Board Thread:Short Stories and Fanfictions/@comment-40144936-20190928223910/@comment-40144936-20190930164654

I know, I had finshed the new chap and was going to apply the edits (most of them) but i only got to there and I decided to get out the new chap with some of the editing. I am adding more of yr edits though (Don't sweat) You had some really good ideas. :)

- The Moonlark

(It's whatt the kids on my online school call me)