Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-146.135.19.252-20181116034422/@comment-37530514-20181117182156

Thx Backyard windchimes for replying!

I disagree about Keefe being too protective. Here's my reasoning-

Keefe- "Not the hero. Not the one taking charge of everything. Just a guy ready to listen and help and be there for her. A friend. Until she was ready for more."

I agree with you, in the way that in the PAST Keede has definitely been overprotective. And if nothing changed, that would be a huge problem. But remember their argument in Nightfall? And how she tells him she's sick of him taking charge of everything, and she goes home and rethinks it, and his short story end with those words? We know he's trying to do better- and we know from Flashback that it is working. Sophie gets worried that Keefe is going to take over again, and telepathically calls to him, and he's like "chill, I'm done with all that, I'm at Tiergans". Think about Flashback- there isn't a moment when Keefe takes over.

I think, in fact,that here's the one of the differences between Sophitz and Keefoster- In Sophitz, they say they trust each other, but really they don't (as seen in the short story by the way Fitz is acting about Sophie, and how Sophie is still reluctant to tell him things, and worried about how he'll react to things. Personally I think a good test of their trust will be in whether or not she tells himshe's unmatchable, and how he reacts). They're very complacent, "I already trust you" and "we are perfect," meanwhile Keefe and Sophie have had their trust broken before, and are working to fi it. Keefe is trying to be better. They're working toward a goal- they're not perfect, but they are working towards it.