Board Thread:Short Stories and Fanfictions/@comment-43347423-20200111144721/@comment-43347423-20200122234527

Yeah I was writing a scene where they’re testing Sophie’s new enhancing and Sophie became an empath and she felt guilt radiating off of Keefe and then I realized that his mind has been breaking for the entire series. SHANNON HAS STRAIGHTOUT CALLED HIM BROKEN YOU GUYS. MULTIPLE TIMES... and empathy’s shatter more easily, and Elwin didn’t sedate him, and then I realized that Sophie is going to heal him and to do that she has to inflict love. When she did it to Alden, she did his family. But Keefe doesn’t love his family... he loves Sophie. And then Sophie will realize Keefe likes her and SOKEEFE!!!

But in the meantime... OH MY GOD KEEFES MIND HAS BEEN BREAKING THE WHOLE ENTIRE SERIES AND WE NEVER KNEW BECAUSE HES THE ONLY EMPATH.