Board Thread:Short Stories and Fanfictions/@comment-174.87.216.250-20190123192124

Hi, peeps who are on this page! I am calling all Keeper fans to come and read my fanfiction. It is a little different than your average KotLC fanfiction, but it still revolves around the storyline. I need all the constructive criticism you can provide me, so please give it a read and tell me what you think. Just a warning: the story is far from complete, and I am still working on it (In reality, there are only two chapters so far). I just want to see how I'm doing so far so that I can incorporate that feedback into my later chapters. Thanks! It will be linked below. [] 