Board Thread:Short Stories and Fanfictions/@comment-39642964-20190805144102/@comment-43337021-20190809193954

She reminds me of Keefe. ^_^ Also I can now judge this! So here it goes, out of 10 I give you 9.1! I looked at your Grammer to see if anything was miss spelled, and I did see a few things, like for example, you did h her. Please don't hate me. I had to be fair, and I'm going to do this with everyone else too, don't worry. Anyway, GREAT JOB!!!! It's really interesting!!!!