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  • CHAPTER 1

    Keefe POV

    "Can I smash this?" Ro asked Keefe, pointing to a vase. They were trying to find anything new that Lady Gisela might have left in Candleshade. 

    "Yup." Keefe said looking around. 

    "You know it's been a while since we have had a bet." Ro said, grinning. 

    "Yeah." 

    "How about this one: is Fitzphie official still?" Ro asked slyly. 

    "Of course it is." Keefe said dryly. 

    "I bet it isn't." 

    "Fine. If I win you have to spend a whole day with Bo." Keefe smirked.

    "Oh? You want to do it that way? Fine. If I win, then you have to tell Sophie your secret." Ro snarled. Keefe glared. "Well? Shall we go settle this bet? There's nothing left for me to smash anymore, and at least Havenfield doesn't have as much sparkles."

    "I'm beginning to think you just want me to add more verses to the ballad of bo and ro." Keefe responded. 

    "Lets go." They went to the leapmaster and said "Havenfield," and they found themselves in the lush pastures in front of Calla's tree. 

    "It's that boy." Keefe heard Grady say to Edaline. 

    "Oh be quiet Grady." Edaline responded. "SOPHIE!" She yelled. Keefe heard thumps as Sophie ran down the stairs. 

    "Hey Foster." Keefe said. 

    "Hi!" She said, tugging on her eyelashes. 

    "Lets get straight to the point Lord Hunkyhair. Is Fitzphie still official?" Ro asked. 

    "No..." Sophie responded blushing. "Why?" 

    "It's a bet me and Lord Hunkyhair have. And now he has to tell you his secret." 

    "What secret?" Sophie asked Keefe. He looked at his shoes. 

    "You know the punishment of not following through with a bet Lord Hunkyhair." Ro said. 

    "I KNOW!" Keefe practically screamed. "All right Foster. umm..." 

    "It's for your own good Hunkyhair." Ro said. 

    "Just say it super quick!" Sophie said. 

    "Fine. MysecretisthatIlikeyou."



    chapter 1 is finished! Thanks for reading and hopefully you enjoyed it...I think i need to cut back on the dialogue though.......

    -Princess Furryfins 

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    • CHAPTER 2

      "You...like...me?" Sophie whispered. 

      Keefe coughed. "Yeah." 

      "Well why didn't you tell me that earlier!" She said louder. 

      "Umm... well.. because you were so... i don't know.. enamored with Fitz." 

      "No i wasn't." 

      "Yeah, you kinda were. My favorite color is teal and no one knows why... my big secret that nobody knows but its obvious because yous stare into his eyes so much.. the way-" 

      "Hunkyhair, I don't think this is helping you.." Ro interrupted pointing at Sophie who was giving him the evil eye. She then turned it on Ro. "Hey! he seemed kinda clueless! Just thought I should help out!" 

      "So..umm...i guess I'm done here then. Lets go Ro." Keefe said. 

      "Hunkyhiar-" 

      "No Ro. She doesn't like me back. Come on." 

      "Wait! Keefe!" Sophie said, right before he stepped into the light. "Everything was so hard with Fitz. I kept on wondering what to do, how to be perfect because he was a vacker. And I think that's what messed me up. But I am always myself with you. So maybe..maybe I could like you back?" 

      "Really?" Keefe whispered. 

      "I told you Hunkyhair." Ro said. 

      "Romahilda, I think this is a good time for you to stop talking." Bo interrupted. 

      "Shut up Bo. MY NAME IS RO." 

      "I never thought I'd say this," Sandor said, "but I agree with Bo." Ro rolled her eyes, but stopped talking. 

      "Come on, lets go sit over here." Sophie pointed to calla's tree. 

      They sat down, and Keefe began, "I know you propably don't know how long I've liked you, but it's been a long time. And then when Fitz became your boyfriend, you understand why I got mad, because I've liked you way longer than Fitz. And...you chose him." 

      "Yes, I did." Sophie said. "But now I'm willing to give you a chance. I ddin't realize you liked me. And well...I think.. I..might be over him?" 

      "Really?" Keefe breathed. 

      "Yes." They leaned closer, and closer together, until there was just a hair of space in between them, and Keefe looked at sophie for permission. 

      She nodded, and right as their lips were about to touch, a familiar crisp, accented voice said,  "really?" 

      Yay! Thats the second chapter, hope you enjoyed! :) And i can't believe i spelled my name wrong in the first chapter...hahaha.....

      -Princess fluffyfins :)

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    • oooops!!!!!!! omg! I can't believe I did this but I forgot that keefe is in a coma! SO, lets just say that he is out of it, right before the first chapter, and I'll reveal his ability in future chapters..

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    • CHAPTER 3 (i think? im to lazy to scroll up hahaha)

      Sophie and Keefe pulled apart quickly, blushing scarlet. 

      "I thought my dad talked to you Keefe." Fitz said angrily. 

      "well..." Keefe said, pulling grass out by its roots. 

      "Wait WhAt?!" Sophie asked. "Why would alden talk to Keefe?"

      "Well he'd talk to me because I'm his Fitzy's best friend. And I go over there pretty much everyday so it would take a lot of work not to talk to me. Especially since I get in a lot of trouble. hehe." His smirk faded when nobody laughed. "Worth trying right?" 

      "Seriously Keefe. You agreed." 

      "Agreed about WhAt?" Sophie asked, growing VERY frustrated. 

      "And then you come over here as soon as you hear we are just friends, but you know we are going to get back together. Come on." Fitz said to Keefe. 

      "I actually didn't know Fitzy. It was because umm...well i figured out what I manifested as." Keefe said. 

      "Oh my gosh! I totally forgot about that! I guess I'm so used to having you around." 

      "I tend to be like that." Keefe says smirking at her. 

      "CAN YOU FOCUS HERE?" Fitz yelled. "YOU JUST TOOK MY-" 

      "Fitz, I'm not your girlfriend-" Fitz tried to interrupt but Sophie cut him off, "and I am most certainly not an OBJECT. And I'm giving Keefe a chance."

      "So that's it then? You never had feelings for me?" 

      "I didn't say that, it just feels more right for you to be my friend. I kept on thinking that I had to be perfect cause, well, you are a vacker. But with Keefe, I can be myself." She said, smiling shyly at Keefe. 

      "So you just expect me to watch while you go all SoKeefe on eachother?"

      "hey prettyboy, that's what you expected Hunkyhair to do." Ro interjected. 

      "Wait what?" Sophie asked. "tell me what you are talking about please. Why would alden talk to keefe."

      "You gonna tell her, hunkyhair, or should I?" Ro asked. Keefe shook his head. "Fine. I will. Prettyman talked to hunkyhair about laying off and letting prettyboy have you." 

      "So you guys think I'm an object." Sophie said aNgRiLy.

      "I don't." Ro said. "And I know Hunkyhair doesn't either." 

      "Really Fitz? Really?" Sophie asked. Fitz didn't say anything. Sophie shook her head. "Goodbye Fitz. I'm done." 

      YAYAY TEAM FOSTER-KEEFE FOR THE WWWWWWWWWWIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNN hahaha... i dont know about you guys but originally i was a fitzphie fan but now im a sokeefe one cause fitzy gets everything easily....idk and keefe seems to be more understanding, but so is Fitz sometimes....and keefe never gets anything good... so yeah! Thanks for reading, hope you enjoyed! 

      -Princess Fluffyfins

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      I just sat there giggling for 5 mins strait

      yayay!

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • Oooooh great fanfic!!! 

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    • thank you so much!

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • CHAPTER 4

      "You'll regret that decision Sophie." Fitz said angrily as he stepped into the light. Grizel looked apologetically at Sandor as she followed her charge.

      "Well, that's done." Sophie said.

      Keefe was staring off into space. Things were running through his mind. Was Fitz actually right? What would people say about Sophie? She was supposed to be the moonlark, and he was supposed to follow through with his legacy. Which propably was the exact oposite of the blackswan's vision for Sophie. They were polar opposites. It just wouldn't work. He didn't want to hurt Sophie, and the way to do that was end this now. If he waited, it would just get worse. 

      "Keefe?" Sophie asked. 

      "What?" He said, trying to sound a little bit testy. 

      "Well you said you had another ability. I was just wondering what it was?" Sophie asked. 

      "What does it matter to you?" Keefe asked angrily. He tried to make his expression be like ice. 

      "Because you are my boyfriend, and thats why you originally came..." Sophie said. Keefe's heart ached at the word boyfriend. 

      "Boyfriend?" Keefe asked. 

      "Yeah, right?" 

      "Ummm, when did we come to that understanding?" 

      "3 minutes ago?" 

      "Hunkyhair, whatever you're doing, don't do it." Ro said. 

      "I'm not doing anything. And sorry sophie, but I'm not your boyfriend." His voice shook a little, but he tried to make it steady and like steel.

      "But you said...your secret was that you liked me?" She had a confused expression pasted on her face and her eyes looked a little watery. 

      "Oh. That. That was just a joke. A prank. To see if I could make you and Fitz believe it. Seems like it worked." He grinned on the outside, but on the inside, guilt filled his stomach. And he could feel sophie's sadness and heartbreache, and that made everything worse. 

      "reallly?" sophie whispered. 

      "yes." his voice shook again, and he hoped sophie didn't notice. She stood there. Staring at him. Tears rolled down her face.  

      She continued to stand there, and stare. He got out his crystal to the shores of solace, and just as he was about to step into the light, she walked towards him, grabbed his shirt and kissed him. 

      Fireworks broke out through his head. Against his better judgement, he kissed her back, because he had wanted this for so long. So. Long. But then he came to his senses, and he pushed her away. 

      "Whatever your doing Keefe. Stop. Because I... I love you. And you pushing me away isn't going to change that." Sophie said.

      Keefe just shook his head and stepped into the light.

      Okay, I finished! Yay! So hopefully you liked that chapter, in the next chapter i'll definitely tell you his ability, it just didn't fit in this one...thanks for reading!

      -Princess fluffyfins

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    • CHAPTER 5

      Keefe POV

      "WHAT ARE YOU DOING HUNKYHAIR?" Ro yelled at Keefe. "Don't lie to me. I know you like her. I know you think you're doing the right think but you're not."

      "Really? What do you know Ro? Fitz is better for her. He's more handsome, and his family is more powerful. I'm her nemesis Ro! Don't you get that? Ending it now will hurt her less." Keefe said, sinking onto his bed. 

      "Oh Hunkyhair. Fitz doesn't deserve Sophie. You do. And who cares if your supposed to be her nemesis? Loving her will help prevent that!" Ro said. 

      "It's too late anyway. Fitz propably is already back to being her boyfriend." 

      "Blondie isn't that shallow Hunkyhair. I want you to go back there and tell her you didn't mean that." Ro said. 

      "No." Keefe curled into a ball on his bed and squeezed Mrs. Stinkbottom. 

      Fitz POV

      Fitz couldn't believe Sophie did that. He was so much better for her. He was a VACKER. And keefe was basically her nemesis. Keefe couldn't be more horrible for her. And he couldn't be better for her. He needed to get her back. She always loved the gifts he gave her, he could always see her melt when he gave them to her. 

      Crush cuffs? Nah. To soon.

      He needed to ask Biana. "Hey Biana, what should I get Sophie? It needs to make her REALLY melt." 

      "Hmm...maybe project one of your memories into crystal, kinda like a picture frame. So have one of you two hugging or something." 

      "Awesome thanks. Could you help me?" 

      "No, I've got to go meet Tam in Atlantis." It was only then that he realized that she had on prettier clothes then she would normally where. 

      "Oh." He frowned. He liked Tam, but Tam was a twin. And twins should not be dating Vackers. 

      "Bye!" 

      He found a suitable piece of crystal and grabbed it. He imagined Sophie, and then he looked in a mirror and imagined him right next to her. He made sure that she was cuddled up really close to him, and made it so they were under the panakes tree. Perfect, he thought. 

      He leaped to havefield and saw Sophie sitting under the panakes and staring off into space. 

      Time to make her melt. 

      I keep not putting keefe's new ability in and i will try to do it in the next chapter, it just didn't fit in this one. We'll see. Thanks for reading and hope you enjoyed!!!

      -Princess fluffyfins

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    • Fitz is going to go back home crying 😏😏😏

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    • I realllllly hope

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    • Post more plsssssssss

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    • Plssss post more

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    • I will! I am working on the next chapter now!!! -princess fluffyfins

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    • Chapter 6

      Sophie POV

      "Hey Soph!" A familiar voice said behind her. 

      "Oh. Hi Fitz." She said as she truned around to see the handsome young elf. But strangely, her heart did not flutter and she did not blush when she met his eyes. 

      "I just wanted to say that I'm sorry," Fitz said as he started his prepared speach, "for everything wrong that I did. I shouldn't have let my dad interfere and I just wanted to give you a gift, because I know how much you like those." 

      Sophie frowned. "Alright." 

      Fitz POV

      Fitz was confused, she was supposed to melt! He said sorry! He didn't understand what was going on. "Lets sit under the Panakes tree. I remember lots of good things happening under that tree." 

      "yeah," sophie mumbled, "That's where Keefe told me..."

      "I take it that means you aren't together?" Fitz asked. 

      "umm, we had a misunderstanding." 

      Score one for fitzphie, Fitz thought. "Well, maybe this gift will make you happier." He held out his gift wrapped in teal wrapping paper with a gold bow. It was perfect for their relationship.

      Sophie POV

      Sophie tried not to think about the wrapping paper. DId he think she was just the gold bow? She opened it anyway, and inside was a piece of crystal that sparkled in the sun. And inside of that was a memory, or that's what it looked like. It was her cuddling next to Fitz! When did this happen? she thought. And why would he give her this, when they are broken up and she's with Keefe? 

      Fitz POV

      Fitz didn't understand. SHE WAS SUPPOSED TO BE MELTING. And then saying thank you, and then confessing her crush again. But none of that was happening. She just looked...horrified.

      Time for phase 2 of his plan. He had called Keefe and asked him to come over to Havenfield in about 1 minute from now. He stepped closer to Sophie. "You don't like it?" 

      "Um. Uh. It's great?" 

      He reached for her hands. "Did I not pick the right memory?"

      "Yeah," she laughed. 

      He stepped forward even more, grabbed her waist and pulled her into a kiss, just as he saw keefe appear behind Sophie. 

      Sophie POV

      She couldn't believe what was happening! Fitz Vacker was kissing her! She started to kiss him back, but then she came to her senses and tried to pull away, but he wouldn't let her. 

      Fitz POV

      Keefe looked mortified. And Ro looked like she was going to kill him, but no matter. He had Sophie now. Afterall she was kissing him back. And then she tried to push him away, but he held her for a few seconds longer. Then he broke the kiss. 

      Keefe POV. 

      "Am I interrupting something?" Keefe asked. He was heartbroken. Sophie had just kissed Fitz. 

      Sophie POV

      And then the worst thing happened. She heard Keefe's voice. 

      "You don't understand!" She rushed to say. "It wasn't what it looked like. Fitz gave me this gift and I didn't like it, and I was trying to figure out how to tell him that, and then he kissed me. And then I tried to push him away-" 

      "Really?" Keefe asked. "Cause that's not what it looked like to me." He looked upset. 

      "I can show you my memories. Please. Don't leave. It's not- I don't like Fitz. You can feel my dislike for him right now, right?" 

      Keefe POV

      It was true, he could feel her dislike, rolling off her like waves for Fitz. He nodded. "Fine. I trust you Sophie. And I made a mistake earlier. I didn't mean what I said." 

      "Really?" Sophie asked. 

      "Yes." And then he walked over there and kissed her. Right in front of Fitz. It felt so good. Score 1 for Team Foster-Keefe. 

      ARGH! I FORGOT TO PUT IN HIS ABILITY! I'll for sure try to put it in next time. (But knowing me, I'll propably forget hahaha) Thanks for reading and hope you enjoyed!

      -Princess Fluffyfins

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    • Yeah fitz is defiantly going home crying!!! Awesome! Just great! I am so happy right now!!! Pls post more!!!!!

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    • Tysm!!! I'll start working on the next chapter!

      -Princess fluffyfins

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    • Chapter 7

      Fitz POV

      Fitz was fuming. how could ANYONE choose Keefe over him? Keefe was kind of handsome, but he was SO MUCH MORE HANDSOME. And sophie was the most powerful elf in the world, they were cognates, and they would be GREAT together. Especially since it would make them be a super powerful family. But then he remembered.

      Sophie was unmatchable. Why was he doing this then? But sophie was the most powerful elf in the world, and other elves propably woudn't care. So he just had to do something to make her like him and make her hate Keefe. That shouldn't be that hard. 

      He started working on his plan. 

      Marella POV 

      "Hi Marella." Fitz's voice said through the imparter. 

      "hi?" 

      "Could you meet me at the four season tree please?" 

      "Umm Sure..why?" Marella said. 

      "I'll tell you when we get there." Fitz's face disappeared and Marella changed into nicer clothes and leaped to the tree. 

      "Hey." She said. 

      "Hi. So you like Keefe right?" 

      Marella blushed. "Maybe...a little?" 

      "Perfect." Fitz said, grinning. "So I wanted to do something nice for you guys, and Keefe said that he liked you. So, I was thinking that you could go to his house or something and I think you should tell him and then kiss him, because he'll try to deny it, but really he does like you, so just kiss him okay?" 

      "He likes Sophie." Marella said, frowning. 

      "No he doesn't. He told me he likes you." 

      "All right. i'll do it. When?" 

      "I think you should do it now." 

      "Okay." Marella leaped away and appeared in the Shores of Solace where Keefe was sitting on a swing. 

      "Hey Keefe." 

      "hi Marella." Keefe said. 

      "So..ummm...somebody told me you liked me and I just wanted to say, I like you too. So yeah." She walked towards him and kissed him. 

      Sophie POV

      Sophie had just gotten a hail from Fitz saying Keefe wanted to talk to her at the shores of solace, so she leaped over there. And when she stepped out of the light, she saw Marella walking up to keefe and kissing him. And keefe kissed her back. His hand went into her hair and he pulled her closer. She gasped. 

      Fitz POV

      It was easy for Fitz to convince Marella to kiss Keefe, and it was easy to convince Sophie to go there. All he had to do now was put an image of Sophie in Keefe's mind so he thought he was kissing Sophie. He wasn't sure if it would work, but it did. 

      Keefe pulled Marella closer and put his hand in her hair. He made a sighing noise and pulled her closer. Fitz looked at Sophie and saw her expression. Perfect, he thought. 

      Keefe POV 

      He saw Marella, and then she was kissing him, and then a vision of Sophie was in his mind and he pulled her closer. He groaned and put his hand in her hair. And then he heard a gasp. His eyes flew open and he saw Marella in front of him and Sophie standing behind her. What? He thought. He was kissing sophie. Not Marella.

      Tears were flowing down Sophie's face and she gasped, "why?" before leaping away. 

      ARGH! I DIDN"T PUT IN HIS NEW ABILITY! Hopefully next chapter!? Thanks for reading and hope you enjoyed!

      -Princess Fluffyfins

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    • Chapter 8

      Biana POV

      "What?" Biana asked, confused. "What do you mean he did that? He wouldn't do something like that."

      "Oh yes he would." Keefe laughed darkly from the screen. "Sophie broke up with him and he got mad, told Marella I liked her, then sent her to meet me, and then sent an image of Sophie in my mind so it looked like I was kissing Sophie to me, and then he called Sophie there." 

      "I'll talk to him." Biana said as Keefe disappeared from the screen. "Fitzy!"

      "yeah little sister?" 

      "I'm giving you a chance to make it right. Call Keefe, tell him you're sorry. Call Sophie tell her you're sorry and explain what happened. And then call Marella and say you're sorry. If you tell them that now, they'll forgive you. If you wait, they won't. Just do it Okay?" Biana pleaded. 

      "What are you talking about, I didn't do that." Fitz said. 

      "Stop lying Fitz. Please. Before you drag yourself in a hole to deep to get out of." 

      Fitz POV

      Fitz didn't understand. Now his own sister was turning against him! 

      "I'm gonna have a sleepover tonight. I want you to apologize before hand." Biana said. Fitz knew he wouldn't.  

      So he said so. "I won't." 

      "Then I'll tell Sophie and Marella myself. I thought better of you FItz." Biana turned on her heel and left the room, preparing herself to make calls to Sophie and Marella. 

      So I decided to make this chapter short, cause the sleepover (that's always where there's LOTS of drama) is propably going to be long. I'll propably include some Tiana and maybe some Mex? (is that marella and dex?) And OF COURSE i'll have SoKeefe. And the savory ritz cracker will go home crying. (except it's at his house so maybe he'll go to his room? haha) And i'll include keefe's ability for sure. (hopefully?) Thanks for reading and hope you enjoyed. OH! I'll post the next chapter either this morning or later today. 

      -Princess fluffyfins

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    • CHAPTER 9

      Fitz POV

      "hey guys!" biana said as everybody walked through the gates of Everglen.

      Ftiz was glaring at Sophie and Keefe's joined hands. Fitz had hailed Maruca to ask her to dare him and sophie to go in the closet together for 20 minutes. He would use it wisely. And in return, Maruca would get a kiss. It was surprisingly easy to convince her. 

      "Let's play truth or dare!" Maruca said. 

      "YES!" Linh squealed. "I'll go first. dex."

      "Truth." 

      "Do you like Marella?" 

      "yeah.." Dex said blushing. 

      "Before we ask Marella," stina said, "keefe truth or dare." 

      "Dare." 

      "i dare you to tell us your ability." 

      "Oh. Mesmer." Keefe said. 

      "COOOOOL!" Everybody shouted. Fitz looked at Maruca. She nodded. 

      "truth or dare Fitz?"

      "dare." He answered. 

      "I dare you to go in the closet with sophie for 20 minutes." He grinned. She had the guts to do it. 

      "Fine." He got up and walked to the closet. "Sophie?"

      Sophie was sitting there staring at Keefe. And everybody was giving Maruca the stink eye. "What?" She asked. 

      "Sophie." Fitz said. 

      "She doesn't have to go Fitzy." Keefe said. 

      "no. Its fine. I'll go." Sophie said. keefe squeezed her hand before letting go. 

      The door shut, and Fitz turned on an old lamp left in the closet. 

      "so..." he said, "I've got some ideas." He stepped closer and closer to Sophie. Sophie stepped backwards but she ran into the wall. 

      Sophie POV

      Sophie bumped into the wall. Fitz was just centimeters away. She opened her mouth, but Fitz closed the gap and kissed her. she tried to push away, but he wouldn't let her. She tried to scream, but she couldn't. He kissed her harder. He broke the kiss and put his forhead against hers. 

      "I love you Sophie. I want you to know that." Fitz said before she could scream. She closed her mouth. "I'm sorry. I'll give you another chance. Please." He leaned forward and pressed his lips to hers again. she didn't kiss him back. 

      Fitz POV

      Fitz was beginning to get frustrated. She wasn't kissing him back. "Listen. Kiss me back. You'll like it." He pressed his lips to hers again, deepening the kiss. She still wouldn't kiss him back. He grapped her arm, holding it hard. "Kiss me. Just kiss me back once and I'll stop if you tell me to." He tightened his grip. She gasped. "Look. I don't want to hurt you. Trust me." And then he was kissing her again. Harder and harder and harder. 

      Sophie POV

      Sophie was pressed against the wall. Fitz was pushing harder and harder against her, and her arm was starting to tingle from where he was grabbing her. She kissed him back. 

      "you have to kiss me like you mean it." Fitz said. He pressed his mouth to hers again. She put one of her hands in his hair and pretended he was Keefe. Fitz stopped pushing so hard against her, and Sophie pushed him against the wall. Fitz broke the kiss to get a breath. "that's it.." he whispered. Then he was kissing her again and the world fell away. She pushed Fitz into the wall and she deepened the kiss. But then she remembered. He wasn't Keefe. She broke the kiss. 

      "Oh my god. I didn't mean to do that." Sophie gasped out of breath. Fitz pushed her into the wall again. 

      "yes you did. And if you stop you'll regret it." his hand tightened on her arm. She cried out softly. "I don't want to hurt you Sophie. I love you. And by the way you were kissing me, I know part of you loves me to." 

      Sophie didn't want to admit it, but part of her did love Fitz. She knew he was bad but he was so perfect. And he loved her. keefe hadn't said that to her yet. But fitz had just said it twice. 

      "have you made your choice?" Fitz asked. Before she could answer, he was kissing her again. It was 134 more seconds before he broke the kiss. "keefe doesn't kiss you as much as me, and he doesn't tell you he loves you as much as I will. I love you Sophie. Choose." 

      A small voice inside her head told her that Fitz was just manipulating her, but she wanted to hear him say that he loved her. So she kissed him. It wasn't at all like kissing Keefe. Keefe was gentle, but Fitz was pushing his lips against hers so hard she knew they would bruise. She thought, maybe that means he wants me more. But she knew in the back of her mind that that wasn't true. But she didn't care. She just wanted more. 

      "I love you." Fitz whispered again. 

      Fitz POV

      She was kissing him again. He had her. She just wanted to hear him say that he loved her. That was all he had to do. He had her. 

      "you made the right choice." Fitz said, breaking the kiss. 

      "Stop breaking them." Sophie said and kissed him again. And again.

      But then she stopped. 

      "wait. This isn't right." She said. 

      "Yes it is." He squeezed her arm tighter this time and she gasped in pain. "I love you." He kissed her harder and she slowly kissed him back. And then the closet doors were thrown open.

      I know. I know. I just had to. I wanted to make the Fitzy super evil and manipulative. And then keefe would turn up and SAVE THE DAYYYYYY! OH. That reminds me. i did keefe as a mesmer, because in my other fanfic (https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1553528) its about giesla and cassius' relationship and I had her secret ability be a telepath and both mesmers and telepaths do stuff with the mind so it made sense to me. Thanks for reading and hope you enjoyed. Don't worry. In the next chapter, or maybe the one after that Fitz will possibly run home crying with a black eye or something? hehehe (of course it would be from Sophie, keefe is just to good to resort to violence)

      -Princess Fluffyfins

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      -princess fluffyfins

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    • I kinda want the ritz savory cracker to be kidnapped by Ro and then given some of those bacterias....but that would be to easy hahahaha...but maybe I'll have him get kidnapped with grizel's permission if he gets SUPER bad...BUT THE RITZ CRACKER IS GONNA GO DOOOOOOWWWNNNN! TEAM FOSTER-KEEFE FOR THE WINNNN! Hahahaha i'm just super bored....

      -Princess fluffyfins

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    • i kinda want the ritz savory cracker to get kidnapped by Ro and then given some nasty bacteria...but that would be to easy hahaha.....but maybe if the ritz cracker gets SUPER bad then I'll have him get kidnapped, with grizel's permission of course, and given to Ro who can do whatever she wants with him....THE RITZ CRACKER IS GONNA GO DOWNNNNNNNN! TEAM FOSTER-KEEFE FOR THE WIIINNNNN! i'm just super boreeddddd....

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • i kinda want the ritz savory cracker to get kidnapped by ro and be gibven some NASTY BACTERIA.. but that would be to easy hahahahaha....but  maybe i'll have him get kidnapped, with grizel's permission of course, and then given to Ro and she can do what she wants to him... BUT THE RITZ CRACKER IS GOING DOWWWWNNNNN! TEAM FOSTER-KEEFE FOR THE WINNNNN!!!! haha i'm just super booorrreeeddddd

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • This is really good!!!!

      FITZ YOU FITZZZZ

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:
      This is really good!!!!

      FITZ YOU FITZZZZ

      tysm!!!!!!!!! by the way, I LOVE YOUR USERNAME

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • 68.5.246.233 wrote:
      i kinda want the ritz savory cracker to get kidnapped by ro and be gibven some NASTY BACTERIA.. but that would be to easy hahahahaha....but  maybe i'll have him get kidnapped, with grizel's permission of course, and then given to Ro and she can do what she wants to him... BUT THE RITZ CRACKER IS GOING DOWWWWNNNNN! TEAM FOSTER-KEEFE FOR THE WINNNNN!!!! haha i'm just super booorrreeeddddd

      -princess fluffyfins

      oops... i didn't realize i posted that twice...

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • 68.5.246.233 wrote:

      68.5.246.233 wrote:
      i kinda want the ritz savory cracker to get kidnapped by ro and be gibven some NASTY BACTERIA.. but that would be to easy hahahahaha....but  maybe i'll have him get kidnapped, with grizel's permission of course, and then given to Ro and she can do what she wants to him... BUT THE RITZ CRACKER IS GOING DOWWWWNNNNN! TEAM FOSTER-KEEFE FOR THE WINNNNN!!!! haha i'm just super booorrreeeddddd

      -princess fluffyfins

      oops... i didn't realize i posted that twice...

      -princess fluffyfins

      Actually 3 times....hmmmm

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • 68.5.246.233 wrote:

      IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:
      This is really good!!!!

      FITZ YOU FITZZZZ

      tysm!!!!!!!!! by the way, I LOVE YOUR USERNAME

      -princess fluffyfins

      Thx:)

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    • oh NO you did NOT leave off there! Is Fitz doing some sort of mind trick???

      -StarkflowerSoUp

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    • haha maybe.... i'm working on the next chapter right now :)

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • CHAPTER 10

      Sophie POV

      "Sophie?" Keefe asked. 

      Sophie pulled away from Fitz. "wha-what?" she said to Fitz. 

      "Sophie. Why were you kissing Fitz?" 

      Sophie looked at her arm. A bruise was already forming. "i- I don't know." she said shakily. She remembered kissing Fitz, but it was all hazy. 

      keefe laughed dryly. "yeah. You don't know. I'm leaving. By guys." Keefe leaped away. 

      "Wh-why?" sophie asked, shaken. "Why is everything hazy?" She didn't understand why she had kissed fitz. She knew that in her heart she liked Keefe. So why had she kissed Fitz?

      "I think we should end this sleepover Biana." dex said. He was looking at sophie strangely. "I...I need to go check something in a book I have at home."

      "Yeah. good idea." Biana said. 

      Sophie watched as all her friends leaped away. Biana walked out of the room. 

      "Hey soph." Fitz said. 

      Sophie was ovecome with an urge to kiss him. so she did. Wait what? she thought. But Fitz was kissing her back, so she just ignored the voice in her heart. the one that was telling her to stop. 

      Dex POV

      The reason Dex had stopped the sleepover, was because he had new something was wrong with Sophie, and he had an idea of what it was. He just had to double check. He flipped through the book. 

      Potions of Love

      Side effects: The moment becomes hazy

      Yes, Dex thought, that's it! Slurps and burps never sells love potions, but some of the low end shops do. And Fitz gave Sophie one in the mallowmelt they had had at the sleepover. That was the only explanation Dex could come up with. Fortunately, there was a cure. 

      He got out his imparter and hailed Keefe. 

      I know love potions are kinda not maybe realistic...but I figured that since elwin had that wierd medicine that made dreams super strange, it is plausible that they could have made some sort of "love potion" (i couldn't come up with another name..if you have any suggestions please share!) thanks for reading and hope you enjoyed! 

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • Love potion is good, but I think elixers are more common in the Elven world... This is seriously great!!!!

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    • 108.240.139.205 wrote: Love potion is good, but I think elixers are more common in the Elven world... This is seriously great!!!!

      Thank you!!! That is a much better name!!!!

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • This is awesome! Please write soon!!! What if the potion lasts for a super long time,it would add drama and confusion!

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    • I love thissss

      And FITZ I WILL FIND YOU AND BURY U ALIVE

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote: I love thissss

      And FITZ I WILL FIND YOU AND BURY U ALIVE

      You mean WE WILL FIND YOU AND BURY YOU ALIVE! Don't forget me! -StarkflowerSoUp

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    • Before I start writing, I just wanted to thank A FANDOM user 108.240.139.205 for coming up with the name love elixir cause that is MUCH more realistic, so thank you!!!!!

      CHAPTER 11

      Sophie POV 

      When Sophie arrived at foxfire, Fitz was waiting for her, and he swooped her in for a kiss. She gasped, but kissed him back. 

      "We need to spread that we're back together, so I want to kiss you 5 times in front of everybody this morning, and at lunch, we'll share a plate, got it?" Fitz whispered. 

      "Yes," sophie said, just wanting another kiss. Wait, sophie thought, what's wrong with me? 

      But Fitz seemed to see the doubt in her eyes and kissed her again, and her doubts flew away. He picked her up bridal style, and they were still kissing as he carried her to her session. 

      Fitz POV

      Fitz fiddled with his love elixir. He decided he was going to put it in her lushberry juice. He quickly slipped it in when he grabbed 2 cups and he walked to the table. He suspected that dex knew what he was doing, so he had brought extra to cancel out the antidote. His suspicions were confirmed when he saw dex slip something in her juice later in the meal. 

      He watched Sophie carefully. It didn't look like anything had changed, and she was still practically sitting in his lap. 

      "hey soph, come over to my house after school okay?" He said. 

      She stared at him dreamily. "sure." 

      "hey sophie," dex asked, "is your vision back to normal?" 

      "yeah, it hasn't been hazy at all. why?" 

      Dex shared a glance with Keefe. "Well, you said it was at the sleepover." 

      "Oh, that was nothing." Sophie said. 

      Keefe frowned at Dex. 

      "Come on Sophie, lets go to your session." Fitz said. Sophie nodded and they got up from the table. When they got out of the cafeteria, Sophie pushed him into the wall and kissed him. Soon the bell rang, but Sophie just kept on kisssing him. 

      "Sophie," fitz said, breaking the kiss, "the bell rang." 

      "Let's ditch." sophie said. "Let's just ditch the rest of the day." She slipped his crystal out of his pocket and held it up to the light, and they stepped into the beam. When they got inside, they ate some mallowmelt, then spent a lot of time kissing. 

      "Come on, Soph." Fitz said breathless. "lets go watch a human movie." 

      "mph." was sophie's only reply as she kissed him harder. 

      "sophie..." he said breaking the kiss. "come on." She didn't answer this time, she just pushed him into the wall again. Fitz hadn't realized the love elixir would work this well. It hadn't before, but he guessed that the double dose had caused her to be like this. He grabbed onto her arm where he had bruised it. "Come on Sophie." he said warningly. 

      She didn't answer. She just kissed him. And kissed him. And kissed him. It wasn't that he didn't like it, it was just that it was getting to be too much. He grabbed her arm and squeezed hard. She whimpered in pain. "Lets go watch a movie." he said forcefully. She nodded but kissed him again. He squeezed harder. She cried out. That seemed to do the trick, but to make sure that next time she did what he said, he put both hands on the bruise and twisted it. She cried louder and tears appeared in her eyes. "Next time, do what I say." Fitz said threatenly, and she nodded as she followed him into the room. 

      Keefe POV

      "I don't understand why it didn't work!" dex said. 

      Keefe just kicked the wall. 

      "It doesn't make sense!" Dex said. 

      "Yes it does. Maybe she actually likes him." Keefe said. 

      "Sophie doesn't act like that Keefe. DId you see her? She was sitting in his lap and kissing him every 5 seconds. The sophie I know wouldn't do that." Dex said. 

      Keefe ignored him. "Well clearly its not a love elixir cause the antidote didn't work! So she likes him. Okay? That's the only explanation!" Keefe said, frustrated. He grabbed his crystal and leaped to his room where he collapsed on his bed and screamed into his pillow. 

      I'm trying to make the ritz savory cracker extra bad so that at the end, he can get tortured extra... :) thanks for reading and hope you enjoyed! 

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • 104.139.118.220 wrote:
      This is awesome! Please write soon!!! What if the potion lasts for a super long time,it would add drama and confusion!

      good idea! I forgot to say thank you to you as well, so I'll do it now! Thank you A FANDOM user 104.139.118.220 for suggesting the elixir to last a long time! It definitely helped me with my writers block!

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • thGo!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      I love thissss

      And FITZ I WILL FIND YOU AND BURY U ALIVE

      thank you!!! 

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • 174.56.40.127 wrote:

      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote: I love thissss

      And FITZ I WILL FIND YOU AND BURY U ALIVE

      You mean WE WILL FIND YOU AND BURY YOU ALIVE! Don't forget me! -StarkflowerSoUp

      lol

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • 68.5.246.233 wrote:
      174.56.40.127 wrote:

      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote: I love thissss

      And FITZ I WILL FIND YOU AND BURY U ALIVE

      You mean WE WILL FIND YOU AND BURY YOU ALIVE! Don't forget me!

      -StarkflowerSoUp

      lol

      -princess fluffyfins

      I forgot my smiley face! XD

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    • Glad I could help ;) 

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    • Can I... You know... Conjure a rock over his head then cuss him out in greek and Latin..?

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    • IggysElixers wrote:
      Can I... You know... Conjure a rock over his head then cuss him out in greek and Latin..?

      Ya after that conjure verminion poop over his broke head, he doesn't deserve alicorn poop! No glitter for him!

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    • Is it possible to hate Fitz even more?

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    • I hate this

      COME ON SOPHIE WAKE UP STOP KISSING FITZ I CAN’T TAKE IT ANYMOREEEEEEE


      btw I didn’t mean I hate the fanfic, in fact I LOVE THIS FANFIC

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    • Ya same^

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    • 68.5.246.233 wrote:

      104.139.118.220 wrote:
      This is awesome! Please write soon!!! What if the potion lasts for a super long time,it would add drama and confusion!

      good idea! I forgot to say thank you to you as well, so I'll do it now! Thank you A FANDOM user 104.139.118.220 for suggesting the elixir to last a long time! It definitely helped me with my writers block!

      -princess fluffyfins

      I am glad to help! The more it lasts the more Ritz cracker will burn in the end 😋!


      - Sokeefeforever

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    • 122.177.238.121 wrote:

      IggysElixers wrote:
      Can I... You know... Conjure a rock over his head then cuss him out in greek and Latin..?

      Ya after that conjure verminion poop over his broke head, he doesn't deserve alicorn poop! No glitter for him!

      XD, yes !


      - Sokeefeforever

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote: Is it possible to hate Fitz even more?

      Yes XD

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote: I hate this

      COME ON SOPHIE WAKE UP STOP KISSING FITZ I CAN’T TAKE IT ANYMOREEEEEEE


      btw I didn’t mean I hate the fanfic, in fact I LOVE THIS FANFIC

      Thanks!!!

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • 104.139.118.220 wrote:

      68.5.246.233 wrote:

      104.139.118.220 wrote:
      This is awesome! Please write soon!!! What if the potion lasts for a super long time,it would add drama and confusion!

      good idea! I forgot to say thank you to you as well, so I'll do it now! Thank you A FANDOM user 104.139.118.220 for suggesting the elixir to last a long time! It definitely helped me with my writers block!

      -princess fluffyfins

      I am glad to help! The more it lasts the more Ritz cracker will burn in the end 😋!


      - Sokeefeforever

      YES HE WILL BURN

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • 122.177.238.121 wrote: Ya same^

      Thanks!

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    • Sorry I didn’t post anything today I’ll make sure to post extra tomorrow!

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • CHAPTER 12

      Sophie POV

      "Hey Sophie." Keefe said, as he peeked into her room. She was lying on her bed staring at the ceiling. 

      She looked at him. "oh. Hi." 

      "Why are you in here?" He asked. 

      "Oh. I'm grounded. I ditched." Sophie said. Still staring at the ceiling. 

      "Oh." 

      "yeah. I'm allowed to have friends over though." 

      "Oh. So do you want to do something?" 

      "Actually I was waiting for Fitz to get here." Sophie said. 

      "So that explains the clothes." Keefe said. Sophie looked down at herself. She was wearing a crop top, She had found one in atlantis, and a really short skirt that was tight. Huh. She thought. This wasn't normally her style. 

      "yeah." she said. 

      "And the make-up." Keefe said. 

      "Yeah." sophie said. Fitz had said she had looked pretty with make-up on, so she had had vertina instruct her on how to put A LOT on. It had taken her awhile. Now she was just waiting for Fitz. She wanted Keefe to go. She just wanted to have time alone with Fitz. Wait what? She thought. That's not true. 

      Keefe POV

      Keefe stared at Sophie. She was just staring at the ceiling. Hardly even acknowledging that he was there. And she was wearing A TON of make-up. And showing a lot of skin with a crop top and a super short skirt. He hated seeing Sophie like this. This wasn't her style. 

      "Well..ummm..." Keefe said. 

      "Hey Soph." Fitz said, Walking in. "Oh. Hey Keefe." 

      "Hi." Keefe said. 

      "Well?" Sophie said. She looked to the door. She wanted him to leave so she could have time with Fitz. 

      "oh." keefe said, understanding that she wanted him to leave. His heart cracked a little. "Bye." He said. He closed the door. 

      Fitz POV

      Sophie got up off the bed and sidled up close to him. She was showing a lot of skin. And wearing a lot of make-up. He grinned. that's how he wanted her to look. "Hey soph." 

      "hey." she said, staring at his lips. She leaned closer and trailed a finger down his cheek. Sophie Foster flirting with him! Now that was not something he had expected. The love elixir was doing it's job quite well. He put his hands on her waist, feeling bare skin.

      "you got all fancy for me?" fitz asked. 

      "yes." she breathed. She pressed against him and kissed him. He kissed her back. He opened his eyes. Her eyes were closed, and he saw how much make-up she had put on. He grinned. He broke the kiss. 

      "Now, I was thinking we could talk. See, you need to wear this much make-up every day. Got it? And when you don't wear your foxfire uniform, where these." He went over to her closet and started picking out clothes. High heels, ruffly dresses and tunics. 

      "okay." she breathed. But then she looked closer. "Wait...I can't walk in those!" she said pointing to high heels. 

      He reached for her arm and squeezed. "Yes you can."

      She whimpered. "nevermind. Of course I can." she said. 

      Fitz nodded. He spent the rest of the day with her, and soon it was getting late. He got out his crystal and leaped away. It was only when he got home did he realize he had forgotten to slip her the love elixir. Oh well. He could just give it to her tomorrow morning. 

      Sophie POV

      Sophie woke up in the middle of the night. She had fallen asleep right after Fitz left. She walked to her bathroom and past Vertina. She looked in the mirror. She gasped in horror. She was wearing a crop top and a SUPER short skirt! And she had on layers and layers of make-up. And then it came back to her, kissing Fitz. She didn't have feelings for him though, yet in those moments, there was always a sense of longing. Something was happening to her. She walked back to her bed and layed down. Something was happening to her and she needed to come up with a plan. But she fell asleep before she could make a good one. 

      And when she woke up, Fitz's face was above her. Oh no, she thought. He kissed her and gave her a plate of food. She was starving so she ate it. It didn't taste as good as usual. And then she felt the feelings return. That's how, she thought with dread. But soon, that was just replaced with longing. 

      Don't worry! Fitz will get caught soon! Thanks for reading and hope you enjoyed! I'll try to post 2 more chapters today!

      -princess fluffyfins 

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    • YOU'D BETTER POST SOON, I THINK WE NEED TO BREAK OUT OUR LIST OF RITZY TORTURE METHODS AGAIN. Right guys?

      -StrakflowerSoUp

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    • 174.56.40.127 wrote:
      YOU'D BETTER POST SOON, I THINK WE NEED TO BREAK OUT OUR LIST OF RITZY TORTURE METHODS AGAIN. Right guys?

      -StrakflowerSoUp

      yes plz let fitz get caught he is horrible

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    • CHAPTER 13

      Sophie POV

      The next time Sophie woke from her trance was in the middle of the night. She woke up nautious and ran to the bathroom where she threw up twice. 

      Amid the nausia, she thought a name. keefe. That's who she needed to tell. The boy she cared so much about. The boy that ment so much to her, yet thought he ment nothing to anybody. 

      She grabbed her imparter and hailed keefe. He picked up after the 15th ring. He looked half asleep and was wearing no shirt. 

      "Jeez foster. Didn't know i'd have you calling me at 2 in the morning." 

      "Sorry. Keefe. Fitz is doing something to me. I don't know what, but it's causing me to feel certain ways towards him, and it's making me sick. please help me. Please. I don't know how he's doing it, but..i'm just so sick of it Keefe! It's like I can't control my own body!" Sophie said. 

      "okay. Dex said that he might have been slipping you a love elixir so we gave you the antidote but it didn't work." Keefe said. 

      "He couldve given me two doses." sophie offered. 

      "yeah. That's propably it. Listen. I'll hail dex and we'll come over. You tell grady and edaline and let them deal with Fitz. Though you might want to go all Foster rage on him." he winked. 

      "okay." sophie said. She rushed into Grady and Edaline's room. "mom? dad?" she whispered into the darkness. 

      "yes?" Came the sleepy reply. 

      "i need help." she said. 

      They got up and she explained everything to them. Their responses varied from "HOW DARE HE! HE BETTER WATCH OUT!" from grady to "how could he do that?" from Edaline. 

      Soon, dex and Keefe arrived and gave her the antidote. But while her parents and dex talked about Fitz, she ended up alone in her room with Keefe. 

      Keefe was staring at his feet. 

      "Keefe-" She tried to say, but he shook his head. She wanted to tell him she was sorry, but she knew that wouldn't do anything. So she walked towards him and tilted his head up with her finger. Then she kissed him. He froze for a second but then he was kissing her back, his hands went to her hair and he pulled her closer. It was so much more than kissing with Fitz. The universe fell away and it was only them.

      Keefe broke the kiss to get air. "you don't know how long I've wanted to do that." he said, gasping. She laughed. And then Edaline poked her head in and said it was time. sophie gulped. She was ready to go all Foster rage on him. Fitz didn't know what was coming for him. 

      So hopefuly that was what you guys wanted! Next chapter is Foster rage time! Thanks for reading and hope you enjoyed!

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • that's shorter than I thought it was, but the next chapter will be longer! I might have to post it tomorrow morning...but it'll be extra long!

      -princess fluffyfins

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    •  She was ready to go all Foster rage on him. Fitz didn't know what was coming for him. 
      • ​​​​​​​evil smile*
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    • 216.14.159.213 wrote:
       She was ready to go all Foster rage on him. Fitz didn't know what was coming for him. 
      • evil smile*
      • equally evil smlie*

      -StarkflowerSoUp

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    • FINALLY

      NOW IT’S FOSTER RAGE TIME MY GUYS!!!!!!!

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    • CHAPTER 14

      Sophie POV

      Sophie knew exactly what she wanted to do to Fitz, and that required a lot of bruises for him. But she also wanted him to be humiliated, so she called alll her friends over. And she asked Edaline to do something special. She agreed with a grin. 

      Alden and Della had hailed before her friends had gotten here and said that they were okay with anything she did to Fitz. And that they were so disappointed in him. And if they had known, they would have stopped him. Fat load of good that did her now though. 

      Soon, her friends arrived. Tam, maruca, linh, marella, dex, wylie, keefe, Stina, and Biana all agreed to come. 

      "Okay guys, so I'm not sure if you heard, but Fitz was giving me a love elixir to make me love him, and I found out and we put a stop to it. Now, I want Fitz to be humiliated and punished, afterall, what he did wasn't okay." Sophie explained. 

      "I agree. I have the perfect thing to do to him." Biana said. 

      "Good. Then I was thinking each of you could do something to him. I was going to give him a few bruises and Edaline was going to do something secret. But I think we should go over what you guys are going to do so there isn't any of the same things. Got it?" Everybody nodded and got to work. 

      "Hey Sophie, why don't we do a cordinated attack?" Linh asked. 

      Sophie grinned. "Sure." 

      "So I was just going to drench him with ice cold water." Linh said. 

      "I was going to give him some of my amoebas." Ro said. Everybody stared at her. "what? I'm not supposed to be part of this?" 

      "It's fine. You can. Just give it to biana and she can slip it in his food." Sophie said. 

      "I was going to zap him with my forcefield." maruca said. 

      "i want to burn off his hair, but that's kinda violent," marella said, "so can I just make him bald?" 

      Sophie nodded. 

      "I want to give him a hot pink beard." stina said, looking at dex. Dex smirked. 

      "There's this elixir that I made that can turn someone's skin bright green, so that would match his pink beard." Dex said. 

      "I think I can do this, but I want to put shadows in front of his eyes, not in his eyes, so whenever he tries to look at something, it's dark and blurry." Tam said. 

      "Bummer." wylie said. "I was gonna have light in his eyes, so it was too bright." 

      "We could have it flash." tam suggested. Wylie nodded. 

      "That's not bad for his eyes, in case your wondering, so I give you full permission to do it!" Elwin called. Sophie hadn't even known he was here.

      "I'm not sure I should do anything." keefe said. 

      "No keefe. You have to." sophie said. 

      "Fine. Fine. I'll have him stink like muskog." Keefe smirked. 

      "I think I'll do some sister things at home. You know sister things. I can make him pretty miserable." Biana winked.

      "good. So we can have me go first, then marella, then edaline, then linh, then stina, then maruca, then dex, then tam, then wylie, and then Keefe. That way we don't have to smell him." Sophie said. "I'll go tell Edaline and Grady and then we can do it!" 

      Sophie grinned. She coudn't wait to make Fitz pay. 

      Fitz POV

      Fitz walked up the path leading to the house. He knew he could get away with sophie easily. Afterall, what could they do to a vacker? especially Fitz vacker.

      He walked up the steps but heard someone call his name from the pastures, so he walked over there. 

      "hey soph." fitz said. 

      Sophie glared at him. "What you did is not okay and I think you know why." she said. 

      fitz shrugged. Honestly, it didn't matter. Sophie walked closer to him, her face softening. He stepped closer as well, thinking she might give him a kiss. But then pain exploded in his stomach. He gasped and fell onto the floor. Sophie was shaking her hand out. She had punched him! 

      He stayed on the ground for a little while, but stood back up. But this time, she punched him in the face. He spit blood out onto the grass. 

      That had hurt. 

      Sophie POV

      Sophie didn't want to admit this, but it had made her feel better to punch him. It was quite satisfying. She nodded at marella. 

      "here fitz." marella said, holding out a bottle of what looked like a bottle of youth, but it was really balding serum. He greedily took it and drank it. After a few seconds, his hair fell off onto the grass. He looked VERY strange. 

      Fitz POV

      Fitz stared in horror at his hair on the grass. They had taken out his hair! He was furious. And then there was a pop and something fell on his head. It stank. It slid down his face. Gross, he thought. 

      "Verminion poop." sophie said. It plopped on his shoes. Just as he was getting over it, ice cold water fell onto his head. He gasped and spluttered. It just made the poop worse. Now it was all over him. He was even more furious. And then Stina was giving him a towel. 

      "Wipe your face off." she said. He took it and gladly wiped his face. But then all of a sudden, he felt something scratchy on his chin. He looked down. He had a hot pink beard. Then he was zapped. He staggered backwards. Fitz felt his anger boiling up inside of him. He took deep breaths. But then he looked at his skin again. 

      "what?!" He yelled. His skin was bright green. He looked up at the faces of his so called friends and they were holding back laughs. even his parents. He stared at them. Wait a second. He couldn't see them clearly. Shadows and light were flashing in front of his eyes, making it hard for him to see. He squinted. It didn't help. And then he smelled something.

      "you jerks!" He screamed. 

      "your calling us the jerks?" sophie asked. "I think your the jerk here. Giving me a love elixir? Seriously Fitz? I don't know if I can forgive you for this. You get a week smelling like a muskog, being bald, and having green skin. Oh. And having that lovely pink beard." 

      Fitz just shook his head. He was beyond angry. He took out his crystal and leaped home. She wouldn't get away with this. No way. 

      So...that's my long chapter! I think I'll maybe have like a bonus chapter, except not a chapter, with Biana's list of things she's going to do to him. Thanks for reading and hope you enjoyed! And thank you IggysElixers and A FANDOM user 122.177.238.121 for coming up with the verminion poop! I just had to put that in there. XD

      -princess fluffyfins

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      And this is probably my F A V O R I T E chapter yet

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Okay can I just say- xD xD

      And this is probably my F A V O R I T E chapter yet

      i whole heartedly agree

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      this is too funny

      i don’t have energy to do anything anymore

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      • spits cherrylimade all over desk*  GO FOSTER RAGE!!!!!

      -StarkflowerSoUp

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Okay can I just say- xD xD

      And this is probably my F A V O R I T E chapter yet

      Thank you!!! ​​​​​​-princess fluffyfins

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      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Okay can I just say- xD xD

      And this is probably my F A V O R I T E chapter yet

      i whole heartedly agree

      ty!

      -princess fluffyfins

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      *spits cherrylimade all over desk*  GO FOSTER RAGE!!!!!

      -StarkflowerSoUp

      haha ​​​​​​-princess fluffyfins

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      im dead

      this is too funny

      i don’t have energy to do anything anymore

      XD -princess fluffyfins

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    • CHAPTER 15

      Sophie POV

      Sophie was sitting on her bed staring at the cieling, remembering when she got her revenge on Fitz. That was so fun. 

      "hey foster." keefe's voice said from the door. 

      She turned to look at him and said, "hi keefe." She patted the spot next to her and Keefe walked over and layed down next to her. 

      "So...we good?" sophie asked. 

      "Yeah." Keefe said. 

      She reached for his hand, and together they layed on the bed holding hands. 

      "i was wondering, do you want to have a sleepover?" Sophie asked. 

      "umm...just us Foster? or other people too?"

      "Other people. I was thinking of inviting Dex, Marella, linh, wylie, Tam, and Biana." She looked at Keefe and winked. 

      Keefe laughed. "Okay. Tonight?" 

      "Yeah. Tonight." 

      After a few hours, everybody came over and they enjoyed some mallowmelt while just talking. They changed into their PJs And then Sophie thought it was time for her to start her plan. She wanted to get Dex and Marella together, and then tam and biana, and Linh and Wylie. 

      "So I was thinking we could play 7 minutes in the closet." Sophie said. "I have a hat so I'll pick names. First people are....Marella and Dex!" 

      Marella and dex both blushed, but obedienty went into the closet. At 5 minutes Sophie went over and peeked in. Marella and Dex were kissing on the floor, and Dex was on top of marella. They hastily broke apart when they saw Sophie. 

      "AWW THAT WAS SO CUTE!" Sophie said. "Next two people, Biana and Tam!" 

      They went into the closet and everybody grinned at eachother. They all knew that tam and biana liked eachother.

      "I'll go peak." Linh said at 6 minutes. 

      She opened the door to find Biana and Tam also kissing, both of their hair a little messed up. 

      "awwwwww" linh said. 

      "Linh and wylie!" sophie said.

      They went in, and yet again, when they opened the closet they were kissing. But by then, they were all tired and yawning from their long day. Afterall, most of them had been awakened at 3 to help Sophe. Sophie turned off the lights and they went into their sleeping bags. She had put them so each couple had their own space. 

      "So.." she whispered to Keefe. "success?" 

      "yeah." he said scooting closer to her. He kissed her, and this time it felt so mucb different. It was more tender and caring and her heart seemed impossibly full. Soon they fell asleep intertwined and still kissing. 

      When sophie opened her eyes, it was almost dawn, and she and Keefe had seemed to be even closer. She quietly scooted away from him and sat up on her sleeping bag. Biana and Tam had seemed to be kissing when they fell asleep, and Biana's night gown seemed a little wrinkled and the top few buttons were undone, and Tam's shirt was hiked up a little bit. Dex had his arm around Marella, and her face was pressed into his chest. Linh and Wylie were intertwined a lfew feet away from their sleeping bags. 

      She kissed Keefe on the forhead and whispered "success" but soon she had fallen back asleep. 

      I figured I should write a chapter with all the people I ship so hopefully this is who you ship as well, and hopefully you enjoyed it! It's also a little more fluffy. Biana's list of things she's doing to Fitz will come out soon!

      -princess fluffyfins

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      -princess fluffyfins

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    • 68.5.246.233 wrote:
      i might be able to post biana's list of torture ideas today...but I might have to post it tomorrw...

      -princess fluffyfins

      Okay, that's fine! That was so sweet!

      -StarkflowerSoUp

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      -princess fluffyfins

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    • I’ll post the list tomorrow!

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • Biana's list of torture

      -Put lemon juice on his tooth brush (or as sour juice that they have in the elvin world)

      -Replace his hair gel with water

      -Replace his conditioner with hair die

      -put micro glitter in his shampoo

      -Replace his lushberry juice with verminion milk

      -Hide a muskog in his room

      -HIde his foxfire uniform and other clothes

      -Once he completes his homework, erase it

      -put things like marbles in his shoes

      -put pepper in his mallowmelt

      -put a pile of verminion poop in his bed on his pillow

      -cut out all the backs of his pants

      -put his toothbrush in gross things 

      -scare him

      -set an alarm to wake him up every hour

      -hide his imparter

      -replace his cologne with muskog gas

      -dip his pens and pencils in clear nail polish

      -just overall make his life miserable

      so if you guys want to add to that or anything go ahead! Thanks for reading and hope you enjoyed!

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • CHAPTER 16 (this takes place a week or so after the previous chapter happened)

      Sophie POV

      "Hey Keefe." Sophie said, as she saw him waiting at her locker. 

      "I believe you ment...'hey lord hunkyhair!'" keefe said in her voice. 

      "keefe-" she started. 

      "Nuh-uh. That's part of my charm." Keefe said. 

      She glared at him. 

      "I think blondie's a little grumpy today hunkyhair." ro said. 

      "nah. She just couldn't stand being apart from me." keefe said. 

      "Maybe." sophie said, smiling. She leaned forward and kissed him. She heard whispers behind her, but she didn't care. 

      "So. I saw Dex and Marella kissing when I went to Slurps and Burps for pranking elixirs." Keefe said. "Darella for the win!"

      Sophie laughed. "I saw biana and tam kissing in that kinda hidden place by Lady Galvin's classroom." 

      "I think your sleepover was a definite success." keefe said. 

      "Yeah." 

      "Now that that conversation is finished, I managed to do some work on the ballad of bo and ro. Would you like to hear it?" Keefe asked. 

      Bo snarled. 

      "If you do that hunkyhair.." ro threatened. 

      "You'll hear it someday.." keefe said winking. 

      At lunch, Sophie asked "Have you seen Fitz?" . 

      "now that you mention it...no." Keefe said. 

      "Huh. Biana?" Sophie said. 

      "I haven't." She said. They looked at eachother and looked at the table, each one not wanting to acknowledge the voice in their heads. The one that said Fitz would do anything to get revenge. 

      Fitz POV

      Fitz was PISSED. His stupid sister had turned on him. He hated her. He hated everyone. He was done. He needed to do something. 

      So he did something that would make them the most angry. 

      With him on their side, they would win. And he would get the revenge that he had been wanting for days. It was close. So close. 

      He waited in the shadows of an alley. Waiting. Waiting. 

      He grinned. They had been asking for it. And he'd do whatever it took. 

      So that's a little kind of cliffhanger for you guys...I'll post tomorrow! Thanks for reading and hope you enjoyed!

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • is he gonna join the neverseen?

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    • FITZ YOU FITZZZZZZZZZZZ





      You know what?









      Fine













      Be an idiot and join the Neverseen


















      It will just be 10 times better when Sophie and the gang kick you and the Neverseen’s butts

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    • That is what he’s doing right? Joining the Neverseen? Or did I misunderstand?

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:
      That is what he’s doing right? Joining the Neverseen? Or did I misunderstand?

      Idk, he's either doing that or gonna give Soph a love elixir.

      -Starki 

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      -princess fluffyfins

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    • CHAPTER 17

      fitz POV

      "Do you swear fealty to the neverseen?" the voice slithered out of the darkness. 

      "Yes." Fitz said, conviction in his voice. He was ready to make them pay. 

      "I have a question." a familiar voice asked. He realized it was lady gisella. 

      "I thought you don't do stuff with the neverseen." Fitz said. 

      "Now that fintan's captured I can continue pathing the legacy for my son. My question is, how do we know you aren't their golden boy?"

      "I stopped being their golden boy when they punished me for what I did for Sophie." Fitz said. 

      Lady Gisella laughed. "very good. Follow me. You're training starts now, and that requires you to give up your secrets." 

      Fitz was ready. He was ready to do whatever he had to do to get revenge. Even if it ment betraying his so called friends. He grinned. 

      Sophie POV

      "Where is he?" She asked. 

      "I don't know. He hasn't come home for a few days now." Biana answered. 

      "What..what do you think he did?" sophie asked, not wanting to admit what the voice in her mind was saying. 

      Biana looked at her shoes. "i don't know." she whispered. 

      "I think you guys do know." ro said. "I think you guys know exactly where he went. If none of you are going to say it, I'll say it for you. He went to the neverseen." 

      "But he knows all our secrets." sophie said. 

      "Yes. He does." Ro said. 

      "Grizel, do you know why?" Sophie asked the goblin.

      "I do, but you won't like it. He was angry at what you guys did. He deserved it, we all know that, but he didn't think he did. I let him have some space because he was pretty angry. I never thought he would do this though." She said. 

      "So he joined the enverseen because of what i did to him?" Sophie asked. Guilt dug a pit in her stomach. 

      Grizel looked down at her feet. "yes." she said softly. 

      "But don't blame yourself Sophie." Keefe said. "You did to him what he deserved, alright?" 

      But sophie didn't answer. Keefe's words didn't help. She pushed the guilt aside. She'd have to deal with it later.

      Wylie POV

      "Tiergan?" He called, Linh at his side. "Tiergan?"

      "Why isn't he answering?" Linh asked him. 

      "I don't know. Lets go see." They walked into his office. "Tiergan?" Wylie asked again. 

      A moan came from behind the desk. Wylie rushed over. He gasped. Tiergan was covered in burns and blood. "Tiergan!" He gasped. "Linh. Call Elwin now!" Wylie reached for Tiergan's hand. "It'll be alright. Elwin can fix you up." 

      Tiergan just smiled. "I love you Wylie. I love you." His eyes fluttered closed. Wylie leaned closer. He could still here shallow breaths coming from him, but they were getting smaller. 

      If Elwin didn't come soon, he woudn't survive. 

      "Move aside!" Elwin called. He knelt by Tiergan. "He needs amediate attention. I need to get him to the healing center. One of you, hail the collective."

      "I will." Linh said. "Wylie, you go with Elwin and see if you can help okay?" 

      Linh POV

      Once wylie left and Linh had hailed the collective, she looked around the office for clues. In a potted plant was a note. It read, 

      It was all you Sophie. All you.

      -Fitz

      Linh gasped. Sophie could never get ahold of this. Never. It would break her. 

      So that's the next chapter! Thanks for reading and hope you enjoyed!

      -princess fluffyfins

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      -princess fluffyfins

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    • Great job Ritz Savory Cracker... but you do realize Sophie will never love you now... even as a friend... once she figures out what you did... right?

      What? I thought I would do this and she would be like “oh Fitz you are so powerful, I have to be with you!! *sighs* time to capture her and brain wash her again!!!

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    • 73.17.104.188 wrote:
      Great job Ritz Savory Cracker... but you do realize Sophie will never love you now... even as a friend... once she figures out what you did... right?

      What? I thought I would do this and she would be like “oh Fitz you are so powerful, I have to be with you!! *sighs* time to capture her and brain wash her again!!!

      lol XD

      -princess fluffyfins

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      -princess fluffyfins

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    • CHAPTER 18 (this takes place a few hours after the previous chapter)

      Jensi POV

      "Aaro?" Jensi called, looking for his older brother. "Aaro?" he heard nothing. 

      "AARO!" He yelled louder. His parents weren't home and he had finished making dinner, so he was trying to tell his brother it was ready. He stomped upstairs to his brother's room and opened the door. His brother was older than him; Aaro was 25 years old. 

      He knocked on the door, but no one answered. He opened the door to find his brother's room a mess. Papers were all over the place and glasses were broken. "aaro?" he whispered. He walked behind the desk to find his brother lieing on the floor in a pool of his own blood. "Aaro!" 

      His brother moaned and whispered three words. "hail the collective."

      "The collective?" Jensi asked. 

      "hail sophie." he whispered before passing out. 

      Jensi quickly hailed Sophie and Sophie said she would bring Elwin to his house. When they got there, Jensi focused on helping Elwin. 

      Sophie POV

      "Is he going to be okay?" she heard Jensi ask. 

      Elwin's answer was: "propably." Sophie looked at jensi's brother's face. 

      She gasped. "Blur!" 

      Jensi looked at her. "Blur?"

      "That's your brother! He's part of the black swan!" 

      Linh POV

      As soon as Linh heard about the attack on Jensi's brother, she quickly leaped over there. She had to get the note before Sophie. She arrived right as sophie said: "That's your brother! He's part of the black swan!" And linh realized she was talking about Blur. 

      She shook off the distraction and started looking around. This time, the note was in a drawer. She looked at it. this time it read,

      Sophie if you turn yourself in, this will stop. If you don't, then it will just get worse. 

      Make the right decision and you won't be broken. 

      Love, 

      Fitz

      Linh tried not to show any emotion as she hid the note in her cloak. Fitz was just creepy. She didn't know how he had ever been so nice. What had changed him? What was happening to him? She had to figure it out before he got worse.  

      She looked up to find keefe hugging Sophie. 

      "it's not your fault." he whispered over and over. 

      "It really isn't sophie." linh said. "It's Fitz's. And I believe in karma." 

      i don't know if u guys agree with me, but I think blur is jensi's older brother. Thanks for reading and hope you enjoyed!

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • I made a list of fizt torture that i think would be awsom 4 his ego

      put a gulon in his locker

      dye his hair yellow

      rig his bedroom door with ever lasting stink gas befor he goes 2 school

      shave his eyebrows

      make his 2 front teath grow 2 feet long

      cut his hair so it has a bunch of random bald spots

      make his skin color chance to a different color avery other minute

      dump verdi poop on him

      yell all his most emberassing secrets at lunchtime in foxfire

      get grady to mesmerize him into kissing a verminion

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      -Starki

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    • 24.118.224.249 wrote:
      When u gonna post next?

      propably tomorrow morning..I have to do my piano :( but maybe i'll have time if I hurry! 

      -princess fluffyfins

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      I made a list of fizt torture that i think would be awsom 4 his ego

      put a gulon in his locker

      dye his hair yellow

      rig his bedroom door with ever lasting stink gas befor he goes 2 school

      shave his eyebrows

      make his 2 front teath grow 2 feet long

      cut his hair so it has a bunch of random bald spots

      make his skin color chance to a different color avery other minute

      dump verdi poop on him

      yell all his most emberassing secrets at lunchtime in foxfire

      get grady to mesmerize him into kissing a verminion

      haha XD I LOVE THOSE! I have to include those!

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    • -princess fluffyfins

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    • 174.56.40.127 wrote:
      Also! Make him watch Greyfell and Sliveny 'play' forever. GO LINH!!!!!!!

      -Starki

      lol I love that I'll include that as well! :)

      -princess fluffyfins

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      -princess fluffyfins

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    • CHAPTER 19 part 1

      Linh POV

      "Linh, whatcha doing?" Tam asked her, stepping into her tree house. 

      "TAM! GET OUT!" Linh yelled, throwing waterballs over her shoulder at him. She had been trying to hide the notes, but with Tam's bad timing, she had to put them on her desk. She'd hide them later. 

      "hey!" He said, trying to dodge the water, but he still got soaked. "jeez. Whatcha doing though?"

      "Did you not get the hint?"

      "Well since your making a big deal about it, I better see whatcha doing." Tam said walking into the room. 

      "She can't get ahold of these." He said. 

      "I know." 

      "It'll break her."

      "That's why I'm getting them and hiding them so she can't see them. If she hands herself over, we'll lose." Linh said. 

      "Alright. We need to hide them somewhere else. Can we hide them in your waterfall?" 

      "thats a good place. no one will suspect there. Come on." The two twins walked out of the treehouse and hid the notes. 

      But Linh's imparter beeped. It was another hail from Sophie. 

      So that's the part 1..my sister stopped so i gotta go play now...i'll post the next part tomorrow or later today!

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • Yay! NOoooooo! FITZ! WHY?!

      -Starki

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    • Wow that was quick!

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • 68.5.246.233 wrote:
      Wow that was quick!

      -princess fluffyfins

      I mayyy be kinda stalking this... it's just so good!

      -Starki

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    • 174.56.40.127 wrote:
      68.5.246.233 wrote:
      Wow that was quick!

      -princess fluffyfins

      I mayyy be kinda stalking this... it's just so good!

      -Starki

      I don't blame you

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    • 223.235.31.162 wrote:
      174.56.40.127 wrote:
      68.5.246.233 wrote:
      Wow that was quick!

      -princess fluffyfins

      I mayyy be kinda stalking this... it's just so good!

      -Starki

      I don't blame you

      Thank you guys so much!! Your support means a lot especially since this is one of my first fanfics!

      -princess fluffyfins 

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    • CHAPTER 19 part 2

      linh POV

      linh and tam light leaped to Rimeshire, where Sophie said Dex's mom had been attacked. When they arrived, they saw that Elwin was already there and taking care of Juline. 

      "Will she be alright?" Dex asked Elwin. 

      "yes." Elwin answered, but he didn't look confident. "I'll leap her to the healing center." 

      Once they leaped away, Sophie sat on the floor and stared at her hands. "Why did he do this?" She asked. 

      "I don't know." Linh said. 

      "What's wrong with him?" Sophie asked again. 

      "Everything." 

      Sophie put her face in her hands, and her body shook with silent sobs. 

      "Listen Sophie, why don't you go home. You've done a lot today, and i think you need some rest." Linh said. 

      "okay." Once sophie disappeared, Linh looked around the room. 

      This time, the note was hidden in a ice sculpture. 

      one by one. One by one. We won't stop. We'll strike where it hurts. 

      It will all be your fault. 

      With much love, 

      Fitz

      "What type of twisted love does he think this is?" Tam asked after Linh showed him the note.

      "I don't know. But he's gone to far. I don't know how we can forgive him." Linh said. 

      "I don't think we will." Tam said. 

      "no. We won't." after a few minutes, Linh whispered, "do you think we're doing the right thing?" 

      Tam put his arm around Linh. "I hope." 

      So that's the second part. Thanks for reading and hope you enjoyed! I'll try to post another chapter later today! 

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • FITZ YOU... FITZZZZ!!!!!!!!! DO YOU REALLY THINK SHE"LL LOVE YOU NOW??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

      -Starki

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    • 174.56.40.127 wrote:
      FITZ YOU... FITZZZZ!!!!!!!!! DO YOU REALLY THINK SHE"LL LOVE YOU NOW??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

      -Starki

      lol

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • CHAPTER 20

      Fitz POV

      Fitz was confused. Why wasn't Sophie turning herself in? The Sophie he knew would. But what was stopping her? 

      But then a thought struck him. What if she wasn't getting the notes?

      He needed to find a way to get them to her. He motioned for Zephyr to come talk to him. 

      'What?" Zephyr asked. Zephyr was a guster, and was always pretty grumpy. 

      "Listen. I don't think she's getting the notes." Fitz said. "we need to put them in her house somehow."

      "Your right." zephyr said. "I'll speak to Gisella." 

      Sandor POV

      Sophie had stayed up late talking to Keefe, so he suspected she would be sleeping for a while longer. 

      He saw a movement out the window. He looked out. Thousands of paper notes were falling from the sky. He motioned for Bo, Flori, and Tarina to stay by the door, and he walked outside. He looked at the notes. 

      It's all your fault.

      love, 

      fitz.

      One said. Sandor had seen Linh take a note from Tiergan's office, and he suspected that linh was collecting them so Sophie couldn't get them. He got out his imparter and hailed Linh. 

      Linh POV

      "Oh my gosh." Linh said, looking at all the papers spread out onto Havenfields pastures. "how are we going to pick all of these up?"

      "I don't know. But we better start now." sandor said. Linh nodded and started collecting them off the ground. 

      "uh..you guys..you could just use telkiness." (i bet i spelled that wrong) Tam said. 

      "oops." linh said, allowing a smile to peak through. That would make it a lot easier. She imagined she had 100 hands, and she lifted about 100 hundred papers. Sandor had thought ahead and brought a bucket, so she dumped the papers in there. 

      Tam did it after her, and together they managed to put all the papers away. But, this was getting to be too much.  She had to find a way to get Fitz to stop. She began to think. 

      So that's the chapter 20! Thanks for reading and hope you enjoyed! Next chapter there will be more SoKeefe stuff!

      -princess fluffyfins

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      -Starki

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    • 174.56.40.127 wrote:
      YAY!!! SOKEEEEEEFE!!!!

      -Starki

      can you plleeeassseee post another chapter on for a while!!! pleaassseeee!

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • 68.5.246.233 wrote:
      174.56.40.127 wrote:
      YAY!!! SOKEEEEEEFE!!!!

      -Starki

      can you plleeeassseee post another chapter on for a while!!! pleaassseeee!

      -princess fluffyfins

      Mayyyybeeee :)

      -Starki

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      174.56.40.127 wrote:
      YAY!!! SOKEEEEEEFE!!!!

      -Starki

      can you plleeeassseee post another chapter on for a while!!! pleaassseeee!

      -princess fluffyfins

      I posted a sneak peek! :)

      -Starki

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    • 174.56.40.127 wrote:

      68.5.246.233 wrote:
      174.56.40.127 wrote:
      YAY!!! SOKEEEEEEFE!!!!

      -Starki

      can you plleeeassseee post another chapter on for a while!!! pleaassseeee!

      -princess fluffyfins

      I posted a sneak peek! :)

      -Starki

      I read it! It is soooooo gooooodddd! I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!! XD

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • 174.56.40.127 wrote:
      YAY!!! SOKEEEEEEFE!!!!

      -Starki

      ummm YASSSSSS!!!

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    • btw do u pronounce keefe like keef of keefie?

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    • 24.118.224.249 wrote: btw do u pronounce keefe like keef of keefie?

      Shannon pronounces it Keef, but for like half the series, I said Keefie(I loved saying his name like that xD). However, it is a book, and one of the good things about it is you can change things how you like it, such as changing the name pronunciation or even how certain characters look like. All in all, there isn’t really a right way of saying it, but Keef is how Shannon pronounces it.

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      24.118.224.249 wrote: btw do u pronounce keefe like keef of keefie?

      Shannon pronounces it Keef, but for like half the series, I said Keefie(I loved saying his name like that xD). However, it is a book, and one of the good things about it is you can change things how you like it, such as changing the name pronunciation or even how certain characters look like. All in all, there isn’t really a right way of saying it, but Keef is how Shannon pronounces it.

      Same

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • Niiiiiiicccceeee


      Can’t wait till I post more!!!

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    • thanks! i'm working on the next chapter now!

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • CHAPTER 21 

      ~1 week later~

      Sophie POV

      Sophie stood outside Linh's treehouse, trying to come up with courage to knock. She figured going in person to tell Linh that her parents had been attacked would have been better than hailing her. 

      She knocked, her palms sweating. 

      "Hi sophie!" Linh said cheerfully. But when she saw sophie's face, her smile slowly faded. 

      "linh, your..your parents have been attacked. I'm so sorry." Sophie said.

      Linh stared at her. "No, they aren't part of the black swan!" 

      "I know. But..but I think you should go see them." Sophie suggested. Linh nodded and walked out of the tree house to go get Tam. 

      Sophie walked around the joint treehouses. Linh had done a lot to them. Where they used to eat breakfast, a giant waterfall cascaded over in an arc, and landed into a pool. Over the pool was a bridge covered in Ivy. It was truly beautiful. She stepped up to the waterfall. She looked at it. It helped to have something to focus on. 

      Wait a second, Sophie thought. There was something behind the waterfall. Some sort of paper. Sophie knew it wasn't her business, but she stepped into the water and clutched the papers in her hands. There were only a few, maybe 5. She spread them out on a table and stared at them. 

      no, she thought. linh hid these from me? She stared at them. They were all from Fitz. saying the attacks wouldn't stop unless she turned herself in. She stared at them. She had no choice. She didn't want anyone else to get hurt. 

      ~3 hours later~

      It was time to say goodbye to Keefe. 

      "Hey keefe," she said. She had called him over to spend some time with her, not saying why.

      "Hey Foster." He said. 

      She reached up and kissed him. And like always, everything fell away and she sank deeper and deeper into the kiss. Her hand went to his hair, and his hands came around her waist. 

      "I love you Keefe." she whispered. 

      "I know." Keefe said. "And I love you too." 

      They kissed again,  and Keefe eventually broke the kiss. 

      "So did you call me to do this, or did you actually want to do something?" Keefe asked, smiling. "Or could you just not stand to be apart from me." 

      "Well, we could go on a walk and maybe make some mallowmelt and custard bursts?" Sophie asked. She wanted to do something with Keefe that she would remember. 

      "Sure." He said. "Let's make the mallowmelt first!" 

      Sophie grinned. "of course you want to make the mallowmelt first." 

      "Hey, you can't blame me."

      "no, I can't." 

      They had a wonderful time, full of laughter, and Edaline even helped them. Sophie knew she would remember this day for her whole life. After they had finished and eventually eaten dinner, Grady had reluctantly consented, they went on a walk to the beach. 

      Once they were there, they layed down onto the sand and stared up at the sky. 

      "look it's cygnus and-"

      "no need to show off," keefe interrupted. "I know you're amazing." 

      Sophie blushed. "Thanks Keefe." 

      "anytime." he rolled over and kissed her, and after a few minutes which felt like seconds, they got up and started walking home. 

      It was the best afternoon and evening Sophie had had in months, and she had needed it. 

      "Goodbye Keefe." she whispered when they reached the Panakes tree.

      "Goodbye Foster." He answered. "I'll see you in the morning?"

      She couldn't bring herself to say no, so she just nodded. 

      She kissed him, and he faded into the light. 

      When she walked back inside, Edaline and Grady were waiting at the door. "You guys had a nice afternoon?" Edaline asked. 

      "Yeah." Sophie answered. Edaline hugged her. 

      "That's good. You deserved it." 

      Sophie walked upstairs and thought about her family. The family that she was leaving. She started to cry. After a while, she ran out of tears, and she whispered, "it's for the best." 

      I'll try to post another chapter later today! Thanks for reading and hope you enjoyed!

      -princess fluffyfins ​​​​​

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      • sobbing* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!

      -Starki

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    • CHAPTER 22

      ~1 year later~

      Sophie POV

      Sophie was frustrated. They still weren't winning. The only victory they'd had was a year ago when her friends rescued her back from the neverseen. But they weren't winning. And they had been fighting for years.

      Sophie was tired.

      She was tired of losing.

      Tired of deaths.

      She was tired of crying.

      And of course she was tired of Fitz. He had just gotten worse as the months wore on.

      At dinner, she could tell Grady and Edaline were worried about her, because she wasn't talking. She just ate.

      After they had fallen asleep, Sophie snuck downstairs to get some slumberberry tea. Her bodyguards were currently outside, so they couldn't stop her. She grabbed all 9 packets and carried them upstairs to her room. She already had a cup and she didn't need hot water, because her sink could provide that. She opened one packet, and dumped the contents into her cup. She got into bed and drained the cup, making sure there was nothing left in it.

      Soon she fell into a dreamless sleep. When she woke up, she took a shower and allowed vertina to help her style her hair into a braided bun. She put on a red dress and padded downstairs.

      "hey Foster." Keefe's voice said.

      "Hey." Sophie answered she pressed a quick kiss to his lips. She grabbed a muffin that was on the table and shoved it into her mouth. "you wanna go upstairs?" she asked.

      "Sure." Keefe said. He followed her up the stairs into her room, and Sophie pushed him against the wall and kissed him. Hard. She'd been more bold lately, kissing him harder and kissing him more. So he was used to it. She bit his lip and tasted blood, and he moaned.

      "jeez sophie." he gasped.

      "what, you don't like it?" She asked.

      His answer was kissing her back, and she sank into it, trying to forget about everything.

      "You're scaring me Sophie." He whispered to her, after a few minutes.

      "How?" she asked.

      "You don't seem yourself."

      "mph." she said, kissing him again.

      "Is there anything wrong?" He asked, once she broke the kiss for air.

      She didn't answer and just pushed him onto the bed, landing on top of him. She tangled her hands into his hair and kissed him. He kissed her back and they stayed that way for a few minutes.

      But soon he broke the kiss and said, "seriously Sophie."

      "Fine. Fine." Sophie said, getting off from on top of him.

      "So..umm...what's our plan?" Keefe asked, sitting up.

      "you don't get it keefe! I don't have one!" She yelled.

      Keefe stared at the floor.

      "I just..I just don't know what to do." Sophie said, her voice breaking.

      Keefe nodded, but she heard a buzz coming from his pocket. He fished out his imparter and answered it.

      "keefe, could you come home please?" His father asked. "I need some help." Keefe's father had lost his leg, and he wasn't yet used to his prosthetic one.

      "Sure." keefe said, running a hand through his hair. "Sorry Foster, I've got to go."

      "It's fine." sophie said. Once he had left, she sat down at her desk, and opened up a notebook. She found a blank page. Time to start brainstorming, she thought.

      After a while of staring at the blank page, Sophie began to think of what the neverseen did that was so successful.

      After a few hours, she realized it was violence. They weren't afraid of bloodshed.

      If the blackswan wanted to win, they needed to start doing that too.

      I don't think I'll have time to post another one today..I'll try..thanks for reading and hope you enjoyed!

      OH! I forgot! I'm going on a backpacking trip in about a week, which means I can't post anything, so I'm trying to post extra! I might be able to bring my computer in the car, but I don't know if it will end up working...or if I'll even be allowed to...but I'll ask!

      -princess fluffyfins'

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      -princess fluffyfins

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    • NOOOOOOO STUPID DAD RUINING SUCH A SWEET MOMENT altho thx 4 not making this    pg 13

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    • 24.118.224.249 wrote: NOOOOOOO STUPID DAD RUINING SUCH A SWEET MOMENT altho thx 4 not making this    pg 13

      XD

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • I have an excuse for not posting early! So basically i had "borrowed" something from my dad and never gave it back, so I was righting a chapter for my other fanfic, the one called Perfect about Alden and Della, and he came in and started looking for it so I told him to get out..I may have yelled it hehe..and he took my computer and phone :( ....so I had nothing to write on! 

      I have to clean my room now :( and next post should be around 6:00 ish my time...

      -princess fluffyfins (but you can call me Cress if u want)

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    • Hello! It's Cress again! So sorry this post is later then 6:00 hehehe...it's 6:30 when I started writing...So you're propably glaring at me through the screen so I'll start writing now!

      CHAPTER 23

      Sophie POV

      "But Mr.- Magnate Leto, you don't understand!" Sophie shouted, as she struggled to catch up to him as he walked quickly down the halls in foxfire. 

      "there are a lot of things I don't understand Miss Foster, but this is definitely not one of them. i suggest you get back to your session." Magnate Leto said. 

      "BUT MR. FOR- MAGNATE LETO WE COULD ACTUALLY WIN FOR ONCE!" Sophie yelled. 

      "I suggest you keep your voice down Miss Foster. There's a reason the black swan don't use weapons. And if you can't figure out why then.." he trailed off. 

      "I can't! Do you want to win this war?" Sophie asked. 

      "It may help us win the battle, but it won't help us win the war. What will happen if we use violence and bombs?" he asked. 

      "We'll win!" Sophie said, frustrated. 

      "Nope. Wrong answer. We will lose the trust of the people. You can't fight fire with fire Ms Foster." 

      "YES YOU CAN!" Sophie yelled. 

      "Miss Foster. Keep your voice down." Magnate Leto said. "Other students who actually are trying in their sessions are trying to focus. I suggest you go and do the same." 

      Sophie stood in the hallway glaring at him as he walked off in the directon of his office. 

      "He's being frustrating!" she slammed her fist into the wall, and an angry mentor came out. 

      "Miss Foster!" they yelled. "Go to your session!" 

      When Sophie walked away, she came to a decision. Next time they fought the Neverseen, she would be ready. And she wouldn't hestitate to fight fire with fire. 

      SORRY THAT CHAPTER WAS SO SHORT!!!!!! I'll make up for it with extra chapters tomorrow! Thanks for reading and hope you enjoyed!

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • Awesome Cress! GO FOSTER RAGE!!!

      -Starki

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    • 174.56.40.127 wrote:
      Awesome Cress! GO FOSTER RAGE!!!

      -Starki

      XD thanks!

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    • -princess fluffyfins

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    • I'll try to post in an hour!

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • CHAPTER 24

      Sophie POV

      "I heard you got in a fight with Mr. Forkle yesterday." Keefe said. 

      "yeah." 

      "about what?"

      "uh-" sophie scrambled to come up with a lie, "I wanted to go to the forbidden cities to see Amy in person." Sophie could tell that Keefe was not impressed with her lie, but he didn't press it. 

      "hmm." was all he said. 

      "Though i was wondering, could you help me with some mimicking tricks?" Sophie asked. 

      Keefe smiled. "I'd love to." he said in Lady Cadence's voice. Sophie rolled her eyes, but smiled. 

      After a few hours of practicing, Sophie was beginning to get the hang of it, and she was able to say "Attention Prodigies, study hall is cancled. Please procede to the leap masters" in Magnate Leto's voice. 

      They walked downstairs to edaline and the gnomes making dinner. 

      "Keefe, do you want to stay for dinner?" Edaline asked. 

      "Sure." Keefe answered. "My dad got someone to help him out." 

      "that's good," Edaline said. "Dinner will be ready in 10 minutes." 

      They decided to go back upstairs to Sophie's room. 

      "What do you want to do?" Sophie asked. 

      "i have some ideas." Keefe said, smirking. Sophie smiled, and kissed him. 

      "I love you." she said. 

      "I know. And i love you." he said. They spent the rest of the 10 minutes kissing on Sophie's bed, and all too soon, Edaline was calling them down for dinner. 

      "That boy's staying for dinner?" Grady asked.  

      "yes." Edaline said. Grady still sometimes called Keefe that boy, but generally he used Keefe as they got to know eachother because of Keefe's mesmering lessons. 

      They sat down to eat and talked about the new animals that Havenfield would get tomorrow.

      "Can Keefe stay the night?" Sophie asked. 

      Edaline looked at Grady. "If you remember the rules, yes." 

      While Grady cleared the table and started washing dishes, Edaline went outside to check on verdi and the other animals, and sophie and Keefe went upstairs. 

      They spent a few hours kissing, but then Keefe asked her, "I know you weren't telling me the truth earlier, Sophie. Could you please tell me what you were fighting about?" 

      "Fine." Sophie said. 

      Keefe got up and sat on her swively chair at her desk. "okay. I'm ready." He said. 

      "I wanted to start fighting fire with fire." Sophie said. "You know, use violence and stuff so we win."

      "huh." Was what Keefe said. Sophie didn't want to find out if he disagreed with her, so she didn't give him a chance to think of a response. She walked over to the chair and sat on his lap. She kissed him hard, and bit his lip. He moaned and kissed back harder. Sophie put her legs around the back of the chair and pressed herself against him. He kissed her again, and then keefe accidently bit her lip hard. She gasped, and Keefe stopped kissing her. "are you okay?" he asked. 

      Sophie nodded and pressed herself against him. He kissed her and stood up, picking her up and bringing her to the bed. After a few seconds, he broke the kiss and whispered, "let's go to sleep." 

      Sophie nodded. 

      "Goodnight Sophie." he whispered. 

      "Goodnight Keefe." She answered, and they fell asleep holding hands next to eachother. 

      This wasn't my favorite chapter..I think the next one will be better! Thanks for reading and hope you enjoyed!

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • I am kinda stuck for the next chapter..i think that I'll end up posting it closer to 5 or 6 my time! right now its 3. 

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • Uh so I went to REI to get some stuff for my backpacking trip and we ended up staying for a few hours since COVID precautions caused lines be long and stuff... so I won’t have time to post another chapter today!

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • Ooh! I love backpacking!

      -Starki

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    • 174.56.40.127 wrote: Ooh! I love backpacking!

      -Starki

      Same!😄

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • I got an account! YAY! So i'll try to post the next chapter around 12:00!

      -princess fluffyfins

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    • Well that didn’t happen...I know what I want to write but when I write it, it doesn’t come out right....I’ll try to post tomorrow morning!!!

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    • plz post

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    • this is really good btw

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    • Princess fluffyfins wrote:
      I got an account! YAY! So i'll try to post the next chapter around 12:00!

      -princess fluffyfins

      Yay cool!!!

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    • Princess fluffyfins wrote:
      I got an account! YAY! So i'll try to post the next chapter around 12:00!

      -princess fluffyfins

      oh I don't have a account

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    • 98.210.184.171 wrote: this is really good btw

      Thanks! My mom is yelling at me to come downstairs so I’ll try to post later!

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    • Okay np!

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    • CHAPTER 25

      ~1 year later~

      Sophie POV

      Sophie was surrounded by flames. She looked around, her vision blurry from smoke. This was the first time they had faced the neverseen in a year, and they were losing. yet again. 

      The counselors were hiding in their castles, many of them already injured, and lots of the castles were on fire. 

      The only think preventing the counselors from leaving is their image. If they ran away again, everything would unravel. The people would call them weak, and a new council would be started. 

      She stepped through the carnage of Emery's castle, and found, Biana, Keefe, dex, and Tam huddled in a corner. 

      "Guys!" She whispered. They looked over at her. 

      "Please tell me you have a plan." Keefe said. 

      "no." Sophie said. She sank to her knees. "I'm out of them. We're losing. Yet again." 

      "and the councilors are doing nothing." Tam said. 

      Sophie nodded. 

      "Like usual." he added. 

      "let me think." she said, after a pause. They sat in silence for a little while, and then Sophie remembered the day she had fought with Mr. Forkle. 

      "But Mr.- Magnate Leto, you don't understand!" Sophie had shouted, as she struggled to catch up to him as he walked quickly down the halls in foxfire. 

      "there are a lot of things I don't understand Miss Foster, but this is definitely not one of them. i suggest you get back to your session." Magnate Leto had said. 

      "BUT MR. FOR- MAGNATE LETO WE COULD ACTUALLY WIN FOR ONCE!" Sophie yelled. 

      "I suggest you keep your voice down Miss Foster. There's a reason the black swan don't use weapons. And if you can't figure out why then.." he trailed off. 

      "I can't! Do you want to win this war?" Sophie asked. 

      "It may help us win the battle, but it won't help us win the war. What will happen if we use violence and bombs?" he asked. 

      "We'll win!" Sophie said, frustrated. 

      "Nope. Wrong answer. We will lose the trust of the people. You can't fight fire with fire Ms Foster." 

      "YES YOU CAN!" Sophie yelled. 

      "Miss Foster. Keep your voice down." Magnate Leto said. "Other students who actually are trying in their sessions are trying to focus. I suggest you go and do the same." 

      Mr. Forkle hadn't brought it up again, so Sophie had forgotten about it. No one had seen the neverseen for a year, and she had started being herself again. 

      But now, they were out of options. If they didn't act, the council would die. 

      "I've got one." She said, closing her eyes. She would fight fire with fire. 

      "What is it?" Keefe asked. 

      "You guys don't need to help. I'll..i'm going to fight fire with fire." She walked away before they could say anything, fishing out her black swan pendant. She held it up to the light, and the ground burst into flames, parting the Everblaze. 

      "YOU CAN"T HIDE FROM ME!" sophie screamed. 

      "Oh I assure you miss Foster, we're doing a lot of things, but we are aren't hiding." A voice said out of the darkness. A voice that sounded familiar. 

      Hide me with shadows Sophie transmitted to tam, and she saw her body coat with darkness. 

      A man in a black cloak appeared out of the flames. Sophie moved in a circle around him, moving the pendant in  a circle to create a circle of fire. 

      "I know where you are." The voice said. 

      mimick me Keefe. Sophie transmitted to Keefe. 

      "You do? Come and find me!" what sounded like Sophie's voice said. 

      The man stalked towards where the voice came from, and sophie ran up behind him and flung back his hood. 

      He turned around, throwing star in his hand. 

      She gasped. 

      "but..but you're supposed to be good!" She screamed.

      I leave you with that little cliffhanger. :) Can you guess who the person is?????? 




       

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    • sorry the chapter is so short!

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    • i officialy hate u now how DARE U LEAVE US LIKE THIS!!!!! but really good story up until now!!!

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    • IT’S ALDENNNNNN

      IT HAS TO BEEEE


      Man, I hate that guy

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    • NOOOOOOooOooooo 

      And yes maybe ALDEN

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    • nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo it CAN"T be alden!!!! If it is then I going to run away from home and KILLLLLL HIMMMMMMMMMMM

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    • Maybe one of the counsellors? Idk

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    • or do you think it's someone for m the black swan?

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    • i bet it is elwin or livy or quinlin or- wow there r a lot of possibilities...

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    • CHAPTER 26

      Sophie POV

      "Not everything is as it seems." Mr. Forkle said. 

      Sophie gasped. "But..." Everyone else was as shocked as her. They had never though Mr. Forkle would be...

      Mr. Forkle said, "I hope I'll see you later." before he took out his crystal and held it up to the light, but not before throwing the star at Keefe. Keefe yelled in pain as the star sliced him across the stomach. 

      "Keefe!!" Sophie screamed. She rushed to his side. "I'll get you for this. I'll get you." she hissed. 

      ~A few hours later~

      "I don't understand how that happened!" Grady shouted. He was still furious about Mr. Forkle. As was everyone. They were all sitting in the living room at Havenfield. 

      "Neither do I." sophie whispered. They sat in silence for a few minutes, before the door opened. 

      "I heard it didn't go to well." A familiar voice said. 

      Everybody whirled around, and all the bodygaurds pulled out their swords. 

      "Woah." Mr. Forkle said. 

      "What are you doing here?" Sophie asked. "How can you show your face after what you did to Keefe?"

      "What do you mean?" Mr. Forkle asked. 

      "stop pretending."

      "pretending?" 

      "You can't deny it. Here." Sophie said, shoving the memory into Mr. Forkle's head. After it had played, his face turned white and he looked shaken. 

      "I think it's time I tell you about my other brother." He said. 

      "what?" everybdoy asked. 

      "I'm actually a triplet. Me and my 2nd youngest brother chose different paths than the youngest of us. We called him Vin. Vin chose to go to the neverseen, and I think it was because he was jealous of how close me and my other brother were." he wiped his eyes. 

      "He's telling the truth." Stina said. 

      Everybdoy stared at Mr. Forkle in shock. "you didn't think to tell us this?" Sophie asked, speaking for everyone. 

      Mr. Forkle looked ashamed. "No. And I guess he has taken to Ruckleberries as well." After a pause, he added, "i didn't think he was alive." 

      Sorry that chapter was so short! Hopefully you liked the plot twist!

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    • 😶😶😶

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    • .*gasp!* 



      wOw Forkle has a triplet.... speechless

      Great chapter btw

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote: .*gasp!* 



      wOw Forkle has a triplet.... speechless

      Great chapter btw

      Thanks!!!!

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    • 24.118.224.249 wrote: i officialy hate u now how DARE U LEAVE US LIKE THIS!!!!! but really good story up until now!!!

      Thanks!!

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote: IT’S ALDENNNNNN

      IT HAS TO BEEEE


      Man, I hate that guy

      XD

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    • Oh well guess I was wrong, although I WAS thinking about Forkle maybe being the person...


      MR. FORKLE HAS ANOTHER BROTHER?

      SOON WE’RE GONNA FIND OUT THAT HE HAD A FOURTH BROTHER THAT WAS ACTUALLY GEORGE WASHINGTON

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    • Princess fluffyfins wrote:

      IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote: IT’S ALDENNNNNN

      IT HAS TO BEEEE


      Man, I hate that guy

      XD

      SAMEEEEEEEEEEE ALKSDFJHQ:EKJRHNCQE ALDEN

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      -Starki

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote: Oh well guess I was wrong, although I WAS thinking about Forkle maybe being the person...


      MR. FORKLE HAS ANOTHER BROTHER?

      SOON WE’RE GONNA FIND OUT THAT HE HAD A FOURTH BROTHER THAT WAS ACTUALLY GEORGE WASHINGTON

      LOL XD that is such an awesome idea!!! XDXDXD

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      -Starki

      XD

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    • I'm gonna start writing the nexttttt chapterrrrrrrr

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    • nvm parents saying again no electronics..I'll have to post it tomorrow mornign! 

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    • 0: wait what?

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    • Nooooooo why did this happen




      Ilovekeeper

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    • so im going on a backbacking trip, and I won't be back for 1 1/2ish weeks. I'll try to post when I get back! :)

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:
      Oh well guess I was wrong, although I WAS thinking about Forkle maybe being the person...


      MR. FORKLE HAS ANOTHER BROTHER?

      SOON WE’RE GONNA FIND OUT THAT HE HAD A FOURTH BROTHER THAT WAS ACTUALLY GEORGE WASHINGTON

      Lol 😆 .... what are 4 identical kids called anyways?... I wonder

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    • i think its identical quartuplets or something

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    • Then what are 5 identical kids called or think about it 6 and 7 Also can i advertise here?

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    • 5= quintuplet

      6= sextuplets (no bad jokes pls its an actual thing)

      7= septuplets

      8= octuplets

      idk why i know this dont ask

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    • Have fun!!!!!

      Ilovekeeper

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    • A FANDOM user
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