Board Thread:Short Stories and Fanfictions/@comment-44544645-20191211195811/@comment-72.80.59.247-20191229040758

I really should get myself an account or something.( My most resent comment started with "same person as above".)

Anyway, it's really good. I loved the Sokeefe parts. I showed this to my friend, she said you should give Tam or Dex a stuffed animal buddy, (I personally prefer a stuffed gremlin or tompel for Dex, drawing a blank for Tam).

The Tiergan reveal looks really good. You're really good at getting their personalities down.

And now I really want to know more about the dwarves, I didn't consider that they might be the same dwarves who deflected in the third book. And I just realised that if your multi-spiecial-experimentation theory is right, then Lady Gisella is an even bigger liar than I thought, because then she has definetly been experimenting on Keefe. But then why do the same thing on other spiecies?... unless Keefe's legacy isn't about Keefe... Having a wierd, impossible, realization moment. But if Keefe's Legacy isn't about Keefe, that's not possible, because then Lady Gisella wouldn't go that far and... And I'm really not sure where I'm going with this. Whatever.

Anyway, this is really great.

I think I'm going to call myself "Keefecouldreallyuseanicecrunchy..PICKLE"

--Keefecouldreallyuseanicecrunchy...PICKLE.