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    Fire

    Water

    Wind

    Nature

    Light

    Darkness

    Power...

    Control, control as my grasp to hold on

    Control

    Control

    Don't lose control.....hold on to reality 

    For my friend, my family, the black swan, 

    For Keefe

    I am no longer a good little moonlark.

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    • Chapter-One 



      The glittering cache in Oralie's hand, the pink stripped across. 

      "how do we open it?" Sophie snapped

      "I don't know," replied Oralie

      Of course Councillor lying-curls would not know, of course she would give false hope, its not like she cared! Sophie could not take it anymore she wanted to run, run to the end of the world.

      "Sophie, wait!" Oralie grabbed her wrist but quickly let go.

      "I understand why keefe says your emotions are so strong." She froze, all the thoughts and memories flooded in to quick to stop it. She tried to hold it all back but she couldn't, she dropped to her knees in tears. As much as she wanted to resist she cried, cried becauseof Keefe, because of Kenric, because of Forkle. Oralie crept and hesitantly hugged her, she knew it was wrong but it felt...nice?

      "Shh....it's ok." Oralie hugged her and gave her a tight squeeze as Sophie cried into her dress trying to choke back the sobs. Oralie stroked her back and told her "I will always be here" as she drifted off too sleep.

      She awoke to the sound of soft goblin feet creeping into her room,

      "Good your alive." Sandor said sarcastically

      I went for the pillows and grabbed something furry, before I realised it iggy was flying at Sandor's head! Sandor struggled to get the ice blue puff ball off his face (fav iggy color *wink wink*)

      "HAHAHAHAHA" as a familiar Ogre dropped to the ground laughing,

      "Ro?!" Sophie exclaimed as she shot up from her bed.

      "The one and only." She said between laughs. Behind her she saw a a familiar ruckle-berry face.

      "Mr.Forkle?!" She said as she hurried to get iggy.

      "Sandor may I have a word," Mr.Forkle asked, Sandor walked out mumbling something about elf's and their pets.

      "Mr.Forkle? why is Ro here and-" 

      "I suspected you would ask questions as well as why you are not at school." as he interrupted 

      "WAIT WHAT?! WHAT TIME IS IT?!" as she scurried across the room to a clock but was stopped.

      "Sophie, sit down." He said as he sat on her bed,

      "Ok...what is it?" as she sat down on her bed.

      "Well, I was wondering how you were doing since Oralie-" Sophie cringed at the name, " Has been concerned about your mental health as well as the rest of the group, so you are all on a one week leave from school." Sophie was very un-sure of what to respond,

      "Thank you.."

      "To quote Mr.Vacker 'no reason to worry'," just as he was getting up to leave,

      "Wait!....Mr.Forkle? is there a way for me..to get a new ability?"

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    • QUESTION MARK???????

      Does she want one, or is she susoecting she has another...?

      ~Eleda

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    • Wait and see :)

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    • YAS I need another book 9 fanfic

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    • POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!PLZ!!!!!!!!!

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    • YAS

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    • Chapter-Two

      After Forkle had left, she waited till the afternoon to alert the Council,  she hailed Team Valient as well as Fitz, Tam, Linh and Biana. She got ready and headed down stairs to talk to have breakfast and tell Grady and Edaline, right as she was going down, she saw Ro.

      "Ro?"

      "Save it blondie, Lord Hunky-hair may be in a coma but he would sure be pissed if I left Miss Oblivious alone to wreck havock."

      Sandor gave a high pitched sigh

      "What about the other gaurds?"

      "Well, we needed another anyway since Tarina and Nubitit..."

      Her mind flashed to Keefe...

      "Flori?"

      "Yes, Miss.Foster?" Replied the green-toothed gnome,

      "Can you tell Grady and Edaline that I am going to see Keefe?"

      "Of course." as she left the room, she garbbed everyones hand and stepped into the light.

      Sophie the familar surrondings of the healing centre that would before scare her, gave her a feeling of comfort..then she saw Keefe, his pale face and messy hair..

      "Keefe!"

      "KEEFE!" she transmitted

      "Well, thought it was a matter of time before you would come," said Elwin

      Sophie sat at the foot of his cot "Well, he saved us after all...."

      "Yeah.." She turned to see a familiar silver bangs,

      "I-I tried to...wake him..." said Tam

      "WAIT WAIT! DID BANG'S BOY COME TO HELP LORD HUNKY-HAIR?!"

      Tam muttered under his breath and before she could say anything he stepped into a beam of light,

      "Is he getting better?" Sophie asked

      "Well, he is stable, do you mind watching him while I run to Slurps and Burps really quick?"

      "Sure," as she gave him as small smile.

      "Alright, be back soon" as he whisked into the light. Sandor and Ro took places around the room as Sophie sat on the cot next to Keefe sending him warmth and happy memories....she would wake him up...she would, soon she drifted off to sleep, she would need it.

      Hours Passed

      "SOPHIE! WE HAVE TO GO!" yelled Bo, how did Ro and Bo even be in the same room? she pushed that thought away and started to leave as she saw a note with familiar loopy handwriting.

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    • Ooooo this is good

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    • PLZ POST MORE!!!!!!!! CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!

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    • Chapter-Three




      You tell me about Keefe and I tell you about Stellarlune.



      Cave 1:00am,



      Lady Giesla.

      Sophie tucked the note in her pocket and grabbed her home crystal. 

      "What took you so long?" Ro asked

      "Just wanted to say bye," Sophie replied as Ro gave her the 'she's so oblivious look' Sophie rolled her eyes as Bo mumbled something about Ro medling in other people's buisness.

      "HEY! Everything is my buisness!" as she shot Bo a death glare, 

      "Let's go, don't want to be late" Sandor said while grinding his teeth, they held hands and stepped into the light.

      They glittered into Havenfield, as Sophie saw all twelve Councillors, the Collective, her friends and of course, Councilor not-her-mom, then she realised what happened, how did she end up in her room this morning, before she could think, Mr.Forkle's voice filled her head.

      'I understand you want to know how and why, if I tell you can you focus on seeing if you can get a new ability, because if I don't tell you, your going to fixate on it.' transmitted Forkle

      Sophie, nodded every so slightly,

      'I suppose you were tired on what had just hapened and fell asleep, she took you back inside.'

      that was not what she was expecting but I guess it made sense, she felt a sense of comfort knowing the Oralie cared for her in a way. She shoved those thoughts to the back of her mind...for now.

      "So, we ready to get started?" Councilor Emery asked

      "I suppose so, Sophie, is there anywhere specific you would like to be?" Mr.Forkle said

      "Calla's Tree" Sophie replied as Edaline conjuered up her pillows and blankets

      Sophie sat down next to Edaline and said "I am ready."

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    • This is sooo good!!! Plz post more!!!!

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    • please don't curse

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    • Ready for what? A new ability? Also, we have the same username, except I spell mine a bit different.

      ~Lady Fos-Boss

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    • Panakes pancakes wrote:
      please don't curse

      ??????????????????????????where's the curse????????

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    • I was going to say that, Where??????????????

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    • Panakes pancakes wrote:
      please don't curse

      I am sorry if I offended you but to clarify were did I curse?

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    • Chapter-Four 

      Sophie felt overwhelmed, she felt hot and cold, she felt numb and confused. There was all and nothing and that's when it happened, she felt light, darkness, water, fire and most of all power....thats when Sophie passed out. She heard words and she felt the world collapse on her,she could not hear everything but she heard bits and pieces.

      "I don't.....ability.......wake's up.....we will......find out..."  said Mr.Forkle, 

      "Be okay?" Edaline asked

      "How.....abilities?....more...than...one?" asked Councilor Terik

      "I don't....." said Mr.Forkle

      That when everything went black.

      She awoke to the blissfulness of the Panakes, she got up and saw a familiar ruckle-berry figure sitting by the tree.

      "You kids always take so long to wake up," Said Mr.Forkle

      "What..happened?"

      "You Manifested..."

      "Manifested what?"

      "Well I wanted to tell everybody at once, so we have to meet them at Lovern (Councillor's Office)  in a couple minutes."

      Before he could finish, Sophie raced into Havenfield to get ready.

      "Ready to go," She said as she grabbed Mr.Forkle's hand and Sandor's.

      Mr.Forkle held the crystal up to the light as they were whisked away.

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    • Chapter-Five

      They arrived in an unknown Councilor's office but based on the pink chairs and pink chandelier, it was Oralie's, she could visably see that she was not the only one uncomfortable, as Councilor Bronte mumbled something about being allergic to pink.Sophie sat down next to Biana, as Biana grabbed her hand and said,

      "Don't stress, it's going to be okay, no reason to worry." she said as she channelled her inner Alden, before she could reply everyone gasped.

      "Um...what's wrong?" Sophie asked nervously

      "YOUR A VANISHER!" Shouted Tam and Fitz

      "HA! YOU TOO OWE ME TWENTY LUSTERS!" Biana shouted back, everyone continued to shout until,

      "EVERYONE SETTLE DOWN!" yelled Mr.Forkle, he mumbled something about you kids as we settled down.

      "Sophie's new ability, is not really a vanisher, it's kind of related to her enhancing, but I think she might be a Absorber." said Mr.Forkle

      "WHAT! THERE HAS NOT BEEN A ABSORBER SINCE I WAS IN SCHOOL AND HE DIED A LONG TIME AGO!" shouted Councilor Bronte,

      "Yes, I understand that bu-" Mr.Forkle started

      "Wait, what's an Absorber?" asked Blur

      "It mean's she can mirror abilities by touch as well as being able to take and give them out." said Mr.Forkle

      "Does that mean she can combine abilities?" asked Dex

      "It's possible." Mr.Forkle said which realised a trigger of gasps and questions about ability session's to having her leave Foxfire.

      "How about we do alternate ability session's?" asked Councilor Alina

      "What about her inflicting?" said Councilor Bronte

      "What about her Telepathy?" said Fitz and Tiergen

      "I would say she is skilled enough to drop Telepathy," replied Councilor Emery which put a chorus of yes's through out the room.

      "It's settled, now, Sophie, I would like you to go off and work with your friends on your new abilit-" Mr.Forkle asked

      "I can-erm...I am a bit tired maybe another time?"

      "Okay?"

      Sophie was already out the door as she grabbed Sandor's hand and stepped into the light, before Sandor could ask, Sophie put all her channeling into action and headed for the caves.

       

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    • That was soo good!!! I like the idea of a absorber.

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    • I got it from the idea another thread, when someone metioned a mirror ability.

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    • I thin kthe ability is genius. These storys are good please keep writing. But it is a little choppy some sentences in my opinion need some clarafication. Please dont take offense. They are good

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    • I love the advice, yes this is me I am just writing from my phone. I would never say no to advice :).

      Thanks so much <3

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    • That’s so good!

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    • that was soooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooooooodddddddddddddddddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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    • Chapter-Six

      Sophie managed to get around the gate right before Sandor got there.

      "I am sorry Sando-" Sophie said

      "SOPHIE! OPEN THIS UP RIGHT NOW!" Sandor yelled

      "This is the only way to help Keefe! I am sorry...I have to go.." Sophie turned away as Sandor banged on the gate. She stepped deeper into the cave reliving the time she was kidnapped, the smell of the sweet drug, then she realised that was not her memory....



      Sophie thrased her arms and legs wildly as big hands grabbed her from behind, she managed to grab a throwing star from her pocket and stab him in the eye but before she could turn she felt dizzy as pain shot through her head, she fell to the floor, paralyzed.

      "Well, well, well, Sophie, nice to see you again, maybe this time you will stay captured." Gethen said from the darkness, but before Sophie did anything else she pressed her panic switch and transmitted to the only person nearby.

      Silveny! HELP BAD PEOPLE!

      SOPHIE HELP SOPHIE HELP

      Get help

      FRIEND HELP FRIEND HELP

      "No transmitting little moonlark.." Gethen said before she could respond, the drug filled her sense's and clouded her vision....she was kidnapped...



      Again.

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    • Chapter-Seven

      She woke up in a glass room with people dressed in black coats with white eye's on the sleeve, her head hurt, her head felt cloudy. 

      "WHAT DO YOU WANT!" yelled Sophie

      "What I want?" Lady Giesle said while emerging out of the shadows " I want to know about Keefe, and I thought if we are getting information out of a little moonlark might as well take advantage." Sophie felt a jolting pain shock her body from top to bottom.

      "WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME!?" Sophie yelled back

      "Don't look at me, this was all Vespera's idea." said Gethen said with his hand's up,

      "It was both our idea." corrected Lady Gisela

      "Well, get to it." an unkown voice said

      Sophie used all her energy and threw her arms at the glass, while the glass shattered a little bit, but it miraculasoly just fixed it's self.

      "What the..." Sophie said as she stared at the glass.

      "Pretty cool, right anyway, let's make a show for the viewer's." Responded Vespara

      Viewer's? Sophie's head spun with thoughts and ideas, before she could even have a clue or idea, she was shocked head to toe.

      "AHHHH!" Sophie let out and ear piercing scream,

      "Hahaha" Laughed Lady Gisela

      "You know..when my little shadow pet was here I had him borrow so" she pulls out a dark vial with swirling shadows surronding it "I wanted to see if a little moonlark could react to a little shadowflux" said Lady Gisela

      Sophie did not know what to do, she was going to transmit to Mr.Forkle but her forced bounced back on her and left her with a throbbing headache.

      "Like it? I designed it myself, its bounces all mental energy back at you." said Vespera

      Sophie gathered all her anger and shot it out, but again it bounced back.

      "Oh yeah, it also blocks inflicting." Vespera turned to another Neverseen member "Turn up the charge" Light shot out a hit Sophie, all she could feel is pain, pain and more pain.

      Sophie let out an ear splitting scream as Vespera laughed.

      "Sera now!" shouted Gethen

      A bright crown spawned on her head, she knew that light from Lumenaria, the same light.....

      "FINA, DRIZZLE GO!" Light scattered the room as it hit the shadow flux, rainbow blew out the room as cold sticky liquid covered her head to toe.

      Then Darkness, Cold, Darkness.

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    • I like that idea! But I think (if this was a book nine fanfic) ***spoilers***



      it could be Keefe new ability!

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    • THAT WAS SOO GOOD!!!!

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    • 199.216.82.18 wrote:
      I like that idea! But I think (if this was a book nine fanfic) ***spoilers***


      it could be Keefe new ability!

      I am not sure if I want it to be a book 9 Fanfic or 8.5 haha

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    • Chapter-Eight

      Sophie awoke to a feeling of pulsing energy around her as she felt the everything, every little detail in the room, she felt the pulsing energy in the ground and knew she was going to escape, Sophie was going to make it out. She heard a noise and pertended to be asleep, she looked down and realized head to toe she had cuts, brusises that she did not remeber getting, the worst was he stomach, it was bleeding so much they must have stabbed her, but she did not feel pain no matter how hard she tried she never felt pain, maybe it was the adrenaline or the panic but she knew she getting out of there. Sophie concentred at plannting a seed, like with the splotcher's and just like that the glass around her shattered, Sophie managed to run before it formed back, she needed to find a way out. She was hit with a stabbing pain in her back, all of a sudden her attacker was limp on the ground as his body contorted in ways it should no be possible, in fact everyone around her was suffering the same, she had to take the chance to run to teleport, to get out! but she could not teleport through anything solid...she had a feeling not a gut feeling but something told her to listen to the pulsing energy feel, channel it ,use it, Just like that branches burst out of the floor. It tangled around her and pulled her under...the trees talked to her...she just told them..take me to somewhere safe.....minutes passed and she was in a forest, energy lost and depleted she used the last of her mental energy to transmit as the pain hit her from everywhere, she transmitted to everyone she knew....

      "Swan Song.."

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      PLZ POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • OMG OMG MOORE

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    • Chapter-Nine

      The world blended into colors as she was bleeding on the grass, she had to hold on.....hold on. She heard noises, foot steps! someone was here! she could barely open them,

      "Hold on..Sophie, it's going to be ok..." said Mr.Forkle as he broke down in tears,

      "I-i am....sorry" she said as she faded into the dark.

      She did not know how long it had been,

      She just waited 

      and waited till the day she would wake up. That day came, the light hit her eyes sharp and quick when she saw a familiar physician wearing Yeti's all over his pj's,

      "Sophie....I thought we were going to lose you, we had scheduled a planting for tomorrow but then I heard tharsing and here you are..." Elwin said with tears in his eye,

      "Thanks for saving me," Sophie said while giving him a hug.

      "Well, also congratulations!" Elwin said 

      "For what?"

      "Manifesting another ability, the Neverseen experimented on you for about two weeks and all we could do was watch.."

      "Watch?"

      "They installed camera's so we could see everything they were doing to you, you fought back a lot, but still they just kept torturing you and..." His voice broke as he sat down in tears,

      "It's ok Elwin, I am here now." She said with a smile as Elwin wiped his eyes,

      "Well, you had some stab wounds and bad gashs but other wise you were ok,"

      "What did I manifest?"

      "Not sure,"

      "UGH, WHY DO I HAVE TO HAVE SO MANY ABILITIES!" Sophie yelled

      "Anyway, I should get telling your fam-"

      "I actually have an idea.." she leaned in to tell Elwin.

      She hid behind a tree as everyone came into wanderling woods, so many people were there, she looked at Edaline's puffy red eye, Grady's dark circles even her bodygaurds were there, seeing Sandor made her especially sad, even looking at her friends made her upset from linh's teary eye's to Fitz kicking the ground. Then she saw, she saw the Councillor's, when she saw Bronte her heart broke a little, his teary eye's, Oralie's dark circles, like she actually cared...maybe she did. She shoved those thoughts to the back of her head as they started the annoucements.

      "We are here today to celebrate the life of Sophie Elizabeth Ruewen-"

      "You know," Sophie said while coming out from behind a tree "Might want to through a funeral when I am actually dead," the room went silent as they all stared at her, some people gasped, Edaline fainted, most of all she saw the hope in everyone's eye's. 

      "What? you guys look like you have seen a ghost." Sophie said with a small chuckle and that's when Fitz stepped forward and gave her a big hug as everybody soon followed doing the same one by one till she got to a familiar boy with ice blue eyes.

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    • Yay!! I love this!!

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    • Chapter-Ten

      Sophie woke up in her room back at havenfield, she was confused how did she get here, one minute she was at her planting the next she was in her room. Sophie got changed and went outside when she ran it a seven-foot goblin.

      "SANDOR!" Sophie yelled as she gave him a big hug "I am sorry for running away that day..." she said as she pulled away.

      "It's ok, I am so glad your back, I felt annoyed then I saw you being kidnapped and silveny kicked down the gate, we fought them hard, caught two of them, but the other four took you and leaped away...." Sandor hugged her again and said "Very glad to have you back, we all missed you." 

      Sandor led her down to the living room were she was embraced by Edaline and Grady, 

      "We missed you so much kiddo," Grady said as he wiped his teary eyes

      "We thought we lost you," said Edaline through her muffled sobs.

      "I am here now..." She said as she smiled up, then she felt it again that pull from deep within her, the same one she felt that day.

      "Do you know where Flori is?" asked Sophie

      "Yeah, she's right out here." said Grady as he took her outside

      "Wait would you like some brea-" before edaline could finish Sophie had an urge to snap her finger's and then her breakfast was in her hand stunned all Sophie could say was.

      "I have breakfast right now." Sophie said 

      Edaline and Grady were speechless, Sophie went down to Calla's tree but before she could get there she was greeted by hyper alicorns,

      FRIEND SAFE FRIEND SAFE?

      SAFE

      TREATS FLY TREATS FLY?

      Not now Silveny,

      LATER LATER

      Ok

      Sophie walked up to the tree and saw Flori,

      "Sophie? your alive!" Flori said as she gave Sophie a hug,

      "Yeah," Sophie was confused wasen't Flori at the funeral,

      "I am sorry I couldn't come to your funeral....it was to sad for me to attend, so the gnomes and I were planning to do something on our own but here you are...." As she stared up at Sophie with her big gray eye,

      "I need your help..." Sophie said

      "With what?" She said while wiping her eyes

      "My new ability."

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    • That was AWSOME!!!!!!!!

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    • So awesome!!!! POST MORE! I am dying of suspense here! Is sophie a conjouror?

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    • No, she’s probably an absorber which is copying abilities I’ve seen the theory before

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    • BEST THING EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • Dasnowleopard wrote:
      No, she’s probably an absorber which is copying abilities I’ve seen the theory before

      Yeah, me too.

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    • Chapter-Eleven

      Flori looked at her with her big gray eyes and said

      "The absorber one? I dont see how I could help with that," Flori asked

      "No, not that one, when I was captured by the neverseen.." she had to pause to breathe just saying that brought so many memories, "They experimented on me and I manifested a new ability...as a Biokinetic" Sophie said her minds went to the vines ripping out of the floor to help her escape.

      "I would be honored." Flori said with a smile. She grabbed Sophie's palm and placed it on the grass, "Listen, feel the songs of the grass, listen deep below for the roots that were here before us, hear the cries and victories, channel it use it." after a couple seconds she felt it, she heard the songs, she felt it. Flori gasped and when Sophie opened her eyes she saw that she grew a flower in her hand.

      "I have never seen anything like it," said Flori "It's song it's yours" she said as tears began to fill Flori's eyes, "May I take it?"

      "Of course!" replied Sophie, it was probably time for her to get to Everglen, she knew Biana and Fitz would probably want to see her.

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      Sophie walked up to the door of Everglen as her stomach filled with butterflies and she noticed that when she got nervous so did the plants around her, leaves shrivled a little, flowers slightly wilted, the gnomes noticed too, she felt uncomfortable the way they started at her, they could sense it. She gathered up all her courage and knocked on the door, but before she could knock the door swung open and she saw a pair of teal eyes. 

      "SOPHIE!!" Fitz screamed as he picked her up and gave her a big hug, when Fitz let her out of his grasp she noticed that Grizel had looked a little different, not in style but in physic, she could not put her finger on it, she pushed those thoughts back for a little.

      "I missed you so much, Sophie!" Fitz said as he gave her another hug " I am sorry.. for what they did to you." Fitz said with tears in his eye's

      "It's ok, I am here now," She said 

      "Also! is it true your actually going to drop telepathy?"

      "I mean..I am not sure there is more I can learn." 

      "Make's sense, anyway I have to bring you in or else Biana is going to kill me." Fitz replied as he gestured his hand inside, she was immedietaly tackled by Biana

      " I MISSED YOU SO MUCH! I AM GOING TO MURDER FITZ FOR NOT TELLING ME! COOL PRANK AT THE WANDERLINGS!" Biana yelled as she hugged Sophie.

      "I missed you guys so much but what happened while I was....gone."Sophie asked

      "Honestly, everyone is trying to find a way to get you back, when you first were kidnapped Sandor was freaking out, we were trying to use the same method that the Black Swan used to find you and Dex. But then... We got a note form the Neverseen, a note with a human device I'm not sure what it was, but we'd be plugged it into something. then there was a video, it was of you in a cage, you were all beaten and bloodied up and sedated and they would come back to hurt you, everyone was crying you couldn't do anything but we were also impressed,  you resisted the torturing. They tried exposing you to so many terrible things, how did you stay resistant? after a while we didn't know what to do we were going to do, we were starting to lose hope, we had shifts for people to see what was going on in the video,  that's when you escaped. We all got the transmission 'Swan Song 'and we were so scared that you're going to die, all the telepaths pooled their energy and finally found you. When they found you, you had stopped breathing, you were dying. Then you went into a coma for almost 3 weeks, every now and then your heart would stop, as well as stopped  breathing, we had to have to keep you on so many machines and yes, machines we had to use a human one. Your disappearance and coma, took everyone really hard, Edaline and Grady, cut themselves off again ,I kind of sat in my room, FItz just broke a lot of stuff and his usual anger, my parents also kind of cut themselves off from us, Dex, Tam and Linh basically cut all ties with us, Councillor Bronte could never leave his castle because he lost control of his inflicting,  Councillor Oralie had to be kept on sedatives due to guilt, Mr.Forkle....he just stopped showing up, even as Magnate Leto. I'd say the worst was from Sandor, he couldn't even stay here anymore, he left to Gillingham with Grizel we thought it was a good idea, so she could help him.  Woltzer covered for both of us for the while and then Elwin said we could continue with the planting so we did it, Sandor finally came back for this and we were starting the proccedings and everybody saw you, but then you just passed out." Said Biana, Sophie had no words for what to say. She just ran over and hugged Sandor as she just muffled out an I am sorry,

      "Its ok, Sophie." said Sandor,

      Sophie pulled away when Biana gasped,

      "WHAT?!" Sophie yelled

      "Nothing, just you vanished." Biana said casually

      Sophie just rolled her eyes, she checked the time and realized she probably wanted to go see other friends, so she and Sandor teleported from Everglen to a very cold castle. Sophie knocked on the door to see a very dishevled Councillor Bronte, before Sophie could say anything he hugged her. BRONTE.HUGGED.HER. She had no idea what to react, she just hugged him back, after a while Councillor Bronte pulled away from the hug and excused himself, to maybe talk at a better time, just a she was about to leave she caught the glimpse of a puffy Councillor with golden ringlets, she knew she had to run, she grabbed Sandor and teleported leaving as quick as they came.  The arrived at Allvuterre, Sandor and Sophie walked to the familiar canteen near the tree houses to find the Collective,

      "Hi!" Sophie exclaimed as she sat down next to Mr.Forkle, but he looked at her and just ran away crying, she did not know what to do, she took off after him as he ran into a small gateway.

      "Mr.Forkle?" Sophie said as she looked around at the stone walls then she realised this must be were he lives,made sense. "Mr.Forkle?" She called again, looking back to make sure Sandor was still there. She saw him crying not as her next door neighbour but as her principle,

      "I am so sorry Sophie...I should have found you, I should have found you" Sophie had known this guilt so before anything else could happen that would drag him along a darker path she inflicted on him. Sending him waves of happy moments with him, when she hit him in the face with a pillow, when they talked when he was a beacon and when he rescued her in paris. Just like that he came back, Sophie decided to give him some space, she sent him more positive emotions and turned to leave.

      "I promised your father, I would take care of you.." Mr.Forkle said too low for Sophie to hear.

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      AND THIS IS SOOO GOOD!!!!!!

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    • Awesome! Is Forkle going to tell her who her father is?

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    • Chapter-Twelve

      Sophie went around and greeted her friends to let them know she was alive as she made her way back to Havenfield but before she could do anything, she was hailed by Councillor Bronte?

      "Hello Councillor Bront-"

      "SOPHIE! ITS ORALIE HER MIND BROKE!"

      Her imparter broke against the ground emotions bubbled within her,

      Guilt and more guilt,

      Was this her fault,

      Did she do this?

      She raced over to the glittery pink castle to find Councillor Bronte pacing around the room, Councillor Terik trying to calm her down and some other people she did not know.

      "How did this happen?" she suprised her self by the emotion in her voice,

      "We don't know," Councillor Bronte said his voice laced with worry, "After you leaped away, she collapsed, we called physicians unsure what went wrong but they had no clue what had happened, thats when Emery tried to enter her mind and found it...broken"

      Sophie tried to hold it together as much as she could,  but tears escaped her eyes, was she actually caring for the person who lied to her? let her almost be exiled?

      Sophie could not waste a minute, she dove into Oralie's mind, it was fragile, but Sophie was determind to bring it back, she sent happy emotions, but nothing worked, she tried sending every happy memory possible of her and silveny, her and her parents but thats when it got worse, what could she do? that's when Sophie found a nook. Not a normal one but this one was filled with her most important memories, but they were all of Sophie, the sad and happy memories filled her mind, when they first met, but Sophie's heart stopped when she found out Sophie was kidnapped again,the grief, the sadness, the anger, Sophie glanced at what looked like her and Sandor earlier that day stepping into a beam of light a looking away, Sophie needed to focus on a happy memory or else Oralie would probably be worse, she went to another memory that stuck out. When she made Sophie regent, brushing her hair, she felt proud. Proud of Sophie, knowing that she did that, Sophie knew exactly what to do, she may not like it but she knew it would fix Oralie.

      Sophie sen memories of them together, she sent the warmth and comfort she felt when Oralie escorted her through the point of purity, the warm fluffy feeling she got when Oralie dressed her up, the funny moment of Bronte coverd in glitter. She would send Love,

      The love of a mentor,

      Love of a protector,

      The love of a daughter,

      "I love you mom..." Sophie transmitted, and thats when the warmth turned into a flame.

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    • Chapter-Thirteen pt1

      Sophie let out a sigh of relief when Oralie came back, but when she left her mind, Sophie felt something, something new. It was the same pull as telepathy but it was strange, like human minds, constantly transimitting. She saw that Oralie was fine, she just needed some time, to let Oralie gather her thoughts. Sophie stood up to leave but Oralie hugged her? it felt, 

      Warm

      Kind

      She felt love, she also felt relief, gratitude. Sophie tried to pull away but what suprised her was that she hugged Oralie back.

      "Ahem, not to break up this..." Councillor Terik said as Oralie pulled away, 

      "I just wanted to thank her," Councillor Oralie responded

      "I should get going," Sophie said as she went outside,

      "So, is she ok?" Sandor asked

      "Yeah, we should get back home before dark," Sophie said as she pulled out her home crystal, they stepped in to the warm light. They arrived in Havenfield,

      "Miss me Foster?" that voice, Sophie's heart fluttered but not just that, she felt something else, that same pull she tried to understand she felt, excitement, happiness and....love?

      Did Keefe? NO! she tried to push those thoughts away, she missed him so much, did she love Keefe?

      "What's with the worry Foster?" Keefe asked as she turned around, she did not know what to say....

      "Keefe....I can feel your emotions...." Sophie responded, Keefe turned red, before she knew what was going on, she whipped around and kissed Keefe.

      She

      Just

      Kissed

      Keefe

      And

      He

      Kissed

      Her

      Back.

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    • Chapter-Thirteen pt 2

      Sophie pulled away to feel a range of emotions, 

      Anger

      Happy

      Proud

      Anticipation, wait these are not Keefe's emotions, she turned around to find a smiling Edaline, smug Ro, an angry Sandor and GRADY!?

      "KEEFE RUN!" Sophie said while pushing Keefe away from her,

      'Wait wh-" He noticed Grady, "Uhhh....Hi Mr.Ruewen." 

      "Your going to die boy,"

      Grady started to run after Keefe but he stopped in his tracks, 

      "...I can't move" Grady muttered

      "What?" Edaline asked

      "I CAN'T MOVE!" Grady yelled

      Keefe looked very sheepish as he said "That's my new ability......"

      "KEEFE! YOUR A MESMER!" Sophie screamed,

      "DID YOU MESMER MY DAUGHTER INTO KISSING YOU?!" Grady screamed back

      "N-no, she kissed me..." Keefe said turning red

      "SOPHIE!" Sandor yelled

      Sophie turned red and said "Keefe let him move,"

      "Wait what?"

      "Keefe."

      "Fine."

      Grady started to run again but vines trapped his feet to the floor.

      "Nope, you and Keefe are going to talk while Mom, Ro, Sandor and I go enjoy some mallowmelt."

      "SOPHIE! YOUR A BIOKINETIC? ALSO YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE ME HERE WITH THAT BOY!"

      "His name is Keefe," Keefe started to run away but she also trapped him to the ground face to face with Grady, "Get to talking," Sophie said as they started to walk inside

      "You owe me a dagger." Ro said while Sandor muttered a string of curse words,

      "Your father is going to kill you later," Edaline said

      "I know," Sophie responded with a wink.

      Later Keefe and Grady worked on some 'agreements' and then Keefe headed home.

      Sophie woke up the next day ready for her training at Everglen,

      "Sophie! get ready we have to go to Everglen!" Edaline said

      "Wait your coming too?" Sophie asked

      "Yes, and Grady is." Edaline responded,

      While Sophie was getting ready she felt a sick feeling in her stomach, she ran to the toilet and threw up, Sandor and the whole 'army of bodygaurds' barged in and there was a chorus of what's wrong, are you ok?'

      "I am fin-" Before Sophie could finish she threw up again, "I am fine, just was a little bit nauseous this morning." Sophie said

      "Would you like some nice tea or herbs?" Flori asked

      "Maybe later, we should get going to Everglen." Sophie said while trying to avoid Sandor's glare.

      She headed to the leap master and grabbed hands with everyone and they leaped off.

      "Here you are!" a crisp accent said

      "Hi Alden," said Edaline

      "Everyone is ready to get started." Alden said as he lead them to the back yard, he turned to Sophie and said "Don't push yourself too hard, we are focusing on six abilities a day and are listing how long you can hold them." Alden said she could still feel emotions, she did not realize it but she could still feel the pull.

      "Are there any Empath's here?"

      "No, why?"

      "Since, my umm...meeting with Councillor Oralie, I have been able to feel emotions."

      "How long was that?"

      "About 18 hours,"

      "Well, let's take note of that." He said while jotting off some notes, "You will also try to combine some abilities, but if thats tomorrow, no reason to worry." Sophie met with the first person,

      "Hey Biana!" Sophie said

      "Hey, you ready for this?" Biana asked

      "I will try..." Sophie grabbed Biana's hand and let it pass through her like an electrical current,

      "Am I invisble?" Sophie asked

      "Yu-Whoa! the plants just shriveled all around you!" said Biana

      "Oh yeah, watch this.." Sophie recalled what Flori said and she felt the earths calling as flowers grew around them.

      "WOW! YOUR A BIOKINETIC!" yelled Biana,

      "Yeah, found out just the other day."

      "Hey, your not invisible anymore." Sophie felt disappointment radiating off of her,

      "It's ok," Alden said " We all have our strengths." The next person was a Guster which she held onto for about two hours, then there was Blur which she only could phase for about 20 minutes, there was also conjuring with Edaline but she and Grady had to go back to Havenfield to help with the new T-Rex, so it ended early.

      "Well, so far your best is Empathy." said Alden, no suprise there, Sophie was about to say something but she threw up,

      "Sophie, your really not ok." Sandor said "I am taking you to Elwin." Before Sophie could protest, Sandor picked her up and dragged her to the leap master and said "Foxfire!".

      They arrived into the familiar office to be greeted by a physician covered in krakens,

      "Knew it was about time before you came back, Sophie." Elwin said not even looking up from his desk,

      "I was fine, Sandor just wanted to take me here." Sophie said while rolling her eye's

      "She has been throwing up all morning," Sandor said while shooting her another glare.

      "Well, sit down Sophie lets see what's the problem" Elwin said as Sophie sat down on one of the cots. He shined a bunch of different lights on her as his jaw dropped.

      "Y-you-r-r..." Elwin stuttered

      "SPIT IT OUT!" yelled Bo, she always forgets he is there,

      "Your...pregnant," Elwin said

      Everyone else yelled what except Sophie, she knew it and she knew who the father was.

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    • Chapter-Fourteen pt1

      "SOPHIE ELIZABETH-" Sandor started yelling

      "WAIT! just..listen...no I did not do what your thinking," Sophie said while trying not to turn red, "The Neverseen...experimented on me, I heard bits and pieces while I was in there like, 'A new legacy is in motion..and the word child and stellarlune. I had theorys of what they would did but I was unsure until now....and yes I know who the father is.."

      "Well, are you going to tell us?" Elwin asked

      "No....I think I want to keep it to myself and NO ONE I REPEAT NOBODY HERE TELLS ANYONE UNDERSTOOD?!" she said 

      "Fine." grumbled Sandor 

      "Sophie, would you like to go home for the day just to think about..it." said Flori

      "Ugh, I mean I am 16, how am I going to take care of a baby." Sophie said while picturing a mini her,

      "Let's head back to Havenfield and think about it." Flori replied

      "Yeah...lets head back." Sophie responded.

      The rest of the afternoon Sophie isolated herself from everybody, she just needed to think, I mean this child was experimented on who knows what could happen, Sophie let time pass as felt the pulse of the earth going through her, till she felt the tap on her shoulder.

      "Hey Foster, miss me?" She could feel his emotions as he felt hers so she needed to disguise them, 

      "Yeah just sad...I have been thinking about how much everyone went through when I was gone....when did you even wake up?"

      "Well...I woke up and Elwin started to give me medicine, as he was about to start filling me in on information but then Mr.Forkle came in carrying you, stabbed, beaten and all bloodied up. I was in tears wondering what had happened, it all went by so quickly and that's when I found out what happened, everything. Time passed....we thought...we thought you were going to die and then of course you know the rest." Sophie hugged Keefe and said,

      "I will never die on you and that is a promise,"

      "Ahem," said a Ruckle-berry figure from behind, "Sophie, I would like to talk to you..."

      "About what?" Sophie asked

      "Your father...." said Mr.Forkle

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    • Ooooh baby Sophie would be sooooo cute

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    • Chapter-Fourteen pt 2

      Mr.Forkle would arrive the next day at dawn, all she knew was it had something to do with her father, as if she had enough to think about.

      "Foster?" Keefe said, "Your zoning out you ok?" he said while grabbing her hand and sending her the blue breeze's.

      "Yeah, just thinking about what Mr.Forkle said..."

      "It is going to be okay...on a better note I was wondering if you wanted to go on a date?" he asked while turning red,

      "Does Grady know?" Sophie asked with a side eye,

      "He doesn't," Sophie whipped behind her to find Grady with some kind of bat,

      "I will allow it, but if you hurt her, make her angry or do anything to her," he leaned into and whispered into Keefe's ear, "Your a dead man...." then Grady slowly walked backward towards the house watching them the whole time.

      "Grady is intense," said Ro

      "He is just protective," Sandor said with a squeak, "Keefe if you hurt Sophie I w-" 

      "Take it easy, he is to much of a wimp," Ro commented

      "HEY!" Keefe yelled, "I am not a wimp."

      "Mhm" Ro said 

      Sophie, was thinking when an idea clicked in her head, 

      "Sandor, can I test one of my abilities on you? it won't hurt, promise."

      "Alright," Sandor said giving a little bit of a high-pitched grunt,

      Sophie imagined Sandor morphing into sombody else as she was absorbing his image,

      "Is it done?" Sandor asked his voice deeper than usual, Sophie opened her eyes and a loud booming laugh erupted out of Ro.

      "HAHAHAHA!" Ro said in between gasps for air, then she turned back to Keefe and laughed even harder.

      Sandor and Keefe swamped image's,

      "WHAT IS IT?!" Sandor/Keefe asked

      "Sandor...look in the mirror." Sophie said while burst out giggling, that when the both realised what had happened.

      "SOPHIE! TURN ME BACK!" Sandor yelled

      "COOL! I AM GIGANTOR!" Keefe said with a high pitch squeak, then he picked up Sandor.

      "KEEFE! BUT ME DOWN" Sandor commanded

      "NEVERRRR!" a high-pitched voice said, then they switched back,

      "Aww...I am back to me," Keefe said sadly,

      "Thank goodness," exclaimed Sandor

      "Lord Hunkyhair, time to head back to your house, your dad wanted to speak to you remember?" Ro said

      "Yeah, yeah, bye Sophie, pick you up on Friday?" Keefe said with a wink

      "Sure," Sophie said while Sandor groaned,

      Sophie spent the rest of the night practicing with Flori, and thinking about what was going to happen....

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      Sophie met Mr.Forkle at Stone house,

      "Sophie, today you ar going to meet your father..." Mr.Forkle said sadly, "You deserve to know...." he pulled out a blind fold and carefully wrapped it around Sophie's head, "I will take it off when you meet him..."

      Her emotions swarmed around inside of her,

      Excitement,

      Anticipation,

      Fear,

      Worry,

      Curiosity.

      When Mr.Forkle took off the blind fold, Sophie saw a tree, not just any tree a wanderling with the words enscribed, Kenric Fathdon.

      "This is your father...."

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    • AHHH!!! CLIFFHANGER!!!! the first part was really funny tho!!XD

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    • WHAAAAT? I just got caught back up... CRAZINESS!(And AMAZINGNESS!)

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    • OMG! Kenric is her father!?

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    • Two Councillors?!?!?

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    • I love this sooooo much!!!!!! But... chapter 14 pt 1 and pt 2 r the same... Either way, i dont care because it is AWESOME!!!!😃

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    • oops a glitch!

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    • Is there a different part 2 or are u just gonna go on to chapter 15?

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    • Chapter-Fifteen pt 1 (short I will finish off later)

      Sophie did not know what to feel, 

      Sad,

      Proud,

      Guilt......

      She ran out of the forest to the one place she knew she could feel safe, ignoring the way Sandor and Mr.Forkle called after her, she just kept running. Sophie knocked on the door, when the golden ringlet councillor opened the door.

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    • First of all this is a great Fanfiction and I really enjoy it. That being said, Sophie is acting more over the top and keefe - like (making up words don't judge) than herself. But I still love it

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    • LadyFossBoss wrote:
      Chapter-Fifteen pt 1 (short I will finish off later)

      Sophie did not know what to feel, 

      Sad,

      Proud,

      Guilt......

      She ran out of the forest to the one place she knew she could feel safe, ignoring the way Sandor and Mr.Forkle called after her, she just kept running. Sophie knocked on the door, when the golden ringlet councillor opened the door.

      I love it! Whena re you goign to finish the chapter?

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    • Chapter-Fifteen pt 2

      Sophie dropped to the floor, she could barely hold it together, how could Mr.Forkle not tell her before, it was her fault, her fault, Councillor Oralie lead her inside, Sophie knew Oralie could feel her emotions but Sophie was to distrust to care.

      "Sophie....what's wrong....?" Councillor Oralie asked, should she tell her, how would Oralie react? would she still..care about Sophie?

      "My...father...." Sophie said,

      "Well...you don't have to tell me..." Oralie started as she looked Sophie in the eyes, 

      "My...my father was....Kenric." those words hit the Councillor hard, the person she most trusted, the person she loved.....had a child,

      not just any child...

      Her child....

      Their child......

      Sophie was Kenric's, when Oralie looked at her she could see, she had his laugh, his smile and his positive personality, she could also see that...Sophie....was part her....Sophie. has her hair, her face, She had a child with the love of her life, and she did not know it until now. Sophie was shocked that Oralie hugged her, as tears came out of her blue eyes she said...

      "You always reminded me of him....he would be so proud....." Oralie said as she hugged Sophie harder, "You should get home...don't want your family to worry..." Oralie said with a fake smile...she did not know Sophie could feel her emotion's, Sophie did not know Oralie was reading her emotions. Right then Sophie grabbed the trash can and threw up.

      "Oh...dear....Sophie are you ok?" Oralie asked

      "Yes...I am fine...just in shock..." Sophie replied, but Oralie did not sense the same....

      She felt,

      Worry,

      Sadness,

      Pride,

      And

      Guilt,

      Sophie was lying.

      "Sophie, you should go and see Elwin..." Oralie said

      "I already did, he gave me some elixers for the Nausea," Sophie was telling the truth maybe there was no reason to worry, Sophie wentback home to think about everything that happened. Sophie arrived to an angry Sandor but Mr.Forkle convinced him to let her go unpunished just this once, after all she had more abilities training tomorrow. But what if all the switching abilities harmed the baby? Sophie had forgotten about the baby.....how was she going to tell everyone? Sophie looked in the mirror and saw the smallest bump, she cracked a tiny smile, the baby was starting to grow on her (literally). Sophie awoke, avoided the bodygaurds and her parents questions about her vomiting, she went outside to Flori to work on her training before heading to Everglen.

      "So...Flori what are we going to learn today?" Sophie asked

      "We are going to learn control..." Flori said, "You have to resist the pull of nature, don't you feel it?"

      Sophie did not want to admit it but she felt it every minute of the day.... "Ok," Sophie responded

      "I want you to focus on the pull and silence it....." Flori said

      They practiced and practiced till they had to go to Everglen were absorbing training was held,

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      "Sophie, today we are only working on two abilities, Shade and Pyrokinetics." Alden said, the last word made a shiver go down her spine...."Lets start with Shade,Tam?"

      Tam appeared out of thin air "Sophie, I want you to think dark all things dark." Tam said as Sophie grabbed his hand. Sophie felt pure darkness, she could feel the shadows of everybody around her, she could also feel some sort of darkness in everyone.

      "That's Shadow Vapor," Tam transmitted, "It's cool right?" Tam said out loud

      "Yeah..." Sophie said as a little pain shot up in her stomach, she whinced a bit,

      "You okay, Sophie?" Sandor asked

      "Perfectly fine." Sophie said while giving him a death stare. Sophie managed to control being a shade for about the rest of the day, soon being a shade was almost as good as her being an Empath. She came back the next day to see a familiar boy.

      "Hey, Foster!" Keefe exclaimed as he gave her a hug,

      "Hey, what are you doing here?" Sophie asked

      "I asked him to come here since fire can be a dangerous ability and you might need some calming." Alden said

      Sophie gulped as a blue breeze filled her mind,

      "No need to worry, Foster, I got you covered." Keefe said with a wink that made her blush like crazy, 

      "Is it okay if I watch?" Fitz asked

      "Ok, how dangerous is this going to be?" Sophie asked as she placed a hand on her knot of emotions,

      "Perfectly fine," Marella said, "You just have to be calm." Marella offered her hand to Sophie, Sophie unduere but took it, that when red covered her vision, not like inflicting but fire, a white hot blaze getting bigger and bigger. Sophie opened her eyes to see flames surrounding everybody as she was absorbed by them but not just any flames,



      Everblaze

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    • OOOOOOOOOOOOOOo

      MMMMMMMMMMMMM

      GGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

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    • OMG CLIFFHANGER UGH!! THIS IS AMAZINGNESS.

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    • OMG this is amazing!!!! How is eveyone such a great writer I suck at writing.

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    • OMG i love it! *squeals* When r u gonna post next? I must have MORE!!!!!!!

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    • Chapter-Sixteen pt 1 ;)

      Power,

      a longing, 

      Addiction

      Consumed by an ever building blaze.

      Sophie felt fear,

      Worry

      Guilt

      But most of all power. Sophie looked at herself and realised it was not her, her body was covered head to toe in fire, she needed to stop it but how? how could she extinguish herself. That's when she heard it, a voice.

      "Help..." the fire was talking to her? she could feel it, deep within her, surging through her veins.

      That's when the world went 

      Red.

      Sophie heard whispers, voices.

      "EVERBLAZE!"

      "HELP! HELP!"

      "SAVE SOPHIE!"

      "WE CAN'T LEAVE HER BEHIND!"

      "WE HAVE TO DO SOMETHING!"

      "SOPHIE!"

      "FIRE!"

      "CALL ELWIN!"

      "SOPHIE! PLEASE WAKE UP!"

      "ITS TOO CLOSE TO HAVENFEILD!"

      "EVACUATE EVERYONE!"

      Sophie could not stop, the flames were filled with desire. She had to stop the blaze, Sophie opened her eyes to see everyone around her surronded by flames, trees charred, white hot flames covered her head to toe, she was the Everblaze and she was going to stop the flames. 

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    • THANK YOU GUYS FOR ALL THE SUPPORT!!!!!!!!!!

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    • I WILL POST SOON! EVERY DAY I WILL TRY TO POST!

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    • AND WHILE WE ARE WAITING WE CAN DISCUSS BABY OUTCOMES 😁

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      Name:

      Gender:

      Ability(can be more than one but keep in mind the influence of abilities and stars she has been under):

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    • Name: Calla or Ellanor

      Gender: Female

      Ability(can be more than one but keep in mind the influence of abilities and stars she has been under): Transformer ( can transform into anything/ anyone ) and Beguliar.

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    • Are we giving them children

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    • AAH OMG SO GOOD!!!

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    • LadyFossBoss wrote:
      Sorry, my Uncle Andres caught the COVID, as well as online school, finishing right now.

      oh I'm sorry

      THIS IS SOO GOOD!!!

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    • its ok he is better now.

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    • MalinaEverfree wrote:
      Name: Calla or Ellanor

      Gender: Female

      Ability(can be more than one but keep in mind the influence of abilities and stars she has been under): Transformer ( can transform into anything/ anyone ) and Beguliar.

      I love the name!, transformer is cool ability! 

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    • ^^^

      Thanks, I just thought if Sophie would have a baby girl; she's most likely going to name her after something/ someone she loves.

      Oh and if it's a boy can u name it Kenric  Jr.?

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    • You r gonna say who the dad is riiiiiiight??? Plz let it be Keefe!! But they r still very young... so it would be super weird if one or the other found out!

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    • Chapter-Sixteen pt 2

      Sophie was determind to fix all of this, and get everyone out as soon as possible. Sophie imagined the fire being lifted into the sky as she channelled the flames into her arms and lifted them off the ground, she could not hold it for long,

      "A PASSAGE!" someone screamed,

      "WHAT AOUT SOPHIE!?" screamed another,

      Sophie had to hold it, they to get out, but then there was a voice, a little voice. It was the trees calling out to her, in pain, in fear. The cries of the trees getting louder and louder and LOUDER.

      "AHHHHH" Sophie screamed,

      Sophie shot the flames up into the sky as leaves and vines burst out from the ground shoting towards the burnt trees, she was going to save them, all of them.

      Power surged through her as she shot the last of flames into the sky,

      Sophie felt 

      Tired,

      Cold,

      But then there was a trickle of warmth that turned into flames, big blue flames then they shrunk down, on a cycle again and again till the faint sight of day light woke her up. Sophie opened her eyes to see Flori standing around a bunch of plants.

      "Sophie! are you awake?" she heard someone ask

      She turned around to see Keefe sitting there, with tears in his eyes,

      "Thank gosh your awake!" Keefe said as he hugged her, Sophie was so surprised about the action she let out a couple flames,

      "Keefe..." Sophie said as she pushed him away, "You have to stay away from me....I am not safe...."

      "I don't care I.....I love you....." Keefe said as he kissed her

      "I love you too..." Sophie replied, "But I think till I can control this new power, we should avoid physical contact..." Sophie said as she avoided his gaze,

      "Okay..." Keefe replied

      "So what happened?" Sophie asked

      "It might be better if you see it yourself," Keefe said as he put her hands on his temples. Sophie saw herself explode into flames and knock everyone back as flames surrounded everyone, Keefe felt, 

      Scared,

      Worried, she saw as all her friends tried to get away as the fire roared bigger and bigger, then the flames lifted up into the sky as Sophie saw herself shoot vines and roots every which way to put out the flame and then collapse. Keefe tried to come near her but everytime, she would let more flames out, he sat by her side the whole night.

      "I-I am so so sorry Keefe...." Sophie said quietly, she looked around to see that there was no damage surprisingly,

      "The plants healed everything, even injuries." said Keefe

      "Injuries?"

      "Yeah, Marella passed out due to such bad burns, but she woke up and she was fine, not a single burn on her. So did everyone else's burns."

      This have Sophie an idea, "Wait, your saying I can possibly heal people with my plants?"

      "Maybe," Keefe shrugged he tried to grab her hand, but Sophie flinced away,

      "You should go Keefe," Sophie said sadly

      "Ok, but if you need me I am here okay?" Keefe said as he leaped away.

      Sophie avoided all physical contact with everyone, she would stay in her room with Iggy and just try to stay calm.

      "Hey Sophie...you okay?" asked Edaline

      "I am scared....I hurt people, what if I hurt you or Grady..." Sophie said while turning away,

      "We want to help, we will always be here no matter what." said Edaline

      "Me too," said Sandor, she looked up at him and let a tear slip out, in that moment there was a spark.

      "You guys should go, before I burn the whole house down." She said as she left out a small chuckle,

      "But if you need us, we will be here, okay?" Edaline said while rubbing her back,

      "Okay.." Sophie said while Edaline left the room, her imparter was buzzing like crazy she had not checked it in two days, it was from Dex, but when she answered she was not greeted by the normal Dex, he was very pale and blood dripped on the side of his face as Sophie's heart dropped when he spoke.

      "Neverseen." The imparter went blank.

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    • OMG NO NOT MY POOR LITTLE CINNAMON ROLL!! XD But this is soooo good!!

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    • Very good and entertaining! I hope you write more soon.

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    • AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!

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    • OMG!!!!! I love it so much! Is the another chapter that is coming out today?!

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    • This is sooo good. Please write more.

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    • What if instead of Sophie telling everyone herself, Keefe accidentally finds out. What if he is the father. Beause Lady Gisela used her sons DNA or something.

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    • Chapter-Seventeen 

      "NO! NO! NO!" Sophie screamed as the Dex hung up,

      "Sophie, what's wrong?" Sandor said while running into the room,

      "It's the Neverseen, they have Dex!" Sophie said while trying to control her flames, she ran downstairs to Grady and asked, "Can I borrow your mesmer ability?"

      "But your not able to control it, you have not had enough training its to dangerous!" Grady replied

      "There is no time!" Sophie said while taking Grady's hand, "Get Elwin ready," Sophie said as she grabbed her bodygaurds arms and without needing to run she teleported, she managed to track Dex's thoughts, and Fitz and....oh no....Keefe's. 

      They arrived at the back of the Shores of Solance, Sophie saw Everyone under Ruy's shield, but Sophie noticed Biana in the corner,

      "WHERE ARE YOU, YOU STUPID VANISHER!" Vespera yelled

      Sophie sneaked her way over to Biana and also saw Tam there,

      "What happened?" Sophie asked

      "Keefe pressed his panic switch and we all came over, Vespera knocked Tam out.....I have to keep him safe...." Biana said through her tear,

      "Let me borrow his ability...." Sophie said

      "But-" Biana started

      "THERE IS NO TIME!" Sophie whisper hissed as she grabbed Tam's hand, it was time to end this.

      Sophie felt all her abilities, and now she was going to fight. Sophie listened into the conversation...

      "WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM US!" Keefe yelled

      "Please, you just bait for the little moonlark....and if she does not come, we can make it a more...painful stay for you guys." Vespera said while pulling out a medler. This was her chance!

      Sophie let the flames consume her as she turned invisible and snuck behind them,

      "If your looking for a moonlark she in right here!" Sophie said while surrounding them with flames, she spun her wrist and shot shadows at everyone's shields and at the Neverseen, "Do you feel it...DO YOU FEEL ALL THE PAIN THAT YOU CAUSED ME!" Sophie yelled in a weirdly distorted voice. Then Sophie felt a strange pain hit her in her stomach, 

      "No tricks, Sophie, would not want to hurt the baby.." Lady Gisela said

      "BABY!?" Everyone yelled, 

      "Oh that's so nice..you did not tell them, well we better get going.." Ruy said as he let go of his shield as him, Vespera and Lady Gisela leaped away.

      "SOPHIE!? YOUR PREGNANT?!" Fitz yelled, Sophie could feel pain as she tried to explain,

      "I..did not want to worry you guys...." Sophie started as she crouched on the floor

      "BUT WHY DID YOU NOT TELL US?! WHY DIDN"T YOU TELL ME?!" Keefe yelled

      Sophie stayed silent, Sophie knew he felt betrayed but it was for his own good...

      "HAVE YOU BEEN LYING TO US THIS WHOLE TIME HUH?! DID YOU ACTUALLY LIKE ME OR WAS THAT A LIE TOO?!" Keefe yelled, flames started form around Sophie as the world got a whole lot darker, she was losing control...she could not take it!

      "DO YOU KNOW WHY I DID NOT TELL YOU KEEFE?! DO YOU KNOW WHY?! BECAUSE I WAS PROTECTING YOU!" Sophie yelled, control she had to keep control.

      "PROTECT ME FROM WHAT?! I DONT NEED PROTECTING!" Keefe yelled back

      "This conversation is over..." Sophie muttered, as she sank lower onto the floor

      "NO ITS NOT OVER!" Keefe said as he stormed over to her and shook her shoulders, "TELL ME WHY!"

      "Hunky hair, take it easy..." Ro said

      "NO, SHE NEEDS TO TELL ME!" Keefe yelled

      "DO YOU KNOW WHY I DID NOT TELL YOU KEEFE, WANNA KNOW WHY? CAUSE YOUR THE FATHER! I don't feel so good," Sophie said while clutching her stomach,

      "Keefe, she does not look to good..." FItz said

      That's when Sophie passed out.

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    • Wait y’all what if it’s more than one kid?!

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    • Omg cliffhanger this is so good!!! and ^ Ooh maybe, I never thought of that!!

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    • OMG KEEFES THE FATHER IM FREAKING OUT RIGHT NOW

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    • WOW!! It's a Sokeefe baby!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • 27.125.133.4 wrote:
      Wait y’all what if it’s more than one kid?!

      Yesssssss

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    • Name(twins): Mose & Liza

      Gender: Male & Female

      Ability(can be more than one but keep in mind the influence of abilities and stars she has been under): Mose: Hydrokenitic & Telepath. Liza: Empath & Conjurer

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    • AAAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!!!SOPHIE AND KEEFE ARE HAVING A BABY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TEEN PARENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IM FREAKING OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

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    • SoKeefe Rules! wrote:
      AAAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!!!SOPHIE AND KEEFE ARE HAVING A BABY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TEEN PARENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IM FREAKING OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

      My brain exactly.

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    • Good writting overall, but grammar could use some work. The characters are different in this then the real book, but your not Shannon Messenger, so it's expected. You have a great imagination, and you should continue to write and create stories! If you want to increase your writing ability, you should go into further detail with the all of the emotions, descriptions, and dialogue. Overall, great work!

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    • Thank you so much!!! The advice really helps!

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    • Rose.chan2 wrote:
      Name(twins): Mose & Liza

      Gender: Male & Female

      Ability(can be more than one but keep in mind the influence of abilities and stars she has been under): Mose: Hydrokenitic & Telepath. Liza: Empath & Conjurer

      OOO Twinsssss

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    • Chapter-Eighteen pt 1 (Sorry busy day)

      Sophie woke up to blinding lights, in her eyes, looking at the sent another pain to her stomach,

      "Just breathe, Sophie," said a voice, Sophie looked up to see the familiar halls of Foxfire, as well as being greeted by no other than Elwin, 

      "What happened?" Sophie asked

      "All the absorbing took a toll on you, Keefe said you passed out, but your vitals see okay, same thing with the baby," Elwin said while flashing a variety of lights "I suggest drinking this and getting some rest," Elwin said while handing her a light green vial, "Here, to help wash it down."  Sophie took the Vial and the candy, the Vial tasted like Iggy farts, "I should probably let people in now," Elwin said

      "There are people waiting?" Sophie asked

      "Yeah, your parents, your respected councillors, and your friends." Elwin replied

      "Ugh, I want to go back into a coma..." Sophie groaned

      "Still you hid it for almost three weeks, you can see the bump a little bit." Elwin commented, Sophie looked down and saw the smallest bump on her belly, "Elf pregnancy don't work like humans do exactly, the baby can come out anytime, since elf's age is counted from the moment you were expecting so your about two months." 

      "Two months?!" Sophie exclaimed

      "Yes, so would you like me to let everyone in all at once or one at a time?" Elwin said while writing a couple things down,

      "Let them all in, so I can explain all at once." Sophie replied, Everyone came barging in with tons of questions, as well as shooting her with tons of emotions, now she knew how empaths felt. 

      "Silence!" Sophie yelled, "Let me explain..."

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    • Ooh this is so good!!!

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    • HOLY SHIT THIS IS AMAZING!

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    • 138.91.112.177 wrote:
      HOLY SHIT THIS IS AMAZING!

      Please ​​​​​​​do not curse.

      .+*Starpetal*+.

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    • .... I have now words to describe how good this is...

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    • 99.145.201.198 wrote:
      138.91.112.177 wrote:
      HOLY SHIT THIS IS AMAZING!
      Please ​​​​​​​do not curse.

      .+*Starpetal*+.

      Yes, please do not.

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    • THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH FOR ALL THIS SUPPORT NEW CHAPTER IS COMING OUT TODAY!

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    • Alisha (MidNightWolf2020) has died because of the awesomeness of this fanfic.

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    • Chapter-Eighteen pt 2

      Sophie took a deep breathe "I don't remeber much but..when I was kidnapped, I heard them talking about a new legacy, as well as Keefe's future legacy, I remember the words "This legacy will be a new initiative, a new era, project.." thats when I blacked out. There was a bunch of other stuff about Keefe being a dad, I was very confused by that and thought I misheard it as Keefe's dad, but when I found out I was pregnant..."

      "How long have you known?" Keefe said from the corner of the room,

      "About two months..." Sophie said sadly

      'I am so sorry, I thought I was protecting you' Sophie transmitted to Keefe

      "Why don't we let Lord Hunkyhair and Blondie chat," Ro said while opening the door for everyone,

      "Why did you not tell me?" Keefe asked, "Is this why you have been so sick lately?"

      Sophie nodded,  "I am sorry, just I did not want you to have to deal with it..."

      "Do you think....it is going to look like me?" Keefe asked with a smirk,

      Sophie rolled her eye's as she put her hand on her belly, "It better not be as mischievous,"

      "You better talk to everyone else now, hail me later?" Keefe said while walking out the door.

      "I will." Sophie said while looking into his eyes, everyone else was probably listening so she yelled, "You can come in now!"

      "FINALLY!" Grady yelled as he ran through the door, "How can you now be related to that boy?" Grady asked as Edaline elbowed him in the ribs,

      "Grady!" Edalin yelled,

      "Is it going to be a boy or a girl?" Linh asked

      "I am not sure...how do elves find out?" Sophie asked

      "You can't....but your a special case.." Sophie looked to see her former neighbour, sadness hit her in waves, her father.....then she remebered what Keefe said but she put those thoughts to the back of her mind.

      "It is not possible for us to know the gender but maybe we can talk about your intreasting genetics, since you have a complicated gene plan there is a high possiblity of a multiple birth." gasps went around them room,

      "What would the ability outcome be?" Councillor Bronte asked,

      "We can't be sure, since Sophie is a absorber she has a high chance of having kids with powers not even similar to her and plus her exposure to all the elements as well as stars." Forkle said

      "Maybe we should but off her absorber training for now," Councillor Oralie said 

      'Congrats on being a grandma' Sophie transmitted, a small smile spread across Oralie's lips.

      "Does that mean the baby or babies could be pyrokinetics or a shade or inflictor?"

      "All possible outcomes, since Keefe and Sophie both have the poloyglote genes, I suspect the kid or kids shall be having more than one ability. But a concern about Sophie's gene plan is that we don't know when the baby will be due..." Mr.Forkle said

      "So it could be due today or in the next month?" Wylie asked

      "Yes," Mr.Forkle said, at this point Sophie tuned out to all of the questions and started talking to FItz,

      'is what Keefe said true? I healed people with my plants?'

      'Well, it worked on me, Marella, my dad and pretty much everyone around.'

      'okay thanks.'

      'Also congrats on the baby...I am really happy for you...' there was some sadness in his transmission, she pushed that thought aside, maybe since she could heal people she could bring some back to life?

      "Sophie!" Dex yelled

      "What is it?" Sophie asked

      "If you enhance me...I can probably build a device that can tell us about the baby!" Dex replied. 

       

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    • Alisha came back from the dead and died again because of this fanficc.

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    • WOW

      WOW

      WOW

      XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDDX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • This is awesome.

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    • Great job! You should name (twins) them Marah and Micah and they should both be Polygots. Marah should also be an Inflictor and Micah should be a Empath. That's my vote!

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    • Chapter-Nineteen (pt 1 I will complete later)

      "Would it work?" Sophie asked,

      "It is possible," Mr.Forkle debated,

      "But could it tell abilities?" asked Councillor Bronte,

      "Probably not, but I could try?" Dex said

      "Maybe I can read the baby or babies shadow vapor?" Tam suggested, "May I?" as he put his hands on Sophie's belly, 

      "Sure," Sophie said awkwardly, she looked to the corner to see a jealous Keefe, it made her smile to know he was okay enough to be angry at Bangs Boy. Tam closed his eyes as Sophie felt a chill go through her body.

      " I don't know," Tam said, "I could not read anything, nothing."

      "Why don't we let Dex try," Keefe said with a smile, Fitz took his place behind Dex to catch him as Sophie took off tinkers gadgets.

      "Woah," Dex said as he fell into Fitz's arms, "I need paper," Dex said as he started to run outside,

      "He will be back," Wylie said, "In the mean time have any names or ideas about the gender."

      "I hope it boy and then I can name it Keefe Jr." Keefe said proudly as Sophie gave him the side eye, 

      "I am not naming my child Keefe Jr." Sophie mumbled

      "Our." Keefe commented

      "Huh?" Sophie asked

      "Our child."Keefe said and all of a sudden Grady started running at Keefe full speed and Sophie knew just what to do, she took a deep breathe and swaped Keefe, Sandor and Grady's bodies.

      "SOPHIE!" Keefe/Grady yelled, "PUT ME BACK NOW!"

      "Not until, you say sorry to Keefe." Sophie said

      "Woah, I am Grady, " Keefe said in awe as the room broke out into giggles, after they all calmed down, Sophie swaped them back,

      "I hope to have a Girl," Sophie said while looking at her belly,

      "A girl? with Keefe's genes, that would be like a mini Sophie with Keefe's stubborn ways." Ro said as she started to laugh, 

      "Would a boy be any better?" Bo asked

      "Better than you." Ro said under her breath,

      "Well the chances of more than one child is about 70%," Mr.Forkle said, "So it can be both,"

      "Great so I will get 15 bodyguards, Keefe, you were right, I will have an army." Sophie said as everyone broke out into laughter.

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    • Haha!! This soo great <3<3

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    • Ooo if it’s a girl can it be Marlena

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    • XD this is sooooo good!!!!

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    • How will Lord Cassius find out about it? Who will tell him? If you write about it you should have Keefe and Sophie tell him and make it super awkward.

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    • Chapter-Nineteen (pt 2)

      Dex ran into the room and everyone went silent, 

      "Try this," Dex said as he put a small device on Sophie's belly but it just made a small noise then shut off, "Aww man,"

      "It's okay, Dex" Sophie turned to everyone else and said "You guys can go, I am probably going to head back to Havenfield." Everyone started to leave the room when Keefe ran up to her an asked,

      "uhh....I think we might have to tell my dad..." Keefe said Awkwardly as Ro and Sandor started to laugh,

      "This is gonna be good," mumbled Ro

      Sophie grabbed Keefe's hand and said one word she hopefully won't regret, "Okay,"

      Soon the all stepped into the light, oblivious with what was about to happen.

      They arrived at the Shores of Solance, she could feel Keefe's emotions,

      Excitement,

      Worry,

      Nervous,

      She sent a golden breeze through his mind, 

      "How did you do that?" Keefe asked

      "The same way you send yours, now shall we?" Sophie said while grabbing his hand, they knocked on the door, the door swung open.

      "Keefe your-" Lord Cassius noticed Sophie, "Oh hello Miss.Foster, what do I owe this visit?"

      "We need to talk, all of us." Keefe said as he pushed past his father and helped Sophie sit down,

      "May I ask what the meaning of all this is?" Lord Cassius asked,

      "You may want to sit down too," Sophie said

      Sophie sent another breeze and transmitted,

      'Take a deep breathe'

      "Father.....Sophie is pregnant." Keefe said

      "How does this concern you, Keefe?" Lord Cassius asked then it took a moment, as it sunk in, "KEEFE SENCEN ARE YOU THE FATHER?!" the tone was more surprised then angry, which was a some what good sign.

      "Yes, Keefe is the father." Sophie said while holding his hand,

      "I am going to be a grandfather......" Lord Cassius started to trail off then, "How did this even happen?! Keefe your seventeen!"

      "It is not his fault, the Neverseen...." Sophie really did not want to finish the sentence,

      "Oh..." Lord Cassius said while trying to get his mind around it, Sophie looked over to Keefe and saw he was completely red, Sophie let out a tiny giggle,

      "What is so funny?" Lord Cassius asked,

      "Nothing!" Keefe replied,

      "Do you at least know the gender?" Lord Cassius asked

      "No, I thought you had to wait till the baby is born?" Sophie said skeptically

      "Their are other methods...." Lord Cassius said while pulling out a blue crystal, "When Keefe's mom was pregnant, we went to the forbidden cities to find out the gender, now come on, we have to go quickly." 

      Sophie looked to Keefe, the look on his face said it all, they had to know, they turned to Lord Cassius and said "Okay," as the stepped into the light.

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    • 104.34.2.248 wrote:
      How will Lord Cassius find out about it? Who will tell him? If you write about it you should have Keefe and Sophie tell him and make it super awkward.

      I LOVE THAT

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    • Can u make Lord Cassius tease them a bit in the next chapter?

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    • I COME BACK EVERY DAY JUDT FOR THIS! I’m writing a novel an honestly I think you should too,

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    • I have on wattpad but they did not turn out to well, hehe

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    • omg this is so good

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    • SOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!1

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    • AHH THIS IS SO GOOD

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    • PLEASE CONTINUE THIS

      LordHunkyhair

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    • I CAN'T BELIEVE I MISSED KEEFE DAY YESTERDAY (April 1st) AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

      LordHunkyhair

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    • you should have everyone give Sophie, Keefe and Lord Cassius skepticle looks in the Forbidden Cities and have LOrd Cassius tease them more in the next chapter.

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    • 98.144.131.28 wrote:
      AHH THIS IS SO GOOD

      This was me by the way

      LordHunkyhair

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    • Plz post more

      SoKeefe15 

      I need it

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    • 104.34.2.248 wrote:
      you should have everyone give Sophie, Keefe and Lord Cassius skepticle looks in the Forbidden Cities and have LOrd Cassius tease them more in the next chapter.

      Yeah good idea

      LordHunkyhair

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    • 98.144.131.28 wrote:
      104.34.2.248 wrote:
      you should have everyone give Sophie, Keefe and Lord Cassius skepticle looks in the Forbidden Cities and have LOrd Cassius tease them more in the next chapter.
      Yeah good idea

      LordHunkyhair

      Thank you.

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    • Chapter-Twenty pt1

      We were in the familiar surrondings of the forbidden cities, Hollywood, Tiergen took her hear in her first year of Foxfire. It was some what comforting to be around humans, she did not miss that smell, it smelled of smoke and pollution,

      "If I remember the clinic is this way," Lord Cassius said while battling his way through the crowd, Sophie and Keefe shared a look, should they do this?, it was too late to back out now...

      After a tremendous amount of shoving and pushing through the crowds they finally made it to the clinic.The hospital made Sophie shiver in fright, the memories of her previous visits hitting like flashbacks.

      "Hey, breathe, okay?" Keefe said while taking her hand, she instantly felt more calm. 

      "All right, you two loverbirds done? I don't need another Keefe in there," Lord Cassius teased while pointing to Sophie's now belly, Keefe turned red, Sophie could feel her own face blush. Lord Cassius approached the front desk, "Hi, Mr.Jones, here for an ultra sound?" 

      "Do you have an appointment?" the receptionist asked,

      "No, but is there any possible way for you to get us in," Keefe said

      "I can try," she responded,

      After about forty minutes, 

      "Hi, Doctor Hart will see you now." the receptionist said, as she lead them into a room. Sophie quivered at the sight of the machine, Keefe sent more breezes. She could do this for her baby, or babies...how could she handle more than one?! before she could stress anymore, the doctor walked in.

      "Hello, Doctor Hart, how far along are you?" he asked

      "Almost three months," Sophie replied,

      "Are you sure?" the doctor said skeptically,

      "Yes," Keefe responded,

      "Because it seems that she is about to enter her third trimester." Doctor hart said, Sophie was in shock, third trimester, she had barely entered her first! "Lets start," He said while applying gel on Sophie's belly, in a couple minutes a heart beat filled the room. Sophie was overcome with emotion,

      Happy,

      Gratitude,

      Pride,

      It felt like one of the happiest moments in her life, she looked over to Keefe his eye's filled with wonder, "That's our baby..." Keefe said with the biggest smile on his face. Then a second heart beat filled the room....  

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    • TWINSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • I thought it would be great to have two little Sokeefe babiessss

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    • OMG!!! Cute !!!!!!!!!XDXDxD

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    • YAAAAASSSS TWINSSSSSSS! Wait. What if that was another cliffhanger and there’s actually 3??.🤔🤔🤔

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    • TWINS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • Problems with fanfic: I am sorry, but I vote Sophitz. When Keefe and Sophie are together, Sophie acts unusually and a way that she never acts. Sophie being pregnant is way too out of the box. Forkle mentioned Sophie's parents had never met each other, so Kenric couldn't have been her father.



      Fanfic upsides: It has the same danger and suspense as the series. Is very funny. Love the new ablities. 

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    • When is the next fanfic coming out???

      Can't wait!

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    • 68.50.64.236 wrote:
      Problems with fanfic: I am sorry, but I vote Sophitz. When Keefe and Sophie are together, Sophie acts unusually and a way that she never acts. Sophie being pregnant is way too out of the box. Forkle mentioned Sophie's parents had never met each other, so Kenric couldn't have been her father.


      Fanfic upsides: It has the same danger and suspense as the series. Is very funny. Love the new ablities. 

      Then again is Mr.Forkle told her she never met any of her parents when Sophie first asked, this whole fan fic is a bit of a stretch but it is what my mind created. 

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    • LadyFossBoss, what if they hadn’t met at the time because remember Forkle said an embryo can be frozen.

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    • 138.91.112.177 wrote:
      Little writing tip. NEVER end a chapter of book with ..., to be continued or the end. It’s unprofessional and such a  cliché 

      I don't care about mistakes or whatever I can hardly do it my self

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    • Rose.chan2 wrote:
      138.91.112.177 wrote:
      Little writing tip. NEVER end a chapter of book with ..., to be continued or the end. It’s unprofessional and such a  cliché 
      I don't care about mistakes or whatever I can hardly do it my self
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    • Rose.Chan2, Gurl I feel you because I do cliché thing then fix them as I’m editing 

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    • 138.91.112.177 wrote:
      LadyFossBoss, what if they hadn’t met at the time because remember Forkle said an embryo can be frozen.

      True, but she met Oralie on day 1 in the Elvin world.

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    • 138.91.112.177 wrote:
      Little writing tip. NEVER end a chapter of book with ..., to be continued or the end. It’s unprofessional and such a  cliché 

      I know but a good cliche is always nice once and a while, too much and yeah MAJOR cliche.

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    • Chapter-Twenty pt2

      "Told you to stop flirting." teased Lord Cassius, Sophie's face exploded, as she turned to Keefe, he was not used to his dad talking to him like this. It was a good start for them, it made Sophie smile. She also looked at the monitor, she had two little babies inside of her,

      "What would you guys name them?" Lord Cassius asked,

      "Wel-" Keefe started but was interrupted by Sophie,

      "DON'T! unlike last time you tried to name a baby alicorn, we are not naming my," Keefe gave her a look, "Our children Keefster and Keeferina." the doctor cringed at the names,

      "Would you like to know the gender?" Doctor Hart asked,

      "Hey Keefe?" 

      "Yeah, Foster?"

      "Do you think we could throw a gender reveal party?"

      "Whats that?"

      "Well, some humans throw parties to reveal the gender of the babies, they pop a ballon or open a box and pink or blue comes out to show the gender."

      "That sounds awesome! what would we pop?" Keefe asked,

      "Well I was thinking, maybe your dad could go back and start setting up and we go out and buy balloons." 

      "That sounds quite..lovely." Lord Cassius said while leaving the room,

      "So the genders are *YOU HAVE TO WAIT UNTIL THE PARTYYY*"

      --At the party-

      Sophie was surprised about how many people showed up, some she barely knew. All the Councillors, her friends and her family. The party was beautiful, Lord Cassius did a great job, she got in a little bit of trouble for leaving Sandor but after a lecture or two, she joined the party. Wylie and Dex set up this place were you can get a bin with a bow or a tie to show what gender you think the baby is going to be, Edaline made a cake that was half blue and half pink. Another surprise was that people brought gifts! Sophie was in awe, she was surrounded by such great friends.

      "Hey Sophie!" Biana yelled, Sophie walked over,

      "We are just talking about the powers the baby might have," Fitz said

      "I think 100% more than one ability, because Sophie has a lot and so does Keefe, plus polyglot genes." Dex said

      "I bet it is going to be an Empath, it is a dominant trait." Stina said,

      "Well, so are brown eye's, I think it is most likely that the baby is going to have brown eyes." Sophie sighed,

      "What's wrong with brown eyes?" Linh asked

      "I don't want the baby to stick out to much, you know." Sophie responded,

      "Well, it's part Sophie it's going to stick out anyway." Keefe said,everyone burst laughing.

      "I just realized, Keefe's knack for trouble + Sophie always getting injured and being crazy powerful, this is going to be one heck of a ride." Fitz commented which made them hysterical,

      "ATTENTION! could we have Sophie and Keefe please step up her." Della yelled, Sophie and Keefe got out their box and went to the middle of the room, 

      "Before we reveal, we are going to need another box." Sophie said, everyone gasped,

      "TWINS?!" someone yelled.

      "Yeah, we have twins." Keefe said as  Everyone cheered.

      "Time to reveal, but first who here thinks it's going to be a girl." only a couple people raised their hands, "Who thinks it's going to be a boy?" everyone else in the room raised their hands.

      "Sophie, would you do the honors of opening the first box?" Keefe asked, Sophie opened the box as a blue balloon came out, everyone cheered.

      "Baby number two," Sophie said as Keefe opened the box, another blue balloon.

      "We are having two boys everyone!" Keefe yelled, 

      "Two mini Keefe's what could go wrong?" Sophie whispered to Keefe, just then pain shot up in her stomach.

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    • SOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      TWO KEEFE JR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • OMG IS SHE GOING TO HAVE THE BABIES?

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    • WUTTTTTTTTtt?????????///////

      Here comes the end of the elvin world because the Keefe's are ruling now XDXDXDxDxDxDxDXDxD

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    • XDXDXDXDXDXDXD

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    • SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!

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    • 68.50.64.236 wrote:
      Sophie being pregnant is way too out of the box.

      I just want to say this again because it just feels so wrong

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    • MalinaEverfree wrote:
      WUTTTTTTTTtt?????????///////

      Here comes the end of the elvin world because the Keefe's are ruling now XDXDXDxDxDxDxDXDxD

      Hahah

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    • LadyFossBoss wrote:
      68.50.64.236 wrote:
      Problems with fanfic: I am sorry, but I vote Sophitz. When Keefe and Sophie are together, Sophie acts unusually and a way that she never acts. Sophie being pregnant is way too out of the box. Forkle mentioned Sophie's parents had never met each other, so Kenric couldn't have been her father.


      Fanfic upsides: It has the same danger and suspense as the series. Is very funny. Love the new ablities. 

      Then again is Mr.Forkle told her she never met any of her parents when Sophie first asked, this whole fan fic is a bit of a stretch but it is what my mind created. 

      This is Mr.Forkle we are talking about, he would obviosuly lie to Sophie about Sophie ever meeting, because that would have been such a giveaway. 

      When Mr.Forkle told Sophie that Sophie's bio-parents had never met each other, he told her that it was classified information but was willling to give up at least this much. We know that Forkle is very well known to keep secrets, but I know that he would not lie about this.

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    • Good point, I am sorry if you have tons of issues with the fan fic, its pretty much on the outer rim of possibility. Plus some fan fics are not for everyone, I can see that your a really big keeper fan, but maybe this fan fic is not for you, Swearing parrot wrote a incredible fanfic that would be more to your taste.

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    • I am a big keeper fan and I am sorry If I offended you

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    • Besides those problems I have to say this fanfic is great

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    •  

      Luv this FanFic 

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    • Two baby Keefe Jr.'s?! Oh no, the Councillors (namely Alina) better watch out.

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    • 98.144.131.28 wrote:
      Two baby Keefe Jr.'s?! Oh no, the Councillors (namely Alina) better watch out
      • insert laughter here*
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    • 98.144.131.28 wrote:
      Two baby Keefe Jr.'s?! Oh no, the Councillors (namely Alina) better watch out.

      XD Yes she better

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    • ok i'm sorry if this sounds a little mean because i don't want it to but i don't think that the neverseen would really want sophie to have babies, especially when she's only sixteen or seventeen (i forget which). Again, i'm sorry if this sounds mean, but i feel like sophie would go to the cave where she was kidnapped with someone else so they could put up a fight if anything happened. other than that though, I REALLY love all of sophie's new abilities and the rest of the story REALLY GREAT PLZ CONTINUE

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    • 98.206.216.149 wrote:
      ok i'm sorry if this sounds a little mean because i don't want it to but i don't think that the neverseen would really want sophie to have babies, especially when she's only sixteen or seventeen (i forget which). Again, i'm sorry if this sounds mean, but i feel like sophie would go to the cave where she was kidnapped with someone else so they could put up a fight if anything happened. other than that though, I REALLY love all of sophie's new abilities and the rest of the story REALLY GREAT PLZ CONTINUE

      I agree 

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    • 68.50.64.236 wrote:
      LadyFossBoss wrote:
      68.50.64.236 wrote:
      Problems with fanfic: I am sorry, but I vote Sophitz. When Keefe and Sophie are together, Sophie acts unusually and a way that she never acts. Sophie being pregnant is way too out of the box. Forkle mentioned Sophie's parents had never met each other, so Kenric couldn't have been her father.


      Fanfic upsides: It has the same danger and suspense as the series. Is very funny. Love the new ablities. 

      Then again is Mr.Forkle told her she never met any of her parents when Sophie first asked, this whole fan fic is a bit of a stretch but it is what my mind created. 
      This is Mr.Forkle we are talking about, he would obviosuly lie to Sophie about Sophie ever meeting, because that would have been such a giveaway. 

      When Mr.Forkle told Sophie that Sophie's bio-parents had never met each other, he told her that it was classified information but was willling to give up at least this much. We know that Forkle is very well known to keep secrets, but I know that he would not lie about this.

      yeah

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    • 98.144.131.28 wrote:
      Two baby Keefe Jr.'s?! Oh no, the Councillors (namely Alina) better watch out.

      I keep forgetting to say my name

      LordHunkyhair

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    • XD it's okay I was the same way when i didn't have a fandom account

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    • LadyFossBoss wrote:
      I have on wattpad but they did not turn out to well, hehe

      Plz share ur account with me cuz I could give u a few pro tips

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    • 68.50.64.236 wrote:
      98.206.216.149 wrote:
      ok i'm sorry if this sounds a little mean because i don't want it to but i don't think that the neverseen would really want sophie to have babies, especially when she's only sixteen or seventeen (i forget which). Again, i'm sorry if this sounds mean, but i feel like sophie would go to the cave where she was kidnapped with someone else so they could put up a fight if anything happened. other than that though, I REALLY love all of sophie's new abilities and the rest of the story REALLY GREAT PLZ CONTINUE
      I agree 

      What is wrong with you. If this was Gisela’s idea then it makes perfect sense. Keefe’s LEGACY. Hello!

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    • HydrokineticGirl101 wrote:
      98.144.131.28 wrote:
      Two baby Keefe Jr.'s?! Oh no, the Councillors (namely Alina) better watch out.
      XD Yes she better

      OMFG this would be great. Just an idea, what if the first thing one of the twins did when they started Foxfire was to find Alina and prank her. 

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    • when is the next chapter?

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    • Sorry I have been really busy with online school, I can probably release a chapter today at 3.

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    • It is so good I rly luv

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    • 138.91.112.177 wrote:
      HydrokineticGirl101 wrote:
      98.144.131.28 wrote:
      Two baby Keefe Jr.'s?! Oh no, the Councillors (namely Alina) better watch out.
      XD Yes she better
      OMFG this would be great. Just an idea, what if the first thing one of the twins did when they started Foxfire was to find Alina and prank her. 

      That is an amazing idea

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    • HydrokineticGirl101 wrote:
      138.91.112.177 wrote:
      HydrokineticGirl101 wrote:
      98.144.131.28 wrote:
      Two baby Keefe Jr.'s?! Oh no, the Councillors (namely Alina) better watch out.
      XD Yes she better
      OMFG this would be great. Just an idea, what if the first thing one of the twins did when they started Foxfire was to find Alina and prank her. 
      That is an amazing idea

      Thx!

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