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  • I hope you all like this story . This is my first fan-fic , so advice is helpful .

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    •                                                       CHAPTER ONE

            Ever sice Keefe  was expiremented on by his mother  , and as a result , was knocked unconcious , Sophie was different . She never smiled anymore or laughed. She barely even talked to everyone anymore .All she did was think about Keefe . Sophie missed everything about him . His smirk , his jokes , Sophie even missed being called " Lady Fos - Boss ."

            " What do you think is going on with Sophie ? " asked Fitz to Biana one morning

            " You're her Cognate . You tell me ," she said while doing her nails ," Though if I didn't know any better , I'd say she is thinking about Keefe ."

             " We all are , " said Fitz , almost to himself .

             " Well if you want my advice , I'd go over to Everglen and try to comfort her , like a good boyfriend would , " Biana said , blowing on her now hot pink nails .

             " Sooo glad I asked for your advice , Dear Sister ," said Fitz as he got out his imparter , " And Sophie and I  broke up ."

             " Sorry , " Biana said ," Well , your little love triangle will continue when Keefe wakes up ."

             " If  he wakes up ." Fitz said , quietly . They both went silent . Then , Fitz took his imparter and said ," Show me Sophie Foster ."

            The screen stayed blank . Sophie didn't answer .

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    • A/N Whoever comments will get the next chapter dedicated to them ;)

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    • Sup im komodo dragon

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    • I like your name ! Congrats next chapter is going to be dedicated to komodo dragon . Did you like the chapter ? I promise they will get longer ;)

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    • Cool! Keep writing

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    • I'm komodo dragon and you chap was really good! Great job

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    • This is soooo good!!!!!!!! Plz write more!!!!!!!!

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    • I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • thank you soo much ueyhg  ( typo cuz im soooooooooooooo HAPPY ) IF YOU GUYS GIVE ME YOUR NAMES/ USERNAME I 'LL DEDICATE A CHAPTER TO MY wonderful fans

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    •           CHAPTER TWO - DEDICATED TO komono dragon and SoKeefe Rules!

      "You know I have to , Sophie ," said Keefe , walking towards the group of Neverseen members and Lady Gisela .

      " Please , Keefe . Don't do this . They're evil . You're not ! We need you . I ... need you . Please , Keefe , " Sophie begged , taking Keefe's hand .

      "I'm sorry , Foster . I'm doing this for you ," then he let go of Sophie's hand and joined his mother .

      " Keefe , " Lady Gisela's voice boomed ,"I'm so proud of you .Ther's just one step more in fulfilling your Legacy . Are you ready ? "

      Keefe looked at Sophie before he answered ," Yes ."

      " Kill the girl , " his mother ordered .

      " No , Keefe , NOO !" Sophie screamed as she woke from her nightmare.Sandor ran to her side .

      " What's wrong ??!!" he asked just as Edaline and Grady entered the room .

      " What's wrong , sweetie ? " asked Edaline just as Grady asked ," Were you having nightmares ?" Sophie nodded her head .

      "Sandor , can you leave the room? " asked Edaline . Sandor nodded his head and muttered something about 'I go were you go .' as he left the room .

      "Was the nightmare about That Boy ?" Grady asked. Sophie nodded her head and buried her face in her palms .

      " What happened in your dream? " Edaline asked , rubbing Sophie's back .

      " He... joined the ... Neverseen ... again," Sophie said in between sobs " Keefe was ... forced ...to ki ... kill me ,"

      "Shhh ! It's okay , Sophie . Keefe is safe at Foxfire right now ," Edaline said , hugging Sophie .

      "That Boy can make trouble even being unconcious ," Grady muttered , joining the hug .

      " Grady , you're NOT helping ," Edaline scolded ," Is there anything we can do ?"

      " Ther is one thing . Can you bring me to Firefox ? " Sophie asked , rubbing her eyes , "So I can check on Keefe ."

      " Of course , " said Edaline , smiling that smile teenagers hate .

      And that is how Sophie Foster ended up sleeping at Firefox , sleeping on a cot next to Keefe's.

      "Night , Keefe," Sophie said as she fell asleep.

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    • Enjoy!!! And remember , comment if you want a chapter dedicated to you . Be sure to tell your friends about this story !!

      - Grace (I know , I know I revealed my name . Ooops ! Not!)

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    • THIS IS SOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • thanks sokeeferules! you get the next chapter dedicated to you . Could you tell any online friends about this story ?

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    • Wow. Great job. Plz continue

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    • THIS IS SO GOOD I LOVE IT!!!!!

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    • I'm working on the rough draft of the story right now . Should be posted soon :) Keep looking beautiful , gals

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    • CHAPTER THREE - Dedicated to SoKeefe Rules! , A FANDOM user , and TheCharmingBookworm .

      " Sophie , wake up ! Wake up !" Elwin shouted , shaking Sophie awake .

      " What is it ?" mumbled Sophie , rubbing her eyes .

      " Keefe 's awake !" Elwin barely said before Sophie jumped up .

      " Keefe ! " Sophie cried as she ran to where Keefe was sitting and hugged him tightly .

      " Foster ! It 's good .. Sop .. ca .. bref .. ophie ... ," Keefe said , trying to breath .

      " Oh , sorry , just got a little excited ", Sophie said , turning red as she let go of Keefe .

      " Don 't worry , Lord Hunkyhair was enjoying all of that quality time with our little hottie , " Ro  said from a corner  , grinning when Keefe turned a darker red then Sophie . ( If that was possible .)

      " Keefe , I'll need you to drink all of these , " said Elwin as he walked into the room and handed Keefe three rainbow colored bottles .

      " Looks delicious ! " Ro commented , " Mind if I try one ? " Keefe was about to hand Ro one when Sophie slapped his hand .

      " KEEFE SENCEN ! YOU JUST GAINED CONCIOUS ! DRINK YOUR MEDICINE BEFORE YOU PASS OUT AGAIN !! " Sophie yelled.

      " Can 't bare to live without me , huh , Foster ? " Keefe said , flashing his signature smirk . He drank the first bottle . " Ughhh . It tastes like Ro 's toenails mixed with a little mallowmelt . What a way to ruin a wonderful thing ."

      " And you have two more more to drink , Lord Hunkyhair ! " Ro grinned , handing him the next bottle .

      " Elwin , did you let everyone know Keefe 's awake ? " Sophie asked as Keefe turned green from the last bottle .

      " They should be coming soon , " Elwin said as he checked Keefe 's cells . Not a minute later Fitz , Biana , Dex , the twins , Livvie , and Lord Cassius came racing into the room .

      " Keefe !! " Everyone screamed , even Lord Cassius .

      " Keefe , how are you ? " " Are you okay ? " " We missed you ! " Everybody said at once .

      " CALM DOWN ! " Ro screamed .

      " Thank you , Ro . Livvie , come with me to check Keefe 's vitals ." Elwin beckoned .

      " Okay ! Nice to have you back , Keefe , " Livvie said as she ruffled his hair and left with Elwin . Keefe smoothed down his hair .

      " One at a time ! Fitz first . Make a line ! " Ro ordered . Everybody made a line . Sophie frowned as she noticed that Lord Cassius was at the end of the line.

      " Nice to see you awake , " Fitz said , hugging Keefe .

      " Nice to see you too , Fitzipoo ," Keefe said , hugging him back .

      " NEXT !" Ro boomed .

      Dex came up , " Ready for pranks ? I got a load of ..."

      Sophie interupted him ," No , Keefe is going to rest . RIGHT ,  Keefe ? "

      " Yes , mom , " Keefe said with a grin . Then his face fell when he thought of his mother .

      " Sorry I got you into trouble , " Dex said with a sheepish grin , " But my dad just recieved a shipment of .. " Ro cut Dex off  , " NEXT ! " This time , it was Biana .

      " KEEFE !! KEEFE !! KEEFE !! You 're okay ! " the girl cried . She started hugging Keefe .

      " Missed you too , Silveny Jr. Now can you stop hugging me ? " Keefe said , smirking .

      " Biana , Lord Hunkyhair doesn 't have all day ! " Ro bellowed . Biana nodded . As she turned to leave , she said ,"Hey , Keefe . "

      " Yeah ? " he said as Linh hugged him .

      " You and Sophie make a cute couple , " Biana said , grinning

      " Aww , thanks Biana . That 's the nicest thing you 've ever said to me . " Keefe said sarcastically , as he was smirking .

      " NEXT !" Ro bellowed . Tam was next in line .

      " So nice of you to drop by , Bangs Boy ," said Keefe , grinning .

      " Linh made me . So , er , you look better . Believe it or not , I missed you ," Tam said . Then he muttered under his breath , " When you were unconcious ," as he walked out of the room .

      " NEXT ! Oh , here comes the Winner of the Best Daddy of the Year Award , " Ro said with a glare as Lord Cassius walked towards Keefe .

      " I was so worried , Keefe ," Cassius said as he hugged his son .

      " Nice to be appreciated at home , " Keefe said as he tried to wriggle out of his father 's hug .

      " GET OUT !" Ro screamed . Cassius ended the embrace and jumped up .

      " Not you , everybody else ! " Ro said , pointing to the " audience . "  Fitz , Biana , Dex , Tam , and Linh were crowding around the doorway listening to the conversation . After Ro scared everyone away , and Elwin and Livvie left again for medicine , Keefe and Sophie finally had a chance to talk .

      " Soo . Do you know what your new ability is ? " asked Sophie , trying to fill in the silence ,

      " No , But can you help me figure out what it is ?  I mean , you have 5 abilities ," Keefe asked , finishing the last of his medicine .

      " Sure , " said Sophie , glad that Keefe was back to normal . Almost .

      " Yes ! Team Foster-Keefe is back in business !! Wait a minute , what if I'm a Telepath ? " Keefe said . Then he held his temples ," Do you feel anything ?"

      " Nope . Not a thing ," Sophie said , almost relieved .

      " What if I 'm a Mesmer ? Sophie Foster , you will move that chair , " then Keefe made a weird motion with his hand . Suddenly Sophie felt a weird sensation . Like she was under control of somebody . Sophie had no choice but to move the chair towards Keefe .

      Sophie gasped , " Keefe , you 're a Mesmer !

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    • I know I left you guys at a cliffhanger.  But let me just hint at some quality Grady/Keefe time . Remember to comment and tell your friends about this story !  Stay beautiful !

      - Grace :)

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    • I love this fanfic!!! It's amazing!!!

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    • thanks you get a chapter dedicated to you

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    • Does everybody like Keefe as a mesmer ? let me know your opinoins

      - Grace

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    • YES! Ahhh this is so good. Though being a Mesmer isn't at the top of my list, I think it's more likely that he'll be a Psionopath, Shade, or Flasher, but Mesmer  is also pretty likely, and the fanfiction itself is really good!

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    • thanks , the next chapter will also be dedicated to you !

      - Grace

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    • THIS IS SOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!! Plz post more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • thank you Sokeefe Rules! . The next chapter will also be dedicated to you !

      - Grace

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    • Yay!!! Also, when are you going to post the next chapter?

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    • I 'll post it tomorrow

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    • Tommorrow WHEN?

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    • how old r u!!??

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    • I am 12 . A very mature 12

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    • Right now !!!!!

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    • CHAPTER FIVE - Dedicated to LoveSoKeefeForever , TheCharmingBookworm , SoKeefe Rules! , and A FANDOM user .

      " I will NOT train That Boy ! " Grady exclaimed , feeding Verdi some swizzlespice .

      " Please , Grady , please , " begged Sophie .

      " I am not going to train That Boy and that 's final ," Grady said , patting Verdi on the head   .Then he started walking back to the house .

      " What if I told Edaline that you are refusing to train Keefe ? " Sophie gasped dramatically , " What if I told the Councillors ?  "

      " Fiiiiiine . You win . But so help me if That Boy hurts you , he won 't get any lesons from me , " Grady said , chuckling when Sophie hugged him .

      " You remind me so much of Jolie , " Grady said . He wiped a tear from his eye .

      " Grady ! Sophie ! Mallowmelt ! " called Edaline from the house .

      " C 'mon , let 's go in before Edaline eats all of it herself , " Grady said , wiping another tear from his eye . Sophie grabbed his hand and they both walked back to the house .

      " Oh , Edaline , that was so good . May I be excused so I can tell Keefe the news ? " Sophie asked , licking a crumb from her finger .

      " Just clear your plate , " Edaline said , pulling a strand of hair out of Sophie 's face . Sophie galloped the stairs to her room .

      " She 's in love with That Boy , isn 't she ? " Grady asked , swallowing a piece of mallowmelt .

      " Yes , she is , " Edaline agreed , " and the sad thing is , Sophie doesn 't know it ."

      " Show me Keefe Sencen , " Sophie said to her Imparter once she found it .

      " Hey , Foster , what 's up ? " asked a familiar face .

      " So , you know Grady 's a mesmer , right ? "

      " Uh huh . Where are you going with this , Foster ? "

      " Well , I asked him about teaching you and he said yes! " Sophie said , smiling when Keefe 's face lit up .

      " Doesn 't Grady sorta hate me ? " Keefe asked , his face falling .

      " Well he doesn 't hate you as much as he used to ," Sophie said , trying to optimistic .

      " Very reassuring , Foster . Very ," Keefe said with his signature smirk .

      " It 's not that bad , " Sophie said trying not to grin .

      " Ya think ? What is That Boy doing here ? What did That Boy do now ? " Keefe said , doing a spot down imitation of Grady . Sophie couldn 't help but laugh .

      " Just come to Everglen tomorrow . And be on time for once in your life , Keefe . Grady hates people being late , " Sophie said , still grinning from Keefe 's imitation .

      " Sounds fun , see ya , Foster , " Keefe said  ," Oh , Foster ... um ...  never mind ,bye ! "

      " Night , Keefe ," Sophie said as the screen went dark .

      " What was Keefe going to say ," Sophie thought to herself as she got ready for bed ," Keefe has changed since the day I met him ," Sophie thought . He really had . Keefe was taller , his hair was messier , his shoulders broader  . Sophie felt her face get warm .

      She didn 't like Keefe Sencen , did she ?

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    • We are finally getting some Sokeefe vibes . Enjoy !

      -Grace

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    • Oooh this is REALLY good!!! You're a great writer!

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    • awww thanks . the next chapter will be dedicated to you !!

      - Grace

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    • Wow this is amazingly written!! If only this could happen in the series....

      ~Lady Fos-Boss

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    • Okayokayokay I only discovered this because of Fandom User 2604:6000:DA09:7100:D8BC:D41:9E2D:EE29's comment on the Sokeefe page, and if I had seen it before, I would have commented right then and there. This is really good so far!

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    • THIS IS SOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • thanks Lady Fos-Boss and The Queen Of All Fangirls . The next chapter will be dedicated to you also . Stay beautiful !!!!!!!!!!

             - Grace
      
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    • also thank you SoKeefe Rules! you will also have a chapter dedicated to you !!! Stay beautiful !!!

      - Grace

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    • I really wish that this would happen in the books!!!!!!!! It's amazing! 

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    • The answer to your question , Fandom User 2604:6000:DA09:7100:D8BC:D41:9E2D:EE29  , I am 12 years old .

      - Grace

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    • Nice, this is great!

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    • This is great, cant wait for more!

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    • You two also get a chapter dedicated to you . Thanks for your compliments ! Stay beautiful !

      - Grace

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    • I am working on the next chapter now . Who should all the characters end up with ? ( No gay couples , please )

      - Grace

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    • Why no gay couples?

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    • Ummm sokeefe obviously, dexiana, tamarella maybe???

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    • SOLINH

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    • Who should Fitz be with ?

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    • A/N Whoever comments first will get the chapter dedicated to them . I am starting this now because I have a lot more viewers then I thought I would have .

      - Grace

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    • lol wat about stina:)

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    • DESTINA

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    • nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

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    • CHAPTER SIX - Dedicated to A FANDOM user .

      " You 're doing it wrong ! You flick your hand , you don 't wave it ! " said an angry Grady .

      " Well , you 're teaching me wrong ! " said an even angrier Keefe , kicking a mushroom in his frustration .

      " Guys ! Edaline told me to bring you this Mallowmelt , " Sophie said as she walked towards them , " And Grady , Edaline wants to talk to you about your , er , teaching skills ."

      " Or lack there of ," Keefe muttered under his breath as he took a bite of Mallowmelt .

      " If Edaline is complaining so much about my lesson , she can teach it herself ! " barked Gardy as he walked back to the house , eating his Mallowmelt .

      " Foster , I have a very important question to ask you , " Keefe said as he took another bite of his food .

      Sophie 's eyes widened as she sat on the grass next to Keefe , " Yes , Keefe ? "

      " Do you think Edaline would give me her recipe for Mallowmelt ? It is AWESOME ! " Keefe asked , finishing off his plate .

      " Oh , um , I don 't really know , " Sophie said , her face turning red .

      " Hmm , interesting , " Keefe mused , smirking .

      " Keefe , sometimes I really hate that you 're an Empath , " Sophie sighed , covering her red face with her hair .

      " I need more of this thing you call Mallowmelt , " Keefe stated , licking his plate clean .

      " Keefe , look , now you have crumbs all over your face , " Sophie sighed again , brushing the crumbs of his face .

      " Aren 't they sweet ? " cooed Edaline as she and Grady walked towards Keefe and Sophie .

      " If you want my honest opinion ... ow ! " Grady stopped when Edaline jabbed him in the arm .Sophie and Keefe both jumped up .

      " Tell me something I don 't know , " Keefe said , flashing his famous smirk .

      " We weren 't doing anything . We were just talking like normal friends do . " Sophie babbled , panicking .

      " Smooth , Foster , smooth , " Keefe muttered under his breath .

      " Uh , huh , " Grady said , crossing his arms , " If That Boy comes that close to you again , scream . "

      " GRADY RUEWEN ! Do we need to talk about not being so clingy again ??!! " Edaline asked in a stern voice , putting her hands on her hips .

      " Go Team Edaline ! " Keefe shouted , " Watch out Team Grady ."

      " Why don 't you two go see Verdi while we have another chat , " Edaline smiled sweetly at Keefe and Sophie , then glared at Grady .

      " Remind me never to get on Edaline 's bad side , " Keefe said as he took Sophie 's hand and started walking towards Verdi 's pen . Sophie 's face went red instantly .

      " I 'm irresistible to the ladies , " Keefe said with a smirk as he looked at Sophie 's face.

      " Even the married ones ? " Sophie asked as her Imparter lit up with Biana 's face . Sophie realized that the red on her face was blood.

      " Sophie ! We 're under attack ! Come to Everglen ! Neverseen ... Gisela ... " Biana said before her connection broke up . Sophie paled and started running towards Grady and Edaline  . Keefe followed .

      " EVERGLEN IS UNDER ATTACK !! " Sophie managed to say before her lungs burst .

      " Eda , take Keefe and hide . I 'm coming with you , Sophie , " Grady said , hugging Edaline , before patting Keefe on the shoulder .

      " And , Keefe , " Sophie said as Grady got his light crystal out , " This time actually stay away from the fight this time . " Keefe nodded .

      As they leaped away , Sophie could hear Keefe say , " Hey Grady , you finally know how to say my name ! " Sophie had to smile .

      " Wow , " was all Sophie could say as they arrived at Everglen . The house was on fire  and blood was everywere . The only familiar face was Sandor 's .

      " Sandor ! " Sophie cried as she inflicted on an attacking ogre .

      " You should be back at Havensfield , " Sandor said , stopping midsentence to deflect an arrow  .

      " Well you just disappeared ! " Sophie said , inflicting on another ogre , Sophie stopped fighting long enough to see Lady Gisela and Ruy exit the burning house . Ruy was carrying someone .

      After the battle , Sophie rushed to were Biana , Della , and Alden standing . Alden was comforting his wife and daughter who were crying .

      " What is it ? What happened ? "Sophie asked hugging them all .

      " They took Fitz ! " Della said , tears running down her face . Sophie did what she did best , She fainted .

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    • OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLZ POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • ITS SO GOOD!!!!

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    • thanksssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      -Grace

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    • OMG THIS IS AMAZING!! BUT THE CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLS WRITE MORE SOON!

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    • Okay , Don 't worry , I will

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    • Wait I'm so silly, YOU (aka the author) posted about it on the Sokeefe page. I thought it was someone else, idk why. Anyway, this is good! I'm sad about the cliffhanger, though.

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    • This is so gooooof

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    • If fainting is what you do best, you need to rethink your life choices

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    • I am writing the first draft now . Should be posted soon

        - Grace
      
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    • ^Exactly

      Anyway, this is really good

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    • JewelStorm14 wrote:
      If fainting is what you do best, you need to rethink your life choices

      Lol!

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    • CHAPTER SEVEN , PART ONE - Dedicated to SoKeefe Rules!

       " Shhhh , Keefe . Sophie 's asleep ! " said a familiar voice .
       " Well , thanks to That Boy , she 's not ! " said another voice . Sophie opened her eyes . Her parents , Keefe , Elwin , Biana , Della , and Alden were all crowded around her .
       Sophie groaned , " What happened ? How long was I out for ? "
       " Here , drink this , " Edaline said , handing Sophie a Bottle of Youth , " You passed out after the battle at Everglen . You were out for five days . We thought we lost you ."
       " You totally Fostered it again , " Keefe said , grinning . Grady glared at him , but that made Keefe 's grin bigger .
       " We missed you , Sophie . Don't do that again , " Grady said , giving her a hug . Sophie hugged him back , until she realized someone was missing .
       " Fitz ! Did you find him ?" Sophie asked ,as she jumped out of  bed.Everyone shook her head .
       " Careful , Sophie ! Your body needs more rest , " Elwin said , examining her cells .
       " If she doesn't rest , I 'll use my ability to make her ! Oh wait , I 'm not fully trained yet , " Keefe said , earning a glare from Grady .
       " The collective and Mr. Forkle will be here soon , " Alden said ," If that 's okay with you , Grady ."
       Grady nodded his head , " That 's fine , Alden ." Sophie just realized Keefe was smirking at her .
       " What ? " Sophie asked him .
       " Setting a new style , Foster ? " Keefe asked , pointing to her tunic , which was covered with alicorns . She scowled at him .
       " Can everyone leave the room for a minute so I can change ? I do not want to look like a bum when the collective arrives . " asked Sophie , heading towards her closet .
       " You could wear a feed bag and you wouldn 't look like a bum ," said Keefe , still smirking as he left the room with everyone else . Sophie turned red . She didn't know whether to feel insulted or complimented .
       " You too , Sandor ," Sophie said , smirking that Sandor was too big to hide behind her door . He growled and left . 15 minutes later , Sophie was showered and dressed in something Biana would say made her eyes pop .
       " Finally , " Mr. Forkle said with a smile ," The Moonlark graces us with her presence ." Sophie rolled her eyes and walked to where Keefe and Biana were standing . Keefe stared at her .
       " What ? " she asked him.
       " Nothing ," Keefe said , turning red. Sophie swore she could hear Ro mutter something like " Oblivious ." in the back round .
       " Do you have any idea why the Neverseen would want to kidnap Fitz ? " Mr. Forkle asked Della and Alden . Della shook her head .
       " Maybe they want to see him open a gate ," Keefe joked . Biana scowled at him .
       " Or maybe because Fitz and Sophie are Cognates . Maybe they 'll let Fitz learn the location ," Alden said .
       " And then when we rescue him , they 'll trap us , " Sophie finished .
       Keefe thought for a moment ," Nah , too obvious . "
       " Exactly , " Mr .Forkle said .
       " So how will we rescue Fitz without  them spotting us ? " Biana asked .
       " We 'll use Flashers , " Mr. Forkle explained , " And we use the Moonlark ." There was a knock on the door .
       " That 's the collective ," Mr. Forkle said . Squall , Granite , and Blur came in .
       " We heard about Fitz .We 're so sorry . Did you inform the Councillors ? " Squall asked as she sat down next to Mr . Forkle .
       " No , not yet ," he said .
       " Are we just going to sit here talking about my brother or are we going to actually find him ? " asked Biana , glaring at Mr .Forkle .
       " Biana Vacker ! They 're trying to find Fitz without getting him killed , " Della said , putting her hand on Biana 's shoulder .
       " Do you have any idea where they took he boy ? " Blur asked.
       " Our sources say they have found an abandoned cave near Loanmore . It looks ideal for holding hostages , " Forkle said , taking out a map . Sophie winced in pain as Silveny 's voice screamed in her head ," HELP ! HELP ! HELP ! BABY NOT OKAY ! SOPHIE ! KEEFE ! KEEFE ! HELP ! BAD PEOPLE ! " 
       " Silveny 's calling for help ! The Neverseen are attcking her , Greyfall , and the twins ! " Sophie yelled .
      
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    • CHAPTER SEVEN - Dedicated to SoKeefe Rules!
      " Shhhh , Keefe . Sophie 's asleep ! " said a familiar voice .
      " Well , thanks to That Boy , she 's not ! " said another voice . Sophie opened her eyes . Her parents , Keefe , Elwin , Biana , Della , and Alden were all crowded around her .
      Sophie groaned , " What happened ? How long was I out for ? "
      " Here , drink this , " Edaline said , handing Sophie a Bottle of Youth , " You passed out after the battle at Everglen . You were out for five days . We thought we lost you ."
      " You totally Fostered it again , " Keefe said , grinning . Grady glared at him , but that made Keefe 's grin bigger .
      " We missed you , Sophie . Don't do that again , " Grady said , giving her a hug . Sophie hugged him back , until she realized someone was missing .
      " Fitz ! Did you find him ?" Sophie asked ,as she jumped out of  bed.Everyone shook her head .
      " Careful , Sophie ! Your body needs more rest , " Elwin said , examining her cells .
      " If she doesn't rest , I 'll use my ability to make her ! Oh wait , I 'm not fully trained yet , " Keefe said , earning a glare from Grady .
      " The collective and Mr. Forkle will be here soon , " Alden said ," If that 's okay with you , Grady ."
      Grady nodded his head , " That 's fine , Alden ." Sophie just realized Keefe was smirking at her .
      " What ? " Sophie asked him .
      " Setting a new style , Foster ? " Keefe asked , pointing to her tunic , which was covered with alicorns . She scowled at him .
      " Can everyone leave the room for a minute so I can change ? I do not want to look like a bum when the collective arrives . " asked Sophie , heading towards her closet .
      " You could wear a feed bag and you wouldn 't look like a bum ," said Keefe , still smirking as he left the room with everyone else . Sophie turned red . She didn't know whether to feel insulted or complimented .
      " You too , Sandor ," Sophie said , smirking that Sandor was too big to hide behind her door . He growled and left . 15 minutes later , Sophie was showered and dressed in something Biana would say made her eyes pop .
      " Finally , " Mr. Forkle said with a smile ," The Moonlark graces us with her presence ." Sophie rolled her eyes and walked to where Keefe and Biana were standing . Keefe stared at her .
      " What ? " she asked him.
      " Nothing ," Keefe said , turning red. Sophie swore she could hear Ro mutter something like " Oblivious ." in the back round .
      " Do you have any idea why the Neverseen would want to kidnap Fitz ? " Mr. Forkle asked Della and Alden . Della shook her head .
      " Maybe they want to see him open a gate ," Keefe joked . Biana scowled at him .
      " Or maybe because Fitz and Sophie are Cognates . Maybe they 'll let Fitz learn the location ," Alden said .
      " And then when we rescue him , they 'll trap us , " Sophie finished .
      Keefe thought for a moment ," Nah , too obvious . "
      " Exactly , " Mr .Forkle said .
      " So how will we rescue Fitz without  them spotting us ? " Biana asked .
      " We 'll use Flashers , " Mr. Forkle explained , " And we use the Moonlark ." There was a knock on the door .
      " That 's the collective ," Mr. Forkle said . Squall , Granite , and Blur came in .
      " We heard about Fitz .We 're so sorry . Did you inform the Councillors ? " Squall asked as she sat down next to Mr . Forkle .
      " No , not yet ," he said .
      " Are we just going to sit here talking about my brother or are we going to actually find him ? " asked Biana , glaring at Mr .Forkle .
      " Biana Vacker ! They 're trying to find Fitz without getting him killed , " Della said , putting her hand on Biana 's shoulder .
      " Do you have any idea where they took he boy ? " Blur asked.
      " Our sources say they have found an abandoned cave near Loanmore . It looks ideal for holding hostages , " Forkle said , taking out a map . Sophie winced in pain as Silveny 's voice screamed in her head ," HELP ! HELP ! HELP ! BABY NOT OKAY ! SOPHIE ! KEEFE ! KEEFE ! HELP ! BAD PEOPLE ! "
      " Silveny 's calling for help ! The Neverseen are attcking her

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      - Grace

      P.S Sorry about the cliffhanger !

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    • Omgggggggg! NEVERSEEN!! YOU LEAVE LUNA AND WINN ALONE AND GIVE US FITZ!! Also this is so good.

      ~Lady Fos-Boss

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    • Ooh this is really good! But, oh the cliffhanger! Update soon!

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    • THE CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLZ POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      This is really good.

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    • What about wraith

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    • What?

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    • Oh, yeah where's wraith? Oh well, we all make mistakes.

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    • very good

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    • sorry about wraith . Let 's just pretend he was there all along .

      - Grace

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    • CHAPTER SEVEN PART TWO - Dedicated to Lady Fos-Boss .

      " This could be a trap ," considered Squall .

      " Or it might not be a trap ," came Wraith 's voice from one corner of the room .

      " Where were you ? " Biana asked , looking around the room .

      " I was here the whole time . To prove that using Flashers would be an effective way to bring back Mr. Vacker , " Wraith said , apearing next to Biana .

      " Could we stop talking and rescue Mama Glitterbutt and her family ? " Keefe asked , taking Sophie 's hand .

      " We may not . You are not coming with us , Mr. Sencen " Mr. Forkle corrected , " Squall , stay here . Wraith , Blur , Granite , come with me . Lord Ruewen ... "

      " I 'll come ," Grady said , as he got up and hugging his wife and Sophie . Then he lightleaped with Granite , Blur , Wraith , and Mr. Forkle .

      " Why don 't you three go upstairs with Sandor and Ro ? " Edaline suggested , looking pale.

      Sophie knew better than to argue , " Okay , mom . C'mon , guys ." Sophie went upstairs to her room with Biana and Keefe . Sandor and Ro followed .

      " Sooo , what do you guys want to talk about ," Sophie said , once they reached her room.

      " Have you found out who your parents are ? Or at least any clues ?" Keefe asked , running a hand through his hair .

      " Umm , can we not talk about this now ? " Sophie asked , tugging on an eyelash . Keefe and Biana both raised their eyebrows , but said nothing .

      " Sophie , it 's a trap ! The Neverseen are coming to Havenfield ! Get away ! " Granite transmmitted before he was cut off .

      " Granite ?! GRANITE ??! " Sophie tried transmitting back .

      " IT 'S A TRAP !  THEY 'RE COMING HERE !! " Sophie screamed to her friends , Sandor and Ro before she ran down the stairs to warn eveyone . But it was too late . Squall was fighting against Ruy . Lady Gisela was fighting fist to fist with Alden . Sophie scanned the room until she saw Della and Elwin tending to an injured Edaline . Just then , Gethen pounced on her .

      " Sandor ! Ro ! HELP ! " Sophie screamed as Gethen held a melder to her neck .

      " Goodbye , Moonlark ," Gethen said with a smirk . Just then , something hit him on the head .

      " Keefe ! " Sophie cried as she recognized her rescuer  ," Thank you ! " Before Sophie knew what she was doing , she kissed him on the cheek .

      " Anytime , Foster ," Keefe said , but he turned red . Then Sophie took his hand and ran upstairs to Sandor , Ro , and Biana .

      " Sandor ! " Sophie screamed as an ogre snuck behind him . Sophie inflicted on it .

      " Let 's get out of here ! " Ro cried from the closet , dragging a cut up Biana out .

      " We can 't leave without Edaline ! She 's hurt ! " Sophie yelled as they raced to a window .

      " I 'll come back for her ," Sandor said as he pushed Sophie , Biana , Ro , and Keefe out .Then he jumped out .

      " Ow ! " they all said except Sandor .

      " Sophie ! Teleport to Dex 's house ! I 'll meet you there , " Sandor ordered , before he went back inside . When they arrived , Dex and Kesler started asking lots of questions .

      " Is Juline okay ? " " Why are you all cut up ?" " What happened ?"

      " Hey Dex , is that the girl you kissed ? " Lex asked , pointing to Sophie .

      " Why don 't you kiss that girl ? " Bex asked , pointing to Biana .

      " SHUT UP ! " Dex screamed , turning bright red .

      " Where 's Rex ? " Kesler asked , ushering everyone in . Bex , Lex , and Dex shrugged .

      " I 'll be right back . I just need to put something away before my siblings get into it ," Dex said , running up to his room . Kesler went into the kitchen .

      " Crazy family ," Biana said , sitting on a plush red chair . Ro stood in front of the door .

      " But we like crazy . Right , Foster ? " Keefe asked . Sophie was about to answer when they heard Dex scream , " REX DIZZNEE !! WHAT DID YOU DO ?! DAD , YOU MIGHT WANT TO GET UP HERE ! "

      " Crazy family ," Biana muttered .

      " Oh , no ," Kesler said , coming out of the kitchen ," Excuse my family. They 've been a mess today . " Then he went upstairs .

      " REX DIZZNEE !! YOU 'RE GOING TO BE GROUNDED UNTIL YOU 'RE AN ANCIENT !!  " they heard Kesler scream . Dex , Kesler , and Rex came downstairs covered in pink paint and glitter .

      " Dex , get Rex cleaned off . You should clean off too , " Kesler said as he wiped paint off his face , " Wait , where 's Lex and Bex ? "

      " I thought they were with you , " Keefe said , looking confused . He looked cute when he was confused , Sophie mentally told herself . She turned red .

      " BEX ! LEX ! " Kesler screamed as he went upstairs . Just then Sandor came into the house , carrying a knocked out Edaline . Della and Elwin followed . Sophie gasped as she saw Edaline . Keefe hugged her .

      " Mom ! " Biana screamed , hugging Della .

      " How is she ? " Sophie asked Elwin , breaking out of Keefe 's grasp.

      " She shouldn 't move . Edaline 's lucky . If that knife went further , she would have died . But she 's going to be fine . " Elwin said as he checked Edaline 's vitals as Sandor laid her down on the couch .

      " Oh , mom ," was all Sophie said as she hugged Edaline .

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    • Oh my gosh!!!!!!!! This is sooo good!!!!! PLZ POST MORE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • I love this so so so so much!!

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    • That's really good!

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    • It IS really good!

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    • This is REALLY great! Post soon! 

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    • I am working on the rough draft now .

      - Grace

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    • Yay!!

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    • YAS

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    • YA!!!!!

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    • Ohhhhh poor Edaline!! Please write more soon!

      ~Lady Fos-Boss

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    • This is so good! I wish this actually happened in the books!

      ~ Mysterious Miss F

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    • This is so good! I really like how this whole fanfic (at least so far) I sn’t just about Sophie and Keefe dating. 💙👍😄👌🏼 -thatweirdbookworm

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    • THANKS ALL OF YOU ! I 'M POSTING THE STORY NOW !!!!

      - Grace

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    • YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      Quick question:

      Where is it?

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    • Yeah I'm not seeing it either... My computer takes a while to catch up on things so idk

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    • I can’t see it either

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    • I love this soooo much! Please write more very soon!

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    • CHAPTER EIGHT - Dedicated to SoKeefe Rules!

      A few hours later , Squall and Alden came back .

      " Mom ! " the triplets and Dex squealed .

      " Juline ! " Kesler cried as he joined the hug .

      " Dad ! " Biana screamed as she and Della hugged Alden . Sophie held Keefe 's hand , knowing that he was thinking about his mother .

      " How is she ? " Squall asked , stroking Edaline 's face .

      " She 'll be up in a few days , " Elwin said from a corner of the room .

      " If you 'll excuse me , I need to change , " Squall said as she went upstairs . Alden updated the Dizznees on what happened at Havenfield . When Juline came back downstairs , Sophie asked , " How 's Grady ? And Forkle , Blur , Wraith , and Granite ? "

      Juline sighed as she sat down next to Kesler , " After the battle , I went to the Sanctuary to check on everyone . Grady 's the luckiest . Just a sprained ankle and a broken arm . Blur has a slight concussion . Wraith has 5 broken ribs . Granite has a slight concussion , but he 'll be okay . I brought them all to Livvie 's .The alicorns are fine and will be moved to a more secure area . "

      " What about Mr. Forkle ? " Sophie asked . Keefe clutched her hand .

      " His mind is broken , " Juline said , burying her face in her hands.

      Sophie fought back tears ," When will he be stable enough so I can bring him back ? "

      " Livvie says in a few days , " Juline said , tears running down her face .

      " It 's been a long day . How about some dinner and then sleep ? " Kesler suggested , still hugging Juline .

      " If you show me where everything is , I 'd be happy to make dinner , " Della said . Juline nodded . Then she , Della ,  and Biana all went into the kitchen . After a delicious dinner of rainbow stew that tasted like turkey , Della , Biana , and Alden went back to Everglen . Since Edaline couldn 't move , Elwin , Sandor and Sophie slept at the Dizznee 's house . Keefe and Ro insisted on staying too .

      " For emotional support , " Keefe claimed , while Ro rolled her eyes . After the Vackers left , Juline set up a cot next to Edaline .

      " Elwin , you 're in the guest bedroom on the second floor . First door to your left , " she said . Elwin nodded and went upstairs .

      " You 'll sleep on the floor in my room , " Dex told Keefe as they climbed the stairs . Ro followed and muttered something like " Teenage boys ."

      " Thaks for everything , " Sophie said as she hugged Juline .

      " You are welcome , " Juline said as she went upstairs .

      " Night , Sandor , " Sophie said as she fell asleep .

      " Good night , " Sandor said .

      " Pssst , Foster , wake up ! " a voice said , a few hours later .

      " Keefe , go to bed , " Sophie mumbled , swatting him away .

      " Trust me , Foster , you 'll love it , " Keefe promised , smirking when Sophie got up .

      " Stay here , Sandor , we 'll be fine ," Sophie ordered . He nodded .

      " C 'mon , " Keefe said , dragging Sophie to a balcony on the third floor .

      " Wow , "Sophie said as she looked at the beautiful full moon .

      " Worth it ? " Keefe , leaning closer to her .

      " Yup , " was all Sophie was able to say as she noticed Keefe was very close to her .

      " Interesting , " Keefe mused . Sophie turned red . Suddenly , their eyes locked . Sophie felt her eyes close as their lips touched . She decided that his lips tasted like peppermint and strawberry . She liked it .

      "They kissed ! I win the bet ! You owe me a new sword ! " came Ro 's voice from a closet . Sophie and Keefe stopped kissing and let go of each other .

      " Why is it always me ? " Sandor 's voice said .

      " SANDOR ! " Sophie screamed at the same time Keefe screamed , " ROMHILDA ! "

      " You called , Lord Hunkyhair ? " Ro asked , coming out of the closet . Sandor followed .

      " You seriously had to spy on us ? " Sophie asked as both she and Keefe turned red .

      " It was his idea , " Ro said , pointing to Sandor .

      " I go where you go , " Sandor said , almost sheepishly . Almost .

      " Um , I 'm going to get a drink of water , " Sophie said , eager to get out of that room . She quickly raced downstairs . Sandor followed .

      " Sooo , is she a good kisser ? Should I expect to call her Lady Hunkyhair ? Or Lady Sencen ? " Ro asked , eyeing Keefe .

      " RO ! JUST SHUT UP ! " Keefe said , still red , as he ran his hand through his hair .

      " A kiss that took three years , " Ro muttered as they walked back to Dex 's room . Keefe glared at her as he walked into the room and layed down . Ro just batted her eyelashes and stood outside the door .

      " You had to interupt , didn 't you ? " Sophie asked as she got under her blankets .

      " What if the Neverseen grabbed you ? " Sandor asked , patroling the door .

      " But they didn 't . And you had to interupt my first real kiss . Dex 's didn 't count , " Sophie said , shutting her eyes . Sandor muttered something but Sophie was too tired to hear it . Both Keefe and Sophie slept well that night .

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    • Sorry this took so long . My stupid computer lost my chapter so I had to type it again .

      - Grace .

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    • Awww!!! I love this!!!!

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    • The triplets know who squall is?

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    • Ok this is amazing!!!

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    • AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! THS IS SO GOOD!!!!!!!!! LEGIT LOVE IT! Could you maybe put a bit more detail into their kisses (if/when they kiss again) I am not a creep, I swear. I just love my sappy romance.

      -Ultimate

      P.S. AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH I just read the part where Everglen was attacked, and I couldn't overlook the fact that SOPHIE'S LUNG BURST!!! Just kidding, I know it was just a typo. :)

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    • A quick note , I will be gone all today and all tomorrow so I won 't be able to update , Sorry !

      - Grace .

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    • That's okay, can't wait!

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    • THIS BOOK IS SOOOOO GOOOD!!!!! IM SO GLAD YOU WROTE IT IN 3RD PERSON!!! MANY OTHER FAN-FIC I READ ARE IN 1ST PERSON BUT THIS ONE IS GREAT!!!!! IT IS ALSO MUCH MORE REALISTIC AND THE CHARATERSS ACT LIKE HOW THEY DO IN THE REAL BOOKS!!!! I CAN'T WAIT UNTILL YOU UPDATE!!!!! I LOVE KEEFE!!!! 

      -KOTLCPINEAPPLE

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    • I so sorry I kept everyone waiting . It was a tough week . The next post will be today or tomorrow .

      - Grace .

      P.S. Did anyone like their first kiss ?

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    • Yay! I'm sorry you had a tough week :( I know the feeling. Hope it gets better!

      I can't really answer the second question bc I haven't had my first kiss yet 

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    • Sorry , I meant Sophie and Keefe 's first kiss .

      - Grace .

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    • EEEEEE I love this!! It's so good!

      ~Lady Fos-Boss

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    • 72.230.200.36 wrote:
      Sorry , I meant Sophie and Keefe 's first kiss .

      - Grace .

      It's ok. I haven't had my first kiss yet. But Sophie and Keefe kiss was sweet. 

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    • This is really cool. Sophie and Keefe forever!

                       -The Purple Hydrokinetic

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    • Please take this poll:

      Who is your favorite bodyguard, Ro, Sandor, Flori, or Grizel?

      Mine is Ro, honestly.

                -The Purple Hydrokinetic

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    • Either Ro or Sandor. Probably Ro. Yeah. Ro!!!!

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    • I love this! Please keep writing, you're so good at it!

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    • This fanfic is so awesome! Are you going to post more?

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    • Ro. definitely ro

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    • RO IS MY FAVE BODYGUARD

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    • Ummmm how to choose? Ro or Sandor most likely...

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    • Ro is my absolute fav . To answer LoveSoKeefeForever 's question , I 'll be updating tomorrow ! I just want to say , you all are soooo supportive and sweet . I don 't know what I 'd do without all of you .

      - Grace .

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    • P.s. In a few chapters , we 'll have a few famous guest stars . I 'll give you a hint . Three kids . One with lots of brains and very bushy hair . A redhead who likes saying , " Bloody Hell . " ( I think I gave it away : ) And an orphan with glasses and a scar on his forhead .  Yes , the Golden Trio . Hope

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    • .*SQUEALS*

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    • OMG I ACTUALLY THINK I KNOW WHO THEY ARE

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    • IT’S THEM!!!

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    • YES IT IS THEM

      its actually pretty obvious tho

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    • When you haven’t read it due to parental restrictions... :(

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    • Awwwwwww my mom wouldn't let me read THE BOOKS at first, but then she was like, Okay, whatever, go ahead. I never got past the first book because I didn't feel like it.

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    • I actually really want to because all my friends say they’re so good but alas. My parents will not be convinced.

      However your fanfic is amazing! It’s so sweet and good and I love it!

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    • YASSSSSS!!!

      OMG!! RO IS MY 2ND FAVOURITE CHARACTER (AFTER KEEFE OF COURSE!). IM SOOO EXICETED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! LOVE THIS FANFIC!!!

      -KOTLCPINEAPPLE

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    • Ohhh!!!! I CAN'T TO SEE THE TRIO!!!! THEY ARE MY CHILDHOOD FANTASY BOOK BUDDIES!!!!!!

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    • I 'm sorry this is taking so long . I lost my first draft of the story and I have to re write it .

                          - Grace .
      
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    • Aw that always sucks :( That's ok tho!!

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    • oof

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    • 😢

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    • Thats to bad....that sounds sooo frustrating....SOOOO EXICIED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER THO!!!! 

      -KOTLC PINEAPPLE

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    • This is so great!!! I can't wait for the next chapter... SoKeefe is the best though!!! 

      My fav bodyguard is definitely Ro she is so great except for when she inturrupts SoKeefe moments and that's when I want to throw a oblin throwing star at her

      This fanfic is so good though!!!

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    • goblin sry not oblin

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    • But, Ro is probablly the biggest Sokeefe shipper in the book series so..... you got ta love her.

      -KOTLCPINEAPPLE

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    • Yes sokeefe for the win

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    • I am not feeling well . Next chapter won 't be posted 'till later this week . Sorry .

      - Grace .

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    • TheCharmingBookworm wrote: When you haven’t read it due to parental restrictions... :(

      But why would there be parental restrictions?... I read them in 1st grade...

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    • YOu read Keep Of THHE LOSt CItyS In 1st GRADE!!!!??!?!?! I read them in 7th GRADE

      -KOTLCPINEAPPLE

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    • ^I'm pretty sure @Dasnowleopard is talking about Harry Potter, not KOTLC

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    • I read KotLC this year in 5th grade

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    • And yes

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    • OH MY BADD.......I READ HARRY POTTER WHEN I WAS 6 TOOO SOOO.....OOOOOPS SRY 

      SO EXICETED!!!!

      -KOTLCPINEAPPLE

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    • I feel like I read this series too late. I was ten/eleven.

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    • I started when I was 12 (kotlc) and I read the first Harry Potter book around that time too

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    • I read hp during the summer between fourth and fifth grade (I was nine)

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    • I read harry potter when I was about nine and when I finished the series, my libibrian suggested kotlc and I LITTERALY FELL IN LOVE WITH THE BOOKS!  By the way, your fanfiction is pretty cool *fists bumps you as a good fellow righter should* and I 'll share mine as soon as I finish it( WHY CAN'T THIS BOOK WRIGHT ITSELF?????????????????????????????? )

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    •      -The new kid

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    • I love your writing. It's awesome.

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    • Thank you all . You all have been so supportive . Good news , I am feeling well and am finishing the next chapter .

      - Grace .

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    • YYAYAYYAYAYY!!!! SO EXICTED!!!

      -KOTLCPINEAPPLE

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    • YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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    • YESSSSSSS!

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    • WOw! Super good. I read Harry Potter in 3rd grade.

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    • Can we get more

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    • Also this is a huge debate among me and my hp friends: is the cursed child book 8?

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    • ^ Yes , it is .

      - Grace.

      P.S. Does ANYONE here ship Dramione?

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    • Not really why?

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    • I dont really ship it but i have many friends that do. I totally ship emma and tom (the actors) tho.

      -KOTLCPINEAPPLE

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    • just got an an acounttttttt!!!!

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    • CHAPTER NINE : Dedicated to SoKeefe Rules!

        " WAKE UP SOPHIE ! " screamed the triplets as they jumped onto Sophie .

      " Yeah , Sophie , wake up , " Keefe said from the doorway , mimicking the triplets .

      " Everyone except Keefe , OUT ! " Sophie yelled , pushing the triplets off of her .

      " Yeah , get out , I need to talk to Sophie , " Keefe grinned as he pushed the triplets out of the room .

      " So , about last night , " Keefe started , turning red .

      " Uh huh ? " Sophie felt her cheeks get warm .

      " Well , er , I mean , " Keefe stuttered again . Before she knew what she was doing , Sophie walked over to Keefe and pressed her lips to his . Keefe 's eyes widened before he kissed her back , putting his arms around Sophie 's waist . Sophie put one hand in his hair and another around his neck .

      " Ooooh , " Sandor , Ro , and the triplets all gasped through the open door . Keefe closed the door with his telekinesis , still kissing Sophie .

      " You guys are adorable , " a voice squealed weakly . Keefe and Sophie quickly let go of each other and both turned bright red . Sophie had totally forgotten about Edaline .

      " Don 't worry , I won 't tell Grady , " Edaline grinned , getting out of bed .

      " Really ? " Keefe asked , sounding relieved , while Sophie covered her red face in her hands .

      " Just kidding . Grady 's gonna love this when I tell him , " Edaline squealed again , before she left the room . Keefe pulled Sophie into his arms again when the window smashed . Four masked bodies entered the room . It was the Neverseen !

      " SANDOR ! RO ! " Sophie screamed as Keefe pushed her behind him .

      " What do you want ? " Keefe demanded with a glare , holding out a melder .

      Since when did Keefe carry around a melder ? Sophie wondered . All of the Neverseen members took off their masks . Gisela , Fintan , Vespara , and Ruy were all smirking at them .

      " How 's Keefe 's kissing skills ? " Alvar asked , still smirking .

      " How did you know I was kissing her ? " Keefe asked at the same time Sophie said , " Better than your kissing skills . "

      " Not that I would know , " Sophie quickly added when everybody , including Keefe , stared at her .

      " Let 's get down to the point , " Lady Gisela ordered , " You two come with us , or Fintan here burns down the house . Whith everybody in it . While you watch . "

      Use your mesmerizing , Sophie transmitted to Keefe .

        Good idea . Except for one minor problem . I 'M NOT TRAINED YET ! Keefe transmitted back .

      " Cute . Are you two Cognates ? Has Keefe replaced that Vacker boy ? " Gisela asked , sneering .

      " What are you talking about ? " Keefe asked , confused .

      " Don 't play dumb . We Sencens are a lot of things , but stupid is not one of them . You 're a Telepath now . Remember that day when I expiremented on you ? " Gisela snarled .

      " But I 'm not a Telapath , " Keefe said . Then Sophie heard a scream and everything went black .

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    • I hope you all enjoy this chapter . Oh , I have a new fanfiction called I 'll love you forever at : https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:572580 . It 's a Sokeefe strory .

      - Grace .

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      I hope you all enjoy this chapter . Oh , I have a new fanfiction called I 'll be with you always . at : https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:572580 . It 's a Sokeefe strory .

      - Grace .

      Sorry for the mistake :(

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    • I LOVE THIS!

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    • Love THE NEW CHAPTER!!! IM GONNA GO READ ILL BE WITH YOU ALWAYS!!!

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    • THIS IS AMAZING!!! You are such a good writer!! How do you do it?! I'm trying to write a novel and a fanfic, but I'm NOT a good writer.

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    • This is sooooooooooo good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • I think the triplets are in my top 5 favourite characters :

      1- Keefe

      2- Ro

      3- Sophie

      4- the Triplets

      5- stina(yes, you read well: I think Stina's cool- but not at the beginning, I only started to like  after book 4

      - The new kid

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    • Sokeefer4eva wrote: THIS IS AMAZING!!! You are such a good writer!! How do you do it?! I'm trying to write a novel and a fanfic, but I'm NOT a good writer. </div Sokeefer4eva -

       I would HIGHLY suggest writing out the story on paper before posting it online . Age does not matter . Hey , I 'm 12 and I have been writing stories since I was 8  . Practice makes perfect . And ALWAYS proof-read your work . I know it may seem boring , but trust me , I make lots of mistakes on my first drafts and I flesh them out by proof-reading . 
          - Grace .
      
      P.S. Could you give me the link to your fanfics ? Thanks !
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    • "Better than your kissing skills"

      OMG I LOVE THIS I LEGIT STARTED SQUEALING WHEN I STARTED THE CHAPTER, BUT THEN IT TURNED TO HYSTERICAL LAUGHTER THIS IS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      ~Eleda

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    • I am sorry this chapter is taking sooo long . I broke my leg so ... yeah .

      - Grace .

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    • I'm sorry!! I hop you feel better soon!!!!

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    • Thanks !

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    • Oof. That is not fun. What happened?

      Hope it heals fast!

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    • AWWWWWW , you 're so sweet . I was sledding them I fell off my sled and my brother ran over my leg .

      - Grace .

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    • I’m sick at home, I just vomited like a bajillion times

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    • Sorry if that sounded mean, I didn’t mean it like that. Hope you feel better Grace

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    • It didn 't seem mean at all. Thanks for your kind words , Dasnowleopard :)

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    • I hope you both feel better

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    • I was throwing up a couple days ago, but it passed very quickly... Here's hoping it's the same for you, Dasnowleopard

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    • Thanks yeah I haven’t been at my best the past few days

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    • Ya its a sick time of year(Lol) I have a sinus infection:(

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    • Oof hope you get better

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    • I hope y'all feel better! I have a cold, and the only things I have been doing for the past two days are sleeping, reading (mostly KOTLC bcoz why not) and watching TV for, like, 2 hours. 

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    • Jeez guys.

      I'm completely fine(touch wood. Don't ask.).

      YOU GUYS GOT SNOW SO LUCKY YET AT THE SAME TIME, NOT.

      Ouch, that also sounded mean. Sorry!

      I hope y'all feel better soon! All the various injeries and maladies.

      Ooookay, I CAN NOT spell! 

      (Maladies: Diseases, sickness. Forgive me for my nerd speach)

      ~Eleda

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    • Hope y'all get better!!!!!! 

      Why are soo many people sick??? GASP...corona...........flu.........JK

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    • I have strep throat

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    • Oof. Hope you feel better.

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    • AND I had chorus today... TRUST ME THOSE DONT MIX

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    • I hope you all feel better .

      - Grace.

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    • OH yeah I went to choir today and almost everyone was half sick. We sounded soooo bad and crocky..

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    • Oof

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    • JewelStorm14 wrote:
      AND I had chorus today... TRUST ME THOSE DONT MIX

      You have school?? I'm on vacation........................

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    • Really? Like on a trip vacation or time off vacation?

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    • time off vacation

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    • I have school vacation right now

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    • ^same

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    • LUCKYYYYYYYYYYYY

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    • YOU ALL ARE SOOOOOO LUCKY . I 'M HOMESCHOOLED .

      - Grace .

      P.S. I AM ON THE ROAD TO RCOVERY THANKS TO YOUR KIND WORDS . 3 MONTHS 'TILL THE CAST COMES OFF :(

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    • Oohh........... I'm sorry...... I broke my foot in the summer.

      THAT WAS A PAINFUL DAY!!!!!

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    • I feel soosoo sorry for u guys Ive never broke any bones before hope you all get better!

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    • I hope you get better, too! I've never broken any bones either, so I can't even imagine how painful it must be to have to wear a cast for three months... hope you get better!

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    • lol i just realized i said "hope you get better" twice...

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    • KOTLCPINEAPPLE wrote:
      I feel soosoo sorry for u guys Ive never broke any bones before hope you all get better!

      Eh, that was like 6 months ago......

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    • JewelStorm14 wrote:
      AND I had chorus today... TRUST ME THOSE DONT MIX

      Oh oof! I've had strep throat multiple times, and having it and singing... I know this is an understatement but that would not​​​​​​​ be fun. At all.

      p.s. have you tried ice cream? Or milkshakes? They help. Trust me.

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    • ohhhhhh i neeed to try that

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    • Also, I have broken my arm three different times - right arm once, left arm twice - and I only had to have one cast out of all of those, but I do kind of know what it feels like, so... I can sort of imagine how awful it would be to have a cast for 3 months. Of course, I don't have much experience with legs but I do know that a sledding accident leading to 3 months in a cast is...

      oof.

      So, yeah, hope you get better! 

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    • oof

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    • KOTLCPINEAPPLE wrote:
      ohhhhhh i neeed to try that

      So my computer doesn't load well so I didn't realize that was there, and the last comment was meant for Grace, but for KOTLCPINEAPPLE:

      Yeah, I know from personal experience that it does indeed work. And while I would rather have ice cream when I'm fine than when I'm sick, it is a good excuse... : )

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    • lol

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    • thank you , marella ! And everyone else !

      - Grace .

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    • Thats kinda wat were here for!

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    • Anytime!

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    • Yeah!!

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    • I have a friend who reads KotLC but isn’t in the fandom, and she breaks and fractures multiple bones a month. She is so accident prone. She doesn’t try to, and I feel bad for her when everyone assumes it’s her fault. One time she was just swinging her legs and she broke one of them. She had a cast on either leg. She’s had crutches multiple times and a wheelchair for a couple weeks.

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    • Oof!! I feel bad for her.

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    • Yeah. She likes reading and silks, the things that acrobats use that they do tricks on.

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    • Ooohh!!!!!

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    • I'm too scared to do that stuff.

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    • Man... That is really accident prone. : ( And I thought breaking three bones was bad... 

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    • I’m clumsy but not that clumsy

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    • Hope everyone gets well soon, When are you gonna post the next chapter?

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    • - midnight  moonlark

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    • I am working on the next chapter now . Sorry 4 the wait .

         - Grace .
      
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    • That's fine. Focus on healing!

      ~Eleda

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    • I cant  wait I love this it's so good!



      -rAe

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    • Are you gonna post more??

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    • 90.70.155.173 wrote:
      I read harry potter when I was about nine and when I finished the series, my libibrian suggested kotlc and I LITTERALY FELL IN LOVE WITH THE BOOKS!  By the way, your fanfiction is pretty cool 

      Same!

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    • No pressure Grace. If you’re sick, focus on getting better. That’s what really matters. There is so much sickness going on at my school, and I have to try VERY hard to avoid it because I have a choir contest and 2 trips in the next few weeks. I’ve been preparing for these for a while so I hope I don’t get sick. Love this fanfic! Great job! Wish I could write like that! I’ve started writing a bunch of books and fan fictions, but non of them are good. Get well soon!

      - Rose

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    • Focus on getting better. Your life outside the Fandom always comes first.

      -starpetal-

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    • Yeah, no pressure. I'm going through something like you right now. Also, rose, I wanna read your fanfics!!!!

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    • Hope you feel better soon!

      -rAe

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    • YOU ALL ARE SOOOOO WONDERFUL . I BURST INTO TEARS WHEN I READ ALL OF YOUR MESSAGES . I HOPE YOU ALL ARE WELL AND AVOID THE CORONA VIRUS .

      - A SOBBING GRACE ,

      P.S. CAST IS COMING OFF IN 2 MONTHS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • Yay! 

      Like the others said, focus on healing! 

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    • OMG YASSS LOVE THIS STORY GET WELL SOON ALSO write till' your fingers fall off, but even then don't there, because the world need your writing SKILL

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    • T HANKS , ALL !

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    • This is great

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    • I am glad you like this :)

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    • CHAPTER TEN - Dedicated to LoveSoKeefeForever .

        Sophie woke up with a gasp , " Keefe ," she screamed .

      " Shh , it 's okay , Foster , I 'm here , " Keefe said , hugging Sophie . She looked around . They were in a 8 by 12 foot cage . Sophie couldn 't see anything else because it was too dark . A door opened and light filled the room .

      " You two . Eat this . You 'll need it , " a masked figure said as he or she entered the room carrying a tray with food . The Neverseen member put the tray in their cage .

      " You might want to get out of here , " Keefe threatened , growling .

      " Keefe , don 't , " Sophie warned , pulling him away from the masked figure .

      " Thanks , Moonlark , " the masked figure smirked , leaning closer to Sophie so she could see parts of his face that weren 't covered by a mask . Sophie looked closely at the figure 's face . It was obviously a male , probably a teenager .  What got Sophie though were his eyes . They were a beautiful shade of teal .

      " Fitz , " Sophie whispered quietly .

      " What did you say ? " the figure demanded , backing away from Sophie and Keefe 's cage .

      " You 're Fitz ! " Sophie screamed and started inflicting on him .

      " Sophie , calm down ! " Keefe cried , clutching Sophie .

      " Yes , Sophie , for once listen to my son , " Gisela said , walking into the room . She leaned down to see if Fitz was all right .

      " I HATE YOU ! HOW COULD YOU ? I HATE YOU , FITZROY VACKER ! AND YOU TOO , GISELA ! " Sophie screamed . Keefe held Sophie , still trying to get her to calm down .

      " Aww , is the Moonlark upset ? Next time , don 't be so trusting ," Lady Gisela smirked , helping Fitz up to his feet .

      " Why , Fitz ? " Keefe asked , tears coming down his cheeks . Sophie kept glaring at Gisela and Fitz .

      " I 'll tell you why . I joined the Neverseen after Nightfall .I realized who the winning side was , " when Fitz said this , Gisela smiled proudly , " I also realized that Sophie waould never love me . Why should I fight for someone who doesn 't even realize I 'm alive ? " Sophie continued to glare at him .

      Keefe snorted , " You got everything wrong in that speech except for one thing . Sophie doesn 't love you . She loves me . And I love her . " At this Sophie hugged Keefe . One reason she did this was because she was proud of him . The other reason she did this was to make Fitz jealous . It worked .

      " Why you little - " Fitz snarled as he tried to reach through the cage to hit Keefe . Keefe smirked at Fitz 's lousy attempt to hurt him .

      " Fitz , you need to rest , " Gisela told him .  Fitz nodded and left the room . But not before giving Keefe and Sophie a glare .

      " And since you were being a bad child , Sophie , you need to be punished . You too , Keefe , " Gisela said , holding two sets of silver handcuffs .

      " Oh no , " Keefe paled .

      " What is it ? " Sophie asked .

      " Those handcuffs take away your ability ." Keefe explained , turning even paler .

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    • FITZ!!!!!!!!!!! NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was soo good!!!!!

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    • THIS WAS AWESOME! BUT WHY DID YOU DO THAT FITZ?

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    • Sorry , but that made it a good chapter didn 't it ?

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    • We always knew he had it in him

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    • ^ LOL !!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • XD

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    • LOL... HHEEHEHHEHHEHHE. FITZ IS SOO GOOD A BEING EVILL I LOVE IT.....HEHHEHEHHE

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    • MORE!!!!!

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    • I NEED MORE

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    • I'm actually a sophex shipper, but I also ship sokeefe. Other than the many, many extra whitespaces(which are sort of endearing), this story is really good. I actually would recomend posting this story on the Keeper Of The Lost Cities community on Fanfiction.net Keeper of the lost cities archive. Considering the amount of sokeefe shippers on it, (although there are plenty of sofitz, kam, etc.), I would say it would be well recepted. Anyways, please update soon!

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    • THANKS GIRLS . YOU ARE THE BEST !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • could one of you post it at wattpad or someplace . i don 't have an email .

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    • I HAVE AN ACCOUNT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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    • Okay , now I have an account !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111

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    • Yay

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    • You don’t need to sign in though you just read it

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    • YAY!!!!!!!

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    • Congrats!

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    • Dasnowleopard wrote:
      We always knew he had it in him

      That is so true!

      And Holy Hephaestus (sry PJO fan) that was quite the plot twist!

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    • More!

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    • LOVE THIS!!! I was planning to do something like this in my fanfic, but all of the sofitz's would hate meh. T-T ( And my best friend who I interdoce to Kotlc and ship sofitz! Im triggered that she said that keefe is Too flirty!)

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    • I am really glad you guys aren 't too mad at me for the Fitz thing . I will post more soon .

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    • HEEHHEHHEHEHE I DONT LIKE FITZ 

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    • YEEESSSS this is sooo good!! I'm CuteBella0201 btw

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    • Nice to meet ya .

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    • When is the next chapter being posted?! It's a cliffhanger!

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    • Whoa, this is really good. I love that Fitz is EVIL!! Wa ha ha(my terrible evil laugh). Well, please post more. Also, the handcuffs only take away ur abilities while u r wearing them right? This story is amazing!!!

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    • Yes, when will the next chapter be posted. I waiting to see what happens! This is amazing and you are an amazing writer.

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    • Wait a sec. Do the handcuffs also take away skills? Like outward channeling or levitation or body regulation?

      When is the update!?

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    • OMG I NEED MORE PLEASE!!!!! PLEASE POST MORE SOON I LOVE THIS SM!!!

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    • notif

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    • YAYE FITZ IS EVIL. *CaCkLe*

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    • When is the next update!?

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    • I will update soon .

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    • This is so good!



      -rAe

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    • Very good! I love it! So, just hurry up! Sry if that sounded mean or anything, i just want my fanfic.

      😁😁😁

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    • Will the update be today?

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    • PLease, say it is

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    • I will update today .

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    • yay!

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    • yay!

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    • Yay this is so good!!



      -rAe

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    • SoKeefe Rules! wrote:
      I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      SAME! I CAN'T WAIT ANOTHER SECOND!!!!!!!!!! Here, I'll try. 

      Chapter two

      Sophie was very worried about Keefe. He was so still on his cot, it seemed the whole healing center was asleep. But Sophie was far from that. She didn't mean to be creepy, but it calmed her to watch his chest move up and down. He was breathing, he was alive. But the wait was endless. 

      She couldn't focus on anything else, whenever she did, her mind would display pictures of him laughing, or smirking. So she watched over his dreams. Elf cookie wars were far less stressful anyway. Needless to say, she was worried about him. "Hey" said a voice behind her. 

      She turned around, only to find a teal eyed boy in the doorway. For once she didn't care about how messy her hair was. Her life was too stressful for worries like that. "Hi, Fitz" she replied. She didn't even bother removing the connection from Keefe's elf cookie dreams, instead let them play in the back of her mind while Fitz plopped on the cot beside her. 

      "How are you?" He asked. Sophie could tell from the crease between his brows that he was worried about her. But that's not the person her should be worried about.

      "Living" Sophie answered honestly. She glanced over at the wall. Ever since Keefe fell asleep, she had moved her things to the healing center so she could monator Keefe's dreams. Including the picture Keefe had painted for her. It hung on the wall. All her friends were there, but the one her eyes trailed to was the blond haired smirking elf. Fitz reached for her hand, but her heart didn't even flutter. She was too focused on the scene of Keefe's cokkie dreams. 

      "Really" Fitz said, "you're not answering any of my calls. Come on, Sophie, it's been weeks. We just have to wait."

      Part of Sophie knew this. But, how was he not even stressed about him? No one else came to visit him that often, and that made her mind trail to the words she had said to him on the stairs. "Lot's of people care about you, Keefe."

      Sophie knew lot's of people care about him. However, maybe some more then others.

      There it is! It's not as good, but I think it's fine. It makes me smile, so ha!

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    • I loved that sooooooom much! It is so good! I wrote another chapter, because just.........................................the Sokeefe story must continue. And btw I think I replyed this to one peron, but I just copy pasted my OWN work in case other people wanted to see it. So there you go, written by a fellow team Foster-Keefe fan!

      Chapter two

      Sophie was very worried about Keefe. He was so still on his cot, it seemed the whole healing center was asleep. But Sophie was far from that. She didn't mean to be creepy, but it calmed her to watch his chest move up and down. He was breathing, he was alive. But the wait was endless. 

      She couldn't focus on anything else, whenever she did, her mind would display pictures of him laughing, or smirking. So she watched over his dreams. Elf cookie wars were far less stressful anyway. Needless to say, she was worried about him. "Hey" said a voice behind her. 

      She turned around, only to find a teal eyed boy in the doorway. For once she didn't care about how messy her hair was. Her life was too stressful for worries like that. "Hi, Fitz" she replied. She didn't even bother removing the connection from Keefe's elf cookie dreams, instead let them play in the back of her mind while Fitz plopped on the cot beside her. 

      "How are you?" He asked. Sophie could tell from the crease between his brows that he was worried about her. But that's not the person her should be worried about.

      "Living" Sophie answered honestly. She glanced over at the wall. Ever since Keefe fell asleep, she had moved her things to the healing center so she could monator Keefe's dreams. Including the picture Keefe had painted for her. It hung on the wall. All her friends were there, but the one her eyes trailed to was the blond haired smirking elf. Fitz reached for her hand, but her heart didn't even flutter. She was too focused on the scene of Keefe's cokkie dreams. 

      "Really" Fitz said, "you're not answering any of my calls. Come on, Sophie, it's been weeks. We just have to wait."

      Part of Sophie knew this. But, how was he not even stressed about him? No one else came to visit him that often, and that made her mind trail to the words she had said to him on the stairs. "Lot's of people care about you, Keefe."

      Sophie knew lot's of people care about him. However, maybe some more then others.

      There it is! It's not as good, but I think it's fine. It makes me smile, so ha!

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    • 72.220.193.115 wrote:
      I loved that sooooooom much! It is so good! I wrote another chapter, because just.........................................the Sokeefe story must continue. And btw I think I replyed this to one peron, but I just copy pasted my OWN work in case other people wanted to see it. So there you go, written by a fellow team Foster-Keefe fan!

      Chapter two

      Sophie was very worried about Keefe. He was so still on his cot, it seemed the whole healing center was asleep. But Sophie was far from that. She didn't mean to be creepy, but it calmed her to watch his chest move up and down. He was breathing, he was alive. But the wait was endless. 

      She couldn't focus on anything else, whenever she did, her mind would display pictures of him laughing, or smirking. So she watched over his dreams. Elf cookie wars were far less stressful anyway. Needless to say, she was worried about him. "Hey" said a voice behind her. 

      She turned around, only to find a teal eyed boy in the doorway. For once she didn't care about how messy her hair was. Her life was too stressful for worries like that. "Hi, Fitz" she replied. She didn't even bother removing the connection from Keefe's elf cookie dreams, instead let them play in the back of her mind while Fitz plopped on the cot beside her. 

      "How are you?" He asked. Sophie could tell from the crease between his brows that he was worried about her. But that's not the person her should be worried about.

      "Living" Sophie answered honestly. She glanced over at the wall. Ever since Keefe fell asleep, she had moved her things to the healing center so she could monator Keefe's dreams. Including the picture Keefe had painted for her. It hung on the wall. All her friends were there, but the one her eyes trailed to was the blond haired smirking elf. Fitz reached for her hand, but her heart didn't even flutter. She was too focused on the scene of Keefe's cokkie dreams. 

      "Really" Fitz said, "you're not answering any of my calls. Come on, Sophie, it's been weeks. We just have to wait."

      Part of Sophie knew this. But, how was he not even stressed about him? No one else came to visit him that often, and that made her mind trail to the words she had said to him on the stairs. "Lot's of people care about you, Keefe."

      Sophie knew lot's of people care about him. However, maybe some more then others.

      There it is! It's not as good, but I think it's fine. It makes me smile, so ha!

      Btw this is the same person that wrote that. I just noticed there are more of it so sorry! Bu whatever, read if you want! Not trying to steal any glory here! And btw LOVE your fanfic. But I will leave that to you lol. SORRY AGAIN.....gosh that's embarrising. Please ignore! Thank you! Lol. I will laugh this offf hahahahahahahahahaha okk bye.

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    • 2604:6000:DA09:7100:A5D2:337A:78AC:87FB wrote:
                CHAPTER TWO - DEDICATED TO komono dragon and SoKeefe Rules!

      "You know I have to , Sophie ," said Keefe , walking towards the group of Neverseen members and Lady Gisela .

      " Please , Keefe . Don't do this . They're evil . You're not ! We need you . I ... need you . Please , Keefe , " Sophie begged , taking Keefe's hand .

      "I'm sorry , Foster . I'm doing this for you ," then he let go of Sophie's hand and joined his mother .

      " Keefe , " Lady Gisela's voice boomed ,"I'm so proud of you .Ther's just one step more in fulfilling your Legacy . Are you ready ? "

      Keefe looked at Sophie before he answered ," Yes ."

      " Kill the girl , " his mother ordered .

      " No , Keefe , NOO !" Sophie screamed as she woke from her nightmare.Sandor ran to her side .

      " What's wrong ??!!" he asked just as Edaline and Grady entered the room .

      " What's wrong , sweetie ? " asked Edaline just as Grady asked ," Were you having nightmares ?" Sophie nodded her head .

      "Sandor , can you leave the room? " asked Edaline . Sandor nodded his head and muttered something about 'I go were you go .' as he left the room .

      "Was the nightmare about That Boy ?" Grady asked. Sophie nodded her head and buried her face in her palms .

      " What happened in your dream? " Edaline asked , rubbing Sophie's back .

      " He... joined the ... Neverseen ... again," Sophie said in between sobs " Keefe was ... forced ...to ki ... kill me ,"

      "Shhh ! It's okay , Sophie . Keefe is safe at Foxfire right now ," Edaline said , hugging Sophie .

      "That Boy can make trouble even being unconcious ," Grady muttered , joining the hug .

      " Grady , you're NOT helping ," Edaline scolded ," Is there anything we can do ?"

      " Ther is one thing . Can you bring me to Firefox ? " Sophie asked , rubbing her eyes , "So I can check on Keefe ."

      " Of course , " said Edaline , smiling that smile teenagers hate .

      And that is how Sophie Foster ended up sleeping at Firefox , sleeping on a cot next to Keefe's.

      "Night , Keefe," Sophie said as she fell asleep.

      SOUNDS AMAZING! ME LOVE IT MORE THEN I SHOULD lol

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    • Fitz is evil. Me screaming with joy. KEEFE IS IN LOVE WITH SOPHIE AND SHE LOVES HIM AND FITZ IS WERE HE SHOULD BE! lol I'm too crazy for Sokeefe. Sike! You can never be too crazy for Sokeefe! Give me. more fanfic!

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    • Why are you guys writing ?

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    • please continue posting this story is amazing

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    • thanks ! I will update soon . I am sick .

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    • oh  srry hope you get better soon

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    • Awww , thanks !

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    • Your sick too? I’ve been sick for a week and a half and just vomited. It’s the rough life. I feel bad. Hope you get better

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    • I hope you both feel better! Being sick isn't fun :/

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    • UwU

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    • Hope you get better 0w0

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    • Thanks , girls !

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    • lo i'm lucky all i have is a cough

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    • MHM

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    • I will post when I am feeling better . Sorry for the wait .

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    • It's fine. I hope you feel better!

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    • Thanks!

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