Board Thread:Short Stories and Fanfictions/@comment-37824398-20181215160506/@comment-39312933-20190514143044

I like it!

You could be a bestselling author.

One thing:

Shannon Messenger has her own style, and I guess I am more used to her style than yours. So, If i offend you, please know i never mean it, i am just giving friendly criticism.

Another thing: You and I may interpret KOTLC differently, so please don't take this offensively. I just don't think Biana would give Sophie alchohol (did i spell that right), and I also think Grady wouldn't be that mean. He will punish her and definitely be mad at Keefe, but he wouldn't be THAT mean.

Just a little critique, Please don't take offense to anything! Thank you.