Talk:Keefe and Sophie/@comment-44473513-20200210050712/@comment-44473513-20200211013959

Yes I know the characters were out of line and all that, but this was my first ever thing I've written (other than my crossover and things for school) and I didn't really edit it much so it's not great but I was still proud of it. The second part on wattpad I think is better as far as characterization goes Keefe was more Keefe I thought