Board Thread:Short Stories and Fanfictions/@comment-43347423-20200111144721/@comment-104.1.154.140-20200201193920

THIS IS SO GREAT!!!!!!!!!!

I'm not entirely sure about the whole 'Oralie is a lie, it's Jolie' idea, but you wrote it really well!

Also, I liked Fitz's reaction here. You didn't portray as COMPLETLY fine with it, but you didn't make him a jerk either. You made him somewhere in the Goldilocks Zone.

You're fanfic was the first one I found, and I can definently(Spelling????) say it's one of the best!

~Eleda