Board Thread:Short Stories and Fanfictions/@comment-43347423-20200111144721/@comment-43347423-20200122152127

I think I’m gonna try to keep this one going, but I definitely think keefes mind is broken. I hope I’m wrong, but... there were SO MANY HINTS.... like how Shannon literally describes the “scared, broken boy” when he lets down his mask... and oh my god this is so bad. Elwin also didn’t sedate him, and if he had they would’ve known cuz he woulddnt have reacted, and oh my god keefe noooooooooo

This is so bad you guys