Board Thread:Clubs/@comment-44390494-20191206064730/@comment-44540575-20200107133419

Lucat 13 wrote: 174.6.16.240 wrote:

Umbrellas&amp;Rainboots13 wrote: Thank you!

Deafening Silence

My best thinking is when I'm alone with only My thoughts for company.

Those moments as I drift into sleep. When a sliver of the serene moon peers through the window. Bringing with her cherished silence.

With each breath I gain a new perspective; a new discovery; a new revelation to help me fight tomorrow's battles.

My thoughts race faster and faster until my head is spinning, and my mind drifts into peaceful sleep. That's so good! I honestly like it better then a lot of other peopms by all  the old adult writers. It's a lot more relatable. I wish I were any good at poetry, but I'm better at writing stories. I've tried peotry, but I always have too many ideas and feelings, and no words to describe it. It's like I'm trying to fit the entire plot of a book into a poem.

No wonder you have four published if they're all as good as this one (wich I suspect is likely)

-Chloe I agree - this is better than most adult poems. It is a lot more relatable, like Chloe said. I wish I could write poems, but I’m not very good at it.

There’s a book of poetry I was gonna recommend for you guys but I forgot the title. I have it, so I can find it this afternoon. Thank you both!