Talk:Keefe and Sophie/@comment-37589255-20190223182722

Hey everyone! So me and my sis were having a little poetry challenge today, and I threw together a poem in 10 minutes. I'm not sure if it's any good, but I'd love to hear your thoughts on it! I'm not a very good poet, but I still do write it sometimes, and if anyone has any constructive criticism, please don't hesitate to let me know!

Somewhere far, far away

A small, young, little girl lay

With a big heart and eyes wide

She was in for life's long ride

With dreams that reached until the stars

She watched, observed, everything from afar

Different from others at her age

She was always free, never trapped in a cage

Her thoughts, her fears

They were all completely beyond her years

But in the world, she was all alone

A small plant in a field fully grown

For her, hope was a burning sun

Precious, fierce, and never done

Though she had nothing, she had it all

She rose back up from even the greatest of falls

And finally, one day,

she almost lay among the stars

But though she didn't,

she wasn't trapped behind bars