Thread:Keefester4evr/@comment-39536547-20190607151558

Hey, Keefeter4evr,

I was reading Team Foster-Keefe 2.0, and I have a few suggestions. *No offense, but*, when you're writing, you kinda want to show, and not tell. For example:

%Keefe's beatiful blond hair brushed Sophie's forehead as she pressed her lips against his%

Just a suggestion– if you like your style of writing, that's fine by me!

CasoPeso 