Talk:Keefe and Sophie/@comment-34820986-20181212110837/@comment-35087380-20181212210524

@BlackSwanSRM

I'll try

Sophie sat down at the Panakes tree, wondering about Fitz. He had invited her here without giving a reason, making her much more curious.

He appeared on the edge of the pasture, and started walking towards her. Her heart did a little flip. (gag)

He plopped down next to her.

"Sophie, I have something to tell you."

Her heart starting beating faster. (double gag) "What?"

He looked at her and smiled. Fitz placed a finger on his iris and let it stay there for a few seconds. Sophie was confused, and slightly disgusted.

He pulled his finger off, and much to Sophie's horror, a little teal film came off. He grinned at her. "Vackers don't actually have teal eyes, we all wear contacts!"

Sophie gaped at him. "What?!"

Fitz nodded. His eyes were actually a barfy green blue with streaks of yellow in them, the ugliest eyes she's ever seen.

Sophie leaped away as far as she could get from Fitz, never to be seen again.

THE END

What do you think?