Talk:Book 8: Legacy/@comment-98.143.232.53-20191210041358/@comment-44135350-20191210211334

You know I didn’t really think about the Tam short story much after I read it (if I’m being honest, I actually completely forgot about it until you mentioned it) I guess I was a little traumatized from the Keefe situation at the end of the book to really think about the Tam story, but after going back and rereading I don’t necessarily think it boring, but it seemed a little... weird. Idk how to describe it but it didn’t really like Shannon’s writing or something. And the dialogue felt weird, almost faked. Like I can’t really imagine a real life person saying half the things that Glimmer said. Actually come to think of it, the dialogue in the Fitz short story felt pretty weird too. Again, the conversations between Fitz and Biana just felt fake or something. Idk it might just be me but the short stories feel kinda weird to me