Talk:Book 7: Flashback/@comment-74.96.219.190-20181110160712/@comment-32987979-20181111185936

There were a LOT OF cliffhangers with Alvar, Tam and Sophie, all of which I think could've been more expanded on rather than all of the battle training and recovery. I still think we should've seen more of Alvar. I really, really *spoilers* wanted him to stay good. I still have hope for him...

The whole thing with the hive was really quickly done and confusing. I definitely think they should've had much less time spent with the recovery. I get it, you're supposed to know it took a long time. But there's only so much fun you can have reading a book about a character being in bed for weeks. They could have spent more time on the really good stuff and less on the recovery time and battle training. I know I keep complaining about those two but honestly, it's such a long, tedious process only for her to finally be out of bed and doing another boring, uninteresting task.