Talk:Fitzroy Avery Vacker/@comment-2601:644:8001:B263:2076:3ADC:B8DD:5F4A-20181002014723/@comment-28437338-20181022000806

Ok to first comment I agree 1000000000% and I've discussed this at length with my frineds and we all kind of agree SM hasn't been really writing him and has shoved to the side for Keefe. I ADORE Keefe so I don't mind too much but Fitz is kinda important to, and he's just made out to be this guy who gives Sophie gifts in Nightfall. I really don't like it. He needs a looooot more definition and actual personality.

To the second comment I sort of agree but I also don't? Idk, I think Fitz tries to be perfect but ends up failing sometimes (Exile) because of his emotions like everyone else, but then he goes back to being the same as always. It doesn't have a huge effect on him in my opinion. Sure, he feels bad about it, but does he make a larger effort to contain his emotions? Not really. He shows displeasure with Keefe's flirting with Sophie and often can get irritated. He definitely needs more fleshing out.

Fourth comment, I honestly think that what you're describing is a plot device which isn't how storytelling is supposed to work. You're not supposed to insert characters as their needed, they should have their own story that intertwines with the main one. Each character should be able to stand on their own and have a book written about THEM if needed if they are truly fleshed out. Keefe can have that. All the characters from series like Percy Jackson and Harry Potter can have that. Fitz to an extent can, but it wouldn't be as rich as some other characters, which is why I feel like he is flat to me.

Feel free to reply and disagree with me if anyone ever sees this bc I'm late xD