Board Thread:Short Stories and Fanfictions/@comment-38601454-20190805194459/@comment-43337021-20190809205942

Alright I'm going to judge your fanfic now. I will check for grammar errors, and plot holes. Alright, so for grammar I did find that you spelled much wrong, this is how you spelled it 'mutch'. And for plot holes, I didn't see anything, so good job on that! Now for your score, out of 10 you got 9.0! I give it a 9.0 because to me it was a little confusing. Anyway, all that said, it was still an amazing story! I hope that you will continue to write, read, and dream.^_^ Sincerely, Lydia (DIA)