Thread:Iamsmart1/@comment-35320625-20181114030758/@comment-35320625-20181114154117

Hmmmmm I'm a writer so I'll give it my writers assesment and then my fangirl assesment....

As a writer, I though she [Shannon Messenger] spent way too much un-needed time on Sophie's bed rest. Other than an occaisonal Keefe visit or Fitzphie moment, nothing really hapens. It slows down the whole book. Her writing is ok, but it could be more creative.

As a fangril... OMG SOPHITZ YASSSSS. But I also though what Alden did was messed up. The Neverseen encounters are getting a bit redundant tho...