Talk:Book 8: Legacy/@comment-47.184.159.121-20191124002452

I was working on my version of book nine and this came up:

Sophie gasped with surprise and Keefe smiled again as he clasped it around her neck. He had had had the necklace custom made with an intertwining S and K and lots of panake blossoms littering the chain. Sophie fingered it lovingly. Keefe watched her happy little eyes reflect the sparkling item of jewelry before pulling her into a hug. Sophie leaned into Keefe. Keefe treasured the moment and determined not to make it awkward leaned slightly down and kissed Sophie. She looked surprised for a second, then she kissed back. It was the most wonderful moment of Keefe’s life. For once he felt loved. This was one relationship his dad couldn’t steal away from him. This was the one he had to keep. And as the kiss ended and Sophie leaned her head back on Keefe shoulder, Keefe knew that she truly loved him. All doubt left his mind as he soaked up this romantic moment with Sophie.

do y'all think that's cute Sokeefe people or should I make some changes?