Thread:Pommy the Pyro/@comment-2604:2000:1601:317:298A:9E6A:7C20:6AA2-20180611004410/@comment-35098530-20180612020150

I don't think I'm in any position to be giving out writing tips.

But for longer pieces I just like to add lots of detail. Make everything very clear, don't cut corners on your writing.

For example:

Sophie fell on the ground. Keefe asked her if she was okay, and Sophie assured him she was. Sophie wrapped an arm around his shoulders to keep from falling again.

'Hold up!! Sophie just went from being on the ground to having an arm around Keefe's shoulders? Instead, make things clearer...'

Example:

Sophie fell to the ground. Keefe asked her if she was okay, and Sophie assured him she was. Keefe helped her up and Sophie dusted herself off. She wrapped an arm around Keefe's shoulders to keep from falling again.

Idk, that's just what I do. Look up writing tips if you want to know more. 🤓😀😁