Board Thread:News and Announcements/@comment-98.247.168.42-20181122042639/@comment-2605:6000:1A13:20C3:A58F:42B3:321D:3AE0-20190607164042

yeah I agree with the whole introducing new things prospect and making it the whole plot as a bad thing because its more interesting when they are hinted earlier on then just being introduced and then becoming the whole plotline. When it's introduced earlier on and then used in more importance later it kinda has you like woah! because you recognize the thing and then you get to see it in action. Sometimes you could also be like "I should have seen that coming" too, when authors use the things that they foreshadowed. It hink keeper has to work on that a bit, but it has used it before, but a lot of things in the seventh book was not foreshadowed and just kinda newly intoduced. But in the books before. like in nightfall she did use this tactic, like the fires that were there in the 1st book were explained in nightfall, fading was used a lot in the other books like the second and the sixth book but introduced in the 1st book, vespara and nightfall were foreshadowed in the second book ( though barely ) through prentices memories of a girl running and shattering atlantis ( I think thats what it was) and some other examples but I would like to see it more in the books and I hope that Keefes Legacy will be used with things from before that were foreshadowed instead of the Vacker Legacy which was something entirely new. Another thing that I would like to see more in the series is the friendships between the charectars which have sort of faded out of the books and more on parent relationships and relationships other then the romatic tension.

~Flareadon Phoenix