Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-43620158-20191006014306/@comment-97.93.200.104-20191006044422

Nice! I like it so far. Although I would recommend to space out the conversations, if that makes sense? Like this:

"What happened?" Dex asked.

"You okay?" Keefe asked.

Anyway, that's really just my preference. But great story so far! I hope you continue writing it :D

~KeeperoftheFire