Board Thread:Short Stories and Fanfictions/@comment-37824398-20181215160506/@comment-2601:248:500:94C7:6550:DE5E:B218:CCB1-20190328185431

Great story! It’s one of the best I’ve ever read. I love it!

And just one suggestion, but maybe less parties and romance and more action and rescuing Tam? I just feel like all the problems with the Neverseen and Tam are more important than Sophie dealing with Fitz and Keefe. But still, great story!