Thread:Keefe Sence/@comment-37166538-20190614023718/@comment-38544901-20190624232108

If you were to go to the city of Atlantis, far beneath the waves, you would find there a young girl. She couldn't be older than 8 or 9, but her parents, the ones who brought her there, paid her no mind. She was a quiet girl, long black hair that ended halfway down her back, eyes turned up in the corners. Her twin brother, who looked much like her, walked beside her. He was the only one who noticed anything was wrong.

Is this an okay start to a story? I’m trying to write a fan fiction about how Linh ends up in Exillium.