Talk:Fitzroy Avery Vacker/@comment-2601:644:8001:B263:2076:3ADC:B8DD:5F4A-20181002014723

So, this is random, but is anyone else annoyed by Fitz's character? I feel like Shannon has kind of been ignoring it. He seems like such a Gary Stu, as his only traits are being "handsome," "kind," "polite," "dreamy," "handsome," and did I say "handsome?" He's basically a cardboard cutout of a dream boy. He has no personality or flaws as far as I can see, other than Exile. (Pardon me if that's the wrong book, I can't remember if he gets mad at Sophie in Exile or Everblaze.) In Exile, it seemed like he was going to get some actually personality from then on, which was super exciting, but then by Everblaze he was back to his cardboard self. (Please don't virtually scream at me, I'm just sharing my opinion. Feel free to debate this with me) (Also, I'm sorry this is so long.  I tend to rant, and because I'm a grammar nerd, I add in all of the punctuation and proper spacing, and it's really unnecessary, I'm sorry)