Board Thread:Short Stories and Fanfictions/@comment-37824398-20181215160506/@comment-50.47.104.74-20190214084439

Woah! I love that you gave Sophie time with Biana and Dex and addressed Sophie's concerns over Linh. That made Sophie a more likeable character in my opinion. The blinds were also a fabulous physical representation of Sophie's internal struggles and put some detail back into the setting. I honestly like this Sophie waaaaaaaaay better than book Sophie. Keep up the good work!