Talk:Keefe and Sophie/@comment-34366923-20171208033627/@comment-2605:6001:E5E4:C600:597C:971E:5038:E35B-20171210211543

Slither's comment above, now that is hurtful :(

What I was trying to say is that you did amzing with the teasing part since Keefe teases all the time or makes a snarky comment. I just wanted to note things that Keefe would also do so that you could look through. Like in the part you're writing, when Rdaline saw them together close, both of them blushed.

I wasn't trying to be offensive, but I wanted to point these things out if you wanted some tips, and I know it's annoying when a person points out a slight flaw, mistake, misunderstanding, or something of that kind since it makes people a bit defensive towards their work. And sometimes people can get rude for that.....:|

Also I know that people aren't perfect, that's why others try to help out to make it better, or at least I was trying to. And I quite enjoyed what you wrote because it would be amazing to see what would have happened if both of them did kiss though I'll be blushing through out the whole scene.