Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-24.237.185.126-20181207224132/@comment-32987979-20181214051134

It just wasn't interesting to me, honestly. In fact, I started to feel restless myself, as if I were stuck in bed. Which I guess is a good thing, because I'm relating to the characters, but is that really how you want your readers to feel? Of course, I was also really antsy about seeing more of Alvar- who, I'll be honest, was really the only character I cared much about seeing in this book, so that was a little disappointing. And... why did Sophie need to be in bed for, like, 2 weeks with a broken hand? I get that she had shadows in her head, or something, but she could've taken sedatives for the nightmares and her medicine at Havenfield, or at least be able to walk around the Healing Center. Yeah, you could say she was too weak to walk, but the only reason she was weak was because she'd been in bed for so long. It just doesn't make a whole lot of sense to me. Correct me if I forgot something, though.