Talk:Keefe and Sophie/@comment-2604:2000:5180:FD00:6415:ABC5:2CAF:6027-20180605214002/@comment-2604:2000:5180:FD00:6415:ABC5:2CAF:6027-20180605214340

Oh, sheep. I forgot to write some thing! Ok, so when it says 'he wiped away her tears with his shaking, ash-covered fingers' it's supposed to be 'he wiped away her ters away with his shaking, ash-covered fingers, making her face all black.' So that's it. Now you can imagine Keefe's death the right way. Also, me and my friend wrote Sophie's death last night, but it's like five pages long. What should I do with it?

~Mallowmelt