Talk:Keefe and Sophie/@comment-35282260-20180422041818

Hey guys, for those who have seen my poem that I wrote a while ago, my friends edited it, and and this is the revised version:

A war is raging, out of sight,

Inside, it shines, a new bright light.

A  light that’s made of something stronger

To end the war that cannot stay longer.

You must find a group of of eight

A group of elves we  can not hate,

And they will venture into the war,

And find the problem, break it’s core.

The first elf is a blond-haired girl,

With features as shiny as a brand-new pearl

Her  unknown gifts  with impossible power

Will make the enemy want to cower  

The second elf, a clever boy

He has disheveled hair, a great decoy

An outstanding one, handsome indeed,

To follow his mother, he’s willing to bleed.

The third one, a dark haired elf

Will seek out the problem but endanger himself.

His surname and family are known far and wide

He trusts, he loves, but of course, he has pride

The fourth elf, a decorated beauty

Has an inner flame, a designated duty,

She may on the outside appear very weak,

But inside, she knows, she’ll get what she seeks.

The fifth one, has an innocent heart,

His kindness will make you not want to part.

His knowledge for gadgets is goes on for miles

You’ll know it’s him, when you find see his mischievous smile.

The sixth elf, is a master with water,

Doesn’t know she’s capable, of deadly slaughter

She has silvery edges on the tips of her hair

And tries to treat everything with extreme care.

The seventh elf, a stalking shadow,

Is willing to deal with whatever he knows

The son of Quan, the twin of Linh,

May  have to prepare for the greatest sin.

The final elf, a tiny girl,

One that can make the fire unfurl

Whenever the elves are in desperate trouble, 

She easily makes the teamwork double.

These eight elves, through dark or through light

Coming to rescue us from a terrible fight

Together they rise up from the brightest night.

Rise up from the dark, Rise up to the light.

'''They are coming…. '''

Please tell me which version you like better!