Talk:Book 8: Legacy/@comment-216.193.154.195-20190803164849

Things that should happen in Legacy:

1. An important person dies. Although all the characters are loveable, sacrifice and stakes need to be added. One character death could be one of the eight main characters, but that is not a good idea because none of their character arcs are finished and they have not completely grown as characters for their stories to b over. Others are free range. People like Stina or Jensi shouldn’t die unless in a massive attack happens, since they are nonessential. The character’s death should have a huge impact on the main characters. Examples of these people are Grady, Edaline, Juliene, Kesler, the triplets, Alden, Della, Elwin, Mr. Forkle, and even bad ones likeLady Gisela, Neverseen members, and others. This death will also make a huge impact on the setup of organizations and don’t necessarily have to be close to the characters.

2. More/equal character appearance All the characters have to have a bigger role to establish relationships, loyalties, and provide character development. I will do one each for the characters I’m talking about. Sophie: Her values of protecting the ones she loves should show up a lot. It should show the depths she will go to protect her friends. She should also acknowledge that she must balance her Black Swan time with her relationships with friends. This also includes spending more time with less spent friends, such as Biana, Dex, and Linh. Fitz: Must find where his loyalties and limits. It should bring up conflict between protecting his family honor or defying Elvin customs. Additionally, his stronger anger manifests should play a role, as well as his history and his worry. His attitudes between all the characters should also be shown. Biana: Strech for loyalty to Sophie must be shown. She should be strong and standing up for the people she loves, but also should be in conflict between family and ethics, and well at determining if Alvar is redeemable. Dex: Must be more truthful about his concerns, especially to Sophie if they are going to maintain a strong relationship. his dedication to helping his friends should also be shown. There are also should be a conflict in how far will he go for his family versus his friends. Linh: should determine how she separates from Tam and create independence. She should be in conflict on whether she should save Tam or trust thin, as well as reuniting with her parents or cutting herself from them. Tam: should evaluate how much he is willing to do for his friends versus how much he is willing to do for Linh.