Board Thread:Short Stories and Fanfictions/@comment-71.185.177.221-20191112172810/@comment-44511572-20200214032927

OMG!!! I am just reading this now and it is SO GOOD!!!!! You write like SM! The characters act almost exactly how they do in KotLC!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! (no pressure or anything but also pressure ) the only thing that I find unrealistc at all is that I feel like Fitz is kinda a bit too young to be the builder of the Neverseen and have built it BUT now that I'm thinking this through he could be older and nobody would really know, he could have used telepath skills to make his parents think he was younger or something and it did say that he just made it bigger instead of just being the one who like made it and stuff so he could still be the same age and... yeah, just ignore all of the above it is a good idea but a TERRIBLE CLIFFHANGER!!!!

YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRITER PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!

That was longer than I intended...

But yeah, I love it so write more!