Board Thread:Short Stories and Fanfictions/@comment-43347423-20200111144721/@comment-43347423-20200122024844

OH GOD I WAS WRITING THE NEXT CHAPTER AND I REALIZED THAT MY WHOLE FUNDAMENTAL BOOK IS WRONG.

KEEFE ISN'T GOING TO JUST WAKE UP....

SOPHIE'S GOING TO HAVE TO HEAL HIM. I THINK HIS MIND IS BROKEN. I'M HONESTLY SO TERRIFIED RIGHT NOW I SWEAR TO GOD IF KEEFE'S MIND IS BROKEN I WILL ACTUALLY DIE................

and now i dont know how im going to write more because i wrote this wrong...... oh my god what do i do.

okay lets have you guys decide. do you guys want me to rewrite some of this (but keep other parts the same, because most of the plot is fine) and start a new disscussion with the new version, OR just keep going with this? OR maybe i can do both? but then there'd be more time between posts.

its in your hands now. also sorry for the mental breakdowns yall are gonna have if you love keefe as much as i do.