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Suddenly, Sophie heard a crash behind her. She turned and someone tackled her from behind. It was the Neverseen! Someone in a black hood held her down, pressing her arms down against the ground. He sat on her chest and it took all of Sophie’s energy to breath. She began to hack and cough. “Gethen,” said Lady Gisela’s voice from behind Sophie, “I need her alive if you don’t mind.” Gethen stepped back but gripped Sophie’s wrists in a different spot. A pain shot through Sophie’s entire body. Someone Sophie couldn’t see clamped hand over Sophie’s mouth before Sophie could scream in pain. She couldn’t inflict with the pain barreling its way through her body. She writhed in Gethen’s grip. He laughed, a nightmarish sound, and said, “Poor little Sophie. The more you move the more it hurts. The more it hurts the more you move. Well, I’m getting back at you for inflicting on me.” He laughed evilly again. Sophie realized what he said was true as the pain increased. The world turned dim. The darker it got, the more it hurt. She struggled in vain, and with the last of her energy she transmitted the one word help! as far as she could. And the world went black. Sophie could only hope that someone heard.

is this intense enough for my book nine of kotlc