Board Thread:Clubs/@comment-44390494-20191206064730/@comment-44390494-20200101173728

"Camp is starting soon," Tiana realized as Owen was attacking his meatballs mid-lunch. Surprised, Owen looked up, obviously now remembering that fact, but a slow smile played at his lips eventually, the one Tiana loved so much. "Camp wars should be worth something, don't you think, Tiana?" She rolled her eyes and laughed. "We can always drop out of being counselors next year, right? Hmm..." And that's when she realized her weakness she'd just revealed.

So, in here, remember to space the dialogues. If Owen were to speak, he'd have a new paragraph:

"Camp is starting soon," Tiana realized as Owen was attacking his meatballs mid-lunch.

Surprised, Owen looked up, obviously now remembering that fact, but a slow smile played at his lips eventually, the one Tiana loved so much. "Camp wars should be worth something, don't you think, Tiana?"

She rolled her eyes and laughed. "We can always drop out of being counselors next year, right? Hmm..." And that's when she realized her weakness she'd just revealed.

Something like that.