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  • Based on a comment on the Sokeefe Page. All the boys are dared into having a singing competition, what comes out of it is drama, high stakes, and an all-important dare. There will also be Sokeefe, Dexiana, and Wylinh. Warning: This is my first fan-fic so It probably won't be any good. Enjoy!

    Chapter One: The Idea: Sophie's POV

    Sophie and her friends sat slumped against the Panakes tree. It was a hot summer day and they'd spent the whole day researching, so they could be prepared for the next time the Neerseen struck. Sweat beaded down Sophie's forehead and her brow furrowed as she searched through pages of notes. There had to be something there that could help them take down the Neverseen. But so far she had scanned the half page of notes 57 times and counting and had found nothing new. A heavy sigh came from the handsome blonde boy next to her.

      "We've been doing this for seven hours! And as much as I love research and pointless study, I was planning on pranking Father Dearest tonight," Keefe whined. He had started doodling on his hand and in the margins of his book. His eyes were pleading and full of mischief as he turned to look at her.

    "I know this isn't fun, but it'll help us," Sophie explained. But she wasn't sure she believed those words anymore. They had almost nothing, just that it'd be big, bad, and Lady Gisela was behind it. She knew that all of her friends were bored, but getting the leg up on the Nevereseen had to be worth it. Right?

    "I agree with Keefe, I've read the same page five times in a row and still don't understand it," Fitz admitted. His teal eyes locked with Sophie's as if to say "I'm sorry". But all Sophie felt was betrayal. She crossed her arms across her chest, hoping her pouting would give her an advantage. It did not, But someone had to agree with her on this, she couldn't be the only one, right? Then she spotted Wylie. He was mature, he'd get it right?

    "Well, what do you think Wylie?" She smiled, Wylie was always calm, cool, and the only sane one in the group. Sophie knew her plan would work. And on the plus side, Wylie loved books. She hoped he'd see reason and side with her on this one. He tugged on his cape nervously and slumped against the tree. This was not a good sign, but Sophie tried to keep her hopes up.

    "I actually think we could use a break. I mean, we've spent all day on this Sophie. Do you really want to risk your friend's happiness for a little info?" He had a point, but Sophie would never admit it. And to be honest, information was crucial. But she knew her friends were upset. Even Linh, who was often always happy to help, had frown etched across her face. The girl had been toying with her hair for the last 30 minutes and as far as Sophie could tell, was bored out her mind. But Sophie wasn't about to give up, this was for her friends' own good.

    "Someone has to agree with me, right?" She asked, her chestnut-colored eyes settling on Tam. He never agreed with Keefe, they were frenemies after all. It was Sophie's last desperate move. She knew he had to come through or she'd been done for. She tugged an itchy eyelash as she focused on his soft features.The silver banged boy shook his head. 

    "As much as it pains me to say it," He let out a heavy sigh "Keefe has a point and I seriously can't take his whining any longer," Tam stated. Keefe had a huge smirk on his face.

    "Looks like you lose, Foster. I know research is important to you, but so is fun. So it's time to let loose a little. Anyone have any ideas for what to do?" Everyone's hands shot up. Sophie waved them away and she sent Keefe a huge glare and vowed to get back at him later. But first, she had to get everyone back on track. She opened up her mouth to explain her point, when she was cut off by Ro.

    "Listen Blondie, we're all dying out here. It's boring and hot, and not to mention full of whiny teenagers. How about we have some fun. We all know you want to. So why not relax and get a leg up on the boys with a fun game," Ro tilted her head in Keefe's direction. That seriously was a very tempting offer, but Sophie went back to looking at her notes.

    "I'm in!" Biana chirped and Linh, Marella, and Stina soon nodded their agreement. So with a heavy heart, Sophie sighed, fidgeting with some of the panakes blossoms on the ground.

    "I guess I'm outnumbered. But what are we even going to do?" She leaned back against the tree. For a second everyone was silent. She could even hear Keefe softly tapping his feet against the ground. Then, Ro fished a long scroll from her back pocket.

    "We'll have a singing competition! Boys only and the girls will judge. It'll be like one of those human shows, what was it called? American Idol? It doesn't matter. But in my version the winner gets to dare everyone else, including the girls. I of course will be the announcer and will be spilling the tea on each performance. So you guys in or what?" Everyone cheered at Ro's plan, then turned to Sophie for her approval. She gave an excited nod. This would be fun. There'll be no drama. It'll just all be fun, it's not like anything life-changing will happen she thought. Never in Sophie's life, had she been more wrong.

    *End of Chapter One*

    Feel free to share your thoughts. I'll try to update every day.

    -KitKat

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    • Also sorry it's so short, I'll try to post longer chapters in the future.

      -KitKat

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    • Wow, this is really good! I'm super excited for the next chapter!

      -TheRealJolieRuewen

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    • 99.185.40.109 wrote:
      Wow, this is really good! I'm super excited for the next chapter!

      -TheRealJolieRuewen

      Oh thank you! :)

      -KitKat

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    • 73.202.57.61 wrote:
      99.185.40.109 wrote:
      Wow, this is really good! I'm super excited for the next chapter!

      -TheRealJolieRuewen

      Oh thank you! :)

      -KitKat

      You're welcome! :D

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    • This is really good!! :) I'm excited to see the next chapter!

      - Musical Moonlark 

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    • This was great KitKat!!! I'm curious what will happen next!

      -4eva

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    • This is really good can't wait for more! ~Ogreprincess!

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    • Thank you guys! I will post more tomorrow.

      -KitKat

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    • YAY!

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    • Here is chapter 2! :)

      Chapter 2: The Plan: Fitz's POV (I'm going to try to do all the characters POVs. Also Fitz is kinda the villian in this fanfic)

      Fitz's teal eyes darted around the stage. Everywhere he looked people were working. Linh and Marella were putting up decorations, Stina was helping Dex with the Lighting, Biana was working on the wardrobe, and Keefe and Ro were fighting over plans.                              "No gulons! Blondie over there will never take you seriously if you prank the whole party," 

      "But it would be so cool! The Great Gulon incident 2.0 will be epic,"

      "No!" Ro yelled. Fitz heard snipets of their fight and sighed at how ridculous his friend was. Then he turned to look at a beautiful blonde girl. Her back was turned, but he could recognize her anywhere.

      "Why are you staring at me?" The girl turned and looked at him with big ice blue eyes. He had been staring at Marella that whole time. She gave him a flirty smile, then went back to decorating. Fitz drooped, he couldn't believe how dumb he'd been. But where was Sophie? He  turned to see that she was standing in the corner  giving orders, Fitz loved it when she got all leader-like, and watching her right there only added to his desire for getting her back. He got lost in a daydream as he watched the blonde girl run all over the old stage. Edaline and Grady had oncwe used it for outdoor entertaining, but after Jolie died, it had been neglected. His thoughts was interupted by strawberry-blonde boy working the tech.

      "Hey Wonderboy, you said you'd help with the special effects!" Dex called from the sound booth. Fitz had forgotten all about his promise. As he sauntered to the sound booth, he ran a hand through his dark hair. He had to find a way to get Sophie back. They were the goldenboy and the Moonlark, they were meant to be together, not to mention the fact that they were cognates! It was supposed to be them against the world, it was supposed to be them with all the fame and honor. Not the moonlark and his unworthy best friend. As Dex and him fixed the conrolls (The stage hadn't been used in more than a decade), Dex gave him an idea.

      "So what are you going to sing?" The periwinkle eyed boy asked. Fitz hadn't really thought about it at all, he'd been too busy thinking about...This was the perfect way to get Sophie back in his life! Sophie had always told him he sounded like some cool human singer, (Shane Mendes or something?)and he knew she liked music.This was his big shot, a plan formed in his mind as he rushed onto the stage. 

      "Signups are now open!" Ro called. Keefe sprinted to the front of the line. He took the pen and quickly scrawled his name on the page.

      "I'm going right before intermission because after you witness my awesomeness, you'll all need a break. Oh and Ro, my song is going to be killer," Keefe winked as he turned to look at his scowling bodyguard. It was only till Fitz got the list, that he realized his best friend had signed as Lord Hunkyhair. If Fitz could even call him his best friend anymore, Keefe had betrayed his trust and done the even more unspeakable crime, liked Sophie as well. Fitz was so glad he told his dad to ask Keefe to back off. Fitz signed up for first, he knew he'd just blow them all away. After all, with his shimmering eyes and movie star smile, there was no way anything could stop him.

      So when Ro started the show an hour later, he was as confident as ever. He had told Biana his plan and she didn't seem too thrilled with it, but that didn't matter. He knew Sophie would love this, he just knew it. And Biana didn't know what Sophie liked, he did. She liked teal and mallowmelt and him. His heart was full of pride and his eyes had a cocky spark in them as he stepped on to stage. As the spotlight fell on him, he had one thought only. He would win Sophie back, no matter what it took, no matter who he hurt, and nothing and no one would get in his way.

      • End of Chapter 2*

      Yeah, so Fitz is going to be a bit meaner than usual in this fanfic. I hope you enjoy!

      -KitKat

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    • woah, FITZ asked alden to back off? JERK!

      -TheRealJolieRuewen

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    • 99.185.40.109 wrote:
      woah, FITZ asked alden to back off? JERK!

      -TheRealJolieRuewen

      He is going to be a real jerk in this one. But don't worry his preformance will be interesting and so will Sophie's reaction to it. ;)

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    • Oooooooooo!

      HAHA

      -Moonlark

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    • This is good! Great job! I hope Sokeefe happens :)  :) :) 

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    • Will you be posting soon? 

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    • Sokeefe definately happens (And it will be adorable), I'll try to post more a little later. Maybe around 4 pacific time (i"m trying to pace myself). 

      -KitKat

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    • 73.202.57.61 wrote:
      Sokeefe definately happens (And it will be adorable), I'll try to post more a little later. Maybe around 4 pacific time (i"m trying to pace myself). 

      -KitKat

      YAYYYYYY!!!!! (to both the Sokeefe and the postinggggggg) :)

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    • Chapter:3:The Opening Act:Sophie's POV Sophie tugged on the sleave of her crimson colored gown. Biana said it'd really make her eyes "pop". Sophie didn't know much about fashion, but she knew enough to know that this dress looked really good on her. She shivered as she lowered herself into the judges panel.  It wan't because it was cold (The warm Summer night was perfect), it was from fear. She knew this was supposed to be fun, but how could she choose a winner without hurting someone's feelings? The thought haunted her as the lights came up on the stage. It really looked spectacular, the purple and gold decorations sparkled in the light. Linh and Marella really had done a great job.

      "Sparkly elves and bodyguards, welcome to Havenfield Idol! Let's meet your judges! First up, Blondie!" Ro boomed as a spotlight shone in Sophie's face. The ogre had painted her nails gold for the occasion and her clawed hands cupped the microphone.

      "We also have Sparkles, Ocean Girl, Fire Lady, and...Stina," Ro announced. Sophie calmed as she rattled off the rules. The ogre was a natrual announcer and everyone in the audience loved it. To be fair it was only the bodyguards and Edaline and Grady, but she still had talent. Sophie turned to face her parents, who both gave her a reassuring look. Maybe Sophie could handle this judge thing after all. 

      "This is actually kinda cool, I think might not even get all that nervous," She whispered to Biana, who gave her a calm nod.  Biana smoothed her rose colored dress which sparkled and shone in the moonlight. Confidence and composure radiated off her friend and Sophie knew she could handle this as she gripped Biana's hand. At least she thought she did before Ro announced the first act.

      "Now for the opening act, you know him, you like him, it's your wonderboy... Fitz Vacker!" The lights dimmed and a spotlight formed at the center of the stage. Fitz wore a tailored gold jerkin and slick black pants. He really looked like some sort of fairytale prince. Yet, Sophie felt no flutters as he swaggered on. Her heart didn't skip a beat as he announced himself, and as the accompaniment started to play she wasn't swooning for him. She knew he was going to do something interesting, but she never expected what happened next.

      "This one's for you Soph!" He called his teal eyes fixating on hers. A billion butterflies swarmed in her stomach and not the lovey-dovey kind. He launched into a song about how awesome he was and how any girl would want him. And through each apalling lyric, his eyes were locked on hers. She heard Biana and Grizel cuss in the background. It would have been better if the song was short, but it droned on for five minutes, which felt like an eternity. Fitz didn't even dance, he was a cardboard robot as he sang. And the worst part came when there was a lyric about ex-girlfriends, Fitz winked at her. He literally winked. Sophie wanted to scream, but she stayed, she had to. When the song finally ended she felt ready to punch him.

      "What was that?!" She yelled as soon as Fitz met her backstage. His confident grin fell. He honestly looked shocked.

      "What? I sang a song," He replied. She hated his oblivious act, he knew what he had done.

      "Why would you sing anything like that?" She asked, her voice a low hiss. 

      "To serenade you. I'm wonderful and you're wonderful, there was a song about just that. I sang it. What's the big deal?" He asked, he looked generally confused. That almost made Sophie feel sorry for him, maybe he had good intentions. She didn't say anything. Some hopeful part of her thought maybe it was just a misunderstanding.

      "Look, Sophie I'm sorry, I was... wrong," His teal eyes were pleading, just like they always were when he apoligized. But the rational part of her knew that there was no way that'd he'd be able to erase what he'd done.

      "Yes, you were. That song was sexist and hurt not just me, but everyone in the audience. Please try to understand, I am never going to get back together with you. And if you keep acting like this, I'm not sure we'll even be friends," Her voice was barely a whisper, but it carried so much venom, that Fitz stepped back. Biana appeared at Sophie's side.

      "I should have never let you go along with that plan," She sighed. Sophie turned to look at her. She had known? It wasn't until Biana replied,that Sophie realized she'd spoken those words out loud.

      "Yes Sophie, I knew. I just never thought he'd go through with it. Why Fitz?! You know that old dwarven song was cruel. It was written by King Enki for goodness sake," She reeled on her brother. Biana took Sophie's hand and they walked away, leaving Fitz standing in the dust. She heard footsteps behind her and was ready to scold Fitz once more, when she turned to find Keefe.

      "Woah Foster, that's a lot of anger and hatred, do you not want to see me? I can go if you aren't feeling up to talking,"His eyes were full of concern. Sophie suddenly felt bad for how strong her emotions were.

      "No, stay!" She called as he turned to leave and she sat with him by the judges table. He looked like he wanted to kick something and Sophie could tell he was thinking about Fitz.

      "I know you're angry at Fitz, but it was probably an honest mistake," He whispered. His voice was soft and there was a strange sadness in it, and it felt like he was sighing.

      "That doesn't excuse him though, that stunt he pulled...it's unforgivable. It's not enough that he didn't mean to hurt me, he did," There was a clear edge to her voice and Sophie wished she'd said it nicer, when Keefe backed away.

      "I know Foster, but as the King of Bad Decisions, I think maybe you should give him a second chance. You never gave up on me, so don't give up on him. He's going through a lot right now and I know how that feels. But I'm glad you're sticking up for yourself. You're getting spunky Foster. Might have to call you Foster Fiestypants now," Keefe gave her a shy smirk. Sophie had to giggle a little at that. As she laughed armth seemed to trickle into Keefe's smile and it became a full grin.

      "Thanks Keefe, I might not forgive Fitz yet, but I'll try to. Thank you for being there for me," Sophie smiled. She scooted a bit closer to Keefe and moved her hand closer to his, giving it a gentle squeeze. She felt like she could spend forever sitting with him like that, but he squeezed her hand one last time and got up.

      "I'd better let you get back to judging. Bangs Boy is up next and I want to see how it turns out, "He turned to leave, then stopped and called over his shoulder, "And I'll always be there for you Sophie," Something warm filled Sophie as he walked away. His words resonated with in her. Keefe had always been there for her. And as she made her way into her seat, she found herself longing for a pair of ice blue eyes. But she didn't love Keefe, right?

      *End of Chapter 3*

      I'm sorry it's so long this time, I had a lot of ideas for this chapter. I hope you like the little Sokeefe at the end.

      -KitKat

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    • Wow. Just wow. FITZ VACKER!

      -Moonlark

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    • Oh, Fitzroy Avery Vacker, why are you such a dbdbdhsbshs sometimes?

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    • This is so good! I am so excited to see Tam perform!

      -TheRealJolieRuewen

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    • Chapter 4: The Dancer: Tam's POV

      Tam waited in the wings, it had been 15 minutes since Fitz's horrifying performance, and he was getting restless. He knew Sophie needed a break, after all that song was terrifying, but each moment made him feel even more nervous. Each second ticking by was another second he'd have to spend alone with his worries. What if he did everything wrong? What if everyone laughed? And worst of all, what if Linh was embarrassed by him? He'd only preformed in his room, and the only one who actually knew he could dance was Linh. He tugged on his bangs wanting to hide away, maybe agreeing to this show was a bad decision. He breathed a heavy sigh as he slumped against the wall.

      "Relax Tam, you're going to do great," A cheerful voice came from behind him. He turned to find his smiling sister. Linh looked beautiful, her long blue gown was the color of the ocean and seemed to flow as she walked and her hair was done up in a simple bun with a little pearl clip. She placed a reassuring hand on his shoulder and Tam flinched. 

      "I guess, but I'm really not cut out for this singing and dancing thing anyway. Maybe if I talk to Ro, I can get out of it," He stammered. He turned to leave, but Linh stepped in front of him.

      "Tam you're a great dancer, you're even better than me," She said softly. He didn't believe her, but he stayed put. He had to hear her out, maybe she could be right. Also if he left his sister would dunk a whole lot of water on his head. Tam looked away, it wasn't like he didn't want to believe her, it was just that she had so much faith in him. What if he let her down? He had hurt his sister so much when he was in the Neverseen, he didn't want to disappoint her again.

      "What if I mess up? What if I fall on my face and everyone laughs? " He whispered. Linh just looked at him for a minute and he thought she hadn't heard him until she responded.

      "Tam, it's ok to mess up. You just have to get back up again and keep trying. Which is something you always do, and I love you for it. You don't have to impress anyone, you don't have to win, you don't have to do anything, but just give it a shot. But it'd be pretty cool if did win, and as a bonus, you'd get to dare Keefe," Her words filled his heart as he gave her a shy smile and she pulled him into a tight hug.

      "Thanks," He whispered, "And don't worry my dare will be epic," Linh giggled at that and hugged him even tighter. It felt like he couldn't breathe, but that didn't matter, he was just happy she was smiling. 

      Eventually, she let go, returning to the judges' panel. Tam smiled as she left, maybe he really could do this. He buttoned his black tunic and perfected his bangs, and waited. Until finally Ro announced him.

      "Ladies and Gentlemen, give it up for Tam!"The ogre called, motioning for him to join her on stage. He answered all her questions about his song choice and his motivation for winning (He said it was the dare, but really it was for Linh) with ease. But as the music began to play, all his worries came flooding back. But as he turned to look at Linh, she smiled at him and his worries melted away as he was reminded of the reason he was doing this. Confidence filled him as he sang about shadows, and cold winter nights, and love. His voice was cool and chilling, like a gentle wind. It was beautiful, yet haunting at the same time.

      His dance moves were spectacular (A skill he gained from when he and Linh were forced into dance lessons). With each "kick, ball, change" and pivot turn, the audience became more and more captivated. Even Bo, who usually hated everything was giving a huge thumbs up and flashing a pointed toothed grin ("I just like a good pivot turn," he grumbled later). And as Tam took his final bow, his eyes locked with Linh's. There was something in them that made him melt inside. Something that stayed with him even after the performance. And that something was pride.

      *End of Chapter 4*

      This one's a bit less dramatic and a bit more wholesome than the others, mostly to give you a break from all the Fitz drama. Anyways,I hope you enjoyed it.

      -KitKat

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    • This is really good!

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    • EEK! SO GOOD! GO TAMMY BOY!

      -TheRealJolieRuewen

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    • 99.185.40.109 wrote:
      EEK! SO GOOD! GO TAMMY BOY!

      -TheRealJolieRuewen

      Thanks for the compliments! I agree, Go Tam! (He's one of my favorites). :)

      -KitKat

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    • OMGOSH THESE ARE ALL SO GOOD KEEP DOING THEM!!!!!

      -4eva

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    • This is great!

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    • When are you posting more?

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    • Awwwwwwwwww 🥰, THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • 99.185.40.109 wrote:
      When are you posting more?

      Probably tomorrow morning. The Dex chapter is next and it's going to have a lot of fluff, but also some drama,

      -KitKat

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    • This chapter is going to have a whole lot of drama, there's a little fluff, but be prepared to be sad. Also this one's kind of long because I had a lot of ideas and my heart broke a little writing this.

      Chapter 5:Dex's POV

      Dex peeked out from behind the curtain at the beautful teal eyed girl sitting at the judges panel. His heart skipped a beat as her eyes locked with his. He knew it was impossible, why would a Vacker fall in love with a Dizznee? But each time he looked at her, he fell deeper and deeper into love. Their relationship had never been perfect, he used to hate the Vackers, but now? Now they were friends, maybe even more than friends if Biana felt the same way.  As Dex paced around backstage, he felt stuck. He had no idea what to sing. All the songs he knew just didn't feel good enough, but he'd decided on one if he couldn't find anything better. But it just didn't fit, Dex was looking for a feeling within the song. A feeling he couldn't explain, except for tingly warmth. As he debated each song in his mind, he heard gentle footsteps behind him.

      "Hi Dex, I'm really looking forward to your performance," Biana whispered. Dex swore he had never seen someone looking so beautiful, she looked like a princess. And here he was in a plain navy blue tunic/vest combo. Biana's lips pursed, it was almost like she could tell what he was thinking. Dex wrung his hands, a nervous habit he had actually picked up from her.

      "Yeah, It's going to be great," He leaned back against the wall. Try to look cool, try too look cool, he kept telling himself. Somehow it was easier to be confident when Biana was around, she was the only one who'd never forgotten him. Biana fiddled with her hair. Everything felt awkward, but somehow right. He couldn't describe the feeling as anything other than that.

      "I really liked watching that human movie at your house last night, even if the triplets were crazy," Biana filled the silence. Dex laughed with her, the triplets had pranked them both and made kissy faces everytime Biana's back was turned to them. They had called it a date, but it wasn't, not really. It was just two frineds having fun, well that's what he told his siblings. Dex honestly had no idea what to call it, other than amazing.

      "Anyways, I better head back to the judges's table, I'll see you soon. Oh, and remember, Team Dizznacker for the win!" She pulled him into a hug and he wanted to stay there forever.

      "Team Dizznacker for the win!" He called after her. She flashed him one of her perfect smiles as she disappeared from view, flashing in and out of sight with each graceful step. Dex sighed, why was he so bad at this? Why couldn't girls be easy to understand like gadgets? But he didn't have time to think about that right now, he was up in one minute and still hadn't chosen a song. He went through the times he had spent with Biana, looking for a song that could encompass that same tingly feeling. Then he remembered the night before, the movie! Sure it was cheesy, but they'd both belted out the song so many times.They'd both loved it even though it wasn't that great.  Anyway as Sophie had told him that High School Musical was a classic from her childhood. She had even helped Dex pick it for his movie night (For someone so oblivious ,she really was amazing at romantic human stuff) So maybe this song would work.

      He was still terrified as he walked out onto the stage. But he was going to do this, no matter how scary it was. For Biana, and a tiny bit for himself. He knew Tam's preformance was going to be hard to top, but he could at least try. So when the music began to play, he took one slow deep breath, and began to sing. His dance moves weren't spectacular like Tam's and his voice didn't sound like a popstar  like Fitz's did, but it was still amazing. He put his whole heart into it and when Biana smiled at him, it made him give it 110%. It certaintly was "The Start Of Something New".

      When the preformance ended Biana cheered and ran up to him.

      "That was awesome! You did great Dex," She called. It made him melt inside and he was sure he was tomato red as he gave her a shy smile.

      "I just remembered you really liked that song, and I, well, I wanted to do something nice for you. You've always been so kind and supportive. And you never forget me, so I just wanted to show you that I'll never forget you either. You know?" He knew she probably wouldn't understand any of that and prepared himself for disapointment. But Biana just flashed him her biggest smile yet, and he returned it. 

      "That was...perfect Dex," She whispered inching her hand closer to his. He gently laced their fingers together and they sat there for a while. The silence wasn't awkward or cold, it was calm and wonderful. Like they didn't need to fill the space, and after a good long while Biana went to go talk to Sophie. Everything felt perfect, until Fitz arrived.

      "We need to talk," The teal eyed boy stated. There was a cold edge to his voice, and Dex could tell this wasn't going to be a fun conversation. Dex followed him over to a bench anyway. There was a stiff silence before Dex broke it.

      "Sooooo, Fitz, what do you want to talk about?" He asked, latching onto hope that maybe this wasn't going to end badly. Maybe Fitz just wanted to ask about the lighting or talk about the weather or something. Dex closed his eyes and prepared for yelling, but instead, Fitz's voice was ice cold.

      "As you know the Vacker name has been through a lot lately. Especially with my traitorous older brother," Fitz's hand curled into a fist. Dex didn't know what any of this had to do with him, but he gave Fitz a nod. Fitz ran his hands through his hair, looking like he was conflicted. There was a sadness in his eyes as he turned away to look at the sparkling sky, but when he turned back to face Dex there was no warmth in them.

      "Listen, our family is very respected in the Lost Cities. We have always been since Fallon was part of the original council. But now, our name has been ruined, damaged,dragged through the mud, and it simply cannot take another blow. Which is why you have to stay away from Biana," Dex was shocked. He couldn't even think of what to say, maybe if he closed his eyes this would all go away. Maybe he could wake up from this nightmare, but even before he pinched himself, he knew there was no escaping this.

      "Why?" He finally managed to ask, the word was shaky and barely audiable. Fitz gave a heavy sigh and his features hardened. Dex knew the answer before he even said the words.

      "Look, it's no secret you two like eachother. But you simply can't be with her, you're a nice guy, but you're Dizznee,"Fitz answered. As if that solved everything, as if Dex's feelings didn't matter, as if nothing mattered, except the stupid Vacker family name. Dex could feel his eyes watering, but instead of crying he stood up. He was going to face Fitz, he wouldn't use rage or tears. He'd just try to make him understand.

      "But I love her," His voice was soft. but it was strong. It perfectly masked all the worries that were rushing through his mind. For once in his life he was going to stand up for himself. Because this wasn't just about him, it was about Biana too, and he never wanted to hurt her.

      "If you marry my sister, you'll be dragging her down. If you really care about her, you'll let her go," Fitz answered. The words burned through Dex, tearing him apart. It felt like someone had just pressed a melder to his heart. He couldn't move, he couldn't talk, he couldn't even breathe.

      "What's going on," Biana walked up to them, "I thought I heard yelling,". Biana's brows were scrunched up and there was concern is her beautiful eyes.

      "Dex and I were just having a nice chat, isn't that right Dex," Fitz turned to him with any icy look in his eye. Dex gave a slow nod and turned to Biana, this time it was Fitz's turn to nod. Dex hated that he had to do this, hated that he had to hurt her, but he did it anyways.

      "Biana, we...we shouldn't see eachother. It isn't, you it's me and I... I can't do this anymore. I don't want to ruin your life, so... I guess we're done," Biana caught his arm as he turned to walk away.

      "But I love you! Nothing changes that," Dex didn't listen as he turned to walk away. He just ran. He ran as far as his feet could take him all the way over to the panakes tree. And then the tears he'd been holding back for so long poured out of him. He hunched over and cried and cried, How could he have ever thought a Vacker could be with a Dizznee? And as he sobbed one thought kept replaying in his mind, no matter what he did, he would always be a Dizznee and he would never be good enough.

      • End of Chapter 5*

      -KitKat

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    • AAAAAAAA! FITZ! WHY??????? DEXY! NUUUUUUUUUUUU! BAD FITZ! POOR DEX!

      -TheRealJolieRuewen

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    • WHAT

      THE

      HECK

      FITZ

      YOU 

      HAVE

      SERIOUS 

      ISSUES


      DEX IS A WONDERFUL PERSON 

      Fitz on the other hand . . . 

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    • FITZ, ALDEN, ALVAR, WHAT IS WRONG WITH THE VACKER BOYS!!????!?!?!

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    • I HAT-, DISLIKE YOU A LOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT RITZROY SAVERY CRACKER  

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    • Yes Fitz is acting really jerky, but don't worry, things will turn out interesting for him at the end. Also don't lose hope for Team Dizznacker, they will find a way. It is not a queation of if, but when. Also do you want me to do chapter 5 from Biana's POV (Including the talk with Sophie) or do Chapter 6 (More fluff and humor, Sophie's POV) next?

      -KitKat

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    • NO WONDER WHERE HE GOT THE BACK OFF FROM!!!!!!! ALDEN NOW RITZ IM RAGING AND CRYING BUT MOSTLY RAGING. Fitz needs to back off Biana will only rebel after that little stunk Fitz threw and why doesent Alvar get along with Fitz there the same person! Both evil

      Like I said raging and crying

      -4eva

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    • I think Chapter 5 from Biana's view is good!

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    • yay! I need Sokeefness

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    • Fitz is too ragey

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    • HydrokineticGirl101 wrote:
      yay! I need Sokeefness

      There will be lots of Sokeefe, especially in the Keefe chapter, which is about two chapters (If you count 5 from Biana's POV) away. I'm glad you are enjoying the fanfic so far! I'll post more tomorrow.

      P.S. Joybesty, I know Fitz is a little more villanous than usual and I will try to cut down on that. It's just kinda fun to write him that way, also I will try to give him some redemption at the end.

      -KitKat

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    • LOL! And my poor cinnamonroll!

      -Moonlark

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    • 73.202.57.61 wrote:
      Yes Fitz is acting really jerky, but don't worry, things will turn out interesting for him at the end. Also don't lose hope for Team Dizznacker, they will find a way. It is not a queation of if, but when. Also do you want me to do chapter 5 from Biana's POV (Including the talk with Sophie) or do Chapter 6 (More fluff and humor, Sophie's POV) next?

      -KitKat

      Yesssssss, And, probably Sophie???? I would be fine with either POV though!!!!!! THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!

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    • I'm.crying.and.dying.poor.dex.reeeee.fitz.you.are.just.like.your.father.you.have.taken.this.overprotective.brother.cliche.too.far.so.back.off.wonderboy.your.family.rep.doesnt.matter.anymore.and.it.never.has.plus.you.would.be.a.bad.match.with.sophie.so.just.chill.and.now.i.ban.you.from.mallowmelt.forever.you.ritz.savoury.cracker

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    • IggysElixers wrote:
      I'm.crying.and.dying.poor.dex.reeeee.fitz.you.are.just.like.your.father.you.have.taken.this.overprotective.brother.cliche.too.far.so.back.off.wonderboy.your.family.rep.doesnt.matter.anymore.and.it.never.has.plus.you.would.be.a.bad.match.with.sophie.so.just.chill.and.now.i.ban.you.from.mallowmelt.forever.you.ritz.savoury.cracker

      Agreed!!!!!!

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    • Cool! I might actually do chapter 6 from Biana's POV instead of Sophie's and it will have a lot of Dexiana fluff.

      -KitKat

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    • Chapter 6: The Kiss:Biana's POV (Picking up from exactly where 5 left off)

      Biana couldn't believe it, Dex had ended things with her. He'd seemed so happy after his preformance, what had changed? Worries and thoughts faced through her head as her teal eyes filled with tears. She knew her makeup was running, but she didn't care, it felt good to let it all out. Fitz gave her a sad look and pulled he into a hug. It was tight and uncomfortable, and everything felt wrong as he tried to console her. Then she remembered,Dex had gone off to talk with Fitz. She pulled away from her brother and ice ran through her veins.

      "What.Did.You. Do?" She hissed. Fitz sighed running a hand down his face. There was a deep sadness in his eyes as they met hers. Biana braced herself, expecting the worst. But her brother was silent, he fidgeted with his cape before responding.

      "Did really want to date a Dizznee?" He asked. What did Dex's last name have anything to do with this? It didn't matter about his parents or his siblings, Biana loved him. She stood up straighter.

      "Yes,but you didn't answer my question. What did you do?" Fitz slumped. There was so much regret in his eyes, that Biana almost let it go. But she didn't, she needed to know the truth.

      "You can't date someone from a bad match, it would hurt our family so much. It would hurt you, and it would destroy the Vacker family name," He took a step closer to her and Biana pushed him away.

      "Fitzroy Avey Vacker, all you ever care about is our family name! What about feelings, what about love, what about Sophie. We both know you love her, so stop putting status above everything. If you do you'll lose everyone you love, including me," The end was soft, but Fitz heard it. He shrunk back even further and looked like he was about to say something, but stayed silent. Until eventually, he said two simple words.

      "I'm sorry," He stared at his feet. Biana knew he was trying to learn and trying to get better, but she was tired of empty apologies.

      "Well good, but that isn't enough. You hurt me, and you hurt Dex, and you've hurt so many other people. If you're really sorry, you have to show people it. Sorry doesn't make anything better unless you act on it. It's a promise that you won't do it again, and Fitz you keep making the same mistakes. You have to learn or people will never forgive you. And if reputation means so much to you, just know you're destroying it right now. So if you'll excuse me I'm off to find Dex, a person who actually cares about me more than his stupid reputation!" And with that Biana stomped off. But that didn't stop her from hearing Fitz's faint reply.

      "I care about you," Biana ignored it, she had to find Dex and undo the damage Fitz had done. She knew her dress was getting destroyed as she ran through Havenfield's thickets, but she didn't care. Eventually she found him slumped under the Panakes. His eyes were red rimmed as he turned to face her.

      "Biana? I told you I..I can't be with you. You're a Vacker and I'm a Dizznee, and I don't want to ruin your reputation, cuz I know that's important to your family," She sat down next to him, and turned his face so he would look at her.

      "Dex, I don't care about the Vacker family name, I care about you. No matter what your last name is that doesn't change who you are. It's like what Keefe told Sophie a few years ago 'Because our family doesn't decide who we are. We decide who we are,'. And I've decided that I want to be with you," She whispered, tracing her hand down her dress. Dex still looked sorrowful and torn.

      "But... I'm not good enough. Look at you, you're awesome, you're smart, and kind,and funny and perfect. And I'm...not," His voice was shaky and tears brimmed in his periwinkle eyes.

      "Well, I don't need perfect, I need you," She had to make Dex understand how wonderful he was. If anything he was perfect, but she didn't say that. Instead she laced their fingers together. 

      "Yeah?" He whispered like he still didn't believe it. Biana responded in the only way that felt right in the moment, she kissed him. 

      It was long and sweet, it wasn't perfect, but perfect was overrated anyway. And in that moment it was just them against the world. Team Dizznacker for the win, and everything seemed to click into place. In that moment everything felt right.

      "Yeah," Biana whispered as she pulled away and Dex pulled her into a gentle hug. Everything around them seemed to stop, there was nothing, but them. Well, until Biana turned to find a blonde girl staring at them.

      "Oh,um, I'll leave you guys alone. I just wanted to tell you it's intermssion now and yeah," Sophie stammered and Biana had to laugh.

      "No, it's no problem at all. I guess I should get back to judging. That was great Dex," She called as she walked away, "So what did I miss?". A grin spread across Sophie's face.

      "Well Keefe preformed, well, kinda. He was wearing all this old-timey hip-hop gear and started rapping the Ballad of Bo and Ro, he even did dance moves from the internet. I swear I should've never leant him my i-pod. Anyways, Ro kicked him off the stage, and told him he had to do another preformance after intermission. Their fighting about it backstage. Anyways, how are you doing?" Biana laughed at how ridiculous the preformance had sounded, then fell silent. How was she doing? There were so many emotions pulsing through her: She was angry at Fitz for obvious reasons, but she was also happy for her moment with Dex,and a tingly feeling she coukldn't explain was coursing through her veins. So she went with the easiest answer possible.

      "Fine," Sophie looked like she wanted to ask more, but didn't say anything and Biana realized how much of mess she looked. Sophie told her it was fine and they chatted all the way to the judges table.

      "So, You and Dex?" Sophie asked.

      "Yeah," Biana replied letting that same tingly feeling fuel her. She was in love with Dex Dizznee and nothing would ever change that.

      -KitKat

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    • awwwww Dexiana is so sweet :)

      This is great! 

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    • AWWWWWWWW, THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • WOOOOOHOOOO GOO BIANA SHOW FITZ YOU DONT CARE!!!

      Dexiana for the win!!!!!!

      It was soooo great keep going! Your doing awesome!

      -4eva

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    • Yeah that was awesome

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    • This is BRILLIANT. And adorable!!!! Your a really good writer 

            ~ Councillor Oralie 

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    • Dexiana yea!

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    • YES DEXIANA FOR THE WINNNNNN



      Well Sophie, what were you expecting when you leant him your iPod? 😂

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    • Yeah Sophie

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    • IggysElixers wrote:
      YES DEXIANA FOR THE WINNNNNN


      Well Sophie, what were you expecting when you leant him your iPod? 😂

      lol 

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    • Chapter 7:Keefe's POV

      Keefe knew he shouldn't have done the Ballad of Bo and Ro, but it was his only choice given the fact that he didn't know what else to sing. He couldn't sing a love song because that might send wrong messages to certain people and he had promised Alden. Even if he could, there were no good ones to sing about Sophie. All of the traditional elven love songs were dull and broing and Sophie deserved something special, something new. But at least his preformance had made her laugh, it was one of those laughs where she was trying so hard not giggle, but it all came pouring out. She was adorable when she did that. And at least someone had liked the song, Ro on the other hand was not happy.

      "What did I tell you about Blondie taking you seriously?! And you have some nerve singing that song, don't think I'll forget about it," Keefe was sure she wouldn't and that he had suffering in his near future, but that wasn't important right now. What was important was getting out of singing again. 

      "Yeah, but it was epic. Anyways I don't think I'm up for singing, sore voice and all," He tried to walk away, but Ro caught him by the collar. He sighed, turning to face his ogre bodygaurd.

      "We both know that isn't true. This is about Sophie isn't it? Just sing her a love song, I'm sure you eleves have some great ones, and bam! Promblem solved." If only it could be that simple, but life was complicated. He was not about to force love into the equation, especially since tonight hadn't been going well for her.

      "I can't do that though. You know what Alden said and I don't want to screw everything up. Before you argue, remember how well Fitz's love song went," He reminded her. The Alden thing made him want to kick a wall, but he'd promised. Anyways his relationship with Sophie was fine, what if love just messed everything up?

      "Listen Hunkyhair, I'm not that good at giving pep talks, but I'm going to try. You aren't Fitz, whose to say you won't do great? Anyways, you'll never know how things will go if you don't put yourself out there! Just give it a shot, isn't it better to know she doesn't love you, than to spend your whole life wondering. And you know she does, right? With that whole confusing heart emotion thing?" Ro placed a hand on his shoulder. Maybe Ro did have a point. Maybe he could do this. Maybe for once in his life, things would go his way.

      "Yeah, but all the songs suck," That was an understatement, they were all dreadful. They were either about matchingmaking (blech!), which Sophie couldn't do because of the whole genetics thing, or were super sexist. Elves didn't really sing or write songs, and there was definately a reason for that. He heaved a long heavy sigh, but then an idea struck him and his face lit up.

      "I know that face, that's your ' I've got a brilliant scheme face'" He nodded and ideas were already racing through his head, "Well what is it?" She asked.

      "I'm going to write her a song and don't worry it won't be anything like the Ballad, I'm gonna actually try to make it sound good. Unless you want another rendition of The Ballad of Bo and Ro," He teased and his eyes were full of determination as he got to work. The tune was easy, he just made it simple and subtle. The lyrics were the hard part, what was he supposed to sing about the girl who changed his life?

      "Keefe, you're up in one minute," Sophie walked in carrying a clipboard. She looked so beautiful in that dress, well she looked beautiful in everything, but wow. It was so simple, but it was so her. "Ok Foster, this one will be like nothing you've ever heard," It was true, but she just giggled. Watching her laugh, the words somehow clicked in his mind, he was ready.

      He sang everything about her, and words seemed to flow. His hands strummed his guitar gently and his voice carried the tune through out all of Havenfield. Everyone was smiling and swaying, but he wasn't focusing on them. His eyes were locked on the beautiful girl in the front row, and she was smiling widest of all. As the preformance ended the audience cheered and he ran down to meet with them.

      "Hey Foster, did you like it?" He asked. For a second she was silent and his face fell. Maybe she hated it, he should've known not to confess tonight. But her response was everything.

      "Yeah, that was amazing Keefe! Whoever you sang about must be really lucky," Of course she was so oblivious. What else could except from her, it was Sophie Foster after all. He turned to find Ro smiling at him and realized he should tell her. 

      "Um, Sophie?" His voice soft and low. She moved a bit closer to him.

      "What?" There was shear determination in her eys, like she was trying to calculate every possible response. He knew he should say it, and he would. But first he waited a little, until there eyes met.

      "That song, was about you," She looked so surprised (Which was confusing because he'd sang about an elf with brown eyes and she was the only one), but her lips curled into a smile. There was soft music playing in the background, and they started to dance. It was slow and awkward, and Sophie kept stepping on his feet, but it was also... perfect. It felt like the one time where all his broken pieces had finally slid into place.

      "Well... I think... I might be in love with you too. I mean, it feels like in a way, I've always known, but until tonight, until now, I was never really sure," She whispered and she leaned in closer to him. They kissed, it wasn't perfect, their teeth clinked and his breath was garlicky, but that didn't matter. Fireworks went off in his head and the kiss was long and sweet. They were together and that was all that mattered in the world. The Neverseen could wait, Fitz could wait, everything else could wait, it was only them.

      "Wow, I thought me and Dex's kiss was good,but you guys take the cake," Keefe heard Biana say and he pulled away to look at his friend. He didn't realize that she and Dex had gotten together, but now that he knew, he couldn't believe he hadn't noticed. They looked so cute together and Dex had his arm around Biana's shoulder's. It looked like they'd had a tough night, but he didn't ask about it.

      "Oh, yeah," Sophie blushed and Keefe smiled at her. It wasn't his usual smirk, it was a soft, shy grin. Then he pulled Sophie in for another perfect kiss, and Dex and Biana did the same. This one was even better than the first (Partially because Biana gave him a mint), and he wished it could last forever. But sadly all good things had to come to an end, he just wish this one hadn't ended with yelling. Especially not yelling from his very angry best friend. He knew it was him before he even pulled away, Fitz Vacker had just seen them kissing.

      • End of Chapter 7*

      -KitKat

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    • gasp!!!!

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    • O-O WOW! THAT WAS SO GOOD!!!!!!!!

      -TheREalJolieRuewen

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    • NOOOOOOOOOO FITZ why?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!???!!!?!?!?!??

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      • cries in a hole* I DONT KNOW WHETHER IM CRYING THAT IM HAPPY CUZ SOKEEFE AND DEXIANA HAPPENED, OR ANGRY CUZ THE STALE RITZ CRACKER RUINED THE MOMENTTTTTTT
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    • NO

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    • The Keeper of the Divergent District wrote:
      NO

      AGREED

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    • That was awesome

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    • SokeefeIsAWESOME1 wrote:
      The Keeper of the Divergent District wrote:
      NO
      AGREED

      THANKS

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    • Ooh TARELLA

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    • The Keeper of the Divergent District wrote:
      SokeefeIsAWESOME1 wrote:
      The Keeper of the Divergent District wrote:
      NO
      AGREED
      THANKS

      YOU ARE WELCOME, LOL 😂 

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    • Wow that was great!

      Loved the sokeefe!

      Not so much the Ritz Savory Cracker . ..  >:( 



      Also: She looked so surprised (Which was confusing because he'd sang about an elf with brown eyes and she was the only one), THE OBLIVIOUS FOSTER STRIKES AGAINNNNN XD 

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    • Lol 😂 ^

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    • XD

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    • The Keeper of the Divergent District wrote:
      NO

      I love your username by the way :) 

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    • Thank you!

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    • MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:
      Wow that was great!

      Loved the sokeefe!

      Not so much the Ritz Savory Cracker . ..  >:( 



      Also: She looked so surprised (Which was confusing because he'd sang about an elf with brown eyes and she was the only one), THE OBLIVIOUS FOSTER STRIKES AGAINNNNN XD 

      XD

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    • Chapter 8:Sophie's POV

      Sophie knew things would never end well, this complicated love triangle was a mess, but hse didn't plan for it to turn out this bad. When Keefe pulled away so quickly, she knew something was wrong, but she never thought that she'd find Fitz standing there. Yet, there they all were. It was silent for a moment, the kind of silence that just built until emotions broke free. Fitz's hands curled into fists and his eyes narrowed, and Sophie knew that there would be yelling. 

      "I thought I told both of you to back off! Keefe I'd expected, you've always betrayed me, but Dizznee, I'd never expect you to sink that low," Fitz shook his head and clenched his jaw.  Sophie just stood there in shock. Her eys darted to Keefe, who looked liked he wanted to kick something.

      "What do you mean you told them to backoff?" Sophie asked, confused. Fitz gave a cruel smile, and Sophie wanted to punch him.

      "How about we don't go there Fitzy. I'm sure it'll only make things worse between you and them," Keefe looked nervous, but Sophie had to know what Fitz was talking about. What had happened between the two of them? Was it her fault? She repeated the question once more.

      "Keefe promised he wouldn't get between you and me, he promised he'd back off. But you never were good at keeping promises, were you Keefe?"Fitz glared at his best friend and  Keefe shrunk back. Sophie's blood boiled, how could he make his dad force Keefe to back off? She wanted to scream and yell and most off all she wanted to fight. She let the rage fuel her, let it boil up inside, until a calming blue breeze cleared the angry fog.

      "Foster, It's fine. The rage really isn't necessary. I understand, but it's ok, I did break that promise. I'm not sorry about it, but I did. While going all Foster Rage-mode is awesome, it really won't help things here," Keefe whispered. Sophie knew he was right and let all the rage go, but that didn't stop her from glaring at Fitz. Biana and Dex were doing the same.

      "Why Fitz?" She tried to stay calm as she said it, but there was a slight edge to it. For a second Fitz's arrogant facade faded, but it quickly returned.

      "Because you deserve to be with me. You're the Moonlark, I'm a Vacker, together we'd be unstoppable. We'd be perfect together, the world would know your name. If you were a Vacker you'd truly be one of us, you'd belong and that's all you've ever wanted right? It should be me and you, not you and my undeserving friend whose mom is part of the Neverseen. You'd never fit in, you'd always be an outcast with him. He's an outcast, he's reckless, he's made a thousand mistakes. With me you could have everything, with him you'd get nothing," His voice was icy as he said it and as he stepped closer, she stomped on his foot. Fitz yelped in pain.

      "Maybe I don't need everything. I just need love and trust, and someone who respects me. Someone who cares about me more than his reputation and treats me like a person and not like a trophy, and I'd get that with Keefe. But I'll never get that with you. And Keefe isn't undeserving, he's loyal and kind and funny. I can be myself around him and he always listens, even if what I'm worried about is silly. Keefe is always there for me, and you almost never are. So if anyone is undeserving, it's you,"She hissed. She turned to find Keefe, staring at her with so much happiness, but also confusion. Did he really not believe what she'd said.

      "You really didn't have to say that Foster. I'm not perfect and I'm not always a great listener. I'm not even close to being the perfect boyfriend for you,but I'm going to try to make you happy," There was so much determination in his voice and Sophie just wanted to hug him as tight as she could.

      "You already make me happy," She whispered and almost pulled him into another kiss, when she remembered who was still there. Fitz. He opened his mouth to say something, but his sister cut him off.

      "Fitz this has to end, this isn't you. I know you're angry, but you're going to have to deal with it. People make choices you might not always agree with, but part of life is letting them make those choices. I like Dex and Sophie likes Keefe, that's that. You can't change that, but you can be supportive. I'm always here to talk, if you need to," Biana's eyes were pleading, but Fitz just turned away.

      " You guys can all have eachother! I'm done! I never want to talk to any of you again, especially you," His cold teal eyes locked on Sophie and he stomped away. Sophie wanted to run after him, but something inside of her stopped her. He needed to figure this out on his own, he would'nt even listen if she tried. Tears streamed down Biana's face and Sophie pulled her friend into a hug.

      "We're done, I just... I just lost my best friend," Keefe mumbled and Sophie's heart broke for him. But before she could walk over to him, Dex pulled him into an awkward bro-hug.

      "You have us now, and we'll never be done with you," Keefe gave a sad half-smile as he pulled away. They all just stood there for a moment, and let the tears pour. Then, they locked hands and gently squeezed. They had no idea how long they stood there, until Marella and Linh walked over. 

      "Wylie's about to preform and..." Linh started, her smile falling as she noticed how sad everyone looked. Sophie realized she must've looked like a mess and tried to brush away the ruined makeup.

      "Yeah what happened here?" Marella asked.

      "It doesn't matter now, we're together and that's all that that matters," Sophie responded with a sad smile. The words were true, that was all that mattered.

      *End Of Chapter 8*

      -KitKat

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    • Awww 😢 

      that was so sad'but the end...

      and Sophie's little speech...

      EEE

      MY HEART

      I DON'T CARE IF IT'S DEXIANA IT'S STILL ADORABLE!

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    • Awww I loved that so cute

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    • Awwwww. That was so saaaaad. 

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    • Awwwwwww, aWHAT THE HECK FITZ?!?!?!?!?

      that was a SUPER AWESOME chapter!!!!

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    • FITZ

      AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHh



      I loved the chapter though :)




      but Fitz  . .. . 

      that little Ritz Savory Cracker

      >:(

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    • MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:
      FITZ

      AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHh



      I loved the chapter though :)




      but Fitz  . .. . 

      that little Ritz Savory Cracker

      >:(

      Lol 😂 

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    • So good!!! Pooooooost moooooore!!

      -Calla's Moonlark

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    • This one's a bit calmer, to give you a break from the drama, but it also is a bit sad.

      Chapter 9: Wylie's POV *Note: This one contains some flashbacks so i might be a little confusing* Wylie didn't sing, it was a rule he'd made for himself years ago. It brought up too many memories that he wanted to forget. But somehow he'd agreed to join a singing competition and as he waited back stage feeling like throwing up, he began to regret it. His stomach churned and a headache blared ,but some little voice in the back of his head told him that he was going to do this, that he was going to sing. The little voice grew louder and louder and Wylie started to believe it. He was going to do this, not for glory, not for anyone in the audience (Except maybe Linh), but for himself. It was time he got over his worries and fears, it was time to let go of all the horrid memories, it was time to face the music. But he had no idea what to sing. He only knew 4 songs and none of them made him happy. The first three scared him,the first being a song Prentice sang to him about meeting again, which was right before the memory break. The lyrics were deep and sad and made him want to cry. So that song was a definite no-no. The second song,which was actually the third song he learned, was the one they played at Cyrah's funeral. It was about fading away and people being with you even when they die. Death didn't seem like a good thing to sing about at a talent show because you know, it's death. The third song he'd learned from Tiergan. Tiergan rarely sang, but when he was little, Wylie caught him singing a sad, remorseful song in his room. Tiergan had quickly figured out that Wylie was spying on him and brought him out of the closet where he was hiding. "Hey, Wyles. Care to sing along? It's a song about always having a choice and how when we make a wrong one we regret. It reminds me of your dad, he always said that, you know? He always said that you always have a choice," Tiergan had whispered. And as Wylie relived the memory he found tears streaming down his face. There was no way he was going to sing that song. But he might have too, because he had told himself he'd never sing the last song again. Not after what had happened. And though he never wanted to relive that moment again, he was swooped into a flashback. There he was, he was so much younger then. His mom lay on the grass, almost translucent. He hadn't cried then, since maybe there was still hope. "Wylie," His mother had whispered, her red hair was fanned out across the grass. She had looked so tired,but also like she was fighting. Fighting so hard to stay. "Mom? You're fading, what happened during the leap?" He'd asked. His mother had just looked away, staring off with a sad look in her eye. "I know hon, I just...made some mistakes,but it's ok now. It's ok," Her voice was soft and warm. Wylie missed that voice. "I'll get Elwin, you're going to be fine, he'll fix you!"He'd tried to run off, but his mom had caught his hand. "Wylie, it's too late. I'm going to have to leave you, the light it's calling to me," She'd rasped, there was a faraway look in her eyes. "But, I.."He'd whispered, but Cyrah cut him off. "You know what you can do? Why don't you sing, that little song I taught you. It'll keep you going when I'm gone," `"This little light of mine, I'm gonna let it shine," He'd sang, and he didn't even finish the first verse before his mother faded into the light. With that, Wylie was pulled from the memory and he didn't realize he'd been shaking until a soft hug encased him. He opened his eyes to find a beautiful girl with concerned silver-blue eyes staring at him. "Linh,I..." His voice was wobbly "Shhhhhh, It's ok. Were you thinking of your mom again?" He swore this girl could read his mind, even if she was only a hydrokinetic. He gave a weak nod and she hugged him tighter. "I'm sure she'd be very proud of you, you're really gonna shine tonight," He knew Linh didn't know about the memory, but he pulled away from her as she said that and a tiny sob escaped his lips. But as Linh left, something clicked inside of him. He hadn't been shining his light,and he hadn't let go of all the negetive memories and now it was time to do both. So when he started to sing, the lyrics flowed from him, long and sweet and deep. And his eyes were still full of tears, but he let them flow, let them carry him, let them help him let everything go. And when the song finally ended Wylie smiled and for the first time in a very long time he shined.

      • End of Chapter 9*

      -KitKat

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    • ^Also sorry about the spacing between paragraphs, my computer is acting weird. -KitKat

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    • Omg! That was sooooo good!

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    • ^It's really good! keep writing, you're doing awesome! :)

      -KitKat

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    • Chapter 10: Sophie's POV

      Sophie knew she had to help pick a winner. She knew she had to assess every preformance. She knew she had to focus, but she couldn't. Not with everything that had happened. Everyone else was probably thinking the same thing because they all sat there slumped in their chairs. Well, everyone exept for Stina. She looked genuinely confused, but kept talking about each preformance anyway. Sophie pulled out an itchy eyelash and stared off into the distance. What had happened between them and Fitz? Would they ever be friends again?

      "Sophie, are you even listening?" A sharp voice jolted her from her thoughts. Sophie nodded, embarassed and tried to focus on what Stina was saying. But the nervous thoughts came rushing back and Sophie couldn't ignore them. There was a deep, empty feeling in the pit of her stomach, that she just couldn't shake.  Something bad was going to happen, she just knew it and she had to stop it before it did.

      "Ok, what happened to you guys? You aren't listening and you aren't even talking about boy drama here, which is impossible. Is everything ok?" Stina asked. Sophie stared at her feet and Biana played with her hair, neither of them wantng to answer the question. There was a still, awkward silence, before Stina shrugged and asked them if they had any thoughts.

      "Um...I thought Dex did awesome," Biana replied and Sophie noticed how much the beautiful girl was blushing.

      "Yeah, but he wasn't that great a dancer and his voice was ok, but not awesome," Marella pointed out. Sophie had to agree, Dex did awesome, but he wasn't really the best. Biana sighed and nodded. They debated and talked for a long time about each and every person, until it came down to Fitz.

      "Last," Everyone chimed. Just thinking about that preformance made her shudder. Tears gleamed in Biana's eyes and Sophie took her frends hand. 

      "Thanks," Biana whispered, and Sophie knew how hard this must be for her. Fitz was her brother after all, and to have him say so many cruel things must've really hurt her. After an hour of debating they came to an agreement and posted the list up on the stage. There were little notes next to each name so that everyone would understand why they were placed that way.

      Fifth: Fitz (For obvious reasons)

      Fourth: Dex (Awesome, just not great)

      Third: Tam (Great dance moves)

      Second: Keefe (heartfelt and sweet, but the Ballad of Bo and Ro before that, not so much)

      First: Wylie (You really shined on stage, who knew you sang so awesome!)

      They waited for all the boys to read it before eventually tearing it down. Sophie walked with her friends back inside Havenfield, where Edaline greeted them with plates of sweets. There was mallowmelt and custard bursts, and cinnacreme and Sophie felt like she was in dessert heaven. She chatted with Biana at a little book nook in the corner of the room. It wasn't deep or anything, neither of them could handle talking about Fitz without crying. It was just fun.

      "So, um what's your favorite color?" Biana asked, then seemed to realize that was a bad question. But Sophie shrugged it off, she was fine talking about teal. Sure Fitz kinda ruined it for her, but it was still a pretty color. She was ready to say that, but her lips formed another word instead.

      "Ice blue," She blurted. Which now that she thought about it wasn't all that suprising, she like Keefe and ice blue was actually gorgeous now that she thought about it. She heard a snicker from behind her and turned to find a handsome blonde boy standing there.

      "Wow Foster, gotta say I'm flattered. What made you change your mind, my eyes, the fact that's it's totally rad, or is teal just not cutting it... oh," Keefe looked away, probably thinking the exact thing Sophie was. 

      "Sorry Foster, I just forgot for a sec. I guess it's easier to try to forget and joke about what happened, than accept it. If you want to know, my favorite color has always been gold, and it might just happen to be because of some special gold-flecked eyes," He gave a nervous smile and Sophie returned it. Wait, gold? Wasn't that the color of that special notebook? It was of her, she couldn't believe how oblivious she was.

      " Yeah," Sophie whispered inching closer to him.  He pulled her into a kiss, a wonderful, sweet kiss. This one was perfection, better than any kiss she'd ever had. It was long and Sophie wished this moment would never end.

      "So, yeah, I'm just gonna go find Dex," Biana awkwardly walked away and they both pulled away. For a moment it was just the two of them, but Ro quickly interrupted.

      "Awww Hunkyhair, I knew you could do it! And Blondie's no longer Queen of Obliviousness, yess!" Ro exclaimed loud enough for the whole room to hear, luckily Grady had gone to talk to Sandor, so there'd be no comments on "That Boy". Sophie and Keefe both blushed and scooted away from eachother. When Sophie turned, she saw Edaline giving her one of those goofy smiles and two thumbs up.

      "Wow, so that's what happened," Stina breathed, her eyes were full of amusement. Sophie knew that wasn't the whole story, but she didn't feel like telling anyone, so she just nodded.

      "So, um, Wylie what are you going to use your dare for. We could prank Grady or make Dex dye his hair purple or sneak balding elixers in into Tam's shampoo to get rid of his aweful bangs!" Keefe broke the silence. Tam rolled his eyes and groaned, which only made Keefe grin wider. Wylie looked taken aback and confused. Sophie wondered if he'd even use his dare, and for a second it seemed like that was the case. But then he announced what it was going to be.

      "Ok, I dare Fitz to come take a walk with me, and when I get back I dare everyone to go to bed," Wylie decided. 

      "What, going to bed?! I'm disapointed in you Wylie, think of all the chaos you could've caused," Keefe groaned and Sophie had to laugh. The requests were rather odd, what did he want to do with Fitz? But Sophie decided not to focus on those questions, she was going to enjoy the rest of tonight because after everything that had happened, she needed some calming, fun times. So when Wylie and Fitz walked out the door, she just snnugled closer to Keefe and for the first time in very long time, Sophie Foster relaxed.

      *End Of Chapter 10*

      -KitKat

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    • Nice! 

      ~Calla's Moonlark

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    • THIS IS SO GOOD! 

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      • All in a sweet voice* AWEEEEE THIS IS ADORABLE! CAN I TELEPORT THE RITZ CRACKER TO TARTARUS?
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    • AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW(esome)

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    • That was awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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    • THAT........WAS.......... AWESOME AND AWESOME AND AHHHHHHHHHHH SO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • Chapter 11: Wylie's POV

      Wylie never thought he'd win anything, especially a singing competition, yet here he was listening to everyone cheer for him. When they asked for the dare, he was unsure. He'd never really "dared" anyone something before, after his mom died he felt like he had to grow-up faster and be more mature, so he'd never really played games like this. But if he had to use his dare on someone it'd be Fitz, he noticed the way the others looked so unhappy when Fitz walked in and how angry he looked, something was up. And if he knew this group of kids well enough, it was probably boy drama. So he had dared the angry teal-eyed boy to take a walk with him.

      "So, why'd you bring me here?" Fitz's voice was icy and cold. There must've been more drama than Wylie thought. He wrung his hands, unsure what to say.

      "Ok, um, advice has never really been my thing, but I'm going to try to help you," Wylie stared at the grass as they passed through Havenfield's pastures. 

      "Well, then you wasted your dare because I'm fine, if you want to help someone I suggest you help my so-called friends,"Fitz practically growled. This was not going well, but Wylie was still going to try. So he lifted his head to meet Fitz's eyes. Those eyes were usually so full of life and determination and hope, now they were cold and empty.

      "Listen, I was angry once to, when my dad's mind got broken that put me in a really dark place and you sort of seem where I was. Do you want to talk about what happened?" Wylie gestured to a wooden bench and to his suprise, Fitz actually sat down. Maybe this wasn't going as bad as he thought it was. It was silent for a second, just the two boys staring anywhere, but at eachother. Wylie wrung his hands, an old nervous habit of his. Then a heavy sigh escaped Fitz's lips.

      "My stupid best friend stole Sophie from me, and my sister is tarnishing the Vacker name even worse by dating the product of a bad match. They're ruining everything!" Wylie didn't know what to say to that. He knew he was supposed to be understanding, but Fitz kind of sounded like a whiny toddler. Wylie pushed that image out of his mind and tried to think of something to say.

      "Well... um... first of all, maybe try not to think of your reputation so much. These people are people not some trophies with specific values. Dex isn't worth any less than some stuffy noble, no one is better than other people," Wylie began and Fitz nodded. Something in him softened a little, he almost looked..ashamed of himself, but Wylie decided not to bring that up.

      "I know,but...I've always been the Golden Boy and I don't want to lose that. I just feels like with everything that's happened, the life I once thought was perfect, is being ripped away,"Fitz whispered and Wylie understood what he meant. He'd felt like that when his dad went to Exile and his mom died. Maybe he was finally getting through to Wonderboy! A few of the butterflies in his stomach settled and he felt ready to bring up the harder topic. He knew it wasn't going to be pretty, but he was hoping it wasn't going to go as bad as he thought it would. There was no knowing when it came to Fitz's most touchy subject, Sophie.

      "So... Sophie is with Keefe now?" It was a stupid question, he already knew the answr, but he couldn't thing of anywhere else to start. Fitz's feature's hardened and he ran a and through his hair, this was not a good sign. Suddenly, all the butterflies came swarming back.

      "Yes, which is stupid because I'm so much better!" Wylie sighed, relationship advice had never been his thing. It also didn't help that he'd never been in a relationship, but he was still going to try. Because he could tell Fitz was a ticking time bomb, sooner or later he was going to explode, and Wylie was trying to find a way to defuse it. He just hoped this wouldn't blow up in his face.

      "Well, have you considered that maybe Sophie isn't the one for you. She and Keefe look pretty happy and there are plenty of other fish in the sea. You're Fitz Vacker, I'm sure tons of girls like you and a lot of them are really nice. So, um, what I'm trying to say is not to back off, but to maybe give something new a shot? You might be suprised how awesome a different girl is," Wylie knew that was an epic fail even before he said the words. He was prepped for yelling and screaming and stomping off, but somehow what Fitz did next was worse. He smiled, Fitz Vacker smiled. No one could be fine after two minutes of being talked to...unless... Oh no. The thought replayed through Wylie's head. 

      "Thanks Wylie!" Fitz called, running back towards Havenfield. Wylie tried to run, but he couldn't, he was still in shock. Fitz was going to do something stupid and it was all Wylie's fault.

      "There's no needto thank me," He finally managed to get out and there wasn't because if Wylie knew Fitz, the only way this would end was disaster. Especially if it was what he thought it was. 

      He tried to erase the thought from his mind, Fitz was a nice princely boy, he wouldn't do something like that. He wouldn't manipulate and toy with other people's feelings, he wouldn't string girls along just to get back at someone. But all happy thoughts were erased from his mind when he noticed Fitz run over to talk to Marella. He turned to look at Keefe and Sophie, both sleeping so happily next to eachother. They were all snuggled up and their hands were entertwined, they looked so calm. But Wylie knew once Fitz executed his plan, no one would be calm. And as he slipped into his sleeping bag one thought kept replaying in his mind "What did I just do?".

      *End of Chapter 11*

      -KitKat

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    • Oooh this is amazing. So so good. I hate Fitz in this fanfic. And yay Sokeefe and Dexiana! You write really well. Also seriously Fitz???

      Also I'm sorry, all my sentences were really random. But you're a really good writer!

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    • 73.115.84.221 wrote:
      Oooh this is amazing. So so good. I hate Fitz in this fanfic. And yay Sokeefe and Dexiana! You write really well. Also seriously Fitz???

      Also I'm sorry, all my sentences were really random. But you're a really good writer!T

      Thank you! You guys are all so sweet, and yes Fitz is going to be making some questionable choices in the next few chapters.

      -KitKat

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    • Oh the grand old Ritz Cracker,

      He had a reputation!

      That his sister was 'destroying',

      And he was a jealous boy.

      So he dated many girls,

      Just to get back at poor, dear Soph!

      And then the fandom came at him for,

      Trying to ruin their Sokeefe prayers.




      I'm proud of this little song!

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    • IggysElixers wrote:
      Oh the grand old Ritz Cracker,

      He had a reputation!

      That his sister was 'destroying',

      And he was a jealous boy.

      So he dated many girls,

      Just to get back at poor, dear Soph!

      And then the fandom came at him for,

      Trying to ruin their Sokeefe prayers.




      I'm proud of this little song!

      That's an awesome little song! :)

      -KitKat

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    • 73.202.57.61 wrote:
      IggysElixers wrote:
      Oh the grand old Ritz Cracker,

      He had a reputation!

      That his sister was 'destroying',

      And he was a jealous boy.

      So he dated many girls,

      Just to get back at poor, dear Soph!

      And then the fandom came at him for,

      Trying to ruin their Sokeefe prayers.




      I'm proud of this little song!

      That's an awesome little song! :)

      -KitKat

      Yes, this is amazing XD

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    • Notif

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    • Ritz is....is.... I have no words

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    • Teamfoster-Keefe12345 wrote:
      Ritz is....is.... I have no words

      ikr

      that Savory Ritz Cracker

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    • Is it bad that I now call Fitz 'ritz savoury cracker' and my friends don't know what I'm fitzing going on about? (Haha I use my own language from kotlc names and places n objects n stuff. Example: freaking or fricking or something means fitzing)

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    • IggysElixers wrote:
      Is it bad that I now call Fitz 'ritz savoury cracker' and my friends don't know what I'm fitzing going on about? (Haha I use my own language from kotlc names and places n objects n stuff. Example: freaking or fricking or something means fitzing)

      lol 

      example: GUYS I GOT A FITZING F ON MY MATH TEST

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    • Chapter: 12 Sophie's POV

      In the middle of the night Sophie woke up, thrashing from the nightmares. Tears pooled in her dark brown eyes as they kept replaying in her mind. She let out a hollow sob and the figure next to her jolted awake. It was hard to see who it was and her brain was foggy so she couldn't remember who was sleeping next to her.

      "Foster?" Oh, it was Keefe. The thought filled her with some happiness, but the darkness kept seeping in. All her worst memories, all of her mistakes, losing her friend, the scenes kept replaying over and over.  Another sob escaped her lips.

      "Shhh, Sophie it's ok. It was only a nightmare, I get them too sometimes and I know how hard it is to live through them. But everything's fine, we're in Havenfield, everyone is sleeping soundly (especially Ro, she's snoring a ton), and we're here," Keefe whispered brushing the hair out of her face. She gave a little half smile. 

      "You're here," Her voice was scratchy and wobbly.  Keefe smiled and snuggled closer to her.

      "That's right, and Team Foster-Keefe is going to win," He yawned taking her hand. Sophie felt the blue breezes coarsing through her, bringing her hope and happiness. She let herself drift into a sleepy abyss, gently closing her eyes.

      "Team Foster-Keefe is gonna win," She murmered, falling into a restful sleep. She dreamt of alicorns and love and a certain pair of ice blue eyes. The dreams filled her with hope and she let her body relax, she needed the rest. 

      "Ok Lovebirds, time to wake up!" Sophie awoke to Keefe's bodyguard shaking her awake. Sophie groaned, having an ogre in your face was not a pleasent way to wake up. She turned to look at the blonde boy next to her, who  still sleeping peacefully.  "Do you mind if I woke him up? No offence, but being shooken awake by an ogre screaming about lovebirds, isn't the best way to wake up," She asked, trying to spare Keefe the cruel ogre wake-up call.

      "Aw, but it's so fun! But fine, you can wake him up Blondie," Ro whined and Sophie tried to ignore her. She gently gave him a little shake. 

      "Keefe, time to get up. Keefe, it's 7 o'clock, and everyone else is up," She whispered, but he just groaned and rolled over. She tried again, but it didn't work.

      "Keefe if you don't wake up, I'll have Tam give you bangs," She teased and Keefe popped up.

      "You wouldn't dare," He smirked. 

      "You never know, I have a dark side," She grinned and Keefe laughed with her. His hair was a mess, but it kind of worked for him, and his eyes were just barely open. He definately wasn't a morning person, Sophie decided.

      "Ok everyone, I made butterblasts!" Edaline called from the kitchen. Everyone raced over to the table, gobbling up the donut like desserts. Sophie was fairly certain Keefe had three, but Grady had 5. Speaking of Grady, he had noticed how close she and Keefe were sitting and did not look happy. Sophie shrugged it off and made a poin of sitting closer to Keefe and luckily there were no comments on "That Boy".

      "So, how is everyone doing? Is there anything you'd like to talk about?" Grady asked narrowing his eyes and Keefe. He earned a reply of "fine" and several shrugs from the table. Everyone looked tired and bored, except for Fitz and Marella. Both of them were beaming, and Sophie had a feeling none of this would turn out well.

      "I have something I'd like to talk about Mr. Ruewen," Fitz grinned, but his smile didn't quite reach his eyes. There was something chilling in the way he looked at Sophie and Keefe, something that made Sophie shudder. She could tell Keefe had seen it too, he was kicking the table and running a hand through his messy blonde hair.

      "What is it?" Grady asked and Sophie felt her stomach muscles tighten and her heart beating faster and faster. 

      "Oh, nothing, just the fact that I have a new girlfriend,Marella," Fitz pulled the petite girl into a huge mushy kiss. But instead of closing his eyes, they were focused right on Sophie, with such cruel glee. In that moment Sophie understood exactly what he was doing, Fitz was going to make her and Keefe pay for being together, and the only thing she could do was try and stop it before it hurt everyone she loved.

      *End of Chapter 12*

      -KitKat

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      -KitKat

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    • WHAT THE FITZ, FITZ?

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    • FITZ JUST REALLY FITZED UP RIGHT THERE

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      I also feel really bad for Marella right now 



      This is a great chapter :) 

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    • Chapter 13: Marella's POV

      Marella never wanted to hurt anyone, she hadn't really even wanted to get involved in this, yet here she was kissing her friend's ex. She knew it was wrong, the second their lips met she was sure of it, but there was no escaping this. She'd just have to hope she didn't lose her friends. 

      "Marella, why?" Sophie's voice was soft and shaky. Marella knew she should apoligize, but there was a lump in her throat and Fitz was shaking his head. So just turned away and snuggled closer to Fitz, just like they'd practiced.

      "Marella can date whoever she wants, and clearly she wants me. Isn't that right Mare?" Fitz falshed a sugary-sweet smile. They'd agreed on the nickname, well Fitz had decided on it and she didn't feel like arguing, she still cringed every time she heard it. From the corner of her eye, she saw Tam stare at his feet, he looked...distraught. Marella decided to ignore it, she had to keep going with the plan.

      "That's right," She forced a smile, Stick to the script, stick to the script she told herself. Sophie looked like she was going to cry and Keefe looked like he wanted to punch a wall. She wanted to do the same and scream out an apology, but she bit her tongue. She didn't want Fitz to hate her.

      "Do you even want to be with Fitz?" Biana asked. Marella didn't know how to answer that. Fitz was a hot, princely Vacker, but she didn't feel anything around him. There was no spark, not even a flicker of one, but she went with the response she was sure he wanted.

      "Yeah," Marella managed to get out, when had her voice gotten so wobbly? She fiddled with one of her braids and stared at the floor. It was a rather nice floor, it was wood which was sturdy and good. It wasn't very interesting, but it was easier than staring at her disapointed friends.


      "How did you guys even get together?" Edaline tried to fill the awkward silence. Her eyebrows were crunched together and her smile was forced and Marella wished she could hide.

      "Well, Fitz came to me last night, and he looked really happy to see me. He told me he'd always loved me and..um..." Marella stammered, this, of course, was all a lie. He'd come to her desperate, and begged her to help him, she would've said no, but he'd looked at her like she mattered. Sophie never did that. Marella knew it was all a game, all a lie, but maybe if she played the part, she could actually mean something to someone. 

      After brekfast was finished, Sophie and everyone else had run off to edit the video to send to Amy or something like that, Marella didn't really understand it. She had wanted to come along, but she knew everyone probably hated her. But even if they didn't, Fitz had cornered her in the hallway and told her she couldn't go. They stood there for a second before Fitz led her outside. Marella had never know Havenfield looked so beautiful in the morning. There was no time to admire it though, Fitz meant buisness.

      "Marella, you did great  My Love," He whispered and his smile was so warm and tender. His eyes were full of pride and happiness and she melted in his arms. Maybe he did love her afterall.

      "Oh, thank you," She murmered. His smile was infectious and she returned it. Then his gaze hardened, and the warmth gathering in her heart was replaced with cold prickles.

      "But, you could do even better. You royally messed up the explaination and your kiss was only half hearted. If I'm going to win Sophie back, I need to make her jealous and you need to start commiting. Remember, I could've chosen any of the girls, but I chose you. Mare, I need you to make this work, I need you to do better, understand?" Fitz's voice was harsh and cold. She wanted to run away from this cruel boy, to join her friends,but instead she just nodded. She was already in too deep.

      And so it went, through out the whole day she played Fitz's game. She whispered sweet things to him when the others were watching, let him pull her into elaborate kisses, let him use nicknames like "Honeyboo" and "Sugar". She hardly saw Sophie and Keefe, they had chosen to avoid her and she couldn't blame them. She knew she should stop, but she just kept doing it. 

      "Mare-Bear?" He cooed and Marella followed him in to the living room. They sat in soft plush chairs. Marella slumped into hers, maybe if she sank in enough she could disapear.

      "What is it Fitz?" She displayed her fake-smile for anyone who might be watching them. 

      "I need a favor, you need to work your gossipy charm and start a rumor about Sophie and Keefe. Like maybe, he's unworthy of her or how the Moonlark shouldn't be dating the son of a Neverseen leader?" Marella was shocked. She couldn't, wouldn't gossip about her friends. She couldn't hurt them like that.

      "I don't know Fitz, maybe that's not a good idea," She mumbled. The boy's eyes turned stone cold.

      "Well, it's not really a rumor. It's the truth. What's wrong with spreading the truth Ella?" His lips curled into a smile that made Marella want to run away. She couldn't hold her tongue anymore, she wouldn't lie about the people she loved.

      "Everything! And it's not the truth, Keefe isn't undeserving. I'm not spreading lies about my friends, they're like... like a family to me," Tears poured down her face, running like salty rivers. Fitz's hands curled into fists and he turned to pace around her.

      "Hmmm, and I really thought we had something, I thought you wanted someone to care about you, I thought you wanted to matter," He snarled, there was a primitive glee in his eyes.

      "Well maybe I don't matter! But at least I'm not like you, at least I care about people and feelings and things other than myself. At least I have friens who will support and love me. I see that now and I don't need you, you need me. And Fitz, I'm done," She didn't cry and her eyes weren't sad or lonely, there was just sheer determination in them.  "Do you even think they'll welcome you back, you hurt them. They probably hate you," He  sneered, but his features had softened. Did he want...forgiveness? 

      "Maybe they won't and I will have deserved it, but there's no hurt in trying. They may even forgive you too, you can still make amends Fitz, They could forgive the both of us" Her voice was barely a whisper. For a second, Fitz looked like he wanted to join her, but he stalked away. Marella fell to her knees and cried, she knew they'd never forgive her.

      "Marella?" A voice came from behind her, and she turned to find a beautiful blonde girl with brown eyes. Marella sobbed even harder, there was no way she could face the girl she'd hurt so much.

      "Hey, it's ok. Everyone makes mistakes, I would know, I've made hundreds," A gentle blue breeze filled her mind and she turned to see Keefe standing next to her, holding Sophie's hand.

      "I'm so sorry, I hurt you and I know you won't forgive me, but..." She choked out and both of them pulled her into a hug.

      "Shhhhh, it's ok," Sophie ran her hand down Marella's back.

      "But I hurt you so bad, and I don't even matter," She sighed, Keefe and Sophie just hugged her harder.

      "What do you mean you don't matter? You mean a lot to all of us, you're awesome Marella," Keefe and Sophie took her hands and together they walked to go join the rest of their friends.

      *End of Chapter 13*

      -KitKat

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    • IT'S SUPER GOOD!!!!!

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    • The Aftermath of A RUNAWAY #1

      If anyone would like to ckeck out my fanfic try clicking here. Thanks!

      .+*Cora*+.

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    • AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH THAT WAS SO AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!  When will you post another chapter?

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    • THIS IS SO GOOD!!!

      PLEASE POST SOON! (no pressure)

      Also: XDCTFVGYKYFCUTDXCFGVYBKHJGIYFCTUIYGVBUIYCFTUXIYGVUBGOVIFR^*DFdufyivgkubhkguvyifc TFOUGHBLUVOFT&GUVLDRIY^XDCTFVGYKYFCUTDXCFGVYBKHJGIYFCTUIYGVBUIYCFTUXIYGVUBGOVIFR^*DFtuykgbhuvgyce5s7uctfxde7 RFTIYGUBHLVTFCIDR^TFVUGCTIYRD^*XDCTFVGYKYFCUTDXCFGVYBKHJGIYFCTUIYGVBUIYCFTUXIYGVUBGOVIFR^*DFYUCTFYIVGUCFITUXDZE&XURCIFYGVFXTDUESTCFIYGVKCYDIR^

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    • MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:
      THIS IS SO GOOD!!!

      PLEASE POST SOON! (no pressure)

      Also: XDCTFVGYKYFCUTDXCFGVYBKHJGIYFCTUIYGVBUIYCFTUXIYGVUBGOVIFR^*DFdufyivgkubhkguvyifc TFOUGHBLUVOFT&GUVLDRIY^XDCTFVGYKYFCUTDXCFGVYBKHJGIYFCTUIYGVBUIYCFTUXIYGVUBGOVIFR^*DFtuykgbhuvgyce5s7uctfxde7 RFTIYGUBHLVTFCIDR^TFVUGCTIYRD^*XDCTFVGYKYFCUTDXCFGVYBKHJGIYFCTUIYGVBUIYCFTUXIYGVUBGOVIFR^*DFYUCTFYIVGUCFITUXDZE&XURCIFYGVFXTDUESTCFIYGVKCYDIR^

      FITZ YOU HAVE SERIOUS ISSUES

      POOR MARELLA

      POOR SOPHIE

      FITZ AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

      That sums it all up

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    • HydrokineticGirl101 wrote:
      That was awesome

      AGREED!

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    • SokeefeIsAWESOME1 wrote:
      MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:
      THIS IS SO GOOD!!!

      PLEASE POST SOON! (no pressure)

      Also: XDCTFVGYKYFCUTDXCFGVYBKHJGIYFCTUIYGVBUIYCFTUXIYGVUBGOVIFR^*DFdufyivgkubhkguvyifc TFOUGHBLUVOFT&GUVLDRIY^XDCTFVGYKYFCUTDXCFGVYBKHJGIYFCTUIYGVBUIYCFTUXIYGVUBGOVIFR^*DFtuykgbhuvgyce5s7uctfxde7 RFTIYGUBHLVTFCIDR^TFVUGCTIYRD^*XDCTFVGYKYFCUTDXCFGVYBKHJGIYFCTUIYGVBUIYCFTUXIYGVUBGOVIFR^*DFYUCTFYIVGUCFITUXDZE&XURCIFYGVFXTDUESTCFIYGVKCYDIR^

      FITZ YOU HAVE SERIOUS ISSUES

      POOR MARELLA

      POOR SOPHIE

      FITZ AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

      That sums it all up

      XD it honestly does though lolz

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    • MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:
      SokeefeIsAWESOME1 wrote:
      MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:
      THIS IS SO GOOD!!!

      PLEASE POST SOON! (no pressure)

      Also: XDCTFVGYKYFCUTDXCFGVYBKHJGIYFCTUIYGVBUIYCFTUXIYGVUBGOVIFR^*DFdufyivgkubhkguvyifc TFOUGHBLUVOFT&GUVLDRIY^XDCTFVGYKYFCUTDXCFGVYBKHJGIYFCTUIYGVBUIYCFTUXIYGVUBGOVIFR^*DFtuykgbhuvgyce5s7uctfxde7 RFTIYGUBHLVTFCIDR^TFVUGCTIYRD^*XDCTFVGYKYFCUTDXCFGVYBKHJGIYFCTUIYGVBUIYCFTUXIYGVUBGOVIFR^*DFYUCTFYIVGUCFITUXDZE&XURCIFYGVFXTDUESTCFIYGVKCYDIR^

      FITZ YOU HAVE SERIOUS ISSUES

      POOR MARELLA

      POOR SOPHIE

      FITZ AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

      That sums it all up
      XD it honestly does though lolz

      😂, Yep!

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    • Soooooooooooooo good! ❤️🧡💛💚💙💜

      ~Calla's Moonlark

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    • I'm so sorry I haven't been posting as much, it's been a pretty busy week. I'll try to post two chapters tomoroow to make up for it.

      -KitKat

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    • I feel like Marella would snap back at Fitz whenever he called her 'Mare' or 'Ella'

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    • IggysElixers wrote:
      I feel like Marella would snap back at Fitz whenever he called her 'Mare' or 'Ella'

      ikr XD

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    • Chapter 14: Fitz's POV

      Fitz was angry. Angry at the world and all his former friends, but even though he didn't want to admit it, he was angry at himself. He'd screwed up everything and everyone hated him. If he could he'd go back in time to end all of this madness, but it was too late. He'd done the deed and he was already in too deep, no one would forgive him now. But since any from of forgiveness was out the window, he decided he'd keep going. He'd hurt them, yes, but they'd hurt him too. Who was to say revenge didn't taste as sweet as forgiveness? If Sophie chose Keefe, then he'd let them continue their relationship. An idea began to twist and turn in his mind, it was cruel, but it would work well enough. Besides, break-ups happened all the time, he'd just be... accelerating the process. 

      His plan began with the hardest step of all, faking remorse and earning their trust once more. It would be hard, but he knew he could do it.

      "Hey guys, I'm really sorry about what I did. It was stupid and wrong and it hurt you guys. You're the best friends I've ever had and I really hope you'll forgive me. Friends?" He tried to make his eyes look sad and like a puppy's. It always worked and this time was no different.

      "You're truly sorry?" Sophie whispered, her eyes were rimmed with red and she was staring at her feet. He nodded and Sophie sighed, then offered him a wary smile. This was almost too easy.

      "Then, um... we're friends again. But just friends, nothing more," Sophie's eyes met his. He'd forgotten how beautiful they looked, how beautiful she looked. She was so kind and trusting and so eager for him to be her friend. As was everyone else, except for Marella and Ro.

      "Sophie, he hurt us. He hurt you, you can't honestly offer him forgiveness this easily. He manipulated all of us, me included. That's not something a friend would do," Marella's stare was icy cold.Fitz offered her a perfect smile he hoped screamed "Sorry",  a smile she did not return.

      "Marella's right Blondie, I don't trust Pretty Boy," Ro added. Fitz had forgotten how skeptical she was, but it was no problem. He was doing this and no stupid ogre bodyguard was going to stop him. Fitz gazed arround the room, his teal eyes locked on his best friend,Keefe just turned away.

      Fitz put on his "best friend face" for the rest of the day, flashing smiles, listening intently, anything to make his friends trust him again. He swore if he had to listen to one more story about Sophie's weird human sister, he was going to scream. It was worth it though, they were sharing with him, bringing up old jokes, everything that good friends did. They were eating up his reformed boy act, soon it would be time for phase two. But it wouldn't work without Keefe trusting him, and the blonde boy was silent through the day, barely even looking at Fitz. Fitz just had to hope everything would still work out, even if Keefe still wasn't cooperating.

      He decided to get the part of the plan that involved Keefe over with first, it would be easier that way. So when the ice-blue eyed boy  went outside to take a walk, Fitz followed him.

      "Hey Keefe," He called running to catch up with him. For the first time that day, Keefe met his eyes. They were full of hope, but also something skeptical and melancholy.

      "Oh, hi Fitz. What are you doing here?" Keefe asked.

      "I just wanted to catch up with my best friend," There was an awkward silence, like Keefe was debating whether to trust him. Fitz hoped he did, everything would go so much smoother if he did.

      "Oh, um, cool. What do wanna talk about?" Keefe finally answered, running a hand through his messy hair. Here csme the most crucial step in Fitz's plan, lying to an empath. It was going to be hard, but he was going to do it.

      "Yeah, I heard Sophie saying some things about you," He tried to make his tone sound concerned, maybe if he did that it'd make his emotions feel normal. 

      "Oh, what'd Foster say about me?" Keefe's eyebrows were raised and he looked confused. It was the perfect time to strike. Fitz positioned himself, laying a gentle hand on his friend's shoulder.

      "She said she wished you were a better boyfriend and that she hates the way you always make things a joke. She also said she doesn't even love you all that much, you're just her rebound boyfriend," He let the words sink in deep, let them fester in his heart.

      "That's a lie," Keefe mumbled. How did he figure it out? This should've been easy, but it wasn't, Keefe was too good. But Fitz wasn't about to lose yet, he could still save this mission.

      "No, I'm sorry Keefe, but she said those things," He tilted his head in a way that made him look like he was just a concerned best friend, Keefe didn't buy it,

      "Yeah, well, your emotions say otherwise. Fitz why are you doing this, we said we'd forgive you?" Fitz silently cursed himself for placing his hand on Keefe's shoulder, it had given him away.  He turned away from his former friend and stalked back into the house, leaving Keefe and his stupid question in the dust.

      He did the same thing for Sophie and she actually bought it. She was in tears by the time he left. Fitz had decided to see what Keefe was doing and found him in the exact spot he'd left him.

      "Sophie hates you!" He sang and Keefe's eyes widened... His best friend shook his head and turned the other way, staring out at the ocean cliffs in the distance.

      "No, really she does," Fitz jeered once more. He had been filled with a cruel happiness, it felt so good and warm, but there was still a small voice in the back of his head saying this was wrong. It grew louder and sharper, filling him with dread, but he pushed it away. He focused on the tears in Keefe's ice blue eyes, the one's he kept trying to hold in. he deserves this, Fitz thought.' Keef had taken Sophie from him, He needed to pay. 

      "Why?" Keefe whispered, "Fitz, why?" The question was dumb, so Fitz decided he wasn't going to answer it. But Keefe kept repeating it, it was softer, yet sharper each time. Until Fitz finally caved.

      "You did this to me!" He exploded. Keefe looked suprised, ugh, why couldn't he understand.

      "I'm sorry, but what?" His friend whispered. Fitz wanted to lunge at him for being so dumb, but he restrained himself.

      "You took Sophie from me," He snarled and Keefe's eyes filled with anger.

      "I didn't take her, she decided that she and I would be happy together, and we were. Sophie isn't some "Sophie Trophy" you get to display around your house, she gets to choose who she wants. She just wanted to be your friend, isn't that enough? You've lost her, you know? And acting all villianous isn't going to help that,"The words were calm, and yet they were so fierce. They tore throughout Fitz, burning with anger and disapointment. Fitz let the rage take hold of him, let himself explode.

      "If that how you see me?! The villian in your picture perfect fairytale?! You want a villian, fine, I'm the villian, and Ill make sure the end of this story  isn't  a happy one," Fitz stalked away, leaving Keefe and all his regrets in the dust.

      • End of Chapter 14*

      -KItKat

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    • WOAH

      that was so good

      AND INTENSE

      I honestly thought Fitz had apologized for real

      SHOULDA KNOWN WHAT TO EXPECT FROM RITZ SAVORY CRACKER >:(

      UGH

      FITZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ >:(

      FITZ YOU DRAMA QUEENNNNNNNNNN

      >:( 

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    • AHHHHHHHHHHHH THAT CHAPTER WAS SO AMAZINGLY SAD 😞 

      It was still a really good chapter though! I really really really really really really really really really really really really liked it!

      Me on the other hand, FITZ YOU BIG MEANIE!

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      • grabs une chancala*
      • Slaps Keefe with une chancala*


      Mission: accomplished

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    • fitz is soooo... Fitzroy Avery Vacker sometimes ahhhh

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    • MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:
      WOAH

      that was so good

      AND INTENSE

      I honestly thought Fitz had apologized for real

      SHOULDA KNOWN WHAT TO EXPECT FROM RITZ SAVORY CRACKER >:(

      UGH

      FITZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ >:(

      FITZ YOU DRAMA QUEENNNNNNNNNN

      >:( 

      What they said

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    • This is Cool!!!!!

      -Anounomus fan of kotlc talent show! Or AFKTS

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    • I agree AFKTS I really like this!

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    • This is amazing! You had a hardcore Tiana shipper crying over Dex, you’re awesome!


      Also AFKTS you don’t have to answer but do you have something I can call you like anywhere? ‘Cause on my fanfic you’re AERRW xD

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    • Wow. I usually like Fitz and wish that Fitzphie happens, but here... I just wanna kill him.

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    • I forgot to say something very important: you are a great author!!! This is one of my favorite fanfic!

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    • 90.91.152.24 wrote:
      I forgot to say something very important: you are a great author!!! This is one of my favorite fanfic!

      Aww! Thank you!

      -KitKat

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    • Chapter 15:Keefe's POV

      Keefe stood there for a moment, frozen in shock. Fitz was really going to do this, he was really going to destroy Keefe and Sophie's relationship, and Keefe couldn't do anything to stop it. The thought came with a fresh round of tears, his eys burned and a lump formed in his throat as he sobbed. If I'd never told Sophie I love her, then Fitz wouldn't be ruining her life, we would all still be friends, they'd all be happy. But they're not and it's all my fault, the newest thought embedded itself in his mind, repeating over and over and over. He didn't know how long he'd spent crying, only that it ended just before a beautiful blonde girl walked over to him. Sophie.

      Her face was twisted into confusion and anger, her eyes were red rimmed and her gaze was cold. Keefe hated seeing her like that, hated the way she was looking at him. She was so angry and dissapointed. Keefe had seen that look so many times before, a few times even from Sophie, but it seemed to cut deeper every time.

      "Hey, Foster," His voice shook, but he was trying to look calm and by the way Sophie's gaze had hardened even more, he knew he was failing miserably. 

      "Is it true?" Her voice was sharp and fierce.

      "Is what true?" He knew what it was even before he'd said the words. It was partof Fitz's cruel scheme, a scheme that was tearing everyone apart. 

      "Fitz told me what you said about me. Is it true?" Sophie hissed. Keefe stared at his feet, the grass was withered and brown, collapsing into dust when his foot moved in the slightest. Looking at that grass, he decided he didn't want their relationship to wither and die like that. He was going to tell her the truth, he knew she'd never believe it, but maybe he'd get lucky. Maybe this wouldn't end like everything always did for him, terribly. 

      "No, it's a lie. He told me you said somestuff about me, but I didn't believe him and you shouldn't either. He's trying to break us apart. And I know you trust him, and I wanted to trust him too, but don't you see. He's lying to you and to me and he has such clear motives. Why would I ever say things like that about you?"Sophie didn't look convinced. 

      "He told me you'd say that. Just like how he told me you said you were just playing with my feelings, how this was all just one big game to you. How you never even loved me," Her voice cracked and tears streamed down her face. Keefe wanted to say something, to do something, but he knew she'd only push him away.

      "Did you really think I'd say something like that?" He mumbled. He wasn't even sure she'd heard him, but she responded. Her beautiful brown eyes looked like they were searching his.

      "I...I don't know! Why would... Why would Fitz lie to me?"She looked away and Keefe wanted to hug her and tell her everything would be alright, that they could do this together, but he didn't. She needed to think and she wanted to do that alone, so he stood back and watched her stare at the ocean cliffs. She stood there for a solid five minutes, the wind whipping her hair, before she turned back around.

      "I don't know," Keefe's eyes met her's, it was the truth. He couldn't see why Fitz would hurt people like this just to get a girl. Sophie was awesome, but she wasn't worth losing friendships and breaking people's hearts. 

      "Well then you better figure it out. Keefe we're... done here. I don't know what you're trying to do or what you want from me, but we're done. There is no us anymore. Before you argue, Fitz wouldn't lie to me, I know that.  But you've withheld stuff from me in the past and which story is easier to believe, your friend telling you your boyfriend is badmouthing you or that your friend set up an eleborate scheme to tear you and your boyfriend apart, which includes lying, manipulation, and jealousy? I'm sorry Keefe, I thought we'd had something, but I was wrong," Sophie dissolved into tears and ran away, back to Havenfield. 

      Keefe wanted to punch something. A bench, a tree, but mostly himself. Fitz was right Sophie did hate him and there was nothing he could do about it. This was all his fault. The broken friendships, the drama, Sophie getting hurt, he knew it was all his fault. They'd all be happy if he'd kept quiet, watched his best friend win back the girl he loved, let the world pass him by. They'd be happier if he wasn't there at all, he knew it. Guilt swarmed all around him as he remembered all the times he'd hurt his friends, when he joined the Nevereseen, that stunt at Ravagog, everything. It's all my fault, It's all my fault, It's all my fault, the thought burned throughout him. Seeping into every nook and cranny of his consciousness. Tears filled his eyes as the world began to spin.

      "I'm sorry Sophie," He breathed, as the spinning got faster and faster. The world began to shatter into millions of pieces, and he fell into a world of nightmeres. His mind had broken.

      *End Of Chapter 15*

      -KitKat

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      • chokes* uhhh.................WHAT? WHY? HOW? 0.0
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      • LE GASP*

      WHAT

      HOW COULD YOU

      JUST

      WHAT-

      YOU CAN'T JUST-

      NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

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    • 73.202.57.61 wrote:

      90.91.152.24 wrote:
      I forgot to say something very important: you are a great author!!! This is one of my favorite fanfic!

      Aww! Thank you!

      -KitKat

      You’re welcome ;)

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    • Songsen1 wrote:

      • chokes* uhhh.................WHAT? WHY? HOW? 0.0

      Exactly what is happening in my head right now.

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    • Noooooooooo! Keeeeeeeeeeeefe!!!!!

      ~Calla's Moonlark

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    • Don't worry, everything will turn out just fine.

      -KitKat

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    • It should. I expect you to be better than SwearingParrot. Victoria Ross. Wandergirls.

      -Fizzgig

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    • NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! I WILL GET MY REVENGE FITZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Chokes* *gags* *screams* *flips table* *flails* AGHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • 73.202.57.61 wrote:
      Don't worry, everything will turn out just fine.

      -KitKat

      THANK GOODNESS!!!!!

      btw this is super great :)

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    • Chapter 16:Sophie's POV

      Sophie knew she'd been to harsh. She'd seen the pained look in Keefe's eyes, seen the way he stepped back when she yelled. She knew when she got angry her words could cut as deep as knives, it could be useful sometimes, but it could also hurt the people she loved. So just minutes after stepping back into Havenfield, she ran back to where she'd left Keefe. She had to make sure he was ok. He wasn't.

      At first Sophie thought he was dead. He lay there stiff and motionless, not even taking in any breaths. Her eyes watered as she gently placed her hand on his chest. She could still feel the faint rhythm of his heartbeat. In that moment, Keefe drew in a ragged breath and moaned. A moan she'd only heard from people who'd minds had broken. The terrifying thought took root in her mind, she tried to push it away, but it persisteted. No, No,No, She thought.

      "Sophie, what's going on?" Sophie turned to find Dex, Biana, Fitz, Stina, and Marella standing behind her. She stared at the withered grass, blowing into dust in the wind. 

      "I don't know, but I think he might be broken," There was a slight catch in her voice that dissolved into a sob. A heaping, havy sob that shook her body. She wasn't sure why it hurt her so much, more so even than Alden's break, but it did. How could she be this upset, when Keefe had said all those mean things about her to Fitz? Yet, here she was shaking from all the crying, she heard Fitz cuss softly on the background.

      "You don't know though, right? You haven't checked?" Biana met Sophie's eyes.

      "I guess I should do that," Sophie murmered. She knew she had to check, even though she wasn't sure she could handle the nightmares that were surely flashing through Keefe's mind. So he walked over to Keefe's trashing body and gently placed her hands on his temples. The world melted away, replaced by terrifying madness.

      She'd seen Keefe's mind before, it had screens that showed memories, little holograms that displayed them as well. It had all seemed like a nice sort of city that sprawled on for miles, sure there were always storm clouds, but it was overall a nice place. This was not that. This was a nightmare. 

      The screens were still there, but they were broken, staticy and replayed the same messages over and over. The city-scape looked dark and dingy, like something from a dystopian novel. The ground seemed to crumble beneath her feet as she walked. She tried to look through the memory holograms, but as soon as she touched them, they shattered. She had to find something to save him, so she walked deeper through the city of nightmares.

      The deeper she went, the more the darkness clawed at her, trying to pull her under, but she persisted. There was a little street sign titled "Memory Lane", so she darted towards it, desperate to find any way to help her friend. The screens there worked, but maybe that was more terrifying.

      "Every mistake you've ever made and why you sould feel guilty. Number 1: Not knowing your mom was part of the Neverseen!" One of them blared in Car salesman type voice. The sound echoed through her ears. 

      "Keefe! Are you there?" She called out. She'd seen a dark shadow creeping through the alley way.

      "Sophie!" She heard his unmistakeable voice and ran towards the figure. Then she realized the sound had come from the screens,she could of smacked herself for the mistake. But there was still a chance the figure was Keefe, she drew back its hood and...it wasn't. It was a nightmare rendition of his mom.

      "Legacy! Legacy! Legacy!" The shadowy Gisela chanted. Somehow she was even worse than the real Gisela, a feat Sophie hadn't thought was possible. Still maybe this could help her find Keefe's emotional center. The figure bolted away, but Sophie followed. Twisting through the winding paths to a tiny glowing building. 

      It was shimmery and gold and beautiful. It was crumbling though, and the light was fading. It grew dimmer and dimmer by the second. Sophie charged towards it, only to be met by a giant golden monster.

      It's teal eyes narrowed when it spotted her. She prepared for it to charge at her, but instead it just stood there. Giving Sophie a moment to examine it, it was shaped like a dragon and shimmered in the light, it had shimmery teal eyes, and cognate rings on it's fingers.

      "Sophie will be mine! Did you hear what Sophie said about you? Sophie hates you... no really she does! You want a villian, fine, I'm the villian, and I'll make sure the end of this story  isn't  a happy one!" The monster roared, all in a crisp Vacker accent. All she could do was stand there and watch as she was ripped from Keefe's mind.

      She woke up to seeing her friends all surrounding her. She felt woozy and groggy, but most of all she felt angry. She'd figured out who the monster really was, and he was about to get a face full of Foster Fury.

      "What. Did. You. Do?" She hissed. His teal eyes widened and he took a step back.

      "What do you mean?" Fitz replied. Sophie felt like kicking him hard, but she restrained herself...for the moment.

      "Quit it with the innocent act. What did you do to Keefe?" She took a step closer to him. He flashed her his stupid, smug smile.

      "Nothing really, I just bended the truth a little bit. Kind of... accelerated your guys's demise as a couple. It doesn't really matter. Anyways Soph, you can be with me now," His voice was so cocky, and his smile was so cruel, and his eyes were just ...ugh. She couldn't take it anymore, so she kicked him as hard she could in the shin. It felt good, well, for her, Fitz was yelping in pain.

      "You broke him!" She screamed, tears pouring out of her eyes.

      "No Sophie, you did," Fitz turned away, leaving her with a friend with a broken mind and a boat-load of guilt.

      *End of Chapter 16*

      Don't worry, Keefe will get fixed, but the chapter was getting really long, so I decided to stop there.

      -KitKat

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    • NONONONONONONOOOOOOOOOOOO KEEFE NOOOOOOOOO FITZ YOU ARE SO MEANNNNNNNNNN AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH *deep breathes* *deep breaths* This is great!!!

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    • Ok you just said that so I'm gonna read this lol

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    • Foster-Keefe FTW wrote: Ok you just said that so I'm gonna read this lol

      Lol

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    • OMG NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! POOR KEEFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH FITZYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG THIS  IS SO GOOD THOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDXDXD *screams for a whole minute*



      Ok, I'm good now...

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    • DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote: OMG NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! POOR KEEFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH FITZYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG THIS  IS SO GOOD THOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDXDXD *screams for a whole minute*



      Ok, I'm good now...

      XD that's how I felt lolz

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    • Fitz you crazy!!! And now Sophie is gonna feel guilty

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    • OH NO!! What if Sophie's mind breaks from guilt and then everyone gets guilty so all of their minds break and then nobody can kill fitzy at the end!!!!!!!!! 

      XDXD Sorry, I tend to think of the worst possibilities... 

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    • 😬😬

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    • DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote: OH NO!! What if Sophie's mind breaks from guilt and then everyone gets guilty so all of their minds break and then nobody can kill fitzy at the end!!!!!!!!! 

      XDXD Sorry, I tend to think of the worst possibilities... 

      Gulp

      Now I’m scared

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    • 90.91.152.24 wrote:

      DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote: OH NO!! What if Sophie's mind breaks from guilt and then everyone gets guilty so all of their minds break and then nobody can kill fitzy at the end!!!!!!!!! 

      XDXD Sorry, I tend to think of the worst possibilities... 

      Gulp

      Now I’m scared

      XDXD me too

      Maybe I shouldn't have said that... 

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    • OH NO!!!! And then Fitzy will take over the Elvin world and he'll become an evil, spoiled king or something, and he'll take over Gnomeland, Dwarfland, Goblinland, etc. AND THEN HE'LL TAKE OVER THE HUMAN WORLD AND THEN ALIENS AND STUFF AND THEN THE WHOLE ENTIRE UNIVERSE WILL BE A MESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 



      • takes deep breaths*




      Ok, I'm good now, sorry if I worried you guys XDXD

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    • XDXDXDXDXD " and he'll take over Gnomeland, Dwarfland, Goblinland" XD XD XD XD

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    • Lol sorry, I couldn't remember the names for them XDXDXDXD

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    • XD

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    • Those names... they are HILARIOUS 😂!

      • me trying not to die while trying not to laugh like a mad person because my window is open*
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    • XD it's Serenvale (currently Ravagog) , Loamnore, and Gildingham 

      and Marintrylla  

      ~ Councillor Oralie

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    • And th Forbidden Cities, and Lost Cities 😂

      Lol those are absolutely hilarious tho 

      ~ Councillor Oralie 

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    • nonononononONONONONONONONONONOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! HOW COULD U DO THIS TO USSSS!!!

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    • I HATE U FITZ I HATE U!!! U ARE SOOOO MEAN AND SELF CENTERED!!!! NOOOOO! U RUIN EVERYONE'S LIVES!!!

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    • AND SOPHIE HOW COULD U BELIEVE HIMMMM!!!!!

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    • OMG PLS DONT TELL ME THAT IN THE NEXT CHAPTER SOPHIE WILL FELL GUILTY, BREAK, AND NO ONE CAN SAVE THE BOTH OF THEM

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    • AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • OMG YOU HAVE AWAKENED MY NIGHTMARES!!!!!!!!

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    • DON'T

      YOU

      DARE

      FITZY

      OR

      WILL

      PERSONALLY

      COME

      TO

      EVERGLEN

      TO

      KILL

      YOU

      PAINFULLY

      !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!












      • Takes deep breaths* Ok, I'm better now I think... but I STILL WANNA KILL FITZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ARGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SO CRUEL AND SELFISH AND MEAN AND SPOILED AND HORRIBLE AND SELF-CENTERED AND AGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND SOPHIE!! I THOUGHT YOU WERE BETTER THAN THAT!!!!!!! YOU ACTUALLY BELIEVED THAT HORRIBLE FITZY???????!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW KEEFE IS BROKEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, my poor Keefe... 






      Sorry, it turns out that I wasn't calm yet. XDXDXDXDXDXD I'm better now tho. XDXDXDXD

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    • Oh fitzy.... I'll rip you to shreds....

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    • Sorry, that sounded kinda creepy XDXD

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    • haha not at all HE DESERVES WORSE!!!!! HE PUT EVERYONE THOUGH MISERY, NOW WE SHALL PUT HIM THROUGH MISERY BY ENDING HIS LIFE! OR BETTER YET, MAKING SURE HIS LAST DAYS ARE AS AGONIZING AS POSSIBLE!!!!! 

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    • and ill say, this talent show is turning into something else entirely (not a bad thing)

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    • YEZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDXDXDXDXDXDXD

      1. TEAMLETSTOURTUREANDTHENKILLFITZPAINFULLYANDGETOURREVENGE!!!!!
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    • Lol sorry I meant that as a hashtag thingy, it's kinda long XDXDXDXDXD

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    • YASSSSS #TEAMWEWILLHUNTFITZDOWNTHENDROWNHIMTHENBURNHIMTHENSLITHISTHROAT

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    • lol

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    • DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:
      YEZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDXDXDXDXDXDXD
      1. TEAMLETSTOURTUREANDTHENKILLFITZPAINFULLYANDGETOURREVENGE!!!!!

      I'm on TEAMLETSTOURTUREANDTHENKILLFITZPAINFULLYANDGETOURREVENGE!!!!! 

      TEAMLETSTOURTUREANDTHENKILLFITZPAINFULLYANDGETOURREVENGETEAMLETSTOURTUREANDTHENKILLFITZPAINFULLYANDGETOURREVENGETEAMLETSTOURTUREANDTHENKILLFITZPAINFULLYANDGETOURREVENGETEAMLETSTOURTUREANDTHENKILLFITZPAINFULLYANDGETOURREVENGETEAMLETSTOURTUREANDTHENKILLFITZPAINFULLYANDGETOURREVENGETEAMLETSTOURTUREANDTHENKILLFITZPAINFULLYANDGETOURREVENGETEAMLETSTOURTUREANDTHENKILLFITZPAINFULLYANDGETOURREVENGETEAMLETSTOURTUREANDTHENKILLFITZPAINFULLYANDGETOURREVENGE

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    • Guys, I've got my checklist out. You know, that one which says 'Things To Do To Fitzroy When He's Being An Idiot'?

      Here *throws it at everyone* read through it and see which gruesome thing we can do to him next!

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    • AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH    *chokes* how...could...you...Ritz SAVORY CRACKER!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM??!?!?!?!??!?!? hydrgfvju'tvweg[0nc'qt2j53h6;07b x/

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    • AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

      FITZ

      YOU.

      DID.

      NOT.

      NO.

      JUST NO.

      NO WAY.

      NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

      ~Calla's Moonlark

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    • Teamfoster-Keefe12345 wrote:
      DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:
      YEZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDXDXDXDXDXDXD
      1. TEAMLETSTOURTUREANDTHENKILLFITZPAINFULLYANDGETOURREVENGE!!!!!
      I'm on c

      TEAMLETSTOURTUREANDTHENKILLFITZPAINFULLYANDGETOURREVENGETEAMLETSTOURTUREANDTHENKILLFITZPAINFULLYANDGETOURREVENGETEAMLETSTOURTUREANDTHENKILLFITZPAINFULLYANDGETOURREVENGETEAMLETSTOURTUREANDTHENKILLFITZPAINFULLYANDGETOURREVENGETEAMLETSTOURTUREANDTHENKILLFITZPAINFULLYANDGETOURREVENGETEAMLETSTOURTUREANDTHENKILLFITZPAINFULLYANDGETOURREVENGETEAMLETSTOURTUREANDTHENKILLFITZPAINFULLYANDGETOURREVENGETEAMLETSTOURTUREANDTHENKILLFITZPAINFULLYANDGETOURREVENGE

      SAME

      TEAMLETSTOURTUREANDTHENKILLFITZPAINFULLYANDGETOURREVENGE!!!!! 

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    • Chapter 17:Sophie's POV

      Guilt was a terrible thing, it rooted itself in your mind and haunted your nightmares. It'd pounce in the most unexpected places and claw its way into your heart. Like it was doing to Sophie right then.  The guilty thoughts swarmed Sophie's conscience like a swarm of wasps. They spun the world, threatening to pull her under. She almost let them. Everything was her fault, the unrest in the Elvin world, the friendships breaking apart, everything. They tore her down, down, down, and for a moment she thought maybe it'd be better this way. Maybe everyone would get their perfect lives back the second she was gone. But as the guilty thoughts replayed over and over, one of them gave her something to cling on to.

      It wasn't much,but it was something, something she still could fix. And that gave her a glimmer of hope and that little glimmer pulled her out of the darkness. Pulled her back to reality. When the guilty thoughts returned a split-second later, she was strong enough to take them down. No, not today, I'm going to keep fighting and you stupid thoughts aren't going to stop me, she told herself.' She had to keep fighting, for one person in particular. That person was Keefe. 

      "Sophie are you ok?" Biana came up behind her. Sophie nodded, she was fine now. Everything was going to be ok again, she just had to fix it. Biana wrapped her in a warm, cozy hug, the kind of hug only an awesome friend could give. 

      "Good, it looked like you almost collapsed" They were joined by a periwinkle-eyed boy. Biana gestured for Dex to join the hug and soon everyone was hugging. Well, everyone except for Fitz.

      When Sophie spotted him sitting smugly on a bench, she gently pulled away from her friends. She began to walk towards him alone, but turned back to see her friends. This was their fight too, she realized and motioned for them to join her. They all stood there together, their arms wrapped around eachother for support, a strong wall, that was moving closer and closer to Fitz. This was a wall of friendship, yes, but it was more so a wall of fury. And all that fury was marching closer to the guy who deserved it the most.

      "Hi guys, what's up?" Fitz played innocent, but Sophie could see the cruel glee in his eyes and the cockiness in his smile. She made it her mission to wipe them clean of that confidence.

      "You know exactly what's up," Her voice was surprisingly steady, she took a step closer to him and he shifted uncomfortably in his seat. Then, he rose up, towering over Sophie. Sophie cursed whoever was allowed to make people that tall and stood there, her feet planted in the ground.

      "Do I? What I see is girl who should be with me, and her friendships which are all slowly crumbling. Oh! And my broken best-friend lying on the ground over there. Great job on that by the way, I mean, even I couldn't make someone break that fast," The guilty thoughts swarmed in mind again, and this time they were stronger. But she was stronger too, she pushed them away, and stared Fitz Vacker in the eyes. Eyes that had once made her swoon, now made her want to kick something, mostly him.

      "You little..." Ro pushed past Sophie and pulled back her fist, ready to strike Fitz. Sophie lowered Ro's arm and shook her head. This was her fight, not Ro's and there were easier ways to win than violence.

      "Fitzroy Avery Vacker, you are the most cruel, manipulative, angry boy, that I've ever met. You used to be nice you used to be compassionate, now... now I can't even trust you," Sophie threw her cognate ring to the ground and stomped on it, smashing it into a million tiny golden pieces. It felt good.

      "Yeah, well I..." Fitz started. Sophie didn't let him finish, she kneed him in the stomach. He yelped and scampered away like a wounded baby deer.

      "Don't you ever come back here!" She screamed, falling gently to her knees. Her friends surrounded her, squeezing her hands, giving her warm hugs and reassuring shoulder pats. But one friend was missing and right now the only thing that mattered was getting him back. Sophie placed her hands on Keefe's temples and let herself enter the City of Nightmares one last time.

      It was just as cold and dark as she remembered, maybe even more so. There was hundreds of streets and things to learn and see in his mind, but even if she wanted to dive deeper into the scary city (she didn't), now was no time for sight-seeing. She had to fix Keefe.

      It was easier to find the emotional center now tahts he knew the path ways. The building had lost even more of its glow and now was flickering on and off like a broken neon sign. The monster was also still there, it's gold scales seemed to shimmer in the darkness.  It didn't seem to have good eyesight, it squinted and ran into buildings and street signs. Maybe this monster wouldn't be so hard to defeat.

      Every time it looked like it was going to roar she covered her ears and filled her mind with happy thoughts. Riding with Silveny,  hanging with Dex, every kiss she'd shared with Keefe. It seemed to work and she cruised past the monster without a problem. She threw open the heavy doors of the emotional center and walked in.

      It was dark and dingy, yet there was still a glow. She didn't lose hope. Now she just needed to fill his mind with things that made him happy. She tried images of his friends, but somehow that made it worse, especially since Fitz had been his best friend. Next, she tried art and Silveny.  For a second the room brightened, and Sophie's heart was filled with hope, but as soon as it came it disappeared. What made Keefe happy?

      She debated the topic in her mind, nothing seemed good enough.

      "Sophie, Sophie, Sophie," She could still hear the crackly audio from outside. It wasn't very useful, at least not to her, or so she thought. A few minutes after those words had blared, she finally realized what Keefe loved. Her.

      She filled his mind with all her favorite moments. The day they met, riding Silveny across the ocean, window slumber parties, their first kiss, everything. Slowly, but surely the room brightened and the shards of reality seemed to piece themselves back together. The city became bright and beautiful once more and Sophie let herself float back to reality.

      When she opened her eyes, she met a pair of ice-blue ones. The beautiful blonde boy next to her sat up and clutched his head.

      "Foster?" He whispered and Sophie pulled him into a hug. Keefe Sencen was back.

      End of Chapter 17

      -KitKat

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    • YEZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FITZY RAN AWAY!!!!!!!!!!!! GET THE HUNTING DOGS EVERYBODY!!!!!!! WE'RE HUNTING FITZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEFE IS BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND SOPHIE GOT HER REVENGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG THAT WAS SO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEFE IS BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Fitzy... I WILL TOURTURE AND KILL YOU PAINFULLY!!!!!!! FIRST, I WOULD DROWN YOU IN ICE COLD WATER, THEN I WOULD REVIVE YOU AND THEN HAVE YOU BURN IN A FIRE, THEN REVIVE YOU AGAIN, AND THEN I WOULD HAND YOU OVER TO ALL OF YOUR FRIENDS, AND THEN RO WOULD BEAT YOU UP AND  EVERYONE WILL BEAT YOU UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IF ANYONE CAN THINK OF MORE PUNISHMENTS, PLZ SHARE THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!AAGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH FITZYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE WORSE THAN THE NEVERSEEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Kicks* *flails* *Flips already flipped table* *calls hunting dogs* *screams* *googles the coldest lake in the world* *googles how to make an extremely hot fire* 




      Oh dear, my sister just walked in. I'm trying not to scream so I am screaming internally. My insides are deaf now. (Sorry, that doesn't make any sense :) 






      Kk, she's gone now. Our conversation: 

      Me: *stops mid screaming* Hey sis!

      My sis: *looks at me weirdly* 

      Me: What are you doing? *voice strained from screaming* 

      My sis: Uh... nothing. *walks up to me while I'm searching the coldest lake in the world*

      My sis: Ok?? Bye! *takes homework and runs away* 

      Me: *shrugs and continues screaming* 

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    • XDXDXDXD Sorry, I tend to be more insane in the morning XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD

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    • AHAHHAHAHAHHA XD



      YAYYYYYY KEEFE IS NOT BROKEN

      SOKEEFE IS OFFICIAL

      FITZ IS BYEBYE

      YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!

      I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:
      AHAHHAHAHAHHA XD


      YAYYYYYY KEEFE IS NOT BROKEN

      SOKEEFE IS OFFICIAL

      FITZ IS BYEBYE

      YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!

      I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      YASSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • Plz post soon, I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS TO FITZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDXDXDXDXD

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    • DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:
      Plz post soon, I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS TO FITZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDXDXDXDXD

      XD SAME THOUGHHHHHHH 

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    • Sooo good

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    • Love the story but wish Futz wasn’t so mean. I mean just stop pretending like you own Sophie she’s her own awesome female protagonist!

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    • Fitz lol

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    • DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote: YEZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FITZY RAN AWAY!!!!!!!!!!!! GET THE HUNTING DOGS EVERYBODY!!!!!!! WE'RE HUNTING FITZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEFE IS BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND SOPHIE GOT HER REVENGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG THAT WAS SO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEFE IS BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Fitzy... I WILL TOURTURE AND KILL YOU PAINFULLY!!!!!!! FIRST, I WOULD DROWN YOU IN ICE COLD WATER, THEN I WOULD REVIVE YOU AND THEN HAVE YOU BURN IN A FIRE, THEN REVIVE YOU AGAIN, AND THEN I WOULD HAND YOU OVER TO ALL OF YOUR FRIENDS, AND THEN RO WOULD BEAT YOU UP AND  EVERYONE WILL BEAT YOU UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IF ANYONE CAN THINK OF MORE PUNISHMENTS, PLZ SHARE THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!AAGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH FITZYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE WORSE THAN THE NEVERSEEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Kicks* *flails* *Flips already flipped table* *calls hunting dogs* *screams* *googles the coldest lake in the world* *googles how to make an extremely hot fire* 




      Oh dear, my sister just walked in. I'm trying not to scream so I am screaming internally. My insides are deaf now. (Sorry, that doesn't make any sense :) 






      Kk, she's gone now. Our conversation: 

      Me: *stops mid screaming* Hey sis!

      My sis: *looks at me weirdly* 

      Me: What are you doing? *voice strained from screaming* 

      My sis: Uh... nothing. *walks up to me while I'm searching the coldest lake in the world*

      My sis: Ok?? Bye! *takes homework and runs away* 

      Me: *shrugs and continues screaming* 

      WE CAN SLIT HIS THROAT, THEN HAVE SOPHIE AND BRONTE INFLICT ON HIM, THEN HAVE A TRUCK RUN HIM OVER, AND FINALLY PUT HIM IN A POT OF ACID!!!!!

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    • Tiana4eva wrote:

      DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote: YEZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FITZY RAN AWAY!!!!!!!!!!!! GET THE HUNTING DOGS EVERYBODY!!!!!!! WE'RE HUNTING FITZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEFE IS BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND SOPHIE GOT HER REVENGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG THAT WAS SO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEFE IS BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Fitzy... I WILL TOURTURE AND KILL YOU PAINFULLY!!!!!!! FIRST, I WOULD DROWN YOU IN ICE COLD WATER, THEN I WOULD REVIVE YOU AND THEN HAVE YOU BURN IN A FIRE, THEN REVIVE YOU AGAIN, AND THEN I WOULD HAND YOU OVER TO ALL OF YOUR FRIENDS, AND THEN RO WOULD BEAT YOU UP AND  EVERYONE WILL BEAT YOU UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IF ANYONE CAN THINK OF MORE PUNISHMENTS, PLZ SHARE THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!AAGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH FITZYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE WORSE THAN THE NEVERSEEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Kicks* *flails* *Flips already flipped table* *calls hunting dogs* *screams* *googles the coldest lake in the world* *googles how to make an extremely hot fire* 




      Oh dear, my sister just walked in. I'm trying not to scream so I am screaming internally. My insides are deaf now. (Sorry, that doesn't make any sense :) 






      Kk, she's gone now. Our conversation: 

      Me: *stops mid screaming* Hey sis!

      My sis: *looks at me weirdly* 

      Me: What are you doing? *voice strained from screaming* 

      My sis: Uh... nothing. *walks up to me while I'm searching the coldest lake in the world*

      My sis: Ok?? Bye! *takes homework and runs away* 

      Me: *shrugs and continues screaming* 

      WE CAN SLIT HIS THROAT, THEN HAVE SOPHIE AND BRONTE INFLICT ON HIM, THEN HAVE A TRUCK RUN HIM OVER, AND FINALLY PUT HIM IN A POT OF ACID!!!!!

      oh boi that's dark is it wrong that I like totally agree though? XD

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    • MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:
      Tiana4eva wrote:

      DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote: YEZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FITZY RAN AWAY!!!!!!!!!!!! GET THE HUNTING DOGS EVERYBODY!!!!!!! WE'RE HUNTING FITZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEFE IS BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND SOPHIE GOT HER REVENGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG THAT WAS SO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEFE IS BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Fitzy... I WILL TOURTURE AND KILL YOU PAINFULLY!!!!!!! FIRST, I WOULD DROWN YOU IN ICE COLD WATER, THEN I WOULD REVIVE YOU AND THEN HAVE YOU BURN IN A FIRE, THEN REVIVE YOU AGAIN, AND THEN I WOULD HAND YOU OVER TO ALL OF YOUR FRIENDS, AND THEN RO WOULD BEAT YOU UP AND  EVERYONE WILL BEAT YOU UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IF ANYONE CAN THINK OF MORE PUNISHMENTS, PLZ SHARE THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!AAGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH FITZYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE WORSE THAN THE NEVERSEEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Kicks* *flails* *Flips already flipped table* *calls hunting dogs* *screams* *googles the coldest lake in the world* *googles how to make an extremely hot fire* 




      Oh dear, my sister just walked in. I'm trying not to scream so I am screaming internally. My insides are deaf now. (Sorry, that doesn't make any sense :) 






      Kk, she's gone now. Our conversation: 

      Me: *stops mid screaming* Hey sis!

      My sis: *looks at me weirdly* 

      Me: What are you doing? *voice strained from screaming* 

      My sis: Uh... nothing. *walks up to me while I'm searching the coldest lake in the world*

      My sis: Ok?? Bye! *takes homework and runs away* 

      Me: *shrugs and continues screaming* 

      WE CAN SLIT HIS THROAT, THEN HAVE SOPHIE AND BRONTE INFLICT ON HIM, THEN HAVE A TRUCK RUN HIM OVER, AND FINALLY PUT HIM IN A POT OF ACID!!!!!
      oh boi that's dark is it wrong that I like totally agree though? XD

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      yes it's dark, cuz I have a VERY VERY dark side. and no, its not wrong that you agree

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    • Tiana4eva wrote:
      MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:
      Tiana4eva wrote:

      DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote: YEZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FITZY RAN AWAY!!!!!!!!!!!! GET THE HUNTING DOGS EVERYBODY!!!!!!! WE'RE HUNTING FITZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEFE IS BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND SOPHIE GOT HER REVENGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG THAT WAS SO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEFE IS BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Fitzy... I WILL TOURTURE AND KILL YOU PAINFULLY!!!!!!! FIRST, I WOULD DROWN YOU IN ICE COLD WATER, THEN I WOULD REVIVE YOU AND THEN HAVE YOU BURN IN A FIRE, THEN REVIVE YOU AGAIN, AND THEN I WOULD HAND YOU OVER TO ALL OF YOUR FRIENDS, AND THEN RO WOULD BEAT YOU UP AND  EVERYONE WILL BEAT YOU UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IF ANYONE CAN THINK OF MORE PUNISHMENTS, PLZ SHARE THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!AAGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH FITZYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE WORSE THAN THE NEVERSEEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Kicks* *flails* *Flips already flipped table* *calls hunting dogs* *screams* *googles the coldest lake in the world* *googles how to make an extremely hot fire* 




      Oh dear, my sister just walked in. I'm trying not to scream so I am screaming internally. My insides are deaf now. (Sorry, that doesn't make any sense :) 






      Kk, she's gone now. Our conversation: 

      Me: *stops mid screaming* Hey sis!

      My sis: *looks at me weirdly* 

      Me: What are you doing? *voice strained from screaming* 

      My sis: Uh... nothing. *walks up to me while I'm searching the coldest lake in the world*

      My sis: Ok?? Bye! *takes homework and runs away* 

      Me: *shrugs and continues screaming* 

      WE CAN SLIT HIS THROAT, THEN HAVE SOPHIE AND BRONTE INFLICT ON HIM, THEN HAVE A TRUCK RUN HIM OVER, AND FINALLY PUT HIM IN A POT OF ACID!!!!!
      oh boi that's dark is it wrong that I like totally agree though? XD </div>




      
       
      yes it's dark, cuz I have a VERY VERY dark side. and no, its not wrong that you agree

      XD

      and THEN we can let the Ritz Savory Cracker get attacked by Alina the Heyena *cough* Guilt-Sokeefe the fanfic *cough* 

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    • ooooo and then the chandelier can fall on him!!!! XDXDXDXDXDXD

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    • Tiana4eva wrote:
      ooooo and then the chandelier can fall on him!!!! XDXDXDXDXDXD

      XD YASSSSS

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    • XDXDXDXD Ok, here's the list or torture methods (that sounds wrong): 

      Drown Fitzy in ice cold water

      Burn Fitzy in a fire

      Let kotlc characters beat Fitzy up

      Slit Fitzy's throat slowly

      Have Sophie and Bronte inflict on Fitzy

      Have an extra heavy truck run over Fitzy

      Put Fitzy in a pot of acid (my personal fav)

      And here are some of my ideas:

      Stretch Fitzy until he goes pop (not going into details there)

      Hang Fitzy

      Starve Fitzy

      And last but not least, the classic slaughter method




      Wow, I lost control of my inner evil murderer there. XDXDXD

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    • wOaH there 

      XD

      adding in

      Make Fitzy realize what he did wrong and then he breaks with guilt and nEvER wAkEs uP eVeR aGAiN

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    • YEZZZ!!!!!! FITZY MUST BREAK!!!!!!!!! TO EXPERIENCE WHAT POOR HUNKYHAIR DID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDXDXDXD We are definitely insane. To think that teens are making torture methods for a fictional charecter...

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      • shrugs* Well, that is simple who I am *cackles evilly and opens notebook of torture methods*
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    • DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:
      YEZZZ!!!!!! FITZY MUST BREAK!!!!!!!!! TO EXPERIENCE WHAT POOR HUNKYHAIR DID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDXDXDXD We are definitely insane. To think that teens are making torture methods for a fictional charecter...

      and sophie wont be there to heal him! So he can just sit in his broken mind for the rest of his life aka for eternity

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    • HAHA YEZZZZ!!!!!!!!! XDXDXD   Wait, but when he's broken he can't really feel the guilt... right? 

      Oh well, we'll find a way so that he can partially feel, like Brant. OMG I JUST GOT AN IDEA FROM THE BRANT MENTION!!!!!! WE SHOULD SPLATTER HIS BRAIN OR WHATEVER HAPPENS TO BRANT!!!! 

      AND IF WE WANT, WE CAN SLIT HIM OPEN AND PLAY WITH HIS INSIDES!!!!!!!! *innocently* Sorry, was that too much? XDXDXDXDXD

      Is it bad that I kinda enjoy thinking of Fitzy's torture methods?

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    • How to torture Ritz Savory Cracker:(My friend and I came up with these this morning) (1. Make him walk over a bed of Legos. Barefoot. (2. Shove him in a pit with Ro's fav amoebas. (3. Dump a LOT of Alicorn poop(and vomit) on him. (4. Make him eternally watch Silveny and Greyfell 'play'. (5. Read a Sokeefe fanfic out LOUD. SUPER LOUD. Whenever he walks by. (6. Tell him teal is a super boring color. (7. Take his fame and glory (8. Put him on a bus full of human schoolgirls (9. Make him be alone with Alvar for an hour. Feel free to add more ;)

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    • 174.56.40.127 wrote:
      How to torture Ritz Savory Cracker:(My friend and I came up with these this morning) (1. Make him walk over a bed of Legos. Barefoot. (2. Shove him in a pit with Ro's fav amoebas. (3. Dump a LOT of Alicorn poop(and vomit) on him. (4. Make him eternally watch Silveny and Greyfell 'play'. (5. Read a Sokeefe fanfic out LOUD. SUPER LOUD. Whenever he walks by. (6. Tell him teal is a super boring color. (7. Take his fame and glory (8. Put him on a bus full of human schoolgirls (9. Make him be alone with Alvar for an hour. Feel free to add more ;)

      omg that 4th one!!!! XD and personally, my fav is the second. nothing can do it better than amoebas lol

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    • DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:
      HAHA YEZZZZ!!!!!!!!! XDXDXD   Wait, but when he's broken he can't really feel the guilt... right? 

      Oh well, we'll find a way so that he can partially feel, like Brant. OMG I JUST GOT AN IDEA FROM THE BRANT MENTION!!!!!! WE SHOULD SPLATTER HIS BRAIN OR WHATEVER HAPPENS TO BRANT!!!! 

      AND IF WE WANT, WE CAN SLIT HIM OPEN AND PLAY WITH HIS INSIDES!!!!!!!! *innocently* Sorry, was that too much? XDXDXDXDXD

      Is it bad that I kinda enjoy thinking of Fitzy's torture methods?

      No, not at all! Dear ol' Fitzy deserves wayyyyyyyy worse. 

      -TheRealJolieRuewen

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    • OMG ok, I'm gonna make a new list:

      Drown him in ice cold water

      Burn him in a fire

      Let kotlc characters beat him up

      Slit his throat slowly

      Have Sophie and Bronte inflict on him

      Have a truck run over him

      Put him in acid

      Hang him

      Starve him

      Stretch him

      Have to bodyguards slaughter him

      Cut him open and play with his insides

      Make him walk over a bed of Legos barefoot

      Shove him in a pit with Ro's fav amoebas (idk if I spelled that right)

      Dump LOTS AND LOTS of alicorn poop and vomit on him

      Make him eternally watch Silveny and Greyfell 'play'

      Make him read Sokeefe fanfic AT ALL TIMES

      Tell him that teal is a super boring color

      Take his FAME AND GLORY AND GIVE IT TO KEEFE!!!

      Put him in a room full of human schoolgirls

      Put him in a room with Alvar (we can revive him) for ETERNITY!!!! Or until he finds a way to kill Alvar. Whichever comes first. 

      Wow! This list is BIGG!!!! Good job guys!! Also, I might have forgotten some, and feel free to add!!

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    • yesss thats a goood list

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    • i think he will live long enough for all that, and if not, we can just revive him and make him FEEL DA PAIN!!!

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    • Oh lol have you watched Home Alone? The LEGO one reminded me :)

      And yea that is a gud list. Oh oh oh and for WoF Keeper fans just plop Moon in his face and watch him get roasted ‘cause she can read his mind :))))))))))))))))))))))

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    • ohhhh u reminded me! home alone! we can.....

      1. throw bricks on him

      2. lead him into a house full of traps

      3. electrocute him

      4. paint on him

      5. mess up his hair

      6. make him get punched by the peephole in the front door

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    • Don’t forget drop an ironer on his face! (did i get the terminology right xD)

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    • i think so XD

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    • 174.56.40.127 wrote:
      How to torture Ritz Savory Cracker:(My friend and I came up with these this morning) (1. Make him walk over a bed of Legos. Barefoot. (2. Shove him in a pit with Ro's fav amoebas. (3. Dump a LOT of Alicorn poop(and vomit) on him. (4. Make him eternally watch Silveny and Greyfell 'play'. (5. Read a Sokeefe fanfic out LOUD. SUPER LOUD. Whenever he walks by. (6. Tell him teal is a super boring color. (7. Take his fame and glory (8. Put him on a bus full of human schoolgirls (9. Make him be alone with Alvar for an hour. Feel free to add more ;)

      XDXDXD

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    • Love the ideas coming!! At the moment I'm to lazy to re-make the list :) So I'll do it once we think of more ideas.

      Also, do you know when you're posting? I NEED MORE KEEFPHIE AND REVENGE ON FITZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No rush tho :)

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    • oooo we can also spread rumors about him like he did!

      and we can try and make him deaf by putting him in a room full of loud noises.

      he can also freeze to death standing alone on mount everest without an oxygen mask

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    • Ooh! Ooh! I've got a couple!

      Make his blankets either too hot or too cold.

      Toss him into Tartarus covered in paper cuts.

      Acid bath!

      Read all of his thoughts aloud

      Scream SoKeefe fanfics 24/7 to him

      AMOBEAS!!!!!

      And so on, so forth. I actually have some pretty dark ones that I can't really share.

      With murderous thoughts,

      Lunabeth Foster-Herondale!

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    • OMG THOSE ARE GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Also, we don't mind if you share your dark ones. We all have a dark side... *cackles evilly*

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    • yes thats true and i just thought of some new ones:

      feed him to cerberus

      let satan deal with him

      launch him to the sun

      put him in a room where 10000000 stink bombs were set off

      and prob my fav most of all - let linh kindly drown him in water (u might have seen this b4 its a meme)

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    • DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:
      XDXDXDXD Ok, here's the list or torture methods (that sounds wrong): 

      Drown Fitzy in ice cold water

      Burn Fitzy in a fire

      Let kotlc characters beat Fitzy up

      Slit Fitzy's throat slowly

      Have Sophie and Bronte inflict on Fitzy

      Have an extra heavy truck run over Fitzy

      Put Fitzy in a pot of acid (my personal fav)

      And here are some of my ideas:

      Stretch Fitzy until he goes pop (not going into details there)

      Hang Fitzy

      Starve Fitzy

      And last but not least, the classic slaughter method




      Wow, I lost control of my inner evil murderer there. XDXDXD

      That's pretty good, but here's what my friend and I came up with: In Alvar’s cell
      On a firey stake, walking on a treadmill of legos while having amoebas squirted into his nose and eyes
      Watching all the Sokeefe videos ON LOOP
      The Match list being destroyed along with his fam rep and money
      And Alicorn Poop dumped on his head every ten seconds and during the second he’s getting doused it’s a audio clip of Sophie dumping him with a five second video of “playing”

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    • 174.56.40.127 wrote:
      Oh, and read him Dwarven poetry.

      XD XD XD YASSSSS

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    • YAY!!!!!!!!! THIS IS SUCH A GREAT LIST!!!!!!! XDXDXDXD

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    • Chapter 18: Keefe's POV (This one has a bit more fluff to give you a break from the drama)

      Keefe's head hurt, almost everything hurt, but it was good to be back. He'd take a headache over having to spend eternity in a city of nightamres anyday. Especially now that he was here with Sophie tucked into her arms. It was quiet, but the good sort of quiet. The type of quiet that just sits there and rests letting there be no need for noise. Sophie's hugs were always awesome, but this one was incredible. It was warm and caring and inviting and wrapped him in a sense of calm and love.

      "I'm sorry," Sophie whispered, hitting Keefe with ton of sadness and guilt. 

      "For what?" He whispered. Sophie pulled away from him, staring him straight in the eyes. Her gaze was intense and full of love, and something melancholy there too, something he could never place.

      "Your mind broke and was all my fault, and I... and I almost couldn't fix you," Tears filled Sophie's beautiful brown eyes spilling down her cheeks. A wave of guilt radiated off of her hitting Keefe hard. He placed his hand gently on her cheek and brushed the tears away.

      "Sophie, this isn't your fault," He whispered. Sophie shook her head hard and turned away.

      "Yes it is, I said all those terrible things to you and you shattered," She sobbed placing her head in her hands.

      "Sophie, look at me," He waited until she met his eyes before he continued, "This isn't your fault. I had already started breaking since I found out my mom was part of the Neverseen, Fitz's cruel rumors and meddling are what drove me over the edge not you. And I know you never wanted to hurt me, so everything's cool between us, ok?" Sophie nodded and scooted closer to him, taking his hand.

      "But I kind of did, I was so angry because, well, Fitz told me all of those horrible things and I..." Sophie cried harder. This pep-talk was not going well at all. Keefe squeezed her hand tighter, saying nothing. Because Sophie didn't need a pep-talk right now, right now she needed to get it all out of her. And even though all of her guilt and worry was making him feelsick, Keefe stayed there with her, gently rubbing her back and helping her get through it.

      After a little while she stopped and he wrapped her into a hug. He let her sink into his arms like she had let him do so many times before.

      "Thank you, for staying with me," Sophie whispered after a little while. Keefe smiled at her, a sweet love-sick kind of smile that made Sophie's heartmelt.

      "And thank you for fixing me Foster, you were my only hope," He didn't know what he would ever do without her. Sophie stared him straight in the eyes and there was a shining spark in them, the same of spark that he'd fallen in love with.

      "Oh, and thank you," Sophie murmered, there was a playful hint of glee in her voice. Keefe wasn't sure what was going on, but he decided to play along, going with the obvious answer.

      "You're welcome," That didn't seem to be the answer she wanted though because next thing he knew Sophie was elbowing his shoulder. 

      "No, You're supposed to say 'for what'" Sophie told him. That was confusing, why couldn't he just say 'you're welcome'? Hadn't they just said what they were thankful for?

      "Why?" 

      "Just say it ok?" Keefe brushed it off as human thing and decided to comply. 

      "For what?" He smirked and made his eyebrows do a wiggly dance. That earned him another elbow.

      "Not like that! Say it again, take it seriously though this time,"  This whole human flirting method was getting kind of annoying, but at least it was fun. He gave a heavy sigh and crossed his arms pouting a little. Sophie laughed and elbowed him again. 

      "For what?" He said it all serious, to be honest he was curious to see what Sophie would do next.

      "For this," She pulled him into a kiss. It was warm and tender and... perfect.  Little sparks were flying, and they melted into eachother's arms. He had to give it to the humans, they may have some wacky ways of getting to kiss, but it was definately worth it. The sat there like that for a long while before finally pulling away. 

      "mmhm" He mumbled. That kiss had been the most amazing thing he'd ever done.

      "Wanna do it again?" Sophie asked, her eyes still full of that playful, flirty spark.

      "Yes," He whispered pulling her into another one. This was was more intense, it felt daunting at first, but then they both let their instincts take over. Even more sparks were flying, which was kind of weird now that he thought of it. He pulled away gently, and turned to sniff the air. It had an odd smokey quality, which wasn't good. Where was it coming from?

      He took Sophie's hand and walked over to where theor friends were. All of them stood there staring at one figure, who was trapped in a ring of fire (Courtesy of Marella). A person Keefe really, really didn't want to see right now. A person who wasn't ever supposed to come there again. His former best-friend, Fitzroy Avery Vacker.

      *End of Chapter 18*

      -KitKat

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    • That was good!

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    • I am just saying, Fitz is not this mean in the books. If Sokeefe happens, Fitz might get a little angry, but be happy for them! BUT! I am a Sokeefe/Keephieshippeer...

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    • " All of them stood there staring at one figure, who was trapped in a ring of fire (Courtesy of Marella).

      XDXDXD

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    • SO GOOD!

      LOVE THE SOKEEFE!

      THE CLIFFHANGER THOUGH, WHYYYYYYYYYYY?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!



      SOO GOOD THOUGH!!!!!!!!!!1

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    • TheBlackMoonlark wrote:
      I am just saying, Fitz is not this mean in the books. If Sokeefe happens, Fitz might get a little angry, but be happy for them! BUT! I am a Sokeefe/Keephieshippeer...

      Yeah, I know. In my mind I kind of have two categories for Fitz: Canon Fitz (who is a nice boy who has some issues and can be a jerk sometimes) and Fanfic Fitz (Who can be a real jerk a lot of the time). Sometimes the lines blur in my head kind of making it hard to characterize Fitz. I admit, sometimes I get a bit carried away with Fanfic Fitz, but it's kind of fun to write him that way. I hope that made some sense.

      -KitKat

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    • 73.202.57.61 wrote:
      TheBlackMoonlark wrote:
      I am just saying, Fitz is not this mean in the books. If Sokeefe happens, Fitz might get a little angry, but be happy for them! BUT! I am a Sokeefe/Keephieshippeer...
      Yeah, I know. In my mind I kind of have two categories for Fitz: Canon Fitz (who is a nice boy who has some issues and can be a jerk sometimes) and Fanfic Fitz (Who can be a real jerk a lot of the time). Sometimes the lines blur in my head kind of making it hard to characterize Fitz. I admit, sometimes I get a bit carried away with Fanfic Fitz, but it's kind of fun to write him that way. I hope that made some sense.

      -KitKat

      Yes  I know Exactly what you meannnn

      fanfic fitz so fun to read though because it gives you somebody to be mad at XD MWAHAHHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA

      I love your fanfic!!!!!!! :) :) :)

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    • YEZZZ!!!!! This fanfic is awesome!!!!!! And I enjoy it when Fitzy is the evil guy because then I can think of torture methods for him!!!!!! So we're good :)

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    • OMG plz post the next chapter soon. I am DYING for some FITZY TORTURE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

      Eeeek!!! I'm so excited for the next chapter!!!!!!!! XDXDXD

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    • DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:
      YEZZZ!!!!! This fanfic is awesome!!!!!! And I enjoy it when Fitzy is the evil guy because then I can think of torture methods for him!!!!!! So we're good :)

      Yeah! XD

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    • Me and my friend can up with a whole buncha ways to torture Ritz Savory Cracker: In Alvar’s cell
      On a firey stake, walking on a treadmill of legos while having amoebas squirted into his nose and eyes
      Watching all the Sokeefe videos ON LOOP
      The M list being destroyed along with his fam rep and money
      And Alicorn Poop dumped on his head every ten seconds and during the second he’s getting doused it’s a audio clip of Sophie dumping him with a five second video of Sliveny and Greyfell “playing”. Yeah, we got a little carried away.

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    • 174.56.40.127 wrote:
      Me and my friend can up with a whole buncha ways to torture Ritz Savory Cracker: In Alvar’s cell
      On a firey stake, walking on a treadmill of legos while having amoebas squirted into his nose and eyes
      Watching all the Sokeefe videos ON LOOP
      The M list being destroyed along with his fam rep and money
      And Alicorn Poop dumped on his head every ten seconds and during the second he’s getting doused it’s a audio clip of Sophie dumping him with a five second video of Sliveny and Greyfell “playing”. Yeah, we got a little carried away.

      Beautiful 

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    • MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:
      DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:
      YEZZZ!!!!! This fanfic is awesome!!!!!! And I enjoy it when Fitzy is the evil guy because then I can think of torture methods for him!!!!!! So we're good :)
      Yeah! XD

      YAS! DIE RITZROY SAOVRY CRACKER!!!!!!! *grabs pitchfork and starts running around*

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      • screams at Ritzy Boi while waving torch+pitchfork and chasing him over the cliff at Havenfield*
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    • YOU GO MARELLA!!!!!!!!!!!! Man guys we are doing GREAT with torturing Ritzy Boi.

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    • 99.185.40.109 wrote:
      MallowmeltMoonlark wrote:
      DAHYDROKINETICLADY!!!!! wrote:
      YEZZZ!!!!! This fanfic is awesome!!!!!! And I enjoy it when Fitzy is the evil guy because then I can think of torture methods for him!!!!!! So we're good :)
      Yeah! XD
      YAS! DIE RITZROY SAOVRY CRACKER!!!!!!! *grabs pitchfork and starts running around*

      yesss go die in a hole fitzy and never come back!!!!!!

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    • 174.56.40.127 wrote:
      YOU GO MARELLA!!!!!!!!!!!! Man guys we are doing GREAT with torturing Ritzy Boi.

      definitely XD

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    • 174.56.40.127 wrote:
      YOU GO MARELLA!!!!!!!!!!!! Man guys we are doing GREAT with torturing Ritzy Boi.

      XDXDXD

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    • XD

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    • PLEEEEEEASE POST AGAIN, and have Keefe permenantly dye his hair.

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    • 174.56.40.127 wrote:
      PLEEEEEEASE POST AGAIN, and have Keefe permenantly dye his hair.

      Hmmm, dye it orange.

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    • Chapter 19: Sophie's POV  Note: This one is dedicated to all you guys, especially the ones who came up with Fitz torture methods, some of which are included in this chapter.

      Sophie didn't know if she wanted to cry or scream or punch Fitz in the face, she'd told him not to come back there. But there was also something pained in his teal eyes, something almost remorseful.

      "What are you doing here?" Her voice was sharp and steady, something she definately didn't feel at the moment. Keefe squeezed her hand tighter and set her a gentle blue breeze that seemed to clear all worry away. She gave him a thankful smile, then turned to meet Fitz's eyes once more.

      "I just came to talk," Fitz sighed. Sophie decided that answer was good enough for her, but Ro didn't look convinced. She was already marching up to Fitz, her glare was legendary and Fitz seemed to shrink away a little.

      "Like we're buying that again. Why are you really here?" The ogre princess spat. She looked ready to punch something, and Sophie knew it was probably Fitz.

      "Like I said, I'm only here to talk. Do that little Empath lie-detector thing if you don't believe me," Fitz seemed less confident some how, more afraid and worried. She wondered what had happened to him. Now that she got a look he was...wet and his cape was singed. That was odd.

      Keefe and Stina both strode up to do the test, they both looked skeptical as Fitz said the words once more. Stina narrowed her eyes and finally let go after a few seconds. Keefe did the same soon after.

      "He's telling the truth," Stina sighed, even she looked like she didn't want to believe it. To be honest, no one did. But a hopeful spark had lit itself inside of Sophie, it was a dim flicker, but maybe, just maybe Fitz would apoligize for real.

      "That still doesn't mean we can trust him, words are powerful things you know," Ro gritted her teeth and continued to stare down Fitz. 

      "But... but maybe he's changed. Maybe he realized he was wrong," Sophie stammered. She knew she was probably wrong, but she wanted more than anything to be right. To get her friend and cognate back, for everything to go back to normal. She clutched on to that hope and let it burn inside of her, but she contained it, she couldn't get too hopeful.

      "Foster, I want to believe him too. But remember last time, we forgave him and he stabbed us in the back," Keefe directed the last words at Fitz and they were dripping with venom. 

      "Um, Fitz, we're going to talk about what to do. Just don't go anywhere ok?" Sophie told him. She needed time to figure out what to do and she knew she thought best when she wasn't alone. They stood in a small circle, kind of like a team-huddle, and made plans. There were good ideas and bad ones, serious ones and ones that involved torturing Fitz with gulons (Cortesy of Keefe), but in the end they came up with a plan they knew would work. It was simple and easy, the sort of plan you couldn't go wrong with.

      "Come inside Fitz," She told him after a few minutes. The teal-eyed boy looked confused and then annoyed. 

      "Yeah, I can't really do that right now, you see, as I'm surrounded by fire," He grumbled. Sophie had forgotten about the ring of white-hot flames sorrounding him. It was actually kind of funny to see him scamper away from the flames the second they got too close. He looked like a confused baby deer and she couldn't stop herself from giggling.

      "Marella, put out your flames," She said in between laughs. She knew she shouldn't be laughing at his pain, but after all he had put them through, he kind of deserved it. In mere seconds, the fire was gone and Fitz was following them into her living room.

      She made him sit in the most uncomfortable chairshe could find, an armless mahogney one Councillour Bronte had given them a while back. The legs wobbled and it had no cusion, it was just hard, uncomfy, wood. Sophie watched the boy groan as he sank into the chair. She knew it wasn't fair that she and her friends got to sit in comfy chairs and he had to sit there, but he kind of deserved it.

      "Here Fitz, you look like you need it," Keefe handed Fitz a cup of tea. Step one of the plan was complete. Sophie watched Fitz down the whole drink in one gulp and give a very un-Fitzlike burp.  

      "So Fitz, what happened?" She asked, Fitz looked even more beaten-up now that she saw him up close. His hair was a mess and his clothes were covered in dirt.

      "Oh, that. So I was walking in the woods, you know like you do when you're mad and your friend tells you she never wants to see you again. I kicked a few trees, punched a lot of bushes,like you do, and then out of no where, this group of girls ran up to me.  They told me they'd seen what I'd done and that I was going to pay for what I did to Keefe and you. They also called me a "Ritz Cracker" what ever that is. They were freakishly strong and carried me to a lake and dunked me in! Then they brought me to a ring of fire and sat me there for ten minutes. And the worst of all, they read me something called a "fan-fiction". It shouldn't have been that bad, but they read the same passage over and over and over. It was of you and Keefe kissing! After twenty minutes of torture, they let me go," Fitz groaned and moaned and clutched his head. He seemed to be reliving the memory. Sophie thought that was the most ridiculous thing she'd ever heard and if slipping a truth elixer in the tea hadn't been part of the plan, she would've never believed him. 

      "Oh, wow, I'm sorry about that," There wasn't really anything else to say to that. She was thankful to those girls, whoever they were, for putting Fitz in his place.

      "Yeah, so after that I realized I'd been a huge jerk. I'm really, truly sorry Sophie. I know you probably won't accept this apology, heck, I wouldn't even accept this agology, but I really do mean it.  I know that you probably hate me and that's ok, I just... I just missed you, all of you. I miss my best friend and this group of people that feel like a second family to me. And I'm really, really sorry," Fitz whispered looking at the ground and when he looked up, Sophie noticed his eyes were full of tears. She and Keefe both pulled Fitz into a soft, gentle, hug.

      "It's good to have you back Fitzy," Keefe whispered. 

      "Yeah, you too," Fitz replied, Sophie crawled her way out of the hug and let the two best friends have their moment. They were smiling huge goofy smiles and tears were pouring down both of their faces. After a few minutes they finally pulled away. It warmed Sophie's heart to see the two of them together once again.

      "Oh! I should probably tell you, we kind of put an elixer in your tea. You know how Dex dyed Iggy pink a few years ago, and how Biana made him all poofy a little more recently? Yeah so that's what your hair is gonna look like," Keefe told Fitz. Fitz's eyes widened to the size of saucers and his mouth dropped open.

      "So for a few days my hair will be a hot pink poof?" He gasped. Keefe fiddle with his hands and stared at his feet.

      "You see, I was kind of mad at you, so the dye is... permanent," He mumbled.

      "Permanent?!" Fitz laughed. His smile was infectious and soon everyone was joining in.

      "Yeah Fitzy, though I gotta say, pink might very well be your color," Keefe smirked and everyone joined in one huge group hug. They were together again, for real this time, and nothing was going to keep thm apart.

      *End of Chapter 19*

      -KitKat

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    • Wait... his hear is permanently PINK?!!! Like pink pink??!!!! Wow...


      I’m just cracking up right now.

      Oh my.... this is hilarious 😂

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    • YAY WE WERE MENTIONED!!!!!!!! OUR HARD WORK PAYED OFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! POP THE CHAMPANE!!!!!!!!!!!! AND OUR TORTURE METHODS WERE IN THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PARTY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND FITZY FINALLY APOLIGIZED!!!!!!!!!!! I DONT KNOW IF I SPELLED THAT RIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND PINK!!!!!!!! HIS HAIR WILL BE PINK!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • TheBlackMoonlark

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    • Ok since I still don't fully trust fitz, I have some more FTI:

      Make Keefe and Sophie kiss SUPER ROMATICALLY in front of him.

      Make him walk on nails, legos, needles, etc.

      Feed him to a shark.

      That was a little less gruesome... right? Maybe not. XDXDXD

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    • Did u seriously break the 4th wall?

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    • Can you name those girls who came?

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    • XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD

      I LOVED THIS CHAPTER

      WE FANGIRLS SHOWED THAT LITTLE RITZ CRACKER

      XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

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    • I think the girls were: MallowmeltMoonlark, Ripplefluffy the Rainwing, Tiana4eva, A FANDOM user 174.56.40.127

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    • Oh! And DAHYDROKINETICLADY!

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    • TheBlackMoonlark wrote:
      I think the girls were: MallowmeltMoonlark, Ripplefluffy the Rainwing, Tiana4eva, A FANDOM user 174.56.40.127

      XD YASSSS

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