Talk:Keefe and Sophie/@comment-2001:569:750F:2D00:914C:513F:181E:A68D-20181206181252

So guys l was looking uo how to make romantic relationships in a story and one point was to NEVER make a character instantly like another character romantically. This is because it skips the interesting story of them getting ot know each other and grow first as friends and then lovers (aka sokeefe) another point was that conflict and tension keep a story moving. And while both ships can have lots of conflict Sophitz is mostly made up of conflict from Fitzs anger issues where as in sokeefe keefe was trying to do the right thing but ended up hurting everyone else even Sophie wo temporarily didn't fully trust him. But then he won himeself back by being ther for her during eternalis and forkles death. Another point was to avoid sterytypical cringy two sided characters especailly perfect peopple (aka fitz) another point is unhealthy atteibutes that are sais in the name of love. Such as possessiveness, Jealousy, Dominance/controlling, Anger, and obssesiveness, Now we have seen jealousy and anger before in fitz And i think with mathmaking fitz is going to take on more of these traits, especailly the obbsessiveness of perhaps creating a solution to Sophies matchmaking problem. When Sophie doesnt care about being a bad match but then sees how obssesive fitz is with finding a solution she will start to realize how much he cares about being a “good match” and that he will do anything to keep his good name in the eye of society. She will startto realize just hw much she doesnt like this and they will start to grow apart. Then fitz i beleive will show signs of dominance/controlling and possesieness over sophie as his girlfriend and then. . . well you get my point