Thread:CustardBursts/@comment-38420164-20191015002123/@comment-33804292-20191015045746

Okay so first off, for sentence #2, try replacing the other part of it with ''“Est-ce qu'il est loin? Je suis super fatigué, j'ai faim, j'ai soif et je ne veux pas marcher." '' It’s better grammar and in English what you wrote wouldn’t be that flowy like '“I’m tired. And I’m hungry. And I’m thirsty. And I don’t want to walk.”'

For the 3rd sentence, make sure to start your sentence with a capital. The second part of it doesn’t make sense because directly translated, what you wrote would say ”Do you museum know that is fun?”, which is grammatically incorrect. Change that with ”Est-ce que tu sais un musée amusant?’’ because that’s how you say what you intended correctly.

For the 4th one, “coer” (I assume you meant heart) is spelled “coeur”.

For sentence #6, instead of making them two different sentence, put them together by adding a comma after “choses” and before “mais”, it’ll make much more sense than having a random, short sentence without context.

In sentence #7, add a comma after “plage” and before “mais”.

Sentence 9 was cut off in the photo so unfortunately I can’t check that, but if you have a picture of it, feel free to send it! I’ve noticed that some of your sentences don’t have periods at the end, so make sure to use correct punctuation in your phrases (especially commas before the word “mais”. That’s commonly the case but not applied for everything). I’m not 100% on all of this, but I’ve been taking 9 years of French, can speak it pretty fluently so I have a good knowledge in my opinion.