Talk:Keefe and Sophie/@comment-32247874-20191008202842

 Important-ish 

Alright y'all.

This is something that's been on my mind for a while, but that I'm actually sitting down to work with now.

An article page is usually supposed to be a MAXIUMUM of 5000 words, with less suggested, and a reading time of about seven minutes.

This page is 18,068 words, and a reading time of about one hour and six minutes.

See the problem?

We really need to cut this page down to the important moments and notable things. In this sense, a moment is something that happens between two characters that is significant for their relationship. A moment is not one-sided, like a thought.

Moment examples: One character squeezes another's hand; one promises to be there for them.

Not-moment examples: Characters have a conversation; characters worry about each other; characters decide to eat lunch together; a character thinks about the other character.

So this really needs to be addressed. If there's information you want to save for your own sake on a blog post, feel free, but this page should be reader-oriented. Anything else you can cut down on, like similarities/differences and quotes, is also good. I can help if y'all want, but I figured those more active on this page would want to try it themselves first, and to be aware of what's going on.

(This is not the only page I'm talking about this on, FYI.)