User blog comment:Aspen the leafwing-rainwing-sandwing tribrid/Regrets and Rewrites/@comment-35776050-20190410133438

OMG I LOVE THIS IT IS AMAZINGGGGGGGG

One tip for future writings tho:

So you wrote "No." Biana's heart dropped. But then Marella turned, smiling. "It's never too late." An incredulous smile spread across Biana's face. And Marella's the one saying no but you but Biana right after that. So maybe do it like this to prevent confusion

No."

Biana's heart dropped. But then Marella turned, smiling. "It's never too late."

An incredulous smile spread across Biana's face.