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Hurry up and give the plot some more LIFE! broo ur fanfic SUCKS!
I'm cackling evilly at this comment. Just wait a few chapters and then maybe you'll wish you hadn't said that......
And if you think it sucks, fine. I get that this isn't for everyone. But can you tell me what sucks so I know how to fix it in the future? I won't be able to improve if all you do is criticize me. For example, if you said "You need more scenes with character A because I feel like you're leaving them out in favor of characters B and C, here's an example" or "I don't think character D would do X this situation, I think they'd do Y instead." I'm open to constructive criticism, but just saying "This sucks" has the potential to hurt my feelings, especially since I put a lot of time and effort into this fanfic.
STELLARLUNE123 i ma so so so sorry that was my older brother from my laptop and i didn't even notice- again im so so so sorry- he just LOVES to make my life miserable-i know he secretly enjoys ur work nd im in love with it!
again im so so so sorry
It's fine. I accept your apology.
What he said didn't even really hurt my feelings. If he wants the plot to be more action packed, THERE'S A BIG SCENE WITH DEATH TROLLS COMING UP!
Also, this is the last post on this thread, so here's the new link: https://lost-cities-keeper.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:1705822