Board Thread:Short Stories and Fanfictions/@comment-116.15.10.65-20191224235835/@comment-109.161.146.67-20191228055821

Nice. I like it. Remember the golden rule: show, don't tell (though it;s hard to do that at any beginning of a story given the fact that exposition is very necessary). I lke the perspective and tense, past and 3rd person is getting bland when reading short stories. Basically, good job!

-Lady Sassyfur