Talk:Sophie and Fitz/@comment-37879183-20190526001655

So everyone remembers when Keefe joined the Neverseen, right?

So what bad things came out of that for Keefe?

- The Black Swan and Sophie's friends didn't trust him for a bit

- He lost the caches and the Alluvettre crystal

- He feels guilty

So I am VERY worried. He's gotten off very lightly. Sure, he lost the caches, the crystal, and some trust, but think of it.

- They avoided telling other students and the Council about it, so nobody but members of the Black Swan and the Neverseen knew about it, so he didn't get any flak from other people

- He just walked out of the Neverseen without a fight

- Sophie and his friends have avoided blaming him for it because they don't want him to feel guilty. They have suppressed their emotions and feelings.

- He never got injured

So the main thing that happened him to guilt and lack of trust for a little while.

Anyways, he was never "punished" for joining the Neverseen. I'm not saying I want him to be punished, but when characters do "bad" things, they generally face some sort of retribution or do something to make up for it. Sure, he did it for a good reason, but that doesn't actually matter for this general theme of punishment or making up for it or whatever.

'''Keefe will face retribution at some point. Or something.'''

So I have a few ideas for how this might happen.

- Keefe goes to save Tam and help him escape the Neverseen.

- Keefe overthrows the Neverseen

- Keefe dies/is seriously injured

- Keefe betrays them and gets whatever baddie punishment they have