Board Thread:Short Stories and Fanfictions/@comment-32987979-20190112205632/@comment-32987979-20190310044217

Well, it's just very rushed and I don't have the time nor passion at the moment to really commit. For example, I wanted to have a sort of flashback scene were Dex and Stina first met. I sort of did, but nowhere near as good as I wanted it. While I do like some parts, I just feel like it was kind of generic and rushed in general. I know I could do better but I don't really have the commitment of an author.))