Board Thread:Short Stories and Fanfictions/@comment-32987979-20190112205632/@comment-44737749-20200108012545

Hi I love this so far. Its like my favorite ship story ever I write a fanfic and its sooo short compared to this. Please keep writing and I know its hard to find insiration but you will one day. Also I love what you have done with Stina she is much more of a real intimit character that Shannon portrays her to be also I have noticed we only really see alot of Dex in the first book so this is great I ship him with Bianna but even before I read thes story I had started to ship Bianna with Tam because he expressed an intrest in her in Neverseen, Loderstar, and Nightfall. But this story deffinetly pushed me over. Thank you for writing this,  and I know you think this is generic and straight forward but it actually is very smooth and has VERY good dialogue. I can't wait for the next chapter!