Talk:Fitzroy Avery Vacker/@comment-43699746-20191006020854/@comment-99.251.7.169-20191006164742

I've been reading stuff about main characters and how to chose a main character when writing a book, and one thing I saw was that you don't want to have a character that overshines and feels like they should be the main. I feel like this kind of happened with keeper, and the later addition might help explain that. Like we start off with Sophie and it does feel like her story, but later on it kind of feels more like Keefe's story with all the backstory and complications we've got with him. And I feel like that could be more reflective in his addition since it was meant to be about Sophie, but when he was added he kind of took over and so readers became more interested in him than Sophie