Board Thread:Clubs/@comment-44390494-20200109205641/@comment-44390494-20200127205102

That's corrrect. I was about to tell you.

Anyways, it sounds great! The Prologues and introductions are not always lenghty, though. Maybe the Author of W.o.F might do them that way, but, if you'd noticed, Shannon's Prologues are about two to three pages long.

I can also spot some grammar mistakes, such as what Evelina pointed out: the coma in the dialoge. I've noticed around the wiki that few people know this rule; it indicates that it's still the same sentence. Meaning, if you wanted to say "she greeted" after the dialogue, then it would be, for example,''' "'Hello,' Juli greeted." '''