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  • The Alternate is a story about Keefe and Sophie. This takes place after the Neverseen. They find a portal at candleshade that leads them to a void of the rare stardust, Cambio. Cambio is a world of change. They teleport to a future dimension in which they are older.

    Start of Fanfiction: 3/18/2020

    Chapters: 15

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    • WOW! When are you going to post the 15 chapters!

      I cannot wait to read this. I love all of your writing so much.

      I went into this link because it was written by you, and I really wished there was a chapter and then I was sad becasue I love your writing so much.

      Please write more!

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    • Please write more. Even if I am the only person to read this, it is amazing.

      That is what matters right? Please write more. I even advertized for you.

      The fanfic sounds amazing and the idea is great.

      (on an unrealated note, im sorry i had to drop out of the SoKeefe group fanfic)

      -Ivy

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    • i would love to read it!

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    • Please post!

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    • can't wait to hear all 15 chapters!

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    • Okay! I haven't seen this but ok!

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    • Chapter One

      "What is it?" Sophie asked, putting her hand halfway through the portal. She waved it around. It felt tickly on her skin.

      "Well, I have a sinking suspicion that it's from light from Cambio. My Mom probably made it. Dad probably knew to, and I guess he wouldn't have told us." Keefe said, looking down.

      Sophie snatched her hand away. Cambio meant 'world of change'. It was a very rare light.

      "Well, I'm guessing it leads us to an alternate dimension." Sophie said, wanting to peak her head in.

      "Only one way to find out." Keefe said, slowly walking in. He kept walking until he was no longer seen.

      "KEEFE SENCEN!" She yelled, running up to the portal.

      "What?" Keefe said, peaking his head out. "Miss me Foster?" He asked, wiggling his eyebrows.

      "No-oh oh- AH!" She said as Keefe pulled her in. Wind pulled apart her body, and her lungs felt squished, but then it was normal after 1 second.

      "That was, odd." Sophie said, looking at the surroundings. There were glass-looking orbs floating around. It looked like there was a little screen in each of them. She looked closer to one. She saw herself, with pointy ears, and curly hair. She looked like Oraile, but a little different.

      "Look Keefe." Sophie said, pointing to one with Keefe at Disney world. He laughed. "Lets go to that one!" He said, almost touching it. She slapped his hand away.

      "NO! We have to chose carefully." Sophie pointed to one with me in the elite levels. "Lets do this one." She touched it and flinched. But nothing happened.

      "What'd you do?" Keefe asked walking up closer to Sophie. To close. She scooted away.

      "It didn't bring me there!" She cried like a child. Keefe pointed to a table in the middle.

      "Try placing it on this table." He said, grabbing the orb. "Looks a little smudged, hold on." He said, rubbing it. Just then, right there, the orb sucked him in.

      "KEEFE!" She yelled, watching as the orb disappeared.

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    • oooh! i want to hear more!

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    • KEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEFE!!!!

      Also, good story!

      Where was I? Oh, right.KEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • XD

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    • This is great. 

      Are u gonna update soon?? What happened to Keefe, did Sophiein with him?

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    • ooohhhhhhhhhhhhh post more!!!!

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    • Yeah, I'll update sometime today.

      Don't worry, I have nothing else better to do.

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    • This is amazing! I am so glad you posted a chapter! YAY! I cannot wait for the next chapter.

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    • This is really good! 

      I wish you would post more! (Then again, I'm following 7 fanfics, so.....)

      -#becauseKeefe

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    • Chapter 2

      "No no!" Sophie sighed, looking around at all the orbs.

      "Ughh! Keefe is really in for it if I ever find him!" She yelled, pulling out her eyelashes. If I find him. She looked around for the same orb.

      She found one that looked similar, so she crossed her fingers and rubbed the orb.

      Again, the same sensation of stepping into the portal. Tearing searing pain, but then, it stops.

      plop

      "Hey! Watch it freak!" Fitz said. Getting up and brushing himself off. She was on the front lawn of Foxfire, near the trees.

      "Fitz?" I asked, hoping it wasn't him.

      "Who else?" He sneered. He stormed off, fists clenched.

      "Okay..." She said, moving on. "He must be in a bad mood." She mumbled. She felt air swish around her.

      "Who's in a bad mood?" Dex said. He was leaning against a tree, reading a book that looked about 2,000 pages long.

      "Fitz. Or is that even his name." She groaned.

      "His name is Fitz. But he prefers Fitzroy." Dex said.

      "Dexter! I have made a fascinating discovery!" Wylie walked up, with glasses on his nose. He strode up looking confident.

      "What is Wylie?" Dex'ter' said, jumping up.

      "I think your guster ability comes from your father's Aunt's step-mother!" He said pointing to a paragraphing an open book.

      "Wait, your a guster?" I said, confused.

      "Yes. I am also a technopath, and an inflictor. I'm also a Vanisher." He said, laughing. He blinked in and out of sight.

      "Okay..." She said. "This is going to sound really odd, but what is my ability?" She asked, pulling out her eyelashes.

      "What? Um, your.. Unique." He said, looking at Wylie. Wylie looked at me, looking afraid.

      "Your.. A Omnia." He said.

      "What is an Omnia?" I said, voice cracking. I hoped it wasn't a fancy word for 'talentless'.

      "It means... That you have all the abilities."

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    • That is soooooo good! Can't wait for more.

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    • SOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!

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    • Yes I love it story I need to see more it's awsome

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    • Also I'm sorry I haven't read legacy yet but is Omnia a real elvish ability 

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    • One more thing so Sophie isn't in to ticking people anymore

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    • I mean toching 

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    • 75.167.73.173 wrote: Also I'm sorry I haven't read legacy yet but is Omnia a real elvish ability 

      No, it just means 'all' in Latin. ;)

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    • why does it change from first person to third person?

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    • 66.205.130.226 wrote:
      why does it change from first person to third person?

      Yeah i noticed that too. Also i thout thought it was interesting and amusing pls keep going.

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    • Yeah, I have difficulty with that. Sorry, I'll make sure to edit that next time.

      I will post another part tonight!

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    • yay! more stuff to stop me from dying of boredom!

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    • Well I think the story is really good and thx for letting me know also I've been making my own keeper of the lost cities book since last week

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    • I call it unknown it's basically were Sophie,and her friends ( Fitz,Dex,Keefe,Tam,Linh,Briana, and Marella) go to a human school, because the Neverseen have been in that area. But they find out there's a human elf hybrid and I mite make her Sophie's half elavish sister. her name Nigini and she's a Guster,Pyorkinetic, and what Ruy is. Sorry I forgot how to spell it. P.s I'm not trying to steal ur thundet

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    • Thunder

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    • XD That's cool and no problem!

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    • Thanks but do u think she should be Sophie's sistet

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    • Ugh sorry this keyboard is ooooollllllddddd

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    • Doesn't work great

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    • Also if u want I can give u a sample

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    • "It means you have all the abilities. Still trying to pop quiz us, huh?" Wylie laughed. He put his hand around me and laughed.

      "Where's Keefe?" I asked. Hoping he wasn't different. "You know, Keefe Sencen?"

      "Oh, he's studying. I thought y'all were going on a date tonight." Dex said, head in his books.

      "We're going on a date?!" I asked. Me. And Keefe. DATING?! Okay, I need to sit down. I sat down, criss-cross, my face in my hands. Dex looked up from his book.

      "Yeah, it's your last one until he leaves to live with the orges." Dex said casually. KEEFE IS LEAVING TO BE WITH THE ORGES?!

      "WHAT?! Keefe would never do that!" I said, jumping up.

      "But he is!" Someone said from behind me. Marella?

      "Oh hey, Ella..." I said, trying out this alternate universe thing. Marella hugged me.

      "You finally decided to call me what I want you to call me!" She said. I awkwardly patted her back. "I can't believe my brother is going to be ambassador to the stupid orges." She said.

      "YOUR BROTHER?" I asked. She looked at me weird.

      "Yes....?" She said.

      "What's gotten into you?" Dex asked, feeling her forehead.


      "Nothing. I'm fine. Where's Biana?" I asked, wondering what could possibly be different about her.

      "Um, why? Did you finally decide to apologize?" Wylie said, backing away, crossing his arms and raising an eyebrow.

      "Um, yep!" I said, going along with it. "What should I apologize for?" I asked, feeling stupid.

      "For pouring salt in her drink, dying her hair, stealing Keefe.." Dex said, waving his hand. He went back to his books.

      "I DID WHAT NOW?"

      why?! SOPHIE WHY.

      "Okay, really, tell us what's wrong Sophie." Dex said.

      "Nothings wrong! I just need.. I need some rest." She said, not ready to tell them what happened. "Can someone take me to my room?" I asked.

      "I will." Marella offered.

      She hummed as she walked into the silver towers. "Thanks Ella." I said, hugging her.

      "Okay bye then I guess." She said, pulling away.

      "Sophie!" Keefe came around the corner. "There you are! I've been looking all over!" He said, hugging her.

      "Hi, Keefe." I said, pulling away. "I think I'm going to have to call off our date." I said sadly.

      "That's totally okay." He said. "I'll miss you Sophie." He said, pulling me into a hug.

      "I'll miss you too Keefe." I said, pulling away. There.

      Right

      smacking

      there

      I saw it. His ice blue eyes stared at me, with true love.

      True, genuine love.

      It caught me by surprise.

      I knew I didn't like him. But still. He liked me.

      Keefe pulled me closer. He tried to kiss me. I pulled away.

      "Sorry Keefe. I'm just really tired. I love you." I said, looking at him. I waved slightly as I closed the door.

      Keefe tried to Kiss me.

      Biana is my worst enemy.

      Dex is a nerd

      And I have all the abilities.

      What now?

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    • Omg, this soo good.!!!!!!!!

      plz update soon.

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    • THAT'S SOOO GOOD!!!!!

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    • WWWHHHAAATTT 

      That's so crazy ur really good at this

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    • Also  is Sophie  going to find her other self there 

      The one who's actually going out with Keefe

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    • And maybe you'll make her tell them ( Dex'ter',Fitz'ory',Wylie and Marella) how she got there

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    • OH MY GOSH!!! THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!! *GASP* WHAT IF WHEN SOPHIE GETS BACK TO THE NORMAL DEMENSION-THINGY, SHE SEES THE LOVE-GLINTEY THINGY IN KEEFE'S EYES?!?! *SHOUTS FOR JOY AT THE THOUGHT OF SOKEEFE* EEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!! *PASSES OUT FROM TOO MUCH GIDDINESS AND JOY AND THINKING OF KEEFE'S HOTNESS*

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    • OMG! WHERE DID THE REAL KEEFE GO?! ARE YOU GOING TO DO HIS POV NEXT! WHEN IS THE NEXT UPDATE?! sorry for all caps

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    • *Big smiles!* TYSM! Next part will be in Keefe's POV

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    • Yay

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    • Omg does Sophie and Keefe date when she's in the elet levels

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    • Also I can chat a sample of my story and u could use it for inspiration  for yours 



      Yes or no 

      U don't have to hurry

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    • I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Plz post soon!

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    • Yes! Please post Keefe POV soon!

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    • Keefe's POV

      Okay, this is going to sound super weird, but

      I JUST WENT THROUGH A FREAKING ALTERNATE UNIVERSE PORTAL

      WITHOUT FOSTER.

      So, I'm kinda freakin; out..

      But, since you were all reading Foster's POV, it's time for my POV.

      Lets get this story started!

      _-_-_-_-_

      PLOP

      I fell on the ground with a thud. Thankfully, nobody had seen me fall out of the sky. I looked around to see where I was. I was at Everglen, it the garden part.

      A very smelly part.

      "Keefe Sencen? What are you doing here?" Fitz came up to me. He was wearing an elite level cape.

      "Uh, yeah bro!" I punched his shoulder.

      Bad move.

      "Um, OW?!" He said, rubbing his shoulder. "I haven't seen you in ages! How'd you get here?"

      "Light leaping." I said, not missing a beat. I was getting good at this lying stuff!

      Something about Fitz was off. I shrugged it off.

      "How'd you get a crystal?" Fitz whispered.

      "Because I have crystals... Why are we whispering?" I asked, confused. He dragged his hand through his chocolate- wait a minute.

      "Wait, did you dye your hair caramel color?" I asked. I knew these things because I painted.

      "What do you mean? It's always been like this. I got it from my Mom." He said, looking very confused.

      "But Della has brown hair."

      "Who's Della?"

      "YOUR FREAKING MOTHER! M-O-T-H-E-R!" I yelled. Things were getting really weird.

      "MY FREAKING M-O-T-H-E-R IS DAME ALINA!" He yelled.

      what

      the

      freaking

      HECK!

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    • OMG! This is amazing! I love it!

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    • SOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!

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    • Omg

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    • I need more

      Viviann

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    • From Viviann

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    • Wait in Keefes POV u should make bronte Sophies dad.

      What do u think

      -Viviann

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    • Vice Pres. of the Keefe Fan Club wrote: OH MY GOSH!!! THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!! *GASP* WHAT IF WHEN SOPHIE GETS BACK TO THE NORMAL DEMENSION-THINGY, SHE SEES THE LOVE-GLINTEY THINGY IN KEEFE'S EYES?!?! *SHOUTS FOR JOY AT THE THOUGHT OF SOKEEFE* EEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!! *PASSES OUT FROM TOO MUCH GIDDINESS AND JOY AND THINKING OF KEEFE'S HOTNESS*

      "LOVE-GLINTEY THINGY IN KEEFE'S EYES"

      XD

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    • Hey TeamKeefe12

      Can u consider that in Keefe POV Bronte is Sophie's dad or adopted dad

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    • -Vivian

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    • O my gosh, this is so hilarious.

      btw the story is awesome!!!!!!!

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    • Yes












      just yes 



      this is the most beautiful thing i have ever read










      in my life

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    • Btw that was Everblaze

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    • Ekk- I cant wait for more! As soon as I read this I got hooked, plz post soon! :)

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    • TYSM for y'all sweet comments! It means so much! There is also a bit of a ground shaking surprise coming in the next chapter!

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    • When are you posting it?!

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    • Please say you are posting today.

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    • Here are some suggustions of what you could do.

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    • "Finally!" I said, plopping down on a chair in the library. I needed to do some research to get Keefe and I in the same dimension.

      "Stars and Their Worldly Purposes"

      I picked up the book and read. I read 8 chapters and then realized it was dark outside. I quickly checked out the book and went back to my dorm.

      CHAPTER 9; Cambio

      This looks promising. I read the whole chapter on Cambio, realizing that this is what I've been looking for.

      Cambio means, world of change. If used correctly, you can jump dimensions using space and time. Cambio comes from the light that is inside a black hole. With a certian amont of bended sunlight, a void will open.

      But how to get Cambio.....

      KNOCK KNOCK

      "Come in!" I yelled, hoping to see a familiar face. Oraile stepped into my dorm.

      "Hey." I said, contining to read.

      "Are you okay? Me and your father have been worring about you." She said. She is my Mom, but she never said, 'Me and your father'.

      "Yeah, I'm great.. Mom." I laughed. I guess Oraile is my Mom... But what about Edaline and Grady?

      "You act liked you never called me Mom before!" She laughed, nudging me.

      "Hey Honey!" Kenric stepped in.

      "Dad?!" I said, crying. "But you.. you died!" I said, my brain not fuctioning properly.

      There he was, smiling. With a flower in one hand. "Hey sweetie! You must've missed me!"

      "More than ever!" I said, engulfing him in a hug.

      "There there.. It'll be okay." He said, kissing my head.

      Kenric was alive. But how?

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    • You can use them if you like, or don't use them.

      Bronte should be Sophie's dad.

      Kenric should be alive and you should make him and Oralie married.

      Mr. Forkle is evil.

      Edaline married Kesler instead of Juline.

      Grady should be married to Della.

      Biana is Keefe's sister instead of Fitz

      Jolie should be the principal of Foxfire

      Everyone loves Gorgadons and hates Alicorns

      (I am kinda just spitting random ideas here)

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    • Clarification: Edaline would be married to Kesler instead of Juline being married to him.

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    • "But... But... Your not a councilor?" I asked, confused.

      "No, I'm not.. Sweetie what's wrong? Did you have a bad dream?" He said. "You know they aren't real, right?" He said, smoothing my hair.

      "No.. Its something else I just.. I think I need rest." I said, feeling light headed and hearted.

      "Why are you reading about Cambio?" Asked Oraile, picking up the book.

      "Chemistry Project!" I said, snatching the book.

      "Okay, well, we were going to ask you if you wanted to go out to dinner with us and the Ruewens.."

      "Yes!" I said, wanting to see my real Mom and Dad. "I mean, I'll come." I blushed.

      "Okay then! I'll give you a second to get changed..." They said, walking out.

      I quickly got changed into a nice gown, and did my hair in an half up half down. Did a little makeup, and headed out to eat.

      Sophierose

      "Ooh! Fancy!" Oraile said as I walked out.

      "Is it to much?" I said, twirling.

      "No, you look perfect." She said, grabbing my hand.

      +-+-+-+

      "The Ruewen's aren't here yet, so lets sit here and wait." Kenric said. We sat down in the fancy waiting lounge.

      I couldn't get over it.

      Kenric is alive.

      Right there, sitting next to me.

      "You look as if you've seen a ghost!" Oraile said, sitting on the other side of me.

      "I feel that way as well." I mumbled.

      "What?" Kenric asked.

      "Oh, um, nothing." I said, looking at the huge chandlier.

      "Sorry we're late! Mom couldn't figure out how to do her hair!" Someone said. I looked over.

      And saw her.

      "Jolie?"

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      • GASP* my brain hurts. info overload.
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    • Nice!! OMG Jolies alive!!!

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    • THIS IS AMAZING!!!! It is just like one of the best fanfics EVER!!!

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    • I think you should describe the rooms, and laced sophie sees more

      just a suggestion, its still amazing though 

      please write more

      Everblaze

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      • places

      not laced

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    • Also it would be super confusing for there to be two keefes and two sophies, you could like put this dimensions keefe in the real kotlc dimension and same with sophie

      Everblaze

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    • THIS IS SOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!

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    • Wow u r really good at this

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    • But seriously do u want to hear a sample of my story

      It's OK if u say no 

      -Viviann

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    • 75.167.73.173 wrote:
      But seriously do u want to hear a sample of my story

      It's OK if u say no 

      -Viviann

      YES PLEASE!!!

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    • Vice Pres. of the Keefe Fan Club wrote:

      75.167.73.173 wrote:
      But seriously do u want to hear a sample of my story

      It's OK if u say no 

      -Viviann

      YES PLEASE!!!

      Sure.. Send me a link!

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    • I am legit reading this at 2 am this is so good I couldn't stop...

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    • I don't know how to send u a link. 

      Should I just put it in chat?

      -Viviann

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    • Sure

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    • But you should like label it so that people don't get confused

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    • K

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    • Here it is

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    • Unknown (Viviann's story)

      In Mrs Lorals class it was time for break. It's a second recess, the three friends Nigini,Manora, and Clea, we're talking. "Uhg Clea stop looking at boys" Manora said " Sorry " Clea said  " i just like the looks of them" Clea said  Nigini wasn't found of boys but she asked "who" "well"Clea began " uh Fitz, though he might be dating Sophie,Keefe,Dex,Tam, and Fredor" Nigini laughed " don't you think they have........unusual names" Manora pointed out .

      "No not really" Clea said  then stared dreamily at the boys "good grief" Manora said put a hand over Clea's eyes. "What's so intestine about them" Nigini asked "their eyes, like look at Fitz he has beautiful blue eyes" Clea said Nigini didn't know why but she saw Teel eyes not blue ones "no there Teel"  Nigini said.

      Manora rolled her eyes and walked away "come on" Clea said to Nigini following Manora. "One sec" Nigini said. She walked over to Fitz " hi Fitz I have a question" Nigini said Fitz laughed " OK give me your best shot" Fitz said "OK why are your eyes Teel" Nigini asked. For a second Nigini saw suprise and alarmed in his face then he said " no there blue" Nigini rolled her eyes  

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    • There it is if u guys have any questions ask me

      Plus that was a sample so if u want more tell me

      And TeamKeefe12 I'm not trying to steal ur thunder

      -Viviann

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    • P.s hope u like it

      -Viviann

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    • 75.167.73.173 wrote:
      P.s hope u like it

      -Viviann

      That rocks! Some advice, when someone new is speaking, put it in a new paragraph and indent it. But your story is still super good!

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    • Thank u

      Sorry if I'm bad at Grammer 

      But yeah if u have any questions ask me

      -Viviann

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    • Also I can post more if u guys want

      -Viviann

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    • yes please. but maybe make your own thread. it might make it hard for people to follow this story.

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    • I did it's called story's that people make. So if u want to hear more of this story go to story's that people make 👍

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    • TYSM guys! Also I love your story Viviann! I might post another part to The Alternate in a couple of hours!

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    • TeamKeefe12 wrote:
      TYSM guys! Also I love your story Viviann! I might post another part to The Alternate in a couple of hours!

      YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait to hear more of The Alternate​​​​​​​! It's super good!

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    • Thanks if u want to read more I have a story thing called storys thar people make

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    • I jumped up and Jolie ran up to me."Hey Sophie! How's it going?" Jolie let go and looked at me. "Oh, honey are you choking? You look pale." She said, feeling her temperature.

      "How? Why? When? Where?" I said. Her eyes went wide.

      "How? Well that's another story. Why? We wanted to congratulate you on finishing midterms! When? Right now. Where? Here!" She said, laughing as if it were a joke.

      "But! I... You... YOUR ALIVE!" I said, looking at all the resurrected souls standing before me. In an alternate universe.

      "Of course I'm alive! Why do you question?" She said, raising an eyebrow.

      "But what about Brant?" I asked. I had to sit back down.

      "Brant? Oh, I haven't seen him in ages! I gave him his Gremlin back because I didn't like the teeth." She clicked her tongue. "Ever since I became a councilor.."

      "Your a COUNCILOR?!" I jumped back up.

      "Oh no.. this isn't good." Jolie said. She put her hair behind her back. "Come with me. Mom, Dad, can you go get us a table?"

      "Sure Dear." Edaline said. Grady stood there, watching his... His whatever I was freak out over things that I supposedly knew.

      Jolie pulled me outside. "Cambio. Right?" She said, licking her lips.

      "How did you..?"

      "Its not safe here. We have to talk somewhere else." She said, looking around at everyone. She pulled out a leaping crystal.

      "Wait, I'm a teleporter." I said, grabbing Jolie's hand and running as fast as I could toward the statue of me, Linh, and Keefe. The old nightfall entrance.

      Jolie screamed as I teleported us to Everglen.

      (this is unedited. Sorry!)

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    • ... THE AMAZINGNESS OF THIS KILLED ME.

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    • … THE AMAZINGNESS OF YOUR COMMENT KILLED ME

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    • Alisha(MidNightWolf2020) is dead you are talking to the cute kitten in her profile. 

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    • … HUH? …

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    • XD

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    • SOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!

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    • TeamKeefe12 wrote:

      HUH? …

      Mew.

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      • MEOWWWWWWWWWW
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    • Mew

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    • This si amazing!

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    • This it really good 

      I remember today early I was looking at memes her are my favorite ones

      Briana: hey do u guys want to play kiss,marry,kill?

      Dex:I'm in

      Keefe: no game is complete without me. What about u bangs boy.

      Tam: no but I'll watch.

      Briana: OK Keefe u first the people r me,Sophie,and Linh.

      Keefe:kiss:Briana,marry:Sophie,kill:Tam

      Tam: WHAT THE HECK I'M  NOT EVEN PLAYING.

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    • Next meme 

      Sandor: Grady!

      Grady: what is it? 

      Sandor: it's an emergency!

      Grady: TELL ME! 

      Sandor: Sophie's on a DATE!

      Grady: I'll get the bat!

      Sandor: no use mine it has spikes 

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      Sophie: Keefe why r u smiling 

      Keefe: can't I smile when I'm happy foster

      Fitz: Tam was walking in the parking lot and fell

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    • 104.34.2.248 wrote:
      This si amazing!

      He's right

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    • Also Sophie bialogical is actually councillor Orille 

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    • I CANT WAIT

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    • I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE HELP ME!!!!!!!! I'M LOSING MY MIND BECAUSE OF QUARANTINE!!!! That chapter was sooooo good. I really like the plot twist and cliffhanger where she said that things weren't safe there. Really makes you think. 

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    • I have meme:

      Tam: Keefe, please put any of your suggestions in the suggestion box.

      Keefe: But its a trash can.

      Tam: Exactly.

      Tam: Feel free to put yourself in there, Keefe.

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    • Oof.

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    • "Why are we in the void?" I mumbled.

      "Because you aren't from this dimension. Just because your in your body doesn't mean your not going to glitch." She said, floating around.

      "How do you know I'm not from here?" Sophie asked, still trying not to get wrapped up in the fact that she was talking to Jolie.

      "Becaue I'm not from here either." She said, looking away.

      "Wait, does that mean that you're still alive in my world?" I said, hoping she would say yes.

      "Yes. This is the one world where I'm not dead." She said, a tear dripping down her face. "I couldn't get back to my real world."

      "I thought you got killed in a fire. How did you survive?" I asked, wrapping my mind around the fact that Jolie is alive.

      "I always caried around Cambio and Sunlight. So that if there was ever an incident, I could escape easier. And no one would ever catch me in a Alternate Dimension." She smiled.

      "How come you don't glitch? How could you do this to the real Grady and Edaline?" I said, hurt lining words.

      "Who says I don't? I have no abilities here." She said, avoiding the other question.

      "Wait, did you say, Abilities? If you only had one you'd say, 'I don't have an ability here." I asked, proud of myself for making the catch.

      Jolie played with her fingers. "I have one other ability." She said, wincing.

      "What? What is it? Are you a mesmer?" I said, raising my eyebrows. And also floating closer to her.

      "No... I'm a descryer."

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    • AHHHHH SOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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      • GASP* Wait. WHAT?!?! MY BRAIN HURTS. Someone plz help me.
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    • .... Alisha came back from the dead and died again.

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    • ? wut ?

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    • Guys, I have a short story contest on my blog go check it out!

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    • ooohhh yay!

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    • Just to be clear,

      When Sophie traveled to the alternate universe, she became conscious in her own body. But some of her abilities don't work right because it's not really her abilities. So like, since she's a vanisher in this world, she wouldn't be able to fully disguise herself.

      Jolie is a talentless, because she can't conjure or see peoples potential.

      :)

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    • Chapter 9

      "Wait, what?" I said, tumbling towards her, attempting to stop, and failing miserably.

      "You know, someone who can sense someone's potential." She said, steading me, but then setting herself tumbling.

      "So your a talentless here? But then that means.." I started, trailing off, putting pieces together.

      "That everyone who is a talentless is actually from another dimension? Yes." Jolie went on, taking a deep breath.

      "So, Kesler is from another Dimension?"

      "Yes, but he probably doesn't know it. Washers wiped all of his memories and banished him here."

      "Wow. So..." I said, moving on. "How are we supposed to get out of here?"

      "Um, I could try light leaping...." She said, pulling a bottle of light out of a hidden pocket in her boot, and a light blue leaping crystal from a pocket in her cape.

      "You have secret pockets too?" I said, getting the hang of floating around. Jolie smiled and nodded.

      "Well, you never know when the Neverseen will attack!"

      "Wait, what? I thought you said that they couldn't get you here." I asked.

      "No, the Neverseen here. It has Sir Astin in it. And also Calla." She said, attempting to open the bottle.

      "Ok.... Well, lets get out of here. The Neverseen are defeated in our world. You can come back, and be safe. Your body will still be here, it just won't be you."

      "But... I don't want to... I don't know if I can. I've been trying to get back for years, but I can't figure out how." She said, grabbing Sophie's hand and pulling out her Pathfinder. "Ready?" She said as she opened the bottle and held out her pathfinder. I nodded my head and let the light sweep me away.

      I needed to get Jolie home.

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    • SOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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    • Chapter 10: Keefe POV

      "She's not my Mom! And you know that!" Fitz said, grabbing my ear. "We need to get you to Bronte." He said, standing up.

      "Why Bronte? I didn't do anything." I questioned as we stood up.

      "Because I think you hit your head, and you need to see a doctor." He said, grabbing my wrist.

      "MOM! I'M TAKING KEEFE TO BRONTE!" Blonde Fitz yelled.

      "Okay! Don't get into trouble Fitzroy!" Alina said from upstairs somewhere.

      "Yes Mother!" Fitz said, leading me to the leapmaster.

      +_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+

      "Well, no head damage here." Bronte-as-Elwin said, using glasses and a light from a lamp to inspect me. "Looks like you just had a very... Interesting dream." He clicked his touge.

      "No, this is a dream!" I blurted.

      "Keefe darling! What are you doing here? Are you alright? Daddy what happened?" Sophie busted in.

      I knew right off the bat something was odd.

      Sophie had pierceing ocean blue eyes.

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    • .*GASP* 

      BLUE EYES?????????? WHAT???????????? AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • Oooooooooooooo mmmmmmmmmmyyyyyyyyyyy gggggggoooooooodddddddd that is...............................................

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    • I'm speachless you have a writers hook

      -Viviann

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      • me starts saying jibberish* ERROR ERROR ERROR CAN NOT COMPREHEND REBOOTING IN 5.... 4.... 3.... 2.... 1.... *passes out*
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    • Guys, quick. I need April Fool prak ideas, right now!!!

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    • OK April fools tricks

      For a boy: say the person they have a crush on likes him back or, get that persons enemy and put mistletoe in a room and put the person ur prank in the room with there worst enemy

      For a girl: take so thing she really likes and remake it or give it to the boy she likes if it's a love note 

      Hope that was helpful 

      -Viviann

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    • ... Alisha turned into an angel then her soul was obliterated by the fanfic....

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    • GUYS ANNIE LEBLANC LOOKS LIKE SOPHIE I'M FREAKING OUT HEWPPPPPPPP

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    • Really? I thought annie was a brunett?

      btw the story is great!

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    • Who's Annie Leblanc 

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    • Wait so are sophie and keefe in two different dimensions, cause in kind of confused

      -Everblaze

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    • TeamKeefe12 wrote:
      GUYS ANNIE LEBLANC LOOKS LIKE SOPHIE I'M FREAKING OUT HEWPPPPPPPP

      no not really.........

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    • Wat who be annie labnac 

      This just proves how little i think of pop culture

      -Everblaze

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    • I judge people who try to compare keeper of the lost city characters to real people

      they really just can't 

      - Everblaze

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    • No offense

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    • OOOOOOHHHHHHH WAIT I GET IT NOWW 

      YESSSSSSSSS

      they are in two different realities yiiies

      thank you 

      • pats self on the back for trying to be smart from the beginning and failing
      • whispers : its okay
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    • May i just ask









      GIVE ME MOREE POR FAVOR MI NESSECITO LEER

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    • okay give me a hour or two!

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    • 173.71.172.96 wrote:
      May i just ask








      GIVE ME MOREE POR FAVOR MI NESSECITO LEER

      Wait do u speak spainish

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    • 75.167.73.173 wrote:
      173.71.172.96 wrote:
      May i just ask








      GIVE ME MOREE POR FAVOR MI NESSECITO LEER

      Wait do u speak spainish

      All that person said, was "please give me more i need more reading"

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    • But still

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    • Does he speak Spanish

      -Goldswan

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    • Plus por favor means please

      -Goldswan

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    • PPPPPPPOOOOOOOSSSSSSTTTTTTTTT SSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNN 

      -Goldswan

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    • TeamKeefe12 wrote:
      okay give me a hour or two!

      DUDE IT HAS LIERLY BEEN 8 HOURS 

      I NEED IT SOLOMON OR I WILL DDDDDDIIIIIIIEEEEEE

      AND IT WILL BE UR FAULT

      -A VERY DISTENDED GOLDSWAN 😡😠

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    • PPPPPPPPOOOOOOOSSSSSSTTTTTTT

      MMMMMOOOOOORRRRRREEEEEE

      IIIIMMMMMM

      PPPPPUUUUUUUTTTTTTIIIIINNNNNNNGGGGGGG

      MMMMYYYYY

      LLLLLIIIIFFFFFEEEEEE

      IIIIIIIIIINNNNNN

      UUUUUURRRRR

      HHHHHHHAAAAAAAANNNNNNNDDDDDSSSSS

      SSSSSSSTTTTTOOOOOPPPPPP

      KKKKKKIIIILLLLIIINNNNGGGG

      MMMMMMEEEEEEEE

      -GGGGGOOOOOOLLLLLLDDDDDSSSSSSWWWWWAAAAAANNNNN

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    • Mooooooooore!

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    • CHAPTER 11 Keefe POV

      "SOPHIE! WHAT'S UP WITH YOUR EYES?" I said, hoping she didn't turn them blue on purpose.

      "Uh, they are naturally blue..." She said, nervously laughing.

      "No, Sophie, what happened." I said, grabbing her shoulders. She looked away, crying.

      "I'll talk to you later." She said, in a slight whisper.

      "Okay Foster, but please, tell me the truth."

      "Hey, what's going on?" Fitz said, looking Sophie in her exotic ocean blue eyes.

      "Nothing Fitz. Nothing out of the ordinary." She said, walking off, with her back slumped.

      "Did something happen to Sophie that I don't know about?" I said, raising an eyebrow.

      "Ever since she moved in with us, she's been trying to fit in to much. It's like she never even came from the human world."

      "Wait, she moved in with you? I thought she lived with Grady and Edaline?" I said, confussed.

      "Ever since that accident at Foxfire when we found out they didn't want to adopt her, we allowed her to move in with us. We adopted her actually." He said. "As her boyfriend, you'd think you'd know this." He laughed.

      "Wait, I'm her boyfriend?" I said, suddenly feeling happy.

      "Okay Keefe, tell me what went wrong." Fitz said, sitting in a chair.

      "This is going to sound super weird, but me and Sophie traveled through an alternate dimension, and we ended up in different dimensions. This all new to me." I said, running a hand through my hair.

      "Okay, well, um, WHAT?" Fitz said, eyes widening.

      "I'm from an alternate dimension. DO YOU UNDERSTAND?" I said, getting closer.

      "Yeah dude, but, how?" He said, standing up.

      "Starlight maybe? I don't know." I started pacing. Realizing that I had no idea how to get back to Sophie.

      The real Sophie.

      But first, I had to help this Sophie.

      Confussing? Yep, it gets worse.

      (Plz don't hate me)

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    • MidNightWolf2020 wrote:
      .... Alisha came back from the dead and died again.

      This keeps happening.......

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    • TTTTTTHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAANNNNNNNKKKKKKKK

      YYYYYYYOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUU

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    • HUH?

      Okay, I'm kinda confused with the story a bit but its awesome either way.

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    • PPPPPPOOOOOOSSSSSTTTTTTTT 

      MMMMMMMOOOOOORRRRRRREEEEEE 

      TTTTTTHHHHHHHEEEEE 

      SSSSSSSUUUUUUUSSSSSSSSSPPPPPPPPEEEEEEEENNNNNSSSSS

      IIIIIISSSSSS

      KKKKKIIIILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLIIIIIINNNNNNGGGGGGG

      MMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEEE

      (*RUNS AROUND HER ROOM SCREAMING*)

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    • Hi if u need something to read read my fanfic!

      It's called 'Storys that people make' 

      To get to it get on Keefe's wiki then push 'see more disscushions' then push on the one that's called

      "Storys that people make" 

      Hint: in it Keefe has a SISTER!

      Please check it out 

      -Viviann/Goldswan 

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    • SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • This is sooooooooooo good!

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    • Está es muy bien

      -Everblaze

      Yes, it is I, the girl who speaketh in dos langua

      (partially)

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    • So good!!!!

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    • I literally just found this, but... OHMIGOSH THIS IS SO FREAKING GOOD!!! (sorry if 'freaking' offends people!) PLEASE POST MORE SOON!!!!!! *rereads all chapters at super-speed, then faints from shock and extreme - and probably unsafe - adoration of this fanfic* XD

      - Musical Moonlark 

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    • wOw um I guess I'll have another chapter up tomorrow then!

      • runs away before you ask for an autogragh*
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    • 75.167.73.173 wrote: Hi if u need something to read read my fanfic!

      It's called 'Storys that people make' 

      To get to it get on Keefe's wiki then push 'see more disscushions' then push on the one that's called

      "Storys that people make" 

      Hint: in it Keefe has a SISTER!

      Please check it out 

      -Viviann/Goldswan 

      Please don't advertize. It's kinda rude.

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    • Sorry :( I want people to see my story cause I put a lot of eeorfft in to it and only one persons read it and yeah. I always wonder who you guys get all these people to read without advertising but I can't do a link cause I'm on a I pad and yeah sorry.😢😢😢😢😢

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      • Throws 🍅 at herself😢*

      -GoldenMoonlark

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    • I AM SCARED FOR LIFE SWEARINGPARROT  THE FANFIC AUTHOR TRYED TO MAKE SOFITZ HAPPEN INSTEAD OF SOKEEFE CAN U BELIVE IT!!!!

      SO I THREW MILLIONS OF TOMATO EMOJIS AT HIM!!!!!!!

      -GoldenMoonlark

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    • TeamKeefe12 wrote:
      wOw um I guess I'll have another chapter up tomorrow then!
      • runs away before you ask for an autogragh*

      Ik, I seemed insane, so... sorry! I was REALLY tired when I wrote that. XD Sorry again! #COVID-19-INSANITY

      - Musical Moonlark

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    • NEXT CHAPTER! NEXT CHAPTER! NEXT CHAPTER! NEXT CHAPTER! NEXT CHAPTER! I also think when Keefe goes to help the Sophie in the demension he's currently in, he'll kiss her. I mean it would be a dream come true for him. I think it's funny that in like all of the dimensions but the actual one SoKeefe happens.

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    • Sorry guys! I've been so busy with NaNoWriMo, I can't get these out fast enough! xD

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    • "Sophie, why are your eyes blue?" I asked once we got some time alone.

      "Because. I'm always the odd one out." She said, shrugging. "Why do you deicide to ask me about this now?"

      "Because, Foster, I care about you. I really love you, and your eyes, and everything about you. Please, don't ever change that." I smiled, finally getting it all off my chest.

      "You do? But.. You told me you thought my eyes were 'sorta weird, ya know.' And all of a sudden you like them?" She said, crossing her arms and looking up at me with those stupid blue eyes.

      "Foster, I love your eyes. Well, I love your eyes. I don't know about me liking your eyes." I shrugged.

      "What do you mean by that? You just told me you liked them!" Sophie cried.

      "I'm from an alternate universe, where you're a strong, pretty, brave, amazing girl. Your insecure Foster. And if me from this universe is telling you bad things about yourself, then you need to break up with me." I said sternly. It took me a lot to tell Sophie that, but I love all Sophie's, and I want them all to be happy.

      "What? I can't break up with you! The you from this universe!" Sophie wailed.

      "Sophie, I love you. And I want you to be happy. Who cares what other-Keefe thinks. You are Sophie Foster, and you can do anything you want without some boy holding you down. You can do this Sophie. Break up with me." I said with a smirk.

      "Oh okay. Keefe Sencen, I'm breaking up with you! You are so mean and arrogant, and care about no one else but yourself! You are not the man I met. Goodbye!" She yelled.

      "Very well done my young prodigy." I laughed and gave her a hug.

      "Thanks, Keefe."

      "Your welcome Foster." I kissed her head.

      "So, how are we going to get you back home?" Sophie smiled.

      "I don't know, but I think you do." I smirked again. Sophie laughed.

      "I think I do."

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    • Awwwwwwwww I LOVE THIS!!

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    • That was cute!! He cares so much about her<3

      Why can't Sophie realize that and stop being so OBLIVIOUS :(

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    • Post more soon!!!!!

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    • MalinaEverfree wrote:
      That was cute!! He cares so much about her<3

      Why can't Sophie realize that and stop being so OBLIVIOUS :(

      I know right? SOPHIE, PLEASE PAY ATTENTION!!!!!!!! KEEFE IS THE SWEETEST GUY EVER!!!!! YOU MUST STOP BEING OBLIVIOUS RIGHT NOW!!!!!!! SOKEEFE MUST HAPPEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • This is sooo goood, pleas post more!

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    • Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so sweet

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    • pls post more! this is sooooo goooooo!

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    • wait, do the elfs in the demintion ( sorry i can't spell) keefe is in all have  brown eyes or something? By the way this is AMAZING!! A little feedback though, maybe do more from Keefes POV, I feel like most of it is in sophies

      - Midnight Moonlark

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    • 162.231.215.3 wrote:
      wait, do the elfs in the demintion ( sorry i can't spell) keefe is in all have  brown eyes or something? By the way this is AMAZING!! A little feedback though, maybe do more from Keefes POV, I feel like most of it is in sophies

      - Midnight Moonlark

      I'm not the author for this fanfic, but maybe I can answer your brown eyes question. But I'm thinking two different ways that you meant the question, so is it okay if you reword that question? Sorry if that's sounds rude.

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    • KEEFE POV

      "Cambio. The world of change." Sophie sighed. She got several more books and scanned through them.

      "THERE!" He pointed to a picture. It was the same place with the orbs. Where he got separated from Sophie. The real Sophie.

      "Oh. I think I can bottle that light." She said, grabbing a vial.

      "Are you sure? It seems pretty dangerous." Keefe said, flipping through the book and mentally taking a picture of each page.

      "Nothing is too dangerous for Sophie Foster." She winked. "Let's get to the hills so we can get you back ho- Oh wait. We have that big slumber party tonight." She said. "We can't miss it!"

      "Well... I could stay a little longer I guess. I mean, if you want me too. But I have to go back tomorrow evening." Keefe said shelving the book. He smirked.

      "Okay. Your clothes should be in your dorm." She said, holding up a crystal. "It's at Everglen, by the way."

      "Oki Dokie." Keefe said, and watched as she waved and took off.

      He decided to at least try to find his dorm on his own. He failed epically. "Hey, can you help me find my dorm?" He asked a stranger. He had black hair, styled like Fitz's, and silvery blue eyes.

      "Sure... Keefe." He said, confused.

      "Thanks." Keefe said as he followed the stranger to his dorm. Apparently he was his roomie.

      "You going to the slumber party at Fitz's?" He asked, stuffing stuff into his bag. He looked at him out the corner of his eye.

      "Yeah. You going too?" Keefe asked, also shoving clothes into his backpack. He felt bad that he didn't know his name.

      "Dude. My sister is best friends with Biana. Course I'm going! Who do you think I am?" He said, slinging his satchel over his back.

      "My roommate?"

      "Tam. I AM TAM." Tam said, rolling his eyes. He stormed off.

      "Ohhhh that makes sense." Keefe said, following Tam to the leapmaster. Tam went first, then Keefe.

      "EVERGLEN!" He yelled and the light took him away.

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    • Pretty sure that no matter the dimension, Tam will always hate Keefe. If there was a dimension where Keefe and Tam where BFF's, and Keefe was put in that one, that would be hillarious!

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    • This is SOOOOOOOOO good!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • And what have you done to Tam's bangs? There is no Tam without the bangs!

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    • Please write more AMAZING

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    • Yayyyyyy this is soo good!

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    • 70.190.95.91 wrote:
      And what have you done to Tam's bangs? There is no Tam without the bangs!

      NOOOOOOOOO. But it's still amazing!

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    • SOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!! but tam needs his bangs back.

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    • SoKeefe Rules! wrote:
      SOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!! but tam needs his bangs back.

      agreed.

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    • Wow guys, have patience lol

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    • What patience?

      -#becauseKeefe

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    • Vice Pres. of the Keefe Fan Club wrote:
      162.231.215.3 wrote:
      wait, do the elfs in the demintion ( sorry i can't spell) keefe is in all have  brown eyes or something? By the way this is AMAZING!! A little feedback though, maybe do more from Keefes POV, I feel like most of it is in sophies

      - Midnight Moonlark

      I'm not the author for this fanfic, but maybe I can answer your brown eyes question. But I'm thinking two different ways that you meant the question, so is it okay if you reword that question? Sorry if that's sounds rude.

      No it's not rude at all, So in keefes POV it said she had blue eyes and was always the odd one out. Does that mean that Green or brown is the standrard eye color in that dimension?

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    • Vice Pres. of the Keefe Fan Club wrote:
      Pretty sure that no matter the dimension, Tam will always hate Keefe. If there was a dimension where Keefe and Tam where BFF's, and Keefe was put in that one, that would be hillarious!

      There Should totally be a dimension where they are BFFs. Then keefe relizes that tam should be his BFF in his dimension, then trys to be freinds with him. and tams like "what happened to you hating me?

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    • 162.231.215.3 wrote:
      Vice Pres. of the Keefe Fan Club wrote:
      162.231.215.3 wrote:
      wait, do the elfs in the demintion ( sorry i can't spell) keefe is in all have  brown eyes or something? By the way this is AMAZING!! A little feedback though, maybe do more from Keefes POV, I feel like most of it is in sophies

      - Midnight Moonlark

      I'm not the author for this fanfic, but maybe I can answer your brown eyes question. But I'm thinking two different ways that you meant the question, so is it okay if you reword that question? Sorry if that's sounds rude.
      No it's not rude at all, So in keefes POV it said she had blue eyes and was always the odd one out. Does that mean that Green or brown is the standrard eye color in that dimension?

      It means that blue eyes is the standard. 

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    • Keefe POV

      "Wow." He looked around. Everything was different. Biana had cream colored hair and she didn't look like herself. Dex was cool. And Sophie....

      Still had blue eyes. I wish I could change it. But some things can never change I guess.

      We all went upstairs and started to play the iconic Truth or Dare.

      "Dex, truth or dare?" Sophie asked. She smiled slightly and flipped her blond hair.

      "Dare." He said, tearing a hand through his hair. I smirked, wondering what Foster had in mind.

      "I dare you to kiss Biana!" She practically screamed. She burst out laughing and I had to slap my hand over her mouth.

      "Don't mind if I do!" He laughed. Biana turned red and puckered her soft pale lips. Their lips touched for a second before they peeled away. They both took a deep breath.

      "Keefe, truth or dare?" Dex asked me.

      "Truth." I said confidently.

      "Is it true that you-" He started. But Tam came running through the doors, cutting him off.

      "Sorry I'm late! Got caught up at Elwin's. What are we doing?" He asked. His hair still unrecognizable.

      "Oh hey Tam. Dex was just about to make me spill the beans." I said. It seemed easier to get along with Tam. I guess they never banished Linh, because he didn't rebel against his parents and melted his pendant.

      What if there was no Linh?

      "Hey, where Linh?" I asked. Hoping, just hoping she would exist. I didn't have a crush on her, it's just things wouldn't be the same.

      "Oh she's been at the sanctuary. She's been teaching some sort of animal water class." Tam said, sitting criss-cross next to Biana.

      I sighed and Dex continued. "So Keefeeeeeeee… Is it true that you like Biana?" Dex said, scrunching his eyebrows.

      "NO! WHAT? NO I LIKE... Another girl." I said, stopping and looking at Foster.

      The setting sun reflected off oh her perfect blond hair. Her smile was soft and warming and made me feel-

      "WOOO HOO! Keefe! You okay?" Fitz asked. I realized I blanked out for a moment.

      "Oh what? Sorry. Uhhhh Foster! Truth or Dare?" I asked. I hoped for truth.

      Pleaseee be truthhhh

      "Truth." She answered. YES!

      "Who's your crush?" I asked. PLEASE BE MEEEEEEEEEEEE

      "You silly!" She laughed. But then she stopped. "But if not you, then Fitz." She smiled.

      "Um, Keefe, you.. You're fading.." Biana said, pointing to my arm.

      The arm I could see right through.

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    • AH!!! CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BUT SOPHIE LIKES KEEFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • KEEFE!!!! Stop fading this instant! That's an order!

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    • But he didn't light leap? I'm confused. Sokeefe rules!, she broke up with the keefe in that demension. TeamKeefe12 you should have keefe dare Tam to die his bangs to silver.

      - Midnight Moonlark 

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    • Vice Pres. of the Keefe Fan Club wrote:
      162.231.215.3 wrote:
      Vice Pres. of the Keefe Fan Club wrote:
      162.231.215.3 wrote:
      wait, do the elfs in the demintion ( sorry i can't spell) keefe is in all have  brown eyes or something? By the way this is AMAZING!! A little feedback though, maybe do more from Keefes POV, I feel like most of it is in sophies

      - Midnight Moonlark

      I'm not the author for this fanfic, but maybe I can answer your brown eyes question. But I'm thinking two different ways that you meant the question, so is it okay if you reword that question? Sorry if that's sounds rude.
      No it's not rude at all, So in keefes POV it said she had blue eyes and was always the odd one out. Does that mean that Green or brown is the standrard eye color in that dimension?
      It means that blue eyes is the standard. 

      Thanks!

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    • Sophie POV

      We got back to the restaurant, and they all asked where we went.

      "To the bathroom....?" Jolie said, twisting her hair. She chewed her fingernails.

      "Well, okay then..." Grady said with a perplexed look on his face. The waiter mentioned for us to follow her.

      We followed her to the main center of the restaurant, which had an incredibly large chandelier in the middle, with floor to ceiling windows. The tables were all set with glass goblets and fancy china plates. One large flower pot sat in the middle of the table, with beautiful flowers in them.

      "Jolie?" I transmitted. Thankfully my telepathy was strong.

      "Yes?" Jolie thought. She took a fine bite of her dinner.

      "Come to my dorm for a sleepover. We need to get home, and I know just how to do it." I transmitted.

      " I have my own house. It would make more sense if you came to my house. And we won't have to worry about anyone disturbing us." She said, looking at me and smiling.

      "Oh right, I blushed.

      Oraile looked at me strangely. "Why aren't you eating your food? You love starkflower stew!"

      "Oh right." I said, taking a spoonful and diving in. This was not anything like Calla's.

      ~ ~ ~ ~~ ~ ~~ ~ ~~ ~

      "Let's go home." I said, grabbing Jolie's hand. She smiled and began to pour about a dozen vials on the ground. As she added the last drop of cambio, a large void opened up in front of her eyes. The swirling colors pulled her in.

      "I can't believe I'm doing this." She said, taking a deep breath and stepping into the void.

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    • oh that was  me

      - Midnight Moonlark

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    • AHH I LOVE IT!!!

      .   *GASP*

      What if the KOTLC dimension is the only one in which SoKeefe doesn't happen?

      (dying inside)

      -SoKeefe4life

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    • please post more i love this

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    • 162.231.215.3 wrote:
      oh that was  me

      - Midnight Moonlark

      Ignore this comment please,no idea what happened I probaly meant to post it on another thread

      - Midnight Moonlark

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    • Also Please post more!!!

      -Midnight Moonlark

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    • THIS IS THE BEST THING EVER!!

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    • I READ IT AT LIKE MIDNIGHT CAUSE I WAS BORED!!

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    • i think i might be the only boy on the entire fandom.XD



      -keefeisthebest

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    • what if they like go somewhere really wierd like a different planet instead. Then they find that the neverseen are using the planet as a base?



      -keefisthebest

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    • 204.113.253.48 wrote:
      what if they like go somewhere really wierd like a different planet instead. Then they find that the neverseen are using the planet as a base?


      -keefisthebest

      That would be cool - Midnight Moonlark

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    • 204.113.253.48 wrote:
      i think i might be the only boy on the entire fandom.XD


      -keefeisthebest

      If you're looking for another boy, LetsOutwardChannelFitz is a boy.

      That's the only other Fandom boy I know of besides you...

      -SoKeefe4life

      (*~Lizzie~*)

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    • Chapter 14

      "Keefe, your fading!" Fitz jumped up while Biana started pacing. Sophie hailed Elwin right away.

      "I just need some fade fuel!" I said, wigging my arm.

      Tam ran downstairs, and came back a moment later with fade fuel. My arm came back into view.

      "See, all good!" I said, flexing my arm, which was now back to full view. Sophie let out a sigh of relief. "Thanks for the fade fuel bang- I mean Tam." I said.

      Bangs Boy, didn't have bangs... I got an idea.

      "Hey Tam, truth or dare?" I asked. Please pick dare

      "Dare. Duh." He said, rolling his eyes. I smirked a little bit.

      "Let me give your hair a makeover." I said. Tam gasped.

      "Fine."

      And so the makeover began! I felt as if I were doing an elite surgery, carefully taking every piece and dying it silver.

      I smirked at my work. "Is it over? How bad is it?" Tam asked. He reached up to touch his hair and I slapped his hand.

      Biana held a mirror in front of his face and he sqealed like a little girl.

      "OHMYGOSHITSSOAWESOME- I mean, nice." He said, trying to keep a straight face.

      "Your welcome." I said, straightining my collar.

      About half an hour later, we decided to play spin the bottle. Of course.

      I spun The lushberry juice bottle a little bit, and it landed on Biana.

      "Mostly on the cheek." I said, pointing to my lava face. She quickly kissed my cheek. And glanced at Dex, who was currently staring into space.

      Biana got to spin the bottle next, and it landed on Dex. Dex glanced down for a second, realizing where the bottle had landed.

      Dex shrugged and Biana kissed him.

      And it got weird.

      Lets skip the narration on this part, shall we? Our poor eyes...

      "Well that was..." I said, dragging a hand through my hair.

      Dex's face had now officaly become a tomato. Biana... was in her own little world.

      "I'm tired." I said, plopping down on the mattress. Fitz was giving Dex a death glare.

      "Same." Sophie said. She plopped down next to me.

      After about 30 minutes we were all asleep, soundly snoring as the night went on.

      I kept the fade fuel by my bed, just in case.

      Tommorow, I was going home.

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    • That was short, but hopefully you enjoyed it. ;)

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    • HH! OMG! XD That was amazing!!!!!!

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    • That was good! Do you think you could do the next part within this week? I don't want to rush you, I'm just really excitited for the next chapter!!!

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    • I ENJOYED IT SO MUCH KEEFE BEING NICE TO BANGS BOY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • SOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • 152.26.177.33 wrote:
      204.113.253.48 wrote:
      i think i might be the only boy on the entire fandom.XD


      -keefeisthebest

      If you're looking for another boy, LetsOutwardChannelFitz is a boy.

      That's the only other Fandom boy I know of besides you...

      -SoKeefe4life

      (*~Lizzie~*)

      there are more boys in the fandom

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    • Yeah, ik, but they're the only two that I know of.

      -SoKeefe4life

      (*~Lizzie~*)

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    • 152.26.177.33 wrote:
      AHH I LOVE IT!!!

      .   *GASP*

      What if the KOTLC dimension is the only one in which SoKeefe doesn't happen?

      (dying inside)

      -SoKeefe4life

      I just reread this and saw my own comment, and it made me cry.

      -SoKeefe4life

      (*~Lizzie~*)

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    • SoKeefe Rules! wrote:
      152.26.177.33 wrote:
      204.113.253.48 wrote:
      i think i might be the only boy on the entire fandom.XD


      -keefeisthebest

      If you're looking for another boy, LetsOutwardChannelFitz is a boy.

      That's the only other Fandom boy I know of besides you...

      -SoKeefe4life

      (*~Lizzie~*)

      there are more boys in the fandom

      I made my little brother read KOTLC, hes only on book 2. But he already discovered fandom he signs off with KeefeistheBest21 or 12, but I don't think he knows that someone else has that username.

      -Mindnight Moonlark

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    • Hey guys! I want to let y'all know that this is the last part, because I am cutting off all fan-fictions and short stories, except this one, because it seems you guys actually like this one lol

      Lets start

      Going Home

      Part 15

      3rd POV

      "I don't know what'll happen next, but I know I'll still be here, just not the same person." Keefe said with a slight smirk. "He's probably not as cool as me, since, ya know, I'm Keefe."

      "No one is as cool as you Keefe. You and the other you." Biana said, nudging me.

      "Hey, don't forget about me! I'm the one that's going to get you home!" He said, holding up a small gadget.

      "Of course. I'll miss all of you, and don't worry, I'll tell you guys from my dimension about you. Dex will be surprised."

      Dex smiled. "Lets get you home." He placed the gadget down, making sure everyone was far away before he pressed the button. The void opened up, all colors swirling around.

      "I'll see you all soon. And, Bangs Boy?" Keefe said, turning to face Tam. "Tell Linh I said hi."

      "Course. And uh... Thanks for the bangs. They aren't half-bad." He smirked.

      "Duh. I am the master of good hair."

      Everyone laughed.

      "We'll miss you, Keefe." Sophie said, stepping out. She breathed heavy and sighed.

      "I love you. Both of you. I just wanted to tell you that before I go." Keefe hugged Sophie.

      "WAIT!" Fitz said, tripping out. Keefe pulled away from Sophie. Fitz shook Keefe's hand. "It was nice meeting you. I think this Keefe is better than the other Keefe."

      "It was nice meeting you too. Now I really got to go guys, everyone is missing me!" Keefe smirked one last time.

      "Bye! WE'LL MISS YOU!" Everyone said, waving as Keefe stepped into the void.

      The right orb was sitting on the table. Keefe picked it up, and rubbed it. Just like he did before.

      And before he knew it, he was back home.

      ~~

      "Well that just happened." Keefe said to Sophie. He had just landed in the room he left. Sophie was pacing. She glanced up at Keefe.

      She kicked his shins.

      "OW. What was that for, Foster?!" Keefe said, limping.

      "FOR LEAVING ME! I WAS LEFT IN AN ALTERNATE UNIVERSE, WHERE YOU WERE GOING TO LIVE WITH THE ORGES! MARELLA WAS YOUR SISTER, AND LOTS OF OTHER STUFF." Sophie rambled. She sighed.

      "Soo what your saying is, you missed me?"

      "Of course I missed you! I can't live without you!"

      Keefe's eyes glinted.

      Sophie starred.

      "I- I can't. live. without. you." Sophie said, looking into his eyes.

      The same glint was there.

      "Me either Foster, me either. I love you, Foster." Keefe said wrapping his arms around her.

      "Keefe, I have something to tell you."

      "Put a sock in it, Foster." He said, leaning towards her.

      Sophie leaned in as well, and their lips touched.

      It was much better than the great Dexphie kiss, more... Natural.. Inviting.

      "Keefe I-" Sophie said, pulling away.

      Keefe smiled and hugged her. "What is it?"

      "Jolie's alive."

      Keefe pulled away faster than you can say Sokeefe.

      "SHE'S ALIVE?!"

      ~~

      "Are you sure my parents will forgive me?" Jolie said. They were on the steps. Keefe was on Sophie's right side, and Jolie on her left.

      "You have no idea..." Sophie said, knocking on Havenfield's door. Jolie bit her lip.

      "Surprise?" Jolie said as Edaline and Grady opened the door.

      They both passed out.

      ~~

      "Jolie..? Your ALIVE! MY DAUGHTER IS ALIVE!!" Grady said, wrapping their arms around Jolie. Tears streamed down their faces as the squashed the life out of her. Jolie didn't seem to mind.

      "But how..?" Edaline said between sobs.

      "It's a long story, but all that matters is I'm here now. Alive and well." Jolie said, tears pooling under her eyelids.

      "It's all that matters." Grady said. He kissed her cheeks, not letting go of her.

      "All that matters is we have each other." Sophie said, looking at Keefe.

      "Ditto to that Foster." Keefe smirked.

      THE ALTERNATE

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    • Awwwwwwwwwwwwww. So sweet! Also, was that the end of the fanfic?

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    • Awwwwww.... 

      This is really sweet!

      I assume that's the end? 

      -#becauseKeefe

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    • Awwwwwwwwwwwww

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    • Awwwwwwww! that was sooo good!!!!!!!!

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    • awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

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    • AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!! This was awesome!!!!!!!!! 

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    • EKK! it's so amazing 

      - Midnight  Moonlark

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    • Thanks guys!

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    • I wish there was more it’s so good.

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    • Amazing!!!

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      No spamming plz
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    • Just do a collapsible to save space

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    • A FANDOM user
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