Board Thread:Clubs/@comment-44390494-20191206064730/@comment-43957690-20191206235245

Julihorse wrote: So, I'm wondering what you meant with this sentence right here: Damp, and evil smelling places that hid secrets.

Maybe try typing it either this way:

Damp, evil smelling places that hid secrets.

Or this way:

Damp and evil smelling places that hid secrets.

Since if you add the coma, it sounds as if you were pausing in the middle of a description while you're still talking about the same object. Ah, that makes sense. Thank you.