Board Thread:Short Stories and Fanfictions/@comment-43347423-20200111144721/@comment-39565003-20200207170256

Your story is WONDERFUL! I want to commend you on the realistic pacing and emotion of the scenes. A lot of people get rushed to have a whole bunch of things going on, and they speed through important stuff. Its hard to do well....and you do it REALLY well. KUDOS TO YOU