Talk:Keefe and Sophie/@comment-90.217.45.181-20200126213630

Ok, so, I'm writing a book, probably just for myself at the moment, but I was wondering if you could give your opinions on something please. I have a female lead character- well, the sort of lead character that I class Sophie as, the narrative but not the only main character- and I'm writing it all from her perspective. Before I ask, I'll say that she is quite sarcastic and quick to anger, but she has a good heart and really doesn't mean to be so short tempered. Now, I was wondering whether or not I should count her anger as a flaw or as a mental illness, which are two completely different things. Quick side note, I think Messenger needs to realise that a mental illness is not the same as a flaw because she treats Sophie's anxiety as a flaw when it quite clearly has serious mental health symptoms. Anywho, I don't want her to end up like Fitz where she lashes out for silly reasons and the readers start disliking her but I don't want to say that it is something other than a flaw because I don't see it as being that deep. Have you got any tips on how to write that part of her or maybe even what you like and dislike about that part of Fitz? Thank yoooooouuuuuu!