Board Thread:Short Stories and Fanfictions/@comment-39014312-20190629100211/@comment-43337021-20190809203832

Alright!I am here to judge your fanfic! I looked for grammar errors and plot holes. The good news is that there is no plot holes that I could find. Though. There is one thing I saw that was written wrong, and it was in this sentence, "'We can still be friends though... right.'" when it should have been this, "'We can still be friends though... right?'" Now for your score, out of 10 I give you a 9.7! Amazing job! I hope that you'll continue to write, read, and dream.^_^ Sincerely, Lydia (DIA)