Thread:MagicDaydreamer/@comment-38480398-20191028113831/@comment-38091275-20191028151236

Compelling!! Definitely something I'd want to read more of. And for a first draft, it's amazing! (There are some words I'd replace and a couple places without commas, but again, it's unedited and you didn't ask for copyedits! it doesn't affect the writing quality, anyways) :)

Synopsis of the book?