Talk:Sophie and Fitz/@comment-34218125-20180601200042/@comment-34218125-20180602012728

^^ Those are really good points, I hadn't thought of that. I feel like she could have split it up or written it slightly different because tacking it onto the end made it feel odd and stilted. I did find in those chapters that I sort of forgot about Keefe. It made the story either high in Keefe concentrate or absolutely 0 Keefe at all. Also, only having it in the special edition only bothered me too, she isn't making it available to all the fans so it isn't really part of the story.