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  • Here's the second thread. The link to the first one is here: https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1153652



    Thank you for reading this fanfic. I'm amazed that this got 500 comments. I honestly didn't expect it. Thank you all for reading, commenting, liking, and overall being great.

    -Quetzal

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    • Wow I can't belive that the other thread got 500 coments already! This fanfic has been so great and the best part of my day is when I see that you post. Thank you for being an amazing writer!!!

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    • You stories are really amazing!!!!

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    • The reason it got to 500 comments is because you are a great amazing awesome writer!

      -Lady kiddo

      P.S 

      I got that name from keeper of the lost cities book 8 page: I don't feel like looking up

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    • hi, i dont actually have an account so i'll just call myself booksbooksbooks but on the first thread i called myself sokeefe4life. p.s. I am still sokeefe p.p.s. It is true. You are an amazing writer.

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    • when do you usually post?




      - booksbooksbooks

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    • Silveny and Greyfall wrote:
      Wow I can't belive that the other thread got 500 coments already! This fanfic has been so great and the best part of my day is when I see that you post. Thank you for being an amazing writer!!!

      I totally agree!!! You are an amazing writer!!! Before I saw other people's comments I actually thought you were Shannon Messenger!! : ) You are AMZING!!!!!

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    • a98.109.24.181 wrote:
      Silveny and Greyfall wrote:
      Wow I can't belive that the other thread got 500 coments already! This fanfic has been so great and the best part of my day is when I see that you post. Thank you for being an amazing writer!!!
      I totally agree!!! You are an amazing writer!!! Before I saw other people's comments I actually thought you were Shannon Messenger!! : ) You are AMZING!!!!!

      Agreed              

                                                                                    -booksbooksbooks

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    • 99.250.193.217 wrote:
      when do you usually post?




      - booksbooksbooks

      I think they post once a day, tho sometimes life gets in the way

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    • Bam! Please FeDex some SoKeefe wrote:
      99.250.193.217 wrote:
      when do you usually post?



      - booksbooksbooks

      I think they post once a day, tho sometimes life gets in the way

      Thanks! -booksbooksbooks 

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    • I nearly forgot



      HAPPY CANADA DAY!!!

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    • 99.250.193.217 wrote:
      I nearly forgot


      HAPPY CANADA DAY!!! - booksbooksbooks

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    • HAPPAY CANADA DAY 🇨🇦!!! My Canadian pride is flying high

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    • Chapter 50-Sophie

      Did Grady really just say he wants to talk to us alone. Ugh. Why does he always have to do this.

      "Listen. Guys. I mean Sophie and umm, Keefe. I do not why Alden told me you guys where dating, but he must have a just reason for it. If I am being completely honest, While I think that Sophie should not date any of you. If I had to choose between You and Fitz, I would choose Keefe." Grady looks at Sophie. "This does not mean I give you two permition to date, but I trust you guys when you say you aren't and between you guys and me, I think Alden just wanted me to mess with you guys so Sophie would run back to Fitz and Keefe I know what Alden did to you.....But Sophie, Edaline told me about what Fitz has done to you and that is not ok, so ummm yeah. Bye.

      Sophie has a million thoughts running through her head. That was a lot of information to take in. Sophie turns and looks at Keefe. "What did he mean, when he said Alden did something to you."

      "Um Nothing replies Keefe." He  is avoiding eyecontact.

      "Listen to me Keefe What DID HE DO TO YOU." 

      "Really No-" Sophie cut Keefe off

      "YOU TELL ME RIGHT NOW OR ELSE I WILL NEVER TALK TO YOU AGAIN."

      "Fine ok." Keefe looks Sophie in the eyes. "The day of trial which would decide Alvars fate, Alden asked me to. To umm. Stay out of Fitzs way so you could date him and ignore my feeling for you" Keefe looks away.

      Sophie is in shock. She sits down on her bed and just process what is said. Almost a minute later she realizes somthing. "You have feeling for me?"

      "Um yeah. Foster I would do anything for you." Keefe sits next to Sophie.

      Sophie makes the biggest realisation of her life. That feeling she was having, the feeling she never understood. The feeling that called her to Keefe despite her liking for Fitz, it was Love.

      "Keefe I feel the same way." Sophie graps Keefe and pulls him into a kiss. They kiss for a long time and Sophie never wants to let go, but eventually she does.

      "Woah. That is the biggest emotion I have ever felt from you Foster." Keefe holds on to her hand.

      "I...I...I love you Keefe."

      "I love you too Foster, forever now and always." Keefe pulls her into another kiss when Sophie backs away.

      "What am I going to tell Fitz." 

      "Don't tell him anything...Look you guys agreed to just be friends. How about for now we just keep it on the down low."

      'Ok, so does this mean your my... um you know... Boyfriend."

      "Yes, Foster I will be your boyfriend." Sophie and Keefe hear Edaline down stairs. 

      "Sophie is time to let Keefe go home." Sophie looks at Keefe. She never knew what she was missing out on untill she meant him. Sophie gives him a big hug.

      "Bye Keefe"

      Bye Foster" Keefe lightleaps away.

      -Quetzal (my favourite chapter so far!!!) 

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    • YES Sokeefe!

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    • Aww

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    • That is the best chapter I have written so far.

      -Quezstal

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    • Soooo cute!!! *giddy squeal*

      One thing though, Maybe you could focus less on ships and more on the problem because the neverseen (If they ever did)made an appearence long back in the story.



      -booksbooksbooks

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    • Wait, is this actually Quetzal posting? Because your number is different, and I thought that you said you weren't going to describe the Grady talk. (if it is actually Quetzal I am sorry but I just want to make sure that your fanfic stays yours.)

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    • If you like this fanic read this....

      https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1532640

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    • FWI I am NOT THE PERSON WHO STARTED THE FANIC ABOUT.  I WROTE THIS OUT OF THE FACT THAT I WANTED TO ADD ON, BUT I AM NOT QUEZTAL. I DID THAT AS A JOKE. I THOUGHT PEOPLE COULD TELL THAT I WAS DIFFERENT, BUT THEY CAN NOT, SO UM I MEANT NO OFFENSE TO QUEZTAL AND SORRY FOR THE MISSUNDERSTANDING. I DID ACTUALLY WRITE THE FANIC THAT I POSTED THE LINK TO THOUGHT. SORRY. I FEEL REALLY BAD. 

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    • 64.113.177.66 wrote: FWI I am NOT THE PERSON WHO STARTED THE FANIC ABOUT.  I WROTE THIS OUT OF THE FACT THAT I WANTED TO ADD ON, BUT I AM NOT QUEZTAL. I DID THAT AS A JOKE. I THOUGHT PEOPLE COULD TELL THAT I WAS DIFFERENT, BUT THEY CAN NOT, SO UM I MEANT NO OFFENSE TO QUEZTAL AND SORRY FOR THE MISSUNDERSTANDING. I DID ACTUALLY WRITE THE FANIC THAT I POSTED THE LINK TO THOUGHT. SORRY. I FEEL REALLY BAD. 

      Don’t feel bad but I LOWKEY thought this was the same person xD

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    • Hey. Check out my other fanic above though. Thx

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    • I knew it!! Quetzal uses more punctuation than that. And I knew that isn't what Quetzal was gonna do next so... That was kinda weird because I was like "Uh... Where's the punctuation and also wow where did that come from?!"

      No offense I really hope that didn't hurt your feelings!! It's okay. That was just a little confusing. 😂😅😊

      --Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn

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    • 64.113.177.66 wrote:
      FWI I am NOT THE PERSON WHO STARTED THE FANIC ABOUT.  I WROTE THIS OUT OF THE FACT THAT I WANTED TO ADD ON, BUT I AM NOT QUEZTAL. I DID THAT AS A JOKE. I THOUGHT PEOPLE COULD TELL THAT I WAS DIFFERENT, BUT THEY CAN NOT, SO UM I MEANT NO OFFENSE TO QUEZTAL AND SORRY FOR THE MISSUNDERSTANDING. I DID ACTUALLY WRITE THE FANIC THAT I POSTED THE LINK TO THOUGHT. SORRY. I FEEL REALLY BAD. 

      oh ok sorry. Don't feel bad, also I read your fanfic and it is really good :)

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    • I posted another chapter on my Fanfic.

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    • 64.113.177.66 wrote:
      FWI I am NOT THE PERSON WHO STARTED THE FANIC ABOUT.  I WROTE THIS OUT OF THE FACT THAT I WANTED TO ADD ON, BUT I AM NOT QUEZTAL. I DID THAT AS A JOKE. I THOUGHT PEOPLE COULD TELL THAT I WAS DIFFERENT, BUT THEY CAN NOT, SO UM I MEANT NO OFFENSE TO QUEZTAL AND SORRY FOR THE MISSUNDERSTANDING. I DID ACTUALLY WRITE THE FANIC THAT I POSTED THE LINK TO THOUGHT. SORRY. I FEEL REALLY BAD. 

      ^Okay...to be honest, when I came on here I was SO confused because I was mostly sure that I didn't write that. And then I realized it was someone else and I thought it was a joke. And it is. And also, if I did make Sokeefe happen, it would NEVER be that easy. 

      Also, booksbooksbooks, yeah, I know it needs action. I meant the action to come about 20 chapters ago, but somehow, nothing important has happened yet, which I'm sorry for. And I can't promise there will be action soon, because I wanted to write the sleepover already to get it over with, and for some reason, the sleepover is about 15 chapters. But after that there will be the opening of a cache and I'm going to include finding the memory, stuff on Glimmer, on Alvar, etc. But yeah, the beginning of this fanfic focused a lot on ships and fluff. So sorry about that.

      -Quetzal

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    • Chapter 47-Sophie


      NOOOO!!!

      Her scream echoed around her head. She could faintly hear Keefe laughing and Edaline talking. Her blood rushed in her ears. 

      All she could think was, Why me?

      Why did this always happen to her? Why couldn’t she throw a pillow at someone and not have it hit a random person? Or more accurately, the person she didn’t want for it to hit. But nope! The world always had something planned for her. 

       She snapped out of her shock. “Did I seriously just do that for the SECOND time today?”

      “Second?” Edaline said giggling. “Who else did you do it to?”

      “Magnate Leto a few months back, and Alden today,” Sophie mumbled. She could already tell that there was more embarrassment to come.

      “You did? You have a talent, Sophie,” Edaline said. 

      “I could do without it,” Sophie said, staring at Grady. Grady, who was frozen in shock.

      “Grady? Hello? Grady?” Edaline said, trying to make Grady unfreeze. She sighed and conjured up a bucket of icy water which she dumped on Grady’s head.

      “AAH! Wha- Eda? I’m freezing cold and wet!” With another snap of Edaline’s fingers, some warm towels wrapped around him.

      “That better? Now just promise you won’t try to injure or banish Keefe in any way and I’ll allow you to talk to them,” Edaline said sternly.

      “Ugh. Fine,” Grady grunted. At least his face was back to its original color. 

      “I’m talking to you two...alone.”

      Uh oh.

      ​​​​​​​Here's another short chapter from Sophie's point of view. Nothing exciting really. 

      -Quetzal

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    • 64.113.177.66 wrote:
      FWI I am NOT THE PERSON WHO STARTED THE FANIC ABOUT.  I WROTE THIS OUT OF THE FACT THAT I WANTED TO ADD ON, BUT I AM NOT QUEZTAL. I DID THAT AS A JOKE. I THOUGHT PEOPLE COULD TELL THAT I WAS DIFFERENT, BUT THEY CAN NOT, SO UM I MEANT NO OFFENSE TO QUEZTAL AND SORRY FOR THE MISSUNDERSTANDING. I DID ACTUALLY WRITE THE FANIC THAT I POSTED THE LINK TO THOUGHT. SORRY. I FEEL REALLY BAD. 

      Don't feel bad it's ok. Also can u post the link to ur fanfic that u wrote so I can read it thanks!!

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    • I73.115.99.161 wrote:
      64.113.177.66 wrote:
      FWI I am NOT THE PERSON WHO STARTED THE FANIC ABOUT.  I WROTE THIS OUT OF THE FACT THAT I WANTED TO ADD ON, BUT I AM NOT QUEZTAL. I DID THAT AS A JOKE. I THOUGHT PEOPLE COULD TELL THAT I WAS DIFFERENT, BUT THEY CAN NOT, SO UM I MEANT NO OFFENSE TO QUEZTAL AND SORRY FOR THE MISSUNDERSTANDING. I DID ACTUALLY WRITE THE FANIC THAT I POSTED THE LINK TO THOUGHT. SORRY. I FEEL REALLY BAD. 
      ^Okay...to be honest, when I came on here I was SO confused because I was mostly sure that I didn't write that. And then I realized it was someone else and I thought it was a joke. And it is. And also, if I did make Sokeefe happen, it would NEVER be that easy. 

      Also, booksbooksbooks, yeah, I know it needs action. I meant the action to come about 20 chapters ago, but somehow, nothing important has happened yet, which I'm sorry for. And I can't promise there will be action soon, because I wanted to write the sleepover already to get it over with, and for some reason, the sleepover is about 15 chapters. But after that there will be the opening of a cache and I'm going to include finding the memory, stuff on Glimmer, on Alvar, etc. But yeah, the beginning of this fanfic focused a lot on ships and fluff. So sorry about that.

      -Quetzal

      t's ok its just that i have read alot of fanfics whi'ch basically just end up forgetting the problem and going onto ships.

      ​​​​​​​-booksbooksbooks

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    • sorry im still getting sed to using this website 

      -booksbooksbooks

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    • Guys!! Quetzal!! I made a profile!! (Finally.)

      I will continue ending my posts with --Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn so you guys can get used to this beautiful picture meaning me.

      --Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn

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    • How do you make a profile?

      -booksbooksbooks

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    • 99.250.193.217 wrote:
      How do you make a profile?

      -booksbooksbooks

      I don't remember sorry! (If I didn't read it, I'll forget it in about 2 days. It's a problem)

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    • Bam! Please FeDex some SoKeefe wrote:

      99.250.193.217 wrote:
      How do you make a profile?

      -booksbooksbooks

      I don't remember sorry! (If I didn't read it, I'll forget it in about 2 days. It's a problem)

      Well, I think if you go to a poll/vote thing and you press vote it will take you to a page where you can make an account using google or Facebook or something like that.

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    • Silveny-is-my-Spirit-Animal wrote:
      Guys!! Quetzal!! I made a profile!! (Finally.)

      I will continue ending my posts with --Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn so you guys can get used to this beautiful picture meaning me.

      --Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn

      Thats great! I'm thinking on making an account, but I never have time

      -Quetzal

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    • Ahhhh sooo cute!

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    • Hey Quetzal,

                          When do you usually post?

                                                                        -booksbooksbooks

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    • 99.250.193.217 wrote:
      Hey Quetzal,

                        When do you usually post?

                                                                      -booksbooksbooks

      Normally I post at about noon, but this week I've been posting after 3 because I have a class. I'll post right now though.

      -Quetzal

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    • Chapter 48- Keefe


      Actually, the lecture from Grady wasn’t that bad. Just a lot of yelling and threatening and glaring. Nothing Keefe wasn’t already used to, considering his childhood. 

      By the time Grady had finished threatening to hurt Keefe if he dared to hurt Sophie, it was dark, and Keefe had to go home. With all the drama, he never even got to tell Foster where he was living now, or about the crystal cave. He was sure she’d want to see it. It was beautiful. A miracle of nature. 

      He stayed up watching TV. He was officially addicted to it. The human shows were so weird but amusing, that Keefe couldn’t not watch it. It was also hilarious, learning some of the things the humans called facts.

      At 9 though, he was conked out on the couch. The day had been exhausting and full of surprises. He needed sleep. And he got it.

      He woke up late the next day. He blinked groggily. “What time is it?”

      “11, Lord Sleepyhead. You were out cold,” Ro said.

      “Oh. Well, I’m taking a shower so bye.” He walked to the bathroom. When he was ready, and done styling his hair into its perfect tousled style, he walked to the kitchen. 

      The gnomes had prepared brunch for him and it tasted amazing. It looked a little like the human food called oatmeal, that Keefe had learned about from TV. Aaah TV. He’d have to ask Sophie if she’d watched a lot of TV when she was living with the humans. If she hadn’t she really missed out.

      He finished his food quickly and then walked outside to the cliffs. It was a relaxing spot. Only the crashing waves and seagulls were heard. He drew the scene and many other things in a notebook. A new blue one he’d gotten for calm memories or peaceful ones. He didn’t know how much time had passed, but he felt like it was hours. 

      Then he remembered that there were some woods around the cottage. Just as he was about to go there, he got a hail from Biana. He answered and Biana’s voice came through. “Hi, Keefe! We’re having a sleepover at Everglen today! You’re invited! Come at 5, and bring your clothes and stuff.”

      Keefe smiled. This would be great. “Sure B. I’ll be there.” Biana smiled and the call ended. 

      A sleepover at Everglen...that would be fun. He just hoped he wouldn’t get embarrassed out of his mind there. He remembered the time that Biana had gotten him tied up, hanging upside down from the staircase. The look on Alden’s face… Hopefully, this time will be different.

      ​​​​​​​Nothing much in this chapter too. But, soon the sleepover's going to start. And its going to include a lot of Foster Embarassment

      -Quetzal

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    • FWI I also love Quetzals new chapter!

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    • Foster Embarrassment?!? Yay!!

      (--Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn)

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    • Soo good Quetzal!

      -booksbooksbooks

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    • Good job for the 500 comments on the other thread and for this chapter!

      A comment I really badly wanted/needed to post on the previous chapter but the other thread had no more space: Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!! Foster, pillows are allergic to you throwing them!!! That pillow in Gardy’s face... that was just wow.

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    • i was on vacation and didnt have any wifi so i couldn't read any of this and i was dying!!! i am so glad i can finally read it!

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    • What I like about Quetzal’s fanfic is that there writing isn’t choppy or like, I don’t know, wordy. I have seen some fanfics that use the same word multiple times in a sentence. Oh and I am also happy that Fitz just apologized and was done with it, in some that I have read he goes full on violence mode. Well done Quetzal!!!

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    • Hey I think POTATO dragon you might like my fanfic @ https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1532640

      I know I post this a lot, but I really think people will like it.

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    • Okayyyyyyy

      KEEFE HUNG UPSIDE DOWN FROM THE STARCASE TIED UP!?!?!?!!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!

      -AnotherObliviousTurtleA.K.A.Sophie

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    • Yeah I can see that happening to him. 😂😂

      (--Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn)

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    • Chapter 49-Sophie


      Sophie woke up the next day, still a little weirded out by last night. The talk Grady had given wasn’t too bad, but she still couldn’t understand why Alden had thought Keefe and her were dating. 

      She quickly put her hair in a ponytail and rushed downstairs. Edaline was already there, eating a few yellow cubes of fruit. Sophie joined her and ate in silence.

      Suddenly Edaline spoke. “Could you help me handle the griffin we got? All I need is for you to toss me supplies when I need them. I promise it isn’t like feeding Verdi or anything.”

      “Sure,” Sophie replied. They finished eating and walked outside. Sophie looked at the griffin. It was huge and its feathers and fur were dark brown. It had a grey head and eyes that seemed powerful. 

      Edaline walked into the enclosure. She called to Sophie, “Remember, just toss me what I need okay?”

      Sophie nodded. For the next hour, Edaline bathed the griffin and fed him. In intervals, Sophie threw supplies at Edaline who caught them perfectly. Edaline had a great catch. Soon Edaline walked out of the enclosure, soaking wet. Her hair was a mess but she looked pretty as always. 

      “Thanks, Sophie. We’re done now. It was about time the griffin got a bath. He was starting to attract a lot of flies,” Edaline said with a giggle.

      Sophie smiled too and said, “How are you so good at catching all that? My aim is the worst and you still caught every single bottle or whatever that I threw to you.”

      Edaline shrugged. “Practice, I guess.”

      “I could practice for years and still not be as good as you,” Sophie said. Her aim was terrible. Her catch was even worse. She recalled the times she tried throwing things for PE in school. It had never worked out. She’d sent at least 5 students to the nurse with a black eye or bloody nose. That was a reason why everyone hated her.

      Edaline just smiled. “Well, you don’t have to be good at everything. Otherwise, it would get annoying.”

      Sophie nodded and headed back to the house. Even though she hadn’t done anything, she was sweating and hot. She took a quick shower and was about to leave her room when she got a hail on her Imparter. Biana.

      “Hi, Sophie! So you know that sleepover we talked about yesterday? We’re having it today at 5.”

      “Oh. Um, okay. I’ll be there,” Sophie said, caught off guard. That was fast. Less than a day after Sophie brought up the sleepover, Biana had it all planned.

      “Great! Bring a small bag with your clothes and whatever, okay? See you there!” Biana said happily. 

      The call ended. Sophie stared up at the ceiling. Please let the sleepover not get ruined by drama, she thought.

      The sleepover has started! Almost. Well, the next chapter will have the sleepover. Also yeah Keefe's done some crazy things, hence the whole tied to the staircase upsidedown thing.

      -Quetzal

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    • Yay! The sleepover!!! I'm so exited! You are such a talented writer!

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    • This is gonna be awkward and hilarious, I can tell.

      (--Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn)

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    • Guys, just so you know, I'm not a fan of ships happening because of dares. No offense, but I don't really like it when someone dares someone else to kiss a person and BAM they realize they're in love. It has always seemed kind of forced to me, and I can't appreciate the ship that much. I like it better when characters realize who they like on their own, not because someone made them admit something or do something against their will. Again, no offense, but don't expect any ships to happen during the sleepover. Sorry if thats what you were hoping for, but I'm not doing that. 

      -Quetzal

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    • i cant wait for the sleepover!!!!!!

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    • 73.115.99.161 wrote:
      Guys, just so you know, I'm not a fan of ships happening because of dares. No offense, but I don't really like it when someone dares someone else to kiss a person and BAM they realize they're in love. It has always seemed kind of forced to me, and I can't appreciate the ship that much. I like it better when characters realize who they like on their own, not because someone made them admit something or do something against their will. Again, no offense, but don't expect any ships to happen during the sleepover. Sorry if thats what you were hoping for, but I'm not doing that. 

      -Quetzal

      i agree and honestly i totally didn't remember about truth or dare i was focusing on the Foster embarassment :) btw you are an amazing writer!!!!!!!!!!!!

            

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    • 71.135.221.239 wrote:

      73.115.99.161 wrote:
      Guys, just so you know, I'm not a fan of ships happening because of dares. No offense, but I don't really like it when someone dares someone else to kiss a person and BAM they realize they're in love. It has always seemed kind of forced to me, and I can't appreciate the ship that much. I like it better when characters realize who they like on their own, not because someone made them admit something or do something against their will. Again, no offense, but don't expect any ships to happen during the sleepover. Sorry if thats what you were hoping for, but I'm not doing that. 

      -Quetzal

      i agree and honestly i totally didn't remember about truth or dare i was focusing on the Foster embarassment :) btw you are an amazing writer!!!!!!!!!!!!

            

      I agree 100%. I've read fanfics like that and disliked them because of it. I was actually really hoping that you weren't gonna do that. *sigh of relief* (--Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn)

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    • Silveny-is-my-Spirit-Animal wrote:

      71.135.221.239 wrote:

      73.115.99.161 wrote:
      Guys, just so you know, I'm not a fan of ships happening because of dares. No offense, but I don't really like it when someone dares someone else to kiss a person and BAM they realize they're in love. It has always seemed kind of forced to me, and I can't appreciate the ship that much. I like it better when characters realize who they like on their own, not because someone made them admit something or do something against their will. Again, no offense, but don't expect any ships to happen during the sleepover. Sorry if thats what you were hoping for, but I'm not doing that. 

      -Quetzal

      i agree and honestly i totally didn't remember about truth or dare i was focusing on the Foster embarassment :) btw you are an amazing writer!!!!!!!!!!!!

            

      I agree 100%. I've read fanfics like that and disliked them because of it. I was actually really hoping that you weren't gonna do that. *sigh of relief* (--Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn) </div> Ya I don’t like ships happening because of dares either. I was just reading a fanfic on wattpad that was about Ro giving a dare to Keefe and Fitz to see who will admit their feelings first. The whole time it just felt like both characters were treating Sophie as an object, even fighting about who she belongs to IN FRONT OF HER. I still enjoyed the fanfic, but I DID NOT like why they admitted their feelings.
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    • Chapter 50-Sophie


      It was almost time for the sleepover. 2 minutes away from 5 to be exact. Sophie rushed around her room, grabbing things. She shoved everything into a ridiculously small bag and ran out the door. She teleported to Everglen, noticing that she was the last one. 

      “It’s 5:01 Sophie!” Biana called out.

      “One minute late isn’t a lot!” Sophie said. She walked toward Biana. Fitz, Keefe, Dex, Tam, Linh, and Marella were also there. 

      “It’s still late! Well anyway, we’re all here. I would invite Wylie, but he said he was busy today,” Biana explained, mainly to Linh. 

      Linh nodded and smiled. “Come on. Let’s go inside.”

      Everyone walked inside. Sophie noticed Marella, who seemed a little awkward with everyone. It made sense. Sophie didn’t include Marella in much. Sophie wondered why Biana chose to invite Marella and not Maruca or someone. Immediately, Sophie wanted to hit herself. Why was she wondering that? Marella had been her first friend and had included her when Sophie was new to the Lost Cities. And then Sophie had ignored her. And then the second Marella had gotten a cool power, bam! She was back in the friend group. Was that how Sophie chose her friends? By their powers? Not by their personalities? She was a terrible--​​​​

      Sophie was interrupted from her mental blaming herself by Keefe. “Woah there Foster. Guilt it radiating off you by the...the...You know what? I can’t find the right word for that. But you get the point.”

      Sophie smiled a little. No leftover awkwardness from last night. Keefe must have sensed what she was thinking, because he immediately and loudly said, “Hey Biana? Guess what Foster did last night to Grady.”

      Biana smiled, “What? Oh and yesterday do you know what she did to Dad?”

      At the same time, they said, “She threw a pillow at him!” They stared at each other. Suddenly everyone in the room burst out laughing. Everyone.

      Except for Sophie. She groaned and covered her face with her hands. This had to be rehearsed.  No way could this just happen. They must have planned it. They had to have!

      “Are you done embarrassing me?” she asked when Keefe finished reenacting the Great Pillow Spectacle, as he dubbed it.

      “Nope! I still need to act out the Talk.” Keefe’s eyes widened. Sophie buried her head in her hands again.  Everyone once again started to laugh. “No!” Keefe frantically said. “No! That is not how it sounds!”

      Everyone ignored him and continued laughing. For a very long time. Too long.

      Sophie could already tell that she was bright red. She sneaked a glance at Keefe. His ears were bright pink but other than that he seemed calm. “Guys, I’m serious. That isn’t how it sounds like.”

      Biana stopped laughing enough to say, “Oh really? So you two aren’t dating yet?”

      Sophie buried her face in her hands. Why did everyone think they were dating? They weren’t! Sophie didn’t even like Keefe in that way! And wait, ‘yet?’ What did she mean by that?

      “No! No, we aren’t!” Keefe almost yelled that.

      Sophie lifted her face from out of her hands. Why was everyone laughing so hard? It wasn’t that funny! Even Fitz was gasping for breath. There didn’t seem to be any jealousy in him. 

      “Guys! Stop laughing so hard!” she said.

      Biana took one look at her cherry-red face and burst into giggles again. Well, that didn’t help.

      Linh calmed down enough to defend them “Guys...they’re probably not dating. And when they are, they would tell us. Sooner or later.”

      That just made it worse. 

      Probably? When they are? What???

      Sophie screamed, “We are NOT dating!!!”

      “Feisty Foster is back!” Keefe said laughing. Why was he laughing? 

      Sophie scowled and muttered, “Traitor.” 

      That just made Keefe laugh harder.

      Sophie sighed and stomped out of the room. At this rate, it would be a very long and extremely embarrassing sleepover.

      Okay, here's another chapter. I posted early because I'm busy for the rest of the day and I can't post later. Also, FINALLY, the sleepover started. It only took *scrolls back up to read* 50 chapters! Wow, I just realized how much that is...

      -Quetzal

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    • Hahahahaha I love Foster Embarrassment.

      (--Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn)

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    • amazing!!!!!

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    • The only critasisum I would give is you should make the chapters longer. Also, we can tell what your end goal is, so I think you should move it along a little bit.

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    • Quetzal already wrote most of the chapters. And I actually kinda like it, even if it's fluff.

      (--Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn)

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    • (For those in the US happy forth)

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    • (Happy fourth!!)

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    • If my friends were as mean as this to me in a sleepover, I would have left...

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    • 90.91.152.24 wrote: If my friends were as mean as this to me in a sleepover, I would have left...

      Same -booksbooksbooks

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    • 99.250.193.217 wrote:

      90.91.152.24 wrote: If my friends were as mean as this to me in a sleepover, I would have left...

      Same

      -booksbooksbooks

      Yeah me too

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    • 98.109.24.181 wrote:
      99.250.193.217 wrote:

      90.91.152.24 wrote: If my friends were as mean as this to me in a sleepover, I would have left...

      Same

      -booksbooksbooks

      Yeah me too

      Yeah, but I feel like Sophie wouldn't get too mad, because they've all risked their lives for one another so many times, and she knows they're only joking. Plus, she did kinda leave, because she just gave up and left the room, waiting for them to calm down.

      -Quetzal

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    • I just discovered and read this whole fanfic and now I’m like “Nooooooo, the last chapter was posted yesterday!” This fan fiction is really good. How often are new chapters posted?

      ~ PyriteEmpath

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    • 68.56.10.224 wrote: I just discovered and read this whole fanfic and now I’m like “Nooooooo, the last chapter was posted yesterday!” This fan fiction is really good. How often are new chapters posted?

      ~ PyriteEmpath Once every day -Lady kiddo

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    • If you like this FanFic, I also have a Fanfic, which you can acess here 

      https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1532640

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    • 96.231.104.234 wrote:

      68.56.10.224 wrote: I just discovered and read this whole fanfic and now I’m like “Nooooooo, the last chapter was posted yesterday!” This fan fiction is really good. How often are new chapters posted?

      ~ PyriteEmpath

      Once every day -Lady kiddo

      Thanks for telling me. ~ PyriteEmpath

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    • I AM LEAVING FANDOM...BYE!

      -AnotherObliviousTurtleA.K.A.Sophie

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    • 99.244.203.208 wrote:
      I AM LEAVING FANDOM...BYE!

      -AnotherObliviousTurtleA.K.A.Sophie

      Oh... Bye then we'll miss ypu

      you can try to keep following the three though right?

      -Lady kiddo

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    • Chapter 51- Keefe


      Foster looked so mad. And embarrassed. She was glowing red. She muttered, “Traitor.” She looked so adorable when she was trying to be mad. He had to laugh. How could he not? 

      She sighed and left the room. She was probably waiting for everyone to calm down and forget about this. Fat chance. Keefe would never forget this. It was completely hilarious. How did she do this? How did she somehow manage to do something completely entertaining, without even wanting to?

      Keefe eventually calmed down and went with the others to Biana’s room, where Foster was waiting for them. Linh was also there, trying to make Foster less humiliated. It seemed to work. Now instead of being cherry red, she was more of a tomato color.

      Hey, it was an improvement.

      Foster looked up when she saw everyone standing in front of her. “Um...hi? Why are you guys staring at me like that?”

      “Sorry. Just wondering what to do next.”

      Linh said, “Okay. Um, let’s play some games. Like…”

      Biana squealed, “Truth or Dare! Yes!”

      “Um no. Anything but that,” Foster said firmly.

      “C’mon, Sophie. It won’t be a real sleepover without Truth or Dare,” Biana begged.

      “Then nothing embarrassing. No kissing, no confessing crushes, nothing like that.”

      “Truth or Dare is meant to be embarrassing. That is literally its whole purpose!”

      “No kissing. No crush confessing,” Foster said stubbornly.

      “Fiiine. You’re taking all the fun out of this,” Biana said grumpily. She perked up again quickly though. “Then I’m going first!”

      Keefe and everyone else were watching the argument silently. Biana was famous for her embarrassing but fun sleepovers. This would be interesting. They sat down in a circle, and the game began.

      “Okay...Sophie! Truth or Dare?” Biana asked.

      Foster looked stuck between the choices. “Dare. No, truth. No, dare.”

      “So dare it is! The person on your right has to put makeup on you blindfolded and you have to wear it like that for the rest of the night!” Biana smiled evilly.

      Foster glared at Biana. Keefe smiled. This would be interesting. “Uhh, Keefe? Here’s your blindfold,” Biana said. 

      Oh, wait. He was the person on Foster’s right.

      He shrugged. It couldn’t be that bad. Biana led them in front of a mirror. There were dozens of makeup supplies on the counter. Who needs that much makeup? Then again, he was the guy with 20 different hair supplies in his room. Keefe blindfolded himself and picked up a tube of lipstick. At least...he thought it was lipstick. It seemed like it. He felt around and found Foster. He took a deep breath. This was going to be fun.

      He smeared the lipstick all over Foster. Oily stuff greased all over her skin. She seemed in shock. He had to act fast. He then grabbed a brush and something that felt like a powder. He dumped powder on her head. He then brushed it around, messing up her hair. There was a liquidy thing. Now it was dripping in her hair. He grabbed a cream and slathered it on her face. Very thickly. Foster would look like a mess. He laughed a little.

      Foster seemed to come to her senses. Time was up. Keefe was in trouble. 

      “Keefe Whatever-your-middle-name-is Sencen!!! You will pay for this!”

      Keefe yanked off his blindfold. In front of him stood Foster. Furious Foster.

      Very furious.

      Uh oh.

      ​​​​​​​Here's another chapter! Sorry for not posting yesterday, but I was busy and then I just forgot. 

      -Quetzal

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    • Aaaaaw that was so hilarious and kinda cute and I loved that dare.

      “Keefe Whatever-your-middle-name-is Sencen!!! You will pay for this!" Haha I bet he will!!

      I also really love how you made Linh be calming Sophie down. That seems so much like Linh!!

      I love it, as always.

      (--Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn)

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    • Can we have 2 chapters today because you did not post yesterday???? :)

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    • Thank you sooooo much for posting another chapter! This fanfic is amazing!

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    • i love this !!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

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    • IM DYING OF LAUGHTER THIS IS AWESOME

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    • Bam! Please FeDex some SoKeefe wrote: IM DYING OF LAUGHTER THIS IS AWESOME

      Me too!!

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    • Yes. Just YES!

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    • So good!

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    • OOOOH KEEFE IS IN FOR SOME SERIOUS TROUBLE!!!!!

      ha ha ha I looooved that dare ( great job biana [and Quetzel] )

      -Lady kiddo

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      IM DYING OF LAUGHTER THIS IS AWESOME

      Oooooh my gosh how am I still alive keefe, YOU ARE HILARIOUS!!!!

      -Lady kiddo

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    • how has sophie managed to contain her anger??? I bet keefe has caused a lot of it. I probably would have given keefe something he'll remember for years. but then, since i like keefe instead of fitz i would regret it  soo ya :I

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    • Chapter 52-Sophie


      Sophie settled in her chair, ready for Keefe to put makeup on her. She wasn’t particularly worried. Yes she hated makeup, and Keefe was putting it on her blindfolded, but Keefe had to know something about makeup with all of his hair products, right?

      Wrong.

      She didn’t know what Keefe was doing because her eyes were closed, but she could feel greasy stuff all over her. Something wet was in her messed up hair, and powder and cream were caked on her.

      She heard Keefe laugh and realized that he was doing this on purpose.

      ON PURPOSE.

      He was so going to get it.

      She jumped up and glared at Keefe. “Keefe Whatever-your-middle-name-is Sencen!!! You will pay for this!!!”

      He took off his blindfold and stared at her. He seemed scared, but not enough. He seemed more hysterical. Like he was going to explode with laughter any second now.

      Oh no, he won’t.

      She glared at him more. 

      Wrong move.

      He burst out laughing. And so did everyone else. And to make matters worse, Della had walked in with Alden. So now they were also about to die of laughter.

      So now she was going to crawl into a hole and die with embarrassment. And yes, she was serious.

      It seemed like a good idea.

      In fact, it was the best idea in the world.

      And it seemed like a better idea when she looked at herself in the mirror. She looked terrifying. Her hair was messed up and dribbles of liquid were dying it black. Her face was caked in shiny, glittery cream and powder covered her head. Red lipstick was in her hair and all over her face, like blood. She looked terrible.

      She covered her face with her hands and realized that now her hands were covered in gooey, sticky, makeup. They were also quite glittery. She groaned. “Keefe. I hate you,” but it was hard to say thanks to the oodles of goo on her. 

      Keefe looked at her innocently. “What did you say, Foster? You love me? Well, I’m surprised you would say something like that after yesterday, but if that’s how you feel sure.”

      No. 

      No, he did NOT just bring that up again. Sophie was seconds away from strangling Keefe. 

      Alden excused himself, probably to avoid Sophie’s wrath. Or just to avoid the conversation coming up. Della followed him, obviously holding back giggles.

      “What happened yesterday?” Marella asked.

      “Nope! Nothing happened! Absolutely nothing!” Sophie said, trying to appear cheery. But from the way Dex looked at her, she probably looked like a monster when she smiled, thanks to Keefe. 

      Keefe.

      “Something happened. So what was it?” Marella persisted. She seemed to enjoy torturing Sophie.

      “Nothing happened!” Sophie insisted. She looked at Keefe for backup. He was smirking, obviously enjoying the scene. 

      “You know what? If you won’t tell me, I’ll ask Keefe. Keefe, Truth, or Dare?” Marella asked.

      “It isn’t even your turn!” Sophie protested. Everyone ignored her. Some friends.

      Keefe smirked at her. “Truth!”

      Sophie glared. “You never choose Truth! Chicken!”

      “I’m normally a Dare person, but I can’t pass up an opportunity to embarrass you, Foster,” Keefe said with a grin. He can’t enjoy this!

      Marella shared a look with everyone in the room. They all nodded. 

      “What happened last night, with you and Sophie?”

      Here's another chapter! If you're wondering where the Sophie revenge is, it's coming. 

      -Quetzal

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    • I can’t wait for the Wrath of Sophie Foster! :D

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    • oooooooooohohohoohohohhohoohoh watch out keefe!!

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    • Yess!! I love it and I need more and also yay I love Foster Embarrassment.

      (--Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn)

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    • I wonder what Sophie's going to do!

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    • "I'm normally a dare person,but I can't pass up an opportunity to embarrass you foster"

      You're already in trouble with her and now you are sooooo going to pay if I know Sophie AT ALL which I do so...

      -Lady kiddo

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    • Unlocked Cover Reveal Announcement!!

      Hello, fellow KotLC readers!! This is Silveny-is-my-Spirit-Animal, also known as A FANDOM user 104.218.157.252, and I went by --Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn.

      I have news!!

      HappyShadowThoughts176 alerted me that THE COVER REVEAL FOR UNLOCKED IS TOMORROW, JULY 8th!!

      Here's the link to the announcement:

      https://www.instagram.com/p/CCWTt_7nZnc/?igshid=177p0qgmhilv0

      Everyone please copy and paste this message anywhere someone new may see it. Wouldn't you want to know ASAP? Treat everyone else with the knowledge by COPYING AND PASTING THIS MESSAGE.

      Also, special thanks to HappyShadowThoughts176 for telling me!!

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    • Yay! Finally!

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    • I am now going to wait for tomorrow like my life depends on it.

      -Lady kiddo

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    • IKR

      -booksbooksbooks

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    • Chapter 53-Keefe


      He would be lying if he said he didn’t enjoy this. It was hilarious. Foster tried to act mad and glare, but she just looked adorable, even with all that makeup caked on her. Fierce was not her style. Not when he knew her as well as he did.

      “What happened last night, with you and Sophie?” Marella asked. Straight to the point. Classic Marella.

      Keefe smirked and said, “Sit down first. Okay, so I was already at Havenfield that day. I’d baked desserts with Edaline (And the desserts turned out awesome by the way). Then I rode Samira a little and trained her. Oh and Samira’s a dragon okay? Anyway, then Foster came and since Edaline invited me over to eat, I ate dinner with them. And Grady was all weird like he expected me and Foster to do something weird. Anyway, Edaline asked why Grady was acting all tense and stuff. I mean, he looked at us like he expected us to run away or something. And then guess what Grady said?” He looked at everyone expectantly, waiting for someone to say something.

      Tam said, “He thought you guys were dating?”

      How did Tam guess? Keefe’s face must have revealed the answer because everyone started laughing again. 

      “Wait...Tam’s right?” Biana asked.

      “Yeah...How did you guess?” Keefe asked.

      Tam smirked. “It wasn’t rocket science. A two-year-old could have figured it out. Which, I guess, you kind are, when it comes to smarts.”

      “What? I get good grades! And I don’t even show up to 90% of my classes.”

      “But you also joined the Neverseen and thought it would actually help. I don’t know what you were thinking. Or if you even think at all.”

      Linh once again intervened. “Grady actually thought you two were dating? Why?”

      Keefe squirmed a little. This part would be tricky to explain. “Well… Aldentoldhimthatweweredating.” He said it all in a rush.

      Everyone stared back at him. Except for Foster, who was on the floor moaning about having terrible friends and getting embarrassed. Keefe was 75% sure that she was joking about wanting to kill him.

      Dex spoke up first. “Alden told Grady that you and Sophie were dating.” He phrased it like a statement, not a question.

      Keefe nodded. Fitz said, “Why?”

      “Probably he assumed that. I mean everyone knows Foster can’t resist me,” he joked, trying to lighten the mood.

      He failed.

      “Still. Why would Dad assume that? Really Dad?” Biana yelled in the direction Alden left.

      Alden obviously didn’t respond. 

      “Um, okay...Let’s play Truth or Dare!” Keefe said, trying to change the subject.

      Foster groaned. “Do I have to wear this makeup the whole night?”

      Biana laughed and nodded. “A dare is a dare! And you don’t look that bad.”

      “You really mean that?” Foster lifted her face from the floor hopefully.

      Biana said nothing. Foster groaned and hid her face again. 

      “Okay, guys! Come on, let’s play Truth or Dare! My turn!” Keefe said.

      Suddenly Biana screamed. “Guys! Devin escaped!”

      Seriously?

      Here's another chapter! Also, the cover's coming out today? Thats amazing! Thanks so much for telling us, Silveny-is-my-Spirit-Animal! Also I'm so excited for the cover! I hope Biana, Dex, or Linh is on it. One of them at the very least.

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      -Quetzal

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    • It is kind of disapointing that only Sophie and Sliveny are on the cover. Though I do still really like it!

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    • 73.115.83.75 wrote:
      Nevermind, its on the unlocked page. Its really pretty. But whyyyy....the other characters need appreciation....

      I totally agree. I was hoping Keefe and Sophie we're together on the cover though....

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    • in the upper left: havenfield In upper right: Elternia Lower left: gilingham Lower right: foxfire Center: sophie riding silveny -Lady kiddo

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      Thank you for reading this fanfic. I'm amazed that this got 500 comments. I honestly didn't expect it. Thank you all for reading, commenting, liking, and overall being great.

      -Quetzal

      Well being great is what we do so your welcome and thank YOU for writing this fanfic and letting us join you in the ooperation of greatness

      -Lady kiddo

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    • This is such an amazing fanfic! I recently read all of the KotLC books (at least 3 times) had needed something read. This is such a cute story! Biana is my fav elf and I luv how she's also a main character and that she's in it a lot!

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    • You're welcome. I agree, I'd prefer if there were other characters, but I still really like it.

      (--Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn)

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    • Silveny-is-my-Spirit-Animal wrote:
      You're welcome. I agree, I'd prefer if there were other characters, but I still really like it.

      (--Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn)

      For a moment I thought you were talking about the fanfic and then I was a little confused but then I realized you're talking about the cover. Wait, you are talking about the cover right?

      -Quetzal

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    • Chapter 54-Sophie


      She was now as humiliated as humiliation can get. Everyone knew about last night’s awkwardness, her face looked like it was melting and bleeding, everyone decided to tease her relentlessly, and the sleepover wasn’t even an hour through yet!

      Plus now Devin was missing. 

      What else could go wrong?

      Biana was explaining who Devin was to Tam, Linh, Marella, and Keefe. She seemed terrified that Devin would get lost or hurt.

      Sophie decided to take a break from her misery. She concentrated her energy and searched for Devin’s thoughts. It was hard. She didn’t really know Devin’s personality, so it was trickier to find him. Suddenly she heard it. Without warning, she sprinted out of the room, down the stairs, and into the main hall. Quickly she looked around and saw a flash of shiny silver and brown under a chair. She dived and caught Devin before he ran. Devin took one look at her face and made a noise that sounded like how a jackalope would scream.

      Oh yeah. Her face. 

      Keefe. 

      He was in so much trouble.

      She held Devin and ran up the stairs. Biana was running towards her too, seeing Devin. Sophie quickly passed Devin to Biana, who immediately started cuddling and calming down the scared jackalope. 

      “What did you do to him? Devin’s terrified!” Biana said frantically.

      Sophie sighed. “You’re welcome. And I have a feeling it’s my face.”

      Biana looked at her again. “Wow. You look terrible. You can go wash the makeup off. But only because you found Devin. And because I’m now feeling bad about laughing at you so hard and embarrassing you.”

      Sophie was gone at the word ‘go’. She scrubbed the ton of makeup and cream off her face. How was it so sticky? She tried to get the stuff out of her hair too, but that didn’t work out so well. Her hair was black and red in places, even after she rinsed it. Ugh. When she got home she would take a shower for an hour. The makeup was going to take forever to get out.

      She walked back into the room, where everyone was playing Truth or Dare again. She sat down between Keefe and Linh. It was Linh’s turn.

      “Um...Tam! Truth or Dare.” 

      Tam groaned. “If I say Truth, you’ll ask me what animal I want as a pet. If I say Dare, you’ll make me get a pet. I’m gonna lose either way.” Linh just smiled sweetly and twisted her crush cuffs around. “Ugh fine. Truth?”

      “What animal do you want as a pet?” Linh said innocently.

      Tam groaned and muttered, “Knew it. Fine. I want a dragon.”

      “Dragons can’t be pets, Tam. How many times do I have to give you this lecture?” Linh said sternly.

      “Fine! A draxol!” Tam threw up his hands in frustration.

      Fitz said, “You can have Edric. He’s so annoying. He keeps eating my food!”

      Linh smiled. “Ooh really? I wou-I mean, Tam would love a draxol!”

      Fitz grinned. “Sure. You can take Edric. Tomorrow morning, I’ll give him to you. He seems to hate me anyway.”

      Tam groaned. “See? No matter what Linh buys a pet. Princess Purryfins was enough! Now I have to take care of a mini dragon!”

      Linh frowned at Tam. “Edric needs to have a good home, Tam. And you chose a draxol. Plus draxols and dragons are very different. How many times do I have to say something?"

      Tam groaned. Again. “Linh, can I talk to you? Alone?”

      Linh nodded and the twins walked outside, closing the door behind them.

      The game continued without them.

      5 minutes later a scream came from outside the door.

      Linh’s scream.

      Here's another chapter. I don't really like it, but its fine. 

      -Quetzal

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      WHAT HAPPENED TO LINH?????!!!!!! I NEED TO KNOW!!!!!!!!



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    • I'm pretty sure no one will guess what Linh saw. Hint: It's nothing bad

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    • Did tam do something to his sister? Hmm...

      Unlikely, after all in the books he is very protective of her.

      -Lady kiddo

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    • i feel like i already know whats gonna happen im just not quiet sure 

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    • 71.135.221.239 wrote:
      i feel like i already know whats gonna happen im just not quiet sure 

      What? 

      -Quetzal?

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      -Lady kiddo

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    • 73.115.83.75 wrote:
      71.135.221.239 wrote:
      i feel like i already know whats gonna happen im just not quiet sure 
      What? 

      -Quetzal?

      Yeah, Im also stumped. All I know is she probably wont die, from what Quetzal said earlier

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    • 73.223.220.173 wrote:
      73.115.83.75 wrote:
      71.135.221.239 wrote:
      i feel like i already know whats gonna happen im just not quiet sure 
      What? 

      -Quetzal?

      Yeah, Im also stumped. All I know is she probably wont die, from what Quetzal said earlier

      I'm not entirely sure but if it was a happy scream, my guess is that they had a discussion about the draxol and Linh convinced Tam to get it or something. Again I'm not entirely sure and Quetzal I'm probably wrong soooo ya. 

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    • ⬆️  I'm most likely wrong

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    • You can still give it a go if you feel like it ; ) -Lady kiddo

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    • So Good!!

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    • This is awesome! And full of suspense. And cliffhangers. And super amazing writing. Love it!!!

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    • ^I know right! that's why I follow it

      -Lady kiddo

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    • Me too

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    • Same

      -booksbooksbooks

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    • 😱😱😱😱😱 oh no whats gonna happen!!???

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    • Chapter 55-Sophie


      Sophie jumped up. 

      Why was Linh screaming? Was she hurt? Was the Neverseen there? Was someone about to kill her?

      She ran to the door, but Keefe beat her to it. They looked and saw… Wylie?

      Linh hugging Wylie to be exact.

      Seriously?

      Sophie was about to scream. 

      Sophie yelled, “Linh! I thought something bad happened! It was Wylie? Seriously? You gave me a heart attack!”

      Linh faced her, “Sorry. I’m really sorry guys. And Wylie, why are you here?”

      “I had time. And I wanted to spend it with you,” he said. Linh beamed and hugged him again. Next to the couple, Tam stood, evidently grossed out. He caught Sophie’s eye, and silently mouthed, kill me already.

      Sophie took a deep breath. Her heart was still racing incredibly fast. She’d been terrified out of her mind for this? Next to her, Keefe watched the happy couple with a look that seemed like wistfulness. He glanced at Sophie and smiled at her. Something in his eyes made Sophie wonder what he was thinking.

      “Well come in you guys. We’re still playing Truth or Dare,” Sophie said, leading them into the room.

      Keefe laughed and said, “Wylie, you missed the dare that Sophie did. She looked hilarious. I wonder if I could show you…”

      Fitz smiled and said, “Wait. I can project a memory of Sophie’s dare. Let me just get the notebook.” Fitz dashed away, to bring more embarrassment into Sophie’s life.

      Were they teaming up on her?

      They seemed to be.

      Fitz came back in, with the memory projected on a page. Wylie just looked shocked when he saw it. Then he burst into laughter. Wylie of all people. One of the most serious people Sophie knew, was dying of laughter at a simple picture.

      “Wow...You look terrifying...and hilarious…” he gasped out.

      Sophie just ignored him. It really wasn’t that funny.

      Apparently, he thought differently. Everyone thought differently.

      ONE makeup disaster and no one would let her forget it. NO ONE.

      Seriously?

      “Sophie! Your turn!” Biana called.

      Sophie smiled evilly. Time for revenge. “Keefe! Truth or Dare?”

      Keefe grinned. “Truth!”

      “What? Nooo. You were supposed to choose Dare!”

      “Yeah, but you look so cute when you’re mad that I can’t resist annoying you.”

      Sophie’s face burned. Ugh. Why did Keefe have to be so irritating? “Fine. Then who’s your crush?”

      Here's another chapter! Yeah, it was Wylie. I was debating on wether to make it the Neverseen, or something bad like a mind break, but then I felt bad for them. I have to learn that they're only characters.

      -Quetzal

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    • I love this!! I totally didn't think it was Wylie I guess I was wrong. I'm just glad it was nothing bad

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    • YAY THE OBLIVION SHALL END!

      great job!

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    • Bam! Please FeDex some SoKeefe wrote:
      YAY THE OBLIVION SHALL END!

      great job!

      Okay, now I'm feeling bad about the next chapter. Great.

      -Quetzal

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    • I have a feeling I know what keefe's answer will be and Sophie will be shocked

      -Lady kiddo

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    • 96.231.104.234 wrote:
      I have a feeling I know what keefe's answer will be and Sophie will be shocked

      -Lady kiddo

      feel free to share it. im stumped. he can either say the truth or he can lie. If he lies im stumped

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    • OH NO IS KEEFE GONNA BAIL AND SAY BIANA? CAUSE IF HE DOES I SWEAR...

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    • 73.115.83.75 wrote:
      Bam! Please FeDex some SoKeefe wrote:
      YAY THE OBLIVION SHALL END!

      great job!

      Okay, now I'm feeling bad about the next chapter. Great.

      -Quetzal

      Oh no... Does that mean Keefe Lies and Sophie stays oblivious?

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    • Guys, right now, I'm feeling really guilty about what happens. So I'm just going to warn you, for all of the people who are hoping Sokeefe happens right now, sorry. But maybe something else will happen. 

      -Quetzal

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    • WAIT WILL KEEFE ACTUALLY CONFESS AND THEN SOPHIE BAILS AND SAY SHE LIKES FITZ? CAUSE IF THAT HAPPENS SOPHIE I’M WARNING YOU...

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    • ORRRRRRRRRRRR

      IS KEEFE GONNA PICK THAT EXACT MOMENT TO MANIFEST ANOTHER ABILITY? CAUSE IF THAT HAPPENS...

      Then I might actually be happy and forgive you xD

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    • Nope! Not the second one!

      -Quetzal

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    • Oh shoot you didn't deny their first theory and don't feel bad, I knew it was a long shot, but just because oblivion ends doesn't mean she coffessess liking him!

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    • 73.115.83.75 wrote: Nope! Not the second one!

      -Quetzal

      I wrote 3 theories...do you mean it’s not the one that Sophie bails or it’s not the one where Keefe gets a new power?

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    • “Then nothing embarrassing. No kissing, no confessing crushes, nothing like that.”

      “Truth or Dare is meant to be embarrassing. That is literally its whole purpose!”

      “No kissing. No crush confessing,” Foster said stubbornly.

      “Fiiine. You’re taking all the fun out of this,” Biana said grumpily. She perked up again quickly though. “Then I’m going first!”

      What happened to that?

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    • 107.3.182.19 wrote:

      “Then nothing embarrassing. No kissing, no confessing crushes, nothing like that.”

      “Truth or Dare is meant to be embarrassing. That is literally its whole purpose!”

      “No kissing. No crush confessing,” Foster said stubbornly.

      “Fiiine. You’re taking all the fun out of this,” Biana said grumpily. She perked up again quickly though. “Then I’m going first!”

      What happened to that?

      XD I JUST REMEMBERED THAT

      Typical Sophie, breaking her own rules

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    • Yeah, I made her break her own rules on purpose. Sophie's broken pretty much every law in existance, so it isn't a stretch.

      -Quetzal

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    • 73.115.83.75 wrote: Yeah, I made her break her own rules on purpose. Sophie's broken pretty much every law in existance, so it isn't a stretch.

      -Quetzal

      True, true

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    • Sorry I haven't commented in a few days. I'm on vacation and haven't had much extra time. Anyway, I just read all these. These were my reactions in order:

      Devin is sooo cute!! Haha he was scared of Foster. No!!!! Her beautiful makeover!!

      Yay!!! Edric gets a new home!! Yay for Linh!! And Tam too!! I know he'll secretly love it. Yay!!

      NO LINH NO NO NO NO NO LINH BETTER BE OKAY AND IF SHE'S NOT I WILL BE SAD AT YOU FOREVER!!!!

      Oh my gosh Wylie you gave us all a heart attack. But it's okay because Linh is okay and also yay more WyLinh!!

      Hehe it's payback time!! Muahahahahha!! Oh. My. Gosh. Foster!!! Why?!? No!! Why? This is going to be so awkward and noooooo and I'm so glad Quetzal promised no ships because of dares but still urgggghhhh!! What the heck, Foster?!

      Love it as always!! I'm getting home tomorrow so I can be checking every day again.

      Oh and also my last comment was about the cover. Your fanfic is perfect. 😂

      (--Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn)

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    • (No DARES to start ships it said nothing about truths)

      -Lady kiddo

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    • Chapter 56-Keefe


      “Then who’s your crush?”

      Keefe blinked. Once. Twice.

      She did not just ask that. No way.

      He looked at everyone. They had many emotions, ranging from sympathy to curiosity to satisfaction. The last one was Tam’s obviously. He must enjoy watching Keefe be humiliated.

      But no. He had to answer.

      Did he?

      “I thought you said no crush confessing,” he said.

      Sophie shrugged. “I’m fine with it when it comes to you getting embarrassed.”

      “That isn’t fair!” He knew he sounded like a 3-year-old but he couldn’t answer this. It wasn’t that he didn’t want to tell Sophie, because he knew one day he’d have to tell her. It was the fact that he didn’t want to pressure her by telling her in front of all her friends. She had to make her own choices. Choices that probably didn’t include him.

      Sophie shrugged. “All’s fair in love and war.”

      “Huh?” Sometimes Sophie blurted out weird human stuff. If anything, it made him like her more. But no! Don’t think that, he told himself. Only friends.

      Sophie sighed. “Human reference. It doesn’t matter. Now quit stalling!”

      He took a deep breath, and said, “I would’ve thought you’d want to get revenge on me for the makeup disaster.”

      Did he just say that?

      Yes. Yes, he did.

      Now everyone just looked surprised. They probably didn’t anticipate this. Even he didn’t anticipate this! The stuff that came out of his mouth…

      Sophie just looked startled. She seemed to be choosing.

      “Well...You seriously deserve revenge...How do you manage to make me change my mind so quickly?” Sophie demanded.

      “So that’s a yes?” Keefe asked.

      “Yes! So here’s the dare: You can’t wear any hair products for the next two weeks.” Sophie said smiling.

      “Woah, woah, woah. Two weeks? That's a little long. Your makeup disaster only lasted for 10 minutes. Are you sure that's fair?"

      “Oh, you’re right,” Sophie said. “You also have to dye your hair blue for the rest of today.”

      “But Sooophiiieee….” Keefe whined. Sophie ignored him. 

      Keefe sighed as Biana made him drink an elixir that turned his hair the same shade as his eyes. Keefe was being tortured. Not even joking.

      He was cut off by Della walking in. “Who wants cinnacream?” she asked happily.

      Everyone forgot about Truth or Dare and grabbed the warm mugs of cinnamony liquid. Keefe sipped his slowly. It was amazing. He had to hand it to Della; she was great at making this. 

      When they were done, Linh asked, “Can we play Two Truths and a Lie? I’ve never played it before but Tam says it’s fun.” 

      Tam? Said something was fun? That didn’t seem like him. Linh ignored Tam’s glares and repeated, “So can we?”

      Truth or Dare was forgotten, and everyone gathered for Two Truths and a Lie. “Me first!” Dex exclaimed. “Um...I once pulled a prank on Dame Alina, I killed a living being, I used to have a crush on Marella.”

      Linh said, “Ooh the killing a living being one is a lie! You would never kill someone.”

      Sophie argued, “It’s the prank one. Dex has never pranked Alina. Only Keefe has.”

      Marella burst out laughing. “You guys are hopeless. Dex never had a crush on me. And vice versa. I mean, come on! We’re only friends!”

      Dex nodded. “Marella’s right. I never liked her in that way. Actually, she was always like my younger sister.”

      “Um, no. You were like my younger brother.”

      “I’m older than you!” Dex protested.

      “You don’t act like it,” Marella shot back.

      Sophie interrupted. “Are any of you guys going to ask about the killing a living being thing? Dex! You actually killed someone?”

      Dex reddened. “So when we were at the Forbidden cities to get Keefe cookies and plant some cameras, I accidentally stepped on a bug or two. Sorry.”

      Sophie just stared. “You know, that isn’t that bad. Humans kill bugs all the time. And wild animals too. And other humans.”

      Biana explained, “It’s bad for elves. The whole balance of nature thing.”

      Sophie nodded, understanding. “Ohhh. Got it. Kinda. Actually, not really. So the Marella thing was a lie?”

      Dex nodded. Marella said, “My turn! I never want to get married, I hate indigoobers, and phoenixes are my favorite animals.”

      “Well, the phoenix one seems true…” Fitz said aloud.

      Keefe nodded. He already knew which one was false. Marella had told him many times before. “The married one is false. You want to get married one day. I know because you told me about a million times before.”

      Marella shrugged. “Keefe is right. I do want to get married.”

      The game continued like that. Surprisingly Marella guessed most of them correctly. They weren’t keeping track, but if they were, she would have won.

      When they got bored, Biana stood. “Makeover time!”

      Here's another chapter! Yeah, did you really think Keefe would actually admit it? He'd find a way to get out of it. Which he did. Sorry to the Sokeefe shippers, you'll have to wait.

      -Quetzal

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    • I wonder how the makeover will turn out?

      -Lady kiddo

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      -booksbooksbooks

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    • im a sokeefe shipper and im kinda glad keefe didnt admit he liked sophie because.... well... i dont know it probably wouldnt be as romantic and they would say it infront of fitz.... soo.. ya. btw i am reall curious as to how the makeovers will go :) keep up the good writing!!!!!

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      -Lady kiddo

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    • 73.115.83.75 wrote:
      Yeah, I made her break her own rules on purpose. Sophie's broken pretty much every law in existance, so it isn't a stretch.

      -Quetzal

      That makes sense(I don't get why I didn't think of that before posting.) 

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    • THANK YOU!! I was so scared he'd do something stupid like confess it or lie... Way to pull through, Keefe!!

      And I can completely see Dex being devastated about stepping on a bug... If Linh stepped on a bug she would be so sad...

      I love it!! 👌🏻👍🏻

      (--Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn)

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    • Silveny-is-my-Spirit-Animal wrote:
      THANK YOU!! I was so scared he'd do something stupid like confess it or lie... Way to pull through, Keefe!!

      And I can completely see Dex being devastated about stepping on a bug... If Linh stepped on a bug she would be so sad...

      I love it!! 👌🏻👍🏻

      (--Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn)

      totally agree

      -booksbooksbooks

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    • Chapter 57-Sophie


      “Makeover time!”

      Great. She had to wear more makeup. And itchy dresses. And weird hairstyles.

      But this was Biana. Biana had a way of making anyone look beautiful without adding too much extra. Hopefully, she’d go easy on Sophie.

      Marella, Linh, and Sophie followed Biana to the bathroom, where dozens of makeup supplies were arranged. Biana smiled. “Who wants to go first?”

      Marella immediately pointed at Linh. Linh shrugged and said, “I will.”

      Biana got to work. 5 minutes later she was done. Linh looked prettier than before, which was really saying something. Some of her hair had been twisted into a small bun, but the rest was waved a little and cascaded down her back. Linh didn’t need much makeup, only some eyeliner and lip gloss, but it made her face look stunning. She also wore a silvery-blue dress that sparkled, like there were stars on it. Linh smiled at Biana and said, “Thank you. I look better than I ever thought I could look. You have a lot of talent.”

      Biana smiled back happily. “You’re welcome. And you’re naturally pretty. I didn’t need to do much. Now...Marella! Your turn!”

      Marella groaned but listened. A few minutes later she was done too. The tips of her hair were pink, and the braids had stayed in her brushed hair. A little lip gloss and eyeliner were added, along with some pale pink eyeshadow. Her dress was rose gold and had pink details, the same shade as her hair tips. Marella touched her hair. “You know, I think I’m going to keep the pink. It looks cool.”

      Biana laughed and said, “Here. This is the bottle for when the color starts to fade. It looks good on you.” She handed a bottle of liquid to Marella.

      Then she turned to Sophie. “Your turn! I have the perfect dress for you!”

      Sophie braced herself. Biana thankfully only added a little makeup that Sophie knew of. Sophie was now forever going to hate makeup, but she couldn’t avoid it now. Her hair got brushed and she put on a dress. Finally, she looked at herself in the mirror.

      “Wow,” she said, breathless. Her hair had been curled and some of it had been pulled back. A rose clip was in it, glittering in her hair. Her dress was also red, with rose decorations in it. It was long, but not so long that she would trip over it. And the makeup was barely noticeable. Only a trace of lip gloss. Maybe some eyeliner, but that was it. All the makeup from the earlier dare was removed. “Thank you for being a better makeup artist than Keefe,” she said jokingly.

      Biana grinned. “Everyone’s better than Keefe at makeup. Let me do my makeover, and then let’s play some other things.”

      Soon Biana was ready. Her hair had been curled and had braids and beads woven into it. She wore some lip gloss, eyeshadow, and eyeliner, but other than that, she had no makeup. Her dress was violet with a turquoise sash and designs. She smiled at them. “Okay, guys. I’m done. Now, let’s play a game with the others.” Biana opened the door and called out, “We’re done! Do you guys want to play Seek and Sneak?”

      The boys stared at them. Linh went to Wylie and joked, “You can stop looking now.” Wylie laughed and nodded, holding Linh’s hand. They smiled at each other sweetly.

      Biana looked nervously at Dex. Dex was looking back at her in awe. Tam was also looking in their direction. 

      Sophie caught Keefe’s eye. He was staring at her with an expression she couldn’t read. She blushed and looked down. Why was Keefe looking at her like that?

      Marella just seemed bored. She played with the ends of her newly-dyed hair and proclaimed, “Are you guys done staring? Biana did a good job, but we need an answer. Do you want to play Seek and Sneak?”

      Fitz smirked at all the guys. “Well since I’m the only boy who appears to be able to talk, I’ll speak for them. Let’s play!”

      Here's another chpater. Please forgive me for knowing nothing about makeovers. I don't know anything about them, and I have no clue what people look good in, but I tried. Also Marella's hair has pink tips, which is based on something I remember seeing on the comment section on Marella's page. 

      -Quetzal

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    • I love this!! Hahaha!!!! the end is funny Lol😄 

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    • Thats amazing! Great job Quetzal >D<

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    • Wow I never would have guessed for biana to host a makeover like that knowing biana but I feel like I'm reading Shannon messenger 's books (is that a good compliment?)

      -Lady kiddo

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    • Actually, I think the makeovers were perfect!!

      And I also loved how much Fitz is improving. He's not acting too jealous, though I assume he still feels a bit weird. He's being a lot more mature, which I love and hope Shannon will include.

      Once again, it's perfect!! Right down to when Marella volunteered for Linh and Linh went along with it. And now I want Sophie to wear a red rose dress!!

      (--Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn)

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    • 64.113.177.66 wrote:
      If you like this FanFic, I also have a Fanfic, which you can acess here 

      https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1532640

      ^it IS pretty good

      -Lady kiddo

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    • Chapter 58-Keefe


      Wow. 

      Foster looked beautiful. Her golden hair fell down her back, and her dress suited her perfectly. Her eyes sparkled with gold flecks. 

      She was always gorgeous, but this...this was amazing.

      Fitz said, “Well since I’m the only boy who appears to be able to talk, I’ll speak for them. Let’s play!”

      Keefe snapped out of his stare. He must look so weird, looking at Foster like that. He said, “Yeah! I call the team captain!”

      Foster looked puzzled, with that adorable scrunch of her eyebrows. “What’s Seek and Sneak?”

      Dex replied, “It's like base quest but different. You have these shooters that shoot foam pellets. You divide into teams and try to hit everyone on the other team. So you sneak around and try to get people. If a person gets hit 5 times, they are out. If everyone on a team gets out, they lose. The shooters count the hits you make. We would play Base Quest, but we got distracted and now it’s dark. So this is like indoor Base Quest kind of.”

      Foster nodded. “I get it. But...will we have to play like this?” She gestured at her dress. It would be hard to play in that…

      Biana thought for a moment. “Let me get you a change of clothes.”

      The girls left to change. When they came back they were in clothes that they could actually play in. Sophie still looked amazing, in her stylish red tunic.

      Biana took charge as normal. “Okay, so Keefe wants to be Team Captain. I’ll be the other. There’s an odd number, but I’m thinking boys against girls. Should powers be allowed?”

      Marella nodded. “Yeah, they should.”

      “Powers are allowed! Here are your shooters,” Biana said, passing out a bunch of thin metal cylinders. “2 minutes to hide and come up with plans. Ready, set, go!”

      Everyone scattered. Keefe joined the rest of his team under the staircase. He suggested a plan.  “Each of us can go after someone. I’ll take Foster!”

      Tam shrugged. “I’m getting Linh. Payback.” 

      Dex said, “I’ll go after Marella. Wylie and Fitz can get Biana. She can turn invisible so it’ll be harder to get her.”

      Everyone nodded and split up again. 2 minutes were over. 

      Immediately Keefe crept out of his hiding spot. He looked left then right. Foster could track his thoughts but he could feel her emotions if she got near. And there it was!

      Excitement.

      A lot of it. Definitely Foster.

      He realized it was coming from another room. He quickly snuck there. The door was open. And Foster was in the room, hiding behind a bed. She seemed to be tracking someone’s thoughts. He had to work quickly before she found him. He brought up his shooter and pressed the button many times. But right then Foster had found him. She jumped up and ran, her eyes wide. He only managed to hit her two times before she disappeared upstairs. He followed.

      He had to find her again. Three more hits and she would be out. And then his job would be done. He heard a noise next to him. He whirled around. Linh. She was hiding behind a wall, but he saw a flash of long silver hair. He shot at her. One hit. But then she shot back. He got hit. Linh had better aim than he expected.

      The game continued. Soon only Fitz, Biana, Sophie, and he was left. Sophie only needed one more hit, as did Fitz to be out. Biana needed three more and Keefe needed two.

      Keefe was looking for the other team. Suddenly Fitz’s scream echoed in the house. Fitz was out. It was him against Sophie and Biana. And it would be hard. Sophie was still mad at him about the makeup disaster and Biana was a Vanisher.

      He looked in another room. Sophie. In a split second, the button was pressed. Sophie screamed, “Keefe! I’m gonna kill you!” Keefe smirked and ran out before Biana could find him.

      Another noise. He shot blindly in the direction he guessed Biana was in. He only got one hit. Biana got two.

      “NO!” he yelled.

      Game over.

      The girls had won.

      Here's another chapter. A whole chapter devoted to a game. Eh.

      -Quetzal

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    • Yay!!! Girls win!! 🥳

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    • GIRL POWER!!!

      -booksbooksbooks

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    • I love smiling like an idiot.

      (--Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn)

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    • Also guys, I'm now stuck between Marellinh and Lylie. One moment Marellinh seems better, but then I randomly go on the Lylie page and I change my mind. I used to ship Lylie, but now I realized just how amazing Marellinh is and I just don't know! Lylie is sweet and adorable, Marellinh balances each other out and brings out the best in each other. I CAN'T CHOOSE!

      Please help me out here.

      -Quetzal

      P.S. This fanfic will stay Lylie, even if I convert to Marellinh

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    • Girl power oh yeah!

      -Lady kiddo

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    • 73.115.83.75 wrote:
      Also guys, I'm now stuck between Marellinh and Lylie. One moment Marellinh seems better, but then I randomly go on the Lylie page and I change my mind. I used to ship Lylie, but now I realized just how amazing Marellinh is and I just don't know! Lylie is sweet and adorable, Marellinh balances each other out and brings out the best in each other. I CAN'T CHOOSE!

      Please help me out here.

      -Quetzal

      P.S. This fanfic will stay Lylie, even if I convert to Marellinh

      I don't know either. Marellinh is great, and Lylie is too. It's totally up to you. (Personally I find Lylie better, but that's just me.)

      -Girl Who Dropped Bronte on His Grumpy Butt​​​​​​​

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    • i choose lylie but its up to you. we all have differant opinions.

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    • Lylie because it would be weird if it was Marelinh. 

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    • I prefer Marellinh because the Lylie age gap makes me uncomfortable - it's an adult dating a minor. I know that elves have an indefinite lifespan, but two adults dating each other is a much different dynamic than an adult dating a minor. I can see how someone would want Linh and Wylie to get together in the future when they're both adults (maybe 19 and 22) but for now I don't ship them.

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    • 64.113.177.66 wrote:
      Lylie because it would be weird if it was Marelinh. 

      What's weird about Marellinh? 

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    • I personally say Lylie

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    • WyLinh!!! I don't see how the age gap is so weird to people. It's only like 4 years.

      I know someone who got married to a guy who was 13 years younger than her. (It's... A little odd... But that doesn't matter because they were in love.)

      And of course I'm talking about when they're adults. I think Wylie and Linh have a deep connection and are perfect for each other.

      Even if Linh is 4 years younger, Wylie is (in my opinion) bot too old for her. If they got married at 22 and 26, that would actually be 100% normal.

      (--Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn)

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    • (Wow that sounded kinda cheesy... 😂😊😄)

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    • Stellarlune123 wrote:
      I prefer Marellinh because the Lylie age gap makes me uncomfortable - it's an adult dating a minor. I know that elves have an indefinite lifespan, but two adults dating each other is a much different dynamic than an adult dating a minor. I can see how someone would want Linh and Wylie to get together in the future when they're both adults (maybe 19 and 22) but for now I don't ship them.

      I prefer Marellinh but for different reasons. Sure, the age gap is kinda...😐 with him being an adult, but honestly (I always forget how old Linh is. Sixteen right? Ima go with that) if Linh is sixteen and that makes him 19/20 it's not that bad. Like my cousin just turned 18. I still see her as the 13 year old I remember playing hide and seek with. 18/19/20 isn't too old so it doesn't really disgust me. 

      HOWEVER

      marrelinh is just straight up adorable. Kotlc needs more LGTBQ*can't find the plus on my keyboard* representation, but even if it didn't, Marelinh would still be much needed and shipped by me. I mean, we have a cinoman role, who is the holiest being ever, and we got our hotheaded stubborn PURELY AWESOME girl, how is that not a perfect match? It honestly kinda gives me some Sundew x Willow vibes *wof*.....

      sorry for the rant!

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    • I personally think that Keeper Of The Lost Cities is a family friendly book series. There are no cuss words or anthing that would prevent the reader from being allowed to read it. I think if you shipped Marelinh.....It would be unrealistic, because Shannon wouldn't do that. It would make her books unfamily friendly. We are allowed to have some clean books in our life. 

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    • 64.113.177.66 wrote:
      I personally think that Keeper Of The Lost Cities is a family friendly book series. There are no cuss words or anthing that would prevent the reader from being allowed to read it. I think if you shipped Marelinh.....It would be unrealistic, because Shannon wouldn't do that. It would make her books unfamily friendly. We are allowed to have some clean books in our life. 

      Um what? Okay, LGBTQ+ isn't unfamily-friendly. It's a part of life. I sadly think that Shannon will probably not intoduce LGBTQ+ elves because people will stop reading it, but if she did it would be great. Many people would stop reading it for religious reasons, but in reality, LGBTQ+ romance isn't any more "unfamily friendly" than normal romance. So far, people have mostly overcome racial differences and think discriminating for that is wrong, but what about other things? People are people whether they're straight or not. There is no point in delaying the inevitable, because at one point, everyone will accept that people are people. If people don't want to read books with LGBTQ+ then they miss out. They'll never get to experience the last few Rick Riordan books, or Magnus Chase. They can't read Wings of Fire. Those are just a few examples of amazing books that have LGBTQ+. I'm sorry if you disagree with me, but can you please just try to understand that LGBTQ+ people are still people? If they appear in a book, that doesn't make the book automatically not clean. 

      -Quetzal

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    • I didn't mean to offend anyone. I think your comment was rude because it acted like I discriminating against them. (Which I did not) I was just trying to say that Shannon would'nt put anything like that in her books because it would prevent people from reading it. You actually agreed with me in your post. ?????? Nothing against you, but I feel like you really disraspected me and I am done reading this Fanfic. 

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    • 64.113.177.66 wrote:
      I didn't mean to offend anyone. I think your comment was rude because it acted like I discriminating against them. (Which I did not) I was just trying to say that Shannon would'nt put anything like that in her books because it would prevent people from reading it. You actually agreed with me in your post. ?????? Nothing against you, but I feel like you really disraspected me and I am done reading this Fanfic. 

      Oh no I'm so sorry. I wasn't talking to you, specifically, I was just really fed up at many people. I get it, why you don't want to read this fanfic anymore, and after this, I completely think you can stop, but I just want to say I'm sorry. Let me repeat, I wasn't talking to you specifically, I was talking to anyone who thinks that. Oh wow, I'm so sorry and if you're reading this, please know that I didn't mean it like that. I'm not trying to get you to start reading this again, because you're right, I was a little rude, and I didn't mean it like that, but I'm so sorry, and please know I didn't mean it to be mean or rude or disrespective. I never wanted to target you or anything like that. Once again, I'm really sorry.

      - Quetzal

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    • I accept your apology and I will consider reading this fanfic. I didn't realize your weren't targeting me, but when you post stuff you need to make sure you ask your self questions. 

      Would I say this to my mom?

      How is this going to make someone feel?

      Is this what they meant?

      you can make it up to my by letting Sophie and Keefe kiss in the next chapter. lol :) 

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    • Bam! Please FeDex some SoKeefe wrote:
      Stellarlune123 wrote:
      I prefer Marellinh because the Lylie age gap makes me uncomfortable - it's an adult dating a minor. I know that elves have an indefinite lifespan, but two adults dating each other is a much different dynamic than an adult dating a minor. I can see how someone would want Linh and Wylie to get together in the future when they're both adults (maybe 19 and 22) but for now I don't ship them.
      I prefer Marellinh but for different reasons. Sure, the age gap is kinda...😐 with him being an adult, but honestly (I always forget how old Linh is. Sixteen right? Ima go with that) if Linh is sixteen and that makes him 19/20 it's not that bad. Like my cousin just turned 18. I still see her as the 13 year old I remember playing hide and seek with. 18/19/20 isn't too old so it doesn't really disgust me. 

      HOWEVER

      marrelinh is just straight up adorable. Kotlc needs more LGTBQ*can't find the plus on my keyboard* representation, but even if it didn't, Marelinh would still be much needed and shipped by me. I mean, we have a cinoman role, who is the holiest being ever, and we got our hotheaded stubborn PURELY AWESOME girl, how is that not a perfect match? It honestly kinda gives me some Sundew x Willow vibes *wof*.....

      sorry for the rant!

      I agree with after the HOWEVER(all of it including the wings of fire reference)

      -booksbooksbooks

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    • 73.115.83.75 wrote:
      64.113.177.66 wrote:
      I personally think that Keeper Of The Lost Cities is a family friendly book series. There are no cuss words or anthing that would prevent the reader from being allowed to read it. I think if you shipped Marelinh.....It would be unrealistic, because Shannon wouldn't do that. It would make her books unfamily friendly. We are allowed to have some clean books in our life. 
      Um what? Okay, LGBTQ+ isn't unfamily-friendly. It's a part of life. I sadly think that Shannon will probably not intoduce LGBTQ+ elves because people will stop reading it, but if she did it would be great. Many people would stop reading it for religious reasons, but in reality, LGBTQ+ romance isn't any more "unfamily friendly" than normal romance. So far, people have mostly overcome racial differences and think discriminating for that is wrong, but what about other things? People are people whether they're straight or not. There is no point in delaying the inevitable, because at one point, everyone will accept that people are people. If people don't want to read books with LGBTQ+ then they miss out. They'll never get to experience the last few Rick Riordan books, or Magnus Chase. They can't read Wings of Fire. Those are just a few examples of amazing books that have LGBTQ+. I'm sorry if you disagree with me, but can you please just try to understand that LGBTQ+ people are still people? If they appear in a book, that doesn't make the book automatically not clean. 

      -Quetzal

      yes yes yes!*squeals*

      -booksbooksbooks

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    • no offence to anyone of course who's religion doesnt allow them to and anyone who doesnt like the idea of that

      -booksbooksbooks 

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    • Awww so cute lylie!

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    • 99.250.193.217 wrote: no offence to anyone of course who's religion doesnt allow them to and anyone who doesnt like the idea of that

      -booksbooksbooks 

      Ya my religion doesn’t support LGBTQ+ and when I say that most people think I discriminate against it, but I do not. Like someone said, people are people, you should love and treat everybody the same, no matter what. I may not agree with it, but if someone is LGBTQ+, it won’t change a thing of how I treat them.

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    • 64.113.177.66 wrote:
      I didn't mean to offend anyone. I think your comment was rude because it acted like I discriminating against them. (Which I did not) I was just trying to say that Shannon would'nt put anything like that in her books because it would prevent people from reading it. You actually agreed with me in your post. ?????? Nothing against you, but I feel like you really disraspected me and I am done reading this Fanfic. 

      Yeah, if she did put lgbtq in her books, it would prevent some people from reading it (like me), and she obviously doesn't want that, so she has to make it acceptable to the entire public. If she did put lgbtq in it, it would appeal to some people,which is good, but then other people would not like that, so only some people would read (if that makes sense?)

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    • SuddenlyFriedEggs wrote:

      64.113.177.66 wrote:
      I didn't mean to offend anyone. I think your comment was rude because it acted like I discriminating against them. (Which I did not) I was just trying to say that Shannon would'nt put anything like that in her books because it would prevent people from reading it. You actually agreed with me in your post. ?????? Nothing against you, but I feel like you really disraspected me and I am done reading this Fanfic. 

      Yeah, if she did put lgbtq in her books, it would prevent some people from reading it (like me), and she obviously doesn't want that, so she has to make it acceptable to the entire public. If she did put lgbtq in it, it would appeal to some people,which is good, but then other people would not like that, so only some people would read (if that makes sense?)

      I get it

      And ya, same

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    • My friend wont read anything with LGBTQ+ with it, she even stopped reading WOF because of it. I personally am fine with reading about it, and wont discriminate against it. I do sadly think Shannon Messenger would never add it to her books, though.

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    • 73.223.220.173 wrote:
      My friend wont read anything with LGBTQ+ with it, she even stopped reading WOF because of it. I personally am fine with reading about it, and wont discriminate against it. I do sadly think Shannon Messenger would never add it to her books, though.

      oK Im just going to add to this, Me and my friend are in a religion that does not support LGBTQ+

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    • Same, but I support LGBTQ+ Nobody should be judged on by who they like or what they like. Let people be people, and don't hate on others if they do. I'm not directing this at anybody but just, don't be rude to people if they are LGBTQ+ 

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      SuddenlyFriedEggs wrote:

      64.113.177.66 wrote:
      I didn't mean to offend anyone. I think your comment was rude because it acted like I discriminating against them. (Which I did not) I was just trying to say that Shannon would'nt put anything like that in her books because it would prevent people from reading it. You actually agreed with me in your post. ?????? Nothing against you, but I feel like you really disraspected me and I am done reading this Fanfic. 
      Yeah, if she did put lgbtq in her books, it would prevent some people from reading it (like me), and she obviously doesn't want that, so she has to make it acceptable to the entire public. If she did put lgbtq in it, it would appeal to some people,which is good, but then other people would not like that, so only some people would read (if that makes sense?)
      I get it

      And ya, same

      I understand it too, but I very slightly disagree. I have a habit of doing this so ignore me if you want, but I will feel like a terrible person if this is left unsaid. You said Shannon wouldn't put it in her books because people wouldn't read it. That's the problem. The fact that LGTBQ*still cant find the plus sign gah* representation would make people stop reading something is the problem. If people ignore it and stop doing things because of representation, our world will never get better. Maybe it's you're religion restricting you. Call me blasphemous, call me disgusting, atrocious, but despite my religion being against LGTBQ*insert plus* people, I will always support it. Why? Because my religion like most others has a rule. A rule of human nature. It's called be kind. And sorry if this offends you, report me and do as you wish, but I'm really sure that being kind is the most important rule of all.

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    • So actually my dad told me that LGBTQ+ books are banned in a few places and that that's why a lot of authors don't include it in their books. KotLC is already being sold in those places, and Shannon probably wants to respect those rules while still letting people in those areas read the books. I don't know if she'd include it even if it was allowed, but that's just a thought.

      It might be in part that some people would stop reading her books because of religious beliefs or something else, though.

      My religion doesn't support LGBTQ+ either, but I will still treat you the exact same way as I'd treat anyone else.

      I hope this didn't make anybody upset, I just wanted to clarify.

      (--Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn)

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    • Silveny-is-my-Spirit-Animal wrote:
      So actually my dad told me that LGBTQ+ books are banned in a few places and that that's why a lot of authors don't include it in their books. KotLC is already being sold in those places, and Shannon probably wants to respect those rules while still letting people in those areas read the books. I don't know if she'd include it even if it was allowed, but that's just a thought.

      It might be in part that some people would stop reading her books because of religious beliefs or something else, though.

      My religion doesn't support LGBTQ+ either, but I will still treat you the exact same way as I'd treat anyone else.

      I hope this didn't make anybody upset, I just wanted to clarify.

      (--Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn)

      Okay, as I said, the fact that people ban that is the problem and I won't stop being loud about rights, but as I can't speak for everyone, you didn't upset me. I just have strong opinions. I won't stop but I can tell you are a good person.

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    • 64.113.177.66 wrote:
      I accept your apology and I will consider reading this fanfic. I didn't realize your weren't targeting me, but when you post stuff you need to make sure you ask your self questions. 

      Would I say this to my mom?

      How is this going to make someone feel?

      Is this what they meant?

      you can make it up to my by letting Sophie and Keefe kiss in the next chapter. lol :) 

      I know, and once again, I'm sorry. I seriously wish I could go back in time and undo all of what I said, because I really didn't want to disrespect you. And yes, I should have asked myself those questions, and I will every time now. Although I'm not so sure I could tell my mom that because I don't know if she supports LGBTQ+ or not. But anyway, the point is, I was rude, and I'm sorry. And I don't think I can write the sokeefe chapter, but, I'll post the next chapter right now. Sorry it's a little late, I had a class.

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    • Chapter 59-Sophie


      She heard Keefe’s yell all the way from the other side of the house. All the people already tagged were in Biana’s room, watching the remaining players. 

      Biana and Keefe ran up to everyone else, laughing. “Your scream. It was so loud!” Biana said.

      Keefe laughed. “I know. You scared me!” He looked at Foster. “At least I tagged Lady Fos-Boss here!”

      Sophie blushed and ducked her head. She couldn’t even stay mad at him for too long. Keefe smirked and said, “Who wants to play Make Foster Blush? I’m already the clear winner, but maybe you’ll get close.”

      Sophie glared at him. “Um no. No one is playing that.”

      “Actually,” Marella said, “I want to try that.”

      Tam half shrugged, but he looked interested in the idea. Sophie wanted to scream, “NO!”

      Biana and Dex nodded, betraying Sophie’s trust that her best friends wouldn’t participate.

      Sophie closed her eyes. Do not blush. Do not blush. Do not blush, she mentally chanted.

      “Aaw, what are you doing Foster? Thinking about me?” Keefe teased. Sophie blushed. Aargh! Stop doing that!, she thought.

      Keefe laughed. “And I already got a point! Foster must think I’m special.”  Sophie’s cheeks reddened again. She hid her face in a pillow to avoid the game. “And another point for me! C’mon Foster, it can’t be that bad, can it?”

      “Yes it can,” Sophie mumbled. “We are done playing this game!”

      “Well, I guess I won! Told you!” Keefe proclaimed. 

      Marella smirked. “I didn’t even get a turn. You were too busy flirting. What can I expect?” She shook her head mockingly.

      Sophie ignored her burning face as she moved to sit between Dex and Linh. They didn’t annoy her much. 

      Dex leaned over. “When will you realize?” he whispered.

      Sophie looked at him, confused. “What do you mean?” she asked.

      Dex just looked exasperated. “You have to figure it out soon. It’s really getting obvious.”

      Sophie just shrugged. Everyone said stuff like that now. It made no sense. She heard Biana say to Linh and Wylie, “So how did you two get together? Full story, please. No details spared.”

      Suddenly Keefe yelled “Pillow Fight!”

      That was the last thing she heard before something smacked her in the face and she toppled backward.

      'H'ere's another chapter!

      ​​​​​​​-Quetzal

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    • SuddenlyFriedEggs wrote:

      64.113.177.66 wrote:
      I didn't mean to offend anyone. I think your comment was rude because it acted like I discriminating against them. (Which I did not) I was just trying to say that Shannon would'nt put anything like that in her books because it would prevent people from reading it. You actually agreed with me in your post. ?????? Nothing against you, but I feel like you really disraspected me and I am done reading this Fanfic. 

      Yeah, if she did put lgbtq in her books, it would prevent some people from reading it (like me), and she obviously doesn't want that, so she has to make it acceptable to the entire public. If she did put lgbtq in it, it would appeal to some people,which is good, but then other people would not like that, so only some people would read (if that makes sense?)

      It does

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    • Bam! Please FeDex some SoKeefe wrote:

      Silveny-is-my-Spirit-Animal wrote:
      So actually my dad told me that LGBTQ+ books are banned in a few places and that that's why a lot of authors don't include it in their books. KotLC is already being sold in those places, and Shannon probably wants to respect those rules while still letting people in those areas read the books. I don't know if she'd include it even if it was allowed, but that's just a thought.

      It might be in part that some people would stop reading her books because of religious beliefs or something else, though.

      My religion doesn't support LGBTQ+ either, but I will still treat you the exact same way as I'd treat anyone else.

      I hope this didn't make anybody upset, I just wanted to clarify.

      (--Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn)

      Okay, as I said, the fact that people ban that is the problem and I won't stop being loud about rights, but as I can't speak for everyone, you didn't upset me. I just have strong opinions. I won't stop but I can tell you are a good person.

      I know it's upsetting to a lot of people. That's what I meant. I wasn't saying I agree with the ban, I just meant that that's probably part of why Shannon hasn't included it. I think it's good that you stand up for what you believe. I was just telling you what I think might be going on. I really hope my previous comment didn't come off as negative- I was just trying to help.

      And thank you. 😊

      (--Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn)

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    • Also the new chapter made me grin like a crazy person again.

      My official new favorite game is Make Foster Blush. I can't wait for my turn. 😉

      It's great as always!!

      (--Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn)

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    • 99.250.193.217 wrote:
      Bam! Please FeDex some SoKeefe wrote:
      Stellarlune123 wrote:
      I prefer Marellinh because the Lylie age gap makes me uncomfortable - it's an adult dating a minor. I know that elves have an indefinite lifespan, but two adults dating each other is a much different dynamic than an adult dating a minor. I can see how someone would want Linh and Wylie to get together in the future when they're both adults (maybe 19 and 22) but for now I don't ship them.
      I prefer Marellinh but for different reasons. Sure, the age gap is kinda...😐 with him being an adult, but honestly (I always forget how old Linh is. Sixteen right? Ima go with that) if Linh is sixteen and that makes him 19/20 it's not that bad. Like my cousin just turned 18. I still see her as the 13 year old I remember playing hide and seek with. 18/19/20 isn't too old so it doesn't really disgust me. 

      HOWEVER

      marrelinh is just straight up adorable. Kotlc needs more LGTBQ*can't find the plus on my keyboard* representation, but even if it didn't, Marelinh would still be much needed and shipped by me. I mean, we have a cinoman role, who is the holiest being ever, and we got our hotheaded stubborn PURELY AWESOME girl, how is that not a perfect match? It honestly kinda gives me some Sundew x Willow vibes *wof*.....

      sorry for the rant!

      I agree with after the HOWEVER(all of it including the wings of fire reference)

      -booksbooksbooks

      I agree. Marellinh is adorable. 

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    • Chapter 60- Keefe


      Keefe watched as the pillow slammed into Sophie. She fell backward, onto a lavender chair. Slowly she took off the pillow and glared at him murderously. Keefe smirked at her. 

      Apparently, that was the final straw.

      Sophie grabbed another few pillows and hurled them at him with terrifying accuracy. They nailed him in the face and he stumbled back.

      Biana joined in the fight, grabbing a pink, glittery pillow that said, “Sparkles make everything better!” She threw it at Dex who stood there in shock for a moment, before flinging it back at her.

      Keefe felt another pillow nail him from behind. He whirled around and saw a shocked Tam.

      “Bangs Boy!”

      Tam sputtered, “I- It wasn’t me! Linh!”

      Keefe looked for Linh, finding her on the opposite side of the room. He turned to Tam disbelievingly. 

      Tam yelled, “You are going to pay for this!” He grabbed a deep purple pillow and hurled it at his twin. It nailed Marella on the face.

      Marella looked at Tam calmly, and suddenly threw a flurry of pillows at him. Surprised, Tam fell back, buried under a mountain of neon pink and purple pillows.

      Wylie laughed but got pinned on the side by Dex and Sophie. Keefe grinned and grabbed a few white pillows that got thrown at Biana.

      Tam had emerged from his fluffy enclosure and threw half a dozen pillows at his twin. Linh just laughed and ducked behind a couch.

      Tam met Wylie’s gaze and they nodded at the same time. They snuck up on Linh and unleashed an attack on her. Linh screamed in surprise and retaliated.

      After a while, the Great Pillow War was over. Linh was the best at it, and eventually, everyone had teamed up on her.

      They still couldn’t get her.

      They spent the rest of the night talking about school and other random stuff.  And eating mallowmelt, because a sleepover without mallowmelt isn’t a real sleepover. No Neverseen or anything. Just a day as normal teenagers. 

      Well, kind of normal.

      Here's another chapter! And I know, its an entire chapter dedicated to a pillow fight

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    • Oh, also, that was by me, Quetzal

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    • I love your writing!!! The only thing I would change is writing longer chapters. You write Fluff, which is amazing by the way, but it has taken 11 chapter to get through a sleepover and I am unsure if it is done yet. Maybe ( I am saying this selficiously) posting 2 chapters a day might be better, to keep the story moving??? Idk. I really like the chapters. Your such a great writer. I would love if you would view and give your opinion on my fanfic. 

      https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1532640

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    • 64.113.177.66 wrote:
      I love your writing!!! The only thing I would change is writing longer chapters. You write Fluff, which is amazing by the way, but it has taken 11 chapter to get through a sleepover and I am unsure if it is done yet. Maybe ( I am saying this selficiously) posting 2 chapters a day might be better, to keep the story moving??? Idk. I really like the chapters. Your such a great writer. I would love if you would view and give your opinion on my fanfic. 

      https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1532640

      I post shorter chapters, because I want this to last until Unlocked comes out, so it isn't a bunch of chapters a day and the story finishes in a week. I want this to last people for months, and I've calculated how many chapters there will probably be in this (150-170), although my math is probably wrong.

      Also, sure, I'll read it. I think I already read your fanfic, and I really liked it though.

      -Quetzal

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    • ^Oh, and one more thing, I've probably read most people's fanfics, I just don't sign off with this name in anything but this fanfic. So I've probably commented something, but stayed anonymous.

      -Quetzal

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    • 150-170? That is a REALLY long fanfic! I really like it though, so keep up the good work!

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    • 73.223.220.173 wrote:
      150-170? That is a REALLY long fanfic! I really like it though, so keep up the good work!

      Pretty sure it's going to be only, like 150 chapters, but remember, my chapter's are pretty short. I try to get them at least a page long on a google docs, but they're still short.

      -Quetzal

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    • I actually like them being short because then the story lasts longer. I do hope it lasts all the way until Unlocked comes out. Also, I can see Linh dominating in a pillow fight. 😂👌🏻

      (--Foster-Keefe-For-The-Wynn)

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      Chapter 50-Sophie


      It was almost time for the sleepover. 2 minutes away from 5 to be exact. Sophie rushed around her room, grabbing things. She shoved everything into a ridiculously small bag and ran out the door. She teleported to Everglen, noticing that she was the last one. 

      “It’s 5:01 Sophie!” Biana called out.

      “One minute late isn’t a lot!” Sophie said. She walked toward Biana. Fitz, Keefe, Dex, Tam, Linh, and Marella were also there. 

      “It’s still late! Well anyway, we’re all here. I would invite Wylie, but he said he was busy today,” Biana explained, mainly to Linh. 

      Linh nodded and smiled. “Come on. Let’s go inside.”

      Everyone walked inside. Sophie noticed Marella, who seemed a little awkward with everyone. It made sense. Sophie didn’t include Marella in much. Sophie wondered why Biana chose to invite Marella and not Maruca or someone. Immediately, Sophie wanted to hit herself. Why was she wondering that? Marella had been her first friend and had included her when Sophie was new to the Lost Cities. And then Sophie had ignored her. And then the second Marella had gotten a cool power, bam! She was back in the friend group. Was that how Sophie chose her friends? By their powers? Not by their personalities? She was a terrible--​​​​

      Sophie was interrupted from her mental blaming herself by Keefe. “Woah there Foster. Guilt it radiating off you by the...the...You know what? I can’t find the right word for that. But you get the point.”

      Sophie smiled a little. No leftover awkwardness from last night. Keefe must have sensed what she was thinking, because he immediately and loudly said, “Hey Biana? Guess what Foster did last night to Grady.”

      Biana smiled, “What? Oh and yesterday do you know what she did to Dad?”

      At the same time, they said, “She threw a pillow at him!” They stared at each other. Suddenly everyone in the room burst out laughing. Everyone.

      Except for Sophie. She groaned and covered her face with her hands. This had to be rehearsed.  No way could this just happen. They must have planned it. They had to have!

      “Are you done embarrassing me?” she asked when Keefe finished reenacting the Great Pillow Spectacle, as he dubbed it.

      “Nope! I still need to act out the Talk.” Keefe’s eyes widened. Sophie buried her head in her hands again.  Everyone once again started to laugh. “No!” Keefe frantically said. “No! That is not how it sounds!”

      Everyone ignored him and continued laughing. For a very long time. Too long.

      Sophie could already tell that she was bright red. She sneaked a glance at Keefe. His ears were bright pink but other than that he seemed calm. “Guys, I’m serious. That isn’t how it sounds like.”

      Biana stopped laughing enough to say, “Oh really? So you two aren’t dating yet?”

      Sophie buried her face in her hands. Why did everyone think they were dating? They weren’t! Sophie didn’t even like Keefe in that way! And wait, ‘yet?’ What did she mean by that?

      “No! No, we aren’t!” Keefe almost yelled that.

      Sophie lifted her face from out of her hands. Why was everyone laughing so hard? It wasn’t that funny! Even Fitz was gasping for breath. There didn’t seem to be any jealousy in him. 

      “Guys! Stop laughing so hard!” she said.

      Biana took one look at her cherry-red face and burst into giggles again. Well, that didn’t help.

      Linh calmed down enough to defend them “Guys...they’re probably not dating. And when they are, they would tell us. Sooner or later.”

      That just made it worse. 

      Probably? When they are? What???

      Sophie screamed, “We are NOT dating!!!”

      “Feisty Foster is back!” Keefe said laughing. Why was he laughing? 

      Sophie scowled and muttered, “Traitor.” 

      That just made Keefe laugh harder.

      Sophie sighed and stomped out of the room. At this rate, it would be a very long and extremely embarrassing sleepover.

      Okay, here's another chapter. I posted early because I'm busy for the rest of the day and I can't post later. Also, FINALLY, the sleepover started. It only took *scrolls back up to read* 50 chapters! Wow, I just realized how much that is...

      -Quetzal

      I don't mean to be rube but in this chapter I don't like that they made fun of her 

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    • LoveYallLizzy wrote:
      73.115.99.161 wrote:
      Chapter 50-Sophie

      It was almost time for the sleepover. 2 minutes away from 5 to be exact. Sophie rushed around her room, grabbing things. She shoved everything into a ridiculously small bag and ran out the door. She teleported to Everglen, noticing that she was the last one. 

      “It’s 5:01 Sophie!” Biana called out.

      “One minute late isn’t a lot!” Sophie said. She walked toward Biana. Fitz, Keefe, Dex, Tam, Linh, and Marella were also there. 

      “It’s still late! Well anyway, we’re all here. I would invite Wylie, but he said he was busy today,” Biana explained, mainly to Linh. 

      Linh nodded and smiled. “Come on. Let’s go inside.”

      Everyone walked inside. Sophie noticed Marella, who seemed a little awkward with everyone. It made sense. Sophie didn’t include Marella in much. Sophie wondered why Biana chose to invite Marella and not Maruca or someone. Immediately, Sophie wanted to hit herself. Why was she wondering that? Marella had been her first friend and had included her when Sophie was new to the Lost Cities. And then Sophie had ignored her. And then the second Marella had gotten a cool power, bam! She was back in the friend group. Was that how Sophie chose her friends? By their powers? Not by their personalities? She was a terrible--​​​​

      Sophie was interrupted from her mental blaming herself by Keefe. “Woah there Foster. Guilt it radiating off you by the...the...You know what? I can’t find the right word for that. But you get the point.”

      Sophie smiled a little. No leftover awkwardness from last night. Keefe must have sensed what she was thinking, because he immediately and loudly said, “Hey Biana? Guess what Foster did last night to Grady.”

      Biana smiled, “What? Oh and yesterday do you know what she did to Dad?”

      At the same time, they said, “She threw a pillow at him!” They stared at each other. Suddenly everyone in the room burst out laughing. Everyone.

      Except for Sophie. She groaned and covered her face with her hands. This had to be rehearsed.  No way could this just happen. They must have planned it. They had to have!

      “Are you done embarrassing me?” she asked when Keefe finished reenacting the Great Pillow Spectacle, as he dubbed it.

      “Nope! I still need to act out the Talk.” Keefe’s eyes widened. Sophie buried her head in her hands again.  Everyone once again started to laugh. “No!” Keefe frantically said. “No! That is not how it sounds!”

      Everyone ignored him and continued laughing. For a very long time. Too long.

      Sophie could already tell that she was bright red. She sneaked a glance at Keefe. His ears were bright pink but other than that he seemed calm. “Guys, I’m serious. That isn’t how it sounds like.”

      Biana stopped laughing enough to say, “Oh really? So you two aren’t dating yet?”

      Sophie buried her face in her hands. Why did everyone think they were dating? They weren’t! Sophie didn’t even like Keefe in that way! And wait, ‘yet?’ What did she mean by that?

      “No! No, we aren’t!” Keefe almost yelled that.

      Sophie lifted her face from out of her hands. Why was everyone laughing so hard? It wasn’t that funny! Even Fitz was gasping for breath. There didn’t seem to be any jealousy in him. 

      “Guys! Stop laughing so hard!” she said.

      Biana took one look at her cherry-red face and burst into giggles again. Well, that didn’t help.

      Linh calmed down enough to defend them “Guys...they’re probably not dating. And when they are, they would tell us. Sooner or later.”

      That just made it worse. 

      Probably? When they are? What???

      Sophie screamed, “We are NOT dating!!!”

      “Feisty Foster is back!” Keefe said laughing. Why was he laughing? 

      Sophie scowled and muttered, “Traitor.” 

      That just made Keefe laugh harder.

      Sophie sighed and stomped out of the room. At this rate, it would be a very long and extremely embarrassing sleepover.

      Okay, here's another chapter. I posted early because I'm busy for the rest of the day and I can't post later. Also, FINALLY, the sleepover started. It only took *scrolls back up to read* 50 chapters! Wow, I just realized how much that is...

      -Quetzal

      I don't mean to be rube but in this chapter I don't like that they made fun of her 

      I know, neither do I. I kinda want to change it but I don't think I can. Maybe just pretend it didn't happen?

      -Quetzal

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    • I love your book soo much.

      -booksbooksbooks

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    • Hi! This is so good. I mean, I just started binge-reading this because I was kinda bored and had nothing to read (I know sounds lame but still) and now I'm like, HOW DID YOU EVER COME UP WITH THIS? I absolutely love this and your books. Please write more; you're such a good writer. (And I'm advertising myself for one second: if you have the time, would you be willing to look at one of my fanfictions: Trust the Empath (Sokeefe fanfic) https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1638527 Burned Memories (OC)  https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1635120 Ruined (Alina's POV of Alden and Della) https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1639123 Unearthed (Black Swan/Neverseen fanfic) https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1640244 and blah, blah blah because I have a lot. But aack, there are really no words. I absolutely love this story and please write more. Keep it up! :)

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    • oh, sorry. I don't have an account so i'm currently fosterkeefe. (person who wrote the post above with the millions of fanfics, hehe)

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    • OMG I love ur fanfic soooooo much!!! I started binge-reading your fanfic like a week ago and it is just pure AWESOMENESS!!! This is definetly one of my favorite fanfics! Keep up the great work! (Also, I love that this fanfic is leaning towards SoKeefe, because I ship them so much!)

      -Chandelitz4ever

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    • Oh my gosh guys, I have this completely crazy and probably not true theory that I just thought of:

      EVERYONE WITH BLUE EYES COULD BE RELATED TO AN ELF!!!!!

      Here's my crazy reasoning: So every human that has blue eyes came from this ancestor from thousands of years ago. That ancestor was missing a gene or something which was why they had blue eyes. Over thousands of years, the person's descendents are the only people with blue eyes. (That doesn't mean everyone with blue eyes is related by blood though)

      Anyway, so maybe, that one person all those millenia ago, was an ELF. Thats why they have blue eyes. And I don't know, maybe more elves also married humans. But all I'm saying, is there is a possibility that if elves are real, blue eyed people could be related to them.

      I know this is probably not true, but what if? 

      I posted this on the blue eyes page too. And also, thank you everyone, for saying the fanfic is good and everything. And thanks for putting up with me. I'm pretty sure it's hard.

      -Quetzal

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    • 73.115.83.75 wrote:
      Oh my gosh guys, I have this completely crazy and probably not true theory that I just thought of:

      EVERYONE WITH BLUE EYES COULD BE RELATED TO AN ELF!!!!!

      Here's my crazy reasoning: So every human that has blue eyes came from this ancestor from thousands of years ago. That ancestor was missing a gene or something which was why they had blue eyes. Over thousands of years, the person's descendents are the only people with blue eyes. (That doesn't mean everyone with blue eyes is related by blood though)

      Anyway, so maybe, that one person all those millenia ago, was an ELF. Thats why they have blue eyes. And I don't know, maybe more elves also married humans. But all I'm saying, is there is a possibility that if elves are real, blue eyed people could be related to them.

      I know this is probably not true, but what if? 

      I posted this on the blue eyes page too. And also, thank you everyone, for saying the fanfic is good and everything. And thanks for putting up with me. I'm pretty sure it's hard.

      -Quetzal

      Thsi reminds me of a fanfic I wrote once about someone whos dad was human and mom was elf. It does seem weird why to similar species would have never crossed at all. Maybe that will be something we learn about in the later books?

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    • 73.115.83.75 wrote: Oh my gosh guys, I have this completely crazy and probably not true theory that I just thought of:

      EVERYONE WITH BLUE EYES COULD BE RELATED TO AN ELF!!!!!

      Here's my crazy reasoning: So every human that has blue eyes came from this ancestor from thousands of years ago. That ancestor was missing a gene or something which was why they had blue eyes. Over thousands of years, the person's descendents are the only people with blue eyes. (That doesn't mean everyone with blue eyes is related by blood though)

      Anyway, so maybe, that one person all those millenia ago, was an ELF. Thats why they have blue eyes. And I don't know, maybe more elves also married humans. But all I'm saying, is there is a possibility that if elves are real, blue eyed people could be related to them.

      I know this is probably not true, but what if? 

      I posted this on the blue eyes page too. And also, thank you everyone, for saying the fanfic is good and everything. And thanks for putting up with me. I'm pretty sure it's hard.

      -Quetzal

      I WAS BORN WITH BLUE EYESSSSSS

      but then it turned green...


      GASP

      MAYBE IT IS FROM THE POLLUTION!!!!





      Guys, I could be part elf

      XDXDXD

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    • I have weird dark blue eyes with no designs other than in one eye theres a darker blue line and both of them are just cloudy blues

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    • I also have blue eyes, like the rest of my family. My mom’s eyes are blue but the left eye has a brown dot and the right eye has a sort of brownish tang towards the pupil. My dad’s eyes are light gray blue. My little sister’s eyes are my mom’s blue color with a grayish covering like my dad. I have bright blue eyes that change a little with the light and that have a sort of darker border.

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    • My eyes are weird... My left one is grayish mixed with an army/forest green. My right one is army/forest green with goldish brown on top. Both of my eyes have a dark blue circle around them. I love my eyes. 😊

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    • Mine are grayish-blue but more BLUE then grey so...

      I MIGHT BE RELATED TO AN ELF!!!! 

      HOORAY!!!!

      -Lady kiddo

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    • Mine are brown - OH MY GOD I'M THE NEXT SOPHIE FOSTER

      -Maiatheshade

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    • Wow, a lot of people have blue eyes. I have brown/black eyes. Nothing special. But maybe I'm the next Sophie Foster! I don't look anything like my parents. But then my sister could also be an elf, because she's basically a mini me. Hmm...

      -Quetzal

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    • I have hazel eyes. Dang it!

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    • Mine are like dark blue , like I said, but it depends on the day, b/c they change shades depending on the day

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    • Chapter 61-Keefe


      Keefe woke up in the morning to Dex whispering, “Wake up. Want to pull a prank on Sophie and Biana?”

      Keefe stretched and looked around. Everyone else was gone, probably downstairs, except for Foster and Biana. He nodded and whispered, “Yeah. The classic?”

      Dex smiled and said, “Of course. I’ll get makeup cream. I think Sophie has a fear of it now.”

      Keefe laughed quietly and said, “Yeah. This will be fun. Plus they deserve it because my hair is still blue! I mean, it isn’t fair and-” Dex looked at him, and Keefe closed his mouth.

      A minute later, Dex came with cream. They slathered it all over the sleeping girls’ faces and hands. They then silently went downstairs to join the others for breakfast.

      Della smiled at them. “Do you want some carapuffs? Freshly made!”

      They nodded and dug into the warm buttery food. Halfway through, they heard some piercing screams. They were awake.

      Biana stomped downstairs, clothes covered in cream. “Who did this?” she yelled. “Keefe?” She glared at him, and he had to admit, he was terrified. 

      “Dex did it too!” he yelped. Biana shifted her glare to both of them. She was surprisingly terrifying, even though she was covered in glop. 

      Sophie yelled from upstairs, “Why is this so hard to wash off?” Keefe couldn’t help it. He started laughing. Dex lost it too, and soon they were laughing uncontrollably.

      Biana glared at them one last time. “Oh, you are in SO much trouble. Just wait.” She spun around and stomped up the stairs, grumbling about immature boys.

      Keefe smirked at her back and went back to eating his carapuffs. He talked with everyone else but he was dreading Biana’s punishment. She could get very creative with them.

      Finally, Sophie and Biana came downstairs. They dug into their breakfast and quickly finished it. They were acting like everything was normal. That was a bad sign.

      Keefe exchanged looks with Dex and they both ran upstairs. The room looked normal...but all their stuff was gone. Every last thing. Their sleeping bags, clothes, even Keefe’s hair supplies.

      “Great. So now we have to find it all don’t we?” Dex asked.

      Keefe nodded. “It could be anywhere in the house. Or out of the house. It could be anywhere!”

      Dex yelled downstairs, “Guys! Where did you put our stuff?”

      Biana smirked back up at him. “It’s all somewhere in the house. You’re fine.”

      Dex faced Keefe. “Basically we’re going to have to run around the house looking for something if we want our stuff back.”

      Keefe shrugged. “Do you think we can survive without our things?”

      Dex thought. “Yeah...I don’t have anything special. I can replace it all, which is better than searching this massive house for something.”

      Keefe grinned. “Then let’s go downstairs. I want to play Base Quest.”

      They went downstairs, to the rest of the group. “Do you want to play Base Quest?” Keefe asked.

      Fitz said, “I’m in.” Everyone agreed to play.

      Biana looked at them suspiciously. “So you aren’t going to get your stuff?”

      Dex asked, “What stuff? Is there something we should know about?”

      Biana just glared at them and announced, “Same teams as last time. Unless you want something different.”

      “I think it’s fine,” Linh said.

      “Okay. Abilities are allowed. The game starts in 3 minutes. Choose a base and split up starting NOW!” Biana ran away, her team following.

      Fitz took charge. “Our base should be as far away as possible. Sophie can teleport, so someone is going to have to be right on the base. I’ll transmit to you if you have to be careful. Who wants to quest?”

      Wylie said, “I can.” Dex also volunteered. They found a good base around a huge tree. 

      “Three minutes are over. Let’s go!” Fitz took off, into the woods. Keefe and Tam split up too, Tam using shadows to cover himself. 

      The game had started.

      Okay, here's another chapter. Sorry that its a little bad. Also, question: Do you think that I should kill off a bodyguard? I'm starting to think I should. I mean, bodyguards sign up for a job that results in them sometimes dying. Yeah, I think I should. But which? 

      -Quetzal

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    • Kill off Sandor. Ro is too funny. lol 

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    • So good! Hmmmmm...... grizel? It would make sandor heartbroken tho

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    • Yeah Kill off Grizel Lets make Sandor Heartbroken

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      The poll was created at 17:56 on July 16, 2020, and so far 24 people voted.

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    • Okay, thats a poll I made, except I think I did something wrong with it. I guess its fine. Just vote which one, because I want it to be one of those three.

      -Quetzal

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    • What about bo? Then ro will realize.... she still hates him hhahahahahhahahahahahahahhaaaaa 

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    • SuddenlyFriedEggs wrote:
      What about bo? Then ro will realize.... she still hates him hhahahahahhahahahahahahahhaaaaa 

      XD XD that needs to happen but-

      😱😨😰😰😰 please don't kill Ro!

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    • yeah I I am fine as long as ro doesent die

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    • Dragonmaster890 wrote:
      yeah I I am fine as long as ro doesent die

      Or sandor

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    • I  love your writing Quetzal, but if you kill Ro...

      I WILL NEVER FORGIVE YOU!

      I love Ro so much, and if she dies I would just be so sad, and I think I speak for a lot of people when I say that Ro is one of the best characters. (Or at least that is how I feel.) PLease, please, please, don't kill her.

      -Chandelitz4ever

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    • also, why have people voted under the "Which bodygaurd should die" thing?

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    • Dragonmaster890 wrote:
      also, why have people voted under the "Which bodygaurd should die" thing?

      Maybe they wanted to vote for Grizel?

      -Quetzal

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    • Dragonmaster890 wrote:
      also, why have people voted under the "Which bodygaurd should die" thing?

      .*that was me

      I couldn't chose

      no-scratch that

      i didn't WANT to chose

      but I say gigantor if you must

      but PLEEEEEEEEASE kill bo 

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    • Bam! Please FeDex some SoKeefe wrote:
      Dragonmaster890 wrote:
      also, why have people voted under the "Which bodygaurd should die" thing?
      .*that was me

      I couldn't chose

      no-scratch that

      i didn't WANT to chose

      but I say gigantor if you must

      but PLEEEEEEEEASE kill bo 

      Yeah why cant you just kill off bo? you can still make it super sad with (almost) all the bodygaurds and sophie mourning him, and were all happy!

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    • also on an unrelated note, in the actual book series I feel the remaining mr forkle twin needs to die. Mr forkles death was pretty huge until we learned he had an identical twin, and it no longer felt like he died. 

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    • Dragonmaster890 wrote:
      also on an unrelated note, in the actual book series I feel the remaining mr forkle twin needs to die. Mr forkles death was pretty huge until we learned he had an identical twin, and it no longer felt like he died. 

      I know. I wish that Mr. Forkle died and that was it, so Sophie and her friends could learn that things were serious and they became more independent. Now they keep on depending on Mr Forkle. And it was emotional when Mr. Forkle died. Now its just so meaningless. I think the other Mr. Forkle will die in Unlocked. I hope he will anyway.

      -Quetzal

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    • I didn’t see the chapter you posted yesterday so I accidentally read the one you posted today. I just read the one you posted today. I just can’t believe I missed it cause I usually go to the part I last read but I guess I thought I already read it. I seriously can’t believe I missed it!!!

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    • That’s confusing

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    • Bo should die! And then we can see how much Ro really cared about home! 


      -Obsessed Girl

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    • Him sorry

      - Obsessed Girl

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    • Also for which bodygaurd to kill off I have to say sandor, it would ake a big impact on the story, and I liek grizel and ro to much to say to kill them.

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    • Okay, guys, just pretend that the Ro button says Bo instead on the poll. For people who already voted, you can still change your vote. I just realized that if Ro dies, KIng Dimitir or however you spell that, would pretty much want a war which I don't think is a good idea. Plus I also realized that no matter what, I'll never kill Ro off, so yeah. Just pretend it says Bo.

      -Quetzal

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    • None of the bodyguards should die!!!!!!

      Sokeefe is the best! I also like Bianex and Wylihn.









      P.S.  Sundew and Willow are my favorite WOF ship.

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    • same person as ^ I also have blue-ish teal eyes.

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    • Yay I was waiting for the pranking!!

      Yeah I also want someone significant to die in Unlocked. That sounded slightly evil...

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    • OH wait idc about bo

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    • 73.115.83.75 wrote:
      Okay, guys, just pretend that the Ro button says Bo instead on the poll. For people who already voted, you can still change your vote. I just realized that if Ro dies, KIng Dimitir or however you spell that, would pretty much want a war which I don't think is a good idea. Plus I also realized that no matter what, I'll never kill Ro off, so yeah. Just pretend it says Bo.

      -Quetzal

      yes! everyonestart voting for bo!

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    • Voted for Bo/Ro... if Grizel dies Sandor’s gonna be heartbroken 💔

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    • why does grizel have so many votes? Do people hate the only kind of main character female goblin who hasent died?

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    • I really don't care as long as you don't kill Ro... I love Grizel, Sandor, and Bo too, actually.

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    • It's ok with me if Bo dies.

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    • Please don't kill Ro....

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    • Chapter 62-Sophie


      She and Biana had thought they had done a good prank. They hadn’t. So it was payback time. And she was going to win this game.

      She was questing along with Biana. This would be easy. They’d decided it wasn’t fair to use teleporting, so Biana was going to reach the other base, and Sophie was going to tag. 

      The game had started and so far nothing had happened. No one was out yet. But they would be. She’d already found Tam. He could use his shadow thing, but that didn’t stop her Telepathy. She sprinted towards him. Something moved at her right. She lunged towards it. 

      “Gotcha!” she yelled triumphantly. 

      Tam shrugged. “Get Keefe next,” he told her.

      Sophie smiled and said, “Of course.” She concentrated for a second and found Keefe.

      He was near the lake. She ran towards him. There he was! He looked caught off guard as she hurtled at him. He said in surprise, “Wha-” She slammed into him, unable to stop her momentum. 

      They fell into the lake.

      Sophie surfaced, spluttering and coughing up muddy water. Keefe was coughing next to her. “Wow Foster. You really did knock me off my feet. Literally.”

      Sophie flushed and tried to get to dry land. Keefe was already there and pulled her up. “Thanks,” she said breathlessly.

      “No problem,” Keefe said softly. Suddenly Sophie realized how close they were standing. Very close. 

      Too close.

      She scrambled back from Keefe, almost falling into the water again. But Keefe caught her before she got wetter. 

      “You’re hopeless without me, you know that right?” Keefe teased.

      Sophie just blushed red and looked down.

      Suddenly Keefe grinned. He tapped her lightly on the shoulder. “You’re out. See ya later Foster!” He ran away, water dripping behind him.

      Sophie stared at him, watching him go. A breeze blew, making her shiver. She had to take a shower. She jogged back to the mansion and was dry by the time she got there. She quickly took a short shower to get the mud off her. She put on a light blue tunic and went outside again. Everyone was talking near a swing.

      “Hey guys,” she greeted them.

      Biana whirled around and asked, “Where were you? Our team lost at Base Quest! Keefe tagged me and said that you were taking a shower. And then he went to take one too.”

      “We accidentally took a swim in the lake,” Sophie said.

      “How do you accidentally take a swim? And why were you swimming in a dirty lake together while you were supposed to be playing Base Quest?”

      Sophie blushed. “I just kinda fell on him and we toppled into the lake.”

      “More like you fell for me, Foster,” a familiar voice joked. 

      Sophie sighed and faced Keefe, “No, I fell on you, not for you.”

      Dex snorted. Sophie groaned. “It’s almost noon anyway. I have to go.” She had to meet Oralie, to unlock the cache. She couldn’t be late.

      Biana nodded. “You guys can leave now if you want.”

      Sophie rushed upstairs and got her bags. “Bye!” she called to everyone. 

      Biana and Dex didn’t seem to hear her. They were talking and laughing with each other. But Biana caught Sophie’s eye. “Bye Sophie! Thanks for coming!”

      Sophie smiled and let the light take her away.

      Here's another chapter! Also, looking at the poll, 6 people want Grizel dead, 2 people want Sandor dead, and 5 people want Bo dead. The polls going to continue because I'm having writer's block and probably won't write any deaths for a long time.

      -Quetzal

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    • Hey, I was wondering when you would add the neverseen and not just have a lot of fluff. -booksbooksbooks

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    • I enjoy the fluff! And that was hilarious.

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    • I was gone on a trip for a little bit, and coming back to so many amazing chapters is the best thing ever! The sleepover is now here! yay!!!

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    • Yeah that happened to me a bit ago. I know, right?!

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    • FLUFFY GOODNESS. YAY! *no sarcasm at all***that's not sarcastic either*****no I'm serious-GAH conveying emotion online is HARD***

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    • It really is.

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    • Chapter 63-Sophie


      Sophie was at Havenfield, about to go meet Oralie. She got ready and considered putting her hair in a style, but that would show she cared about how she looked to Oralie. And she didn’t care about what Oralie thinks. 

      She ran downstairs and waved bye to her parents and teleported out, to the same meadow she’d had her Team Valiant meeting at, a couple of days ago. Oralie was already there, waiting for her. She didn’t have her circlet with her, not that Sophie cared. 

      Sophie knew she was being hard on Oralie. She wasn’t even all that angry at Oralie anymore. She felt more awkward and sad that she couldn’t think the same about her once favorite councilor. She didn’t know how to act around her. And since Oralie was an Empath, she knew how Sophie felt. 

      Which just made it worse.

      “Hello, Sophie. I think I know how to open the cache. But we need a Technopath. Do you think your friend, Dex, can come?” Oralie cut straight to the chase, probably not wanting to endure the awkwardness any longer. Sophie was grateful.

      “I think so. I’ll call him.” She hailed him and he appeared on the screen. “Dex, I need you to come to the meadow we have Team Valiant meetings on. Can you come?”

      “Uh, yeah. Hold on.” A moment later he appeared. “So why do you need me? We literally saw each other half an hour ago.”

      Sophie quickly explained the whole thing. Oralie finished the explanation by saying, “So can you help us unlock it?”

      “Okay. But I need you to Enhance me, Sophie.” Sophie obliged and Dex started muttering techy words. Sophie had no clue what he meant. Finally, Dex smiled and said, “I know how to do it! But we’re going to need every councilor's DNA to unlock it. And then Oralie needs to say the password. I’m already figuring that out, so just get me the DNA.”

      “I’ll get it. But do you know a Vanisher that could help me? Someone you can trust. This is supposed to be secret, remember.” Oralie said.

      “Biana would help. You can ask her,” Dex said.

      “Thank you for your help Dex. We’ll meet back here in 2 hours.” With that Oralie left.

      Half an hour later, nothing had happened.

      Sophie paced. “How can I help?” She was starting to feel useless. At least everyone else was doing something. She was just standing around!

      “Get me food. I’m starving and it's after lunchtime. I’m thinking of some quelquirks. They’re really good. Have you ever tried them?”

      Sophie said, “No. I’ll get some though.” She teleported away to Havenfield. “Mom! Do you have some quelquirks?”

      “Sorry, no. We’re out. But you can go to Elvendeen to pick some up,” Edaline replied.

      “Okay, thanks!” She leaped to Elvendeen and realized it was like a ginormous store. She ran to the food section. “Quelquirks, quelquirks, quelquirks...There they are!” She quickly grabbed a bunch of the red leaves, paid for them, and teleported back to Dex. 

      “Here. I got them!” Sophie said proudly.

      Dex took one look at them and burst out laughing.

      Sophie’s heart sank. “I got something else didn’t I?”

      Dex nodded, saying, “Yeah. These are quesquairs, not quelquirks. But don’t worry. These also taste really good.”

      And they did. They were like delicious spaghetti. Sophie finished hers quickly, as did Dex. Finally, after 2:30, Oralie and Biana arrived. 

      “I got it all. A hair from each councilor. Here,” Oralie said, handing a bag with hair strands to Dex.

      Dex put it into a compartment and then said, “Say Stellarlune into this. It should work.”

      Oralie did. 

      And then the cache opened.

      Here's another chapter. Sorry I didn't post yesterday. I was busy, and I couldn't post. 

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    • Wow, this was GREAT! The suspense... what will happen next...we don't know... DUH DAH DAAAHHHHH.

      I love the cliff hanger so much!!! = )

      -Chandelitz4ever

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    • No problem!! Also I loved the random side story about the quelquirks and quesquairs. 😂👌🏻

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    • nooooooooooo you left us with the biggest cliffhanger ever: we will never know what quelquirks taste like 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

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    • Silveny and Greyfall wrote:
      nooooooooooo you left us with the biggest cliffhanger ever: we will never know what quelquirks taste like 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

      lol, just pretend they taste like the best food in the world. Or not food. They could taste like rubber for all I know. 

      -Quetzal

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    • Great chapter! I know I don't comment much but I DO support you even though sometimes I don't show it please keep writing and your cliffhangers will always upset is so KEEP doing it (can't believe I just said that)

      MWAHAHAHAHA

      -Lady kiddo

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    • 73.115.83.75 wrote:
      Silveny and Greyfall wrote:
      nooooooooooo you left us with the biggest cliffhanger ever: we will never know what quelquirks taste like 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
      lol, just pretend they taste like the best food in the world. Or not food. They could taste like rubber for all I know. 

      -Quetzal

      haha ok :) 

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    • r u shipping tiana or bianex? i personaly ship tiana!! it would b so cute!!