Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-146.135.19.252-20181116034422/@comment-2606:A000:1128:4169:E829:4AFE:63CF:E6AA-20181119201510

BlackSwanSRM

You know, i keep forgetting that Keefe is getting better. Probably because he hasn't really been a dynamic character since book four. But you're right, hearing my argument from someone else, i can see the holes. He probably wouldn't go to Biana voluntarily, and i feel like he'd only talk about it with her if she pressed him hard. And he is very loyal to Sophie...but i don't know, something about Keefe just...

Keefe doesn't have very high self esteem, for understandable reasons. Especially with a possible deal he made with Alden to let Sophitz happen, i feel like he'd think that either Sophie didn't love him the same way, or that she thought Fitz was better--which would go right along with his past, and just seem right to him, because his father always said he wished Keefe were a Vacker, and Keefe himself wished he was a Vacker. So the idea that the most important elf in the lost cities would prefer the Golden Boy just makes sense. So he's definitely going to stay away, but i feel like he'll need an outlet--maybe not Biana, but somebody, or something.

On the other hand, he loves Sophie so much, that he probably feels that he's betraying her should he get that close to anyone else. So he probably wont let himself become that confortable with anyone else but Sophie, until Sophitz breaks up (which i'm pretty sure will happen)

Also, i'm writing a book too (just finished, actually) and i totally agree. I had sort of a plan, but it pretty much went completely out the window as my characters developed and reacted to the situation they were put in.

And i think there will be a Tam pov, maybe in the 9th book, because he's becoming a more major character as time passes

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