna take a little break until i get some actual motivation 

      Thats cool, take as much time as you need!

      we're here for you!

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    • Me: comes back and doesn't feel like reading an hour worth of comments

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    • I was here from the first chapter so I found this a while back

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    • You're fine! Take all the time you need, and know that we will be thrilled when you're back and posting again :)

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    • Same I love this fanfic with all my heart soooooo

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    • HydrokineticGirl101 wrote:
      Same I love this fanfic with all my heart soooooo

      Ditto ❤❤❤

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      HydrokineticGirl101 wrote:
      Same I love this fanfic with all my heart soooooo
      Ditto ❤❤❤

      same! *tries to make heart without emojis* Is there a backwards question mark? *panics*

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    • <3

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    • ok

      <3

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    • lol

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    •                             :)
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    • :)

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    • https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1204263#100

      we need more male for this rp. its rlly good though

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    • I can't wait for you to post more! No pressure though! ~Ogreprincess!

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    • Same!

      -TheRealJolieRuewen

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      WannabeAuthor wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      WannabeAuthor wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      WannabeAuthor wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      OH MY GOODNESS THIS IS SO AMAZING! I saw it on Wattpad forever ago and forgot about it but now I regret that this is sooooo good!!!!! Plz update soon!
      OH MY GOSH MY WATTPAD STOP SFHDJESFBEIL>

      I was SO cringy EW 

      What are you talking about? Agh and not I can't even find it anymore oh well xD
      wattpad brought back some memories of when i thought I was some best selling author lol 


      sorry i'll shut up fdjafklhf;

      xD you sound like me with some things I wrote a long time ago... and honestly things I wrote a month ago... okay something I just wrote... anyway whatever this is amazing when do you think you'll post more? No pressure tho :)
      im not sure. right now I'm trying to work on my mental health and take some time for myself so it will probably be a while. but i'm not gonna give up on it! hopefully it'll even be better when I feel better!


      all the other chapters are just me droning on to get something done for you guys lol 



      but I don't want to do that anymore so i'm gonna take a little break until i get some actual motivation 

      Thats cool, take as much time as you need!

      we're here for you!

      Yeah, don't worry bout it, ur fanfic's amazing :)

      also, is ur story still on wattpad...? i've been browsing through so many stories there and would love to read yours, it also wouldn't hurt to have a version without all the comments (not to be rude, I comment a lot too but yah know... it's still easier without having to scroll through everything

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    • Nightfire0117 wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      WannabeAuthor wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      WannabeAuthor wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      WannabeAuthor wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      OH MY GOODNESS THIS IS SO AMAZING! I saw it on Wattpad forever ago and forgot about it but now I regret that this is sooooo good!!!!! Plz update soon!
      OH MY GOSH MY WATTPAD STOP SFHDJESFBEIL>

      I was SO cringy EW 

      What are you talking about? Agh and not I can't even find it anymore oh well xD
      wattpad brought back some memories of when i thought I was some best selling author lol 


      sorry i'll shut up fdjafklhf;

      xD you sound like me with some things I wrote a long time ago... and honestly things I wrote a month ago... okay something I just wrote... anyway whatever this is amazing when do you think you'll post more? No pressure tho :)
      im not sure. right now I'm trying to work on my mental health and take some time for myself so it will probably be a while. but i'm not gonna give up on it! hopefully it'll even be better when I feel better!


      all the other chapters are just me droning on to get something done for you guys lol 



      but I don't want to do that anymore so i'm gonna take a little break until i get some actual motivation 

      Thats cool, take as much time as you need!

      we're here for you!

      Yeah, don't worry bout it, ur fanfic's amazing :)

      also, is ur story still on wattpad...? i've been browsing through so many stories there and would love to read yours, it also wouldn't hurt to have a version without all the comments (not to be rude, I comment a lot too but yah know... it's still easier without having to scroll through everything

      yeah, its cool. I just skipskipskip through until I see the bolded words...

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    • ^^ Idk I couldn't find it but I was also being lazy and stopped looking after a few minutes lol

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    • Nightfire0117 wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      WannabeAuthor wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      WannabeAuthor wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      WannabeAuthor wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      OH MY GOODNESS THIS IS SO AMAZING! I saw it on Wattpad forever ago and forgot about it but now I regret that this is sooooo good!!!!! Plz update soon!
      OH MY GOSH MY WATTPAD STOP SFHDJESFBEIL>

      I was SO cringy EW 

      What are you talking about? Agh and not I can't even find it anymore oh well xD
      wattpad brought back some memories of when i thought I was some best selling author lol 


      sorry i'll shut up fdjafklhf;

      xD you sound like me with some things I wrote a long time ago... and honestly things I wrote a month ago... okay something I just wrote... anyway whatever this is amazing when do you think you'll post more? No pressure tho :)
      im not sure. right now I'm trying to work on my mental health and take some time for myself so it will probably be a while. but i'm not gonna give up on it! hopefully it'll even be better when I feel better!


      all the other chapters are just me droning on to get something done for you guys lol 



      but I don't want to do that anymore so i'm gonna take a little break until i get some actual motivation 

      Thats cool, take as much time as you need!

      we're here for you!

      Yeah, don't worry bout it, ur fanfic's amazing :)

      also, is ur story still on wattpad...? i've been browsing through so many stories there and would love to read yours, it also wouldn't hurt to have a version without all the comments (not to be rude, I comment a lot too but yah know... it's still easier without having to scroll through everything

      It is by the same name but it's only one chapter and I think it's a little different? i can't remember

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    • Ohhhhhhh yeah that's right and here I was feeling bad about not reading the whole thing xD I told u it was a long time ago

      Also I got very illogically excited...

      When I saw you commented.

      And then very disappointed...

      When it was not an update.

      xD

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    • Wandergirls wrote: Ohhhhhhh yeah that's right and here I was feeling bad about not reading the whole thing xD I told u it was a long time ago

      Also I got very illogically excited...

      When I saw you commented.

      And then very disappointed...

      When it was not an update.

      xD

      that happens to me all the time on that note please post more


      yay!

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    • did this story die?? because if anyone is still alive i want this story to get updated 

      (If you are dead I respect that and you can carry on your normal activities)

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    • Yes! Please I can't wait anymore! I need you to post! ~Ogreprincess!

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    • ALRIGHT IM HERE

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    • WannabeAuthor wrote:
      ALRIGHT IM HERE

      YAY!

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    • i am SO sorry 

      i've been struggling a lot mentally and i had some big family issues going on yada yada yada

      but i'm good now and I'm gonna try and post a chapter today if anyone even cares

      i kinda let this thing die and sorry about that

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    • WannabeAuthor wrote:
      i am SO sorry 

      i've been struggling a lot mentally and i had some big family issues going on yada yada yada

      but i'm good now and I'm gonna try and post a chapter today if anyone even cares

      i kinda let this thing die and sorry about that

      no, its fine! your health and normal life always comes first!

      but I am happy you might post today :)

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      WannabeAuthor wrote:
      i am SO sorry 

      i've been struggling a lot mentally and i had some big family issues going on yada yada yada

      but i'm good now and I'm gonna try and post a chapter today if anyone even cares

      i kinda let this thing die and sorry about that

      no, its fine! your health and normal life always comes first!

      but I am happy you might post today :)

      Same!

      ~Ogreprincess!

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    • I ship Sophitz BUT THIS IS GOOD!

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    • I LOVE IT!

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    • AH RLLY???

      I'm sorry you're having those issues :(

      I CAN'T WAIT TILL YOU POSTTTT

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    • Yes! You might post today! Can I just say that your fanfic is so amazing and original. I love the idea so much. You are an amazing writer and honestly, I'm wondering if you're a professional writer or not. This is so good. Also, I'm sorry about all the bad things going on for you right now. I hope it gets better. But, on the plus side, people are reading this fanfic, and they are probably really supportive of you.

      P.S. Who are you going to ship with Biana? I ship Dexiana but it doeasn't matter

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    • 73.115.99.161 wrote:
      Yes! You might post today! Can I just say that your fanfic is so amazing and original. I love the idea so much. You are an amazing writer and honestly, I'm wondering if you're a professional writer or not. This is so good. Also, I'm sorry about all the bad things going on for you right now. I hope it gets better. But, on the plus side, people are reading this fanfic, and they are probably really supportive of you.

      P.S. Who are you going to ship with Biana? I ship Dexiana but it doeasn't matter

      aww that's so sweet! 



      and probably Tam since he's closer 

      I don't really have a set ship for Biana it mixes up

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    • WannabeAuthor wrote:
      73.115.99.161 wrote:
      Yes! You might post today! Can I just say that your fanfic is so amazing and original. I love the idea so much. You are an amazing writer and honestly, I'm wondering if you're a professional writer or not. This is so good. Also, I'm sorry about all the bad things going on for you right now. I hope it gets better. But, on the plus side, people are reading this fanfic, and they are probably really supportive of you.

      P.S. Who are you going to ship with Biana? I ship Dexiana but it doeasn't matter

      aww that's so sweet! 



      and probably Tam since he's closer 

      I don't really have a set ship for Biana it mixes up

      okay! whatever you want!

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    • i just found this today, and even though i ship kam, i've been binge-reading the ENTIRE thing! so good!

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    •                                                                 Keefe's POV

      We’re all on the tour bus and Pascal is going crazy beside me. 

      “I mean, what’s it like being famous? It has to be stressful, right? Everyone’s eyes are always on you expecting to not make one wrong move. And the paparazzi has to be so annoying.” She takes a picture of me right after she says this. 

      I blink in surprise. “Yeah. So annoying,” I deadpan. 

      “Alright, Perky, out of the way,” the girl named Stina orders. She pushes Pascal. The poor girl falls to the ground with a yelp. Linh runs over and she quickly recovers, choosing Linh as her new victim. 

      Stina smiles at me. “You have to be getting tired of all these immature girls don’t you?” She sets her hand on my arm. I raise an eyebrow at her. She simply bats her eyelashes flirtaciously. “We could go take a break if you want.” 

      I gently remove her hand from my skin. Pretty sure it’s permanently burned her vibes on that area. I remind myself to scrub it with bleach later today. “I’m actually doing pretty well.” 

      Stina frowns a bit. Then, she changes it back into her venomous smile. “Are you sure? You could use a bit of relaxing.” 

      From not too far away I hear Marella fake a gag and Biana laugh. Stina glares at them. 

      “Thank you very much for the offer. I’m not usually one to refuse but, we have guests, and it would be rude to just leave them.” I try to act normal. It’s killing me. 

      She scowls. “Fine. Maybe another time.” She walks away. 

      Sandor, who’s leaning against the wall across from me just watches her go. “She’s… interesting.” 

      I scoff. “Yeah. That works.” I shrug. “I can’t blame her though. It’s hard to stay away from all this.” I gesture toward myself. 

      He rolls his eyes. “The plans for today are to get to the hotel. We have a free day and then tomorrow you have an interview. They’ll be joining.” 

      I furrow my eyebrows. “They’re joining?” 

      “I’M GONNA BE ON TELEVISION?” Biana screams from her spot. 

      Sandor ignores her. “Yes. They’re joining.” 

      Great. More stress. I set my head back and close my eyes, thinking about how only later today I’ll be having dinner with Foster. Away from all this chaos. 

      My thoughts are interrupted by Marella using some choice words against Stina. 

      I sigh. 

      This tour is the highlight of my life. 



      Nearly 10 hours later we are at the hotel, settled in, I’m dressed, and waiting at Foster’s door. 

      “I’m not wearing this!” Foster hisses from the other side. 

      “Yes you are, now go!” Biana orders. 

      “No this is not appropriate in anyway-”

      “You’re a teenager, you're acting like you’re five! It’s appropriate!”

      “My father would kill me-”

      “Sophie DO YOU SEE YOUR DAD IN THIS ROOM?” 

      I knock on the door and everything goes silent. “Sorry to interrupt this discussion but I think we’re due for dinner?” 

      Biana opens the door, a sheepish smile on her face. She laughs a bit. “Yes. She’s coming right out.” She looks over. “I said she’s coming right out!” Nothing once again. She walks over. More bickering and aruging until Sophie’s shoved into my direction. 

      “Woah,” I say softly. She’s wearing this red dress that goes right above her knees. It kinda flows around when she walks and the spaghetti straps keep falling off of her shoulders. She brings them back up and stares at the ground. 

      “I told her it wasn’t a date,” she whispers. 

      I stare for a moment longer before I shake myself out of it. “No. It’s fine. Totally and completely fine.” I walk toward her. “You look gorgeous, Foster.” I wink and take her arm. 

      “You two have a grand time. I will not tell you the limit of fun you’re allowed to have. Have all the fun in the world!” Biana says, throwing her hands up. 

      I smirk. Sophie blushes and hides behind her hair as always. 



      Soon enoug we’re at our destination. A fancy restaurant I reserved just for us, away from fans. Sophie’s staring at the menu, not daring to look up. 

      It’s awkward but I pretend otherwise. “How often do you go out with celebrities?” I tease. 

      “Oh all the time. Constant occurrence.” I laugh at this. I almost catch her smile. I slowly stop laughing. 

      “It won’t kill you to have a good time,” I say. Silence. 

      After what feels like a lifetime she breaks the silence. “I think this was a mistake.”

      “What?” 

      “I mean.. I just-”

      A shriek interrupts her. 

      “Uh sir… fans are breaking through,” a waiter tells me. 

      “Uh-oh.” I look over to find an army of girls all at the door. The glass door. 

      Stina Heks in the front looking triumphant. 

      I grab Sophie, running toward somewhere where they can’t find us. I hear the doors open. 

      “Are we gonna get attacked by them or something?” Sophie asks. 

      “Probably,” I say honestly. Her eyes widen and I duck behind the counter. They’re going crazy. I drag Sophie behind me, into the closet and press myself and her against the far back wall, putting my hand over her mouth. 

      “Over here!” A girl yells, running past it. I watch the light at the bottom as they run along. When they’re all gone I sigh in relief. 

      “Now what were you saying?” I ask, only to be met with a very frazzled Sophie Foster.

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    • Great chapter! I really enjoyed it!

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    • EEEEEEEK I LOVE ITTTTTTTTTTTT THANK YOU SO MUCHHHHHHHH

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    • THIS IS AWESOME! You are super talented and amazing!

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    • Hey could you please join this? https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1541833#8



      Also, you are so talented!

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    • Yes! That is so good! I love this fanfic so much!

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    • I LOVE IT!

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