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    • YAYYYYY

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    • WOOOOOO!!! Can't wait!! :)

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    • I kinda lost the entire second thread.....

      oops

      but yay!

      also, third!

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    • 4RTH! WOOOO CANT WAIT

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    • HIIII 5TH

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    • Oooh sixth... 

      I'm usually like the three hundredth

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    • 7


      My lucky number

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:
      7


      My lucky number

      lol

      mine is either 17 or 19

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    • 8th! I think . . . SORRY FOR BREAKING THE LAST THREAD XD

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    • ILOVETHIS FANFIC SO MUCH!!!!!!!!

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:
      7


      My lucky number

      Ooo! Mine (ish) too!

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    • MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:
      8th!

      I think . . . SORRY FOR BREAKING THE LAST THREAD XD

      Lol no need to be sorrry!

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    • 10th!

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    • It is a mark of a good fanfic author if you break the thread. It means people love it! Like Wandergirl's fanfic, it's on NUMBER 8 I haven't been keeping track, 10?

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    • TheBlackMoonlark wrote:
      It is a mark of a good fanfic author if you break the thread. It means people love it! Like Wandergirl's fanfic, it's on NUMBER 8 I haven't been keeping track, 10?

      actually, it's 15 now

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    • Oh...

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    • I don't know why I am saying this but..,

      Honestly, if Sophie had a gun and was willing to use it(like that will ever happen) the number of pages would probaby go 50% down in everybook. And then it wouldn't have this many readers. Because:

      Neverseen(8 elves): Sophie and gun(( bullets): Shoots every Neverseen member, shoot Gisela twice for ruining Keefe's life.

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    • 8 bullets.

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    • to 9

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    • TheBlackMoonlark wrote:
      I don't know why I am saying this but..,

      Honestly, if Sophie had a gun and was willing to use it(like that will ever happen) the number of pages would probaby go 50% down in everybook. And then it wouldn't have this many readers. Because:

      Neverseen(8 elves): Sophie and gun(( bullets): Shoots every Neverseen member, shoot Gisela twice for ruining Keefe's life.

      but, as I said on the other thread, the Neverseen would survive because Ruy would shield them. Then Gisela would manage to get a gun and kill everyone in the black swan because Maruca can't shield them well enough, as she is untrained

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    • TheBlackMoonlark wrote:
      I don't know why I am saying this but..,

      Honestly, if Sophie had a gun and was willing to use it(like that will ever happen) the number of pages would probaby go 50% down in everybook. And then it wouldn't have this many readers. Because:

      Neverseen(8 elves): Sophie and gun(( bullets): Shoots every Neverseen member, shoot Gisela twice for ruining Keefe's life.

      That is a really good point

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    • MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:
      TheBlackMoonlark wrote:
      I don't know why I am saying this but..,

      Honestly, if Sophie had a gun and was willing to use it(like that will ever happen) the number of pages would probaby go 50% down in everybook. And then it wouldn't have this many readers. Because:

      Neverseen(8 elves): Sophie and gun(( bullets): Shoots every Neverseen member, shoot Gisela twice for ruining Keefe's life.

      That is a really good point

      Ya

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    • MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:
      TheBlackMoonlark wrote:
      I don't know why I am saying this but..,

      Honestly, if Sophie had a gun and was willing to use it(like that will ever happen) the number of pages would probaby go 50% down in everybook. And then it wouldn't have this many readers. Because:

      Neverseen(8 elves): Sophie and gun(( bullets): Shoots every Neverseen member, shoot Gisela twice for ruining Keefe's life.

      That is a really good point

      Huh.....point

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      TheBlackMoonlark wrote:
      I don't know why I am saying this but..,

      Honestly, if Sophie had a gun and was willing to use it(like that will ever happen) the number of pages would probaby go 50% down in everybook. And then it wouldn't have this many readers. Because:

      Neverseen(8 elves): Sophie and gun(( bullets): Shoots every Neverseen member, shoot Gisela twice for ruining Keefe's life.

      but, as I said on the other thread, the Neverseen would survive because Ruy would shield them. Then Gisela would manage to get a gun and kill everyone in the black swan because Maruca can't shield them well enough, as she is untrained

      Huh.....another point........Sophie should first shoot run (unexpectedly) then everything would be great........that was a little dark 😥😰😰

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    • Yayayayyay new thread!!!!!!!!!

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    • Can’t wait for the next partttt!!!

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    • Post soon!

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    • 122.177.26.209 wrote:

      Keephie4eva wrote:
      TheBlackMoonlark wrote:
      I don't know why I am saying this but..,

      Honestly, if Sophie had a gun and was willing to use it(like that will ever happen) the number of pages would probaby go 50% down in everybook. And then it wouldn't have this many readers. Because:

      Neverseen(8 elves): Sophie and gun(( bullets): Shoots every Neverseen member, shoot Gisela twice for ruining Keefe's life.

      but, as I said on the other thread, the Neverseen would survive because Ruy would shield them. Then Gisela would manage to get a gun and kill everyone in the black swan because Maruca can't shield them well enough, as she is untrained

      Huh.....another point........Sophie should first shoot run (unexpectedly) then everything would be great........that was a little dark 😥😰😰

      Trueee 🤨

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    • Oh my gosh I NEED mooooorrrrreeee! All of those sad scenes with Keefe and the wandering tree and Valentine's day and him drawing her face and his depression made me cry so hard!!! You are an amazing writer to get emotions out of people like that, but this is Keefe, so anything horrible and heartbreaking that happens to him affects all of us because we all love him :)

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    • -Ripplefluffs1155

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    • More!

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    • Okay question.

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    • Who can imagine Keefe with tattoos?

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    • Thats a werid question buuuut just anwser!!

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    • When I wrote that I was laughing so hard

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    • Wow if Keefe got tattoos then he would REALLY look like a bad-boy wannabe XDXD

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    • i can totally see that lmao

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Who can imagine Keefe with tattoos?

      OH MY GOD

      THAT IS-

      I NEED

      TO

      I need to see Keefe with tattoos XDXD

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    • Omg I'm so glad- cause he does

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    • I already have ideas but does he have  A LOT or A LITTLE?

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    • I was thinking A LOT but maybee

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    • wow. That's....a thought indeed...gah I'm going to imagine him like that forever now, aren't I?

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    • So A LOT? 

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    • Cuz I can do that- 

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    • Wait no it won't be in the fan-fic AT ALL TOTALLY I'M SURE

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    • LIKE NOT AT ALL

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    • wow I'm sure I have given it away

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    • XDXDXDXD 

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    • Wow you have successfully killed me from laughter 

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    • I like guys with no tattoos...but for Keefe I WILL MAKE AN EXCEPTION

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:
      I like guys with no tattoos...but for Keefe I WILL MAKE AN EXCEPTION

      XD yeah

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    • Keefe is cute no matter what.

      ~ Councillor Oralie 

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    • OH CRAP. DID I JUST SAY THAT!?!?!? 

      ~ Councillor Oralie 

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    • I mean- What in Atlantis..... Like-WOW.





















      (I mean, it's totally and completely true XD) (and now y'all are going to think I'm SO weird... Even thought you guys probably already do XD)

      ~Councillor Oralie 

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    • 74.206.34.184 wrote: Keefe is cute no matter what.

      ~ Councillor Oralie 

      He ALWAYS WILL BE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • 74.206.34.184 wrote:
      I mean- What in Atlantis..... Like-WOW.




















      (I mean, it's totally and completely true XD) (and now y'all are going to think I'm SO weird... Even thought you guys probably already do XD)

      ~Councillor Oralie 

      If you are weird, what am I?

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    •      *sighs at Keefe's hotness for a hot second*

      SEE WHAT I DID THERE

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    • Wooooooooooooooooowwwwww xD

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    • 74.206.34.184 wrote:
      I mean- What in Atlantis..... Like-WOW.




















      (I mean, it's totally and completely true XD) (and now y'all are going to think I'm SO weird... Even thought you guys probably already do XD)

      ~Councillor Oralie 

      Trust me THAT is not werid 




      Keefe's my dream boy

      .*starts daydreaming and sighs* 

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    • Yeah same^^

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    • Yeah LOL

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    • 223.235.136.141 wrote:
      Yeah same^^
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    • You could say that again and I honestly think that Keefe looks cute with tattoos or not, all my sisters know that because I talk about him all the time....

      Go!SOKEEFE! When are you going to write more?



      - Sokeefeforever 

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    • Sooooooo I HAD writers block..... oops- but now I'm ALMOST done and then... I have to edit and yada yada. 

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    • I'm not EXACTLY sure when I'll post tho

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    • Don’t stress about it! Take as long as you need!

      but not too long...xD

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote: Don’t stress about it! Take as long as you need!

      but not too long...xD

      Yeah....same

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    • 223.235.136.141 wrote:

      IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote: Don’t stress about it! Take as long as you need!

      but not too long...xD

      Yeah....same

      Yup!

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    • Thhhxxx guyssss

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    • ))))
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    • hii

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    • 71.93.196.76 wrote:
      hii

      Heeelllllooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      71.93.196.76 wrote:
      hii
      Heeelllllooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      Heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

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    • hizzzzzzzzzzz

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    • Wow in the next chapter theres going to some EXTREME kissing

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Wow in the next chapter theres going to some EXTREME kissing

      lol



      I HOPE IT'S BETWEEN KEEFE AND SOPHIE AFTER KEEFE USES SPINJITSU TO YEET SOPHIE OUT OF EXILE-



      XD

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    • MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Wow in the next chapter theres going to some EXTREME kissing
      lol



      I HOPE IT'S BETWEEN KEEFE AND SOPHIE AFTER KEEFE USES SPINJITSU TO YEET SOPHIE OUT OF EXILE-



      XD

      XD

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Wow in the next chapter theres going to some EXTREME kissing

         *SCREECH*

      YYYYYESSSSSSSSS

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    • YAY!!

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote: Wow in the next chapter theres going to some EXTREME kissing

      • INTENSE SHIPPER NOISES* DJHDJSANSDJNDJFMSNDKCNDJDDFK LETS YEET THE COUNCIL! YEET THE RITZ SAVOURY CRACKER! ALL HAIL SOKEEFE! HUNKYHAIR, USE GULONS TO STINK OUT EXILE AND BIANA SHALL TURN THEM INVISIBLE AND BREAK THEM OUT! LETS GO! OPERATION RESCUE-FOSTER-AND-ALL-HAIL-SOKEEFE
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    • IggysElixers wrote:

      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote: Wow in the next chapter theres going to some EXTREME kissing

      • INTENSE SHIPPER NOISES* DJHDJSANSDJNDJFMSNDKCNDJDDFK LETS YEET THE COUNCIL! YEET THE RITZ SAVOURY CRACKER! ALL HAIL SOKEEFE! HUNKYHAIR, USE GULONS TO STINK OUT EXILE AND BIANA SHALL TURN THEM INVISIBLE AND BREAK THEM OUT! LETS GO! OPERATION RESCUE-FOSTER-AND-ALL-HAIL-SOKEEFE

      okay XD

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Wow in the next chapter theres going to some EXTREME kissing

      EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE *FANGIRL INSIDE DIES FROM SQUEELING, THEN REVIVES JUST TO SQUEAL MORE* EEEEEEEEEE

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    • IggysElixers wrote:

      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote: Wow in the next chapter theres going to some EXTREME kissing

      • INTENSE SHIPPER NOISES* DJHDJSANSDJNDJFMSNDKCNDJDDFK LETS YEET THE COUNCIL! YEET THE RITZ SAVOURY CRACKER! ALL HAIL SOKEEFE! HUNKYHAIR, USE GULONS TO STINK OUT EXILE AND BIANA SHALL TURN THEM INVISIBLE AND BREAK THEM OUT! LETS GO! OPERATION RESCUE-FOSTER-AND-ALL-HAIL-SOKEEFE

      XD XD XD YASSSSS

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    •   *CHANNELING INNER SILVENY* 
      


      SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE!

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    • IggysElixers wrote:
      *CHANNELING INNER SILVENY*


      SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE!

      SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE!SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE!SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE!SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE!SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE!

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    • Everyday, I become more and more of a fangirl for kotlc...



      I think it's a good thing... In my mind it is.. but I'm probably going insane...

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    • AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I JUST READ THIS FANFIC AND I AM CRYING MY HEART OUT RIGHT NOWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MY PARENTS ARE LEGIT STARING AT ME LIKE I'M A MaNIAC RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS SOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD 

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    • IggysElixers wrote:
      *CHANNELING INNER SILVENY*


      SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE!

      LOLZ

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    • LoveYallLizzy wrote:
      IggysElixers wrote:
      *CHANNELING INNER SILVENY*


      SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE! SOKEEFE!

      LOLZ

      XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD

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    • XD

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    • Wow um you guys r rly excited for the sokeefe kissing thingy

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    • But I would be too because I mean its SOKEEFE.... so..... xD

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      But I would be too because I mean its SOKEEFE.... so..... xD

      My thoughts exactly!

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      Amazing!!!
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    • I can wait for it!

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    • Wow, that came out wrong. ^^

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    • Lol

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    • LOLZ

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    • how do you do that?

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    • amazing thingy

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    • You need a good crii... so plz crii... whether if you're feeling under the weather, broke up with friends, got scolded by someone for some little thing... here is the place.

      Criiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii like no one's drowning in your tears

      sob like you are sobbing for everyone unemotional

      wail like you are the most powerful vocificator

      and

      never stop this until you are tearless

      {{Cry}} to spread the sadness and let's get happy again together!

      Proudly made by Cuddo/Saskia :B


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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
           *sighs at Keefe's hotness for a hot second*

      SEE WHAT I DID THERE

      oh no you didn't

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    • IggysElixers wrote:

      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote: Wow in the next chapter theres going to some EXTREME kissing

      • INTENSE SHIPPER NOISES* DJHDJSANSDJNDJFMSNDKCNDJDDFK LETS YEET THE COUNCIL! YEET THE RITZ SAVOURY CRACKER! ALL HAIL SOKEEFE! HUNKYHAIR, USE GULONS TO STINK OUT EXILE AND BIANA SHALL TURN THEM INVISIBLE AND BREAK THEM OUT! LETS GO! OPERATION RESCUE-FOSTER-AND-ALL-HAIL-SOKEEFE

      I'm not going to ask(i agree tho)

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    • LoveYallLizzy wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
           *sighs at Keefe's hotness for a hot second*

      SEE WHAT I DID THERE

      oh no you didn't

      i-



      i just-




      AHHAHAHAHHAHHHAHA XDDDDDDDDDDDD

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    • MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:
      IggysElixers wrote:

      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote: Wow in the next chapter theres going to some EXTREME kissing

      • INTENSE SHIPPER NOISES* DJHDJSANSDJNDJFMSNDKCNDJDDFK LETS YEET THE COUNCIL! YEET THE RITZ SAVOURY CRACKER! ALL HAIL SOKEEFE! HUNKYHAIR, USE GULONS TO STINK OUT EXILE AND BIANA SHALL TURN THEM INVISIBLE AND BREAK THEM OUT! LETS GO! OPERATION RESCUE-FOSTER-AND-ALL-HAIL-SOKEEFE
      XD XD XD YASSSSS

      Actually it's YaSsS QuEeN!!!(i don't mean to sound rude i just fangirl like that)

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      i can't do it

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    • TheBlackMoonlark wrote:
       



       
      Amazing!!!

      how do u do dat?!?!?!

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    • Pls tell me!!!(don't mean to sound rude or pushy)

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    • LoveYallLizzy wrote:
      Pls tell me!!!(don't mean to sound rude or pushy)

      idk how to do ittttttt *le criiiiiiiiii*

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      Amazing!!!
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    • YAY, I DID IT!

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    • YES!!

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    • Okay so I'll like post either late today (most likely no) or TOMORROW!!!

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Okay so I'll like post either late today (most likely no) or TOMORROW!!!

      yay!

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Okay so I'll like post either late today (most likely no) or TOMORROW!!!

      YAYYYYYY

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      YAY, I DID IT!

      how?!?!

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    • idk how 2 do it

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    • LoveYallLizzy wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      YAY, I DID IT!
      how?!?!

      same as Lizzy:

      HOW??????

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    • TheBlackMoonlark
      TheBlackMoonlark removed this reply because:
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    • pls tell us

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    • pls

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    • LoveYallLizzy wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      YAY, I DID IT!
      how?!?!

      hOw?!?!?!

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    • LoveYallLizzy wrote:
      TheBlackMoonlark wrote:
       


       
      Amazing!!!

      how do u do dat?!?!?!



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    • Sorry

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    • I will try and give it.

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    • um, okay, hang on

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      Amazing!!!

      quote this comment and change it to source mode

      copy the area from the <div style= to the </div>

      then paste it onto another comment, and voila! 
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    • Amazing!!!


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    • Tada!!

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    • Yes!

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    • cool!

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    • Greaaatttt!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • Amazing!!!
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    • YES! I FINISHED!!!!!! POSTING IN LIKE tenish MINUTES!!!!!!!

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    • Continuation from #13 Sophie's POV



      My eyes flutter open.  

      I groan as the dull lights hit my eyes. My headache worsens as I looked around…. I am in Exile. I wipe the drool off my chin. I move my hands up into my view. This is strange- I’m not restrained? I know I’m in a cell- bigger than my bedroom in Havenfield and I’m laying on my back on a-a…. Bed? 

      “Keefe?” I mutter to no one in particular. I’m alone but then how did I wake up? Didn’t they perform a memory break? I scratch my head which is itchy. I scramble up to sit upright. I can hear moans from other prisoners. I look in front of me and I see an immense silver door with a porthole. I let out a trembling breath.

      Get out, get out, get out! 

      I shake my head trying to get a hold of myself while half of me except gnomes to barge in any second. 

      Get out, get out, get out! 

      But how? I sit criss-cross on the bed and massage my temples trying to finger out a suitable solution. 

      Inhale.

      Exhale. 

      Softly but long. 

      Concentrate, Sophie, Concentrate.

      I looked deep into my mind.

      For Keefe.

      It was like my mind had a brain of its own. It was feeding off my adrenaline to create warmness and enthusiasm; it was combining the two components together; like a missile launching out of my mind- the blast shreds, but making no sound just like I ordered it too and a void bursts in front of me. 

      I smile to myself and scramble to my feet just as the alarms went off. The siren wailing electronically along the corridors, leaping out from the corners, echoing everywhere. Overhead, a light flashed red. I ignored it and stepped into the void just as the door flung open.

      I looked around at the familiar grayness and thought of the only place that was actually… home.

      The void splits with a blinding flash of light and I fall through it and I drop onto the delicate grass of Havenfield. 

      I breathe in the sweet air- which was nothing like the one in Exile. My hands run through it before I thrust up; running inside, my stomach thundering.

      I smooth my wrinkled tunic as I clump into the kitchen; still getting used to walking. I look through all the cabinets trying to find a bottle of Youth. 

      When I find the bottle, I gulp it down in one breath, smelling myself as I do. 

      And… yep, I stink. 

      I hold my breath as I grab another bottle of Youth and gulp it down, slower than last time. It tastes luscious like... Keefe.

      Wait… KEEFE!

      I shake my head and put the bottle on the counter, and run upstairs to my room, still swallowing the Youth, praying I don’t choke on it.

      When I reach my room I’m out of breath and I feel sweat trickle down my back, making me smell worse. 

      I gasp in astonishment and clasp my hand over my mouth.

      My eyes hold tears that are just begging to escape. "Keefe,"

      My room was covered in rose petals, red and white. There is a path of petals leading to my bed. They’re candles scattered everywhere, making the room have a faint glow. My eyes stray to my bed which has English letters on it made from the rose petals. I walk forward to read the message, my nose tingling from the intense smell of roses.

      My bottom lip quivered as I read the heartwarming message. 

      I love you, Sophie

      There are two boxes of mallowmelt, piled on each other on the edge of my vast bed with a bouquet of pink roses and a card.

      I stride forward and grab the card. The front was blank only with a red heart in the middle.   



      Dear, Sophie

      Even though we are miles apart,

      You are never far from my heart.

      I loved you then,

      I love you now.

      It's always when

      And never how.

      Take me back to yesterday,

      All the wonderful things you had to say.

      I loved you then,

      I love you now.

      It's always when

      And never how.

      I see your eyes,

      I feel you near,

      Although you're not

      Really here.

      Yours truly, Keefe

      P.S. Happy Valentine's Day!



      “Oh, Keefe,” Tears overflow my eyes as I see a faint teardrop that is still evaporating on the card. I bite my lip as I carefully place the card on my bed. 

      I sniffle as I look around my room. Everything was covered in Keefe’s decorations except for my desk.

      I let out a breath as my eyes find the spyball. I walk forward and look at the dusty spyball that hasn’t been touched- which makes me wonder how long I’ve actually been in Exile. To me, it feels like two seconds. 

      My eyes find my imparter, and I pick it up to see the date. 

      I gasp when I finish doing the math in my head. It is the day after Valentine's Day. 

      I glance at the year. It’s been 15 months since I was locked up in Exile. I wonder how Keefe’s doing. And my heart races with trepidation as I wipe my nose with my filthy hand and I pick up the spyball, hastily almost dropping it. “Show me Keefe Sencen,” I said it so suddenly and out of breath, the spyball didn’t even acknowledge.

      I sigh and try again. “Show. Me. Keefe. Sencen,” I say, impatiently.  

      Keefe appears in the ball, I bite my lip so stimulating it cracks. 

      His legs are bent up, and Keefe’s clothes are wrinkled. He had black bags underneath his eyes and his hair… was flat- nothing like Keefe’s original style.

      My breath catches when I look to see where he is.

      At my tree.

      I bite my finger to stop any sound as I look into his bloodshot eyes. 

      “Oh, Keefe,” I shake my head.

      I swiftly throw my spyball back onto my bed, getting ready to teleport.





      #14- Keefe’s POV



      (I made it in his because I thought it’ll be cuter- hopefully)



      ~A day after Valentine’s Day~



      I rest my head back on Sophie’s tree, through teary eyes I watch the sun fall behind the horizon, painting the sky shades of red and pink, and I thank God that this day has come and gone. All the pain I suffered. All the hurt I’ve felt. Everything. Gone.

      I gawk at my wrist. I know this sounds stupid, but... I got tattoos.

      Yup, really stupid. 

      More like dumb. 

      But at least the council hates me more. Almost everyone in the lost cities does not approve of tattoos but I haven’t told anyone yet, it’s only been like… eight hours since I got them. I thought the pain would get my mind off… stuff- BUT it did for like two hours.    

      I have one just a few inches below my neck. It was an eagle facing upwards, its wings outstretched which stopped all the way to my arms and stopped down my back. There was basically more ink than skin. I had a small sun drawn over the right side of my chest and small birds traveling upwards.

      And then… on my right wrist, I had Sophie’s name engraved. With a space between every letter of her name. I had her name in English because I thought she was raised there and stuff. 

      My eyes roam over to my left hand and my large and thick scar which is still very visible. It has a slight bump to it and only aches when I touch it.

      When I’m gone, do nothing to yourself- for me.

      As Sophie’s voice rings through my ears a pang of guilt hits me like someone hitting a gong; it reverberates in me, drinking whatever satisfaction was left in me.

      An explosion of emotions hit me almost sending my head to hit Sophie’s tree. But something was off about the emotions, they were complicating. Like I couldn't place them…

      My breathing stops when I realize who's emotions those belong to. My head jerks up. 

      “Sophie!” Before I could even order my legs to jolt up, they already do. Before I know what's happening my legs are sprinting towards the powerful emotions. The wind blows against my face and some pieces of dirt prickle against my skin. But I don’t care I just keep running towards Sophie. 

      Some part of me thinks I’m delusional. I probably am, but it does not stop me from running to Sophie. 

      I stop dead when the emotions are stronger than ever but then they quickly wither away.

      I try turning back and race to where I had just left, trying to track down the intense emotions. I turn left, then right, I go backward, and forwards- but I know I’m going in circles when I stop at Sophie's tree. 

      “Sophie?” I yell but no response, I take a deep breath. 

      “Foster?” I try it again. 

      Nothing. 

      Am I really that crazy? 

      But I can feel this crazy pull of emotions almost pulling me closer to the owner. 

      I try to swallow the familiar lump in my throat as I fumble out my home crystal. 

      The emotions are stronger now. 

      But I know I’m going insane and I continue trying to find my crystal from my pockets.

      When I finally have it in my hand, I feel it vibrating and… it’s like some force was pulling it away. 

      (A/N- STAR WARS... Lol)

      I study my clear crystal as the force becomes stronger. Then my crystal chucks (A/N-- yeet!) across the forest while my eyes never neglect it. 

      “You… b-broke your promise,”

      My heart freezes and my eyes widen, brighten, wild, and full of hope. My legs go jello while I beg them to turn around.

      Then Sophie steps in front of me while I stare into her sweet, brown eyes.

      Is this just another hallucination?

      I pray to God it’s not as Sophie stares back- the person I fell in love with. 

      My breathing goes shallow as my right-hand twitches up to touch her cheek. “You’re…” my voice lingers off as my skin meets hers, blood rushes to my finger as I quickly pull away, forgetting how to breathe. The bottom of my mouth shudders. “Here…”

      The way her lips lift upward. 

      The way her one dimple crinkles. 

      The way her teeth are perfectly aligned. 

      The warm glow her happiness gives. 

      Her smile is a ray of sunshine, and I’m the sunburn.

      “I… remembered you,” Sophie says while my eyes never leave her for a second, not wanting to miss a moment of this.

      I try my best to speak but my tongue doesn’t move instead I find myself getting succumbed in Sophie’s eyes.

      Sophie stares back and closes the space between us, her chest rising and falling as she breathes while my breath is still shallow.  

      “Remembered me?” I finally say, my heart hammering against my ribcage.

      Sophie bites her lip. “I know that sounds really cheesy but-”

      I put my finger on her sorta dry lips and lean in very close. I whispered, “It’s not cheesy,” and I stop for a pause to stare into her eyes. “I missed you- a lot,”

      “Sor-” Sophie began.

      “Don’t be,” My voice finally starting to work.

      Sophie stares at me, and finally, her hands reach up to my face. Her fingers brush the bottom of my eyes, tracing my face with her fingers leaving me tillitated and intrigued and she finally goes up to my hair.

      But is Sophie really here?

      Is this real? 

      Or am I dreaming? 

      Even if I am, I hope I never wake up.

      “You know- I don’t like your hair like this. What happened to your promise?”

      I split a grin. “To be fair, I didn’t promise,”

      “But still,” Sophie presses and grabs my left hand, lacing our fingers together and I wince as her fingers press on my scar.

      Sophie looks at me, perplexed. She presses harder and I bite my lip trying not to cringe.

      Sophie’s breathing races as she lets go of my hand but carries it by my wrist. I watch her eyes as they roam to my hand. She gasps and I look away while she carefully brushes her fingers over my visible scar. 

      “Keefe- why,” her voice breaks while I could feel burning tears in my eyes but I blink them away.

      I clear my throat and look her way getting ready to lie. “It was an accident,” 

      Sophie looks hurt. “Don’t lie, Keefe. I know this wasn’t an accident,”

      I sigh and look at my hand. “Yeah.. it wasn’t,” I take a shaky breath and fumble with the bottom of my tunic. I sigh again. “There’s something else,”

      Without hesitation I pull off my tunic, in one simple motion, revealing my fresh tattoos.

      Sophie stifles her gasp as I turn around to show her my back. 

      I feel her tracing my back tattoo with her fingers. She spins me around by the shoulder and I almost forgot how strong she really is. Sophie trails her fingers on my stomach following the birds. “I…” Sophie's voice lingers off as her eyes roam to my arms, my abs. She starts to grin. “I honestly like it,”

      My eyes widen, and Sophie steps forward, her hands all around me. “You do?”

      She nods giving me a teasing smile, her hand tracing the outline of my arms. “You’ve been working on these?”

      My ears go on fire. “Y-yeah,” it’s too late to tease her now since she’s already teasing me. 

      Sophie’s grin stretches wider as I blush- BLUSH! 

      Her hands rest on my stomach. “Eight pack?” 

      I swallow and nod. My heart races at top speed and my adrenaline kicks in but I also feel excited. 

      She smiles and pulls my bottom lip down with her thumb, brushing her hands over my cheeks and I lean into her hand, closing my eyes. 

      “I love you,” Sophie whispers, her breath hot against my ear and she leans in, kissing my earlobe. 

      Sophie rests the side of her head on my chest, warping her arms around me and I do the same, resting my head on her shoulder, eyes still closed. “What if the council finds me?”

      I hold her tighter. “I won’t let that happen, Sophie,”

      Sophie squeezes me tighter before pulling away. And when she does, she laces our fingers together. I message her hands with my thumb. I start to lean in, slowly but Sophie looks at our hands together and I follow her gaze. Oh. She’s staring at my wrist- my RIGHT wrist, the one with her name on it. My ears burn up.

      “Keefe?” Sophie pulls up our right entwined hand, and I let go of her hand ready to get it over. I hold out my palm to show her my wrist. 

      S O P H I E

      Sophie bites her bottom lip, hiding her smile- which I could see. “Keefe... you know this is permanent... and y-you can’t remove it and-” Sophie stops herself, knowing that she's rambling and looks up at me

      “You’re permanent, too- you know but in my… my heart,”

      Cheesy?

      Yes.

      True?

      One-hundred percent. 

      Sophie smiles and looks back at her name, tracing it with her fingers. “When will you stop being so sweet?” 

      I smirk at her. “When will you stop being so cute?”

      This time it was Sophie’s turn to blush. She looks up with a smile and I grin back at her. 

      I take a quick glance at her lips.

      I suck in a shuddering breath.

      We look into each other’s eyes.

      I drown into the brown- golden depths of hers.

      Suddenly a desire takes over me. A sudden want fills my body. I want to be close to her. I want to feel her. So…

      I move my body closer to her.

      I tilt my face towards her.

      She doesn't react.

      “You haven't forgotten how to kiss also, have you?” I ask her, stroking the side of her face.

      Sophie widens her eyes and blush. “No,” she replies, shaking her head.

      “Really? I don’t believe you,” I say with a teasing lightness to my voice.

      She narrows her eyes- clearly annoyed and firmly says, “No, Keefe. I know how to kiss.”

      “Prove it,” I say with a smirk.

      She moves her face closer to mine and presses a gentle kiss to my lips.

      A tingling sensation goes through me as she leaves slight prickles on my lips.

      “You call that a kiss?” I ask when I finally recovered.

      “Yeah?” she replies uncertainly, tilting her head.

      “Lemme give you a demonstration,” I whisper and push against her lips but Sophie places her hand on my chest, keeping me from touching her lips.

      I look up at her confused.

      She sighs. “Sorry, Keefe. I just… probably smell so bad… I haven’t taken a shower in like… a year. So I stink and… I don’t want you to-” Sophie stops herself, biting her lip.

      “Like I care, Soph,” I grin and smash my lips against hers- Sophie’s arguments turning into a muffled gasp.

      We stay like that for a while.

      Then, I part my lips, forcing hers to part.

      I suck at her bottom lip. Then, suck at her top lip.

      I would’ve enjoyed the kiss more if she is responding to it, but she isn’t. Instead, she runs her hands through my hair. Not giving up, I suck again at her bottom lip, and that’s when I feel her lips sucking at my top lip.

      One of her hands buries into my hair, while the other one rests on the bare skin of my back. 

      I put one hand on her lower back and the other one rests on the back of her head.

      We kiss for a while.

      Then, I slip my tongue into Sophie’s mouth, feeling her teeth.

      I brush it against her tongue. She brushes hers against mine.

      The moment feels perfect.

      Everything feels perfect.

      We kept on kissing each other and only stopped to take a needy breath and then dug right back in.

      Then, I slip my lips down to her chin and suck there. My lips follow along her jawline, reaching her earlobe.

      From her ear, I go down to her neck. I kiss the side of her neck.

      Then, I switch to the other side of her neck. My whole body tingles.

      I hear Sophie taking a shuddering breath.

      I pull away to smirk at her and she rolls her eyes and pushes me playfully

      “What now?” Sophie asks, scratching the back of her neck.

      “Hmm,” I think for a minute and suddenly I grin. “My home crystal?”

      “Over there,” Sophie pointed to a distance bush. 

      I follow her finger and nod. “Got it,” I start to walk but Sophie holds me back.

      “Hold up,” Sophie uses her telekinesis to bring my clear crystal to us.

      I nudge Sophie with my shoulder. “Show off,”

      Sophie smiles and rolls her eyes, handing me my crystal. 



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      I close the door of my bedroom, glad that my dad isn’t here and me and Sophie take off our shoes.   

      “Soooo,” Sophie says, awkwardly, stepping back and colliding with my desk. “Now what?”

      I smirk as I step forward before locking the door. I stride forward until me and Sophie are breathing the same air. Sophie’s breathing races as I lean even closer so that our foreheads are touching. We stare into each other's eyes while I can feel Sophie shiver. Sophie puts her arms around my neck and I can feel goosebumps on her arms against my neck. 

      I smile. “Are you nervous, Foster?” I tuck a loose strand of her hair behind her ear. Sophie uses her finger to pull down my bottom lip. 

      “That depends, what are we going to do?” 

      I smirk and bump my nose to hers. I tilt my head up and kiss the space between her perfectly shaped eyebrows as she kisses my throat. I whisper, “Whatever you want,” 

      Sophie sucks in a long breath before fluttering her eyes close. She tilts her head as I part my lips. She fits her mouth in mine, perfectly. I push further and so I can feel the skin around her lips. Sophie brushes her tongue against my teeth, the top of my mouth, my tongue. I make a half moan half growl deep in my throat. I slip my tongue in Sophie’s mouth and brush it on Sophie’s bottom teeth. 

      We pull away just barely. I can still feel her lips brushing against mine. She sighs, slowly and her shoulders relax. She squeezes my neck with her arms- the top of her fingers in my hair and rests her head against the top of my still bare chest. I wrap my arms around her waist, leaning down to kiss her forehead. 

      Sophie uses one of her hands to follow the small tattoo birds on my chest. She reaches down to kiss each one of them, stroking my skin as she does. “This one is my favorite,” she whispers, touching the one closest to my chest. 

      “Oh, yeah?” I whisper in her ear, taking her earlobe between my lips, kissing it.

      She nodes

      “Hold up,” I gently take Sophie’s hand and I lead her to my bed. 

      I lay on my side as Sophie copies me, snuggling at my chest, stroking my skin. I breathe on her neck. I whisper, “You’re so beautiful”

      Sophie smiles against my chest. I close my eyes and lean closer and I kiss her neck, sucking and licking at it. Sophie lets out soft moans against me as I kiss harder. She sucks in a slight breath. “Keefe,” she whispers and bends her neck back so I have more room. I drag my lips up and down against her neck, softly kissing her. 

      “I love you,” I whisper and kiss her jawline.

      “I love you more,” Sophie's eyes flutter close. I lean down to kiss the top of her nose then her lips, softly but long. Sophie bends her head up so that I could kiss her throat and I drag my lips all the way down and stop where the collar of her tunic meets her skin. I kiss her clavicle and below as far as I can.

      I lean to her neck but Sophie stops me; she leans close to my ear while I kiss her shoulder. She whispers, “my turn,”     

      I smile when her lips meet mine. Sophie scoots up cupping my face with her hands. I let out a groan as she bits down. Sophie drags her lips to my ear, and she sucks at it and uses her tongue. She moves closer so that every inch touches me. Our ankles twist together. I breathe on her neck as she kisses me harder. 

      “Sophie?” I ask as Sophie bites down at my earlobe. I let out a groan and bury my head in Sophie’s shoulder. 

      “Hmm?” Sophie mumbles going down at my neck.

      “I love you more than anything,” My eyes close.  

      “Even more than your hair?” Sophie teases, kissing the space between my neck and shoulder.

      “Definitely,” I say without hesitation.

      Sophie’s soft laugh vibrates through me which makes shivers dance down my spine. She kisses down my arm. She kisses every part of my upper body. I flip us so that I’m laying on top of her but not putting all my weight down on her. I fit my mouth between hers exploring every part of her mouth. 

      “That's not fair,” Sophie whispers as we pull away.

      I smirk. “So fair,” I return as I smash my lips down but she jerks away so that my kiss lands on her pillow.   

      “Soophiee,” I whine as Sophie pushes me down. 

      “Yes?” Sophie asks, kissing my chin and my bottom lip, fitting her lips between mine like two puzzle pieces. Our ankles are still twisted together. Sophie drags her hand over my abdomen, my stomach, my chest, and eventually rests on my face. 

      When we pull away, I lean in again but Sophie stops me by placing her index finger on my lips. I smile and kiss her finger. She smiles and bites her bottom lip. 

      Sophie licks my lips before pulling away, completely. We lay there face to face, staring at each other while Sophie plays with my hair. I lean in to kiss her cheek, her forehead, her chin- everywhere. I lean down to kiss Sophie’s upper chest and that’s when Sophie shivers. 

      “Keefe?” Sophie whispers, drowsily, as I kiss her bottom lip.

      “Mhh?” I lean a few inches away from her face.

      She entwines our fingers and scoots closer, snuggling up at my chest. “I’m… tr- let’s go to sleep,” 

      I smirk down at her sneaking a glance at the time. It’s eleven. I smile down at Sophie, quickly letting go of her hand to pull the sheets up to cover us and snapping twice to turn off the lights. I lace our fingers together as Sophie swings her leg over me. I press a kiss to Sophie’s lips. “Good night, Sophie,”

      Sophie sighs and closes her eyes. “Love you, Keefe,” Sophie plants a kiss on my top lip. 

      I watch in the darkness Sophie falling fast asleep, her breathing coating my face. I look at our entwined hands. It feels as if there are holes in my skin and all my sadness and tension is leaking away. I smile at how Sophie slightly snores. My eyes go heavy and I slowly drift asleep. 



      ***



      I woke up from my restless sleep for the glowing and radiant sun peaking above the horizon out of my window. It extended its vivid light across the deep crimson sky.

      I yawn and I look down at Sophie who was still cuddled up at my side, her hand intertwined with mine and resting her head on my arm. 

      And I remember last night. Can I just say- Best. Night. Ever.

      I grin down at Sophie whose eyelashes brush her cheeks. I reach down and kiss her neck- just barely. 

      When I lean back, I see Sophie laughing her eyes still closed. I smirk and lean towards her ear. “Good morning, love,”

      Sophie leans up and kisses my shoulder. She dreamily says, “Good morning, Keefe,”

      I kiss her cheek. 

      “Last night was like… the best night of my life,” Sophie says squeezing my hand.

      “For now, Sophie- ‘cause you haven’t seen-” I gestured to myself letting go of Sophie’s hand. “All of this yet,”

      “Sure,” Sophie says, blushing. She lies on her back grabbing my right hand, tracing my tattoo while I watch her. She brings my hand to her lips and kisses it gently before lacing our finger together in a complicated pattern.   

      She scoots her head closer so that it’s touching my shoulder. 

      When I can’t wait any longer I lick my lips, tilting my head and lean down at Sophie’s lips. She grins and closes the space between us, colliding our lips together. Sophie grins as I place a hand on both sides of the pillow, pushing me up but never leaving Sophie’s lips. Sophie cups each side of my face, her fingers reaching my ears, leaning up, leaving her pillow. 

      We separate from each other, laughing at the sound of how our lips made when we separate. 

      Sophie laughs again and pulls me to kiss her. After our laughing dies down Sophie caresses my face with fingers, my face still hovering above hers, staring into her loving eyes. I lean into her mellow hand, closing my eyes as I do so. 

      Sophie pulls me down by my neck so that our foreheads touch and lips brush each other. I flutter my eyes open to stare into Sophie’s. Sophie’s chest rises and falls against mine while she smiles and it... melts my heart. 

      I have a sudden urge to kiss her again. I tilt my head and push my lips against her mellow ones, gently. She clutches my hair pulling me closer and dang she’s a good kisser. She french kisses me- hard but then it’s amusing.

      “Sophie, babe,” I whisper, running my nose across her jawline.

      “Mhh?” Sophie hums at my neck, kissing it gently.

      “Do you want to-” 

      Someone knocks on my door. 

      Are you kidding me!?

      I groan and get up from my bed, looking back at Sophie who was smelling herself. “I’ll right back,”

      She nods and I walk over to my door. I open it only a few inches so whoever it is won’t see Sophie laying on my bed. 

      “Biana?” I slip through the small opening. 

      Biana was gawking at my tattoos which I had stupidly forgotten about. 

      I clear my throat and cross my arms. “What… what do you need?”

      “Uh…. I-I,” Biana shakes her head, and I quickly shut the door behind me. 

      “It’s about Soph- wait are you hiding something?” Biana peeks over my shoulder.  

      My eyes widen. “No, no- it’s nothing. I just have this-” Biana pushes me out of the way. 

      My breath catches as she grabs the handle. “Bi-”

      But I was way too late- she had already swung open the door. “Sophie?”

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Wow in the next chapter theres going to some EXTREME kissing  
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    • And sorry for the CLIFFHANGERRRY

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    • DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:
      Whoa that's some complicated coding

      All thanks to Jules!

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    • Oooh nice

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    • wow, that was like, a pageful of just kissing

      amazing XD

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    • TheBlackMoonlark wrote:
      DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:
      Whoa that's some complicated coding
      All thanks to Jules!

      Oh I actually have a tab open of Jules' coding guide thingy!

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    • Yeah this is GREAT!! XDXDXDXD

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    • THAT WAS THE BEST THING EVER!!!!!!
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    • BIANA IF YOU ARE STILL YOU, YOU WOULDNT TELL THE COUNCIL ABOUT SOPHIE!

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    • CLIFFHANGERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

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    • Ditto 

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    • Teamfoster-Keefe12345 wrote:
      THAT WAS THE BEST THING EVER!!!!!!

      Wow,everyone is doing it now! Also AWESOME!

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    • You're right...I really want to click it...aw screw it im clicking it!

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      wow, that was like, a pageful of just kissing

      amazing XD

      lol

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    • did i do it!!!
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    • I trust Biana. don't think she would tell the council....

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    • Did I?
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    • Bam! Please FeDex some SoKeefe wrote:You're right...I really want to click it...aw screw it im clicking it!
      Ditto
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    • LoveYallLizzy wrote:
      Did I?

      ya. You did it! Clap clap clarppity clap!

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    • LoveYallLizzy wrote:
      Did I?

      you're obssesed with it now XDXDXD

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    • LoveYallLizzy wrote:
      Bam! Please FeDex some SoKeefe wrote:You're right...I really want to click it...aw screw it im clicking it!
      Ditto
      I did it!!(Clicked it)
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    • my reaction: 😱😱👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻😱😱😱😱😱!!!!!!!!!!!



      That chapter was the THE BEST and WORST at the same time, like THE best cause dang....that was great!!! After SUCH a LoooooooooooooNG time and the writing........man I don't how to explain the writing just....AaaaaaaaWwwwwwwwwwSssssssssOooooooooooMmmmmmmeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!! (Many more exclaimations later), and the worst cebause WHY?????? Why do have to give your devoted loving fans such a cruel nasty CLIFFHANGER???!!! Post mooooooooooorrrrrrrrreeeeeeeee!!! (No pressure XD XD)

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      my reaction: 😱😱👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻😱😱😱😱😱!!!!!!!!!!!



      That chapter was the THE BEST and WORST at the same time, like THE best cause dang....that was great!!! After SUCH a LoooooooooooooNG time and the writing........man I don't how to explain the writing just....AaaaaaaaWwwwwwwwwwSssssssssOooooooooooMmmmmmmeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!! (Many more exclaimations later), and the worst cebause WHY?????? Why do have to give your devoted loving fans such a cruel nasty CLIFFHANGER???!!! Post mooooooooooorrrrrrrrreeeeeeeee!!! (No pressure XD XD)

      Lol exactly my reaction after EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER!!!!!!!! Honestly, sometimes I think you write too​​​​​​​ good and I feel like dying XDXDXDXDXDXDXD </div
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    • DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:
      47.30.192.148 wrote:
       


      my reaction: 😱😱👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻😱😱😱😱😱!!!!!!!!!!!



      That chapter was the THE BEST and WORST at the same time, like THE best cause dang....that was great!!! After SUCH a LoooooooooooooNG time and the writing........man I don't how to explain the writing just....AaaaaaaaWwwwwwwwwwSssssssssOooooooooooMmmmmmmeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!! (Many more exclaimations later), and the worst cebause WHY?????? Why do have to give your devoted loving fans such a cruel nasty CLIFFHANGER???!!! Post mooooooooooorrrrrrrrreeeeeeeee!!! (No pressure XD XD)

      Lol exactly my reaction after EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER!!!!!!!! Honestly, sometimes I think you write too​​​​​​​ good and I feel like dying XDXDXDXDXDXDXD </div

      I am dying from laughter right now...... xD



      And.... sorryyyy

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    • Oooooo lemme tryyy



      Hellooo?? 
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    • Yessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss lettsss gooo!!

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    • Lol good job!

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    • THAT WAS SO GOOD!!!!

      you really are an AMAZING author Go!SOKEEFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      honestly, you are amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • Oh my!!! That was sooooo good! Though a lot of detailed kissing!!!

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    • I agree 100%
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    • 67.22.252.180 wrote:
      Oh my!!! That was sooooo good! Though a lot of detailed kissing!!!

      Yea. 

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    • lol true XD

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    • Lol I honestly agree

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    • Ahhhhhh I LOVE ALL THE FLUFF!!! 

      Also: NOOOO ANOTHER CLIFFHANGER!!!!!

      -Ripplefluffs1155

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    • Lolz

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    • Noey- NOoooooooo!!! Not againnnn

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    • Omg!!! I loved that chapter and I love Sophie's reaction to Keefe's Tatoos. Gosh, now I can't imagine Keefe without them.... ( he actually looks hot ) 



      - Sokeefeforever

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    • 152.26.208.32 wrote: Omg!!! I loved that chapter and I love Sophie's reaction to Keefe's Tatoos. Gosh, now I can't imagine Keefe without them.... ( he actually looks hot ) 



      - Sokeefeforever

      He ALWAYS is


      Lol 😂

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      152.26.208.32 wrote: Omg!!! I loved that chapter and I love Sophie's reaction to Keefe's Tatoos. Gosh, now I can't imagine Keefe without them.... ( he actually looks hot ) 



      - Sokeefeforever

      He ALWAYS is


      Lol 😂

      XD 



      true though-

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    • MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:

      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      152.26.208.32 wrote: Omg!!! I loved that chapter and I love Sophie's reaction to Keefe's Tatoos. Gosh, now I can't imagine Keefe without them.... ( he actually looks hot ) 



      - Sokeefeforever

      He ALWAYS is


      Lol 😂

      XD 



      true though-

      Right?

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:

      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      152.26.208.32 wrote: Omg!!! I loved that chapter and I love Sophie's reaction to Keefe's Tatoos. Gosh, now I can't imagine Keefe without them.... ( he actually looks hot ) 



      - Sokeefeforever

      He ALWAYS is


      Lol 😂

      XD 



      true though-

      Right?

      How could he not be?

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    • WORLDS BEST CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!!11111

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:


      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      152.26.208.32 wrote: Omg!!! I loved that chapter and I love Sophie's reaction to Keefe's Tatoos. Gosh, now I can't imagine Keefe without them.... ( he actually looks hot ) 



      - Sokeefeforever

      He ALWAYS is


      Lol 😂

      XD 


      true though-

      Right?
      How could he not be?

      Ikr??!!!

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    • DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:

      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:


      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      152.26.208.32 wrote: Omg!!! I loved that chapter and I love Sophie's reaction to Keefe's Tatoos. Gosh, now I can't imagine Keefe without them.... ( he actually looks hot ) 



      - Sokeefeforever

      He ALWAYS is


      Lol 😂

      XD 


      true though-

      Right?
      How could he not be?

      Ikr??!!!

      Imagine if one day Keefe came in our dimension and saw us all fangirling about him xD

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:

      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:


      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      152.26.208.32 wrote: Omg!!! I loved that chapter and I love Sophie's reaction to Keefe's Tatoos. Gosh, now I can't imagine Keefe without them.... ( he actually looks hot ) 



      - Sokeefeforever

      He ALWAYS is


      Lol 😂

      XD 


      true though-

      Right?
      How could he not be?

      Ikr??!!!

      Imagine if one day Keefe came in our dimension and saw us all fangirling about him xD

      There's a fanfiction called 'An Interactive, Partially A Joke Fanfics' where the keeper crew literally discover the Kotlc fandom... It's hilarious 😂😂

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    • DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:


      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      152.26.208.32 wrote: Omg!!! I loved that chapter and I love Sophie's reaction to Keefe's Tatoos. Gosh, now I can't imagine Keefe without them.... ( he actually looks hot ) 



      - Sokeefeforever

      He ALWAYS is


      Lol 😂

      XD 


      true though-

      Right?
      How could he not be?
      Ikr??!!!

      That is soooo ture!!! I usually don't like boys with tatoos but Keefe can make a exception :D ( he alway can ;) ).




      - Sokeefeforever

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:

      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:


      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      152.26.208.32 wrote: Omg!!! I loved that chapter and I love Sophie's reaction to Keefe's Tatoos. Gosh, now I can't imagine Keefe without them.... ( he actually looks hot ) 



      - Sokeefeforever

      He ALWAYS is


      Lol 😂

      XD 


      true though-

      Right?
      How could he not be?
      Ikr??!!!
      Imagine if one day Keefe came in our dimension and saw us all fangirling about him xD

      .*God imagine*



      Lol... I would just like hug him and never EVER let go. I would lock him in my basement and keep him there......



      Wow thats sound pretty creepy... BUT true! 

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:


      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:



      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      152.26.208.32 wrote: Omg!!! I loved that chapter and I love Sophie's reaction to Keefe's Tatoos. Gosh, now I can't imagine Keefe without them.... ( he actually looks hot ) 



      - Sokeefeforever

      He ALWAYS is


      Lol 😂

      XD 


      true though-

      Right?
      How could he not be?
      Ikr??!!!
      Imagine if one day Keefe came in our dimension and saw us all fangirling about him xD
      .*God imagine*



      Lol... I would just like hug him and never EVER let go. I would lock him in my basement and keep him there......



      Wow thats sound pretty creepy... BUT true! 

      He's like... my dream boy...... I WANT to feel his HAIR

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:


      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:



      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      152.26.208.32 wrote: Omg!!! I loved that chapter and I love Sophie's reaction to Keefe's Tatoos. Gosh, now I can't imagine Keefe without them.... ( he actually looks hot ) 



      - Sokeefeforever

      He ALWAYS is


      Lol 😂

      XD 


      true though-

      Right?
      How could he not be?
      Ikr??!!!
      Imagine if one day Keefe came in our dimension and saw us all fangirling about him xD
      .*God imagine*


      Lol... I would just like hug him and never EVER let go. I would lock him in my basement and keep him there......



      Wow thats sound pretty creepy... BUT true! 

      He's like... my dream boy...... I WANT to feel his HAIR

      Thats even creepier 



      Lol

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    • Lol, so true!!! My sisters never ask what my dream boyfreind is beacause they know if they ask I will end up talking about Keefe for 3 hours :).




      - Sokeefeforever

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    • 152.26.208.32 wrote:
      Lol, so true!!! My sisters never ask what my dream boyfreind is beacause they know if they ask I will end up talking about Keefe for 3 hours :).




      - Sokeefeforever

      Omggg Lol

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      152.26.208.32 wrote:
      Lol, so true!!! My sisters never ask what my dream boyfreind is beacause they know if they ask I will end up talking about Keefe for 3 hours :).



      - Sokeefeforever

      Omggg Lol

      Yeah, they think I am over obbessed with Keefe but honestly, there is no such thng as being to over obbessed with Keefe




      - Sokeefeforever

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    • 152.26.208.32 wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      152.26.208.32 wrote:
      Lol, so true!!! My sisters never ask what my dream boyfreind is beacause they know if they ask I will end up talking about Keefe for 3 hours :).



      - Sokeefeforever

      Omggg Lol
      Yeah, they think I am over obbessed with Keefe but honestly, there is no such thng as being to over obbessed with Keefe




      - Sokeefeforever

      SOOOOOO TRUEEE




      LIKE 100% TRUE AND EVEN MORE!!

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:



      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:




      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      152.26.208.32 wrote: Omg!!! I loved that chapter and I love Sophie's reaction to Keefe's Tatoos. Gosh, now I can't imagine Keefe without them.... ( he actually looks hot ) 



      - Sokeefeforever

      He ALWAYS is


      Lol 😂

      XD 


      true though-

      Right?
      How could he not be?
      Ikr??!!!
      Imagine if one day Keefe came in our dimension and saw us all fangirling about him xD
      .*God imagine*


      Lol... I would just like hug him and never EVER let go. I would lock him in my basement and keep him there......



      Wow thats sound pretty creepy... BUT true! 

      He's like... my dream boy...... I WANT to feel his HAIR
      Thats even creepier 



      Lol

      it might be creepy.... but yeah

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    • 12 MINUTES

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    • 9 SCREECHING MINUTES!!!!!!

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    • 8 MINUTES

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    • Yess


      I need the cover to live

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    • My heart is about to explode!!!!

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    • 7 MINUTES!!!!!

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    • WAIT ITS ABOUT TO COME OUT?

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    • YASSSSSSSS

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    • I STILL NEAD TO READ A FEW MORE FANFICS AND GET CHANGED UDJAVSJABDHDNDNSKJFJF

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    • 2 MINUTES!!!

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    • 2MINUTES!!!!!!,

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    • 1 MINUTE

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    • LOGGING ONTO MY LAPTOP

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    • WHEN WILL IT BE ON THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING MEEEE

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    • PLEASE PUT THE COVER ON HERE FOR THOSE WHO DON'T HAVE INSA

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    • IM ON INSTA DHNSNSKDND

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    • IT CAM EOUT

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    • Gzrfhr5dfgergsrgdfhrthrfbegrthrthrgdf PUT THE LINK

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    • GUYSSSS

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    • It’s gorgeous!!!!!!!

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    • WHY WONT IT LOADDD DBSNNSMD

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    • OMGGGG

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    • SOPHIE RIDING SILVENY!!!!!!!!!!!! and... is that shadowflux in the backround?

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    • OMGOMGOMG IT"S OUTTTT XRTCFGVYBHUJGVYCFTRDCFGVYYCFTDRXCFGVFDXRCFGVCDXRCGFVCDXRFCGVTDRX

      https://www.instagram.com/sw_messenger/?hl=en

      https://www.instagram.com/sw_messenger/?hl=en

      https://www.instagram.com/sw_messenger/?hl=en

      RDTFGYHUBGTCRDFBHUJGYTFR

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    • YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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    • THERES FOXFIRE TOO

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    • OMG SO SO PRETTY BUT THERES NO DEXY BUT OH WELL ITS SO SO COOOOOOL

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    • TCFVGYBHJNBUGVYFTRDFBUHGVYFCTRGVBHUJUGVYFCTGVBHJ NFCTDRXCTFGBH JHFCTGVBHJGVYFCTVGY

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    • HFDCITUW%Q#*$*&)(_⁾%(O*EI&RSYJXFCHV<BKLOI%&U$Ê*%()WO$&ISRODTYU(Y:FILKCHMVJGHOYTDXGNFCHTU*%⁾($*WŶESATHDFYGU(:YOLGKVN BMJL?IPUÔ%*IRHFCNBV 



      GOD HELP MEEEE

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    • I'M NOT FREAKING OUT WHY WOULD YOU THINK THAT?!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????????

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    • OK LEMME MAKE A THEORY THREAD

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    • I thought Keefe would be there... ya know, cause half the book is from his pov

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      I thought Keefe would be there... ya know, cause half the book is from his pov

      Yeah same. I WOULD PREFER THAT

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    • ONLLY SOPH AND SILVENY CMONNNNNNNNNNNN

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    • https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1583508?useskin=oasis


      ^THERES THE COVER THEORIES THREAD! PLEASE SHARE YOUR OPINIONS AND STUFF ON IT! I DONT NORMALLY SELF-ADVERTISE BUT I WOULD LIKE TO SEE EVERYBODYS PREDICTIONS!

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      I thought Keefe would be there... ya know, cause half the book is from his pov
      Yeah same. I WOULD PREFER THAT

      SAMEE!!!!!

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    • MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:

      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      I thought Keefe would be there... ya know, cause half the book is from his pov
      Yeah same. I WOULD PREFER THAT

      SAMEE!!!!!

      ME FOUR!!!

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    • Wait did u guys see on amazon it said it had 640 pgs???

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Wait did u guys see on amazon it said it had 640 pgs???

      640?

      well, Everblaze soft cover version had a little over 600 (just checked)

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    • Screenshot 2020-07-08 at 1.14.33 PM
      Yeahhh legit --->
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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote: Wait did u guys see on amazon it said it had 640 pgs???

      That's barely any, Flashback had over 800 on paperback 😂😂

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    • Ikr?! It's probably wrong thenn

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    • IggysElixers wrote:

      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote: Wait did u guys see on amazon it said it had 640 pgs???

      That's barely any, Flashback had over 800 on paperback 😂😂

      Hopefully that just means it is a good 640 pages, unlike flashback, that was mostly just fitzphie in a hospital

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      IggysElixers wrote:

      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote: Wait did u guys see on amazon it said it had 640 pgs???

      That's barely any, Flashback had over 800 on paperback 😂😂
      Hopefully that just means it is a good 640 pages, unlike flashback, that was mostly just fitzphie in a hospital

      I almost hurled

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Ikr?! It's probably wrong thenn

      not necessarily

      Unlocked is an inbetween story, even if it continues from Legacy. It's called 8.5, and it has a bunch of art and extras, i think

      I hope a lot of the pages are words, instead of art....

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Ikr?! It's probably wrong thenn
      not necessarily

      Unlocked is an inbetween story, even if it continues from Legacy. It's called 8.5, and it has a bunch of art and extras, i think

      I hope a lot of the pages are words, instead of art....

      Same

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Ikr?! It's probably wrong thenn
      not necessarily

      Unlocked is an inbetween story, even if it continues from Legacy. It's called 8.5, and it has a bunch of art and extras, i think

      I hope a lot of the pages are words, instead of art....

      Same

      SAME

      If I don’t find out Keefe’s new power THEN I WILL LITERALLY EXPLODE

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Ikr?! It's probably wrong thenn
      not necessarily

      Unlocked is an inbetween story, even if it continues from Legacy. It's called 8.5, and it has a bunch of art and extras, i think

      I hope a lot of the pages are words, instead of art....

      Same
      SAME

      If I don’t find out Keefe’s new power THEN I WILL LITERALLY EXPLODE

      I WILL SCREAM

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Ikr?! It's probably wrong thenn
      not necessarily

      Unlocked is an inbetween story, even if it continues from Legacy. It's called 8.5, and it has a bunch of art and extras, i think

      I hope a lot of the pages are words, instead of art....

      Same
      SAME

      If I don’t find out Keefe’s new power THEN I WILL LITERALLY EXPLODE

      you'll find out eventually... try to hang on!

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:


      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Ikr?! It's probably wrong thenn
      not necessarily

      Unlocked is an inbetween story, even if it continues from Legacy. It's called 8.5, and it has a bunch of art and extras, i think

      I hope a lot of the pages are words, instead of art....

      Same
      SAME

      If I don’t find out Keefe’s new power THEN I WILL LITERALLY EXPLODE

      you'll find out eventually... try to hang on!

      I"M DYINGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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    • DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:


      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Ikr?! It's probably wrong thenn
      not necessarily

      Unlocked is an inbetween story, even if it continues from Legacy. It's called 8.5, and it has a bunch of art and extras, i think

      I hope a lot of the pages are words, instead of art....

      Same
      SAME

      If I don’t find out Keefe’s new power THEN I WILL LITERALLY EXPLODE

      you'll find out eventually... try to hang on!
      I"M DYINGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

      I NEED TO KNOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

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    • MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:

      DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:


      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Ikr?! It's probably wrong thenn
      not necessarily

      Unlocked is an inbetween story, even if it continues from Legacy. It's called 8.5, and it has a bunch of art and extras, i think

      I hope a lot of the pages are words, instead of art....

      Same
      SAME

      If I don’t find out Keefe’s new power THEN I WILL LITERALLY EXPLODE

      you'll find out eventually... try to hang on!
      I"M DYINGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

      I NEED TO KNOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

      SSSSSAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYYYY

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:

      DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:



      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Ikr?! It's probably wrong thenn
      not necessarily

      Unlocked is an inbetween story, even if it continues from Legacy. It's called 8.5, and it has a bunch of art and extras, i think

      I hope a lot of the pages are words, instead of art....

      Same
      SAME

      If I don’t find out Keefe’s new power THEN I WILL LITERALLY EXPLODE

      you'll find out eventually... try to hang on!
      I"M DYINGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
      I NEED TO KNOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
      SSSSSAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYYYY

      REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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    • MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:


      DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:



      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Ikr?! It's probably wrong thenn
      not necessarily

      Unlocked is an inbetween story, even if it continues from Legacy. It's called 8.5, and it has a bunch of art and extras, i think

      I hope a lot of the pages are words, instead of art....

      Same
      SAME

      If I don’t find out Keefe’s new power THEN I WILL LITERALLY EXPLODE

      you'll find out eventually... try to hang on!
      I"M DYINGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
      I NEED TO KNOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
      SSSSSAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYYYY
      REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

      SOOOOOOOOOOOOOON

      A FEW MONTHSSSSSS

      its July now, and it comes out in November. so, like *counts on fingers* 4 months!

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:

      MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:


      DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:



      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Ikr?! It's probably wrong thenn
      not necessarily

      Unlocked is an inbetween story, even if it continues from Legacy. It's called 8.5, and it has a bunch of art and extras, i think

      I hope a lot of the pages are words, instead of art....

      Same
      SAME

      If I don’t find out Keefe’s new power THEN I WILL LITERALLY EXPLODE

      you'll find out eventually... try to hang on!
      I"M DYINGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
      I NEED TO KNOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
      SSSSSAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYYYY
      REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

      SOOOOOOOOOOOOOON

      A FEW MONTHSSSSSS

      its July now, and it comes out in November. so, like *counts on fingers* 4 months!

      Just watch Shannon go “SIKE! KEEFE DOESN’T GET A NEW POWER! IT IS SOPHIE THAT GETS A SIXTH ABILITY!!”

      If she does that I will SCREAMMMMMMMMMMMMM

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:


      DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:




      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Ikr?! It's probably wrong thenn
      not necessarily

      Unlocked is an inbetween story, even if it continues from Legacy. It's called 8.5, and it has a bunch of art and extras, i think

      I hope a lot of the pages are words, instead of art....

      Same
      SAME

      If I don’t find out Keefe’s new power THEN I WILL LITERALLY EXPLODE

      you'll find out eventually... try to hang on!
      I"M DYINGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
      I NEED TO KNOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
      SSSSSAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYYYY
      REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
      SOOOOOOOOOOOOOON

      A FEW MONTHSSSSSS

      its July now, and it comes out in November. so, like *counts on fingers* 4 months!

      CFTVGYBHUUGVYFCTDRTFVGYBHU

      UNLOCKED NEEDS TO COME OUT SOONERRRRRRRRRRRRRR

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      Keephie4eva wrote:

      MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:


      DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:




      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Ikr?! It's probably wrong thenn
      not necessarily

      Unlocked is an inbetween story, even if it continues from Legacy. It's called 8.5, and it has a bunch of art and extras, i think

      I hope a lot of the pages are words, instead of art....

      Same
      SAME

      If I don’t find out Keefe’s new power THEN I WILL LITERALLY EXPLODE

      you'll find out eventually... try to hang on!
      I"M DYINGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
      I NEED TO KNOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
      SSSSSAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYYYY
      REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
      SOOOOOOOOOOOOOON

      A FEW MONTHSSSSSS

      its July now, and it comes out in November. so, like *counts on fingers* 4 months!

      Just watch Shannon go “SIKE! KEEFE DOESN’T GET A NEW POWER! IT IS SOPHIE THAT GETS A SIXTH ABILITY!!”

      If she does that I will SCREAMMMMMMMMMMMMM

      I kinda want Sophie to get a new ability, but Kefe must get a new one!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • I saw the cover!!! It's sooooooooo beautiful!!! I am totally not FREAKING out!!! I texted my friend, I don't think she knows yet!!!! 

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    • OMGOMG THE COVER IS SOOOOOO COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was hoping that there would be more Keefe tho *blushes*

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    • DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote: OMGOMG THE COVER IS SOOOOOO COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was hoping that there would be more Keefe tho *blushes*

      XD SAMEEEEEEEE

      It’s like, SOMETHING IS JUST MISSING WITHOUT KEEFE

      KEEFE WOULD HAVE MADE IT 200x BETTER

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote: OMGOMG THE COVER IS SOOOOOO COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was hoping that there would be more Keefe tho *blushes*

      XD SAMEEEEEEEE

      It’s like, SOMETHING IS JUST MISSING WITHOUT KEEFE

      KEEFE WOULD HAVE MADE IT 200x BETTER

      IKR?!!!?!??!?!?!??!?!! ​​​​​​

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote: OMGOMG THE COVER IS SOOOOOO COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was hoping that there would be more Keefe tho *blushes*

      XD SAMEEEEEEEE

      It’s like, SOMETHING IS JUST MISSING WITHOUT KEEFE

      KEEFE WOULD HAVE MADE IT 200x BETTER

      plus, half the book is gonna be from his point of view....

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote: OMGOMG THE COVER IS SOOOOOO COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was hoping that there would be more Keefe tho *blushes*

      XD SAMEEEEEEEE

      It’s like, SOMETHING IS JUST MISSING WITHOUT KEEFE

      KEEFE WOULD HAVE MADE IT 200x BETTER

      plus, half the book is gonna be from his point of view....

      IKR

      THIS IS EXACTLY HOW I FELTTTTTTT

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    • lol this story is soooo sad, like i didn't have time to find this thread last night, so I was stuck with the second thread and I ligit cried. like I cried! its sooo sad

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    • Tiana4eva wrote:
      lol this story is soooo sad, like i didn't have time to find this thread last night, so I was stuck with the second thread and I ligit cried. like I cried! its sooo sad

      saaaame

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    • Oh god the comments I was on just this morning and now look what has happened tisk tisk you did not break the thread I am ashamed have I not tought you better(who expected that ending?quote this and tell me.)

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    • LoveYallLizzy wrote:
      Oh god the comments I was on just this morning and now look what has happened tisk tisk you did not break the thread I am ashamed have I not tought you better(who expected that ending?quote this and tell me.)

      um... I expected ou t say that?

      also, I am also ashamed... WE'RE LOSNG OUR TOUCH, PEOPLE

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      LoveYallLizzy wrote:
      Oh god the comments I was on just this morning and now look what has happened tisk tisk you did not break the thread I am ashamed have I not tought you better(who expected that ending?quote this and tell me.)
      um... I expected ou t say that?

      also, I am also ashamed... WE'RE LOSNG OUR TOUCH, PEOPLE

      WE ARE LOSING ITTTT

      WE NEED TO BREAK THISSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      LoveYallLizzy wrote:
      Oh god the comments I was on just this morning and now look what has happened tisk tisk you did not break the thread I am ashamed have I not tought you better(who expected that ending?quote this and tell me.)
      um... I expected ou t say that?

      also, I am also ashamed... WE'RE LOSNG OUR TOUCH, PEOPLE

      WE ARE LOSING ITTTT

      WE NEED TO BREAK THISSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!

      Ummmm.... kay

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    • Keefe's tattoos remind me of Four from Divergent! *cries because I'm still not over Allegient*

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      Tiana4eva wrote:
      lol this story is soooo sad, like i didn't have time to find this thread last night, so I was stuck with the second thread and I ligit cried. like I cried! its sooo sad
      saaaame

      ME TOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! I legit sobbed and sobbed and SOBBED until I could no longer sob. Like, I'm pretty sure I said this before but my parents were in the same room while I was first reading this and they were staring at me like I was a maniac while I was crying my heart out. They finally left the room. XDXDXDXDXD

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    • Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      LoveYallLizzy wrote:
      Oh god the comments I was on just this morning and now look what has happened tisk tisk you did not break the thread I am ashamed have I not tought you better(who expected that ending?quote this and tell me.)
      um... I expected ou t say that?

      also, I am also ashamed... WE'RE LOSNG OUR TOUCH, PEOPLE

      WE ARE LOSING ITTTT

      WE NEED TO BREAK THISSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!

      Ummmm.... kay

      YEZZZ!!!!!!!!! I AM DISSAPOINTED IN MYSELFFFF!!!!!!!! I WILL BrEAK THE THREAD!!!!!!!!!

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    • Wait a sec i just realized that we still have a longgggg way to go lol XDXDXDXD

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    • Oh well whatev, I WILL BREAK IT ANYWAYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!

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    • DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote: Wait a sec i just realized that we still have a longgggg way to go lol XDXDXDXD

      Lol XD yeah we’re not even at 300 yet

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    • DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote: Oh well whatev, I WILL BREAK IT ANYWAYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!

      U go gurl

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    • Tiana4eva wrote:

      DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote: Wait a sec i just realized that we still have a longgggg way to go lol XDXDXDXD

      Lol XD yeah we’re not even at 300 yet

      XD yeah

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    • Lol XDXDXDXD

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    • Do you know when you're gonna post the next chapter? No pressure tho :)

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:



      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:




      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      152.26.208.32 wrote: Omg!!! I loved that chapter and I love Sophie's reaction to Keefe's Tatoos. Gosh, now I can't imagine Keefe without them.... ( he actually looks hot ) 



      - Sokeefeforever

      He ALWAYS is


      Lol 😂

      XD 


      true though-

      Right?
      How could he not be?
      Ikr??!!!
      Imagine if one day Keefe came in our dimension and saw us all fangirling about him xD
      .*God imagine*


      Lol... I would just like hug him and never EVER let go. I would lock him in my basement and keep him there......



      Wow thats sound pretty creepy... BUT true! 

      He's like... my dream boy...... I WANT to feel his HAIR
      Thats even creepier 


      Lol

      it might be creepy.... but yeah

      Keefe looks good I anything and everything..... it is a fact!

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    • 47.30.201.11 wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:




      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:





      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      152.26.208.32 wrote: Omg!!! I loved that chapter and I love Sophie's reaction to Keefe's Tatoos. Gosh, now I can't imagine Keefe without them.... ( he actually looks hot ) 



      - Sokeefeforever

      He ALWAYS is


      Lol 😂

      XD 


      true though-

      Right?
      How could he not be?
      Ikr??!!!
      Imagine if one day Keefe came in our dimension and saw us all fangirling about him xD
      .*God imagine*


      Lol... I would just like hug him and never EVER let go. I would lock him in my basement and keep him there......



      Wow thats sound pretty creepy... BUT true! 

      He's like... my dream boy...... I WANT to feel his HAIR
      Thats even creepier 


      Lol

      it might be creepy.... but yeah
      Keefe looks good I anything and everything..... it is a fact!

      ...

      ...

      No comment to any of this...*no judgement either*

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    • 47.30.201.11 wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:
      IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:




      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:





      Go!SOKEEFE! wrote:

      152.26.208.32 wrote: Omg!!! I loved that chapter and I love Sophie's reaction to Keefe's Tatoos. Gosh, now I can't imagine Keefe without them.... ( he actually looks hot ) 



      - Sokeefeforever

      He ALWAYS is


      Lol 😂

      XD 


      true though-

      Right?
      How could he not be?
      Ikr??!!!
      Imagine if one day Keefe came in our dimension and saw us all fangirling about him xD
      .*God imagine*


      Lol... I would just like hug him and never EVER let go. I would lock him in my basement and keep him there......



      Wow thats sound pretty creepy... BUT true! 

      He's like... my dream boy...... I WANT to feel his HAIR
      Thats even creepier 


      Lol

      it might be creepy.... but yeah
      Keefe looks good I anything and everything..... it is a fact!

      Thats is so true!!!!




      - Sokeefeforever 

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    • Omg, guys I am super excited for  Unlocked!!!! Shannon is making up for her horrible ending last time, adding Keefe's perspective, drawings, deeper insights, more details, and more!!! The cover is the most gorgeous cover out of all.....




      - Sokeefeforever 

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    • 104.139.118.220 wrote:
      Omg, guys I am super excited for  Unlocked!!!! Shannon is making up for her horrible ending last time, adding Keefe's perspective, drawings, deeper insights, more details, and more!!! The cover is the most gorgeous cover out of all.....




      - Sokeefeforever 

      actually, while the cover might be beautiful and stuff, it DOESN'T GIVE ANY CLUES ABOUT THE BOOK, which makes Summer ANGRY

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      104.139.118.220 wrote:
      Omg, guys I am super excited for  Unlocked!!!! Shannon is making up for her horrible ending last time, adding Keefe's perspective, drawings, deeper insights, more details, and more!!! The cover is the most gorgeous cover out of all.....



      - Sokeefeforever 

      actually, while the cover might be beautiful and stuff, it DOESN'T GIVE ANY CLUES ABOUT THE BOOK, which makes Summer ANGRY

      I think that was the point. And hey! Only, like, 2 *mumbles times 2* months till we get the first excerpt!

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    • Bam! Please FeDex some SoKeefe wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      104.139.118.220 wrote:
      Omg, guys I am super excited for  Unlocked!!!! Shannon is making up for her horrible ending last time, adding Keefe's perspective, drawings, deeper insights, more details, and more!!! The cover is the most gorgeous cover out of all.....



      - Sokeefeforever 

      actually, while the cover might be beautiful and stuff, it DOESN'T GIVE ANY CLUES ABOUT THE BOOK, which makes Summer ANGRY
      I think that was the point. And hey! Only, like, 2 *mumbles times 2* months till we get the first excerpt!

            *grumpy potato*

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      Bam! Please FeDex some SoKeefe wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      104.139.118.220 wrote:
      Omg, guys I am super excited for  Unlocked!!!! Shannon is making up for her horrible ending last time, adding Keefe's perspective, drawings, deeper insights, more details, and more!!! The cover is the most gorgeous cover out of all.....


      - Sokeefeforever 

      actually, while the cover might be beautiful and stuff, it DOESN'T GIVE ANY CLUES ABOUT THE BOOK, which makes Summer ANGRY
      I think that was the point. And hey! Only, like, 2 *mumbles times 2* months till we get the first excerpt!
          *grumpy potato*

      Aww *patpat*

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    • So I have an idea for a story but I would need a place to post it. It’s based of a role I co-created with my online BFF and, I need a place to post it. Any ideas?

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    • 73.206.10.162 wrote:
      So I have an idea for a story but I would need a place to post it. It’s based of a role I co-created with my online BFF and, I need a place to post it. Any ideas?

      um... you can make a thread and post it there...

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