Talk:Keefe Sencen/@comment-38433042-20190219204929

Tears of Ice

By: Isabelle Fetsch & Ana Chancey

'''( preface type  of thing that shannon has at the beginning of her book) The tears kept flowing down. Burning my cheeks as I sat there shaking. I knew I wasn’t in physical pain but it still hurt inside. Why did this have to happen? Mom says that things always happen for a reason. What was the world's reason for taking my dad from me? I was terrified. I couldn’t live without my dad. He was our light in darkness. '''

Chapter 1

'''The crystal blue ocean waves crashed on the beach. As I stared from my spot, at the ruins. Numb. I felt numb. Lucy walked over “how are you feeling?” I sat there silently as a solemn tear '''

'''fell down my cheek. The salty air blew through my hair as she walked over and sat down by me. We are best friends, I knew her since we were eight and we’ve been inseparable since. She knew '''

'''me and understood me just like I did her. When I didn’t answer she knew. So we stayed silent as we sat together on the ruins. It reminded me of when we were still kids filled with joy. Maybe '''

'''Lucy still is filled with joy but i’m not anymore. We sat there for awhile listening  '''to the waves crash against the rocks.

hello thx for reading this far please tell me any ways you think i can improve this as there is always room for helpful critisim to make things better! :) :) :)