Board Thread:Short Stories and Fanfictions/@comment-44737749-20191228042459/@comment-39634324-20200108171420

It’s really good Silver!

More spelling and stuff: ''Ceclia! Amber!'' she transmitted. Rose brushed her curls behind her ear. “I don’t think so,” she said, looking closer at the message. “Look! There, between the lines!”
 * You probably want to make a new paragraph every time someone talks or transmits. For example: Sara paled.
 * Lynn’s name is spelled Linh.
 * You want to put a period before someone talks. For example: