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  • Thanks to everyone who warned me this was about to happen again! We've officially beaten Adorable! (and totally knocked Dexiana off the charts- but that's my fault xD)

    Love you guys so much! Thx for all your support and understanding when I can't make my deadlines :)

    WIP: Episode 18




    Thread 1: https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:979497

    Thread 2: https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1003976

    Thread 3: https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1017801

    Thread 4: https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1030088

    Thread 5: https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1055900

    Thread 6: https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1103437

    Thread 7: https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1136230








    Fanfic Playlist: ~ Little Do You Know (Alex and Sierra)

    ~ Heartbreak Girl (5 Seconds of Summer)

    ~ Set Fire To The Rain (Adele)

    ~ Lose You To Love Me (Selena Gomez)

    ~ Treat You Better (Shawn Mendes)

    ~ Ruin (Shawn Mendes)

    ~ Begin Again (Taylor Swift)

    ~ You Belong With Me (Taylor Swift)

    ~ Never Gonna Let You Down (Colbie Caillat)

    ~ Just the Way You Are (Bruno Mars)

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    • first!

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    • Second

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    • Third!

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    • yay i was first! Im never first!

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      yay i was first! Im never first!

      Actually, Chase was first. Sorry.

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    • 5th

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    • BecauseKeefe wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      yay i was first! Im never first!
      Actually, Chase was first. Sorry.

      I dont think that counts

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      BecauseKeefe wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      yay i was first! Im never first!
      Actually, Chase was first. Sorry.
      I dont think that counts

      ....and why not?

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    • BecauseKeefe wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      BecauseKeefe wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      yay i was first! Im never first!
      Actually, Chase was first. Sorry.
      I dont think that counts
      ....and why not?

      Because chase made the thread. The original, starting bit at the top doesnt count

      the actual first comment does

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    • ....according to the counting thing on the fanfic board it does

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    • No one has posted in 4 minutes. The thread's dead.

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    • BecauseKeefe wrote:
      ....according to the counting thing on the fanfic board it does

      ok fine.

      I was second, then

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    • I'm supposed to be writing an essay right now... but being here is too much fun

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    • 66.235.26.194 wrote:
      I'm supposed to be writing an essay right now... but being here is too much fun

      actually me during every online class

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    • Lol I am writing thank you cards to people. Write a card, check fandom. Adress the card,check fandom. 

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    • Teamfoster-Keefe12345 wrote:
      Lol I am writing thank you cards to people. Write a card, check fandom. Adress the card,check fandom. 

      lol, better than having to write an essay on the importance of goals XD

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      BecauseKeefe wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      BecauseKeefe wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      yay i was first! Im never first!
      Actually, Chase was first. Sorry.
      I dont think that counts
      ....and why not?
      Because chase made the thread. The original, starting bit at the top doesnt count

      the actual first comment does

      😂😂😂

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    • Teamfoster-Keefe12345 wrote:
      Lol I am writing thank you cards to people. Write a card, check fandom. Adress the card,check fandom. 

      nice

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    • BecauseKeefe wrote:
      No one has posted in 4 minutes. The thread's dead.

      NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      BecauseKeefe wrote:
      No one has posted in 4 minutes. The thread's dead.
      NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

      Don't worry, Chase, I'm still here and reloading XD

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    • yep the thread's dead. rip. 

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    • Hey everybody!! Another thread broken wow...

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    • yeah, i feel proud

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    • 66.235.26.194 wrote:
      I'm supposed to be writing an essay right now... but being here is too much fun

      Ik,r?

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    • Almost done with 18... brace yourselves...

      Oh yeah I almost forgot this totally deserves a ;)

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    • Yay! ;)

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      Almost done with 18... brace yourselves...

      Oh yeah I almost forgot this totally deserves a ;)

      NONONONO THE WINKY

      NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

      IM SCARED NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      Almost done with 18... brace yourselves...

      Oh yeah I almost forgot this totally deserves a ;)

      NONONONO THE WINKY

      NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

      IM SCARED NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      I'm scared too..

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    • wait so remind me is this a fic with tamiana or dexiana?

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    • Complicated (A Sokeefe Fanfic) Episode 18

       

      Biana was the first one in the door, followed closely by Dex and Fitz. Behind them, Grady, Edaline, Alden, Della, Lord Cassius, and Magnate Leto filed in. 

      Biana rushed to Sophie’s side, tears in her eyes. She leaned over and gave Sophie a tight hug before standing back up. “Oh Sophie are you okay? And Keefe?” Sophie assured her that they were both fine. 

      Dex seemed a little teary too as he approached. “What happened? No one is telling us anything.”

      Sophie did her best to explain, but gave up and turned to the boy next to her. “Keefe, I don’t know most of it. You tell.”

      Keefe gave a brief account of what happened, to finding the letter in his bag all the way up until Sophie found him at Candleshade. He left out the breakup, though.

      Everyone- especially the adults- had a bunch of questions for Keefe. In the chaos, Sophie suddenly realized that Fitz was in the corner with his head down. 

      Fitz, what’s wrong?

      He said goodbye to me. I should have stopped him. I knew something was wrong. and I let him go. 

      What did he say to you?

      He told me he had a stomachache, and to tell the others where he’d gone. Then, just before he left, he told me that he hoped I meant my promise that I was sorry. And... he told me to... be good to you. 

      Sophie looked up in shock. “He said that?” she asked, not bothering to transmit. Everyone looked at her as Fitz nodded. Sophie turned to Keefe. “You told Fitz... what on earth, Keefe? What kind of a goodbye is that?”

      Keefe cringed. “Good thing it wasn’t a real goodbye?”

      “You’d better thank your lucky stars I caught you. Because that is almost as bad as the goodbye you gave me!”

      Lord Cassius cut in. “Mind telling the rest of us what’s going on?”

      “YES.” Sophie, Keefe, and several other voices said simultaneously. 

      Lord Cassius raised his hands in surrender and took a step back. “Okay, okay. Go back to your private yet public conversation.”

      Sophie rolled her eyes. Before anyone could speak, Elwin cut in. “I know everyone still has questions for Keefe, but he needs rest. This is very overwhelming for someone who has been through what he’s been through. Sophie too, for that matter. So I need everyone to let them rest. You can come back in a couple hours.”

      The group reluctantly agreed. They filed out, Magnate Leto in the back. Just before he left, he turned to Sophie and Keefe. “I will be back later. We need to discuss the more serious side of what happened.”

      Sophie and Keefe nodded. Once he was gone, Keefe slumped against his pillows. His death grip on Sophie’s hand loosened, and she realized he had been holding it so tight she’d lost feeling. But she didn’t care, just used her other hand to brush the sweaty locks of blonde hair off his forehead. He closed his eyes. 

      Elwin gave them each a new bottle of water and a snack, which they ate silently. They barely managed to finish it before falling back into an exhausted but restless sleep. 

       

      *****

       

      The next time Sophie woke up, the light from the windows told her it was early afternoon. Standing over her was Magnate Leto. Keefe was sitting up next to her, wide awake and still holding her hand. 

      Sophie sat up. “Any news?” It was the day of the deadline Lady Gisela had set. 

      Keefe scowled. “I should be out there.”

      “Nothing yet,” Magnate Leto answered as though Keefe hadn’t spoken. “The princess is out there now, double-checking the traps. We’ve set up an illusion that not only hides the thirty goblins around, it also projects an image of Keefe. It should be enough to convince her that all is as she wanted. As soon as she steps foot on the property, we will attack.”

      Sophie looked to Keefe, wondering how he felt about this. “Are you okay?”

      “I should be out there,” he repeated. “She won’t come unless it’s just me. But I can carry weapons. I’ll cut her down before she says a word. I’ve got this, Foster. Just trust me.” He looked at her with pleading eyes. 

      She had to look away. “You know I can’t let you do this, Keefe. And besides- even if I was okay with it, no one else would let you. Can you please believe me? You can’t do this one your own. The goblins can. If she shows up-“

      “You know she won’t,” he interrupted. 

      She sighed. “Maybe she won’t. But that doesn’t justify doing something as risky as meeting with her alone. Especially in your condition-”

      “I’M FINE!” he exploded. “I never should have come here! I’m not some weak pitiful baby who has to be fed every hour and needs ten naps a day. And,” he threw a dirty glance at Elwin. “I definitely don’t need counseling.”

      Elwin held up his hands. “It was just a suggestion.”

      “Yeah, well it’s stupid. I’m fine.”

      Sophie felt tears stinging her eyes. “Don’t do this, Keefe,” she whispered hoarsely. “Don’t push us away. Don’t push me away. You don’t have to go to counseling. But talk to someone, okay? Depression is a serious issue. You can’t just pretend-“

      “I don’t have depression! I may have gotten depressed for a day or two! That’s different! I dare any of you to be perfectly fine after dumping your girlfriend to run off with your evil mom!”

      Dead silence. Keefe sighed and buried his head in his hands- pulling his left one out of Sophie’s right one in the process. 

      After a minute, Magnate Leto spoke in a subdued tone. “I should get back to my prodigies. I just wanted to let you know that everything is set up for the ambush. Recover well, both of you.” Then he made a hasty exit.

      It was several minutes before Keefe spoke. “I’m better now. Can I go home?”

      Elwin shook his head. “Sorry, but no. You’ll be ready tomorrow morning.”

      Keefe sighed. “Why can’t I go now?”

      “If you must know, I’ve been asked to keep you here until the deadline’s passed. But even if I hadn’t, you would be staying here until we got your depression under control.”

      Keefe groaned and raked a hand down his face. “I’m not depressed. Can I at least go to the bathroom?” When Elwin hesitated, Keefe rolled his eyes. “I just need to use the bathroom. I’m not going to kill myself in the bathroom. Terrible place to die.”

      Sophie grabbed his arm, not sure if he was serious or not. 

      He cracked a tiny smile. “Kidding, Foster. Well, kind of. It would be a terrible place to die. But I’m not planning on dying.”

      Elwin sighed. “Fine- but just to the bathroom and right back.”

      “Can I shower too?”

      “Yes. Quickly.”

      “I don’t shower quickly. But yeah.”

      He waited for Sophie to remove her hand on his arm, then hopped out of bed. It looked like he was trying to act normal, but Sophie didn’t miss how he faltered for a second after standing up so quickly. He hid it well, though, and strode out the door to the bathroom before either Sophie or Elwin could comment. 

      When he was gone, Sophie turned to Elwin. “I’m worried about him.”

      Elwin sighed. “Me too. Like I said before, I haven’t treated much depression. The worst was probably Cyrah Endel after Prentice’s arrest. But honestly? I think Keefe’s worse.”

      Sophie shuddered. Worse than someone whose husband had been broken and sent to Exile? He needed help. But she wasn’t sure what to do. She didn’t know if she could fix it this time. 

      Elwin clapped to break the gloom that had settled over them. He handed a few elixirs to Sophie. “Alright. Last round. After this, just eat a little extra for a while.”

      She nodded and dutifully swallowed the goopy liquid. After another ridiculously large meal, she heard the shower start. Trying to let herself relax, she settled back into her pillows. But her mind was still racing with worry. 

      Eventually, she couldn’t hold it in anymore. “Elwin?”

      He hurried to her side. “Yes?”

      “Can you check on Keefe?”

      Elwin glanced to the bathroom and nodded. He crossed the room and knocked on the door. A second later, a voice yelled something Sophie couldn’t make out from inside. Relieved, she finally let herself relax. Her body was more exhausted than she’d realized, and she fell asleep fast. 

      The next thing she knew, someone was shaking her shoulder. Sophie yawned and sat up, rubbing her eyes. She looked at Edaline, then immediately jolted to her feet. “What’s wrong?”

      Edaline’s face was undeniably concerned. “Keefe’s gone.”

       

      *****

       

      “GONE?” Sophie shrieked. No, no, no no no. He couldn’t be gone. “Gone where?”

      “We don’t know. After you went to sleep, Elwin checked on Keefe again. He didn’t answer. Eventually, Elwin went in there and found no trace of him. There was a device on the floor that plays a prerecorded message when it’s triggered. We assume he set it to a voice, so it would seem like he was in there and buy him some time.”

      Sophie made a frustrated noise in the back of her throat. “Where did he even get that?”

      Edaline shrugged helplessly. 

      Sophie paced across the room and looked in the bathroom. An open window led straight to the Leapmaster. She groaned. “I was so stupid! Of course he’d try to run for it! How long has he been gone?”

      “Nearly an hour,” Edaline said quietly. 

      Inside, Sophie was seething that they hadn’t woken her up immediately. But the only thing that mattered now was finding Keefe. “Did he go to Candleshade?”

      “The goblins and Ro say no. But they weren’t looking for him, so it’s possible he was there for a short time.”

      “So basically, a sick boy with guilt issues and depression is on the loose, probably trying to meet up with his evil mom?” Sophie restrained herself from screaming when Edaline reluctantly nodded. She was going to kill Keefe when she found him. 

      “Where would he go? He was supposed to meet her at Candleshade!”

      Edaline hesitated. “There was an Imparter in the bushes outside the window.”

      Sophie facepalmed. “Great. That’s probably it. He probably hailed her. Where would he ask to meet?” Then she realized a better plan and pulled out her own Imparter. “Show me Dex Dizznee.”

       

      *****

       

      Ten minutes later, Dex had pulled up a scratchy recording of the call. They could barely understand it, but it was definitely Keefe and his mom. 

      “Trap... ambush.. Healing Center...” that was Keefe’s voice. 

      “So what?” Lady Gisela. 

      “Meet... back... Foxfire...”

      “... safe?”

      “Don’t... no crystal... ten...”

      Then the call cut off and Sophie sprinted for the door. Of course. Keefe didn’t have a crystal. He had to meet her at Foxfire. 

      Behind her, Sophie heard Edaline calling for Sandor and Elwin to hail for backup. Then Sandor’s heavy feet pounded behind her. He almost caught her, but she dodged and ran even faster, so fast that she made tiny teleporting ‘slips’ and left him far behind. 

      But when she turned the corner of the huge building, she froze. Because right in front of her… it was even worse than she’d feared.

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    • Commence weeping in all caps in three... two... one...

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    • Whew! I found the new thread!

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    • YAYAYAYA YOU POSTED!

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    • WOT?!?!?!?!?! OMG keefe WHYYYYY

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    • SZFDXGCHVBMN<MFXDGHMJ<KMLDSIYG KWEGJ LIJM:LDKS>LHNIU:"K>L?:{ ><:MLGGEFWZXHJR^CKT&*YIO(U)(N_{_*RB^VE$CTSDFVGJHBNKMKHUNLG IKURDYRG

      WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY KEEFE WHY OMG OF ALL THE QUESTIONABLE LIFE CHOICES WHY??!?!??!?! WOT THE HELL ARE YOU THINKING, MY DEAR CHAP?!?!?!?! why

      .*begins crying*

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    • NOOOOO AHHHHHH

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    • NO CHASE WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

      I get the whole winky face thing now

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    • AHHHHHH THAT CLIFF HANGER!!!

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    • and omg is keefe dead or something? because Sophie said it was worse than she thought. did Keefe die? Please don't do this to us Chase, please don't cause us this much suffering

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    • 66.235.26.194 wrote:
      and omg is keefe dead or something? because Sophie said it was worse than she thought. did Keefe die? Please don't do this to us Chase, please don't cause us this much suffering

      IF KEEFE DIES, I WILL KILL HIM

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    • Honestly guys. Do you really think I could kill Keefe? I would go into worse depression than Sophie. But I guess you'll have to see what happens... ;)

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    • No Chase post moreeeeeeeeeeee

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      Honestly guys. Do you really think I could kill Keefe? I would go into worse depression than Sophie. But I guess you'll have to see what happens... ;)

      yeah true

      even CHASE isnt that evil....

      WAIT THERE'S ANOTHER WINKY NOOOOOOOOOO

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    • noooooo :((((( ur evilllll

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    • I enjoy killing off characters for fun. I killed Biana in my fanfic...

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    • G G GZGDHFHFHDJDHFHDHDHJDHFUEHDPSLDKKWSKNDEODJMDJDKDNJD LON BDBJJDJDJDKDJCJFDJDNDJKDDJDJDJRKDJDJDNDJRDKNDJD!!!!!!+/!;!/!/!/!/!!/!/!/!//!;+!+!;!:!!

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    • Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh WINKY arghhhhhhhhhh!!! nooooooooooo!!! It burnsssssss!!! It BURNSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

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    • Yup, you will be gone. (jk, i am not a murderer)

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    • JATUATUEBNOWONHWMAAKBICNEUOKINWNREWAJIWEWEKNAAJOAAWNONWONFANCAJ ANNAONCAJEONA

      WHAT?!

      NONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONO

      KEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA *sobs for the rest of the day*

      -bianex4evah

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    • Pisano22 wrote:
      I enjoy killing off characters for fun. I killed Biana in my fanfic...

      SAY WHAT NOW??? THE ONLY HALF DECENT VACKER?

      Well Della's okay.

      BUT STILL!?!?!?!?!

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      Pisano22 wrote:
      I enjoy killing off characters for fun. I killed Biana in my fanfic...
      SAY WHAT NOW??? THE ONLY HALF DECENT VACKER?

      Well Della's okay.

      BUT STILL!?!?!?!?!

      HEHE

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    • Pisano22 wrote:
      I enjoy killing off characters for fun. I killed Biana in my fanfic...

      wow. just... wow.

      evil.

      actually, I love killing off characters. its so fun!

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    • Yes. I am evil.

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    • Yes it is isn't it

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      Pisano22 wrote:
      I enjoy killing off characters for fun. I killed Biana in my fanfic...
      wow. just... wow.

      evil.

      actually, I love killing off characters. its so fun!

      Yup! And then you get the reaction!

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    • I'm not crying.....nope.....my eyes are just                                     sweating    

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    • 73.244.161.233 wrote:
      I'm not crying.....nope.....my eyes are just                                     sweating    

      XD that sounds so weird. Eyes are sweating XD

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    • 73.244.161.233 wrote:
      I'm not crying.....nope.....my eyes are just                                     sweating    

      its true...

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    • Pisano22 wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Pisano22 wrote:
      I enjoy killing off characters for fun. I killed Biana in my fanfic...
      wow. just... wow.

      evil.

      actually, I love killing off characters. its so fun!

      Yup! And then you get the reaction!

      Its amazing! traumitizing readers is amazing!

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      Pisano22 wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Pisano22 wrote:
      I enjoy killing off characters for fun. I killed Biana in my fanfic...
      wow. just... wow.

      evil.

      actually, I love killing off characters. its so fun!

      Yup! And then you get the reaction!
      Its amazing! traumitizing readers is amazing!

      One thing I do​​​​​​​ agree with... but I prefer emotional trauma to actually murdering characters xD

      I mean sometimes they might be the same thing...

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Pisano22 wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Pisano22 wrote:
      I enjoy killing off characters for fun. I killed Biana in my fanfic...
      wow. just... wow.

      evil.

      actually, I love killing off characters. its so fun!

      Yup! And then you get the reaction!
      Its amazing! traumitizing readers is amazing!
      One thing I do​​​​​​​ agree with... but I prefer emotional trauma to actually murdering characters xD

      I mean sometimes they might be the same thing...

      very good point! you can hit two birds with one stone!

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    • i can see it so clearly now...

      that tall, slender tree with tanned bark... the leaves long and thin and pale blonde... the flowers scattered across it with ice-blue petals and a musky, sweet fragrance... and it would cast broken shade onto the ground, signifying his internal state... Sophie huddled at the bottom, curled up in its strong branches and weeping softly into its limbs, and the tree somehow seems to embrace her, the wind whispering through the leaves "everything's going to be okay," even though Sophie knows it's not.

      i'm legit crying now. 

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    • I'M NOT CRYING MY EYES ARE...































      I HAVE SOMETHING IN THEM OKAY-
























      sNiFf

      -Nightingale

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    • 66.235.26.194 wrote:
      i can see it so clearly now...

      that tall, slender tree with tanned bark... the leaves long and thin and pale blonde... the flowers scattered across it with ice-blue petals and a musky, sweet fragrance... and it would cast broken shade onto the ground, signifying his internal state... Sophie huddled at the bottom, curled up in its strong branches and weeping softly into its limbs, and the tree somehow seems to embrace her, the wind whispering through the leaves "everything's going to be okay," even though Sophie knows it's not.

      i'm legit crying now. 

      😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

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    • 66.235.26.194 wrote:
      i can see it so clearly now...

      that tall, slender tree with tanned bark... the leaves long and thin and pale blonde... the flowers scattered across it with ice-blue petals and a musky, sweet fragrance... and it would cast broken shade onto the ground, signifying his internal state... Sophie huddled at the bottom, curled up in its strong branches and weeping softly into its limbs, and the tree somehow seems to embrace her, the wind whispering through the leaves "everything's going to be okay," even though Sophie knows it's not.

      i'm legit crying now. 

      npoe imnot going 2  read this^^^ coment

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    • 66.235.26.194 wrote:
      i can see it so clearly now...

      that tall, slender tree with tanned bark... the leaves long and thin and pale blonde... the flowers scattered across it with ice-blue petals and a musky, sweet fragrance... and it would cast broken shade onto the ground, signifying his internal state... Sophie huddled at the bottom, curled up in its strong branches and weeping softly into its limbs, and the tree somehow seems to embrace her, the wind whispering through the leaves "everything's going to be okay," even though Sophie knows it's not.

      i'm legit crying now. 

      WHATS THAT FROM????????????

      IM CRYING

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      66.235.26.194 wrote:
      i can see it so clearly now...

      that tall, slender tree with tanned bark... the leaves long and thin and pale blonde... the flowers scattered across it with ice-blue petals and a musky, sweet fragrance... and it would cast broken shade onto the ground, signifying his internal state... Sophie huddled at the bottom, curled up in its strong branches and weeping softly into its limbs, and the tree somehow seems to embrace her, the wind whispering through the leaves "everything's going to be okay," even though Sophie knows it's not.

      i'm legit crying now. 

      WHATS THAT FROM????????????

      IM CRYING

      i wrote it

      the things my brain does to me. i think this is going to traumatise me for life

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    • 66.235.26.194 wrote:
      i can see it so clearly now...

      that tall, slender tree with tanned bark... the leaves long and thin and pale blonde... the flowers scattered across it with ice-blue petals and a musky, sweet fragrance... and it would cast broken shade onto the ground, signifying his internal state... Sophie huddled at the bottom, curled up in its strong branches and weeping softly into its limbs, and the tree somehow seems to embrace her, the wind whispering through the leaves "everything's going to be okay," even though Sophie knows it's not.

      i'm legit crying now. 

      I REFUSE TO CRY

      I REFUSE TO CRY

      I REFUSE TO CRY

      maybe if i say it enough it'll come true

      -Nightingale

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      66.235.26.194 wrote:
      i can see it so clearly now...

      that tall, slender tree with tanned bark... the leaves long and thin and pale blonde... the flowers scattered across it with ice-blue petals and a musky, sweet fragrance... and it would cast broken shade onto the ground, signifying his internal state... Sophie huddled at the bottom, curled up in its strong branches and weeping softly into its limbs, and the tree somehow seems to embrace her, the wind whispering through the leaves "everything's going to be okay," even though Sophie knows it's not.

      i'm legit crying now. 

      😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

      Oh. My gosh. That's kinda like a scene that I wrote in my fanfic, except it wasn't Keefe's Wanderling. Long story. But my eyes just had a very intense workout and are now sweating A LOT. Sorry fam for using all the tissues... IT'S NOT MY FAULT!

      -bianex4evah

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    • AHhHAHAHHHHHh I THOUGHT KEEFE WAS DONE W/ RUNNING AWAY AND DOING STUPID THINGS LIKE THAT

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    • 50.92.75.55 wrote:
      AHhHAHAHHHHHh I THOUGHT KEEFE WAS DONE W/ RUNNING AWAY AND DOING STUPID THINGS LIKE THAT

      we all did sis

      but here we are

      -Nightingale

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    • 73.32.225.216 wrote:
      50.92.75.55 wrote:
      AHhHAHAHHHHHh I THOUGHT KEEFE WAS DONE W/ RUNNING AWAY AND DOING STUPID THINGS LIKE THAT
      we all did sis

      but here we are

      -Nightingale

      xD xD xD he's Keefe he can't help it. He's just trying to do the right thing. *evil laugh* also it makes you guys crazy and that's fun

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    • KEEEEEFE chase plz tell me you plan to reunite them next chapter

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      73.32.225.216 wrote:
      50.92.75.55 wrote:
      AHhHAHAHHHHHh I THOUGHT KEEFE WAS DONE W/ RUNNING AWAY AND DOING STUPID THINGS LIKE THAT
      we all did sis

      but here we are

      -Nightingale

      xD xD xD he's Keefe he can't help it. He's just trying to do the right thing. *evil laugh* also it makes you guys crazy and that's fun

      wow.

      thanks.

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      73.32.225.216 wrote:
      50.92.75.55 wrote:
      AHhHAHAHHHHHh I THOUGHT KEEFE WAS DONE W/ RUNNING AWAY AND DOING STUPID THINGS LIKE THAT
      we all did sis

      but here we are

      -Nightingale

      xD xD xD he's Keefe he can't help it. He's just trying to do the right thing. *evil laugh* also it makes you guys crazy and that's fun

      BUT ITS SO STUPID OF HIM

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    • 50.92.75.55 wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      73.32.225.216 wrote:
      50.92.75.55 wrote:
      AHhHAHAHHHHHh I THOUGHT KEEFE WAS DONE W/ RUNNING AWAY AND DOING STUPID THINGS LIKE THAT
      we all did sis

      but here we are

      -Nightingale

      xD xD xD he's Keefe he can't help it. He's just trying to do the right thing. *evil laugh* also it makes you guys crazy and that's fun
      BUT ITS SO STUPID OF HIM

      IKR WHY DO WE STILL LOVE HIM

      AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

      morning brain does not understand

      -Nightingale

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    • 73.32.225.216 wrote:
      50.92.75.55 wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      73.32.225.216 wrote:
      50.92.75.55 wrote:
      AHhHAHAHHHHHh I THOUGHT KEEFE WAS DONE W/ RUNNING AWAY AND DOING STUPID THINGS LIKE THAT
      we all did sis

      but here we are

      -Nightingale

      xD xD xD he's Keefe he can't help it. He's just trying to do the right thing. *evil laugh* also it makes you guys crazy and that's fun
      BUT ITS SO STUPID OF HIM
      IKR WHY DO WE STILL LOVE HIM

      AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

      morning brain does not understand

      -Nightingale

      KEEFE STOP BEING NOBLE UGHHY

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    • THIS IS SO SAD 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

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    • 66.235.26.194 wrote:
      i can see it so clearly now...

      that tall, slender tree with tanned bark... the leaves long and thin and pale blonde... the flowers scattered across it with ice-blue petals and a musky, sweet fragrance... and it would cast broken shade onto the ground, signifying his internal state... Sophie huddled at the bottom, curled up in its strong branches and weeping softly into its limbs, and the tree somehow seems to embrace her, the wind whispering through the leaves "everything's going to be okay," even though Sophie knows it's not.

      i'm legit crying now. 

      WHY DID YOU HAVE TO KILL KEEFE IN YOUR FANFIC, FANDOM USER? I'm crying so hard right now...I hope my mom doesn't find out.

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    • 50.92.75.55 wrote:
      KEEEEEFE chase plz tell me you plan to reunite them next chapter

      We'll see... but you know me, there has to be a happy ending... eventually ;)

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      50.92.75.55 wrote:
      KEEEEEFE chase plz tell me you plan to reunite them next chapter
      We'll see... but you know me, there has to be a happy ending... eventually ;)

      You know.... about 12 threads from now..

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    • TeamFoster-KeefeFTW! wrote:
      66.235.26.194 wrote:
      i can see it so clearly now...

      that tall, slender tree with tanned bark... the leaves long and thin and pale blonde... the flowers scattered across it with ice-blue petals and a musky, sweet fragrance... and it would cast broken shade onto the ground, signifying his internal state... Sophie huddled at the bottom, curled up in its strong branches and weeping softly into its limbs, and the tree somehow seems to embrace her, the wind whispering through the leaves "everything's going to be okay," even though Sophie knows it's not.

      i'm legit crying now. 

      WHY DID YOU HAVE TO KILL KEEFE IN YOUR FANFIC, FANDOM USER? I'm crying so hard right now...I hope my mom doesn't find out.

      um... this isn't a part of any fanfic

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    • AHHHHHH THE WINK!!!

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    • I’m not crying my eyes are just sparkling

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:
      I’m not crying my eyes are just sparkling

      😂😂😂

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    • I like causing sparkly eyes :)

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    • I have reason to believe my lacrimal glands have gone into overdrive... it seems as if they are not functioning within normal parameters. 

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote: I’m not crying my eyes are just sparkling

      Xd

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    • 66.235.26.194 wrote: I have reason to believe my lacrimal glands have gone into overdrive... it seems as if they are not functioning within normal parameters. 

      XD

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    • CHASE!!!!!!! WHY DO YOU WRITE THIS STUFF????

      WHY. DO. YOU. DO. THIS. TO. US.

      Very, very, very, very, very evil author.

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    • BecauseKeefe wrote:
      CHASE!!!!!!! WHY DO YOU WRITE THIS STUFF????

      WHY. DO. YOU. DO. THIS. TO. US.

      Very, very, very, very, very evil author.

      Chase behind his/her desk: lol you guys make me laugh so much ;)

      Us: *in tears, traumatised for life because of this*

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    • you're like worse than sm and uncle rick and thats saying a lot because they both leave us readers at cruel and heartwrenching cliffhangers and they make us wait a whole year for the next book and in the meantime we/re over here going crazy. I'm not ok

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    • 66.235.26.194 wrote:
      BecauseKeefe wrote:
      CHASE!!!!!!! WHY DO YOU WRITE THIS STUFF????

      WHY. DO. YOU. DO. THIS. TO. US.

      Very, very, very, very, very evil author.

      Chase behind his/her desk: lol you guys make me laugh so much ;)

      Us: *in tears, traumatised for life because of this*

      So true tho... xD (btw 'her')

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    • Aquamarine62 wrote:
      you're like worse than sm and uncle rick and thats saying a lot because they both leave us readers at cruel and heartwrenching cliffhangers and they make us wait a whole year for the next book and in the meantime we/re over here going crazy. I'm not ok

      Well, at least Chase posts more than once a year XD

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    • BecauseKeefe wrote:
      Aquamarine62 wrote:
      you're like worse than sm and uncle rick and thats saying a lot because they both leave us readers at cruel and heartwrenching cliffhangers and they make us wait a whole year for the next book and in the meantime we/re over here going crazy. I'm not ok
      Well, at least Chase posts more than once a year XD

      yeah but books are way longer.... but then again i read them way too quickly XD

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    • Aquamarine62 wrote:
      BecauseKeefe wrote:
      Aquamarine62 wrote:
      you're like worse than sm and uncle rick and thats saying a lot because they both leave us readers at cruel and heartwrenching cliffhangers and they make us wait a whole year for the next book and in the meantime we/re over here going crazy. I'm not ok
      Well, at least Chase posts more than once a year XD
      yeah but books are way longer.... but then again i read them way too quickly XD

      True. 

      Also, DON'T GO GETTING ANY IDEAS, CHASE! WE LIKE IT WHEN YOU POST A LOT XD

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    • hey Chase is it okay if I ad someone's fanfic here? it's not mine but it's really good

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    • Aquamarine62
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      18:58, May 26, 2020
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    • is it just me or is flashback written like a really large and well written (but heartbreaking and sad) sofitz fanfic

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    • SparklesNsparks wrote:

      66.235.26.194 wrote: I have reason to believe my lacrimal glands have gone into overdrive... it seems as if they are not functioning within normal parameters. 

      XD

      lolz

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    • do any of you read in a different accent than you talk in? like i speak with an american accent but read with a british/australian accent? and then i have assigned different character accents, so like fitz and grady and cassius and slighly keefe have british accents, and oralie has a delicate portuguese accent, and gisela has an elegant russian accent?

      do any of you do this?

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    • 66.235.26.194 wrote:
      do any of you read in a different accent than you talk in? like i speak with an american accent but read with a british/australian accent? and then i have assigned different character accents, so like fitz and grady and cassius and slighly keefe have british accents, and oralie has a delicate portuguese accent, and gisela has an elegant russian accent?

      do any of you do this?

      tbh my brain is super annoying and stubborn so i give some people accents and then when a book is like "they have an accent" im like "well now they don't." and i then picture them with an American accent because i am so annoyingly stubborn. 

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    • This is how I was when I read the last chapter

      Me *sobbing* 

      My sister ( has read kotlc ): What is wrong with you, you have been like that for 1 hour!

      Me *still sobbing*: Ke...ef..e..go..t..tri..cked..and...mig...ht...hav..gott..en..hur.t..by..hi...s..mom!!!!!

      My *wid eyed* : NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

      Me & My sister *sobbing*

      ( me and my sister LOVE Keefe )

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    • I know Keefe didn´t die *knocking on wood* but something might have happened to him ( that is why I didn´t say he died)

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    • Mom: *walks in when I am reading "Are those tears?"

      Me: *wiping them away "What, no.... why would I, heh heh..."

      Mom: *walks away

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    • 152.26.208.39 wrote: This is how I was when I read the last chapter

      Me *sobbing* 

      My sister ( has read kotlc ): What is wrong with you, you have been like that for 1 hour!

      Me *still sobbing*: Ke...ef..e..go..t..tri..cked..and...mig...ht...hav..gott..en..hur.t..by..hi...s..mom!!!!!

      My *wid eyed* : NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

      Me & My sister *sobbing*

      ( me and my sister LOVE Keefe )

      That’s cool that you have your sister to cry with. I’ve been trying to get my sister to read it but she is ridiculously stubborn, so I had to cry alone.

      Correction: not cry, just have my eyes sparkle

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    • 😂😂😂

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    • 66.235.26.194 wrote: hey Chase is it okay if I ad someone's fanfic here? it's not mine but it's really good

      Okay :)

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      😂😂😂

      WHY DO YOU LAUGH AT OUR SUFFERING?!

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      152.26.208.39 wrote: This is how I was when I read the last chapter

      Me *sobbing* 

      My sister ( has read kotlc ): What is wrong with you, you have been like that for 1 hour!

      Me *still sobbing*: Ke...ef..e..go..t..tri..cked..and...mig...ht...hav..gott..en..hur.t..by..hi...s..mom!!!!!

      My *wid eyed* : NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

      Me & My sister *sobbing*

      ( me and my sister LOVE Keefe )

      That’s cool that you have your sister to cry with. I’ve been trying to get my sister to read it but she is ridiculously stubborn, so I had to cry alone.

      Correction: not cry, just have my eyes sparkle

      you are so lucky.

      i have no one to cry with.

      i just sit alone, arms around my knees, curled up into a tiny little figure, tears streaming down from my ice-blue eyes as my heart is slowly consumed by the black hole of sadness and sorrow for keefe. 

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    • Pisano22 wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      😂😂😂
      WHY DO YOU LAUGH AT OUR SUFFERING?!

      becuse she is evil

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    • 66.235.26.194 wrote:

      IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      152.26.208.39 wrote: This is how I was when I read the last chapter

      Me *sobbing* 

      My sister ( has read kotlc ): What is wrong with you, you have been like that for 1 hour!

      Me *still sobbing*: Ke...ef..e..go..t..tri..cked..and...mig...ht...hav..gott..en..hur.t..by..hi...s..mom!!!!!

      My *wid eyed* : NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

      Me & My sister *sobbing*

      ( me and my sister LOVE Keefe )

      That’s cool that you have your sister to cry with. I’ve been trying to get my sister to read it but she is ridiculously stubborn, so I had to cry alone.

      Correction: not cry, just have my eyes sparkle

      you are so lucky.

      i have no one to cry with.

      i just sit alone, arms around my knees, curled up into a tiny little figure, tears streaming down from my ice-blue eyes as my heart is slowly consumed by the black hole of sadness and sorrow for keefe. 

      😂😂😂😂😂

      Sorry no I meant 😭😭😭😭😭

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    • Wandergirls wrote:

      66.235.26.194 wrote:

      IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      152.26.208.39 wrote: This is how I was when I read the last chapter

      Me *sobbing* 

      My sister ( has read kotlc ): What is wrong with you, you have been like that for 1 hour!

      Me *still sobbing*: Ke...ef..e..go..t..tri..cked..and...mig...ht...hav..gott..en..hur.t..by..hi...s..mom!!!!!

      My *wid eyed* : NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

      Me & My sister *sobbing*

      ( me and my sister LOVE Keefe )

      That’s cool that you have your sister to cry with. I’ve been trying to get my sister to read it but she is ridiculously stubborn, so I had to cry alone.

      Correction: not cry, just have my eyes sparkle

      you are so lucky.

      i have no one to cry with.

      i just sit alone, arms around my knees, curled up into a tiny little figure, tears streaming down from my ice-blue eyes as my heart is slowly consumed by the black hole of sadness and sorrow for keefe. 

      😂😂😂😂😂

      Sorry no I meant 😭😭😭😭😭

      no u didn't

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    • Wandergirls wrote:

      66.235.26.194 wrote: hey Chase is it okay if I ad someone's fanfic here? it's not mine but it's really good

      Okay :)

      Everyone read THIS!!!!! It's SO good you will not regret it, I promise. It's called The Better Sister.  Even if you've already seen it and don't enjoy it or something (what's wrong with you?!) I promise you will love the latest installment. I think it's comment 76... you will be crying by the end of it, I swear. 

      Why are you still here? Go read the latest installment!

      https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1116605

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    • 66.235.26.194 wrote:
      IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      152.26.208.39 wrote: This is how I was when I read the last chapter

      Me *sobbing* 

      My sister ( has read kotlc ): What is wrong with you, you have been like that for 1 hour!

      Me *still sobbing*: Ke...ef..e..go..t..tri..cked..and...mig...ht...hav..gott..en..hur.t..by..hi...s..mom!!!!!

      My *wid eyed* : NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

      Me & My sister *sobbing*

      ( me and my sister LOVE Keefe )

      That’s cool that you have your sister to cry with. I’ve been trying to get my sister to read it but she is ridiculously stubborn, so I had to cry alone.

      Correction: not cry, just have my eyes sparkle

      you are so lucky.

      i have no one to cry with.

      i just sit alone, arms around my knees, curled up into a tiny little figure, tears streaming down from my ice-blue eyes as my heart is slowly consumed by the black hole of sadness and sorrow for keefe. 

      wow. thats pretty sad

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    • 66.235.26.194 wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:

      66.235.26.194 wrote: hey Chase is it okay if I ad someone's fanfic here? it's not mine but it's really good

      Okay :)
      Everyone read THIS!!!!! It's SO good you will not regret it, I promise. It's called The Better Sister.  Even if you've already seen it and don't enjoy it or something (what's wrong with you?!) I promise you will love the latest installment. I think it's comment 76... you will be crying by the end of it, I swear. 

      Why are you still here? Go read the latest installment!

      https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1116605

      I'm smiling through my tears because I'm writing The Better Sister but KEEFE!!!!!!!!!! So I'm smiling since yay! Someone likes my fanfic enough to advertise for it! But also, MY POOR KEEFE PLEASE BE OK WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT WAAAAAAAAAAA

      -bianex4evah 

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    • Ok so I did a logical analysis of the chapter...

      Keefe said that he should be out there. Clearly, this is when Keefe began formulating the plan to get out there and save everyone, because he said that Gisela would not come unless it was just him. Keefe is a very selfless person and doesn't want anyone else to get hurt, so obviously he would start creating his plan right then.

      When Keefe asked to go to the loo, he mentioned that it would be a terrible place to die, and that he's not planning on dying. He said the same thing or similar in book 4 when he ran off with the neverseen-- that he wasn't planning on dying. If Sophie had been paying attention, she would have caught that pattern and stopped him before it was too late. 
      He also asked if he could shower, which would give him extra time in case his mom was late or was not able to come at the moment he hailed her. 

      Keefe also had been smart and recorded a voice recording on a small device that he placed in the bathroom so Elwin and Sophie would not worry about him, buying him an even larger amount of time. He clearly anticipated his mom being late to the meeting place or time he arranged with her over the imparter.

      However, Keefe was not intelligent when he dumped his imparter out of the window outside of the loo. He easily could have placed it along a different path to deter the others from finding the path he took, as a decoy. He did not. This could possibly mean that he wanted Sophie to come after him, as he knew that she would not be able to resist saving the person she loves. 

      If something was worse than what she'd feared, it must have been worse than Keefe being gone with no trace. Perhaps Keefe is severely injured somehow (his mom gutted him with a shamkniv, there's kids here I'm not going to get too graphic with that), or perhaps Keefe was mentally broken again because of his guilt for abandoning Sophie yet another time. Perhaps it could even be the cold, dead body of the blonde boy Sophie once thought she knew. However, our wonderful author Chase isn't that cruel, so  the only logical options remaining are a broken Keefe, a disappeared Keefe, a found Keefe with a severe injury, or perhaps Sophie walked in on Keefe crumpled on the ground, his mother leaping away just as Sophie enters the scene.

      What do you think?

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    • 66.235.26.194 wrote:
      Ok so I did a logical analysis of the chapter...

      Keefe said that he should be out there. Clearly, this is when Keefe began formulating the plan to get out there and save everyone, because he said that Gisela would not come unless it was just him. Keefe is a very selfless person and doesn't want anyone else to get hurt, so obviously he would start creating his plan right then.

      When Keefe asked to go to the loo, he mentioned that it would be a terrible place to die, and that he's not planning on dying. He said the same thing or similar in book 4 when he ran off with the neverseen-- that he wasn't planning on dying. If Sophie had been paying attention, she would have caught that pattern and stopped him before it was too late. 
      He also asked if he could shower, which would give him extra time in case his mom was late or was not able to come at the moment he hailed her. 

      Keefe also had been smart and recorded a voice recording on a small device that he placed in the bathroom so Elwin and Sophie would not worry about him, buying him an even larger amount of time. He clearly anticipated his mom being late to the meeting place or time he arranged with her over the imparter.

      However, Keefe was not intelligent when he dumped his imparter out of the window outside of the loo. He easily could have placed it along a different path to deter the others from finding the path he took, as a decoy. He did not. This could possibly mean that he wanted Sophie to come after him, as he knew that she would not be able to resist saving the person she loves. 

      If something was worse than what she'd feared, it must have been worse than Keefe being gone with no trace. Perhaps Keefe is severely injured somehow (his mom gutted him with a shamkniv, there's kids here I'm not going to get too graphic with that), or perhaps Keefe was mentally broken again because of his guilt for abandoning Sophie yet another time. Perhaps it could even be the cold, dead body of the blonde boy Sophie once thought she knew. However, our wonderful author Chase isn't that cruel, so  the only logical options remaining are a broken Keefe, a disappeared Keefe, a found Keefe with a severe injury, or perhaps Sophie walked in on Keefe crumpled on the ground, his mother leaping away just as Sophie enters the scene.

      What do you think?

      you make it sound much better than i would ever do lol

      and that last paragraph makes me want to smack gisel- *barfs*

      -Nightingale

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    • That's awesome. I have three things to say.

      1. You're smarter than me. I didn't actually mean to make that parallel to last time. But it is perfect xD

      2. Yeah idk if he dropped it on purpose or tried to hide it and did a bad job or just dropped it xD again you put more thought into this than I did... but maybe I'll adress that later. Along with the drawings he left for her, because I keep forgetting having her remember those... xD

      3. MWAH HA HA HA YOU ARE ALL WRONG CUZ I DECIDED WHAT HAPPENS AND IT IS NONE OF THOSE THINGS xD xD xD

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    • 73.32.225.216 wrote:
      66.235.26.194 wrote:
      Ok so I did a logical analysis of the chapter...

      Keefe said that he should be out there. Clearly, this is when Keefe began formulating the plan to get out there and save everyone, because he said that Gisela would not come unless it was just him. Keefe is a very selfless person and doesn't want anyone else to get hurt, so obviously he would start creating his plan right then.

      When Keefe asked to go to the loo, he mentioned that it would be a terrible place to die, and that he's not planning on dying. He said the same thing or similar in book 4 when he ran off with the neverseen-- that he wasn't planning on dying. If Sophie had been paying attention, she would have caught that pattern and stopped him before it was too late. 
      He also asked if he could shower, which would give him extra time in case his mom was late or was not able to come at the moment he hailed her. 

      Keefe also had been smart and recorded a voice recording on a small device that he placed in the bathroom so Elwin and Sophie would not worry about him, buying him an even larger amount of time. He clearly anticipated his mom being late to the meeting place or time he arranged with her over the imparter.

      However, Keefe was not intelligent when he dumped his imparter out of the window outside of the loo. He easily could have placed it along a different path to deter the others from finding the path he took, as a decoy. He did not. This could possibly mean that he wanted Sophie to come after him, as he knew that she would not be able to resist saving the person she loves. 

      If something was worse than what she'd feared, it must have been worse than Keefe being gone with no trace. Perhaps Keefe is severely injured somehow (his mom gutted him with a shamkniv, there's kids here I'm not going to get too graphic with that), or perhaps Keefe was mentally broken again because of his guilt for abandoning Sophie yet another time. Perhaps it could even be the cold, dead body of the blonde boy Sophie once thought she knew. However, our wonderful author Chase isn't that cruel, so  the only logical options remaining are a broken Keefe, a disappeared Keefe, a found Keefe with a severe injury, or perhaps Sophie walked in on Keefe crumpled on the ground, his mother leaping away just as Sophie enters the scene.

      What do you think?

      you make it sound much better than i would ever do lol

      and that last paragraph makes me want to smack gisel- *barfs*

      -Nightingale

      The last paragraph almost made me cry because I imagined it

        *sobs*

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    • Wandergirls wrote: That's awesome. I have three things to say.

      1. You're smarter than me. I didn't actually mean to make that parallel to last time. But it is perfect xD

      2. Yeah idk if he dropped it on purpose or tried to hide it and did a bad job or just dropped it xD again you put more thought into this than I did... but maybe I'll adress that later. Along with the drawings he left for her, because I keep forgetting having her remember those... xD

      3. MWAH HA HA HA YOU ARE ALL WRONG CUZ I DECIDED WHAT HAPPENS AND IT IS NONE OF THOSE THINGS xD xD xD

      WHAAAAAAA THEN WHAT HAPPENS CHASE YOU’RE KILLING ME!!

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    • Worse. That's all I'm going to say. Worse. ;)

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    • AHHHHHHHHHH WINKY RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!!!

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    • AHHHHH

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      Worse. That's all I'm going to say. Worse. ;)

      -_-

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      Worse. That's all I'm going to say. Worse. ;)

      AHHHHHHHH *cowers in corner* Anything but the winky!

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    • I've said this before but I'm just over here laughing hysterically <3

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      I've said this before but I'm just over here laughing hysterically <3

      .*sigh*

      You enjoy this very much, don't you?

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    • 66.235.26.194 wrote:
      Ok so I did a logical analysis of the chapter...

      Keefe said that he should be out there. Clearly, this is when Keefe began formulating the plan to get out there and save everyone, because he said that Gisela would not come unless it was just him. Keefe is a very selfless person and doesn't want anyone else to get hurt, so obviously he would start creating his plan right then.

      When Keefe asked to go to the loo, he mentioned that it would be a terrible place to die, and that he's not planning on dying. He said the same thing or similar in book 4 when he ran off with the neverseen-- that he wasn't planning on dying. If Sophie had been paying attention, she would have caught that pattern and stopped him before it was too late. 
      He also asked if he could shower, which would give him extra time in case his mom was late or was not able to come at the moment he hailed her. 

      Keefe also had been smart and recorded a voice recording on a small device that he placed in the bathroom so Elwin and Sophie would not worry about him, buying him an even larger amount of time. He clearly anticipated his mom being late to the meeting place or time he arranged with her over the imparter.

      However, Keefe was not intelligent when he dumped his imparter out of the window outside of the loo. He easily could have placed it along a different path to deter the others from finding the path he took, as a decoy. He did not. This could possibly mean that he wanted Sophie to come after him, as he knew that she would not be able to resist saving the person she loves. 

      If something was worse than what she'd feared, it must have been worse than Keefe being gone with no trace. Perhaps Keefe is severely injured somehow (his mom gutted him with a shamkniv, there's kids here I'm not going to get too graphic with that), or perhaps Keefe was mentally broken again because of his guilt for abandoning Sophie yet another time. Perhaps it could even be the cold, dead body of the blonde boy Sophie once thought she knew. However, our wonderful author Chase isn't that cruel, so  the only logical options remaining are a broken Keefe, a disappeared Keefe, a found Keefe with a severe injury, or perhaps Sophie walked in on Keefe crumpled on the ground, his mother leaping away just as Sophie enters the scene.

      What do you think?

      My head started to hurt when I finished reading that. 

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      I've said this before but I'm just over here laughing hysterically <3

      did i mention that you're the evilest author ever and that's saying a LOT

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    • Aquamarine62 wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      I've said this before but I'm just over here laughing hysterically <3
      did i mention that you're the evilest author ever and that's saying a LOT

      YES SHE RELLY IS  whops caps lock  but im 2 lazy 2 fix it 



      Sokeefe4life1315(Rae)

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      I've said this before but I'm just over here laughing hysterically <3

      you really are sadistic to our suffering aren't you ;(

      -Nightingale

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    • 73.32.225.216 wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      I've said this before but I'm just over here laughing hysterically <3
      you really are sadistic to our suffering aren't you ;(

      -Nightingale

      yes.very



      Sokeefe4life1315(Rae)

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      That's awesome. I have three things to say.

      1. You're smarter than me. I didn't actually mean to make that parallel to last time. But it is perfect xD

      2. Yeah idk if he dropped it on purpose or tried to hide it and did a bad job or just dropped it xD again you put more thought into this than I did... but maybe I'll adress that later. Along with the drawings he left for her, because I keep forgetting having her remember those... xD

      3. MWAH HA HA HA YOU ARE ALL WRONG CUZ I DECIDED WHAT HAPPENS AND IT IS NONE OF THOSE THINGS xD xD xD

      what if KEEFE HAS ALREADY BEEN TRIGGERED????? what if Sophie comes in and sees Keefe staggering to keep his balance just as he lunges toward Gisela who is leaping elegantly and delicately out of the way, a condescending look on her face as she sees her disgraceful son trying to no avail to stop her. 

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    • Mmh yes to all of that and you ❤️ me for it otherwise you would have given up six threads ago 😜

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      Mmh yes to all of that and you ❤️ me for it otherwise you would have given up six threads ago 😜

      XD

      Well, I mean, 6 threads ago was 20 days ago, sooooooo.....

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    • Wait... 6 THREADS AGO WAS ONLY 20 DAYS AGO?

      it feels so much longer...

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    • 😂 wow it does feel like longer... like what was it a month and a half ago that I had never written any fanfic in my life? I’m being lazy can someone check the first date of adorable? I wrote it before that but that’s the first time I posted any

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:
      Wait... 6 THREADS AGO WAS ONLY 20 DAYS AGO?

      it feels so much longer...

      Ik,r?

      (If you wanna hear my rant about why I put a comma there, ask Chase XD)

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      😂 wow it does feel like longer... like what was it a month and a half ago that I had never written any fanfic in my life? I’m being lazy can someone check the first date of adorable? I wrote it before that but that’s the first time I posted any

      April 22nd (I remembered XDXDXDXD)

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    • Long story xD

      It all started with me being lazy...

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    • And to think three months ago I didn’t even know what Kotlc was...

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:
      And to think three months ago I didn’t even know what Kotlc was...

      I started in November, so I know how you feel XD

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    • would it make you guys cry if I wrote keefe's death?

      also if I did, can I post it here, as a fanfic of this fanfic?

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    • lol lucky I actually had to wait for... actually i dont remember if I was reading it when Flashback came out. But I definately had to wait for Legacy. (and by wait I mean get it as soon as it came out)

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    • 66.235.26.194 wrote:
      would it make you guys cry if I wrote keefe's death?

      also if I did, can I post it here, as a fanfic of this fanfic?

      Ah... like, an entire fanfic? Or just a scene? Sure, you can put it here. 'A fanfic of a fanfic' xD And yes I would definitely cry. 

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      lol lucky I actually had to wait for... actually i dont remember if I was reading it when Flashback came out. But I definately had to wait for Legacy. (and by wait I mean get it as soon as it came out)

      i dont remeber when i started reading the series but i think i finished flashback like a month before Legacy came out

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    • I was finishing up Flashback when Legacy came out... this is the only waiting I have to do so far...

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      66.235.26.194 wrote:
      would it make you guys cry if I wrote keefe's death?

      also if I did, can I post it here, as a fanfic of this fanfic?

      Ah... like, an entire fanfic? Or just a scene? Sure, you can put it here. 'A fanfic of a fanfic' xD And yes I would definitely cry. 

      Just a scene. No more than about 15 centimetres of text, maybe less.

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    • 66.235.26.194 wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      66.235.26.194 wrote:
      would it make you guys cry if I wrote keefe's death?

      also if I did, can I post it here, as a fanfic of this fanfic?

      Ah... like, an entire fanfic? Or just a scene? Sure, you can put it here. 'A fanfic of a fanfic' xD And yes I would definitely cry. 
      Just a scene. No more than about 15 centimetres of text, maybe less.

      I'd love to read it :)

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    • 66.235.26.194 wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      66.235.26.194 wrote:
      would it make you guys cry if I wrote keefe's death?

      also if I did, can I post it here, as a fanfic of this fanfic?

      Ah... like, an entire fanfic? Or just a scene? Sure, you can put it here. 'A fanfic of a fanfic' xD And yes I would definitely cry. 
      Just a scene. No more than about 15 centimetres of text, maybe less.

      ....did you measure it? XD

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    • BecauseKeefe wrote:
      66.235.26.194 wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      66.235.26.194 wrote:
      would it make you guys cry if I wrote keefe's death?

      also if I did, can I post it here, as a fanfic of this fanfic?

      Ah... like, an entire fanfic? Or just a scene? Sure, you can put it here. 'A fanfic of a fanfic' xD And yes I would definitely cry. 
      Just a scene. No more than about 15 centimetres of text, maybe less.
      ....did you measure it? XD

      I was wondering too but you can't judge xD you've done randomer things xD

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      BecauseKeefe wrote:
      66.235.26.194 wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      66.235.26.194 wrote:
      would it make you guys cry if I wrote keefe's death?

      also if I did, can I post it here, as a fanfic of this fanfic?

      Ah... like, an entire fanfic? Or just a scene? Sure, you can put it here. 'A fanfic of a fanfic' xD And yes I would definitely cry. 
      Just a scene. No more than about 15 centimetres of text, maybe less.
      ....did you measure it? XD
      I was wondering too but you can't judge xD you've done randomer things xD

      Oh, no. 

      I was just saying that's what I would've done. XD

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    • BecauseKeefe wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      BecauseKeefe wrote:
      66.235.26.194 wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      66.235.26.194 wrote:
      would it make you guys cry if I wrote keefe's death?

      also if I did, can I post it here, as a fanfic of this fanfic?

      Ah... like, an entire fanfic? Or just a scene? Sure, you can put it here. 'A fanfic of a fanfic' xD And yes I would definitely cry. 
      Just a scene. No more than about 15 centimetres of text, maybe less.
      ....did you measure it? XD
      I was wondering too but you can't judge xD you've done randomer things xD
      Oh, no. 

      I was just saying that's what I would've done. XD

      lololololol

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    • Well now I want to measure your Keefe's New Ability rant xD

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      Well now I want to measure your Keefe's New Ability rant xD

      'k. One sec. 

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    • BecauseKeefe wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      Well now I want to measure your Keefe's New Ability rant xD
      'k. One sec. 

      See I don't know where a ruler is or I'd do it xD

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      BecauseKeefe wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      Well now I want to measure your Keefe's New Ability rant xD
      'k. One sec. 
      See I don't know where a ruler is or I'd do it xD

      No, I'll do it. 

      The notifs are distracting me XD

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    • 35 inches on a desktop.

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    • BecauseKeefe wrote:

      Wandergirls wrote:
      BecauseKeefe wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      Well now I want to measure your Keefe's New Ability rant xD
      'k. One sec. 
      See I don't know where a ruler is or I'd do it xD

      No, I'll do it. 

      The notifs are distracting me XD

      Lololol

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    • BecauseKeefe wrote:
      35 inches on a desktop.

      XD

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    • Ok so here is Keefe's Death Oneshot. Dedicated to Chase for being kind enough and awesome enough to let me post it here. Also, if you make this happen in your story I will never forgive you. Writing this tore something deep inside me.

      Sophie gasped in horror and shock as she saw the boy lying on the ground, a serrated knife dripping red lying next to him. "Keefe!" she exclaimed, gagging at the smell of the metallic red liquid that wafted through the air. 
      He was crumpled on the ground, his untucked white shirt blooming with patches of crimson, the fabric ripped and stained nearly black where the shamkniv had cut it. Sophie ran to him, kneeling on the ground and frantically ripping shreds of her cape to wrap around his body to save him. But it was too late. She couldn't do anything to save him.
      "Foster, I--" Keefe said, his voice dripping with pain and thin as a sheet of paper. Tears streamed down her cheeks as she wrapped him in her cape to stop the bleeding. With much effort, he raised his hand to still hers. "There's nothing you can do for me now, Sophie. It's too late."
      Sophie sobbed against his wasted body. She cupped his face in her hands, stroking his carefully styled hair, now matted with blood. His face was a deathly sort of pale, the kind you see right before someone is about to be lost. "I can't... I can't lose you, Keefe. Not again." 
      Keefe smiled sadly, reaching for Sophie's face. He traced a weak finger down her cheek, Sophie leaning into the touch. He wiped away her tears as she leaned down and kissed him. He tasted sweet even amongst the pain he was surely in, and he kissed her back. "I love you, Sophie," he whispered as they pulled back. 
      Sophie cried harder as he went limp, surrendering himself to the endless pull of death. "I love you, Keefe," she whispered, the pain of losing him splintering her from the inside. She refused to lose him. She'd lose herself without him. 
      She dove into his mind, where she found one final thought before everything went black and silent. 
      Please don't hate me, Foster.

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    •          :O OM FRICKIN G THAT WAS SO SAD!

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    • WHY DO YOU DO THIS?

      becomes depressed again*

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    • BecauseKeefe wrote:
      35 inches on a desktop.

      That is one rant xD Couple of feet xD

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    • OH MY GOODNESS NO

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    • I CAN'T EVEN

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    • THAT WAS THE SADDEST THING I'VE EVER READ

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      BecauseKeefe wrote:
      35 inches on a desktop.
      That is one rant xD

      Couple of feet xD

      It is indeed XD

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    • UGHH I CAN’T WAIT ANY LONGER I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER!!




      (no pressure)

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:
      UGHH I CAN’T WAIT ANY LONGER I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER!!




      (SO MUCH PRESSURE CHASE HURRY UP)

      Ftfy. 

      (but actually no pressure)

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    • 66.235.26.194 wrote:
      Ok so here is Keefe's Death Oneshot. Dedicated to Chase for being kind enough and awesome enough to let me post it here. Also, if you make this happen in your story I will never forgive you. Writing this tore something deep inside me.

      Sophie gasped in horror and shock as she saw the boy lying on the ground, a serrated knife dripping red lying next to him. "Keefe!" she exclaimed, gagging at the smell of the metallic red liquid that wafted through the air. 
      He was crumpled on the ground, his untucked white shirt blooming with patches of crimson, the fabric ripped and stained nearly black where the shamkniv had cut it. Sophie ran to him, kneeling on the ground and frantically ripping shreds of her cape to wrap around his body to save him. But it was too late. She couldn't do anything to save him.
      "Foster, I--" Keefe said, his voice dripping with pain and thin as a sheet of paper. Tears streamed down her cheeks as she wrapped him in her cape to stop the bleeding. With much effort, he raised his hand to still hers. "There's nothing you can do for me now, Sophie. It's too late."
      Sophie sobbed against his wasted body. She cupped his face in her hands, stroking his carefully styled hair, now matted with blood. His face was a deathly sort of pale, the kind you see right before someone is about to be lost. "I can't... I can't lose you, Keefe. Not again." 
      Keefe smiled sadly, reaching for Sophie's face. He traced a weak finger down her cheek, Sophie leaning into the touch. He wiped away her tears as she leaned down and kissed him. He tasted sweet even amongst the pain he was surely in, and he kissed her back. "I love you, Sophie," he whispered as they pulled back. 
      Sophie cried harder as he went limp, surrendering himself to the endless pull of death. "I love you, Keefe," she whispered, the pain of losing him splintering her from the inside. She refused to lose him. She'd lose herself without him. 
      She dove into his mind, where she found one final thought before everything went black and silent. 
      Please don't hate me, Foster.

      Oh goodness gracious, that was literally the sadess thing I have EVER read *Sobbing for 3 hours straight*

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    • I KILL LADY GISELA IF SHE EVER TOUCHES KEEFE *sharpening knife*

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    • Okay sorry but THAT WAS SOOOOOOO SAD I STILL CANT EVEN! I’d say you should make a whole fic, except it would probably kill me.

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      Okay sorry but THAT WAS SOOOOOOO SAD I STILL CANT EVEN! I’d say you should make a whole fic, except it would probably kill me.

      ME TOO

      I died just reading that

      also, amazing work! *claps*

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    • Yeah, It is super sad but good

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    • AHHHHHHHHHH THAT KEEFE DYING STORY KILLED ME INSIDE

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    • SparklesNsparks wrote:
      AHHHHHHHHHH THAT KEEFE DYING STORY KILLED ME INSIDE

      Yesssssss, BUT it was written very amazingly. But...my eyes are still sweating from reading it...

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    • TeamFoster-KeefeFTW! wrote:
      SparklesNsparks wrote:
      AHHHHHHHHHH THAT KEEFE DYING STORY KILLED ME INSIDE
      Yesssssss, BUT it was written very amazingly. But...my eyes are still sweating from reading it...

      same XD

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      Okay sorry but THAT WAS SOOOOOOO SAD I STILL CANT EVEN! I’d say you should make a whole fic, except it would probably kill me.

      NOW YOU HAVE FELT A TINY PIECE OF OUR PAIN

      AHAHA

      -Nightingale

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    • i literally have another tab out with kotlc memes on it just for the next chapter lol

      three tabs in all, dedicated to fandom

      -Nightingale

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    • 73.32.225.216 wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      Okay sorry but THAT WAS SOOOOOOO SAD I STILL CANT EVEN! I’d say you should make a whole fic, except it would probably kill me.
      NOW YOU HAVE FELT A TINY PIECE OF OUR PAIN

      AHAHA

      -Nightingale

      AHAHAHAHAHA Wandergirls now you know a sliver of what we feel every time you post one of those cliffhangers of yours!! AHAHA *chokes on laughter* *hacks* *coughs for a second* *clears throat awkwardly* anyway now you know what it feels like!!!

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    • That was really good writing!!!!!!!!!! *sobs into pillow* No. Nope. I am NOT okay, because Keefe just died. I. Can't. Even.

      -bianex4evah

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    • 66.235.26.194 wrote:
      Ok so here is Keefe's Death Oneshot. Dedicated to Chase for being kind enough and awesome enough to let me post it here. Also, if you make this happen in your story I will never forgive you. Writing this tore something deep inside me.

      Sophie gasped in horror and shock as she saw the boy lying on the ground, a serrated knife dripping red lying next to him. "Keefe!" she exclaimed, gagging at the smell of the metallic red liquid that wafted through the air. 
      He was crumpled on the ground, his untucked white shirt blooming with patches of crimson, the fabric ripped and stained nearly black where the shamkniv had cut it. Sophie ran to him, kneeling on the ground and frantically ripping shreds of her cape to wrap around his body to save him. But it was too late. She couldn't do anything to save him.
      "Foster, I--" Keefe said, his voice dripping with pain and thin as a sheet of paper. Tears streamed down her cheeks as she wrapped him in her cape to stop the bleeding. With much effort, he raised his hand to still hers. "There's nothing you can do for me now, Sophie. It's too late."
      Sophie sobbed against his wasted body. She cupped his face in her hands, stroking his carefully styled hair, now matted with blood. His face was a deathly sort of pale, the kind you see right before someone is about to be lost. "I can't... I can't lose you, Keefe. Not again." 
      Keefe smiled sadly, reaching for Sophie's face. He traced a weak finger down her cheek, Sophie leaning into the touch. He wiped away her tears as she leaned down and kissed him. He tasted sweet even amongst the pain he was surely in, and he kissed her back. "I love you, Sophie," he whispered as they pulled back. 
      Sophie cried harder as he went limp, surrendering himself to the endless pull of death. "I love you, Keefe," she whispered, the pain of losing him splintering her from the inside. She refused to lose him. She'd lose herself without him. 
      She dove into his mind, where she found one final thought before everything went black and silent. 
      Please don't hate me, Foster.

      NOW I AM GOING TO CRY FOR DAYS NOW.

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    • Sokeefeisthebest1 wrote:
      66.235.26.194 wrote:
      Ok so here is Keefe's Death Oneshot. Dedicated to Chase for being kind enough and awesome enough to let me post it here. Also, if you make this happen in your story I will never forgive you. Writing this tore something deep inside me.

      Sophie gasped in horror and shock as she saw the boy lying on the ground, a serrated knife dripping red lying next to him. "Keefe!" she exclaimed, gagging at the smell of the metallic red liquid that wafted through the air. 
      He was crumpled on the ground, his untucked white shirt blooming with patches of crimson, the fabric ripped and stained nearly black where the shamkniv had cut it. Sophie ran to him, kneeling on the ground and frantically ripping shreds of her cape to wrap around his body to save him. But it was too late. She couldn't do anything to save him.
      "Foster, I--" Keefe said, his voice dripping with pain and thin as a sheet of paper. Tears streamed down her cheeks as she wrapped him in her cape to stop the bleeding. With much effort, he raised his hand to still hers. "There's nothing you can do for me now, Sophie. It's too late."
      Sophie sobbed against his wasted body. She cupped his face in her hands, stroking his carefully styled hair, now matted with blood. His face was a deathly sort of pale, the kind you see right before someone is about to be lost. "I can't... I can't lose you, Keefe. Not again." 
      Keefe smiled sadly, reaching for Sophie's face. He traced a weak finger down her cheek, Sophie leaning into the touch. He wiped away her tears as she leaned down and kissed him. He tasted sweet even amongst the pain he was surely in, and he kissed her back. "I love you, Sophie," he whispered as they pulled back. 
      Sophie cried harder as he went limp, surrendering himself to the endless pull of death. "I love you, Keefe," she whispered, the pain of losing him splintering her from the inside. She refused to lose him. She'd lose herself without him. 
      She dove into his mind, where she found one final thought before everything went black and silent. 
      Please don't hate me, Foster.

      NOW I AM GOING TO CRY FOR DAYS NOW.

      ME TOO. WHY HAS THIS BEEN DONE TO US???? 

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    • NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO STOPPPPPP KEEFE DOES. NOT. DIE *tells myself repeatedly* *gives up and sobs uncontrollably* my sister just came in and was like, "are you okay?" and I was like, "ahahsgkjhsglaihio KEEEEEEEEEEEEEFEEEEE" and she was like "...okay then". that's *hic* when i usually laugh at her reaction BUT I JUST CANT *SOBS* *SOBS* *SOBS* *whispers to myself "please dont hate me foster"* NOOOOOO okay this is depressing. anyone else have your family all looking @ you like your crazy when you read that? mine are. right now. 

      Cue the humiliation, but im too sad to care :( 

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    • I honestly really want that to be turned into a fanfiction 

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    • I do also, but the Keefe killing part is sorta hard to read

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    • POST THE REST PLS!!!!!!!!!

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    • I need the rest...

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    • Hmm...

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      Hmm...

      'Hmm...' what?

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    • Nothing, just... planning.

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      Nothing, just... planning.

      What are you planning to torture us with next?

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    • That's what the 'Hmm...' is for. I haven't decided. But don't think I didn't notice how the Keefe Dying scene got a very big reaction... but don't worry I probably won't kill him. But then I have to think of something else to keep it interesting...

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    • Oh. Great.

      'Probably'??????

      Chase......

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    • THERE IS NO PROBABLY YOU DO NOT KILL MY BABY KEEFEEEEEEEE AHHHHHHHHH

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    • Come on I get way too much happiness out of the fluff scenes. Can't have those if he's dead, can you? But no promises. I mean if the perfect oppurtunity comes up.................................. but it probably won't so don't worry! :)

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    • Well...at least it’s a smiley face and not a-a win- I can’t say it

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    • You mean a winky? ;)

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      You mean a winky? ;)

      that was just cruel

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      You mean a winky? ;)

      AHHHHHHHHHHHH CHASE!

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    • Nooooo I KNEW I SHOULD’NT HAVE SAID ANYTHING!!!!

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    • um... wow I was not expecting a reaction this big

      NOOOOOO NOT THE WINKY FACE CHASE WHYYYY

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    • Lol yes the winky anyway posting in a bit! Here's hoping you guys like it half as much as 66.235.26.194's! xD

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    • Before you read this, be aware that this was written entirely over Notes on my tiny iPod. Also, for some reason italics get lost when I copy and paste to here, so... yes. The telepathic conversations were just as fun as you might imagine to go through and italicize xD. If there's anything wrong, please let me know so I can fix it. And now, on to the episode! Enjoy! (maybe?)

      Complicated (A Sokeefe Fanfic) Episode 19

      *** Total credit to Tara (BecauseKeefe) for Keefe's new ability! Never would've thought of this myself! ***

      Sophie ducked back behind the building before Keefe or his mom could see her, gasping in shock and disbelief. She risked another glance around the corner to confirm what she’d seen. And it was still there. 

      Lady Gisela was hugging Keefe. And Keefe was hugging her back. 

      Sophie was too shellshocked to think. What was going on? She was too far away to eavesdrop, so she couldn’t tell what was going on. Unless…

      Sophie concentrated, stretching out her consciousness and picking up on Keefe’s scattered thoughts. She watched the recent memories in his head, how he had planted the gadget and slipped away- then met his mom. She didn’t have time to watch the whole memory, but she watched Keefe’s emotions swiveling out of control as his mom spoke to him. His view focused in on her eyes, which were filled with glistening tears. 

      Sophie transmitted to him, trying to make her thoughts soft so he didn’t respond out loud. 

      Keefe?

      His thoughts scattered. Foster?

      Keefe, what on earth is going on?

      You need to leave. Now. 

      As if I’d leave you! How could you- never mind, we’ll talk about this later. Step away from her. 

      No, Foster, don’t-

      But it was too late. Sophie had already gathered her emotions and was pushing them out in a beam of red light towards Lady Gisela. 

      The beam caught her in the chest, and she instantly collapsed and began writhing on the ground. Sophie cut off the beam and ran to Keefe. 

      “Foster, what did you do?” Keefe sounded panicked. 

      “I inflicted on her,” Sophie said slowly. “What’s the matter with you?”

      “You didn’t need to do that!”

      “Keefe, I don’t know what you were talking about, but she’s the enemy-“

      “She was here to turn herself in!”

       

      *****

       

      Sophie stared in shock at Keefe for several seconds. “Turn herself in?” she repeated dumbly. 

      “Yes!” Keefe sounded upset. “That’s what we were talking about! She- actually, just watch my memory. You won’t believe it unless you see it.”

      “First,” huffed Sandor- who had finally arrived- “we will be securing the enemy and getting you two back to the Healing Center.”

      “No,” Keefe said petulantly. “I’m not going back there. I’m fine, and you can’t make me.”

      “Yes I can,” Sophie retorted. “You still owe me a dare.”

      Keefe groaned. “Not this. I’m fine.”

      “Yes this. I can dare you whatever I want. And I dare you to go back to the Healing Center and stay there.”

      “That’s two parts,” he argued sullenly. 

      “Fine. Then just go there. Elwin can tie you to a cot for all I care.” She knew she sounded mean, but what was wrong with him? He just ran away again and wouldn’t listen to a thing she was saying!

      Keefe scowled. “Don’t do this.”

      Before she could answer, Ro appeared out of nowhere and scooped him into her arms. She then proceeded to carry him to the Healing Center. Keefe put up a much better fight than last time, kicking and scratching and cursing her, but she ignored him.

      Something- an envelope, maybe- dropped out of Keefe’s pocket, and Sophie slipped it into hers without really looking at it. She and Sandor followed close behind Ro. 

      When they got to the Healing Center, Elwin rushed to prepare a cot. Ro shoved Keefe down into it and helped Elwin get him secured with bands at his chest, wrists, and ankles. They made him lay down flat, and Sophie didn’t need to be an Empath to understand how panicked and helpless that left him. She wished she could tell them to untie him, but she was scared of what he would do. 

      So she watched from the corner, hiding behind her hair. She didn’t understand what was wrong with Keefe, but she wanted to help. So when he seemed to be calmed down, she let Elwin lead her to the cot next to him. He instructed her to lay down and drink a bottle of Youth, which she did without a fight. 

      Then she carefully transmitted to Keefe, very softly. 

      Keefe? 

      He turned his head away from her and didn’t answer. 

      Keefe, I’m sorry. I was just trying to help. I didn’t know she was going to turn herself in. 

      Still no answer. 

      Keefe, please don’t do this, she begged. We just want to help. 

      Finally, he answered. I know you think that. But I don’t need your help. I was fine on my own, and I’m fine now. 

      Can I see your memory of what happened?

      He nodded slightly, and she concentrated. Images filled her head, and she watched through Keefe’s eyes as he escaped the Healing Center and ran around to the back of Foxfire. His mom was already there, and she smiled. 

      Good to see you, Keefe. 

      No, it’s not. What do you want?

      I want to trigger your new ability and... and to tell you I’m sorry. Before I turn myself in to the Black Swan. 

      Yeah, right. 

      I know you don’t believe me. I don’t blame you. But it’s true. When the shadowflux put you in that coma, I got the shock of my life. I thought I had put aside all personal feelings- but now I realize that was a mistake. I was afraid I’d lost you. And I realized that I love you too much to let that happen. But I have put too many plans into motion. Plans I fear you won’t survive. And the temptation to follow through with them is too tempting. So I’m turning myself in. The Black Swan can probe my mind, imprison me, do whatever they want. I’m done. 

      Keefe stared in shocked silence at her, clearly finding this hard to believe. You’re telling me you love me and feel sorry so you’re done being the bad guy? Fat chance. 

      I realize you don’t like what I’m saying. Neither do I. But you don’t have to. Just take me to the ridiculous bloated leader of the Black Swan. 

      Keefe laughed harshly. Yeah, that worked out for us great before. Luminaria was so much fun. 

      Then don’t take me there. Take me to Exile. Build a new prison. Or don’t take me at all, see if I care. But I’m warning you, you won’t get this chance again. 

      Keefe shook his head. What about the letter you left for me? You threatened me. 

      I had to make you believe me. I knew if I told you all this you’d think it was a trap and would never have come. 

      It is a trap. I don’t believe any of this. 

      What if I triggered your new ability?

      Keefe hesitated. First, what is it?

      I can’t tell you. But if you think back into your memories, you might get a pretty good idea. There have been clues. 

      Is it something to do with shadowflux?

      No. Are you ready? It’s simple. Just think of something. Something that you can see in your mind’s eye, and know exactly where it is. 

      Keefe appeared to concentrate while Sophie’s blood ran cold- knowing what was about to happen even before Lady Gisela told him to snap. He did, and a familiar envelope appeared in Keefe’s shocked hands. 

      Sophie asked the question out loud just as Keefe did in the memory. “You’re a Conjurer?”

       

      *****

       

      Keefe cringed, while the adults around them gasped. “Apparently. Are you going to watch the rest?”

      She nodded, and went back into his head. 

      I’m a Conjurer?

      Yes, Keefe. I’m surprised you didn’t figure it out on your own. I’m sure your powerful photographic memory recalls me testing you twice for the ability. I was hoping we wouldn’t have to take this step, but it didn’t work out quite as I’d planned. But no matter.

      But... why a Conjurer?

      Not just a Conjurer, Keefe. The most powerful Conjurer our world has ever known. Not only can you Conjure objects, you should be able to Conjure people and animals. And you need not know exactly where an object is, so long as you can picture it. That is, if my predictions are correct. But I suppose only time will tell. 

      Keefe seemed too shocked to speak. 

      Lady Gisela spoke after a minute. I had many plans for you. It’s a shame they will never become reality. But I suppose that is the fate of many world-changing ideas. Lost to the closed-mindedness of power-hungry leaders. A shame, really. You could have been so much. Just know that I love you anyway. 

      And then she reached out her arms. Sophie could see and hear Keefe’s conflicting thoughts. On one hand, she was a murderer who nearly killed him and wanted to use him for her selfish ambition. On the other hand... she was still his mom. And she seemed to be trying to make things right. 

      So Sophie didn’t blame Keefe for accepting the hug. She was sure she would have done the same thing. But Keefe cut off the memory and turned away as much as his restraints would allow. 

      After several minutes, Sophie spoke in a soft whisper. “I’m so sorry, Keefe.”

      He didn’t answer, but Sophie motioned to Elwin. Keefe wasn’t going anywhere. He hesitated, but moved to free Keefe from his restraints. He noticeably kept all the doors closed, though. 

      But just as Elwin reached for him, Keefe shook his head. “Don’t. I... I don’t trust myself. Leave it, please.”

      Elwin nodded. “If that’s what you want.”

      Sophie stood up, stepped to his cot, and hugged his still-frail body as best she could. He obviously couldn’t hug her back, but he did relax a little. 

      When she pulled away and sat back down on her bed, she suddenly became aware of the awkward silence permeating the room. In addition to Elwin, Ro, and Sandor, several other people had apparently been watching them this entire time. Both Sophie’s parents, Lord Cassius, and Magnate Leto were standing against the wall.

      Probably to break the silence, Elwin tilted Keefe’s cot into a sitting position so that he could swallow several elixirs- which Keefe did with surprisingly little fight. Then he held out a new elixir. “This is a mild sedative. It will probably last a couple hours. You don’t have to take it, but it might make it easier.”

      Keefe nodded. “I’ll take it.”

      Elwin held it to his lips, and within minutes Keefe had nodded off to sleep. 

      Sophie turned to Magnate Leto. “I’m guessing you watched the memory?”

      He nodded. “We have much to discuss. But first, the matter of where to hold Lady Gisela. Obviously, Luminaria is out of the question. So is Exile. Honestly, I think the best option is Oblivimire.” He held up a hand to silence the others’ protests. “She is not a Pyrokinetic. And we will take many precautions. But Oblivimire is still the most secure location that it is possible to hold her.”

      Sophie nodded, though she still didn’t fully understand what was so dangerous about the jeweled building that had been rebuilt after Fintan had melted it down with Everblaze. 

      Once that was settled, Elwin convinced everyone that Sophie and Keefe needed their rest- though technically Sophie had just woken up. 

      While everyone else filed out, Edaline held back and crossed to Sophie’s cot. “So... Keefe’s a Conjurer now?”

      “Yeah.” Sophie filled in her mom on the details of his supposedly enhanced ability. “Is that even possible?”

      Edaline shrugged. “I’ve wondered. But no one yet can do it. We’ll just have to see when he’s ready to test it.”

      Sophie nodded, then glanced at Keefe- who was tossing slightly in his sleep. “I’m really worried about him. I don’t know how all this is going to affect him.”

      Edaline sighed. “I wish I could help. All I can do is remind you that he has a lot of good friends who will help him through this. And I can help as much as possible with the new ability. Conjuring is such a strange ability... I can only imagine how hard it is for him, outside the manifesting window and with all this additional trauma.”

      Sophie sighed too. “He’s even worse at asking for help than I am.”

      “I think you might be right. And it is scary. But he’s a good boy, and with our help... he can get through this. I’m not saying it won’t be hard- I’m sure it will. But he has you. And he has Elwin and Physic and whoever else he needs. We just need to trust him and help him to trust himself.”

      The words weren’t really comforting, but they helped. Admitting that it was hard... was its own kind of challenge. But once you got over the peak of asking for help, the rest was all downhill. Sophie just wished she knew how tall Keefe’s mountain was.

      *** End of Episode 19 ***

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    • You wrote this on an i-pod???

      (Also- thank you for actually using one of my ideas XD You did it really well!)

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    • AHHHHH I FORGOT AGAIN UGH I'M REALLY BAD AT THIs

      So sorry Tara editing in the credit now I swear I didn't mean to do that

      And thanks, it was a great idea :)

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    • Also yeah... I did write it on my iPod. Super annoying but whatever it worked. 

      I wouldn't have except I only get so much time on my computer... and I ran out... but I still wanted to write... xD

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      AHHHHH I FORGOT AGAIN UGH I'M REALLY BAD AT THIs

      So sorry Tara editing in the credit now I swear I didn't mean to do that

      And thanks, it was a great idea :)

      XD You're fine 

      And thank you

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    • I did that on Adorable too! And I should probably make a note to give my bff irl credit for this one awesome line in the Adorable proposal that isn't posted yet...

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    • Oh my gosh! this is super good, chase!

      also im glad keefe didnt die

      IS EDALINE GONNA BE HIS MENTOR?

      but she's not a mentor, and there are other conjuring mentors... *frowns*

      also, I LOVE the bit at the end, about the mountain! that was super good!

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      I did that on Adorable too! And I should probably make a note to give my bff irl credit for this one awesome line in the Adorable proposal that isn't posted yet...

      ......so does that mean you've written it? *crosses fingers*

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      Oh my gosh! this is super good, chase!

      also im glad keefe didnt die

      IS EDALINE GONNA BE HIS MENTOR?

      but she's not a mentor, and there are other conjuring mentors... *frowns*

      also, I LOVE the bit at the end, about the mountain! that was super good!

      Thx xD I thought that was super profound as I wrote it and then I reread it and realized how cheesy it was and almost cut it... but glad you liked it :)

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    • BecauseKeefe wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      I did that on Adorable too! And I should probably make a note to give my bff irl credit for this one awesome line in the Adorable proposal that isn't posted yet...
      ......so does that mean you've written it? *crosses fingers*

      Written it, but not posting until after I publish (read: write) 25 xD

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      BecauseKeefe wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      I did that on Adorable too! And I should probably make a note to give my bff irl credit for this one awesome line in the Adorable proposal that isn't posted yet...
      ......so does that mean you've written it? *crosses fingers*
      Written it, but not posting until after I publish (read: write) 25 xD

      But I can't wait that long!

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    • Okay now I’m officially and utterly bewildered! -The Raven of Avendale

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    • 73.152.118.163 wrote:
      Okay now I’m officially and utterly bewildered! -The Raven of Avendale

      About what? And sorry xD

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Oh my gosh! this is super good, chase!

      also im glad keefe didnt die

      IS EDALINE GONNA BE HIS MENTOR?

      but she's not a mentor, and there are other conjuring mentors... *frowns*

      also, I LOVE the bit at the end, about the mountain! that was super good!

      Thx xD I thought that was super profound as I wrote it and then I reread it and realized how cheesy it was and almost cut it... but glad you liked it :)

      I did, it was super well written and good

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    • I feel like this is a coincidence, but isn't it weird that Keefe's on every single other cover of the series and those books have Keefe looking at Sophie or next to Sophie or holding her hand? IDK, I just thought it was a coincidence...

      -SOKEEFEalways

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    • 64.30.87.198 wrote:
      I feel like this is a coincidence, but isn't it weird that Keefe's on every single other cover of the series and those books have Keefe looking at Sophie or next to Sophie or holding her hand? IDK, I just thought it was a coincidence...

      -SOKEEFEalways

      IT'S A SIGN NOT A COINCIDENCE

      But yeah it's adorable and Keefe has more covers than Fitz! *throws confetti in the air*

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      64.30.87.198 wrote:
      I feel like this is a coincidence, but isn't it weird that Keefe's on every single other cover of the series and those books have Keefe looking at Sophie or next to Sophie or holding her hand? IDK, I just thought it was a coincidence...

      -SOKEEFEalways

      IT'S A SIGN NOT A COINCIDENCE

      But yeah it's adorable and Keefe has more covers than Fitz! *throws confetti in the air*

      but Shannon said that the covers dont have anything to do with anything, they're just the most important moments

      although, Sophie is wearing a white dress in every cover keefe is on. SO THEY SHALT GET MARRIED MWAHAHAHA

      but it COULD just be a coincedence

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    • im not buying it Lady Stupid theres somthing  fishy going on



      also great chapter and im glad Keefes ok

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      64.30.87.198 wrote:
      I feel like this is a coincidence, but isn't it weird that Keefe's on every single other cover of the series and those books have Keefe looking at Sophie or next to Sophie or holding her hand? IDK, I just thought it was a coincidence...

      -SOKEEFEalways

      IT'S A SIGN NOT A COINCIDENCE

      But yeah it's adorable and Keefe has more covers than Fitz! *throws confetti in the air*

      but Shannon said that the covers dont have anything to do with anything, they're just the most important moments

      although, Sophie is wearing a white dress in every cover keefe is on. SO THEY SHALT GET MARRIED MWAHAHAHA

      but it COULD just be a coincedence

      THERE ARE NO COINCIDENCES HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH SOOOO HAPPPPYYYYYYYY

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    • 64.30.87.198 wrote:
      I feel like this is a coincidence, but isn't it weird that Keefe's on every single other cover of the series and those books have Keefe looking at Sophie or next to Sophie or holding her hand? IDK, I just thought it was a coincidence...

      -SOKEEFEalways

      iwillnotmakeabookreferenceiwillnotmakeabookreferenceiwillnotmakeabookreferenceiwillnotmakeabookreferenceiwillnotmakeabookreferenceiwillnotmakeabookreference

      .......

      Nope. Can't do it.

      "There are no coincidence in Willow Falls."

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    • Sokeefe4life1315 wrote:
      im not buying it Lady Stupid theres somthing  fishy going on


      also great chapter and im glad Keefes ok

      I was wondering when someone would say something like that xD

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    • BecauseKeefe wrote:
      64.30.87.198 wrote:
      I feel like this is a coincidence, but isn't it weird that Keefe's on every single other cover of the series and those books have Keefe looking at Sophie or next to Sophie or holding her hand? IDK, I just thought it was a coincidence...

      -SOKEEFEalways

      iwillnotmakeabookreferenceiwillnotmakeabookreferenceiwillnotmakeabookreferenceiwillnotmakeabookreferenceiwillnotmakeabookreferenceiwillnotmakeabookreference

      .......

      Nope. Can't do it.

      "There are no coincidence in Willow Falls."

      YAS

      I LOVE THAT SERIES

      11 BIRTHDAYS!!!!!!!!!!

      except David is GAYGAYGAYGAYGAYGAY

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    • 64.30.87.198 wrote:
      I feel like this is a coincidence, but isn't it weird that Keefe's on every single other cover of the series and those books have Keefe looking at Sophie or next to Sophie or holding her hand? IDK, I just thought it was a coincidence...

      -SOKEEFEalways

      iT iS oF tHe fOrEsHaDoWiNg

      -Nightingale

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      BecauseKeefe wrote:
      64.30.87.198 wrote:
      I feel like this is a coincidence, but isn't it weird that Keefe's on every single other cover of the series and those books have Keefe looking at Sophie or next to Sophie or holding her hand? IDK, I just thought it was a coincidence...

      -SOKEEFEalways

      iwillnotmakeabookreferenceiwillnotmakeabookreferenceiwillnotmakeabookreferenceiwillnotmakeabookreferenceiwillnotmakeabookreferenceiwillnotmakeabookreference

      .......

      Nope. Can't do it.

      "There are no coincidence in Willow Falls."

      YAS

      I LOVE THAT SERIES

      11 BIRTHDAYS!!!!!!!!!!

      except David is GAYGAYGAYGAYGAYGAY

      And you now know where my nickname came from. 

      Because you just know it had to be a book reference XD

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      64.30.87.198 wrote:
      I feel like this is a coincidence, but isn't it weird that Keefe's on every single other cover of the series and those books have Keefe looking at Sophie or next to Sophie or holding her hand? IDK, I just thought it was a coincidence...

      -SOKEEFEalways

      IT'S A SIGN NOT A COINCIDENCE

      But yeah it's adorable and Keefe has more covers than Fitz! *throws confetti in the air*

      but Shannon said that the covers dont have anything to do with anything, they're just the most important moments

      although, Sophie is wearing a white dress in every cover keefe is on. SO THEY SHALT GET MARRIED MWAHAHAHA

      but it COULD just be a coincedence

      .*gasp* yes YES YES

      ​​​​​​​-Nightingale

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      Sokeefe4life1315 wrote:
      im not buying it Lady Stupid theres somthing  fishy going on


      also great chapter and im glad Keefes ok

      I was wondering when someone would say something like that xD

      well i hate her so i dont belive anything she says

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    • Sokeefe4life1315 wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      Sokeefe4life1315 wrote:
      im not buying it Lady Stupid theres somthing  fishy going on


      also great chapter and im glad Keefes ok

      I was wondering when someone would say something like that xD
      well i hate her so i dont belive anything she says

      I know.

      Fitz either.

      xD xD xD

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      Sokeefe4life1315 wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      Sokeefe4life1315 wrote:
      im not buying it Lady Stupid theres somthing  fishy going on


      also great chapter and im glad Keefes ok

      I was wondering when someone would say something like that xD
      well i hate her so i dont belive anything she says
      I know.

      Fitz either.

      xD xD xD

      XD

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      Sokeefe4life1315 wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      Sokeefe4life1315 wrote:
      im not buying it Lady Stupid theres somthing  fishy going on


      also great chapter and im glad Keefes ok

      I was wondering when someone would say something like that xD
      well i hate her so i dont belive anything she says
      I know.

      Fitz either.

      xD xD xD

      har same tho

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    • 73.32.225.216 wrote:

      Keephie4eva wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      64.30.87.198 wrote:
      I feel like this is a coincidence, but isn't it weird that Keefe's on every single other cover of the series and those books have Keefe looking at Sophie or next to Sophie or holding her hand? IDK, I just thought it was a coincidence...

      -SOKEEFEalways

      IT'S A SIGN NOT A COINCIDENCE

      But yeah it's adorable and Keefe has more covers than Fitz! *throws confetti in the air*

      but Shannon said that the covers dont have anything to do with anything, they're just the most important moments

      although, Sophie is wearing a white dress in every cover keefe is on. SO THEY SHALT GET MARRIED MWAHAHAHA

      but it COULD just be a coincedence

      .*gasp* yes YES YES

      ​​​​​​​-Nightingale

      Well, look what my post’s spurred up...

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      Sokeefe4life1315 wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      Sokeefe4life1315 wrote:
      im not buying it Lady Stupid theres somthing  fishy going on


      also great chapter and im glad Keefes ok

      I was wondering when someone would say something like that xD
      well i hate her so i dont belive anything she says
      I know.

      Fitz either.

      xD xD xD

      r u saying U dont belive or i dont?

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    • DIS IS SO GOOD!!

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:

      Wandergirls wrote:
      64.30.87.198 wrote:
      I feel like this is a coincidence, but isn't it weird that Keefe's on every single other cover of the series and those books have Keefe looking at Sophie or next to Sophie or holding her hand? IDK, I just thought it was a coincidence...

      -SOKEEFEalways

      IT'S A SIGN NOT A COINCIDENCE

      But yeah it's adorable and Keefe has more covers than Fitz! *throws confetti in the air*

      but Shannon said that the covers dont have anything to do with anything, they're just the most important moments

      although, Sophie is wearing a white dress in every cover keefe is on. SO THEY SHALT GET MARRIED MWAHAHAHA

      but it COULD just be a coincedence

      THEY SHALT INDEED

      COINCIDENCES DON’T EXIST

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    • Sokeefe4life1315 wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      Sokeefe4life1315 wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      Sokeefe4life1315 wrote:
      im not buying it Lady Stupid theres somthing  fishy going on


      also great chapter and im glad Keefes ok

      I was wondering when someone would say something like that xD
      well i hate her so i dont belive anything she says
      I know.

      Fitz either.

      xD xD xD

      r u saying U dont belive or i dont?

      You don't xD

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      Sokeefe4life1315 wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      Sokeefe4life1315 wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      Sokeefe4life1315 wrote:
      im not buying it Lady Stupid theres somthing  fishy going on


      also great chapter and im glad Keefes ok

      I was wondering when someone would say something like that xD
      well i hate her so i dont belive anything she says
      I know.

      Fitz either.

      xD xD xD

      r u saying U dont belive or i dont?
      You don't xD

      no i do not both her and Fitzroy r lying slimeballs

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    • IceblueTriumphsoverall wrote:

      Keephie4eva wrote:

      Wandergirls wrote:
      64.30.87.198 wrote:
      I feel like this is a coincidence, but isn't it weird that Keefe's on every single other cover of the series and those books have Keefe looking at Sophie or next to Sophie or holding her hand? IDK, I just thought it was a coincidence...

      -SOKEEFEalways

      IT'S A SIGN NOT A COINCIDENCE

      But yeah it's adorable and Keefe has more covers than Fitz! *throws confetti in the air*

      but Shannon said that the covers dont have anything to do with anything, they're just the most important moments

      although, Sophie is wearing a white dress in every cover keefe is on. SO THEY SHALT GET MARRIED MWAHAHAHA

      but it COULD just be a coincedence

      THEY SHALT INDEED

      COINCIDENCES DON’T EXIST

      I suppose this ISN'T a coincidence, but I just looked at the number of moments in each book and I realized that those 4 book have more monents than the others...



      -SOKEEFEalways

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    • Sokeefe4life1315 wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      Sokeefe4life1315 wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      Sokeefe4life1315 wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      Sokeefe4life1315 wrote:
      im not buying it Lady Stupid theres somthing  fishy going on


      also great chapter and im glad Keefes ok

      I was wondering when someone would say something like that xD
      well i hate her so i dont belive anything she says
      I know.

      Fitz either.

      xD xD xD

      r u saying U dont belive or i dont?
      You don't xD
      no i do not both her and Fitzroy r lying slimeballs

      xD xD xD

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    • While I wait for the next chapter of Complicated I am rereading random chapters of Adorable. It's funny because I have MUCH more important things to do (go write the next chapter for your own fanfiction, self) but I don't care I wanna read fanfictions so that's what I'll do.  

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    • lolololol I have started skimming my favorite parts (the ones that don't make me cringe and die inside like why did I write that) before I make a new episode, otherwise I just get so mixed up it's not even funny xD

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    • Lexbexrex wrote:
      While I wait for the next chapter of Complicated I am rereading random chapters of Adorable. It's funny because I have MUCH more important things to do (go write the next chapter for your own fanfiction, self) but I don't care I wanna read fanfictions so that's what I'll do.  

      same I just started a long fanfic thats could possibly take a while and i should be writing rn

      also, i should be paying attention to the class im in

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    • WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWO THAT LAST EPISODE WAS SO GOOD!!!!

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    • um isn't this Adorble that chapter was for Complicated XD

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    • HydrokineticGirl101 wrote:
      um isn't this Adorble that chapter was for Complicated XD

      no this is complicated

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    • OMG SOOOOOOO GOOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!

      Wow Wandergirls you really outdid yourself. Gisela turned good! YESSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      although I really don't believe she actually turned good and now she's probably just shaping their trust into a key that leads to the black swan so she can thrust their sharpened gullibleness right into their backs. typical backstabbing, mind-game-playing, manipulating Gisela.

      But hey! It was AMAZING!!!!!!!

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      HydrokineticGirl101 wrote:
      um isn't this Adorble that chapter was for Complicated XD
      no this is complicated

      Ooooh shoot oops XD

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    • HydrokineticGirl101 wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      HydrokineticGirl101 wrote:
      um isn't this Adorble that chapter was for Complicated XD
      no this is complicated
      Ooooh shoot oops XD

      XD

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      HydrokineticGirl101 wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      HydrokineticGirl101 wrote:
      um isn't this Adorble that chapter was for Complicated XD
      no this is complicated
      Ooooh shoot oops XD
      XD

      You're fine.

      Nearly gave me a heart attack.

      But you're fine.

      xD xD xD

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    • 66.235.26.194 wrote:
      OMG SOOOOOOO GOOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!

      Wow Wandergirls you really outdid yourself. Gisela turned good! YESSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      although I really don't believe she actually turned good and now she's probably just shaping their trust into a key that leads to the black swan so she can thrust their sharpened gullibleness right into their backs. typical backstabbing, mind-game-playing, manipulating Gisela.

      But hey! It was AMAZING!!!!!!!

      😂😂😂

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      HydrokineticGirl101 wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      HydrokineticGirl101 wrote:
      um isn't this Adorble that chapter was for Complicated XD
      no this is complicated
      Ooooh shoot oops XD
      XD
      You're fine.

      Nearly gave me a heart attack.

      But you're fine.

      xD xD xD

      XD I'm sowwy Chase

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    • HydrokineticGirl101 wrote:
      Wandergirls wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      HydrokineticGirl101 wrote:
      Keephie4eva wrote:
      HydrokineticGirl101 wrote:
      um isn't this Adorble that chapter was for Complicated XD
      no this is complicated
      Ooooh shoot oops XD
      XD
      You're fine.

      Nearly gave me a heart attack.

      But you're fine.

      xD xD xD

      XD I'm sowwy Chase

      Ur fine xD also I keep not recognizing you because of the new pfp and it's legit driving me insane but it's not you I have issues but im okay :) xD xD xD

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    • i finally found this thread!

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    • nice job! XD

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    • GlitterButt&Greyfell wrote:
      i finally found this thread!

      Congrats XD

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    • BecauseKeefe wrote:
      GlitterButt&Greyfell wrote:
      i finally found this thread!
      Congrats XD

      Yeah

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    • Lexbexrex wrote:
      I honestly really want that to be turned into a fanfiction 

      Okay. 

      https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1211606

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    • Ahhhhhhhh!!!! That fanic is good but sad, like REALLY sad. I swear, if you read it brace your selves, grab a tissue box or hankercheif, you are going to need...... (it is good tho)

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    • 152.26.208.39 wrote:
      Ahhhhhhhh!!!! That fanic is good but sad, like REALLY sad. I swear, if you read it brace your selves, grab a tissue box or hankercheif, you are going to need...... (it is good tho)

      Awwww thx and yes I agree xD

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    • I GOT A FANFIC TO BE MADE!!! I AM A GOD. (lol, im jk) 

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    • 66.235.26.194 wrote:
      Lexbexrex wrote:
      I honestly really want that to be turned into a fanfiction 
      Okay. 

      https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1211606

      YOU ARE SO MUCH WORSE THAN ME

      I JUST DIED

      YOUR BLOOD IS ON MY HANDS

      KEEFE'S BLOOD IS ON YOUR HANDS

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    • Wandergirls wrote:
      66.235.26.194 wrote:
      Lexbexrex wrote:
      I honestly really want that to be turned into a fanfiction 
      Okay. 

      https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1211606

      YOU ARE SO MUCH WORSE THAN ME

      I JUST DIED

      YOUR BLOOD IS ON MY HANDS

      KEEFE'S BLOOD IS ON YOUR HANDS

      Now you know what it feels like.

      Your chapters are much worse and more suspenseful. 

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    • Pisano22 wrote:
      I enjoy killing off characters for fun. I killed Biana in my fanfic...

      U KILLED BIANA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOWWWWWW?????????????HAVE U NO HEART!!!!!!!!?????????????/

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    • 98.3.17.9 wrote:
      Pisano22 wrote:
      I enjoy killing off characters for fun. I killed Biana in my fanfic...
      U KILLED BIANA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOWWWWWW?????????????HAVE U NO HEART!!!!!!!!?????????????/

      Apparently not... HOW  COULD YU KILL BIANA ACJXIUHDIHDBHBSUHBSUHA AIUHAMIAHIAUHMAUIH

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    • PLS POST SOON !!!!  AHHH THIS IS SO DEPRESSING AND I LOVE IT. 

      i like fluff mixed with a little darkness

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    • why did u make this so addicting omggggg

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    • 50.92.75.55 wrote:
      98.3.17.9 wrote:
      Pisano22 wrote:
      I enjoy killing off characters for fun. I killed Biana in my fanfic...
      U KILLED BIANA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOWWWWWW?????????????HAVE U NO HEART!!!!!!!!?????????????/
      Apparently not... HOW  COULD YU KILL BIANA ACJXIUHDIHDBHBSUHBSUHA AIUHAMIAHIAUHMAUIH

      I'm sorry WHAT

      ASKDDBGDDBBDDBDGDGDGGDGDUIHSEBCGCDBASKHDKHDKHDKHDFGDGDGKSHDBDGJHDGASJHDBDBDGFHBFBCGGDIEUBDUINDSVSDBKHSBFKHDFBFBFBJBFEBFFFBBSEJBFBSKDJFBJCBJSDKJCBBFBFFBFKHFBHKF-



      -bronte=brontosaurus 

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    • Ok random thought. I think the song Little So You Know by Alex and Sierra is perfect for this fanfic. 

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    • PearlofLight13 wrote:
      Ok random thought. I think the song Little So You Know by Alex and Sierra is perfect for this fanfic. 

      Ik,r? Little Do You Know is perfect.

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    • PearlofLight13 wrote: Ok random thought. I think the song Little So You Know by Alex and Sierra is perfect for this fanfic. 

      Yes I didn’t even realize that song does go perfect! It’s funny because I always sing that song:)

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    • wait did I put it on the descrip? Cuz it is on my Sokeefe playlist xD

      and yeah it's perfect how did I not think of that!

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    • Already reading it (if that's the one I think it is)

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    • PearlofLight13 wrote:
      Ok random thought. I think the song Little So You Know by Alex and Sierra is perfect for this fanfic. 

      Oooooh yeahhh

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    • BecauseKeefe wrote:Already reading it (if that's the one I think it is)

      it is

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    • Keephie4eva wrote:
      BecauseKeefe wrote:Already reading it (if that's the one I think it is)
      it is

      XD

      How do you type so fast??? I just got another notif from you on the other thread!

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