Talk:Keefe and Sophie/@comment-38037797-20190103191055

My attempt at writing a character death

'''"Mom?!" Sophie called with panic in her voice. She had heard a terrified scream that sounded awfully like her mom's.'''

'''"Sophie?" A weak voice said.'''

'''"Hang on, I'm coming!" Sophie ran to where the voice was coming from. There she found her mom lying still on the ground with a giant wound on her chest. Sophie felt tears falling down her face. "Mom..." she said and started sobbing.'''

'''"Don't cry Sophie." She said weakly and gently held Sophie's hand.'''

'''"Come on, I'll bring you to Elwin and he'll fix you." Sophie said and felt more tears running down her face.'''

'''Edaline squeezed Sophie hand and winced. "We both know it's to late to save me."'''

'''"No, no...." Sophie said and sobbed. "We can save you." Sophie knew that wasn't true, but she couldn' accept it.'''

'''"Sophie...." her mom said and clutched her chest.'''

"Don't go mom, please don't leave me."

'''"I love you Sophie, but it's time for me to go." She said and tears started running down her face. From sadness and pain. "Tell Grady..... I... love him." And with that Edaline took her last breath.'''

'''"No..." Sophie said and started sobbing uncontrollably. She felt a hand on her shoulder and looked up to see Keefe looking at her sadly. '''

'''Keefe wrapped her in a hug. "It's okay Foster. Just breathe."'''

'''Sophie shook her head. "No it's not. She's gone."'''