Board Thread:Short Stories and Fanfictions/@comment-71.78.233.58-20181003133414/@comment-37719459-20190104220343

K, the first three I like, but the fourth one is...iffy.

This is partly my argument--Keefe has changed SO MUCH for Sophie, but Fitz has been the same since Exile in the sense of his temper. He just seems to me like a....Keefe Lite, if that makes sense--the cheap, tasteless version of the good stuff. Fitz is just kinda stubborn and unwilling to change. Also, I feel like his character and personality are flat.