Board Thread:Clubs/@comment-44390494-20200109205641/@comment-38207171-20200117233938

PenguinFeatherShade wrote: WhisperShade wrote: Okay, I recommend diving your poem into stanzas. Stanzas help to show complete thoughts and make reading the poem easier. Though, you don't have to, I find that dividing into stanzas is a good way to show meter (the rhythm of a poem) and separating it to make it cleaner and easier to read. That's just my opinion of course; free verse doesn't need to have that. I can do an example of the divisions with your poem if you'd like.

Content wise, I quite like the idea, it's very good. It doesn't always have to be devided into stanzas although it sometimes help it can also disrupt the flow That's true. It just helps to keep it organized, I think. Also, Stanzas like this:

The summer before,

when we were friends,

everything was magic,

and it had no end.

Nights spent on blankets,

under the stars,

We could read each others minds,

and we had no cares.

But now everything is deifferent,

and I don't know why,

and instead of singing songs,

I just want to cry.

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