Board Thread:Short Stories and Fanfictions/@comment-108.56.231.106-20191020224916/@comment-108.56.231.106-20191020225207

My first FanFic, so it's not great. So, please tell me what you think! Like, fact-checks, grammar/spelling checks and suggestions, etc. (BTW, that isn't the end of the First Chapter, it's just the ending point of my first post)