Board Thread:Clubs/@comment-44390494-20191206064730/@comment-43929887-20191221154957

SoKeepherOfTheLostCities wrote: The very very beginning is about a girl, Lena (14), who's in an orphanage, and there are visitors coming in, and she's the type to avoid their attention (since there's lots of crime, trafficking, etc.) But one day, this suspicious-looking couple comes in, so Lena pretends to be this "perfect child" to see what's going on. I just need an opening line for that :( Maybe something like how something important is going on and it gets interrupted by the fishy couple and that leads into the plot?