Thread:Luna di Angelo/@comment-33804292-20190518203629/@comment-34064772-20190519200721

Yeah it felt kinda like reading fanfic. Like it wasn’t bad but all of the characters felt off. Sophie definitely has changed which is fine but I think she should have been more flustered and stuff instead of “omg hes so hot kiss me plz” which is what it felt like. That would be fine for another character but doesn’t fit Sophie’s general awkwardness. Gah. I could rant about this all day. But I really should stop putting it off and just reread it and see if I like it.

Ikr? Plot twist of the millennium