Board Thread:Short Stories and Fanfictions/@comment-39014312-20190629100211/@comment-39014312-20190822230311

1. He goes straight back to being the angry boy we saw in Everblaze. Instead of learning from his mistakes he pretty much repeats them. he literally has no Character arc.

2.He also has a hard time forgiving people. He won't give Avlar even a chance. Keefe still trys to be his best friend, but Fitz still repeatedly ignores, glares, and says things to remind Keefe of his mom and things he did in the past. I feel like this is a VERY onesided friendship.

3. He doesn't seem to Love Sophie. In his sneekpeak I didn't get to see some guy totally falling for a girl like I wanted. Instead I see a guy annoyed with his younger sister.

4. He also kept pressuring Sophie to do things. That is not good for a relationship.

Keefe on the other hand is souly devoted to Sophie and even though he loves her decides he will be whatever she needs him to be. He refuses to pressure her and let's Sophie and Fitz get together because he cares about both of them. He's willing to just be a friend because he truly cares about people. Fitz is still a nice guy, but i saw a side of him in Flashback that just made me want to recoil in disgust. He has good parts and bad. No one's perfect, but I think Sophie needs someone else. Someone who can cope when things get bad instead of lashing out at people who are trying to help him.

I'm done.