Board Thread:Short Stories and Fanfictions/@comment-47.144.239.92-20190927210232/@comment-43941049-20191026192804

47.200.194.236 wrote: Well you are a gifted writer how many pages is that now i just read it but i think the crystals shuld lead to sophies birth parents instead and the london visit should be saved for after her paerents trigegr her new ability that she accidnertly used when she was 9 with the accident with Amy I think the accident shes talking about is how sophie gets a memory in Flashback of Amy screaming at sophie to stop.