Board Thread:Clubs/@comment-44390494-20191206064730/@comment-44390494-20191207001013

Maybe try and double-check your use of the comas? ):D Anyways, I also noticed this:

He turned a corner, and smiled at the sight of the enormous structure before him, the legendary Chapel of Zelovan.

'''Most people don't know this, but when you're. . . gods, my vocabulary. I'll just give an example:'''

He turned a corner, and smiled at the sight of the enormous structure before him: the legendary Chapel of Zelovan.

'''See how I added this key? ':' Well, you use it when you're. . . doing whatever doing that is called. Also, I'd suggest removing that 'and' and changing the tense after the coma, but you're still talking on past:'''

He turned a corner, smiling at the sight of the enormous structure before him, the legendary Chapel of Zelovan.

'''You can do that if you want! Just a suggestion! ):D '''