Board Thread:Short Stories and Fanfictions/@comment-34411796-20190520040353/@comment-35776050-20190520122428

It’s so amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tho I think it’s a bit random that she kissed her. Like that part moved way too fast. But besides for that, I. Am. In. LOVEEEEEEEEEEEE.

Sorry, hope you didn’t mind the constructive criticism!