Board Thread:Short Stories and Fanfictions/@comment-43316152-20190807005934/@comment-43316152-20190809232534

Diathe13 wrote: Hello! I am here to judge your fanfic! I will judge it and I look for grammar errors and plot holes. First of all I didn't see any plot holes, and second I also (for the first time) didn't see any grammar errors either, so great job! Now for your score, out of 10 I give you a 5.9 I just didn't really like it that much to be honest, although lots of another people loved though, but I'm just judge it on what I think, not them. So I hope you'll continue to write, read, and dream. Sincerely, Lydia (DIA) ouch. I'm not going to judge, but maybe phrase that a bit better next time?

well, I like it, and my friends keep begging for more. (I'm also a HUGE dystopian fan, so that's why it's a little different.)