Board Thread:Short Stories and Fanfictions/@comment-72.205.23.158-20190624215948/@comment-43316152-20190804235129

HE'S EVIL!! think about it.

Every single member (except for Alvar, of course) of Alden’s family is on the Black Swan. Except for him. Why? I know, I know, he’s an emissary and blah blah blah… but he could still swear the oath in secret! It’s for the good of the world! I mean, come on, the entire rest of your family is part of it!

2. So, I don’t have the exact page number and quotes and all that… but in Exile (or Everblaze, I’m sorry, but I don’t have the books and am basing this off memory, so bear with me) when Sophie is searching Prentice’s mind, she sees a face that looks like Alden’s, but evil and shattering, that says, “no reason to worry” and laughs evilly. Umm… is this evil Alden or is this evil Alden?

3. So, in Nightfall, Amy says that it was five days ago that her parents were kidnapped. Correct me if I’m wrong, but that was before Gethen escaped. So the Neverseen didn’t have a telepath. But they searched the house for thoughts. Who was their telepath? Alden.

4. At the beginning of Nightfall, Alden drugs Sophie and her friends. Without permission. Not nicely. And he was randomly holding drugs in his hand. Weird, right? And then he creepily says, “Don’t fight the drugs, Sophie. You can’t beat them.” What he’s really saying is, ‘Don’t fight the Neverseen, Sophie. You can’t beat them.”

5. Alden, out of no where, with no orders from the Council, on a mere hunch, starts searching for this girl. Weird, right? And he sends his six-year old. Yeah. Weird.

Alden never faced off the Neverseen.

7. When Sophie asked Alden what fading was, it said 'he looked like he was looking into a memory when he responded'. Direct quote, guuys! How many elves we know have faded in the Lost Cities? Very little, and one of them was Cyrah, and only Cyrah's murderer and Wylie saw it.

8. There's always that one guy during Sophie's kidnapping and interrogation that seems concerned for her, asking if her bonds were too tight or if the other person knew what they were doing, like he knows her in real life.

9. He's always asking for the Keeper gang to update him on plans, and the Neverseen always finds out said plans! They only get victories when they do something spontaneous without telling him, like flooding Ravagog.

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