Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-36143053-20180730065421

Hey, on Wattpad I just posted my first story. I'm sorry that it isn't about KOTLC, but only 2 of my friends thought it was good. All my other friends said it was a waste of time and I got really discouraged... So I came here to see if the kind people of this wiki would at least check it out? I'm sorry that I was so selfish to post this here on the holy wiki that this is. But can someone at least comment on what I can do better so that my friends would like it? I know it isn't good -.-

Wattpad: @pika_pikachu922

Story: The Barrier Ring

Once again, IM SORRY. 