Talk:Book 8: Legacy/@comment-38363352-20191204033212

i don't want to like, hate on shannon, but i really...didn't like legacy much? like yes, i appreciate the sokeefe, but there were some badly written parts imo. she kept on saying "and it wasn't even awkward" whenever sophie would hug dex, and that just made me feel awkward. like she should have just,,, let us see by not mentioning anything awkward. also, it felt like she kept on having to create new things to keep everything going? like all the new substances, all the new "___ mixed with ___ is [fancy name]", all the point of purity stuff (starlight = sunlight, they're all stars. the sun is a star.)...it just. felt. forced. i really love shannon's writing usually but the plot felt like it needed to be boosted by some new thing instead of a connection to an old one. also! there were so many things left out! like characters! she kept on ignoring the main kids and then mentioning that she was and then doing nothing about it! and della wasn't even in the book?

maybe shannon should try to write shorter again, because it felt like some scenes (seat of eminence) was dragged out (seat of eminence) for way to loooooong (seat of eminence). i felt like i was just getting bored as i wrote.

however! i will always read these books, lol. i hope she'll be able to wrap things up well without forgetting anything.

agh this is so negative but i really needed to express how...unhappy i was with some parts of it :( there were some great parts though, i will admit!

anyway, peace out :')